ANYWAY. Just got around to watching the latest 2 episodes of anime.
Spoiler:
And Shinji's grin while rotating his Sakanade was really cool. XD It's a wonder that he manages to keep his tie intact while battling, though. XP well, the tie is made of a substance that has no name but contains asbestos for flame retardance, sekiseki for spiritual retardance and a mixture of the 10 hardest substances one earth. all of this is mixed with cloth to create the most badass tie ever.
Yamamoto next week, right? should be.
Happy Birthday, Bleach Club 2. You have survived one full year of very odd incidents.
And in fic related news: the epilouge chapter has been canceled. i typed it up, then realized it wasn't very fitting. so since i had a week off last week, the next arc will begin today. this week's chapter will start with a short epilouge to lead into the next arc.
NOTICE: There i won't be active at all next week. i will be out of town Monday-Thursday and will be spending Friday-Sunday finishing all the school work i'll miss.
so yeah.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
For the first anniversary, I'll write something, since my next chapter is no where near done; I'll improvise.
Spoiler:- Happy birthday, Bleach Club Jr.~!:
Kida: Who's ready to throw a surprise party?
Kusa: Urgh...I...hate you....
Kida: It's only Two AM, and you know how early Golde-Sama wakes up, if we start any later then three, he's going to get suspicious.
Kusa: Thre..Got it..*Falls Asleep*
Kida: Frying Pan, STAT!
VB: I love this job~! *Smacks Kusari with the frying pan*
Kusa: OWWW! What was that for!
VB: We have to work on the Surprise Birthday party for Golde-Soutaichou.
Rotrum: How old is he anyways..
MC: Dunno, he was Captain Commander before I was even a trainee
Rotrum: ...So we're talking atleast two thousand years?
MC: I'M NOT THAT OLD! *Sly Smirk* Besides, Kida's the oldest captain other than Golde.
Flash Step: We're getting no where...
Kida: Frying Pan.
VB: Yay! *Hits MC*
MC: Why me...
VB: You were the closest one.
Senny: Where's Arceus?
Jin: Making the cake, it has to be big enough to fit all the candles.
VB: So we're not going to be seeing Arc until the party's already started?
Kida: We can discuess hias age later! Get to work. Blue, Frying Pan!
VB: *Hits Kusari with the frying pan*
Kusa: I wasnt' asleep!
VB: Kida didn't specify.
Meric: You guys are gonna wake Golde up before we even stasrt the preparations.
ILP: Eh? Where is Dauc-Sama?
Jin: He's working on the presents and such. Or he's sleeping.
Kida:I have a monitor! *Presses a button and two screens appear from nowhere, one showing Arc Sleeping in the kitchen and the other showing Dauc sleeping in his lab.*...FRYING PAN!
VB: Are you kidding me?
Kida: *Deathglare*
VB: Yikes *moments later. you can see him on the screens. smacking thme and returning in less then a minute*
ILP: Desperation doth strengthen that which one can do.
VB: ..What?
ILP: I don't know, my mind's a cluttered mess without sleep...
Kida: It's already 2:20! Get to work! Jin, you will do progress reports! I'm, of course, the leader. Arceus is making the cake and other desserts. MC, you will go buy all the decorations on your own budget; If you're too cheap I will lock you in a room with Blue and a chainsaw. Flashstep, you're getting all the alcohol and other drinks. Eon, your job is to prepare the entertainment. Senny, you need to decorate the room. Meric, you're going to help with entertainment. Rotrum, you're going to help decorate. ILP, you're jo bis to finda way to make the party room gigantic on the inside and normal sized on the outside. Dac is making presents. Kusari, you're gonig to be a floater, everyone is going to make sure you do work.
Everyone: Got it.
Kida:..What are you saying Got it for! GO GO GO!
-At Five o'clock-
Kida: Jin, what's progress like?
Jin: Well...
-Flashback, Arceus-
Jin: Arceus, how's it going?
Arceus: Great, how do you like my food?
Jin: Uhh...*Looks at the cookies, sextuple layer Cookie Cake, Cookies and cream ice cream, Cookie donuts, Cookie Cupcakes, and Cookie brownies* Don't you need something that ISN'T cookies?
Arc: Why? what's better than cookies?
Kusa: Cookies that I didn't have to bake with my own fire?
Jin:Uhh...I gotta go...Get mroe variety...
-End-
Kida:..What the hell is a Cookie donut!?
Jin: Uhh..You don't wanna know..
Kida: *Sigh* What else?
-Flashback Flash Step-
JIn: How's it going here?
FS: Perfect, I'mn almost done!
Jin: Already?
FS: Yeah! It was easy. Look!
Jin Hmm...Hipnotiq, Jager, Jose Cuervo, Jim Beam, Captian Morgan, Jack Daniels, Patron, Tequila Rose, Skyy Vodka, Crown Royal, Southern Comfort, Aftershock, Watermelon Pucker, Segram's 7, Chambord, Kahula, Peach Schnapps, Triple Sec, Butterscotch Schnapps, Bacardi Silver...
FS: No, there's more, I'm sure of it
Jin:...Is there anything that ISN'T alcoholic.
FS: Not...alco...holic?
Kusari: *Drunk* Noooooope *hic*
Jin:...*Sighs, leaves*
-end-
Kida: Please tell me you're kidding me...
Jin: Nope.
Kida:...Keep going, I suppose...
-Flashback, MC-
Jin: MC..you're haven't even started!?
MC: Well, i haveto budgert my money carefully, I need to count how much I have and how much I'll need to spend an-
Jin: You're broke, aren't you?
MC: As broken as your vase
Jin: Excuse me?
MC: Nevermind.
-end-
Kida:...So we have no money for decorations?
Jin: Oh, he has money now...
-enter previous flashback-
Jin: Fine here's the money
MC: What's the catch...
Jin: You need to take Minny with you
MC: The ball of hyperness?
MIn: Hey! I can hear you *Tackles MC*
Jin *Stifling a laugh* Money well spent...
Kusa: *Hic* yup!
-end-
Kida: Evil...
Jin: I got bored. And would you rather have her around with nothing to do?
Kida: Good point. Moving on?
*Flashback-Eon and Meric*
Jin: How's it go-WHAT HAPPENED HERE!?
*Eon is literally swimming in CDs and records for virtually every song made in the last fourty or so years. Meric is surrounded by clowns, dressed up figures, movies, and other forms of entertainment all in the CD-pool*
Eon: We..wanted to have a fair and balanced viewing of all the options
Meric:..And Kida said she'd pay.
Kusa: AIR! *Falling deeper into the pool
-end-
Kida: *headdesk*
Jin: It gets better
-Flashback again-
Hannah Montana: Where's my wig!
Performer from another Country: *Smacks Hannah and says equivalent to "How dare you"*
Justin Bieber: Drowning..too short...
random little girl who had been whisked along with all the performers: NOOO *Dives into CD Pool*
Scandal: *Are trying to play Shoujo S because they were in a concert when they were whisked away-interrupted by loud annoying bagpipes, among other things*
Simple Plan: Is everybody going Crazy?
Ms. Piggy Puppet: How dare you call me crazy! *proceeds to yell at and interrupt Simple Plan*
Random person: SHUT UP I'm trying to watch a movie!
The Beetles: (In a large yellow submarine underneath the CD Pool) We all live in a-
Linkin' Park: But in the end, It doesn't even matter~
Beethoven: What is this thing *Poking The synthesizer used by Owl City*
Owl City: -A parachute, at a church rummage sale, and a mean sewing machine
Beethoven: Interesting...
-end-
Kida: Okay, I get it, alot of performers and none of them are sane, could oyu please just move on!
Jin: Got it.
-Flashback: Rotrum, Senny, and ILP-
Jin: Okay how it that WHAT THE!
*Party Room is currently, on the inside, the size of the entire city of Baltimore*
ILP: I'm working on it! Bend to my will! *Insert future Mid-class release name* -Now holds a long Tsurugi*
Jin: What?
ILP: This tsurugi transcends time and space, it can be as long as I can see and cut that which is not yet there or has left there.
Jin: I meant the fact that you're upside down and you're...A penguin.
ILP Don't worry, It's prefectly safe.
Jin: Yes, but now you're a perfectly safe penguin and your colleague is rapidly running out of limbs.
Rotrum: No, I've got them back now, although I admit they're a bit longer then I'd usually like them...
(If you can tell where the above two lines came from I'll give you a bigger slice of Golde's Birthday cake)
Senny: I feel like an infinite number of monkeys..
ILP: Oh hush, *Makes everything normal nad looks about himself rapidld as the roomed begins to shrink* Everything is fine.
Jin: Suuure. And decorations?
ILP: we need to fix the size first, no?
Senny: Go faaaaster! I can't do anything until you fix the room! Kida wants us to do this!
-end-
Kida: This is not gonig well..How are the presents?
Jin: Well...
-Flashback: Dac-
Jin: How are the presents coming along?
Dac: Great, I've finished the exploding disks, the bioweapon, the transmutation device, the teleportation device, and the orichalconium armor.
Jin: Do yo have anything that isn't...violent?
Dac: Oh, I made him a mirror that shows you at your best no matter how old you are.
Jin: Of..course...
Dac: And I created the Hall oF Gratuitous Praise, where holograms will always compliment you whenver you go inside.
Jin: ....*Leaves*
Dac: I'm not done yeet!
-end-
Kida:....So is anything, anywhere ready?
Jin:...Nope.
Kida:...Let's just hope it all gets finished in the next Hour...
Jin: Yes..
-Six o'clock AM.-
Kida: Quickly, we have no time. how old is he? We need to know if we want to put the candles on the cake!
Arceus: *Placing a 100 layer cake carefully on the main table of the room. Ten layers of Vanilla, Ten of Chocolate, Twenty of various Ice Cream Cakes, Ten more layers of Lava cakes, Ten layers of Confetti cake, Ten layers of fruit cake, and thirty layers of cookie cake*
Jin:...How old did you expect him to be?
