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Arceus inboxed me, and this, here is a fight involving him. I hope he likes it
You should probably make a library page, so all of your chapters can be found in one place.

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“I am a shinigami, and I am the next head of one of the four pillars of Serebii,” he whispered to himself as encouragement.
I like this bit.

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His mind had suddenly gone clear, all the doubts, worries and anxiety had disappeared. It was like somebody shot down every butterfly in his stomach.
Ah, so all the nerves have gone. Hmm

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The men surrounded him and jumped to attack, however the body of water was swirling to rapidly and under high pressure that those who used weapons had their weapons sucked in, and those that did not had the bones in their arms (or legs) broken by the intense water pressure. Arceus changed stance and all the weapons Tsukibana had sucked in were spat out, hitting and killing a few of the men instantly.
Awesome.

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“Wise young prince,” the gaunt man said. He pulled out a card from his deck. “Hm... a earth four,”
All right, here's my thought pattern.
He has a deck of cards, and we know for certain that one card is "Earth 4". We know that a normal deck of cards has 4 suits Heart/Spade/Diamond/Club, numbers 2-10, Jack, Queen, King and Ace. Just speculation, but it's possible that the 4 suits are now Earth/Wind/Fire/Water, with each of the 13 numbers doing something different (King and Ace are likely the most powerful).

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The man thn pulld out another card, but he did not announce which it was. Rapid blasts of chilling air hit Tsukibana, slowing down her movements and reducing the water pressure being created. He then pulled out another card and the ground below turned into quicksand.
Alright, so we know now that he doesn't need to say it. Though by law of attacks, if you don't say it, the attack gets weakened. The rapid blasts of chilling air is probably a Wind suit, and the quicksand is probably the Earth suit again.

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“Let's end this. King,” the man said. He pulled out a King from his deck of cards. A giant air dragon came to life and released a chilling roar.
Okay, so he didn't say the suit, but he said the "number". As I thought, the King is (one of) his strongest card (he used it to end the fight). Though we know that he doesn't need to say the suit either, it makes me wonder how it affects the strength. If saying the full name makes it stronger (or rather, not saying the full name makes it weaker), then sure saying "X King," would help end the fight quicker.

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He could hear the wind dragon roaring, however, the roar stayed constant.
Again, Wind. It's possible that he only has 2 suits, wind and earth, since we haven't seen any fire or water.

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Every second increased the difficulty he felt in breathing then it suddenly occurred to him what was happening – the dragon was creating a vacuum around him.
Though I don't know how it would work (probably something to do with pressure), wind might cause the vacuum. So the vacuum isn't an attack itself, but it's the result of his attack.

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It was ironic that they had the same plan to kill one another.
But cool.

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He counted twenty-eight happily.
Hmm, that seems slightly off. As a medic, I think Arceus wouldn't enjoy seeing people die, even if they are bad men (unless they reached the point where they don't deserve any mercy, such as shooting a baby). Looking at it, they were probably just following orders (and there could be quite a few reasons why they continued fighting).

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It then suddenly hit him, he had defeated forty people and taken out their powerful leader. He fainted.
Aha, aww.