Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Sadly, there is a strong chance that he could, he does not do some kind of miracle ***-pull that explains a lot of the current plot holes.
What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'
You'd probably kill several lower ranked soul reapers and a lieutenant or captain before we could stop you.
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
Well, I'd always like to see more Chad, but I guess he's a got pretty good amount of screen time.
I think I'd like to see a proper Unohana fight or two.
Originally Posted by arceus03
And... Manga:
Spoiler:
Woah, a denser time. Something tells me ILPy is going to love this whole thing about time and space explanation.
Isshin was going to use _all_ of his reiatsu to stop the current... Which indicated that Ichigo is going to get all the fighting to himself again. WHAT. THE. HECK.
I see.. Training for thousands of years, because Ichigo took the shortcut to achieving Bankai back then, right?
Aizen must also know that the train thing stops people from staying in the Precipice for a long time. He would also suspect that Ichigo and Isshin wll follow him. Meaning... He could be destroying the train on purpose...?
GAH. We're going to get another "I already knew this would happen" scene from Aizen? Heck please no.
"And don't touch her ***" made me lol. XDD Why were they awake, anyway? People with higher-than-normal-but-lower-than-shinigami spiritual energy?
Zangetsu is gonna go wild... This will surely be interesting to see...
Spoiler:- manga 408:
Well, Ichigo is going to be training for at most an hour, but how long does it take to form to Oken? I'm starting to guess that there will have to be someone to stall Aizen & Gin until Ichigo aND Isshin are done in the hyperbolic time chamber Dangai Precipice World.
Yeah, I'm also afraid this might also be apart of Aizen's plan. I hope it does turn out the Ichigo is used like a tool like he was by Muramasa. :/
Yeah, I wanna see this wild Zangetsu too. ;p
Spoiler:- anime 275:
Ah, the supossed end to the Hitsugaya vs. Halibel fight. I always love watching the anime for these kinds of scene where they show sort of complex abilities. Just helps me to visualize them better than the manga ever could.
I forgot about Starrk being able to fire a cero without a posture, that is a pretty awesome skill to have.
I think this was a really good introduction of Baraggan's release, Arrogante. I think probably one of the one members in the club that could take on, let alone beat, Baraggan is Ant.
Last edited by Zameric; 17th June 2010 at 9:31 PM.
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Overall, the chapter was interesting. I'll go more in-depth to the physics of the Precipe World in the in-depth review. Though I'm glad to see Tatsuki after so long.
Haha, that first bit made me lol. Oh, Ichigo, no pain no gain.
"The Precipe World is a place in which severed space is piled up on top of one another, surrounded by raging streams of time."
NOTE: Skip this paragraph if you don't really like physics DA.C
This is an interesting description. Especially since it describes it as "severed space piled onto each other." A quick Einstein "theory" for you, he said that gravity can bend space-time. The larger the gravity, the more that it is bent, and the more that space and time is stretched.
Due to the severed space being piled onto each other, we can guess that the space is very dense in mass (and therefore has a great gravity), which can affect the space and time in its area (that being the Precipe World itself). If we ignore the fact that the gravity would crush everyone who passes through it, it would make sense in theory.
Though an interesting thing is that he mentioned "raging streams of time". I take this to mean that the time is not a constant flow (another one of Einstein's ideas) and that it moves erratically, depending where you are. Some areas it would move much slower than outside, and others, much faster. In this case, it moves a lot faster, though it should also shift.
I'll keep this rather tame for now, so I can get on with the rest of the chapter.
What exactly is this "Kouryuu current" he keeps on mentioning? I seemed to have missed the explanation.
So Ichigo has only 3 months to conquer Zangetsu? If it was 3 months non-stop (which is an interesting idea, seeing as how as they are Souls, they have no need for food or sleep, so it could make sense) then I can see it MAYBE happen, but Captains take years to master/attain Bankai, no?
So Ichigo's going to call out Zangetsu? This will be VERY interesting, considering how HIchigo is obviously going to come out too, and what with the fight against Ulquiorra having his Hollow form, and using his new mask...
Ah, Tatsuki and Keigo. 2 of the people with Urahara. I wonder where Muzuiro is.
Haha, Keigo being a perv XD.
And they've obviously clocked it with Ichigo straight away. Looks like he's not very good with keeping his life a secret.
So, Aizen and Gin are ready to do things now.
And "wild" may be an understatement. I just hope that this won't be a HUGE anticlimax.
Originally Posted by Golde
@Eon - The reason why I asked him to make me female was because the last fanfic he made, he made me female WITHOUT me asking. That means in the year or two he knew of me, he thought I was female the whole time. And for those who know me, I have a very feminine personality. Sooo...I was curious to see how I'd be portrayed. But he never finished his last one.
OH, so you ASKED to be a girl. Nevermind then >.>
Originally Posted by arceus03
Spoiler:
Woah, a denser time. Something tells me ILPy is going to love this whole thing about time and space explanation.
Spoiler:
A little bit, yes. I could go ON AND ON about it, though.
Originally Posted by arceus03
Spoiler:
Isshin was going to use _all_ of his reiatsu to stop the current... Which indicated that Ichigo is going to get all the fighting to himself again. WHAT. THE. HECK.
Spoiler:
Kubo's been "foreshadowing" this for AGES.
Originally Posted by arceus03
Spoiler:
Aizen must also know that the train thing stops people from staying in the Precipice for a long time. He would also suspect that Ichigo and Isshin wll follow him. Meaning... He could be destroying the train on purpose...?
GAH. We're going to get another "I already knew this would happen" scene from Aizen? Heck please no.
Spoiler:
Perhaps, but I have a feeling that even Aizen isn't expecting Ichigo to do this, even if he was expecting him to follow him.
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
as for ILP's commemts, all i am going to say is some were spot on, and some were so way off, i never saw them coming looool.
Haha, good. I sometimes like being on the dot about guesses, and other times, I like being WAY OFF.
Originally Posted by Zameric
Spoiler:- manga 408:
Well, Ichigo is going to be training for at most an hour, but how long does it take to form to Oken? I'm starting to guess that there will have to be someone to stall Aizen & Gin until Ichigo aND Isshin are done in the hyperbolic time chamber Dangai Precipice World.
Spoiler:
Hmm, true. I think it WILL take a while for Aizen to create the Ouken. And like everyone else, Ichigo will end up coming in the nick of time to save the day.
Last edited by I like Pokemon (...); 17th June 2010 at 9:45 PM.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Hello all! I'm back. Forgive me for my absence. I was busy with my final exams and GTA III afterwards. I recently got addicted to the manga. I've also seen that you guys have got battle charts. They look pretty awesome, that's all what I can say. But first of all, what do I do to receive it from a fellow member? I don't know whether I've said this before or not but I fell like ditching my zanpaktou. The katana doesn't go with me well, I thought I'd take permission from you guys to swap it with a Tommy gun capable of launching kido spells in the form of colored bullets and firing colored lasers with the power and range of a sniper rifle. So... How's everybody doing?
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
I think so. The endings of most dramas and animes have been crappy... I hope its ending doesn't turn out to be bad as well. >.< I also pray that Bleach SHOULD'NT end! It should go on and on just like Pokemon. An anime like Bleach is too good to end.
What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'
Who? Me? The same thing that would happen to you if you'd get a six star wanted level in GTA. The Soul Society would be one me like a fungus on a toe nail. They'd want me dead because the Seretei would be piling up with the souls of corrupt polictians and religon fanatics
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
I think Unohana, Byakuya and Aizen deserve more attention.
Last edited by Emperor Giratina; 17th June 2010 at 10:04 PM.
Well here goes. i had a crappy day so i haven't read the manga yet. i'll do that soon.
Welcome back Emperor Giratina. We've never really talked i just wanted to be the first to welcome you back. Oh and as for the 'can i kill something now' topic, its not reffering to the responder. it was started by Vizard Blue and its based on his sort of catch phrase, which is: Can i kill something now? Don't worry you'll hear it a lot from here on out.
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Kubo is going to, pardon my french, **** all over this ending.
What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?
You'll start killing out right. then get cocky and start jumping out from around corners for surprise attacks and one time you won't be watching your back and someone will bust you over the head with a sheath.
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
I'm adding to my own topic. Unohana, Hanataro and Rekichi.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Yes... Aizen has been made ridiculously powerful, and somehow Ichigo will win, even though Yamamoto lost. I get that Ichigo is supposed to be the hero, but seriously??? how does the captain commander and strongest shinigami LOSE against Aizen??
What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'
???
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
UNOHANA
MAYURI
Kira
yamamoto's lieutenant
yumichika (he rarely fights)
YACHIRU
I'm liking how the manga's going...better...plotholes aside.
Which reminds me, I still wanna see Hayate Gekko's gf in Naruto XDD
Somethings going to happen to someone in Karakura...I'm hoping some cool powers! I think...Keigo is it? The guy who keeps getting clotheslined. Something involving legs with him.
And I better see some damned long hair sexy Ichi after 3+months of training.
>>
Good news Bad news...
Good news - I'm getting a brand spankin new computer tomorrow. Meaning no more drag, meaning Word, GIMP, etc should run AMAZING.
Bad news - I'm leaving town from the 19th to the 24th and shouldn't have internet. So, yaoi time.
