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    Quote Originally Posted by cookies kill you View Post
    The Zanpaktou took me forever to think of until I got some work done on my character who is still in progress.

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    Looks good, I'll add this to the "first post".
    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Does this sound accurate to you guys? ILP and MC
    Sounds about right XD
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    I'm still pretty new, so I can't say much about it. Maybe if someone made a fanfic with all of us in it?
    We already have quite a lot of fanfics. Some of them more like the "official" canon, than not.

    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    You are missing something :P
    1) you have a close(ish) relationship with ILP due to your unique status as one of his DNA donors
    In "Official canon", I am a normal soul, but self-modified.

    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    hm, so a canon is your relationship in reference to others? i did not realise this. hm. because I am lazy, here is my version:
    Not technically, no. In the case of this club, because it's almost entirely just characters, no plot, that's really the only thing we can talk about. But it's not the case for all canons.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    2) creator, father and mentor of ILP. Good strong, close, relationship. we argue on many philosophical and non philosophocal points but agree that science trumps all. both very intelligent and when we work together, are unstoppable.
    You aren't my creator, father or mentor in official canon Maybe in your own fanfic, but not outside.
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    and i dont know what a 4.00 is, i am Canadian....
    do americans get their grades out of 4? O.o
    Arc is Malaysian.
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    Chapter one

    Could you make a fanfic page, to put all of your chapters on, so it can be added to the library in the first post.

    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    She twirled at a high speed, moving faster and faster. He stood there waiting for his moment. Her shinigami robes were now moving in a circular motion, exposing her legs and thighs. Her speed had gotten such that she was looked like a spinning top. There were no discernible features, just the blurry black colour that was her robes and the bright red-pink colour tat was her skin. She started to float in an upwards motion, like a helicopter rising. That's when he jumped in, using the palm of his hands as a platform, he thrust her upwards. He heard her spinning voice say something, but it sounded incomprehensible at ground level. All of a sudden, blue streaks of lightning flashed all around him. As the lightning show continued, he began to chant.

    “Seeping crest of turbidity. Arrogant vessel of lunacy! Boil forth and deny! Grow numb and flicker! Disrupt sleep! Crawling queen of iron! Eternally self-destructing doll of mud! Unite! Repulse! Fill with soil and know your own powerlessness! HADO NUMBER NINETY! BLACK COFFIN!” he called out.

    The sky turned a dark purple. The blue lightning was still flashing through the air as large black boxes with protruding black spears grew and joined together around a group of practise dummies before cracking down fully on them. As the sky cleared, the dummies were reduced to ashes. He held his hands in bed like manner, as if he were carrying a child, and she fell into them.
    That was cool.

    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “YOUR ROYAL HANDSOMENESS???? IS THAT WHAT YOU HAVE THEM CALL YOU NOW???” she yelled.
    XD Of course You only ever actually need one ?. Any more, and it's redundant.

    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    She sat at the seat next to his and waited for the food to arrive. She had no clue what he had ordered but she suspected it would have something to do with seafood (he was obsessed).
    Mmmm seafood.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “How dare you show me such pathetic results!” Master Charizard the fourteenth yelled at his son.
    Ohboy.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “SECOND HIGHEST IS NOTHING! YOU HAVE THAT BRAT DAUC NARCISSE BEATING YOU!!!” lava spewed from the fathers mouth, scorching all that it touched.
    Again, the extra ! are uneccesary.
    And I like the imagery of laba spewing from his mouth XD.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “Have you realized your shikai yet?” his father threw in.

    “No father. Iroriryuu does not like to speak unless necessary, so I have a feeling he won't tell me until I am in a high pressure battle,” the son responded.
    Hmm, I'm not sure, but doesn't knowing your zanpakutou's name lead to shikai immediately?
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “Hold your hand over him like this,” his mother sweetly patted him on the head. He looked up at her big brown eyes and nodded. He looked down at the dying bird and held his hands over it just as his mother had instructed.

    “Now dear, release the energy you have inside you and pray for the bird's health,” she whispered. He did as she suggested, a blue energy surrounded the bird, it started crowing happily as it began to feel healed. Suddenly the bird started thrashing around and the boy isntantly stopped – scared and confused.