Arceus:I don't know, but I should be able to fit about 500 thousand candles on this cake. Since I put four layers of frosting over it, they'll fit sideways.
VB: CAKE!!! *Throws frying pan backwards and jumps at the cake*
Kusa: *Gets hit by frying pan* I can't get ANY sleep, can I!?
Rotrum: Sigh *Pins VB to the wall with a dagger*
MC: I bought One Million candles, how many of them are we gonna need?
Jin: You spent my money on candles?
Min: It was a two thousand for one sale
Jin:...How the...
Min: Walmart is trying to get more customers.
Kusa: I can't tell if my head hurts from the hangover, ror from the frying pan...
Flash: You have no alcohol tolerance
Kusa:..You made me sample everything!
Flash: So?
Kida: Someone figure out his age!
Min: A gazillion!
ILP: That isn't possible, our part of the universe is only aged at abou-
MC: No one cares..
ILP: I assure you, many people care abou-
Flash: Loosen up, drink.
ILP: Stop interrupti-
Kida: AGE, NOOW!
Meric: Just stick all the candles that fit onto the cake and move on.
Eon: Don't old people get crotchety when you get their age wrong?
Arc: Well this is going quite well.
ILP: What are you talking about?
Arc: There hasn't been any physical violence yet.
ILP: TRue...
Kida:...We have 10 minutes to put the candles on!
Meric: *Dumps Candles onto Cake* There, we're done. Moving on.
Arc: MY CAKE!
Meric:...*Runs*
Arc: *Chases*
Kida: *Headdesk*
Sen: You're gonna hurt your head like tha-*Gets hit by a Frying Pan*
-6:30 AM-
The bells chimed that always chimed at this time, and Golde woke up.
Golde: *Tries to open eyes* ..everything is black. *blinks* Still black...*Blinks again* Why does the darkness refuse to leave.
Jin: *Has just finished tying the cloth in front of Golde's face. Shunpoes away with GOlde*
Golde: *Rips off the cloth as they go in frotn of the party-building and Jin is already gone* Huh? *Goes inside*
The lights are out.
Everyone except Kusa: Surprise!
Golde:...My birthday was yesterday
VB: *still stuck to the wall* So does that mean you're surprised? *Hit by UFFP, Unidentified Flying Frying Pan*
Golde: And why are there a million candles on that cake. And why is this room almost as large as the Sereitei?
Meric: *Beaten up* Because we're celebrating you're millionth? *Frying pan seems to bounce off of VB and hit Meric*
ILP: Because Space-Time is harder to play with than you think?
Golde: And why is the building covered in ice?
Rotrum: MC blew all the money off on gambling and Candles.
Golde:....*Promptly faints*
Kida:...*Headdesk* Flash...
Flash: HmM?
Kida: Make me a mixed drink, make it strong..
Flash: Got it...*Begins pouring different drinks together*
Arc: *HOlding electric eels inside floating water* CLEAR! *Brings the eel-water onto Golde*
Golde: *Still knocked out*
Arc: I've done all I could do..
Eon: Will he be alright?
Arc We'll know in the morning.
Meric: It is the morning.
Arc: Next morning then?
Kida: *Half drunk* Juuust greaaat. TWO days late...
Kusari: *Asleep*
VB: *Secretly goes over and tries some of the frosting*
Arc: *Yawns, "Accidentally" sends the electric eels at VB*
Eon: So...What now?
Flash: We Drink!
Senny: Somehow I knew you would say that..
Gible: Can I come out yet?
Arc: It doesnt' matter, Golde's knocked out.
Gible: Well, there goes my guest appearance.
Dac: *Appears* Hello! I come bearing gifts!
Everyone who hasn't passed out: Yay!
Dac: For Golde!
Everyone eho hasn't passed out: Aww...
Dac; *Puts a small mechine on the floor.*
Arc: what's thaT?
Dac: Arceus, my dear friend, this is a candy extruder. Watch. *Presses a button and aims at an emptycorner of the room. Candy shoots out of the pocketsized machine-atleast 100 pounds of random candy*
Kusa: *Hit by all the candy, having hid to sleep* OWW
Dac: Woops...
Golde: *Opens one eye*...*Closes eye*
~End~
To be continued, since I'm being interrupted.
EDIT: It's finished now. Finished the 6:00 and 6:30 segments, Dauc's Present making, and I gave Senny a couple lines now. Go read it again!
Last edited by rotrum; 24th October 2010 at 4:06 PM.
Originally Posted by Northern Lights
I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>
Here is the long awaited fourth chapter of my fanfic. sorry xD
I really hope you enjoy it. I know I enjoyed writing it.
I'm pretty sure more villains are going to be introduced next chapter.
Spoiler:- Chapter 4:
When they returned to Soul Society, Kazuhiro and his reconnaissance team reported to the Patrol Corps Commander, Squad 2 Lieutenant Hayao Akamori. They recalled their experience in Hueco Mundo while scouting the ruins of Las Noches, and looking for their missing squad member, Hideki. Lieutenant Akamori was troubled by this information and personally escorted the group to captain of Squad 2, Jin Karyudo.
After hearing the story, the captain commended Kazuhiro on his leadership during the situation. Captain Karyudo then ordered his lieutenant to go look for Hideki in the ruins and gather any intelligence he could. The Soul Reapers were told to get checked out at the coordinated relief station in Squad 4’s barracks. After they left, Jin headed over to speak with Head-Captain Golde about what had transpired in Hueco Mundo.
“Please, come in Jin. I’m sorry, but I’m all out of the Chocolate Shurikens you like,” the Head-Captain welcomed Jin.
“Thank you for your consideration, but that is not what I am here for, Head-Captain.”
“What did you need my ninja friend?”
“While on a reconnaissance mission of the Las Noches ruins, a Patrol Corps squad had an unexpected encounter. They found dozens of Gillian class Menos roaming around the inner courtyard. But when they were supposed to return back to the rendezvous point, one of them was missing.”
“Are they ok?”
“We have not determined that yet. The squad was attacked by a large group of Gillians before they could search for the missing member. That’s when they returned to Soul Society. But I recently sent my lieutenant to the ruins in an attempt to locate him.”
“Hmm, well I hope the search goes well. But why have you come to me about this? You’ve shown that you can easily handle this matter yourself,” Golde had a look of confused inquiry on his face.
“You are right. There was something that made me concerned. The squad leader, Kazuhiro Hagiri, said that he saw a humanoid figure among the Gillians that attacked them.”
Golde’s eyes widened as his brain processed what he had just heard. “What are you saying? There was a Vasto Lorde among those Gillians?”
“We don’t know for sure what the figure was. Fifth seat Hagiri thinks it might have been wearing dark clothing, but he is not completely sure.”
“Well, if it is a Vasto Lorde, then it shouldn’t be a great concern as long as we don’t provoke it. But it could still make finding the missing member difficult.” The Head-Captain rose from his desk and paced back and forth a few times before turning back to Jin. “I’m going to send members from Squad 4 and Squad 12 as back-up just in case. Unless you have anything else to add, you can leave.”
The Squad 2 captain nodded in acknowledgment and flash stepped away to return to his duties.
The Head-Captain popped a jawbreaker in his mouth and walked out onto the open balcony attached to his office. He sat down in a lounge chair and stared off into space, pondering about recent events.
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Elsewhere, in the Squad 4 barracks, in the coordinated relief station, several Soul Reapers were being attended to by nurses in light blue shihakusho uniforms. Squad members wearing regular Soul Reaper uniforms would pass through every so often. Kazuhiro’s was the only one of his squad left, the others already discharged.
“Alright fifth seat Hagiri, your physical health is fine and we restored your spiritual pressure back to normal. You are free to return to your barracks unless you want us to look at anything else.”
“No, that’s alright. Thank you for taking care of me.”
Kazuhiro slipped his shirt and head covers back on, and equipped his sheathed zanpakuto horizontally behind his lower back. As he was leaving the room, Kazuhiro noticed a few members of Squad 11 that were being treated for slash wounds.
“Honestly Captain Blue, if I charged your squad for every time one of you came in here for treatment, I’d be able to buy new supplies every couple weeks.” Squad 4 Captain, Akira Mizuhashi, was healing the young, blue headed captain’s wounds with Kido.
“Ahahaha, I’d never have spare change then, huh?” Cameron had a joyfully grin on his face.
“You do know the motto of our squad, right?”
“Your lives are in the palm of our hands…yeah, I know it well,” the young captain said in a dry tone. “Unlike the previous Kenpachi, I value Squad Four.”
Captain Mizuhashi continued to heal Cameron Blue’s wounds for a few more minutes until no trace of them was left. “Alright, you’re all set. Please take care and do not start anymore fights. Here, you can have a cookie.” Captain Blue swiftly ate the cookie and went on his way back to his barracks with some of his squad members.
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Two Soul Reapers were resting underneath a large tree in the Community Park and garden in the Squad 13 barracks. The man on the left seemed to be fast asleep while the other was starring up into nothing. The sleeping Soul Reaper was the captain of Squad 13, Hayashi Saiga. Captain Saiga is a tall man with shaggy black hair. Some compare him to a koala since he sleeps some much. But they say he is more like a Grizzly Bear if you walk him up. The other man, Captain of Squad 9, Zameric Kajiya, will be seen resting with him every so often. They get along well since they both have laid back natures.
“I’ve always liked this park since you had it put in. It just has calming effect,” Captain Kajiya would talk to his fellow captain despite him being a sleep. “I was thinking of putting one in the Squad Nine barracks. I’d get a bunch of Blue Gum Eucalyptus trees to have throughout the park.”
“That’s not funny,” Saiga mumbled in his sleep.
Zameric just laughed for several minutes before getting up and patting the grass off his captain’s haori.