Good news more - I'll probably work on my fic in my spare time...I haven't had the motivation to finish this fight e.e
Hello all! I'm back. Forgive me for my absence. I was busy with my final exams and GTA III afterwards. I recently got addicted to the manga. I've also seen that you guys have got battle charts. They look pretty awesome, that's all what I can say. But first of all, what do I do to receive it from a fellow member? I don't know whether I've said this before or not but I fell like ditching my zanpaktou. The katana doesn't go with me well, I thought I'd take permission from you guys to swap it with a Tommy gun capable of launching kido spells in the form of colored bullets and firing colored lasers with the power and range of a sniper rifle. So... How's everybody doing?
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
I think Unohana, Byakuya and Aizen deserve more attention.
Good to see you again =D
Spoiler:
Your new idea.. Seems pretty much like Starrk's Los Lobos, but idk.
UNOHANA 8D YES
Aizen.... already got a HUGE amount of screentime lately...
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Yes... Aizen has been made ridiculously powerful, and somehow Ichigo will win, even though Yamamoto lost. I get that Ichigo is supposed to be the hero, but seriously??? how does the captain commander and strongest shinigami LOSE against Aizen??
Well... Spoiler:
Aizen didn't actually win over Yamamoto. It's more because of Wonderweiss butting in and sealing Yamamoto's powers.
Originally Posted by Golde
Bad news - I'm leaving town from the 19th to the 24th and shouldn't have internet. So, yaoi time.
Good news more - I'll probably work on my fic in my spare time...I haven't had the motivation to finish this fight e.e
I'm sad that no one would read my fic so I am writing the next chapter now.
Summer Vacation officially started for me yesterday.
NO idea who Emperor Giratina is.
Stealing more ideas from other stuff to incorporate into my fic.
Laughing at Golde's outfit.
Reading Manga Later.
Spoiler:- Bleach: Exile: The Last Element:
(A/N: I need to think of songs better. Japanese Digimon song now..)
The scientist smirked, recovering from his momentary awe as he looked behind him. He glanced back for only a moment before looking at the glorious marvel that stood before him. It was just a tiny suspended crystal, a stereotypical diamond about a half foot tall. It glowed with a dim orange energy-and it seemed to be filled with conflict without ever moving. It looked as if red clouds and orange lightning crackled in the diamond-shape, but if you blinked it’d just be normal again. Behind the crystal by a couple feet was an unconscious young man, around 18 or 19 years of age, who was in too much shadow to be properly seen. As the scientist peered at him, the image of a fox burned briefly in the crystal before returning to normal.
“Hmm…CPX 001 F.S. is still here with the crystal. Poor guy, he was born with more than he can handle. And now, it ours…The A Ranked Crystal of Storm…” He murmured as he walked carefully around the crystal. “Can’t believe they are sending it out already…I wonder what they’ll do about the shinigami without it…although they were distracted by a C rank for a while…”
“WHAT IS TAKING YOU SO LONG?” A voice boomed and his heart stopped for a second. He breathed deeply for a few seconds before carefully removing the Crystal from its floating pedestal. He held it like a hot potato, switching hands as if it would burn him for holding it too long in one hand. When he came back out a man was waiting for him. The man had short silver hair and a one-piece hood-including suit that covered all but his face and feet. The robe was orange and appeared to change color very slightly and randomly. He looked calmly at the scientist until the crystal was held before him. He stared at it in awe before outstretching his arm and then holding his palm vertically. The crystal slowly dived into him and he was burning. Literally, fire engulfed his being and cursed were barely heard under his cool exterior. It all stopped and he got back up calmly, dusting himself off, nodding at the first scientist (The one who didn’t retrieve the crystal.)
Meanwhile, a short distance away Ryoto stood in a similar room, this one was empty. He was staring at a 5-inch long crystal that was a brighter orange-it just radiated calm and bright energy. He smiled briefly before holding his hand up like the last man and absorbing the crystal-then leaving the dark room without a sound-alone but fully aware of his next destination.
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I.L.P ver. 2 stood solemnly in the outskirts of Rukongai’s Southern regions. Ibis, Kida, and Jin weren’t far back. He was just an alert system. He had no zanpakutou, he was a copy of a near perfectly human robot. This didn’t upset him, it was nearly impossible to upset him; hell, it was nearly impossible to refer to him with masculine pronouns. He was an incomplete version of Narcisse’s legacy-ILP. He was just like ILP, intelligence, attitude, and appearance-wise at least. However he had little real emotion and served as little more than a moving supercomputer-although not as advanced. After ILP was lost at the equator ILP ver. 2 was hastily scrapped together and took over as the 12th Lieutenant.
“Heh. You don’t even have a Zanpakutou! Pathetic Lieutenant.” The voice said wickedly. The once shy teen walked confidently and briskly up to ILP. ILP already had alerted the other patrols and switched to physical defense mode. This was a strange setting that jumbled-ly mixed up different martial arts to combat enemies until back-up could appear. “I won’t release mine either then.” Ryoto smirked as the B-Sky-Crystal’s orange energy engulfed his hands-which also got into fighting position
“Analysis…Non-Seated 10th Squad Member...Reiatsu Levels…Third Seat level….Zanpakutou…Leone Di Cielo…Low Tier Zanpakutou…Abilties…Energy manifestation and speed.” ILP ver. 2 continued for a second-quieter as Ryoto punched his glowing fists to ILPV2’s metallic ones. The two were evenly matched. This surprised ILPV2 and he burst backwards-his sides opening up as small missiles launched themselves at Ryoto. He jumped him up into the air-but the missiles followed him up and he held his hands together
“Raikouhou!” He exclaimed as electricity slammed through the missiles-blowing them up a safe distance away before beginning to fall back down to the ground. Ryoto put himself right side up and prepared to kick at ILPV2-who blocked it just barely. With tiny metal claws digging into the dirt, the force propelled him backward a few feet even as he remained upright. He cringed as Ryoto aimed his hand at him.
“Kongobaku!” A voice rang out, as a red fiery ball struck the ground in front of Ryoto-who stumbled back in surprise. After the smoke began to clear-Jin made an overdramatic appearance standing in the smoke-gesturing a black-covered hand to ILPV2 to back up. Ryoto bared his teeth as Jin became in full view-sort of as he was wrapped in black fabric other than his face.
“Haien!” Ryoto exclaimed as the fiery Hadou burst out of his outstretched hand-Jin only slashed his sword and a rippling crescent cancelled out the Haien. Ryoto smirked as he noticed the odd shape of Jin’s blade. “Ahh…so you have already released. Very well, let’s go. Roar, Leone di Cielo!” Ryoto released his Shikai, but it was different now. A feral look in his eyes, and fangs sharp in his mouth, he had orange glowing wings that each were his height-about 5 feet long each. Claws made their way out of his feet and hands-his sword was not a sword this time though. He held a long spear with a small diamond-shaped blade at the end-it glowed bright orange. He quickly burst into the air and tried to stab into Jin from above.
“Hyaah!” Jin grunted as he fired vacuum after vacuum at the ever falling Ryoto. Ryoto smiled as the orange energy began to flow from the spear-tip, creating an orange barrier that sharpened to a point. Jin cursed before disappearing entirely-noticing that too much energy was present behind Ryoto to strike from there as well. “Zenbu Kuu!” Jin exclaimed as the air rippled everywhere-moving vacuums going in every direction like some sort of a vacuum bomb.
“Pathetic!” Ryoto exclaimed as he floated nonchalantly a few feet away-holding out the spear before a huge beam burst from its tip. He burst into a stab behind the beam-safely avoiding the vacuum slashes. Jin easily moved out of the way. “Enough playing. Time to destroy you.” He visually sped up and Jin, the stealthiest and fastest captain, had trouble dodging the flying stab that came at him-and was completely caught off guard by the long thin beam of orange energy that drilled into his side.
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-A Mile Off the East Coast of The United States of America-
A Young Man with long white hair stood on the surface of the ocean’s water-wearing ridiculous stereotypically Tropical vacation clothing, flowery patterns and all. He was very kind looking but at this moment he was very serious, staring down a strange silver-haired and orange-robe wearing man-the same who had absorbed the A-Crystal of Storm, he floated a few feet above the water. Nearby was a black-haired teen, wearing a white polo and black cargo shorts, that stood nonchalantly on a small platform of ice that crusted over a small part of the ocean. On the horizon was a large cruise ship floating away without any notice of its two missing passengers.
“Give up. Just stand down” The silver-haired man spoke calmly, as if he wasn’t carrying a five-foot long sword in his hand and pointing it at the two people. “Do not force me to use…force”
“Kid, leave.” The White haired man said, walking on the waves a step towards the silver haired man, he held up a hand as water began to rise up and swirl around the two. Clouds started to gather in the area-appearing from nowhere but gathering directly above the duo.
“You think you can stop me? Pathetic.” The Silver Haired man stated. He snapped his fingers and a fiery corona completely disintegrated the watery prison. “If you insist on resisting, I WILL destroy you.”
“My name is Akira, Mizuhashi Akira. And I will stop you from harming innocent people” The white Haired man replied, not at all full of himself. He bent down and put his hand in the water, pulling out a crude watery rifle. He aimed and fired a bullet of super-condensed water at the Silver-haired man, simultaneously waving his other hand behind him and making a wall between them and the other.
