The Bleach Club...2.

**I like Pokemon (...)** · 20th May 2011, 7:25 PM

Originally Posted by Golde

Everything should be updated on the club as of last night. Probably misses something though. So let me know.

Quite a few of us have made new pages that have our zanpakutou, shinigami profiles, and other profiles (Arrancar and Fullbring). It's all in the post I made, so just copy and paste that

Originally Posted by minchan

ILP... Well uhh YES YOU SHOULD SPOILER IT ALL. XD jkjk But I think they're just long because you quote TONS of things in little blocks, which takes up extra space... And there's a lot of those posts from you in one page... XD I mean, the first one on this page, for example... It takes up the whole page, and when I page-down, it STILL takes the whole page. And AGAIN. It takes THREE and a half pages just for one post!!! XD

XD Sorry. I prefer to quote shorter chunks, so it's easier for people to know which bit I'm replying to. Unless it's Arc's or NL's post, because Firefox makes the bold/italics/colour/font/etc. tags work instead of me seeing them.
And I'm TAKING OVER THE CLUB!

Originally Posted by minchan

Fake Profile:

Name: Ima Fayl (Pronounced: "I'm a fail")
Gender: Female
Zanpakuto: None. Uses a stick.
Inner world: Nothing. Just black. Nothing there at all.
Rank: None. Kicked out of the academy for failing too much.
Personality: Complete jerk, and a total idiot.
Primary hand: None. Can't write, hold a sword, or anything.
Stats:
Offense: 10
Defense: 10
Mobility: 10
Kido: 10
Intel: 10
Stamina: 10
Total: 60/600
Backstory: Was kicked out of her home somewhere in the Rukon district, because she was a complete jerk and failing at everything. Then was kicked out of the academy for failing. Now fights hollows with a stick for fun.

Yeah I have no life so I made that. That profile has NOTHING to do with my character at all. Just so you know. XD But feel free to use her in fics if you want. Just because I think it might be amusing.

So she's like the Magikarp/Sunkern? XD

Originally Posted by arceus03

Yep, but my current college uses American system of grading.

1. Nah, I never did. XD ~~Why not? D8~~
2. Sure, provided you have learned Calculus? XD

Ah, alright.

1. ~~Because you're a Royal, I'm from upper-Rukongai, and you became a member much earlier than me, so you became a Shinigami before me, canon wise.~~
2. I know some of it. The rest I can learn by doing 8D

Originally Posted by rotrum

Spoiler:- Prompt: Ima Fayl:

That was just... Pure amazing.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

Dre isn't online much, so I know he probably won't read the story, hence, no real point in wasting space on him.

how you found your abilities and when you first met your spirits are pretty much the same thing. your powers awaken when you meet your spirit. if they are different for you, then send that to me.

So by that logic, I should get the most screentime 8D? Or the third, after MC and NL.

I can't really be bothered to think of it right now. You can make it up.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

I missed you

and I am gonna have so much fun with your character. you are one of the club babies right?

If by that, you mean he's one of the youngest, then yes. I'm not sure how some of the newer members are ranked, in terms of age. I know Rotrum is the second youngest Captain, just a few weeks older than Blue.
Spoiler:- Chapter 3:

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“YOU SLAPPED OUR BABY!” she screamed. The man turned around, his entire face consumed with rage and drunken anger. He grabbed a knife.

My first thought was "wait, Da.c slapping a baby?" but when you said "drunken anger", I knew it couldn't be you.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

A pale male teenager had appeared, his blue hair shimmered in the pale light. His red eyes flashed dangerously. Shadows had started dancing. The man looked terrified. He dropped the knife and ran, but one cannot escape their own shadow.

Blood spilt everywhere.

Cool.
Who is the teenager, though? Vizard is the baby, and Blue's zanpakutou spirit doesn't look like that.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

She landed five punches on him, when he suddenly burst, and a weird sticky gooey substance had landed on everyone. Kida gasped, she had seen this goo before.

This is so Urahara.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

She was trying to control her anger. How could I be so clueless, I know that Dauc hates kendo class and so skips it most of the time!