“Well, I’m gonna go Hayashi. I’ve got some paperwork I should finish up. I can’t expect my lieutenant to do everything for me. I’ll see ya later.” As Zameric was about to Flash Step off to his office, a member of Squad 13 came up.
“Umm, Captain Saiga, could you please wake up. Captain Blue suddenly appeared and started creating a ruckus. Lieutenant Takeshima tried to settle him down but he was knocked out. Please wake up Captain Saiga,” the poor Soul Reaper was slightly frantic.
“Uh, why don’t you just let him keep sleeping? I can handle that little maniac. I’ll go stop him before he causes any significant damage. Plus, I don’t want him to get anywhere near this beautiful park,” Zameric tried to settle down the young man.
“Please, just stop that lunatic before he kills anyone!”
“Ahahahaha, I guess I better hurry then,” and with that, Captain Kajiya flashed steeped away to go take care of battle crazed young captain of Squad 11. The Squad 13 Soul Reaper just stood there, looking at his captain and then back in the direction Zameric went, uncertain what to do.
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The next day, Renjiro Ishida went to Soul Society to talk with Golde and try to get things straight. When Renjiro arrived in Soul Society through the Senkaimon Gate, he was greeted by the lieutenant of Squad 1, Aoi Yamahara.
“Hello Doctor Ishida. We received your message this morning and my captain is looking forward to hearing your findings.” Aoi lead Renjiro to his captain’s office.
“Ah, good, I have something very important to talk about with Golde.”
On the way to Golde’s office, a giant spiritual pressure that seemed to come from the west erupted for about a minute. The sudden force took Renjiro by surprise and caused him to lose his footing and fall down. As Lieutenant Yamahara helped him back on his feet, Renjiro asked him what that was.
“Felt like the captain. Captain Blue has been getting restless lately. My captain must have gone over to calm him down,” Aoi said with a smile on his face.
Renjiro did not whether he should be worried or not. He decided to just sit and wait for Golde in his office. When Golde arrived a few minutes later, he apologized for making Renjiro wait and then offered him some candy, to which the Quincy respectfully declined.
“I got your message this morning, so what did you find in your examination of the body?”
“Well, both the coroner and I concluded that the cause of death was strange grooved puncture wounds in his torso. But I noticed trace amounts of spiritual pressure around wounds.”
“Well then, I guess the million dollar question is, what kind of spiritual pressure it is?”
“Heh, you catch on fast, don’t you Head-Captain?” Golde smirked at the question. “From what I could tell, it felt like Soul Reaper spiritual pressure. I could not detect any signs of a Hollow. But the traces of spiritual pressure were about a week old.”
“That is interesting.” The Head-Captain adjusted himself in his chair. “Yesterday, while one of our Patrol Corps squads was on a weekly recon mission in the Las Noches ruins, they had an unexpected encounter with a large number of Gillians. Most of the team was able to escape safely, but one of their members disappeared inside the ruins. After the Patrols Corps commander went back to the ruins, he was able to find the body of the missing member. It appears he was killed by a Cero fired from close range.”
“What does that incident have to do with Nicholas’ death?”
“As they were fleeing from Las Noches, the leader of the squad claimed to see a humanoid figure among the Gillians.”
“Could these two incidents having anything to do with each other?”
“I don’t know, but it seems unlikely that they could be. Nonetheless, I will look into this further and report to you any new developments.”
“Thank you Head-Captain Golde. I will contact you again in a couples weeks after the funeral is over.”
“Please give my regards to Nicholas’ family.”
Golde escorted Renjiro back to the Senkaimon. He then made his way back the Squad 1 barracks. Golde instructed his lieutenant hold down the fort while he went out for a little while.
“Where are you going Captain?”
“To go check on Blue, I’m sure Akira is taking good care of Blue, but I think I might have gone a little overboard,” Golde said with a smile on his face.
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Credits:
Kazuhiro Hagiri ----- Cell
Hayao Akamori ----- The Doctor
Jin Karyudo ----- Jinchuuriki Hunter
Golde ----- Golde
Akira Mizuhashi ----- arceus03
Cameron Blue ----- VizardBlue
Hayashi Saiga ----- kusari
Zameric Kajiya ----- Zameric
Aoi Yamahara
Renjiro Ishida
@ Kusari
I finished the first arc of your fanfic. I really enjoyed it. Even though I had a hard time remember which villain was who, but that's my fault. xD
Last edited by Zameric; 28th October 2010 at 1:28 AM.
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so we begin anew. a new arc. a new threat. new allies and new enemies. this chapter is mainly setup for fights next chapter. and as said before my friend is introduced this chapter. he worked hard to create this character that i am writing in for him.
also there is something here that doesn't gel with how Aizen's plan ended because i'm just playing off of the ending i had in my head before we knew about the real ending.
and Flash makes his perverted comment.
Spoiler:- Chapter #1: Lost Tragedy In December Snow:
The first week of December had become somber for the Soul Society. Hayashi had sacrificed himself for them back in Hueco. Jushiro Ukitake, the only survivor of the Aizen Incident, as it was called then, finally lost his battle with tuberculosis. He had personally chosen Hayashi to take over Squad 13 because he felt no one else could possibly replace himself.
Each grieved in their own way. Dre let his hair grow out like Saiga always said he should. Kida isolated herself for the first few days but eventually came out, still depressed. Dauc, Jordan, Zam, Arashi and Blue all went into the Rukongai mountains for separate training. They thought that if they were stronger, Saiga wouldn't have to have done what he did.
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By the third week of the month things had gotten back to normal. Snow and rain had fallen almost everyday. The snow was the more frequent.
It was the time of year when trainees from the Academy were tested for possible squad admittance. On the Friday of that week Zam and Dre were to test their group of trainees. That night each would take two students of their choosing on hollow patrol in Karakura Town. The birthplace of the legend, Ichigo Kurosaki.
The captains made a mutual decision to take a walk-through of the town during the day. At nine a.m. they stepped through a portal into a wooded part of the town's park.
Fresh snow cloaked the ground. Looking around Zam saw a field of white with a few thin, bare trees piercing upward. It reminded him too much of the Hueco wasteland.
"Man. I hate this cold." The fifth captain said, pulling into his gigai. His black hair was tied into a short ponytail. He hated having it even that long. His gigai was dressed in a grey, insulated jacket, a pair of thicker-than-normal pants and boots made to grip the ground under the snow. "Fire and ice don't go well together."
"Suck it up." Zam shot back. "We've gotta do this all night." The length of his gigai was hidden under a brown duster coat, leave only his boots showing. His signature fedora rested upon his head. "So how to you want to do this?"
"I'll go and cover the south half of town. That means you're going north."
"So when do we need to go get the trainees?"
"18:00 hours." Dre's response was met by a look of 'normal time please.' "Six o'clock. So meet back here at five."
"Whatever." Zam huffed. They walked off in their respective directions.
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The girl tapped her foot restlessly. Her right hand cradled her head, elbow resting against the glass-top cafe table. The cafe-au-lait in front of her released steam and a satisfying aroma. "I could pick his *** off from right here before he even sensed the arrow."
"Patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet." The young man seated with her quipped. "Jean-Jacques Rousseau." He looked to be about twenty years old. His gaze was immersed in a pocket-sized copy of Musashi Miyamoto's The Book of Five Rings. "You'll have your chance." His British accent gave his voice a distinct ring of class.
"Fine. I'll wait. But I want this one." She brushed her raven hair away from her emerald eyes. She was transfixed on Zameric as he strolled across the street. "Damn reaper. Needs to friggin' die." Her accent gave a more hostile and intimidating ring.
She reached out and grabbed the small white cup in front of her. She took a quick sip. A drop fell from her mouth and stained the white jacket, buttoned by four silver buttons across her torso. "Damn." She stood up and threw a black backpack over her right shoulder. "I'll meet you later, Ethan."
"Be careful sister." Ethan never looked away from his book. He stood up and slid the book into an inside pocket on his tan trenchcoat. He dropped a few bills on the table and walked in the opposite direction.
As he slipped his right hand into his pocket a silver bracelet became apparent. Dangling from it was a silver pentacle. A small ring circled the center point. Ethan pushed a cell phone to his right ear. "Cole?" There was a short pause. "Yes, everything is in place. It's just as you said. The reapers have come."
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The Demon of the West watched as Dre Funero walked out of the small market. A large broadsword was strapped to the watcher's back. Both wielder and sword were infamous among the Soul Society.
From this place, on top of the ten story building, Cole Mustang could see it all. He could see everything but all he cared about was the reapers. He watched the dark haired captain step in front of an odd performer.
Cole had come all the way from America to fulfill his contract. But he couldn't take his stare from the clown. The juggler wore a strange red jumpsuit and an evil looking mask. The right side wore a wicked smile and the other was twisted into a sorrowful crying face.
"What the hell?" Cole stammered. The clown turned in his direction. It was looking straight at him. Or rather straight through him. Cole walked to the other side of the roof and took out a red cell phone.
He pressed one button and the call was made. "Ethan. Is everything where it should be?" There was a pause as the man on the other end answered. "Good. Don't fail me."
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Dre walked out of a small Karakura store. He had a bag of apples and a cup of black coffee. He pressed his arm to his stomach and supported the fruit in his elbow. With his free right hand he removed a small bottle of Cuervo he always had with him and emptied half of it in the drink. Dre knew most people put cream and sugar in their coffee but he liked to drink, even with breakfast.
He looked over and met gazes with a clown. He didn't normally fear clowns but this one scared the **** out of him. It wore a mask. Half smiling and half crying along with a red body suit.
A shudder went down his spine. "I won't be sleeping tonight." The captain muttered as he walked away.
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Zam walked through the streets. He felt an odd pressure behind him. It had been there all day. He'd passed a small cafe at about 10:30 that morning and the pressure had followed him until 2:00. Then it just vanished. He didn't know where it came from, where it went or what it was.