“I’m not going to stand back here and watch, or run. For future purposes call me R, not ‘Kid’” he said angrily. He dashed forward-the water being replaced by smooth ice as he went-sliding straight up the now-frozen wall of water.
“Kids these days, eh? Makes my job easier. My name is Sanger. Remember it, it’s the last name you’ll hear the way you are. Burn, Visone Tempesta!” His sword was suddenly on fire, except for the hilt, and around 7 feet long. “Flamma Scarletta!” The fire leaked off of his sword and even the water and the air caught on fire. Fire spread wildly everywhere and in every direction-easily destroying the water and ice that tried to get in its way-eventually making a dome around the three people.
Akira tried in vain to put out the fires as geyser after geyser rose into the air, failing miserably but not giving up. He eventually aimed the rifle-like water mass and fired a bullet into the dome-making a hole he continued. R started to blow at the flames, like a birthday candle except the water that touched his breath froze-including the water vapor made by the heat and causing a large fog inside the dome
Ryoto and Jin stared at each other from about 10 feet away-being watched by Ibis, Kida, and ILP ver.2. Neither moved-but Ryoto prepared to. Tensing, he suddenly burst into the sky at speeds a shuttle would be jealous of. Jin followed suit, but was surprised as Ryoto flapped his wings and powerful waved of energy and air were launched at him-then there was the more focused beam of energy form the spear coming down at him. He cursed as he fired blasts of vacuum at the mass of energy raining down at him…
Ehhh…decided to make next chapter explanation and finishing battle chapter cause this is already loooooooooong and I’m laaaaaazy
Last edited by rotrum; 18th June 2010 at 6:14 PM.
Originally Posted by Northern Lights
I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>
I'm liking how the manga's going...better...plotholes aside.
Which reminds me, I still wanna see Hayate Gekko's gf in Naruto XDD
Somethings going to happen to someone in Karakura...I'm hoping some cool powers! I think...Keigo is it? The guy who keeps getting clotheslined. Something involving legs with him.
And I better see some damned long hair sexy Ichi after 3+months of training.
>>
Good news Bad news...
Good news - I'm getting a brand spankin new computer tomorrow. Meaning no more drag, meaning Word, GIMP, etc should run AMAZING.
Bad news - I'm leaving town from the 19th to the 24th and shouldn't have internet. So, yaoi time.
Good news more - I'll probably work on my fic in my spare time...I haven't had the motivation to finish this fight e.e
NOOOOO!!!!
ok, when you get back, you MUST look for the next chapter of my story!!!! No matter how many pages you missed!!!!! =)
Summer Vacation officially started for me yesterday.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
=) the joys of me not attending an american high school :P (or middle school or w/e)
As for your story Rotrum:
I have to say, excellent description. You are definately improving. You kept the characters vivid, you kept the reactions realistic, though I find it interesting that a robot which analysed them was unable to determine that one was violent and would attack without warning lol. But it was all very well written, and a decent length too. You spaced out your paragraphs very well (an improvement from that block of text you wanted us to read haha) and you did not use too many contractions, and each was explained fully. The mysterious ending definately helps one look for the next chapter in anticipation =)
I think I will go and watch Karate Kid today.... hm....
Other than my wonderful English friends (Well, just NL) is there anyone else watching the world cup?
Last edited by Da14u.C; 18th June 2010 at 5:05 PM.
Forgive me for my absence. I was busy with my final exams and GTA III afterwards. I recently got addicted to the manga.
Well, you're here now, anyway.
Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina
I've also seen that you guys have got battle charts. They look pretty awesome, that's all what I can say. But first of all, what do I do to receive it from a fellow member?
You make your stats based on how you think you are in battle, and you can either make your own chart, or I'm sure Zam will be happy to make it for you.
Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina
I don't know whether I've said this before or not but I fell like ditching my zanpaktou. The katana doesn't go with me well, I thought I'd take permission from you guys to swap it with a Tommy gun capable of launching kido spells in the form of colored bullets and firing colored lasers with the power and range of a sniper rifle.
Hmm... As long as it's still science/maths related somehow...
Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
I think so. The endings of most dramas and animes have been crappy... I hope its ending doesn't turn out to be bad as well. >.< I also pray that Bleach SHOULD'NT end! It should go on and on just like Pokemon. An anime like Bleach is too good to end.
If it never ended, Bleach would SUCK.
Originally Posted by Golde
Spoiler:- Manga:
And I better see some damned long hair sexy Ichi after 3+months of training.
Spoiler:
HELL YES.
Originally Posted by Golde
Good news Bad news...
Good news - I'm getting a brand spankin new computer tomorrow. Meaning no more drag, meaning Word, GIMP, etc should run AMAZING.
WOO.
Originally Posted by Golde
Bad news - I'm leaving town from the 19th to the 24th and shouldn't have internet. So, yaoi time.
Well, at least there's Yaoi. And it's only for a few days.
Originally Posted by Golde
Good news more - I'll probably work on my fic in my spare time...I haven't had the motivation to finish this fight e.e
WOO!
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
Other than my wonderful English friends (Well, just NL) is there anyone else watching the world cup?
*Emo corner*
England suck at football, I have to say. And USA's goalie is really good.
Rotrum, I'm incredibly lazy today, so I'll read your fic tomorrow and give a proper review like I normally do with everyone else.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Like I said, make a fanfic page...that'd make everything so easier. ALL OF YOU! MAKE THE DAMNED PAGES ><
If you keep dressing me in stuff I wouldn't wear, I'm going to be mad.
Remember Edelina, Da.c DID say that the whole disease thing was causing mental instability of the owners, so maybe that's why your wearing that very...revealing outfit. ~ Tata, im off to lop someone's head off out of boredom.
Originally Posted by ILP
We're Mad.
Our 1st Squad Captain has an insane sweet tooth
Our 2nd Squad Captain is some super-ninja
Our 3rd Squad Captain is part wolf
Our 4th Squad Captain bakes cookies and cuts up anyone who makes him mad
Our 5th Squad Captain is some party-crazy army man
Our 6th Squad Captain is calm, prideful and pervy
Our 7th Squad Captain seems to be, barely, the only sane one
Our 8th Squad Captain is missing
Our 9th Squad Captain is a shy, respectful, boring and pervy
Our 10th Squad Captain hates some of our OWN captains
Our 11th Squad Captain is a sadistic maniac
Our 12th Squad Captain is an insane nerd
Our 13th Squad Captain is sleeping
As for your story Rotrum:
I have to say, excellent description. You are definately improving. You kept the characters vivid, you kept the reactions realistic, though I find it interesting that a robot which analysed them was unable to determine that one was violent and would attack without warning lol. But it was all very well written, and a decent length too. You spaced out your paragraphs very well (an improvement from that block of text you wanted us to read haha) and you did not use too many contractions, and each was explained fully. The mysterious ending definately helps one look for the next chapter in anticipation =)
Good for you =D
...I mean, Rotrum was worrying no one was reading his story..
Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)
*Emo corner*
England suck at football, I have to say. And USA's goalie is really good.
All I know about England is that Gerrard got a yellow card =D
Klose got a red one XD
Originally Posted by Golde
Like I said, make a fanfic page...that'd make everything so easier. ALL OF YOU! MAKE THE DAMNED PAGES ><
If you keep dressing me in stuff I wouldn't wear, I'm going to be mad.
Uh-oh. Sotaicho-chan sama is mad. Do what he says, everyone. XD
So far, I think only MC, Golde himself, NL and me has those pages. Which means... Eon, kusari, rotrum and Dac haven't made them yet. Well, I remember seeing a prologue from VB, but he seems to be not continuing his story.. like me
Keep dressing you in stuff you wouldn't wear? :3 *naughty thoughts for next chapter*
[QUOTE=Emperor Giratina;11364463]I don't know whether I've said this before or not but I fell like ditching my zanpaktou. The katana doesn't go with me well, I thought I'd take permission from you guys to swap it with a Tommy gun capable of launching kido spells in the form of colored bullets and firing colored lasers with the power and range of a sniper rifle. So... How's everybody doing?
[QUOTE]
it does sound a lot like los lobos. and you are under ILP so it would have to be, at least a bit, math or science related.
i'll make a fanfic page when i feel like it. i'm just really lazy.
yeah, i was following the world cup. i was a france fan. i like to root for the underdog and france is basically the underdog of the world in everything.
i'm gonna put up a chapter later probably then take this coming week off. i'm not going to do anything this week. no internet, no parties, hell i probably won't even leave my apartment.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Like I said, make a fanfic page...that'd make everything so easier. ALL OF YOU! MAKE THE DAMNED PAGES ><
I'd love to, but unfortunately, I don't have a finalized title, a title banner, and I'm riding a huge brainwave on my fic right now, so I'm kinda otherwise occupied.
If you keep dressing me in stuff I wouldn't wear, I'm going to be mad.
I (oddly enough) think my Lieutenant is on the right track. Lol @ him calling you Edlina.
Originally Posted by arceus03
Good for you =D
...I mean, Rotrum was worrying no one was reading his story..
I've been reading it, I've just not had the motivation to review.
All I know about England is that Gerrard got a yellow card =D
Klose got a red one XD
England hasn't won a match yet. Then again, neither has the US, and Algeria hasn't even scored yet. So England is pretty much tied for second in Group C.
