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    Default Alphonse, You Became a Caterpie!

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    o.O awesome PMD comic I can't wait for the next part

    hope this lasts long

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    I plan on it! Glad you like it. Hopefully, this will become popular!
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    After Aphonse got inside the tree , things became too vague!

    -Did they fall from somewhere , or they really got inside from the entrance?

    -And what is the reason Alphonse got into that light? Did he got curious or something?

    In sum, the start is average , you should try to explain things more.

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    Thanks for the comment. I'll be sure to elaborate more in the next comic, which should be done soon.
    I'll also tell Schmee to be a bit more descriptive with dialouge.
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    Yeah, I'm a little confused about the tree too.
    How did Chi get hurt?
    But it is still cool looking =3

    And a little off topic: I named my Pikahcu partner Chi in PMD2 =D
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    Episode 2 is up!
    And to answer your question Eeveerose, Alphonse tripped and fell on Chi.
    Hence the "I'm such a clutz" and "Stupid roots and twigs."

    And they got in through the entrance.

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    This page is better than the previous one!
    Keep it up!
    Well , I am curious what will became of Alphonse. But it's strange he did not show much reaction when saw a pokemon talking!

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    Haha. Thank you. Alphonse is a tad dense. o.O I'm glad that the new episode is liked.
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    o.O very funny with the noctowl

    I lovez it

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    Episode 3 is up! See the first post!
    Please Comment!

    I'm glad you all like it!
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    oh noes spearow's gonna get him...... wonder whats in for episode 4

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    Glad you like it, keep checking back for updates!
    I'm working on Episode 4 right now.
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    can't wait for episode for and sparkleplex check your PM box

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    i love it its hilarious
    You know what? I'm gone, I really don't even like Pokemon that much anymore (At all, it's getting kind of boring.) And I'm sad to say I'll miss my bestie Mawile412 and GPT and MM and T&T and Fango, because you were all great friend ;_;
    I wont come back ever and I know about the rule change for the game section, and it saddens me; it used to be so much fun, Degrassi, Pokecity, Pokeplace, all of them that I've participated in....
    GG has now graduated from Serebii, I love you all.
    Goodbye...
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    wow! i realy like this comic! lol the spearow is gonna eat him! i bet they end up being freinds and the look for chi!
    can't wait for the new chapter!

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    there is 1 word that describes these comics better than any other...............LOL! i love it! i like how u used the MD pokemon. im a sucker for something humerous. ooh! cant wait to see the next episode.
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    Update! Episode 4 is up!
    Please Comment. I hope everyone likes it!
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    mya ha ha! love the new episode! good job!
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    i love this! i think spearow will come back ;0

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    o.O very funny i thought this was gonna be a PMD story (kinad is) but now i see he's actually a caterpie in the regualr world :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by derekkoch View Post
    o.O very funny i thought this was gonna be a PMD story (kinad is) but now i see he's actually a caterpie in the regualr world :P
    Yeah, Schmee and I agreed that people would be needed to further the plot. Don't worry, everything has it's reason. I still intend for this to be a hilarious comic with lots of readers... hopefully.
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    I wish they were a tad bit longer... But they are GREAT! Chi-Chi is what I named my MD2 team! xD I love it. I may take out the Button after a while but i'll advertise a bit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by charmeleon123 View Post
    I wish they were a tad bit longer... But they are GREAT! Chi-Chi is what I named my MD2 team! xD I love it. I may take out the Button after a while but i'll advertise a bit.
    Thanks! They are short so I can post one everyday. That way there's always something new! My PMD team name was SNACKS! Because my characters we Pop and Corn.
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