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"Ah hell. Where's Dre? It's five fifteen already." Zam leaned against one of the dead trees in the park. He reached into the pockets of his coat and pulled out a white pouch in each hand. He shook them quickly and furiously before jamming them back in. The packs were designed to generate heat when shaken. "Not a half bad feeling." He chuckled as the heat passed into his flesh.
"What isn't a half bad feeling?" Dre inquired.
"They're called Hot Hands. You shake 'em and they heat up. And you're late by the way."
"Yeah I know. Shut up."
Night was slowly creeping in as Zameric opened the Senkaimon gate. Two black hell butterflies fluttered out to guide the reapers back.
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Both captains stepped into the room of waiting students at exactly six p.m. Twenty students had gathered. Only one tenth of them would be allowed to go on patrol. The group consisted of thirteen guys and seven girls.
"Into the lion's den." The men sighed in unison. They sat at a table opposite the group. In front of their seats was a folder. It held a file for each of the students in the room.
Funero looked out at the crowd before speaking. He knew Zam must've noticed that a girl in the front row had larger than average sized breasts and was flaunting them thinking they would help in the captain's decision.
"As you know Zameric and I are here to pick a grope..." Zam gave a silent chuckle as Dre realized what he had just said. He was staring at the girl in the front row when he said it. "Group, group. I meant to say group not grope." The fifth captain had begun to studder.
"It's okay buddy. I'll take it from here." Zam assured his friend. "We'll be picking groups to possibly be accepted into a Court Guard Squad. The two of us will take one student each out on patrol tonight so we can test your talents. If we call your name, please step forward and wait for further instruction."
The cadets nodded in understanding.
"Ok then." Dre, having regained his composure, looked at the first sheet. "Kiyoko Tsuchimon." The fifth captain jumped a bit as the large-breasted girl stepped forward.
She leaned to him a bit, embarresing the captain even more. "Yes Captain Funero?"
Oh damn it. She's just like Matsumoto. His thought distracted him into giving a blank stare. "Dismissed." He said without a second thought.
"Oh c'mon. I thought you liked her?" Zameric joked after Kiyoko left the room.
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The captains left a lot later than they wanted. About four hours to be precise. It was ten before they passed into the World of the Living. Dre had 'chosen' a tall boy named Jiro to bring on this mission. Jiro was a member of the 'prestigious' Omaeda clan. Like the clan had done for Marechiyo years before, they had bought Jiro's place in this test and a place in the squads as well.
Zameric had chosen a girl based on her talent and reason for joining the Academy. She had two little brothers and a little sister and all of them were being raised by their grandfather. They had very little money and she wanted to change their lives.
Like earlier that day, Zam went north and Dre went south. It was just what Cole, Ethan and Sophia wanted. Sophia followed Zameric just as she said she would. Ethan went towards the south and Cole stayed in the center of town.
Simultaniously, the three non-reapers pulled a silver disc from their pocket. All were crushed at the same time. It was Hollow Bait. That night had just become pure hell.
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In the Soul Society, things weren't much better. Many of those involved with the mission to save Hayash were particularly afflicted.
Kida had it the worst. She still blamed herself for him being kidnapped in the first place. This was the first night in eight days that she had gotten any sleep. The sleep was of very low quality though. She was plagued by a nightmare. This was the first occurance of this nightmare. What she didn't know was that all across the Seireitei, anyone involved with the mission, or Hayashi in general, was having the same nightmare that night. She didn't know what the symbolism of it was.
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Kida was underwater. She swam up for the night sky of her spirit world. She broke the surface and gasped for air. She pulled herself out, normally she would have had help with that, with a bit of difficulty.
She looked all around from where she was sitting. Ryookami was nowhere to be seen. She thought she heard a sound coming from somewhere. "Hello." She called. "Ryookami, is that you?"
She walked around the soft hills and flat lands. The sky was clear and the moonlight provided excellent ambiance for a nice stroll. Then something caught her eye. A dark mound that was shaped, for the most part, like the dragon-wolf zanpakuto spirit of hers.
"There you are." She said running over. The spirit didn't budge. "Hello?" Kida called shaking the spirit. She rolled it over finding a bloody puncture wound on it's underside. The spirit was dead.
A spectral neighing came from behind her. She turned and saw a horse. A thin, pale, creme colored horse. Atop the horse sat a man in a black cloak. He turned his head to face her. She saw nothing but furious, burning red eyes. The right hand slid from the cloak. It gripped a rusted, bloody hand sickle. The horse let out it's spectral neigh again.
Kida's first instinct was to run. She ran. Looking back she reliezed the rider wasn't following. A sound of thunder ran through the world. She looked up but the sky was clear. She looked back, the thunder was the horses hooves pounding the ground. The huge lead she had suddenly disappeared as the being came right up behind her. The next sensation she felt was the sickle stabbing into the right side of her chest.
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Kida jerked awake in her bed. Her hand instinctivly shot to the right side of her chest. There was no evidence that a weapon had ever penetrated her chest.
As if by a cruel twist of fate, Katsu, a seated officer in squad 13, showed up outside her room. The captain sighed. "What is it?"
"I was told to tell you that an Unsub..."
"Unwhat?" Kida responded.
"An Unsub is short for unknown subject. There is an Unsub currently engaged in battle with Jidanbo of the West Gate. The Unsub is overwhelming Jidanbo with hand-to-hand combat alone. Captains Schiffer and Blue are waiting just inside, incase the subject makes it in. The Head Captain wants everyone to be on their guard. We only know of the subject's hand-to-hand skills but know nothing of sword or kido ability. And then there's the fact that his hand-to-hand is a style we've never seen before and..."
"Katsu." Kida said pulling her haori on. "I've got the gist of it. Go back to your barracks."
How could things get any worse? First nightmares about horses and then Unsubs.
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"Who...who...who are you?" The giant studdard out. Jidanbo, 32 feet tall was bested by a six foot man in hand-to-hand, looked at the cloaked figure before him.
The stranger's eyes burned red as he answered, "Apachu."
"Hey you. You'll pay for what you did to Jidanbo!" A bearded man yelled from behind the invader. Jidanbo was the citizens' friend and they would do anything to protect him.
"Your funeral fools." The enemy scoffed.
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"Captain Blue! Captain Blue!" Katsu yelled. Without a functioning captain or lieutenant at the moment, Squad 13 was being used as a messenger squad.
"Katsu." The blue haired reaper said as he jerked his head around. "What is it?"
"A massive amount of hollows has been detected in Karakura Town. Captains Kajiya and Funero are there now and the Head-Captain wants you to go to. Now."
Blue shot a look at Schiffer who was also behind the gate preparing for an entry by the intruder. He got the Ryuu nod of approval and told Katsu to open the Senkaimon.
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Zameric and Ayame, his cadet, were coming under pressure as multiple hollows attacked at once. Both were hacking and slashing at whatever they could kill. Wrapped up in their battle, neither saw the Clown from that day creeping from the shadows.
Ayame suddenly cried out in a blood curdling scream. The captain turned to see two hook-blades protruding through the girls torso. Her lifeless body dropped to the concrete as Clown revealed himself.
"Mwah ha ha!" The maniac laughed. The masked man charged towards Zameric just as four hollows jumped at his back.
"****!" He couldn't stop them all. But he didn't have to. Before he could blink, blue reishi arrows descended down. All the hollows were striken and killed. Another three arrows hit Clown and pushed him backward.
"******* clown!" Sophia yelled. "This reaper is my prey! Mine!" A blue energy bow was gripped in her right hand. Around that wrist she wore a bracelet just like her brother's. "Soul Reaper! My name is Sophia Cross and I'll be your opponent!"
"What the hell?! An army of hollows, a dead trainee, a killer clown and now a Quincy. What's next?!" Zam responded.
"Grip, Kuroi Te!" A tree shadow formed a giant hand that clenched around Clown. Blue jumped down out of a nearby tree.
"Great. That's what's next."
"Don't worry Zam. I'll handle this crappy little clown." The afformentioned clown was trying to work it's way out of the grip. Blue flash stepped away to a safe area to hold his battle.
"Cole didn't say anything about a clown." Sophia spat. She was still floating in the air. Her clothing hadn't changed since that morining.
"Who's Cole?" Zam asked.
"None of your goddamn buisiness. Now let's get on with this so I can kill you."
"Wait." Zam walked over and dragged Ayame's corpse up against a trunk. "Rest easily."
"Finally." The Quincy huffed.
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Jiro had run off when Ethan appeared. The tall, fat man wasn't suited for combat. He abandoned an ally to save his own skin. He was a coward and a disgrace.
"Damn it." Dre narrowly dodged a flurry of arrows shot from Ethan's reishi bow.
"A hero is born among a hundred, a wise man is found among a thousand, but an accomplished one might not be found even among a hundred thousand men." Ethan grinned. "Plato."
"What the hell does that mean?" Dre yelled, dodging another flurry.
"It means that I'm better than you." This time a storm of arrow launched. Dre didn't know how he could possibly make it out alive.
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"Captain Ookami." Squad 13 fourth seat Rie Nagano called to Kida.
"What is it Rie?" Kida asked while letting the girl catch up.
"Takeo Hayashi has been found dead in the Rukongai. The Head-Captain already sent captain Akira out. He wants you to get to the south Rukongai, third district immeadiatly."
"Ok. Thank you Rie." The blonde responded. What the hell is going on today?
so yeah. i hope you guys like it.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
If this is how dead the club is when there's a hiatus... I fear for when Bleach ends.
Spoiler:- Happy birthday, Bleach Club Jr.~!:
Originally Posted by rotrum
Kida: Frying Pan, STAT!
VB: I love this job~! *Smacks Kusari with the frying pan*
Oh boy, Blue with a weapon, and permission to use it...
Originally Posted by rotrum
Jin: Making the cake, it has to be big enough to fit all the candles.