    His mother hugged him to stop him shaking.
    D'aww, this whole scene was so sweet Does it help I imagined Unohana instead?
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “Tomorrow, you will start shinigami school. I know you are starting late, but I have taught you everything those kids have already been taught. Have Tsukibana, hopefully she will be as kind to you as she has to me. Remember son, you are a member of the Southern royal family. Make our family name proud, Arceus the Third,” she spoke, smiling lovingly. A tear escaped her eye as he took the zanpaktou from her.
    Ah, this'll be good.
    My only question is why Dre wasn't also introduced? It'd make sense, since he's the 4th Royal, unless you have something "special" planned for him
    Quote Originally Posted by minchan View Post
    ILP- The CDs I got are:
    Morning Musume's 45th single, "Maji Desu Ka Ska!"
    and
    Sakura Gakuin's first album, "Sakura Gakuin 2010 Nendo ~message~"
    Obviously they're both J-Pop. =D
    Ah, cool I thought you were talking about Bleach music
    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    Speaking of that, I added my backstory in my profile. Since both MC and you are my childhood friends XD That should fit with both. IDK. XD I never said I was from a noble family. I think Dac first established that in his fic, and MC has continued using that. Yeah. lol.

    Oh, good luck for your Biology test. I freaking LOVE Biology

    American and British. lol. And ILPy distorts the space-time continuum anytime they want to meet, so it's not a big deal
    1. Oh, really? I thought you mentioned it yourself. Oh well XD It suits for you to be a Royal. Not entirely sure if I count as a "childhood" friend...
    2. Thanks, I think I did okay. Probably not an A*, though. And if you do my biology tests, I'll do all your maths test? 8D?
    3. That can work, too.
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    Ok, I am done with chapter two.
    before i can do chapter 3, i need this from people:
    -who you would say your closest friend in the bleach club is
    - if you have any preferences as to what your zanpaktou revelation story should entail
    - NEW MEMBERS, PLEASE SEND ME ANY INFORMATION ABOUT YOURSELF THAT YOU WANT INCLUDED IN THIS STORY OR I WILL MAKE UP A PERSONALITY FOR YOU

    Chapter 2


    “YOU DO NOT GO AROUND KIDNAPPING BABIES WHEN YOU ARE BORED!!!” she was yelling at the top of her lungs. Her face was red, her normally blue eyes seemed to have caught fire and her fist was repeatedly hitting his stomach, causing him to cough up blood.

    “WHAT KIND OF MORON STEALS A BABY??? DO YOU EVEN REALISE WHAT HIS POOR MOTHER MUST BE GOING THROUGH???” her voice had connected with her spiritual energy. The weather had changed to reflect this. The wind was howling, it was raining, hailing, and lightning storms were occurring all at the same time. He was getting tired of undergoing this punishment, so he stood up and caught her hand before it hit the exact same area of his stomach again.

    “I am going to feed the baby,” he murmured and walked off. She decided to let her anger out on a couple of trees before following him. He had a lab built into the back area of his mansion. It was the only part of the house that his servants were not allowed into, and had never seen before. When they had been ten, they built the lab together. It took an entire six months, but after tirelessly working daily, they had finally accomplished it.

    “Why are you keeping the baby in your lab?” she asked, suddenly suspicious. He did not reply, instead, as soon as they walked into the lab, he called out a command.

    “Computer please transform the lab into Kida anger mode” he said. Immediately all the walls in the lab rearranged themselves so that all sensitive equipment was shielded, then padding suddenly popped out on every visible surface, and punching bags dropped from the ceiling.

    “Bring the baby out,” he called out. A table rose from the floor. On it was a cute baby boy, each arm and foot shackled to its respective corner of the table, and his chest and abdomen, cut open for the world to peek into. Kida flipped. As she preoccupied herself with punching, kicking, and aiming kido spells at random objects, he went to the baby and continued tinkering with it. He had removed a few organs and inserted metallic replicas that fulfilled more than the original function. After he was done playing around, he sewed up the babies body.

    “Computer, open DNA modifier,” he commanded once more. One of the pillars of the lab lost its padding. He went over to the pillar and opened the door. He then put the baby inside and programmed its DNA to modify and incorporate both his DNA and Kida's. As the machine began working, he turned to Kida and motioned towards a seat. The now tired Kida did not have the strength to say no, and so sat down, exhausted, but still able to throw dirty looks at him.

    “I wanted a baby, so I got one,” he said simply, and smiled. She did not even hesitate, she pointed at him and started chanting.

    “Wait, before you attack me, his real mother is dead. She was murdered by bandits. I was collecting information on the way poor people behaved when I saw the bandits go in to attack. I stopped them from killing the baby, but it occured to me that they were bandits after they killed the mother; hence why I did not save her. So I decided that since it was due to my slow mind that the mother is not alive, I would take this baby and raise him as my own. I think I heard her call him ILP. I wonder what that stood for? Ah well, I will keep the same initials for this child. ILP Narcisse. I think that has a good ring to it.” he commented.