Which is why MC is top of that class.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“Captain Commander Golde, we have a problem. Apparently, Dauc skipped class again...” her lieutenant reported. Golde sighed. Everytime Dauc skipped class, there was a problem, and it normally involved a life or death situation.

I like how Golde is more like the Head Master.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“He was feeling sick, I suppose an effect of me leaving him open. Luckily I strengthened his organs, so now his blood is filled with tons of diseases and viruses. A simple cut would cause a plague!” Dauc smiled gleefully. Kida glared.

I don't know too much about diseases and viruses. But what I do know is a (basic) understanding of how the immune system works. I don't know how it can be improved by something like strengthened organs, or robot pieces, unless that's more for the diseases and viruses to have not as strong an effect on him?

**Lucario0708** · 21st May 2011, 2:41 AM

new chapter now

Previously:
After capturing Ryaku, the undead shinigami, an old friend of Jaku's, The Doctor, appears, asking for help, when the crew goes to find and shut down a strange signal that is attracting an army of hollows, a strange enemy appears, who calls himself the Shi No Tenshi, but his real name is Gekido no karitori, or as he calls himself, Zero, for a currently unknown reason. The Doctor leaves, and Zero kills Rouga and engages in battle with an enraged Jaku, now showing his hollow mask

Spoiler:- Chapter 5: The Blazing Reaper:

questions, comments, criticism, etc. welcome

**VizardBlue** · 21st May 2011, 3:21 AM

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

Spoiler:- My comments on the chapter:

My comments are in bold, and what are your responses to the previous chapter's comments made by me, Kusari, etc? You never replied.

**Da14u.C** · 21st May 2011, 4:32 PM

Hey guys before I post chapter 4, I want to mention three things:

1) In my previous chapter, at the beginning, the mysterious blue haired man was supposed to be VizardBlue's zanpaktou spirit, however, the day i released the chapter was the day that she made golde change her zanpaktou details on the first page, I am, however, too lazy to rewrite that scene, so just imagine her new zanpaktou spirit in that place

2) I am going to be doing a lot of discovery stories of how people discovered their abilities. If you give me creative liscence, I hope you like it. if you have a specific story you wnat me to use, please send it to my inbox.

3) if you are a new member and i do not know you, send me details about yourself to my inbox or you will not be included in my fic.

random sidenote: PKMN trainer rex, what did you think of chapter 3?

Chapter 4

Arceus the third sat down in the mansion garden. He was sitting down on one of the benches built as memorabilia dedicated to a dead relative. He was not sure which of his ancestors benches that he was sitting on because there were vines wrapped around the seat.

The Southern Royal Family had long given up on landscapers. Their abilities manifested in the healing and growth of all living things nearby, and that included the plants in their garden, as such, any attempts to weed, shape plans, trim grass, were all for naught as the next day, they had grown back fully.

Arceus unsheathed the zanpaktou his mother had given him days before, for the first time. He did not like violence, and so was scared to hold such a dangerous weapon in his hand. He carefully placed it on the ground directly in front of him and looked at it, inspecting every detail.

It was easy to tell that this sword had been build a long time ago. The extraordinarily large hilt, the extremely long blade and the type of metal used. Most zanpaktou's today are forged with a metallic alloy that is extremely difficult to break but very light. This zanpaktou was very heavy, forged from pure iron, though little flecks of shininess hinted at some attempt to mix the iron in with gold, an element that was even heavier than iron. The guard was shaped in the form of a water droplet, and a beautiful silky blue thread, the same length as the hilt, extended from the hilt.

Arceus marvelled in its beauty, and though it was a chore lugging it around, he knew it would be an asset once he had fully learnt how to move with it.

He wanted to meet Tsukibana, and so he closed his eyes, crossed his legs, and began to meditate. In his mind, he imagined the sound of running water, his families heirloom strength. He let the sound of water overpower him. It grew louder, and louder, overtaking all other senses. All he could smell was salty seawater, all he could taste was fresh spring water, all he could hear was a waterfall, and all he could feel was a hot geyser. When his senses had started relaxing, he opened his eyes and was overjoyed.