That made me so angry, dammit. Das war nicht wichtig! (That wasn't cool/fair/right.)
Uh-oh. Sotaicho-chan sama is mad. Do what he says, everyone. XD
So far, I think only MC, Golde himself, NL and me has those pages. Which means... Eon, kusari, rotrum and Dac haven't made them yet. Well, I remember seeing a prologue from VB, but he seems to be not continuing his story.. like me
Well excuse me for being a dedicated writer :<
And don't you dare, I must see... wait, I musn't spoil it for everyone else =D
Keep dressing you in stuff you wouldn't wear? :3 *naughty thoughts for next chapter*
I laughed, probably immoderately so.
Originally Posted by kusari
it does sound a lot like los lobos. and you are under ILP so it would have to be, at least a bit, math or science related.
Actually, it reminds me more of Rantao's Kido Shotgun, but w/e.
i'll make a fanfic page when i feel like it. i'm just really lazy.
No. Bad.
yeah, i was following the world cup. i was a france fan. i like to root for the underdog and france is basically the underdog of the world in everything.
I made the mistake of rooting for France in '06, it cost me $25 in a bet >.>
i'm gonna put up a chapter later probably then take this coming week off. i'm not going to do anything this week. no internet, no parties, hell i probably won't even leave my apartment.
Wow, you're just going to sleep?
@Everybody: I'm working on my next chapter, probably done either today or tomorrow.
Well, I finished Chapter 9. Shouldn't be long before I post it here. :] As long as the lags don't bore me out and I stop trying to post... Anyway. Possible spoils: Eon is in =D
...I said possible, right? XP
Working on the 10th, idk when I'll finish it. XD
Eon I think Golde meant that for you, but whatever. XD But yeah, mine hasn't got a title/banner too. Unless you want to be pretty picky about it.
Rotrum~ Well that was an interesting finish =D I wonder when did I have the ability to control the ocean... But I thought I was a mere human, not yet turned into a SH? How did I have the abilities then? o.o
What I saw in the manga thread~
More Kubo answers from an interview. Explains all the characters who do jack crap.
Q. How long does it takes for you to create a character?
A. It doesn't take time. When I do my daily activities characters idea one by one suddenly spring into my head. Then it's all about the timing when will I put them on top of the paper.
Q. Why Kyouraku didn't go Bankai? If he get serious he might defeat Aizen!
A. Shunsui's appeal is not to defeat Aizen. But I let the readers think that 「If he goes Bankai he might be stronger than Aizen」
Alright, that last answer was just stupid.
Well... Now we know why everyone won't go bankai to stop Aizen. Because it's not their job. They're probably buying popcorns while waiting for Ichigo to face Aizen now... =\
Last edited by arceus03; 20th June 2010 at 5:12 PM.
@ NL - Well, sorry. I tend to be forgetful with things. Like I said, remind me :P
Can I remind you that I have my story cataloged on my Squad Page, so I don't technically need a story one for you to find it easily?
@ Da.C - Banners and stuff aren't needed. Ya just gotta link all the chapters on one thing. No fancy name or banner or finalized title for my page e.e
But that's boring.
And Edelina isn't new, lol. Maybe if we ever talked on WLM :P
Maybe if my computer actually had the power to support it :P
I was mostly joking. I figured it was the disease thing once I read it as well.
Fair enough.
Originally Posted by arceus03
Well, I finished Chapter 9. Shouldn't be long before I post it here. :] As long as the lags don't bore me out and I stop trying to post... Anyway. Possible spoils: Eon is in =D
...I said possible, right? XP
Working on the 10th, idk when I'll finish it. XD
OMGPOSTITPOSTITPOSTIT!!!
Eon I think Golde meant that for you, but whatever. XD But yeah, mine hasn't got a title/banner too. Unless you want to be pretty picky about it.
Mehh, no banner = boring archive page. IMO.
Well... Now we know why everyone won't go bankai to stop Aizen. Because it's not their job. They're probably buying popcorns while waiting for Ichigo to face Aizen now... =\
That is quite possibly the most idiotic thing I've ever heard.
Anyway, new chapter~
Spoiler:- Chapter 2: The Stuff of Nightmares and Fanfiction:
Head Captain Hitsugaya was beginning to get annoyed by the incessant, impatient tapping of his own foot. That’s how much he was annoyed with the current situation.
Simply put, he was ready to freeze hell over.
“A killer on the loose with Captain-class reiatsu, an investigation that hasn’t even gotten any information yet, two Captains late to the emergency Captain’s Meeting, and it’s not even noon yet,” he grumbled heatedly. “I can’t see how this day can possibly get worse.”
WHAM!
Every Captain present in the room jumped at the sudden blast of noise from the door. I just had to open my big mouth. Days like these are the stuff that nightmares and Fanfiction are made of. “Who’s there?” he demanded.
“Lieutenant Blue… sir…” the now oxygen-deprived Lieutenant gasped from outside. “Cap’n Arashi’s… fightin’…”
Just as the words registered with Hitsugaya’s conscience, a burst of familiar reiatsu registered on everyone’s senses. It pressed firmly down, but was neither thick nor heavy, and it almost carried a scent of ozone to one’s nostrils.
“This is Captain Arashi’s reiatsu, right?” Captain Ookami of Squad 3 asked, her blue wolf ears twitching nervously, her spiky blonde hair trembling in unison. “I never knew he had that much.”
“He has as much reiatsu as Captain Infernou,” 12th Squad’s Captain Schifa responded in a monotone. He was pale, almost pure white, and he gave off an aura of being perpetually detached. “It’s a part of his body instead of being exuded like the rest of us.”
“Meaning what?” Zameric Kajiya, the Squad 9 Captain, asked for clarity’s sake, twirling his black fedora on his index finger, the gusts of air from the spins ruffling his long brown hair.
“Simply that his defenses are far stronger than anyone else’s, which is something I assumed you already knew. Apparently, I need to think less of you.” Zameric scowled, as did several others, before realizing he was being sarcastic and letting it go. Ryuu half smiled, pulling a Rubix Cube out of his sleeve and fiddling with it absentmindedly.
“So then,” Captain Dre Hirameki of Squad 5 began, his deep voice reverberating throughout the chamber. “Should we go lend him a hand?”
“There’s no need,” Jinchuuriki Hunter interjected calmly. “I sense that Captain Infernou and Lieutenant Akira are closing in on Captain Arashi’s position.” As Squad 2 Captain, he was dressed in the typical Onmitsukidou garb, all black sans the Captain’s Robe, with a black mask and bandana, leaving only his emerald green eyes visible. His sword was strapped under his right armpit, pointing down with the hilt sinking just below his waist. The odd position seemed akward to most people, but it allowed him to draw his sword faster than the blink of an eye from a completely neutral stance.
Golde, the Squad 10 Captain, sighed with relief. “Good then, I think we can trust those two to back him up.” His seven foot tall frame towered over the majority of the room, to say nothing of his spiky golden hair, and his cloudy grey eyes always seemed to crackle with hidden intensity, no matter how at ease he seemed on the outside.
Toshirou smiled halfheartedly at his old student. Golde was the only Captain from the first wave of students to the Shinigami Academy still in service, not to mention the second-strongest Captain in the Soul Society, current or former. Toshirou hoped that he would one day take his place as the Head Captain, but he also knew that Golde wouldn’t want the extra responsibility.
Dre raised an eyebrow at Golde’s relief. “You sure about that, Golde?” he asked. “I know you’re worried anyway.”
“It doesn’t matter, Captain Hirameki,” a cold, lifeless voice interrupted. “Even if we went to assist them, the battle would be decided by the time we reached the area. Captain Golde knows that.” All eyes turned to face the diminutive 13th Squad Captain, Rukia Kuchki. Her violet eyes were so bleak and frozen that if she didn’t move, it seemed like she was dead.
She is dead, Hitsugaya reminded himself grimly, ignoring the Captains arguing around him. At least on the inside. Seventy years ago, her entire life came crashing down around her ears in a single day…
***
Captain Byakuya Kuchki dropped to his knees, his broken Zanpaktou clattering in pieces to the sand beneath him. The former Cero Espada Yammy Rialgo, now the Decima once again, also dropped to the ground only feet from him. Turning the monstrous Arrancar back to his sealed form had cost the lives of both Kurotsuchi Mayuri and Kenpachi Zaraki. The trick had been to carve the number into his shoulder, ensuring that he was locked into his unreleased state, but doing so had been nigh impossible when faced with his seemingly limitless reserves of power.
He turned his fading vision to his sister and her friends, who had just come down from trying to destroy the Hogyoku. “How… did it go?” he asked, spasms of pain arcing across his crushed ribs.
Rukia dropped her gaze to the ground, looking ashamed. “The ‘Hogyoku’ we tried to destroy was a trap. It sucked out all of Sado’s and Inoue’s powers.”
Byakuya was immediately incensed; they had been played for fools. “Blast…” he muttered angrily. “How did I not see through such an obvious ploy?”
Renji, his Lieutenant, stepped forward with his hand over his heart. “It’s my fault, Captain,” he said sadly. “I should have known better when I saw that it was exactly where it had been when Aizen had shown it to Inoue.”
“Don’t you think you’ve got a bigger problem to worry about?!” an enraged voice roared, causing all of them to snap their attention to Yammy. “You shits are dead meat!” He raised his arm to fire a Bala, and they all braced themselves for the attack just as a new voice cut into their collective consciousness.