    “But you are only seventeen,” she spat.

    “So are you,” he replied.

    “I DON'T HAVE A BABY TO RAISE!!!” she yelled.

    “It's not my fault that you aren't ambitious,” he responded calmly. She dove for his face. He ran.

    -

    “You are staring Shinigami school? That's awesome!” Master Charizard the fifteenth hugged Arceus the third. It was an awkward three second hug, but the bromance was there. Master Charizard noticed something awkward sticking out of his friend's shinigami robes and cracked up.

    “You do realize that you don't wear your zanpaktou down there....” He cackled. Arceus blushed and removed it from the awkward position immediately. Master Charizard immediately showed him how to put it on and where to plaace it for quick access.

    “Sir, your ride is ready,” a servant bowed to the two royals. They were taking a carriage from Master Charizard's flaming castle to the school.

    -

    “Hurry up! We don't want to be late for school!” Zameric tugged at his good friend Kusari. The carriage had been waiting outside his house for a full fifteen minutes. Kusari always took a long time to finish eating breakfast.

    “Why do my parents have me carpool with you?” he muttered. Kusari smiled impishly and hopped into the carriage. Zameric followed.

    -

    The Shinigami school had been started by the captain commander of the special forces, Golde. Her savage beauty was known throughout Serebii, her incredible fairness was a beacon to all. She always stood at the door of the school welcoming every student to another day of classes.

    Many of the students came from the poorer regions of Serebii, having accidentally discovered their abilities. Few of them had katanas and even fewer of them had been able to afford the pricey shinigami robes and would have to wait till graduation to receive a full free set.

    Four carriages pulled into the yard, scaterring pedestrian students. Out of one stepped Dré Flashy, the fastest teenager in all of Serebii. He followed a secret technique passed down through the Western royal family generations that increased speed ten-fold the normal flash step. Out of the second stepped Dauc Narcisse and Kida Ookami, two of the top students in the academy. Out of the third carriage stepped Master Charizard the fifteenth and Arceus the third. Arceus' hands were shaking with nervousness. Master Charizard put a hand on his shoulder to calm him down.

    Finally, out of the fourth carriage stepped Zameric and Kusari. Zameric's family were the weapon makers for majority of Serebii, and for the royal family especially. Each zanpaktou held by the royal family members (and Kida) was forged in a secret location with the best steel by his family, and they were pricey.
    Kusari was a lesser noble, but a noble all the same. He stepped out with a distinct air of excitement.

    The four pillars of Serebii acknowledged one another with a quick nod of the head, and went off to their classes.

    Golde smiled, she could taste the power off of each one of them. This week would be an interesting one....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    Ok, I am done with chapter two.
    before i can do chapter 3, i need this from people:
    -who you would say your closest friend in the bleach club is
    - if you have any preferences as to what your zanpaktou revelation story should entail
    - NEW MEMBERS, PLEASE SEND ME ANY INFORMATION ABOUT YOURSELF THAT YOU WANT INCLUDED IN THIS STORY OR I WILL MAKE UP A PERSONALITY FOR YOU
    1. That's a hard one to answer, since I regard everyone to be very close friends to me. You can decide who.
    2. What do you mean by zanpakutou revelation story? How we first found our abilities, when we firts met our spirits? Be specific.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “YOU DO NOT GO AROUND KIDNAPPING BABIES WHEN YOU ARE BORED!!!” she was yelling at the top of her lungs. Her face was red, her normally blue eyes seemed to have caught fire and her fist was repeatedly hitting his stomach, causing him to cough up blood.
    Oh wow, how did the conversation reach that? XD. And it looks like I'll be introduced very, very soon.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “WHAT KIND OF MORON STEALS A BABY??? DO YOU EVEN REALISE WHAT HIS POOR MOTHER MUST BE GOING THROUGH???”
    Again, only need one ?
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    “Computer please transform the lab into Kida anger mode” he said. Immediately all the walls in the lab rearranged themselves so that all sensitive equipment was shielded, then padding suddenly popped out on every visible surface, and punching bags dropped from the ceiling.
    Aha, awesome.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    On it was a cute baby boy, each arm and foot shackled to its respective corner of the table, and his chest and abdomen, cut open for the world to peek into.
    Wait, why is the baby already cut up? Wouldn't that allow for infections to come in? And it'd be impossible for the ENTIRE lab to be completely sterile, considering they didn't do anything special.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “Computer, open DNA modifier,” he commanded once more. One of the pillars of the lab lost its padding. He went over to the pillar and opened the door. He then put the baby inside and programmed its DNA to modify and incorporate both his DNA and Kida's.
    Why do you refer to the baby as "it"? "and programmed its DNA"
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “Wait, before you attack me, his real mother is dead. She was murdered by bandits. I was collecting information on the way poor people behaved when I saw the bandits go in to attack. I stopped them from killing the baby, but it occured to me that they were bandits after they killed the mother; hence why I did not save her. So I decided that since it was due to my slow mind that the mother is not alive, I would take this baby and raise him as my own. I think I heard her call him ILP. I wonder what that stood for? Ah well, I will keep the same initials for this child. ILP Narcisse. I think that has a good ring to it.” he commented.
    Which makes me a reminder of when you were wrong.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “It's not my fault that you aren't ambitious,” he responded calmly. She dove for his face. He ran.
    Typical Da.c
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    “You are staring Shinigami school? That's awesome!” Master Charizard the fifteenth hugged Arceus the third.
    D'awww... Why do I have the imagery of them being, like, 8 years old XD
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    It was an awkward three second hug, but the bromance was there. Master Charizard noticed something awkward sticking out of his friend's shinigami robes and cracked up.