I give him my good luck.
Originally Posted by rotrum
Kida:I have a monitor! *Presses a button and two screens appear from nowhere, one showing Arc Sleeping in the kitchen and the other showing Dauc sleeping in his lab.*...FRYING PAN!
VB: Are you kidding me?
Kida: *Deathglare*
VB: Yikes *moments later. you can see him on the screens. smacking thme and returning in less then a minute*
Haha, mental-animations.
Originally Posted by rotrum
ILP: Desperation doth strengthen that which one can do.
That it does.
Originally Posted by rotrum
MC, you will go buy all the decorations on your own budget; If you're too cheap I will lock you in a room with Blue and a chainsaw.
I feel so sorry for him if he can't do it...
Originally Posted by rotrum
Kusari, you're gonig to be a floater, everyone is going to make sure you do work.
A floater?
Originally Posted by rotrum
Jin: Uhh...*Looks at the cookies, sextuple layer Cookie Cake, Cookies and cream ice cream, Cookie donuts, Cookie Cupcakes, and Cookie brownies* Don't you need something that ISN'T cookies?
COOOOOOOOOOOKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEE S
Originally Posted by rotrum
Jin Hmm...Hipnotiq, Jager, Jose Cuervo, Jim Beam, Captian Morgan, Jack Daniels, Patron, Tequila Rose, Skyy Vodka, Crown Royal, Southern Comfort, Aftershock, Watermelon Pucker, Segram's 7, Chambord, Kahula, Peach Schnapps, Triple Sec, Butterscotch Schnapps, Bacardi Silver...
...Is it good or bad that I don't know of any of these?
Originally Posted by rotrum
MC: As broken as your vase
Jin: Excuse me?
MC: Nevermind.
Aww, poor Jin.
Originally Posted by rotrum
The Beetles: (In a large yellow submarine underneath the CD Pool) We all live in a-
Linkin' Park: But in the end, It doesn't even matter~
Beethoven: What is this thing *Poking The synthesizer used by Owl City*
Owl City: -A parachute, at a church rummage sale, and a mean sewing machine
Beethoven: Interesting...
This was just epic. Especially the LP cutscene
Originally Posted by rotrum
Jin: I meant the fact that you're upside down and you're...A penguin.
PENGUINS!
Originally Posted by rotrum
Arceus: *Placing a 100 layer cake carefully on the main table of the room. Ten layers of Vanilla, Ten of Chocolate, Twenty of various Ice Cream Cakes, Ten more layers of Lava cakes, Ten layers of Confetti cake, Ten layers of fruit cake, and thirty layers of cookie cake*
Don't worry guys, that wasn't an earthquake... It was just my stomach...
Originally Posted by rotrum
Golde:...My birthday was yesterday
Oh wow.
Spoiler:- Chapter 4:
Originally Posted by Zameric
“What did you need my ninja friend?”
I love how casual he is.
Originally Posted by Zameric
“I’m going to send members from Squad 4 and Squad 12 as back-up just in case. Unless you have anything else to add, you can leave.”
I wonder who will be going... Probably Arenak and Giratina, maybe some OCs.
Originally Posted by Zameric
“Honestly Captain Blue, if I charged your squad for every time one of you came in here for treatment, I’d be able to buy new supplies every couple weeks.” Squad 4 Captain, Akira Mizuhashi, was healing the young, blue headed captain’s wounds with Kido.
“Ahahaha, I’d never have spare change then, huh?” Cameron had a joyfully grin on his face.
“You do know the motto of our squad, right?”
“Your lives are in the palm of our hands…yeah, I know it well,” the young captain said in a dry tone. “Unlike the previous Kenpachi, I value Squad Four.”
Captain Mizuhashi continued to heal Cameron Blue’s wounds for a few more minutes until no trace of them was left. “Alright, you’re all set. Please take care and do not start anymore fights. Here, you can have a cookie.” Captain Blue swiftly ate the cookie and went on his way back to his barracks with some of his squad members.
I really liked this. It really shows the relationship between two captains, and a bit of each personality (Blue's reliance on Squad 4, Akira's generosity in giving cookies, etc.). It's a good scene.
Originally Posted by Zameric
“Umm, Captain Saiga, could you please wake up. Captain Blue suddenly appeared and started creating a ruckus. Lieutenant Takeshima tried to settle him down but he was knocked out.
What, just after he left Squad 4?
Originally Posted by Zameric
“I got your message this morning, so what did you find in your examination of the body?”
“Well, both the coroner and I concluded that the cause of death was strange grooved puncture wounds in his torso. But I noticed trace amounts of spiritual pressure around wounds.”
“Well then, I guess the million dollar question is, what kind of spiritual pressure it is?”
“Heh, you catch on fast, don’t you Head-Captain?” Golde smirked at the question. “From what I could tell, it felt like Soul Reaper spiritual pressure. I could not detect any signs of a Hollow. But the traces of spiritual pressure were about a week old.”
What I find interesting is that neither of them immediately accused Golde's men of doing anything.
Spoiler:- Chapter #1: Lost Tragedy In December Snow:
Originally Posted by kusari
The first week of December had become somber for the Soul Society. Hayashi had sacrificed himself for them back in Hueco. Jushiro Ukitake, the only survivor of the Aizen Incident, as it was called then, finally lost his battle with tuberculosis. He had personally chosen Hayashi to take over Squad 13 because he felt no one else could possibly replace himself.
The order here is odd. First it mentions that people were grieving, and why they were, and then mentions how Hayashi became a Captain in the first place? I guess the Ukitake bit was necessary to show that he couldn't easily be replaced, but I think it could have been written better, to make more sense.
Originally Posted by kusari
Each grieved in their own way. Dre let his hair grow out like Saiga always said he should. Kida isolated herself for the first few days but eventually came out, still depressed. Dauc, Jordan, Zam, Arashi and Blue all went into the Rukongai mountains for separate training. They thought that if they were stronger, Saiga wouldn't have to have done what he did.
So, in a way, his death was good. While no one would be able to truly replace Hayashi, everyone else grows stronger.
Originally Posted by kusari
"I could pick his *** off from right here before he even sensed the arrow."
"Patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet." The young man seated with her quipped. "Jean-Jacques Rousseau."
Arrows, the name of a French... dude. At first I thought of a Quincy, but they use Germanic phrases, right? (Like Uryuu's Licht Regen). Unless they're a different "type" of Quincy, like your Espada used some Latin phrases if I remember right.
Originally Posted by Kusari
But he couldn't take his stare from the clown. The juggler wore a strange red jumpsuit and an evil looking mask. The right side wore a wicked smile and the other was twisted into a sorrowful crying face.
He's going to be important, I know it.
Originally Posted by Kusari
Funero looked out at the crowd before speaking. He knew Zam must've noticed that a girl in the front row had larger than average sized breasts and was flaunting them thinking they would help in the captain's decision.
There's always one of them.
Originally Posted by Kusari
Jiro was a member of the 'prestigious' Omaeda clan. Like the clan had done for Marechiyo years before, they had bought Jiro's place in this test and a place in the squads as well.
I hate people who would do that.
Originally Posted by Kusari
Simultaniously, the three non-reapers pulled a silver disc from their pocket. All were crushed at the same time. It was Hollow Bait. That night had just become pure hell.
I'm so glad I don't have to do that.
Originally Posted by Kusari
"******* clown!" Sophia yelled. "This reaper is my prey! Mine!" A blue energy bow was gripped in her right hand. Around that wrist she wore a bracelet just like her brother's. "Soul Reaper! My name is Sophia Cross and I'll be your opponent!"
Hahaha, I'm liking her already.
Originally Posted by Kusari
"A hero is born among a hundred, a wise man is found among a thousand, but an accomplished one might not be found even among a hundred thousand men." Ethan grinned. "Plato."
"What the hell does that mean?" Dre yelled, dodging another flurry.
"It means that I'm better than you."
Haha, always a good idea to shorten things down.
Boy, I'm tired.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Happy Birthday, Bleach Club 2. You have survived one full year of very odd incidents.
Oooh, it's the second club's anniversary? Ah well, long live Bleach Club. =]
...tbh, I lost track of what happened in your last arc. And the word copy that I saved got distorted somehow so I only have the copy from chapter 14 upwards. Someone care to summarize it for me? *looks at ILPy intently*
...Sorry. :P
Rotrum That was funny XD Continue that, please. Donut cookies. Broke MC. VB and the frying pan. Penguin ILPy was the best though XDD AND In The End ftw~!
If this is how dead the club is when there's a hiatus... I fear for when Bleach ends. we all do ILP. maybe Kubo will start anew with a different protagonist.
Spoiler:- Chapter #1: Lost Tragedy In December Snow:
The order here is odd. First it mentions that people were grieving, and why they were, and then mentions how Hayashi became a Captain in the first place? I guess the Ukitake bit was necessary to show that he couldn't easily be replaced, but I think it could have been written better, to make more sense. To be honest, this was the last part of the chapter i wrote. and i wrote it a 4:30 in the morning. after i finished i submited the chapter and passed out on the couch.
So, in a way, his death was good. While no one would be able to truly replace Hayashi, everyone else grows stronger. in a way. and thank you for making it seem like i'm only good to make you better.
Arrows, the name of a French... dude. At first I thought of a Quincy, but they use Germanic phrases, right? (Like Uryuu's Licht Regen). Unless they're a different "type" of Quincy, like your Espada used some Latin phrases if I remember right. they have all the same german terms as Uryu did. Ethan and Sophia are British. The whole french thing is just Ethan being Ethan. He reads a lot and recites quotes regularly.
He's going to be important, I know it. I wouldn't have mentioned him if he weren't important.
There's always one of them. yeah. i needed Flash to make his perv move just like the rest of you and then i noticed the similarity between the words group and grope.
I hate people who would do that. It's the Omaeda family. what do you expect?