“Grind, Pantera!”
A storm of sand and reiatsu erupted from the desert a short distance away, and a white and blue blur blew past the group and tackled Yammy to the ground.
Rukia’s eyes widened at the sight of their unlikely savior. She had faced him once before, and his murderous gaze hadn’t changed one bit since then. “G-Grimmjow Jaggerjack?” she gasped, his name flashing through her head like a bolt of lightning.
The Sexta Espada staggered slightly, clutching the gaping sword wounds in his chest with his left hand. His right fingertips began to glow, and instantly five claws made of pure blue energy climbed into the sky from his hand. “Go,” he commanded without turning around. “I’ve got things here.”
“Why?” Byakuya asked, holding his wound painfully as he staggered to his feet. “You are an Arrancar, an Espada no less. Why are you helping us?”
Grimmjow’s head turned a fraction, but it was enough so that the conflicted pain in his blue eyes was clearly visible. “Because I owe Ichigo for saving my life.”
Byakuya nodded, understanding the feelings Grimmjow was dealing with. “Very well. One other question. What happened to Lieutenant Kusajishi?”
“The brat?” Grimmjow asked, receiving another nod in return. “She’s dead. That ******* Tesla got to her before I could finish him off.”
A red burst of energy shot past them before Byakuya could respond, flying towards Hanatarou. He ducked into the fetal position, but before the blast could hit, Isane jumped in front of it and took the Cero head-on, half of her body being blown off in the process.
“*******!” Grimmjow snarled into the dust cloud. “A sneak attack?! Don’t you have any shame?!”
“Shaddup,” Yammy’s voice grumbled back, his body following as he rose from the dust. “You just gave me an opening.”
Byakuya turned painfully to the remaining Shinigami and the humans. “Lieutenant Kurotsuchi, open a Garganta. You all must escape to the Soul Society.”
Nemu nodded, reaching out with her right hand and releasing the rip in reality with a pulse of energy.
“Quickly, we must go,” she murmured, ushering the others into the Garganta.
“You shits ain’t going anywhere!” Yammy roared, firing a massive red Cero from his jaws again. Grimmjow staggered to the side, his eyes widening as he realized that the blast wasn’t aimed at him, but the escaping Shinigami.
Byakuya sighed and hurled himself into the air, taking the brunt of the Cero on his body without a moment of hesitation. The burning wave of power washed over him, and he felt no pain, but relief. As his consciousness began to fade, he turned his eyes to meet his sisters’. She was horrified; her expression looked like a shattered painting. His eyes closed slowly, but not before he let the last word cross his lips.
“Go.”
Renji, the reliable red pineapple head, grabbed Rukia’s arm and bolted into the Garganta with the others. Yammy, still discontented that he hadn’t managed to hit his intended targets, fired another blood red Cero at the retreating figures, managing to hit Nemu just as the portal closed.
Grimmjow finally found his opportunity, rushing forward and bringing his Desgarón to bear on Yammy’s face, shredding his body into hunks of meat with a single blow, collapsing to the ground and releasing his Resurrección before drifting into unconsciousness.
The three remaining Shinigami and three humans rushed along inside the Garganta, Inoue and Chad riding on Uryuu’s Hirenkyaku Platform, Rukia, Renji, and Hanatarou running for their lives along the now collapsing path of reishi that Renji was doing his best to create with minimal spirit energy at his disposal.
“I see the exit!” Orihime cried excitedly, pointing over Ishida’s shoulder at the light pouring through the opening of the Garganta. Just as she did this, a surge of reiatsu more powerful than anything any of those present had ever thought possible roared through the opening of the Garganta, shattering both of the spiritual platforms in an instant.
“Shit!” Renji swore, watching the humans tumble to their deaths. Rukia and Hanatarou were just above them, both screaming after their friends. Renji braced both of his hands on his Zanpaktou, determined to at least get the other two out of here. “Bankai! Hihiou Zabimaru!”
Huge surges of bright red energy blasted off of the sword in his grip, the huge skeletal snake twisting forward and grabbing the two Shinigami above it on its head. Renji let a small smile grace his lips, knowing he would at least die with a sense of accomplishment. “Extend, Zabimaru. All the way.”
The giant bony sword snarled in response, releasing its joints and propelling Rukia and Hanatarou up to the opening of the Garganta. Renji’s reiatsu gave out just as they reached it, and Hihou Zabimaru faded from existence for the last time.
Hanatarou, sick and tired of feeling useless, grabbed Rukia roughly and leapt through the portal while carrying her. The pair of them flew through the portal and crashed onto hard ground for the first time in what felt like hours.
Rukia bolted to her feet, only to be shoved back down by the intense reiatsu that was enveloping the area. She saw the buildings that she recognized from her time in the World of the Living, and realized that they were in the real Karakura Town. “Why… why are we here?” she asked, still dazed from all of the happenings in Hueco Mundo and the Garganta. “Weren’t we supposed to go to the Soul Society?”
“W-we are in the Soul Society,” Hanatarou answered, sounding a little breathless from the weight of spirit energy pressing down on him. “T-they switched out Karakura Town with a replica s-so the Captains could fight freely.”
Rukia had barely processed this information when she felt a spiritual presence that was far too familiar to ignore. She whipped her head around, her eyes finding the one person she had left, seeing the bloodied face and robes, the matted neon orange hair, and the fierce black energy that swirled around his sword.
Ichigo struck out at the figure who could only be Sosuke Aizen, the world warping around the two of them and swallowing them up into a whirlpool of space and time. Just as the portal collapsed, Ichigo strained to turn his head, and his eyes met with Rukia’s, a small smile forming on his lips as he disappeared from the material world.
All she could do was stare blankly, her eyes not believing what they saw, her mind not processing the truth. It hit her all at once, and she pitched onto the ground, curling into the fetal position. “Nii-sama… Inoue… Sado… Ishida… Renji… Ichigo… no…” she whimpered, her nails digging into her scalp as her scream of despair pierced the heavens.
***
“Oi! Head Captain, you wanna call for some order in this madhouse?!” an irate voice screeched in his ears.
Toshirou snapped out of his musings, opening his eyes to the insanity before him. Someone had opened the door for Cameron, which was decidedly not smart, as the young Lieutenant was now arguing with Lieutenant Rotrum, both of them with their swords drawn and angry expressions adorning their faces. Rukia and Dre were having a shouting match, Zameric and Ryuu were off to one side, talking about something or another. Senny, the Squad 8 Captain, chatted fluidly with Golde, both of them chuckling at the antics of their fellow Shinigami. Jin had sat down and was trying to meditate, although how he could in the maelstrom around him was beyond the Head Captain’s understanding. Kida similarly amazed him, she had propped herself up on her elbows and was drawing in a sketchbook she had produced, occasionally rolling her eyes at the chaos that had enveloped the room. Luppi Kenpachi, the Captain of Squad 11, was in Toshirou’s face, screaming for him to call for some order with her long black hair flying everywhere like a tornado.
He shook his head, trying to snap himself out of his daze. “Thanks, Captain Luppi,” he muttered before lifting his gaze to the rest of the room. “Hey…”
BLAM!
This time the blast of noise from the door was so intense that the reverberation actually ruffled the hair of everyone standing less than five feet from the door. The massive doors were thrown open extremely fast, just missing blindsiding Rukia as the swung into the room. The bright sunlight pouring into the room silhouetted three figures. One was a black haired giant, carrying a bloodstained Captain’s haori over his right shoulder, the second a dark skinned man with a slightly singed haori of the same standing, the third white haired younger man who stared with a mixture of irritation and slight awe at the way the first of the trio had just opened the door.
Seijuro stepped into the room, a slight smirk on his face, basking in the surprise of his fellow officers before he spoke. “Hey. Sorry we’re la-“
“WHERE THE **** HAVE YOU BEEN?!”
Toshirou’s yell rivaled the sound of the door being blown open, several captain winced while Kida and Seijuro both clapped their hands over their sensitive ears. “YOU ARE TWO HOURS LATER THAN YOU SAID YOU’D BE, ARASHI!”
Jordan stepped forward, intending to interrupt, but the Head Captain cut him off before he could even open his mouth. “AND YOU, INFERNOU! YOU SHOULD HAVE BEEN HERE OVER AN HOUR AGO, AND YOU BOTH JUST WALTZ IN LIKE YOU OWN THE PLACE! ARRRGH!” He threw his hands up into the air in frustration, glaring at the now shell-shocked, not to mention somewhat frightened, Captains and Lieutenants. “Whatever… report your findings to us.”
“Sir,” Seijuro uttered, snapping to attention and moving to the center of the room, pulling a small black cube from his robes. “At the scene, I found that the dead Shinigami were my men. I sensed the killer’s reiatsu traces, and, after my battle with Jin Kariya…”
“What?!” Captain Yamada of Squad 4 yelped, interrupting him. “Ichigo Kurosaki killed Jin Kariya over 70 years ago!”
“Captain Yamada, please let me give my report before you start screaming at me,” Seijuro snapped, immediately regretting his tone when his saw the look on his fellow Captain’s face. “I know it’s going to be really hard to believe everything I say, but I’ll get around to explaining it all.”