    “You do realize that you don't wear your zanpaktou down there....” He cackled. Arceus blushed and removed it from the awkward position immediately. Master Charizard immediately showed him how to put it on and where to plaace it for quick access.
    Ahaha, of course you'd put a joke like that in.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    “Hurry up! We don't want to be late for school!” Zameric tugged at his good friend Kusari. The carriage had been waiting outside his house for a full fifteen minutes. Kusari always took a long time to finish eating breakfast.
    Again, like they're 8 years old or something XD.
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    Four carriages pulled into the yard, scaterring pedestrian students. Out of one stepped Dré Flashy, the fastest teenager in all of Serebii. He followed a secret technique passed down through the Western royal family generations that increased speed ten-fold the normal flash step. Out of the second stepped Dauc Narcisse and Kida Ookami, two of the top students in the academy. Out of the third carriage stepped Master Charizard the fifteenth and Arceus the third. Arceus' hands were shaking with nervousness. Master Charizard put a hand on his shoulder to calm him down.
    Looks like Dre doesn't get a "backstory" like the others.
    I'm guessing that most of the other members you don't know too well, so you're waiting for their profiles to come in?
    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    Golde smiled, she could taste the power off of each one of them. This week would be an interesting one....
    So it's more of a slice-of-life style, almost (is there a more correct term instead?), rather than a proper "oh em gee a baddy!"
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    I couldn't help but just laugh at your fic, Dauc. XD
    I'll send you some of the info you requested, later.

    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    Chapter one


    “Your royal handsomeness! Are you ok?” a maid ran out and grabbed him.
    “YOUR ROYAL HANDSOMENESS???? IS THAT WHAT YOU HAVE THEM CALL YOU NOW???” she yelled. She being his best friend and semi-lover, Kida Ookami.

    -

    “How dare you show me such pathetic results!” Master Charizard the fourteenth yelled at his son. His anger shook the room. The servants had fled the premises for their own safety. The teen bowed his head down, partially in fear, mainly in disgust.
    First thing I laughed at, and I laughed hard.

    Also laughed at the name a bit.

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    [spoiler=manga]D'aww, this whole scene was so sweet Does it help I imagined Unohana instead?
    I almost did.

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    Chapter 2


    First Scene (omitted due to length)

    -

    “You are staring Shinigami school? That's awesome!” Master Charizard the fifteenth hugged Arceus the third. It was an awkward three second hug, but the bromance was there. Master Charizard noticed something awkward sticking out of his friend's shinigami robes and cracked up.

    “You do realize that you don't wear your zanpaktou down there....” He cackled. Arceus blushed and removed it from the awkward position immediately. Master Charizard immediately showed him how to put it on and where to plaace it for quick access.

    -

    “Why do my parents have me carpool with you?” he muttered. Kusari smiled impishly and hopped into the carriage. Zameric followed.

    -

    Finally, out of the fourth carriage stepped Zameric and Kusari. Zameric's family were the weapon makers for majority of Serebii, and for the royal family especially. Each zanpaktou held by the royal family members (and Kida) was forged in a secret location with the best steel by his family, and they were pricey.
    Ok, my reaction to the first scene was...
    Dauc is snatchen your babies up!
    Tryin' to modify them, so y'all better hide your kids
    Hide your babies
    Hide your kids
    Hide your babies
    and hide your kids, 'cos he's modifying everybody out there.

    Also, I predicted that ILP will be Dauc and Kida's love child of science.