I'm so glad I don't have to do that. You're still guarding the gate. You may still have to fight.
Hahaha, I'm liking her already. She's awesome ain't she?
Haha, always a good idea to shorten things down. yes.
comments in bold. ok. so we have Ethan, Sophia, Cole and Clown. which one is my friend?
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
I wonder who will be going... Probably Arenak and Giratina, maybe some OCs. In case you didn't notice, I decide to just skip that scene to move forward a little fast in this chapter. I might include it in a future chapter or as a deleted scene after the arc ends. That is if anyone wants me too.
I really liked this. It really shows the relationship between two captains, and a bit of each personality (Blue's reliance on Squad 4, Akira's generosity in giving cookies, etc.). It's a good scene. Thank you!
What, just after he left Squad 4? Ahahaha, yeah. Aren't I good at getting his character? ;p
What I find interesting is that neither of them immediately accused Golde's men of doing anything. Hmm...
My replies are in bold.
@ Rotrum
I really like your Bleach Club birthday story thing.
Especially the MC flashback. xD
Please check out my 4th & 5th gen trade thread posts.
For the first anniversary, I'll write something, since my next chapter is no where near done; I'll improvise.
Spoiler:- Happy birthday, Bleach Club Jr.~!:
Kida: Who's ready to throw a surprise party?
Kusa: Urgh...I...hate you....
Kida: It's only Two AM, and you know how early Golde-Sama wakes up, if we start any later then three, he's going to get suspicious.
Kusa: Thre..Got it..*Falls Asleep*
Kida: Frying Pan, STAT!
VB: I love this job~! *Smacks Kusari with the frying pan*
Kusa: OWWW! What was that for!
VB: We have to work on the Surprise Birthday party for Golde-Soutaichou.
Rotrum: How old is he anyways..
MC: Dunno, he was Captain Commander before I was even a trainee
Rotrum: ...So we're talking atleast two thousand years?
MC: I'M NOT THAT OLD! *Sly Smirk* Besides, Kida's the oldest captain other than Golde.
Flash Step: We're getting no where...
Kida: Frying Pan.
VB: Yay! *Hits MC*
MC: Why me...
VB: You were the closest one.
Senny: Where's Arceus?
Jin: Making the cake, it has to be big enough to fit all the candles.
VB: So we're not going to be seeing Arc until the party's already started?
Kida: We can discuess hias age later! Get to work. Blue, Frying Pan!
VB: *Hits Kusari with the frying pan*
Kusa: I wasnt' asleep!
VB: Kida didn't specify.
Meric: You guys are gonna wake Golde up before we even stasrt the preparations.
ILP: Eh? Where is Dauc-Sama?
Jin: He's working on the presents and such. Or he's sleeping.
Kida:I have a monitor! *Presses a button and two screens appear from nowhere, one showing Arc Sleeping in the kitchen and the other showing Dauc sleeping in his lab.*...FRYING PAN!
VB: Are you kidding me?
Kida: *Deathglare*
VB: Yikes *moments later. you can see him on the screens. smacking thme and returning in less then a minute*
ILP: Desperation doth strengthen that which one can do.
VB: ..What?
ILP: I don't know, my mind's a cluttered mess without sleep...
Kida: It's already 2:20! Get to work! Jin, you will do progress reports! I'm, of course, the leader. Arceus is making the cake and other desserts. MC, you will go buy all the decorations on your own budget; If you're too cheap I will lock you in a room with Blue and a chainsaw. Flashstep, you're getting all the alcohol and other drinks. Eon, your job is to prepare the entertainment. Senny, you need to decorate the room. Meric, you're going to help with entertainment. Rotrum, you're going to help decorate. ILP, you're jo bis to finda way to make the party room gigantic on the inside and normal sized on the outside. Dac is making presents. Kusari, you're gonig to be a floater, everyone is going to make sure you do work.
Everyone: Got it.
Kida:..What are you saying Got it for! GO GO GO!
-At Five o'clock-
Kida: Jin, what's progress like?
Jin: Well...
-Flashback, Arceus-
Jin: Arceus, how's it going?
Arceus: Great, how do you like my food?
Jin: Uhh...*Looks at the cookies, sextuple layer Cookie Cake, Cookies and cream ice cream, Cookie donuts, Cookie Cupcakes, and Cookie brownies* Don't you need something that ISN'T cookies?
Arc: Why? what's better than cookies?
Kusa: Cookies that I didn't have to bake with my own fire?
Jin:Uhh...I gotta go...Get mroe variety...
-End-
Kida:..What the hell is a Cookie donut!?
Jin: Uhh..You don't wanna know..
Kida: *Sigh* What else?
-Flashback Flash Step-
JIn: How's it going here?
FS: Perfect, I'mn almost done!
Jin: Already?
FS: Yeah! It was easy. Look!
Jin Hmm...Hipnotiq, Jager, Jose Cuervo, Jim Beam, Captian Morgan, Jack Daniels, Patron, Tequila Rose, Skyy Vodka, Crown Royal, Southern Comfort, Aftershock, Watermelon Pucker, Segram's 7, Chambord, Kahula, Peach Schnapps, Triple Sec, Butterscotch Schnapps, Bacardi Silver...
FS: No, there's more, I'm sure of it
Jin:...Is there anything that ISN'T alcoholic.
FS: Not...alco...holic?
Kusari: *Drunk* Noooooope *hic*
Jin:...*Sighs, leaves*
-end-
Kida: Please tell me you're kidding me...
Jin: Nope.
Kida:...Keep going, I suppose...
-Flashback, MC-
Jin: MC..you're haven't even started!?
MC: Well, i haveto budgert my money carefully, I need to count how much I have and how much I'll need to spend an-
Jin: You're broke, aren't you?
MC: As broken as your vase
Jin: Excuse me?
MC: Nevermind.
-end-
Kida:...So we have no money for decorations?
Jin: Oh, he has money now...
-enter previous flashback-
Jin: Fine here's the money
MC: What's the catch...
Jin: You need to take Minny with you
MC: The ball of hyperness?
MIn: Hey! I can hear you *Tackles MC*
Jin *Stifling a laugh* Money well spent...
Kusa: *Hic* yup!
-end-
Kida: Evil...
Jin: I got bored. And would you rather have her around with nothing to do?
Kida: Good point. Moving on?
*Flashback-Eon and Meric*
Jin: How's it go-WHAT HAPPENED HERE!?
*Eon is literally swimming in CDs and records for virtually every song made in the last fourty or so years. Meric is surrounded by clowns, dressed up figures, movies, and other forms of entertainment all in the CD-pool*
Eon: We..wanted to have a fair and balanced viewing of all the options
Meric:..And Kida said she'd pay.
Kusa: AIR! *Falling deeper into the pool
-end-
Kida: *headdesk*
Jin: It gets better
-Flashback again-
Hannah Montana: Where's my wig!
Performer from another Country: *Smacks Hannah and says equivalent to "How dare you"*
Justin Bieber: Drowning..too short...
random little girl who had been whisked along with all the performers: NOOO *Dives into CD Pool*
Scandal: *Are trying to play Shoujo S because they were in a concert when they were whisked away-interrupted by loud annoying bagpipes, among other things*
Simple Plan: Is everybody going Crazy?
Ms. Piggy Puppet: How dare you call me crazy! *proceeds to yell at and interrupt Simple Plan*
Random person: SHUT UP I'm trying to watch a movie!
The Beetles: (In a large yellow submarine underneath the CD Pool) We all live in a-
Linkin' Park: But in the end, It doesn't even matter~
Beethoven: What is this thing *Poking The synthesizer used by Owl City*
Owl City: -A parachute, at a church rummage sale, and a mean sewing machine
Beethoven: Interesting...
-end-
Kida: Okay, I get it, alot of performers and none of them are sane, could oyu please just move on!
Jin: Got it.
-Flashback: Rotrum, Senny, and ILP-
Jin: Okay how it that WHAT THE!
*Party Room is currently, on the inside, the size of the entire city of Baltimore*
ILP: I'm working on it! Bend to my will! *Insert future Mid-class release name* -Now holds a long Tsurugi*
Jin: What?
ILP: This tsurugi transcends time and space, it can be as long as I can see and cut that which is not yet there or has left there.
Jin: I meant the fact that you're upside down and you're...A penguin.
ILP Don't worry, It's prefectly safe.
Jin: Yes, but now you're a perfectly safe penguin and your colleague is rapidly running out of limbs.
Rotrum: No, I've got them back now, although I admit they're a bit longer then I'd usually like them...
(If you can tell where the above two lines came from I'll give you a bigger slice of Golde's Birthday cake)
Senny: I feel like an infinite number of monkeys..
ILP: Oh hush, *Makes everything normal nad looks about himself rapidld as the roomed begins to shrink* Everything is fine.
Jin: Suuure. And decorations?
ILP: we need to fix the size first, no?
Senny: Go faaaaster! I can't do anything until you fix the room! Kida wants us to do this!
-end-
Kida: This is not gonig well..How are the presents?
Jin: Well...
-Flashback: Dac-
Jin: How are the presents coming along?
Dac: Great, I've finished the exploding disks, the bioweapon, the transmutation device, the teleportation device, and the orichalconium armor.
Jin: Do yo have anything that isn't...violent?
Dac: Oh, I made him a mirror that shows you at your best no matter how old you are.
Jin: Of..course...
Dac: And I created the Hall oF Gratuitous Praise, where holograms will always compliment you whenver you go inside.
Jin: ....*Leaves*
Dac: I'm not done yeet!
-end-
Kida:....So is anything, anywhere ready?
Jin:...Nope.
Kida:...Let's just hope it all gets finished in the next Hour...
Jin: Yes..
-Six o'clock AM.-
Kida: Quickly, we have no time. how old is he? We need to know if we want to put the candles on the cake!
