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    Hi,
    just wanted to put a sprite thead where I could put my recent stuff in.

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    Comments are always welcome (even if they are negative )
    I hope you like them

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    The Cleffa looks a little small, and it's ears aren't shaded properly; look at the offficial sprites for guidance. I have nothing to say on electrode besides holy hell is that an awesome pose, and maybe the eyebrows should be all dark. The Magnezone is really flat.. It looks like a pancake. The blissey is barely outlined or highlighted. The Gengar's eyes.. just lol. I love Starmie's post but the bottom spike shouldn't be connected to the other spikes. Snorlax is a great post, but there's a little too much dithering.

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    yess! you made a sprite thread!

    I agree with BynineB, the cleffa is too small. and the gengar looks like he's put all his fat into his limbs. I think he also has too much outline.
    nice job, though!
    edit: The electrode looks like it has antennae, you might want to make that a bit smaller.

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    Starmie could pass as a scratch remix of Yellow's Starmie sprite.

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    Ok changed the electrode and jumpluff.
    I know the cleffa is kind of bad, it was my first one. Might change it

    To bynineB: what do you mean with dithering? And should the spikes be conected to each other?...
    And i do'nt really understand the critique of the blissey. You think it needs more shadow?
    and how can I make the magnezone less flat, cause I really don't know how to do that





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    dude i love the snorlax, but add some AA on its right arm.

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    what is a AA?
    edit: tried to make the spikes not attached to each other... but didn't work out... And on the yellow sprite the are attached, so I'm gone keep it that way
    Last edited by noobiess; 3rd January 2010 at 4:36 PM.





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    nice work on the sprites, i liked lucario and the other animated ones, but some scratches look flat, and gengar needs to be fatter.
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    I'm impressed boss. I definatly adore the rotom tree. Very creative.

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    nobody anserew my questions

    anyway here is another scratch: qwilfish



    Not really a fan of the sprite but I posted it here so I can improve it. I just don't know what I did wrong, but it just doesn't look...right. (wow it looks bad with a green background (maybe because fish mostly don't come near green backgrounds))

    I also want to post my scratch weezing, but I'm not shure if i can do that because it's a current wsc-entry and then it might look like I made it before the wsc (so not for the wsc and not a legal entry)

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    also made the gengar a littel bit shorter so it looks more roundish (so fatter and so his limbs are in better perspective then his body)
    also changed the shades (apparently made osme really big mistakes with the outlines... I just din't noticed shame on me)
    don't know if it any better:


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    also tried to make magnezone have at least more then 2 dimentions :

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    and wich one do you like most;..
    the one with the magnet facing away or toward him

    Guessed what dithering was, so I changed the shades on the top op snorlax:
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    I'm no great sprite critic, but I know a good Qwilfish sprite when I see it, and that is a good Qwilfish sprite.

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    The Qwilfish is good. But your Gengar, I feel it's eyes are too far apart. And Magnezone. Too be honest, it looks as if it's been used as a door wedge. You haven't been able to display it's ufo shape. I feel it lacks that. Better yet, the front of it isn't even round, from what I can see. It looks too cluttered. Besides that, I like your Porygon-Z scratch.

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    Starmie could pass as a scratch remix of Yellow's Starmie sprite.
    He's right, it could.

    The animations are nice except for the Gallade one. He just looks like a spinning top now. The reposes are good. The banner should be saved as PNG. And it's look rushed. Keep working.
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    wow alot of stuff i can work on

    Seems like nodoby has a problem with the qwilfish... so I don't either then

    I'll try to change the gengar later.
    And I really odn't know how I can make the magnezone ufolikish.. Based on the outlines, it looks fine (or maybe i could the metal thing (the ocnnection between the 2 eyes a little bit higher)... Just messed up the shades somehow... Gonaa work on it when I have soem more time.

    and the starmie is kind of based on the yellow starmie but completely diffrent outlines, and shades
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    I was wondering...If i give you credit, could I use you're Snorlax sprite in my Fire Red hack?

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    On another note as well, Gengar is also missing his tail.

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    if he is in that pose, you can't really see his tail, I think.. Or his tail must be incredably long





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    Wow! There is some good stuff here! I love the Christmas ones, the animations and some of the fusions. I particularly like the Disney Princess Gardeviors. I had never thought of that.
    I can't really see much to complain about except for one or two tthings. Your Psyduck/Bibarel mix that's lying down: the shading on its tail isn't right. It looks like you used the shading from the other Psyduck/Bibarel mix where his body cast a shadow on part of the tail. The one that's lying down need less shadow on the tail. Also the Snow White Gardevoir's torso looks like it is facing forward while the dress is going to the side creating the impression that it is going two different directions.



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    Oh? I think there would be a bit of a glimmer of his tail, I reckon. Another point I just realised is in your Magnemite sprite. The magnet facing the viewer looks like it only have one shade, and not showing it as a 3D object. I think Blissey needs a lighter shade on top of it's head as well.

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    shiny sandsrew, you are completely right... so might change it.
    serris, there is a little bit of the lightest shanding on blissey's head. I tried to make ik bigger but then it just looks weard (and might put a little tail on gengar )

    Working on a new scratch btw: shedinja... He is really difficult since the litteraly isn't a pichute here he is completely wisable and look sideways. So I think I'm making him way to small... you'll see it when he is done

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    hi,
    just ifnishd the shedinja sprite... Still lot of faults I think, so I might need some help with this one...
    as I already said, this one is really difficult because there aren't so much pictures to see how shedinja exacly looks like...
    Here is it:
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    It's a nice idea, but I think it does need a bit of work. The body looks a bit too small. And one of the wings doesn't look attached. Otherwise, a good sprite.

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    ok, I 'fattened' shedinja with one pixle and he already looks fat
    Also have put his wing (that is facing to you) one pixle to the right...
    And another question: isn't the claw a littel bitt off.. it looks like a granny without her walkingstick then... (so also putten the sprite without the claw)



    also putted the tail on gengar but dont really like it:
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    soem new stuff of my shop:










    and magnezoneupdate:
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    better/worse?

    also can somebody tell me what's wrong of the gengar sprites cause it still looks weard...

    edit:
    a revamp/scratch of chansey (the old sprite just looks too good to resist )
    Last edited by noobiess; 6th February 2010 at 8:26 PM.





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    here is a new scratch: heatran


    supprisenly not so difficult to make... But I made it way to big it's 91x70... so i really need a way to make it less fat... any ideas? (cause i do'nt wanna do some major changes cause I liek the psrite)

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    I did it
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    hardly noticable?

    edit2:
    the next scratch: jirachi
    the original sprite has really a weard outnining
    so here is the scratch in style of the original outlining and my outlining (right)


    like mine in a more lighter background but like the other more in darker backgrounds

    edit3:
    cvhanged the outlines...

    better/worse?

    edit4:
    already next one finished: weavile



    hoep youl ike it

    and the last one of today: celebi (the mascot of this wonderful forum)
    no not cute-looking like a normal celebisprite

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    hi,
    here is my next one: kingdra


    Not a big fan of it... looks a little bit weard to me...
    comments?





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    Magnezone looks much better now. Heatran doesn't look right, it's front legs look a bit too long. And the Kingdra is very nice. The shading on the doesn't look right though.

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