    Woo for hilariously awkward zanpakuto/penis jokes!

    We've got to carpool to save the environment!

    Capitalism at work... >D



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    ah!
    I'm back, my computer died, needed a new CPU fan and box.

    so what did I miss? hehe^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by cyndagirl View Post
    ah!
    I'm back, my computer died, needed a new CPU fan and box.

    so what did I miss? hehe^^
    It would be good to know from date you missed everything. =)


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    Yaas finally finished with my soul reaper. Theres probably more I'll add to this guy just haven't really came up with it yet.

    Name: Mugen Ouja

    Gender: Male

    Rank/Squad: 5th seat of squad 11

    Zanpakutou: Shikai: Hiper Corte

    Inner World: woods with a big waterfall and a bridge that goes across the stream of water http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs44/i/20...y_abec1989.jpg this

    Eyes: Brown

    Hair: Shoulder length brown

    Height: 6 feet

    Physical Age: 18

    Other Physical Appearance: Well built no facial hair

    Personality: Nice person who can get cocky he has great pride and courage very loyal unless betrayed he can also go crazy during battle since he loves it so much

    Primary Hand: Right


    Battle Stats:

    - Offense: 80

    - Defense: 80

    - Mobility: 90

    - Kidou/Reiatsu: 0

    - Intellect: 70

    - Stamina: 80

    District of Origin: Zaraki district

    Backstory: He barley knew his father but he was a former captain of the soul society Mugen was left and he had to fight to survive growing up with nothing with his young age Mugen was named a legend of the Zaraki district he does not know who Kenpachi is but he has heard stories about him which he some day plans to meet and fight Kenpachi some day.
    Last edited by cookies kill you; 20th May 2011 at 12:01 AM.

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    ah yes, the end of April it died,

    but anyway, I'm back and my fringe club is approved^^

    hehe^^

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    ^
    ^
    Wow. 430 is a lot for a 5th seat.

    And why the heck are you ripping off my Zanpakuto's name??? D= RAWR.

    Seriously, Tsuyokin is my Zanpakuto. =/


    Okay looks like it was just a mistake and you edited it out. GOOD. XD

    Oh yeah, before I forget... ILP!!! YOUR RESPONSES ARE TOO LONG!!! XD XD XD

    ...I have a new resolve. To catch up to the Bleach anime before I finish high school! Which would be the end of next month. I'm about 10 episodes behind, and I want to be only 1-2 behind at any time from now on... Unless I have a super important exam or something. XD I WILL CATCH UP TO THE ANIME. DESUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ...That thought made me hyper again. =D

    Cookies, you better run or you may be missing a limb. I crave sugar when I'm hyper... XD
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    Welp! I decided to pull all my information onto one page, no gif's because this is srs business.
        Spoiler:- Profile:


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    Quote Originally Posted by ILP

    We're Mad.
    Our 1st Squad Captain has an insane sweet tooth
    Our 2nd Squad Captain is some super-ninja
    Our 3rd Squad Captain is part wolf
    Our 4th Squad Captain bakes cookies and cuts up anyone who makes him mad
    Our 5th Squad Captain is some party-crazy army man
    Our 6th Squad Captain is calm, prideful and pervy
    Our 7th Squad Captain seems to be, barely, the only sane one
    Our 8th Squad Captain is missing
    Our 9th Squad Captain is a shy, respectful, boring and pervy
    Our 10th Squad Captain hates some of our OWN captains
    Our 11th Squad Captain is a sadistic maniac
    Our 12th Squad Captain is an insane nerd
    Our 13th Squad Captain is sleeping

    That's Gotei 13

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zameric View Post
    Also, I predicted that ILP will be Dauc and Kida's love child of science.
    I'm okay with this
    NO DA.C THIS DOES NOT MEAN YOU ARE MY DAD
    Quote Originally Posted by cyndagirl View Post
    ah!
    I'm back, my computer died, needed a new CPU fan and box.

    so what did I miss? hehe^^
    I think Zam is better at answering that question than I am XD
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    I agree.
    Quote Originally Posted by cookies kill you View Post
    Yaas finally finished with my soul reaper. Theres probably more I'll add to this guy just haven't really came up with it yet.