Arceus: *Placing a 100 layer cake carefully on the main table of the room. Ten layers of Vanilla, Ten of Chocolate, Twenty of various Ice Cream Cakes, Ten more layers of Lava cakes, Ten layers of Confetti cake, Ten layers of fruit cake, and thirty layers of cookie cake*
Jin:...How old did you expect him to be?
Arceus:I don't know, but I should be able to fit about 500 thousand candles on this cake. Since I put four layers of frosting over it, they'll fit sideways.
VB: CAKE!!! *Throws frying pan backwards and jumps at the cake*
Kusa: *Gets hit by frying pan* I can't get ANY sleep, can I!?
Rotrum: Sigh *Pins VB to the wall with a dagger*
MC: I bought One Million candles, how many of them are we gonna need?
Jin: You spent my money on candles?
Min: It was a two thousand for one sale
Jin:...How the...
Min: Walmart is trying to get more customers.
Kusa: I can't tell if my head hurts from the hangover, ror from the frying pan...
Flash: You have no alcohol tolerance
Kusa:..You made me sample everything!
Flash: So?
Kida: Someone figure out his age!
Min: A gazillion!
ILP: That isn't possible, our part of the universe is only aged at abou-
MC: No one cares..
ILP: I assure you, many people care abou-
Flash: Loosen up, drink.
ILP: Stop interrupti-
Kida: AGE, NOOW!
Meric: Just stick all the candles that fit onto the cake and move on.
Eon: Don't old people get crotchety when you get their age wrong?
Arc: Well this is going quite well.
ILP: What are you talking about?
Arc: There hasn't been any physical violence yet.
ILP: TRue...
Kida:...We have 10 minutes to put the candles on!
Meric: *Dumps Candles onto Cake* There, we're done. Moving on.
Arc: MY CAKE!
Meric:...*Runs*
Arc: *Chases*
Kida: *Headdesk*
Sen: You're gonna hurt your head like tha-*Gets hit by a Frying Pan*
-6:30 AM-
The bells chimed that always chimed at this time, and Golde woke up.
Golde: *Tries to open eyes* ..everything is black. *blinks* Still black...*Blinks again* Why does the darkness refuse to leave.
Jin: *Has just finished tying the cloth in front of Golde's face. Shunpoes away with GOlde*
Golde: *Rips off the cloth as they go in frotn of the party-building and Jin is already gone* Huh? *Goes inside*
The lights are out.
Everyone except Kusa: Surprise!
Golde:...My birthday was yesterday
VB: *still stuck to the wall* So does that mean you're surprised? *Hit by UFFP, Unidentified Flying Frying Pan*
Golde: And why are there a million candles on that cake. And why is this room almost as large as the Sereitei?
Meric: *Beaten up* Because we're celebrating you're millionth? *Frying pan seems to bounce off of VB and hit Meric*
ILP: Because Space-Time is harder to play with than you think?
Golde: And why is the building covered in ice?
Rotrum: MC blew all the money off on gambling and Candles.
Golde:....*Promptly faints*
Kida:...*Headdesk* Flash...
Flash: HmM?
Kida: Make me a mixed drink, make it strong..
Flash: Got it...*Begins pouring different drinks together*
Arc: *HOlding electric eels inside floating water* CLEAR! *Brings the eel-water onto Golde*
Golde: *Still knocked out*
Arc: I've done all I could do..
Eon: Will he be alright?
Arc We'll know in the morning.
Meric: It is the morning.
Arc: Next morning then?
Kida: *Half drunk* Juuust greaaat. TWO days late...
Kusari: *Asleep*
VB: *Secretly goes over and tries some of the frosting*
Arc: *Yawns, "Accidentally" sends the electric eels at VB*
Eon: So...What now?
Flash: We Drink!
Senny: Somehow I knew you would say that..
Gible: Can I come out yet?
Arc: It doesnt' matter, Golde's knocked out.
Gible: Well, there goes my guest appearance.
Dac: *Appears* Hello! I come bearing gifts!
Everyone who hasn't passed out: Yay!
Dac: For Golde!
Everyone eho hasn't passed out: Aww...
Dac; *Puts a small mechine on the floor.*
Arc: what's thaT?
Dac: Arceus, my dear friend, this is a candy extruder. Watch. *Presses a button and aims at an emptycorner of the room. Candy shoots out of the pocketsized machine-atleast 100 pounds of random candy*
Kusa: *Hit by all the candy, having hid to sleep* OWW
Dac: Woops...
Golde: *Opens one eye*...*Closes eye*
~End~
To be continued, since I'm being interrupted.
EDIT: It's finished now. Finished the 6:00 and 6:30 segments, Dauc's Present making, and I gave Senny a couple lines now. Go read it again!
HAHAHA man...Rotrum i love it...but you did forget get one drink that is like the most important...and thats hennessy lol because you need that to make incredible hulks..but annnyyywayy didnt mean to influence the young ones we have in the crowd XD but it was very funny
Before i forget..happy Birthday Bleach Club i think i was here around october last year..or was it november..hmm but also..
I apologize for my inactivity..seems like i have good ol pneumonia, yea yea i kno. I have the army to thank for this from running in the rain in only long sleeve shirt and SHORTS, note that its cold. So yea ive jus been resting and playing Naruto ninja storm 2 wish i could play any of you if you had the game??!! well im off gotta wash clothes lol forgot to do that yesterday
Captain of Squad 5 Where Fire Rages on and Battles Are Won
So Join THE BLEACH CLUB
...tbh, I lost track of what happened in your last arc. And the word copy that I saved got distorted somehow so I only have the copy from chapter 14 upwards. Someone care to summarize it for me? *looks at ILPy intently*
Hey, I suck at summarising.
Originally Posted by kusari
in a way. and thank you for making it seem like i'm only good to make you better.
You're welcome
And I only quoted that one because all the others would have been very generic, short "yes" or "lol" answers.
Originally Posted by kusari
so we have Ethan, Sophia, Cole and Clown. which one is my friend?
Hmm... I'm gonna go with Sophia, for no reason.
Originally Posted by Zameric
In case you didn't notice, I decide to just skip that scene to move forward a little fast in this chapter. I might include it in a future chapter or as a deleted scene after the arc ends. That is if anyone wants me too.
I don't really mind too much.
And since Rotrum updated, I'll review the bits I didn't last time.
Spoiler:- Happy birthday, Bleach Club Jr.~!:
Originally Posted by rotrum
Dac: Great, I've finished the exploding disks, the bioweapon, the transmutation device, the teleportation device, and the orichalconium armor.
Haha, sounds like something I'd make
Originally Posted by rotrum
Arceus:I don't know, but I should be able to fit about 500 thousand candles on this cake. Since I put four layers of frosting over it, they'll fit sideways.
GENIUS!
Originally Posted by rotrum
Flash: Loosen up, drink.
ILP: Stop interrupti-
Kida: AGE, NOOW!
My stomach hurts from laughing so much.
Originally Posted by rotrum
VB: *still stuck to the wall* So does that mean you're surprised? *Hit by UFFP, Unidentified Flying Frying Pan*
Epic
Ah, that was good.
What would your Squad's motto be in this Bleach-Club Universe?
I'll probably go with the cliche'd "Knowledge is Power", because I'm too lazy to think of anything better.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
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Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Chapter 9: Memories
Recap: Ilp and Hikari glomped Grimmjow…
-
Blue was running through the halls of Las Noches to Grimmjow’s room, to pester and fight him. His grin was wide and eyes were full of excitement as he ran, the white and grey halls looking like a blur to him. Eventually after a good three minutes of running around, he finally reached Grimmjow’s room. Hikari was standing outside of it with Grimmjow, the two seemly talking about something, something that made them both smile.
Blue in all his glory, thought they were gonna fight, so he attacked Grimmjow cause he wanted to fight him first. Blue’s sword clashed with Grimmjow’s, an annoyed look plastered on his face, Grimmjow pushed Blue back into a wall. Hikari looked on trembling; Blue charged again and got punched in the gut for his trouble.
“This is gonna be fun!” Blue said with glee.
“I’m going to kill you!” Grimmjow said angered.
“…not if I kill him first…” Hikari said still shaking.
Grimmjow charged at Blue, ready to slice his grinning head clean off, his first attack was met with a block, only for Blue to be thrown into a wall. Blue quickly and gleefully charged out of it, repeatedly attacking Grimmjow like a savage, raged maniac, Grimmjow counted with an even more psychotic grin on his features as he blocked every attack.
Blue quickly jumped up and tried a downward slash on Grimmjow, only to be impaled by his sword in the stomach; Blue’s blood ran down his sword as his body was pushed off, via Cero. Hikari looked on unimpressed and impatiently tapped her foot, waited for the battle to end.
“Is the pest dead yet? “ Hikari asked irritated.
“Looks like it babe.” Grimmjow said still grinning like a maniac.
Blue’s body started to raise, a look of pure enjoyment on his face while his body bleed.
“Now this is what I’m talking about! The others never try to kill me, now this is a real sparring match….TO THE DEATH!!!” Blue screamed as he rushed in for another attack.
-
Dre, Ilp, Eon, Arc and MC were all meeting in Eon’s holding room. Each captain sat in a chair stolen from other rooms, and each could feel Blue fighting.
“Hes at it again…” Dre said smirking.
“He is your responsibility Eon …” Ilp said to Eon.
“Not anymore he is a Captain now…” Eon said flat out.
“I’m actually starting to regret actually voting for him, if he dies for his recklessness, I won’t be surprised.” Mc said coldly.
“Harsh.” Arc simply spoke while nibbling on a cookie.
“Hes not that bad…” Ilp tried to defend.
“He can …be a handful most of the time, but he isn’t hopeless.” Eon said with his eyes closed.
“Well while he is having fun, what should we do?’ Dre asked.
“We all know what happens eventually, so really we can just sit around and watch the show, Aizen dies, that’s all that matters.”
“…at the cost of…” before Ilp could finish Eon spoke up.