“Anyway, as I was saying, after my battle with Kariya, Arc healed my injuries.” He gestured at the torn sleeve and the bloodied robes. “We headed back to the crime scene, and I sealed some of the killer’s reiatsu in my Zanpaktou. We made a stop by Division 12, signing out one of the reiatsu storage units and depositing it in there.” He held the cube out in front of him. “All of you, attune your senses please. I’m going to unseal the storage unit.”
A slight click echoed through the high-vaulted room, the greenish-black energy inside the cube dispersing finely into the air and drifting throughout the room. No one spoke, no one moved, a single shallow breath could have made as much noise as a jet taking off in the tranquil silence of the room. Then, the reiatsu dissolved into nothing, and everyone opened their eyes, all of them looking equally perturbed. “Ulquiorra Schiffer,” Ryuu noted grimly, his voice carrying a trace of true emotion for the first time. He had memorized the reiatsu patters of almost every enemy that the Shinigami had ever faced, so it was no surprise that he knew this one as well. “This is bad.”
“That’s half the bad news,” Seijuro offered, his expression even more grim. “Obviously, somehow the leader of these attackers has found some way to bring back the dead. That means that unless we can kill him, we’ll be fighting for all eternity.”
“Explaining why you fought Kariya and how Ulquiorra was there…” Hanatarou muttered. Seijuro turned, intending to ask him a question, but he held up a hand. “Don’t worry about your shoulder, Seijuro. It’s fine, Arc did a first-class job on it.” The offending Lieutenant blushed slightly at the praise, but quickly shook it off.
“Alright, I suppose that this meeting can be adjourned,” Hitsugaya said, shrugging, trying to hide his worry behind a casual facade. “You’re all dismissed.”
Seijuro nodded, stalking quickly over to Ryuu and clasping a hand on the pale man’s shoulder. “Ryuu, did you get the results back for the last series of tests?” he murmured quietly.
The 12th Squad Captain turned his cold eyes to Seijuro, his voice as flat as it ever was. “It’s not looking good, Captain Arashi. The previous test only showed a progression of 40%. The current status is 75%. If it keeps up, I’m sure I don’t need to warn you about what could potentially happen.”
Seijuro grimaced. “I’m well aware, Ryuu. Thanks.”
“H-Head Captain!” a panicked voice cried out from behind the main meeting area. All attention turned to the back, a young male Shinigimi rushing out proved to be the source of the commotion. “We’ve just received a Spirit Wave transmission, it’s apparently from whoever orchestrated the attacks last night!”
Hitsugaya froze for an instant, then sprang into action. “Pull it up on the main screen,” he ordered, then he turned to the door. “All of you, get back in here!”
The Captains and Lieutenants hurried back into the room, confused at the sudden recall. “Get ready,” Hitsugaya cautioned them. “We’re about to speak with the leader of our enemies face-to-face.
The shockwave that rippled through the meeting chamber dwarfed all others, and rather than becoming curious, those present became stoic, ready to face whatever would greet them.
The massive screen descended ceiling, and the messenger fiddled with a few dials before pressing the button to connect.
The hulking black Spirit Wave transmitter flickered to life, and the face of their enemy popped into view. The mask that adorned his face was the color of blood, his hair whiter than Toshriou’s, and his hands rested on a dark grey sword with a deep purple hilt. “Hello, Captains of the Shinigami,” he said, his voice sounding synthesized and mechanical. His eyes were also blacked out, preventing anyone from reading his gaze. “I am Akumu Zetsui, and I am your foe. ”
Hitsugaya stepped forward, introducing himself and addressing the masked man directly. “I am Head Captain Toshirou Hitsugaya. Why have you attempted to contact us?”
The man who had called himself Akumu Zetsui spread his hands, the sword somehow stayed perfectly still in spite of losing their only support. “I’m here to give you an ultimatum. Two very promising individuals are a part of your ranks. Either you turn them over to me, or we will destroy you and take them ourselves.”
“Out of the question,” Hitsugaya snapped, his response unsurprising. “If you want to take any Shinigami under my command, you’ll do it over my dead body.”
“Very well,” Akumu sighed, sounding falsely depressed over the refusal. “If that’s your wish, then I can arrange that.” Toshirou bristled, but Akumu held up a hand. “Are you sure you don’t even want to know their names?”
“Save it,” Toshirou shot back. “I don’t trust your words anyway.”
Though his face was not visible behind the mask, his jaw muscles shifted, signaling that he might have been grinning. “How foolish, Head Captain. However, if that is your response, our conversation ends here.” He turned his head slightly, tapping his chin as though trying to remember something. “Ah yes, before I go, there is someone here who wishes to speak with one of your Captains.”
“Who?” Toshirou demanded, but the view on the screen was shifting, turning to face another person, seated to the left of Akumu.
Seijuro lurched forward as soon as he saw the man, his teeth gnashing and his eyes wild. “You.” His voice was thunderous, the sheer force of the words actually sending a wave of reiatsu flowing through the chamber.
The man grinned feverishly, his cobalt blue eyes boring into Seijuro’s identically colored ones through his untidy black hair. “Hello brother.”
A nice little cliffhanger to keep you guys interested, as it could be a while until my next chapter.
Spoiler:- Author's Notes:
I've decided to create a section to waylay any possible conflicts. Please read this before you review, not after.
I took some slight liberties with everyone's personalities, but not to the extent that you're unrecognizable.
Dre's last name means flash or flair, which leans more twoards flashy or showy.
The flashback isn't from any particular person's point of view, but that's because the whole thing couldn't have been seen by one person. It was also a bit... well, jammed together. I really didn't like the way it turned out, but I really didn't have a choice without making the whole damn chapter into a flashback, and then we wouldn't get anywhere.
Akumu and my brother are OC's created by me. More on them later on.
Several things up in the air at this point, but they'll hopefully be explained in the next chapter or two.
More Kubo answers from an interview. Explains all the characters who do jack crap.
Q. How long does it takes for you to create a character?
A. It doesn't take time. When I do my daily activities characters idea one by one suddenly spring into my head. Then it's all about the timing when will I put them on top of the paper.
Q. Why Kyouraku didn't go Bankai? If he get serious he might defeat Aizen!
A. Shunsui's appeal is not to defeat Aizen. But I let the readers think that 「If he goes Bankai he might be stronger than Aizen」
Alright, that last answer was just stupid.
He knows when to put characters in the manga but he doesn't know how to use them effectively...
I mean seriously, some of the espada die too quickly...You know the ones...
And Kubo has just admitted that he is pretty much trolling the readers with the bankai thing...
Parent: Why is your answer sheet completely blank?
Child: My appeal is not to pass the test. But I let the teacher think that if I had answered, I might pass the test.
What the hell man?
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well i didn't come through with the promised chapter. but whatever.
Eon: good story. i can see this going to a very good place. and it didn't sound as jammed together as you made it seem.
well that's all i got to say. taking my break now. expect me back with a new chapter in 7-10.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Spoiler:- Chapter 2: The Stuff of Nightmares and Fanfiction:
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Every Captain present in the room jumped at the sudden blast of noise from the door. I just had to open my big mouth. Days like these are the stuff that nightmares and Fanfiction are made of.
Ah, yes, fanfiction. Made of damn scary stuff.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
“Simply that his defenses are far stronger than anyone else’s, which is something I assumed you already knew. Apparently, I need to think less of you.” Zameric scowled, as did several others, before realizing he was being sarcastic and letting it go. Ryuu half smiled, pulling a Rubix Cube out of his sleeve and fiddling with it absentmindedly.
Definitely got my personality on the dot, there.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
As Squad 2 Captain, he was dressed in the typical Onmitsukidou garb, all black sans the Captain’s Robe, with a black mask and bandana, leaving only his emerald green eyes visible. His sword was strapped under his right armpit, pointing down with the hilt sinking just below his waist. The odd position seemed akward to most people, but it allowed him to draw his sword faster than the blink of an eye from a completely neutral stance.
That's a DAMN COOL outfit!
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Golde, the Squad 10 Captain, sighed with relief. “Good then, I think we can trust those two to back him up.” His seven foot tall frame towered over the majority of the room, to say nothing of his spiky golden hair, and his cloudy grey eyes always seemed to crackle with hidden intensity, no matter how at ease he seemed on the outside.
Ah, so with Hitsugaya being the Head Captain, Golde becomes the Captain of the 10th Squad, taking Rotrum's place since he's now Hitsugaya's Lieutenant.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Her violet eyes were so bleak and frozen that if she didn’t move, it seemed like she was dead.
She is dead, Hitsugaya reminded himself grimly, ignoring the Captains arguing around him. At least on the inside. Seventy years ago, her entire life came crashing down around her ears in a single day…
Ah, this'll be interesting...
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Captain Byakuya Kuchki dropped to his knees, his broken Zanpaktou clattering in pieces to the sand beneath him. The former Cero Espada Yammy Rialgo, now the Decima once again, also dropped to the ground only feet from him. Turning the monstrous Arrancar back to his sealed form had cost the lives of both Kurotsuchi Mayuri and Kenpachi Zaraki. The trick had been to carve the number into his shoulder, ensuring that he was locked into his unreleased state, but doing so had been nigh impossible when faced with his seemingly limitless reserves of power.