    Name: Mugen Ouja

    Gender: Male

    Rank/Squad: 5th seat of squad 11

    Zanpakutou: Shikai: Hiper Corte

    Inner World: woods with a big waterfall and a bridge that goes across the stream of water http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs44/i/20...y_abec1989.jpg this

    Eyes: Brown

    Hair: Shoulder length brown

    Height: 6 feet

    Physical Age: 18

    Other Physical Appearance: Well built no facial hair

    Personality: Nice person who can get cocky he has great pride and courage very loyal unless betrayed he can also go crazy during battle since he loves it so much

    Primary Hand: Right


    Battle Stats:

    - Offense: 100

    - Defense: 80

    - Mobility: 100

    - Kidou/Reiatsu: 0

    - Intellect: 70

    - Stamina: 80

    District of Origin: Zaraki district

    Backstory: He barley knew his father but he was a former captain of the soul society Mugen was left and he had to fight to survive growing up with nothing with his young age Mugen was named a legend of the Zaraki district he does not know who Kenpachi is but he has heard stories about him which he some day plans to meet and fight Kenpachi some day.
    Looks good to me, except the stats. You have 430 as a total, but you're only a 5th seat. Iirc, Min only has 410. And really, you shouldn't be having any 100 stats, and probably only one 90 stat.
    Quote Originally Posted by minchan View Post
    Oh yeah, before I forget... ILP!!! YOUR RESPONSES ARE TOO LONG!!! XD XD XD
    What do you mean, they're too long? Should I just spoiler my entire post?

    Also, added Blue's profiles to the "first post".
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    Sorry all switched to 400 I guess I just thought I could get away with it because of back story and I wanted to be 5th seed cause Yumichika also there are others who is over the 410 stats and are in my rank aswell just to let you know

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    Everything should be updated on the club as of last night. Probably misses something though. So let me know.

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    Blue. Your inner world sounds kinda creepy.

    ILP... Well uhh YES YOU SHOULD SPOILER IT ALL. XD jkjk But I think they're just long because you quote TONS of things in little blocks, which takes up extra space... And there's a lot of those posts from you in one page... XD I mean, the first one on this page, for example... It takes up the whole page, and when I page-down, it STILL takes the whole page. And AGAIN. It takes THREE and a half pages just for one post!!! XD

    And yeah, mine is only 410. I think around 380-430 is okay for a lt or 3rd seat but below that should be around 350-370, 400 at absolute most... I guess. I dunno though. I'm not good at this stuff. XD

    I think for fun, some time, I'll make up a fake profile, just to make the character super weak. Total of 60, 10 in each stat. And really crappy at everything. Just for the heck of it. XD

    Actually I'll start now:

    Fake Profile:

    Name: Ima Fayl (Pronounced: "I'm a fail")
    Gender: Female
    Zanpakuto: None. Uses a stick.
    Inner world: Nothing. Just black. Nothing there at all.
    Rank: None. Kicked out of the academy for failing too much.
    Personality: Complete jerk, and a total idiot.
    Primary hand: None. Can't write, hold a sword, or anything.
    Stats:
    Offense: 10
    Defense: 10
    Mobility: 10
    Kido: 10
    Intel: 10
    Stamina: 10
    Total: 60/600
    Backstory: Was kicked out of her home somewhere in the Rukon district, because she was a complete jerk and failing at everything. Then was kicked out of the academy for failing. Now fights hollows with a stick for fun.

    Yeah I have no life so I made that. That profile has NOTHING to do with my character at all. Just so you know. XD But feel free to use her in fics if you want. Just because I think it might be amusing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
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    Arc is Malaysian.

    Does it help I imagined Unohana instead?

    1. Oh, really? I thought you mentioned it yourself. Oh well XD It suits for you to be a Royal. Not entirely sure if I count as a "childhood" friend...
    2. Thanks, I think I did okay. Probably not an A*, though. And if you do my biology tests, I'll do all your maths test? 8D?
    Copycat! I mean, great minds think alike 8D

    Yep, but my current college uses American system of grading.

    Awwwww. So shweeeeeeet >3<

    1. Nah, I never did. XD Why not? D8
    2. Sure, provided you have learned Calculus? XD

    Quote Originally Posted by Da14u.C View Post
    before i can do chapter 3, i need this from people:
    -who you would say your closest friend in the bleach club is
    - if you have any preferences as to what your zanpaktou revelation story should entail
    1. ILPy Though if he is a created child in your fic, then we'd be friends much, much later on.
    2. I did send one for Golde, I think, but since you made mine a hereditary zanpakto, then go ahead and devise. I'd like to see how you'd come up with mine XD

    Quote Originally Posted by cookies kill you View Post
    Name: Mugen Ouja

    Inner World: woods with a big waterfall and a bridge that goes across the stream of water http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs44/i/20...y_abec1989.jpg this
    Mugen Utsuro

    Nice pic, but I imagined a much shadier wood, with lots more trees.