“Just sit around!? That’s out of character for you MC, what are you thinking?” Eon questioned.
“I’m thinking of exactly how those others are and if there is any connection between them and our current predicament.” MC coldly without even looking at any of them.
‘Why so lukewarm and solid?” Arc asked.
“Lukewarm?” Ilp said confused.
“Well usually he is hot and energetic but now he is cold and lethargic. So he is lukewarm and solid.” Arc explained.
The room was silent for a few brief moments, eventually Eon broke it. “So what is the strategy for you guys?”
“I’ll learn all I can from gathering information from Ulquiorra.” Ilp said slightly smiling.
“I guess I’ll go heal Blue…” Arc said nibbling on a cookie.
“Then I guess I’ll-” Before Eon could finish, MC spoke up.
“That sounds like a plan, Eon, Dre help me check something out?” MC asked in the tone of voice that meant; no have no choice now follow me.
Everyone left the room and when there separate ways, Arc eventually found Blue’s body covered in wounds from his battle with Grimmjow and said Espada lying on the ground with his jacket torn apart. He also saw a golden haired girl treating his wounds; she was using a locket shape device in her hand to mend the flesh.
Arc began to work on Blue and saw that he managed to avoid having any of his vital organs hit, but only by the skin of his teeth, several wounds indicated that he be ran through with Grimmjow’s attacks so much that blood loss was going to be the cause of his death. Arc used his Zanpaktou to help seal the wounds and to help make up for the massive blood loss.
“I’m actually surprised you didn’t bleed to death…” Arc said to him while closing up a gash on his thigh.
“I’m used to it…besides…that fight was worth it…” Blue said smiling with blood covering most of his face.
“You’re becoming less reckless now…what sparked the change?”
“Really, maybe I should fight more often to make up for it?”
“Maybe I should tell Min about this, I’ll bet she’ll be happy.”
Blue’s face turn for contentment to absolute terror. “NO! Anything but that!”
“Why?”
“She’ll never shut up about it!”
“Oh come on, she can’t be that bad…”
“Remember the New Years party?”
‘So she bit off the head of a chocolate rabbit and made it rain chocolate for three days, at least Golde was happy…”
“All those dead puppies…”
“…that became zombie pups…”
“…and we had to kill them off using milk…”
“Okay you have a point.”
-
Outside on the roof of Las Noches, MC, Eon and Dre were currently scouting the vast sands, laminated by the perpetual moonlight. Each man standing and gazing, there eyes piercing through the dark sky.
“I think Zaki is apart of this whole situation were in…” MC said looking off.
“Why would he be involved, he could get his whole family dishonored if he is involved in this…possibly killed.” Eon said somberly.
“What would he possibly gain from this anyway?” Dre asked interested.
“Well my family was supposed to host “that” event before we all got attacked.”
“You mean the noble party, I was hoping this year would have better than last year’s part, it was so boring.” Dre said exasperated.
“You know that they can’t have fun since they have the thirty foot stick up there as-”
“I know too well Eon and Dre, I said I think Zaki is involved because he was insulted at the party because we came late and stole the spotlight away from him…and his conquest of Antarctica.” MC said with a slight tone of boredom.
“They know that was a lie right?” Eon hoped the other two would answer yes.
“They’ll believe anything as long as you have a golden covered book made about it.” Dre said while making a face.
-
In the Hollow forest Zam, Kusari and Ashido were currently heading toward and exit, Ashido deciding to join them after being persuaded by them. As they reached the exit they passed a area covered in ice daggers and blood.
“What could have done this?” Ashido wondered out loud.
“Oh its just Rotrum, nothing to worry about.” Kusari said brushing it off like it was nothing.
“Rotrum?”
“He is a comrade to us…that likes to stabs things…mainly MC…” Zam said
What would your Squad's motto be in this Bleach-Club Universe?
Burn all your fears and despair, Blaze through all your limits and never let your dreams die out. Raze all your doubts and raise your self to shine, let your Soul Blaze gloriously, leaving the land melted with your legacy.
Blue was running through the halls of Las Noches to Grimmjow’s room, to pester and fight him.
Which reminds me, does Grimmjow know of Blue?
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
Hikari was standing outside of it with Grimmjow, the two seemly talking about something, something that made them both smile.
Err, what?
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
“Looks like it babe.” Grimmjow said still grinning like a maniac.
Err, what?
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
“He's at it again…” Dre said smirking.
“He's your responsibility, Eon…” Ilp said to Eon.
“Not anymore, he's a Captain now…” Eon said flat out.
“I’m actually starting to regret voting for him now. If he dies for his recklessness, I won’t be surprised.” Mc said coldly.
“Harsh.” Arc simply spoke while nibbling on a cookie.
“He's not that bad…” Ilp tried to defend.
“He can… be a handful most of the time, but he isn’t hopeless.” Eon said with his eyes closed.
“Well, while he's having fun, what should we do?" Dre asked.
“We all know what happens eventually, so really we can just sit around and watch the show. Aizen needs to die, that’s all that matters.” Said MC.
“…At the cost of…” before Ilp could finish Eon spoke up.
“Just sit around!? That’s out of character for yo,u MC. What are you thinking?” Eon questioned.
“I’m thinking of exactly who those others are and if there is any connection between them and our current predicament.” MC coldly without even looking at any of them.
‘Why so lukewarm and solid?” Arc asked.
“Lukewarm and solid?” Ilp asked, confused.
“Well usually he's hot and energetic, but now he's cold and lethargic. So he is lukewarm and solid.” Arc explained.
The room was silent for a few brief moments, eventually Eon broke it. “So what's the strategy for you guys?”
“I’ll learn all I can from gathering information from Ulquiorra.” Ilp said slightly smiling.
“I guess I’ll go heal Blue…” Arc said nibbling on a cookie.
“Then I guess I’ll-” Before Eon could finish, MC spoke up.
“That sounds like a plan, Eon, Dre help me check something out?” MC asked in the tone of voice that meant; no have no choice now follow me.
Arse
There were some grammatical mistakes which I quickly fixed (mainly "he's" where "he is" sounded too robotic, and commas where they were needed).
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
‘So she bit off the head of a chocolate rabbit and made it rain chocolate for three days, at least Golde was happy…”
And now I want chocolate...
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
“I think Zaki is apart of this whole situation were in…” MC said looking off.
Is Zaki another character?
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
“Why would he be involved, he could get his whole family dishonored if he is involved in this…possibly killed.” Eon said somberly.
“What would he possibly gain from this anyway?” Dre asked interested.
“Well my family was supposed to host “that” event before we all got attacked. I think Zaki is involved because he was insulted at the party because we came late and stole the spotlight away from him…and his conquest of Antarctica.” MC said with a slight tone of boredom.
But if he is, then why would he send ALL of the Gotei 13, which would be a bad idea unless you wanted to take over Soul Society. And Antarctica.
Reminds me why I review every story?
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
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Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Rotrum: it seems i'm always getting hit or yelled at there. but whatever.
Flash: you're right. he did forget the Hennessy.
What would your Squad's motto be in this Bleach-Club Universe?
You need not do anything.
Remain sitting at your table and listen.
You need not even listen, just wait.
You need not even wait, just learn to be quiet, still and solitary.
And the world will freely offer itself to you unmasked.
It has no choice, it will roll in ecstasy at your feet.
-Franz Kafka
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Finally, it's out!
I like the first proper page, how it parodies the first chapter with his profile.
And the big splash page. Naming them right to left, someone who's quite short (not likely to be Rukia, considering what the chapter's about), Chad, Ishida, Tatsuki, someone, someone, a person who I can't tell (if the hair was darker and more brown, I would go with Keigo) and then probably Mizuiro (who actually might be the first guy). The eyes on the sword looks cool, but I don't think we'll be able to figure out who it is.
Bleach movie 3 promo page...
Oh, so Yuzu and Karin are joining middle/high school? How old would they be about now, anyway? If it's not unsimilar to British system, they'd be around 14 now.
Soy sauce, lol.
Oh wow, I felt really sorry for Ichigo, not knowing about the spirits there...
And silly Isshin... When are we going to find out about him?
17 months? Which means the whole thing from him meeting Rukia to him losing his powers was less than a year.
"I told Inoue, Chad, and the others about my Shinigami powers" assuming he meant the losing of his powers, didn't they know about it before? And if its about his powers in general, that should be more specific to Tatsuki, Mizuiro, Keigo and maybe Chizuru.
Now with the Shinigami focus on Karin... I have a feeling Urahara may get involved again. Speaking of which, what happened with him? Is he still in his shop? What about him and the Vaizards, or Soul Society? Is he still looking over Ichigo (which I would be surprised if he wasn't) and why isn't he helping him? Surely a man like Urahara is brilliant enough to let him see Spirits again.
Good ol' Keigo.
"Ichigo, did you bring Tekken?!" I lol'd
Well, it looks like Ichigo knows how Ishida felt in the Bount Arc...
I wonder why Rukia hasn't helped with the Hollows. It was her post before she got replaced with Afro-San, so logically she would get it back (unless she declined). And knowing that Ishida is both a school student and a Quincy (and that Afro-San is useless) the best thing to do would be for her to go back.
Oh yeah, Keigo knows. It's weird with him talking about it.
In the theft scene, who's calling out "Mizuiro"? Looking at some of the later panels, it seems like it might be Ichigo, but he wouldn't be shouting and he doesn't look like he's saying anything in that panel.
Pwnage.
So for saving the day you get free ramen? ****YEAH
"You're surprisingly wary" who was this to?
Looks like this guy is the one to watch out for. Now for the obligatory rhetorical questions:
Who is he, how does he know Ichigo, what is he going to do with the badge?
Overall, an interesting start to the season "hey, look! our main character ISN'T special anymore!" But I still would have liked to know more of what happened to Urahara/some of the surviving Arrancar/blah.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Originally Posted by arceus03
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