Hmm, that definitely seems like something that Mayuri would do, and that would work. I'm also glad that they both died (even if they are 2 of my favourite Captains D8) and more people need to die in Bleach >.>
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Rukia dropped her gaze to the ground, looking ashamed. “The ‘Hogyoku’ we tried to destroy was a trap. It sucked out all of Sado’s and Inoue’s powers.”
Byakuya was immediately incensed; they had been played for fools. “Blast…” he muttered angrily. “How did I not see through such an obvious ploy?”
Renji, his Lieutenant, stepped forward with his hand over his heart. “It’s my fault, Captain,” he said sadly. “I should have known better when I saw that it was exactly where it had been when Aizen had shown it to Inoue.”
Oh, wow, a trap. That is such a piss take that it.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
“Grind, Pantera!”
Woo! Grimmjow!
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Grimmjow’s head turned a fraction, but it was enough so that the conflicted pain in his blue eyes was clearly visible. “Because I owe Ichigo for saving my life.”
I can see Grimmjow saying that. Though doesn't he say Kurosaki?
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Byakuya nodded, understanding the feelings Grimmjow was dealing with. “Very well. One other question. What happened to Lieutenant Kusajishi?”
“The brat?” Grimmjow asked, receiving another nod in return. “She’s dead. That ******* Tesla got to her before I could finish him off.”
Aww, Yachiru died? D8. What about Nel? She was with Yachiru, right?
Originally Posted by Eon Master
A red burst of energy shot past them before Byakuya could respond, flying towards Hanatarou. He ducked into the fetal position, but before the blast could hit, Isane jumped in front of it and took the Cero head-on, half of her body being blown off in the process.
That was DAMN COOL.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Byakuya sighed and hurled himself into the air, taking the brunt of the Cero on his body without a moment of hesitation. The burning wave of power washed over him, and he felt no pain, but relief. As his consciousness began to fade, he turned his eyes to meet his sisters’. She was horrified; her expression looked like a shattered painting. His eyes closed slowly, but not before he let the last word cross his lips.
“Go.”
D8 Byakuya~
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Renji, the reliable red pineapple head, grabbed Rukia’s arm and bolted into the Garganta with the others. Yammy, still discontented that he hadn’t managed to hit his intended targets, fired another blood red Cero at the retreating figures, managing to hit Nemu just as the portal closed.
I'm not sure it was appropriate to put pineapple head a sentence before Nemu died.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
The three remaining Shinigami and three humans rushed along inside the Garganta, Inoue and Chad riding on Uryuu’s Hirenkyaku Platform, Rukia, Renji, and Hanatarou running for their lives along the now collapsing path of reishi that Renji was doing his best to create with minimal spirit energy at his disposal.
“I see the exit!” Orihime cried excitedly, pointing over Ishida’s shoulder at the light pouring through the opening of the Garganta. Just as she did this, a surge of reiatsu more powerful than anything any of those present had ever thought possible roared through the opening of the Garganta, shattering both of the spiritual platforms in an instant.
“Shit!” Renji swore, watching the humans tumble to their deaths. Rukia and Hanatarou were just above them, both screaming after their friends. Renji braced both of his hands on his Zanpaktou, determined to at least get the other two out of here. “Bankai! Hihiou Zabimaru!”
Huge surges of bright red energy blasted off of the sword in his grip, the huge skeletal snake twisting forward and grabbing the two Shinigami above it on its head. Renji let a small smile grace his lips, knowing he would at least die with a sense of accomplishment. “Extend, Zabimaru. All the way.”
The giant bony sword snarled in response, releasing its joints and propelling Rukia and Hanatarou up to the opening of the Garganta. Renji’s reiatsu gave out just as they reached it, and Hihou Zabimaru faded from existence for the last time.
Hanatarou, sick and tired of feeling useless, grabbed Rukia roughly and leapt through the portal while carrying her. The pair of them flew through the portal and crashed onto hard ground for the first time in what felt like hours.
Just... wow. Too many people died now, I think.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Ichigo struck out at the figure who could only be Sosuke Aizen, the world warping around the two of them and swallowing them up into a whirlpool of space and time. Just as the portal collapsed, Ichigo strained to turn his head, and his eyes met with Rukia’s, a small smile forming on his lips as he disappeared from the material world.
Well, at least if Ichigo killed Aizen, at least he died too.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Toshirou snapped out of his musings, opening his eyes to the insanity before him. Someone had opened the door for Cameron, which was decidedly not smart, as the young Lieutenant was now arguing with Lieutenant Rotrum, both of them with their swords drawn and angry expressions adorning their faces. Rukia and Dre were having a shouting match, Zameric and Ryuu were off to one side, talking about something or another. Senny, the Squad 8 Captain, chatted fluidly with Golde, both of them chuckling at the antics of their fellow Shinigami. Jin had sat down and was trying to meditate, although how he could in the maelstrom around him was beyond the Head Captain’s understanding. Kida similarly amazed him, she had propped herself up on her elbows and was drawing in a sketchbook she had produced, occasionally rolling her eyes at the chaos that had enveloped the room. Luppi Kenpachi, the Captain of Squad 11, was in Toshirou’s face, screaming for him to call for some order with her long black hair flying everywhere like a tornado.
That definitely seems fitting for what we'd do... Though I'd like to think we'd be more organised. Also, Luppi Kenpachi. Awesome name.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Seijuro stepped into the room, a slight smirk on his face, basking in the surprise of his fellow officers before he spoke. “Hey. Sorry we’re la-“
“WHERE THE **** HAVE YOU BEEN?!”
Toshirou’s yell rivaled the sound of the door being blown open, several captain winced while Kida and Seijuro both clapped their hands over their sensitive ears. “YOU ARE TWO HOURS LATER THAN YOU SAID YOU’D BE, ARASHI!”
Jordan stepped forward, intending to interrupt, but the Head Captain cut him off before he could even open his mouth. “AND YOU, INFERNOU! YOU SHOULD HAVE BEEN HERE OVER AN HOUR AGO, AND YOU BOTH JUST WALTZ IN LIKE YOU OWN THE PLACE! ARRRGH!” He threw his hands up into the air in frustration, glaring at the now shell-shocked, not to mention somewhat frightened, Captains and Lieutenants. “Whatever… report your findings to us.”
Ah, yes, a frustrated Hitsugaya is always fun to watch.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
“Ulquiorra Schiffer,” Ryuu noted grimly, his voice carrying a trace of true emotion for the first time. He had memorized the reiatsu patters of almost every enemy that the Shinigami had ever faced, so it was no surprise that he knew this one as well. “This is bad.”
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Seijuro nodded, stalking quickly over to Ryuu and clasping a hand on the pale man’s shoulder. “Ryuu, did you get the results back for the last series of tests?” he murmured quietly.
The 12th Squad Captain turned his cold eyes to Seijuro, his voice as flat as it ever was. “It’s not looking good, Captain Arashi. The previous test only showed a progression of 40%. The current status is 75%. If it keeps up, I’m sure I don’t need to warn you about what could potentially happen.”
Seijuro grimaced. “I’m well aware, Ryuu. Thanks.”
Were these tests mentioned in the first chapter? I don't remember >.>
Originally Posted by Eon Master
“We’ve just received a Spirit Wave transmission, it’s apparently from whoever orchestrated the attacks last night!”
Hitsugaya froze for an instant, then sprang into action. “Pull it up on the main screen,” he ordered, then he turned to the door. “All of you, get back in here!”
The Captains and Lieutenants hurried back into the room, confused at the sudden recall. “Get ready,” Hitsugaya cautioned them. “We’re about to speak with the leader of our enemies face-to-face.
This... idk, it seems really weird. You send a Spirit Wave Transmission to talk with your enemies?
Originally Posted by Eon Master
The hulking black Spirit Wave transmitter flickered to life, and the face of their enemy popped into view. The mask that adorned his face was the color of blood, his hair whiter than Toshriou’s, and his hands rested on a dark grey sword with a deep purple hilt. “Hello, Captains of the Shinigami,” he said, his voice sounding synthesized and mechanical. His eyes were also blacked out, preventing anyone from reading his gaze. “I am Akumu Zetsui, and I am your foe. ”
8O.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
“I’m here to give you an ultimatum. Two very promising individuals are a part of your ranks. Either you turn them over to me, or we will destroy you and take them ourselves.”
“Out of the question,” Hitsugaya snapped, his response unsurprising. “If you want to take any Shinigami under my command, you’ll do it over my dead body.”
“Very well,” Akumu sighed, sounding falsely depressed over the refusal. “If that’s your wish, then I can arrange that.” Toshirou bristled, but Akumu held up a hand. “Are you sure you don’t even want to know their names?”
“Save it,” Toshirou shot back. “I don’t trust your words anyway.”
Damn it, I wanted to know who it was.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
The man grinned feverishly, his cobalt blue eyes boring into Seijuro’s identically colored ones through his untidy black hair. “Hello brother.”
Idk, I'm not very surprised that the man is Seijuro's brother. It seemed predictable with Seijuro's reaction.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
“A killer on the loose with Captain-class reiatsu, an investigation that hasn’t even gotten any information yet, two Captains late to the emergency Captain’s Meeting, and it’s not even noon yet,” he grumbled heatedly. “I can’t see how this day can possibly get worse.”
WHAM!