    Quote Originally Posted by cookies kill you View Post
    Sorry all switched to 400 I guess I just thought I could get away with it because of back story and I wanted to be 5th seed cause Yumichika also there are others who is over the 410 stats and are in my rank aswell just to let you know
    It's a gradual increment, not a specific total. Like Cell, he previously had 390 stat when he was a 5th seat, but since now he's a Captain, I think his stat is somewhere around 470~ ish.


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    I'll take that challenge for two reasons. One. I'm bored. Two. I won't write another chapter for a while Not that any of you care T_T

    I'm gonna stay out of Dac's portrayel of my character...


    I got bored so I gave her epic ower
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    Quote Originally Posted by Northern Lights View Post
    I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>

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    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post

    Arc is Malaysian.
    i know. but his school follows the american system.

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post

    Could you make a fanfic page, to put all of your chapters on, so it can be added to the library in the first post.
    sure. when I am not feeling lazy

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post

    That was cool.
    hehe, thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post

    XD Of course You only ever actually need one ?. Any more, and it's redundant.
    whoops, been a while since i wrote a fanfic, i forgot about that

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    Mmmm seafood.
    I have eaten shrimp three days in a row. the stuff is addictive

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post

    Hmm, I'm not sure, but doesn't knowing your zanpakutou's name lead to shikai immediately?
    No clue to the answer to that oficially, but not in my fic

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    D'aww, this whole scene was so sweet Does it help I imagined Unohana instead?
    I figured someone needed a kind backstory

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    Ah, this'll be good.
    My only question is why Dre wasn't also introduced? It'd make sense, since he's the 4th Royal, unless you have something "special" planned for him
    Dre isn't online much, so I know he probably won't read the story, hence, no real point in wasting space on him.

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    1. That's a hard one to answer, since I regard everyone to be very close friends to me. You can decide who.
    2. What do you mean by zanpakutou revelation story? How we first found our abilities, when we firts met our spirits? Be specific.
    how you found your abilities and when you first met your spirits are pretty much the same thing. your powers awaken when you meet your spirit. if they are different for you, then send that to me.

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    Wait, why is the baby already cut up? Wouldn't that allow for infections to come in? And it'd be impossible for the ENTIRE lab to be completely sterile, considering they didn't do anything special.
    explained in chapter 3

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    Looks like Dre doesn't get a "backstory" like the others.
    I'm guessing that most of the other members you don't know too well, so you're waiting for their profiles to come in?

    So it's more of a slice-of-life style, almost (is there a more correct term instead?), rather than a proper "oh em gee a baddy!"
    yeah, i am waiting for people to send me their profiles. Rex will appear in chapter 3 and subsequent chapters. anyone else who wants to make a debut needs to send me a PM about themselves.
    (except Cell and Rotrum who are oldies that I will eventually add in)

    and yup, its more of a slice of life style kind of thing. I figured it would be a fun thing to see people growing up and awakening to their abilities.

    Quote Originally Posted by Zameric View Post
    I couldn't help but just laugh at your fic, Dauc. XD
    I'll send you some of the info you requested, later.
    awesome

    Quote Originally Posted by Zameric View Post

    Ok, my reaction to the first scene was...
    Dauc is snatchen your babies up!
    Tryin' to modify them, so y'all better hide your kids
    Hide your babies
    Hide your kids
    Hide your babies
    and hide your kids, 'cos he's modifying everybody out there.

    Also, I predicted that ILP will be Dauc and Kida's love child of science.

    Woo for hilariously awkward zanpakuto/penis jokes!

    We've got to carpool to save the environment!

    Capitalism at work... >D
    WOOT CAPITALISM!!!!
    i should also point out that scientific babies are the way of the future!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post


    1. ILPy Though if he is a created child in your fic, then we'd be friends much, much later on.
    2. I did send one for Golde, I think, but since you made mine a hereditary zanpakto, then go ahead and devise. I'd like to see how you'd come up with mine XD

    awesome! I will either release that story in chapter 4 or 5. I hope you like it


    I'm gonna stay out of Dac's portrayel of my character...

    I missed you and I am gonna have so much fun with your character. you are one of the club babies right?

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    LOLOLOLOL rotrum you MUST be bored. XD XD XD XD XD

    But aren't Arrancars already "dead" and therefore not subject to Death Notes? Maybe I shouldn't question technicalities about manga universe crossovers... Those generally don't work too well. XD

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    Chapter 3


    “YOU SLAPPED OUR BABY!” she screamed. The man turned around, his entire face consumed with rage and drunken anger. He grabbed a knife.

