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    Default The Adventure of Adventureness

    Please enjoy my fanfic. PG-13.

    Chapter 1: The beginning

    Once there was a boy named Jack. He was walking down the road when he saw a shiny Rayquaza! He threw a Master Ball at it and caught it, and went on. The end.

    "Woah, woah, woah. Wait one fricking minute!" Jack yelled. "What the hell was THAT?! Hey, you! The narrator! Get over here!"

    The narrator, a handsomely dressed man in a tuxedo, who resembled the stereotypical butler, approached Jack. "What seems to be the problem, sir?" he asked in a british accent.

    "The problem is, first off, that ridiculous accent," said Jack. "Second off, your narration is a bit self-complementary, and third, oh, I dunno, maybe.... THIS WHOLE STORY?!"

    "What's wrong with the story?" the incredibly handsome narrator asked incredulously.

    "There you go again! Stop praising yourself in your own narration!" yelled Jack, clearly at his wit's end. "And what's wrong with the story?! Did you not see that story?! It STUNK, that's what's wrong with it! Two lines! Two lines of text! I go down the road, I catch a shiny Rayquaza with a Master Ball that seems to appear out of nowhere?! Where's the plot?! Where's the depth?! The description! For all the readers know, I could be a two-headed cheeseburger with a hundred and seven tentacles!"

    "Now calm down, young sir-" began the narrator, before Jack cut him off.

    "NO, I will NOT calm down! In fact, I am going to find the idiot what that wrote that piece of garbage that is trying to be passed off as a story and give him a piece of my mind! A very violent piece of my mind, preferably!"

    At this point, the narrator was very much aware that Jack, despite being a ten-year-old boy, was rather muscular. Not exactly world-class bodybuilder material, but clearly stronger and beefier than anyone else his age. Aside from his strength, Jack was very much your average ten-year old. He had nondescript brown hair that he kept cut short. He wore a pair of faded blue jeans, a pair of white sneakers, and a red t-shirt. He also had an extremely short temper. The devilishly handsome narrator- "HEY!" screamed Jack. "WHAT DID I JUST FREAKING TELL YOU?!" "Sorry, sir," apologized the narrator.

    "Now then," said the narrator, "Be reasonable. You don't even know how to get to the place of residence of the author!" At this, Jack smiled.

    "Oh, yes I do. Once we leave the internet and get into the real world, it'll be a cinch! You see, as computer data, we naturally have homing instincts that will lead us to the computer from which we originated. If my guess is correct, the idiot who wrote this piece of garbage should live there, or at least come there frequently."

    "How do you know all this?" asked the astonished narrator.

    Jack shrugged. "I might be a muscular guy with a short fuse, but I'm also very, very smart. Is that a PROBLEM???"

    "Not at all, sir," replied the narrator, rather nervous. Then he remembered something. "Eh, sir, did you say 'we'?"

    "You don't honestly think I'm gonna go out and beat up this.... Missingno. Master all by myself, do you?"

    "I had rather hoped, actually."

    "Well quit your hoping and come with me. You got a name?"

    "Yes," said the narrator. "It's the narrator".

    Jack stared. "What kind of a name is that?!" The narrator shrugged.

    Jack shook his head. "I swear, this is getting wierder and wierder. Let's get going."

    The narrator stopped him. "Uh, sir, pardon my impertinence, but how exactly are we to leave the internet?"

    "I'm not sure myself. Hence, we're going to Cyber Town. We're bound to get some answers there, those guys know everything about the internet."

    "And Cyber Town is where, exactly?" inquired the sexy narrator.

    Jack slapped the narrator's face. "That's for inserting your little braggy adjectives into your narration again. And Cyber Town is supposed to be down this road. Let's go."

    With that, Jack and the narrator began the journey towards Cyber Town.

    Meanwhile, Missingno. Master, mysteriously cloaked in shadows, sat at his computer, watching the events unfold.

    "So, these guys think they can escape the internet and beat me to a pulp, do they? Well, we'll see who's beating whom when I'm through with them! Ahahahahahaha!" He continued to laugh in his evil way, while beginning to type up chapter 2.

    That's it for chapter 1. Please rate. Comment. Say stuff.

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    Book 2: The Awesome of Awesomeness
    Book 3: The Random of Randomness
    Book 4: The Epic of Epicness
    Book 5: The Adventure of Adventureness: Special Chapters

    The main characters and their Pokémon

    Chapter directory
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