Hahah. It's that golden rule. When you say what else could go wrong, you'll find out what else can go wrong.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Ryuu half smiled, pulling a Rubix Cube out of his sleeve and fiddling with it absentmindedly.
lol. I think it'd be great if you can include him muttering formula to solve the Rubik, then someone (like Zam) interrupting and saying, "What, you'd need a formula for THAT? Aren't you the 12th Squad Captain?" then ILPy spouting a whole lot of stuff on Rubik like (quoting Wiki XD) Spoiler:
The original (3×3×3) Rubik's Cube has eight corners and twelve edges. There are 8! (40,320) ways to arrange the corner cubes. Seven can be oriented independently, and the orientation of the eighth depends on the preceding seven, giving 37 (2,187) possibilities. There are 12!/2 (239,500,800) ways to arrange the edges, since an odd permutation of the corners implies an odd permutation of the edges as well. Eleven edges can be flipped independently, with the flip of the twelfth depending on the preceding ones, giving 211 (2,048) possibilities.[19]
There are exactly 43,252,003,274,489,856,000 permutations, which is approximately forty-three quintillion. The puzzle is often advertised as having only "billions" of positions, as the larger numbers could be regarded as incomprehensible to many. To put this into perspective, if every permutation of a 57-millimeter Rubik's Cube were lined up end to end, it would stretch out approximately 261 light years.
Then the person who started that just gaping.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
“The brat?” Grimmjow asked, receiving another nod in return. “She’s dead. That ******* Tesla got to her before I could finish him off.”
Wait.. Didn't Tesla died when Kenpachi slashed him? o.o
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Kida similarly amazed him, she had propped herself up on her elbows and was drawing in a sketchbook she had produced, occasionally rolling her eyes at the chaos that had enveloped the room.
That was the most amusing reaction in the room. XD
Originally Posted by Eon Master
“Very well,” Akumu sighed, sounding falsely depressed over the refusal. “If that’s your wish, then I can arrange that.” Toshirou bristled, but Akumu held up a hand. “Are you sure you don’t even want to know their names?”
“Save it,” Toshirou shot back. “I don’t trust your words anyway.”
I wonder who could they be.....
idk, the flashback looks fine as it is.
Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter
He knows when to put characters in the manga but he doesn't know how to use them effectively...
I mean seriously, some of the espada die too quickly...You know the ones...
And Kubo has just admitted that he is pretty much trolling the readers with the bankai thing...
Parent: Why is your answer sheet completely blank?
Child: My appeal is not to pass the test. But I let the teacher think that if I had answered, I might pass the test.
What the hell man?
Yeah.. I think we all agreed that he's a troll anyway. This just confirmed it. Maybe he'll have a BIG twist in the end, who knows..
Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)
I'm not sure it was appropriate to put pineapple head a sentence before Nemu died.
You're right it wasn't. And I just noticed Nemu died after that. Totally missed the last part of the sentence. o.o
Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)
Just... wow. Too many people died now, I think.
Well, it was mentioned in the prologue wasn't it? o.o That the only remaining survivors are Rukia, Hanataro and Hitsugaya?
Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)
Damn it, I wanted to know who it was.
Ditto.
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Ya know, I'd normally wait to reply to your review, but hell, at this rate, I'm not going to be getting any others for a few days.
Ah, yes, fanfiction. Made of damn scary stuff.
Scariest stuff on the planet, man. Have you ever tried to do a search on FF.net for either Grimmjow or Ichigo? *shudders* Never again.
Definitely got my personality on the dot, there.
Excellent. Then I'm right on target for my next chapter Which I've been writing all day and I expect to have up sometime this week >.>
That's a DAMN COOL outfit!
I literally fell out of my chair and started rolling on the floor laughing.
Ah, so with Hitsugaya being the Head Captain, Golde becomes the Captain of the 10th Squad, taking Rotrum's place since he's now Hitsugaya's Lieutenant.
Exactly.
Ah, this'll be interesting...
Usually starts out with a good hook.
Hmm, that definitely seems like something that Mayuri would do, and that would work. I'm also glad that they both died (even if they are 2 of my favourite Captains D8) and more people need to die in Bleach >.>
Yeah, it's more or less the first thing that made any semblance of sense.
Oh, wow, a trap. That is such a piss take that it.
Yeah, Aizen would do something sneaky like that.
Woo! Grimmjow!
*throws a party and invites the Bleach cast*
I can see Grimmjow saying that. Though doesn't he say Kurosaki?
Yeah. He alternates is the dubbs, so I just put it. Meh, w/e.
Aww, Yachiru died? D8. What about Nel? She was with Yachiru, right?
Nel is fine... well, I won't say fine, but she's not dead.
That was DAMN COOL.
*goes on an ego trip* Oh wait, that's Duac's job...
D8 Byakuya~
:'''(
I'm not sure it was appropriate to put pineapple head a sentence before Nemu died.
Highly innapropriate, but I'd been working for about four hours before I tried revising, so cut me some slack.
Just... wow. Too many people died now, I think.
I actually agree with you. That's what I meant when I said that it was jammed together. But, such is writing when you have a limited ammount of space and time. Unlike you >.>
Well, at least if Ichigo killed Aizen, at least he died too.
Heh.
That definitely seems fitting for what we'd do... Though I'd like to think we'd be more organised. Also, Luppi Kenpachi. Awesome name.
Thought so. And thanks, but since she's the 11th Squad Captain, that had to be her name, lol.
I don't think so >.>
Judging from what I've seen, never mind what I've heard, without Golde around, crazy crap happens. So, it makes sense to make us all a bunch of misfits under Hitsugaya's command when he's not paying attention.
Ah, yes, a frustrated Hitsugaya is always fun to watch.
Gotta love it when Shirou-chan starts throwing a temper tantrum.
Were these tests mentioned in the first chapter? I don't remember >.>
No, but they're about something very important to the plot that will be revealed next chapter.
This... idk, it seems really weird. You send a Spirit Wave Transmission to talk with your enemies?
No, you use it to send a series of demands, and if they don't agree, declare war.
8O.
So, definitely epic and creepy enough.
Damn it, I wanted to know who it was.
You'll find out in the next chapter anyway...
Idk, I'm not very surprised that the man is Seijuro's brother. It seemed predictable with Seijuro's reaction.
How? Out of all the people it could be, why would you instantly jump to the conclusion it was his brother? That doesn't make sense to me.
Originally Posted by arceus03
Hahah. It's that golden rule. When you say what else could go wrong, you'll find out what else can go wrong.
Bingo, lol.
lol. I think it'd be great if you can include him muttering formula to solve the Rubik, then someone (like Zam) interrupting and saying, "What, you'd need a formula for THAT? Aren't you the 12th Squad Captain?" then ILPy spouting a whole lot of stuff on Rubik like (quoting Wiki XD) Spoiler:
The original (3×3×3) Rubik's Cube has eight corners and twelve edges. There are 8! (40,320) ways to arrange the corner cubes. Seven can be oriented independently, and the orientation of the eighth depends on the preceding seven, giving 37 (2,187) possibilities. There are 12!/2 (239,500,800) ways to arrange the edges, since an odd permutation of the corners implies an odd permutation of the edges as well. Eleven edges can be flipped independently, with the flip of the twelfth depending on the preceding ones, giving 211 (2,048) possibilities.[19]
There are exactly 43,252,003,274,489,856,000 permutations, which is approximately forty-three quintillion. The puzzle is often advertised as having only "billions" of positions, as the larger numbers could be regarded as incomprehensible to many. To put this into perspective, if every permutation of a 57-millimeter Rubik's Cube were lined up end to end, it would stretch out approximately 261 light years.
Then the person who started that just gaping.
After reading all of that, all I could do was stand there gaping XD
Wait.. Didn't Tesla died when Kenpachi slashed him? o.o
No, in the chapter after Nnoitra died, there was a scene where he was crying. Idk about the anime, though.
That was the most amusing reaction in the room. XD
Kida always bring the laughs. And the artwork. And sometimes the firey, lightning-y, windy, watery, and nature-y death. By a paintbrush. o.o
I wonder who could they be.....
Next chapter.
idk, the flashback looks fine as it is.
Mehh, see my responses to ILP's review.
Yeah.. I think we all agreed that he's a troll anyway. This just confirmed it. Maybe he'll have a BIG twist in the end, who knows..
It had better blow Harry Potter out of the water if he wants to save his trolling ass >.>
You're right it wasn't. And I just noticed Nemu died after that. Totally missed the last part of the sentence. o.o
See my response to ILP on this.
Well, it was mentioned in the prologue wasn't it? o.o That the only remaining survivors are Rukia, Hanataro and Hitsugaya?
Yep~
POST YOUR NEXT CHAPTER, ARC! PLEASE! IMMA firin mah lazor BEGGIN' YA!
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@ILP: Don't worry, it'll be governed by scientific principles. It's a tommy gun, for cryin' out loud! :P Oh, and those who say it's based of Starrk's Los Lobos, you're wrong. I got the idea from Scarface. Is'nt his Los Lobos a pair shotguns?
@kurusai: Oh, it will be! It's ruled by scientific principles! Expect alot of physical and possible chemical principles.
@Golde: Congrats on the new computer! My laptop needs a little servicing. It's hinges are a little loose.
Originally Posted by arceus03
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Unless you want to be pretty picky about it.
*goes on an ego trip* 