    “No, please don't...” she whispered, so terrified that her voice was going. He plunged the knife straight into her heart. There was a baby lying against the wall, crying at the top of its lungs. There was a clear red hand print across its face. The mother crawled to the baby.

    “My dear Vizard... please be safe,” she finally choked on her own blood and died. The baby continued bawling at the top of its lungs. The man turned his attention to the baby, but before he could do anything, the room had become eerie. A pale male teenager had appeared, his blue hair shimmered in the pale light. His red eyes flashed dangerously. Shadows had started dancing. The man looked terrified. He dropped the knife and ran, but one cannot escape their own shadow.

    Blood spilt everywhere.

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    “All of you, divide yourselves into pairs and spar. I want to grade you on your stance after half a semester in my class,” Rex Trainer chuckled. He was a big and muscular man, however, no one was scared of him due to his hearty sense of humour and friendly face.

    “Kusari, you're with me,” Zameric stated has he ran to attack his friend. Kursari was quick on his feet, entering a matrix-like dodge as Zameric horizontally swept his wooden katana. Kusari then countered with a kick as Zameric was recovering from his move, however, Zameric had his feet spread out in order to lower his centre of gravity, therefore preventing him from falling off balance. Kusari blinked in surprise. Zameric used that opening and thrust the wooden katana, smacking Kusari right in the centre of his chest. Zameric smiled. Victory was his.

    Master Charizard the fifteenth stood over Arceus the third. He had beat him with three powerful blows. Two that knocked the wind out of Arceus each time he parried, and one that sent him crashing to the ground. He looked around, surveying the people still in battle.

    Kida rushed towards Dauc. Dauc dodged. She side stepped and aimed a kick at him while simultaneously doing a sweep of her wooden katana to block any chances he had of running away. He quickly lay on the ground to dodge both and stood up again. He did not have his wooden katana on him, it lay discarded on the floor, and he made no attempts to return Kida's attacks.

    “You are going to get the beatdown of your life!” she yelled.

    “But... I am like eye candy, why would you want to do such to me?” he replied. She ran at him, he ran away.

    “Shameful Dauc! Fight like a man!” Rex boomed from across the room. Dauc stopped running for a second, turned around and shot a glare around the room, and then continued.

    “You heard him, stop and fight like a man!” Kida ordered.

    “You are such a man!” he replied. Kida, who was already annoyed, now sped up. Dauc sped up as well. In seconds, Rex was accross the room, grabbed Dauc by the collar and propped him up on a coat hook. Kida smiled gleefully and dropped her wooden katana. She was going to beat him senseless. She landed five punches on him, when he suddenly burst, and a weird sticky gooey substance had landed on everyone. Kida gasped, she had seen this goo before.

    “NO ONE MOVE! This is Dauc's special case of exploding motion sensor goo. It will ignite the second you move your body,” she explained. She was trying to control her anger. How could I be so clueless, I know that Dauc hates kendo class and so skips it most of the time!

    -

    “Captain Commander Golde, we have a problem. Apparently, Dauc skipped class again...” her lieutenant reported. Golde sighed. Everytime Dauc skipped class, there was a problem, and it normally involved a life or death situation.

    “Which teacher is currently in charge at this moment?” she asked

    “Rex Trainer,”

    -

    “Strike and burst Bakugeki Kakuhan!” Rex called out. The wooden katana that he kept at his side shattered and a normal katana appeared. The zanpaktou was clear one moment, then the air around it seemed to blurr, and as one looked on, they saw two zanpaktous instead of one, each then curled intself up into two balls and a string shot out from the back of each of them, connecting with the index finger on each of Rex's hands respectively.

    “Shiku bumu!” he called out. The yo-yo's extended to the end of their string and started spinning around creating a vortex that sucked in all the goo. Rex then turned and faced a window. People moved out of the way as a massive explosion was released, shattering the window and saving everyone.

    -

    “WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!” Kida yelled. Dauc smiled and pointed at a sleeping ILP.

    “He was feeling sick, I suppose an effect of me leaving him open. Luckily I strengthened his organs, so now his blood is filled with tons of diseases and viruses. A simple cut would cause a plague!” Dauc smiled gleefully. Kida glared.

    “He was crying, I could not leave my baby,” Dauc defended himself.

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    Hello Cookies and Shadow. (I'll call you that)
    Welcome to the Bleach Club. I'm CyberBlaziken, Lieutenant of Squad 7. Call me Kai.
    Nice to meet you!

    And Cookies, i like you Zampakuto but a little more information couldn't kill

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cell View Post
    It would be good to know from date you missed everything. =)


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