He was in an amazing underwater world. He could see fish swimming everywhere, mermaids waiving as they darted by, sharks hunting, dolphins playing... it was like a fairytale.

“Welcome to Shiroda your majesty,” a watery voice said to him. He turned around and saw the outline of a beautiful woman. He smiled gently.

“I rule here?” he asked. She nodded. Each movement she made was hard to follow because she would become one with the water before constantly reshaping herself and reappearing. He felt the water tug at him, and he made the assumption it was her pushing him in a certain direction. That's when he noticed his body. He was no longer a man. He still had the same upper torso, but his bottom half had somehow moulded together and formed a series of octopus-like tentacles. He followed her urgings and swam (trying to change the colour of his tail as he had learnt octopuses could do).

They eventually came to a castle. He looked at the writing on the outside but realized he could not read it.

“What language is that in?” he asked. The watery woman looked at him before responding.

“Its the language they used in the time I was forged,” she responded. Arceus gasped in shock and quickly stopped swimming. He planted his eight tentacles on the ground and bowed in a Japanese fashion.

“I humbly apologize for not having recognized you. Tsukibana, please forgive me,” he said. She smiled and the temperature of the water seemed to rise.

“You have your mother's eyes,” she started. She stopped and changed her train of thought, “Follow me,”

Arceus followed her into the castle where he saw an entire audience of mer-people and fish sitting in the stands of what looked like a giant auditorium. Everything looked forged from gold, though there was algae and coral growing everywhere. He looked towards the centre of the auditorium and saw two large chairs, one slightly bigger than the other. They were both gold as well, however, these were free of algae and coral growth. In fact, they looked polished to a shine. There was a large red cushion on each of them and two small side tables, each holding a crown-shaped ornament.

“Shall we take our seats?” she asked. He blushed but followed.

She sat on the slightly smaller seat, allowing her body to fully form. Her beauty could cause a rampage. Her eyes were almond shaped, each iris as blue as the ocean. Her pale skin shone in the water ambiance. Her breasts were carefully covered by strands of her long jet black hair that had now become visible. Her lower torso was that of an octopus as well. Arceus took a second to marvel in her beauty before blushing at the sight of her bare chest. He turned away modestly and fumbled into his seat.

The auditorium had gone quiet. No one was speaking. A sea-horse floated to Arceus' side and looked at him.

“He wants you to reach into his pouch,” Tsukibana whispered. Arceus reached int the giant sea-horses pouch and pulled out a tablet. It was written in the same incomprehensible script as the writing they found on the outside of the castle. He looked toward Tsukibana, terrified. She smiled and pointed at a dictionary she had stashed in the sea-horse's pouch as well.

Arceus then began to translate the tablet, and rearranged things to sound comprehensible. It looked like a declaration or promise of some sort. After three hours of searching through the dictionary and writing down the translation to each and every word on the tablet, he stood up. The background noise that had recommenced died down once more.

“I, Arceus the Third of the Southern Royal Family of Serebii, that represents the Southern Royal Pillar of Serebii, would like to graciously take up the position as ruler of Shiroda. I hereby promise to...” and the speech went on for an hour. The entire congregation looked fascinated because they had never heard such a language before. Tsukibana was holding in a giggle. She did not have the heart to tell him that no one understood the modern dialect of their language.

“Thank you,” Arceus finally ended. Once the audience was sure he had finished, they burst into song. Arceus could not understand a word, but smiled nonetheless. Tsukibana lifted the crown off the side table and placed it omn his head, then waited expectantly. He realised she wanted him to do the same to her, and so placed the crown upon head. There was a distinct loudness as cheering was taken up.

“It is now time to teach you the way of our people, and move you to the hospital to treat some patients...” Tsukibana said, dragging him off.

-

Arceus woke up in bed, his zanpaktou in on the pillow next to him. He looked around and saw his mother sitting patiently in a corner with a hot cup of tea.

“Mummy?” he whispered. She smiled and hugged him.

“How was Shiroda? She asked. He smiled. He then picked up Tsukibana and got out of the bed.

“Cherish Tsukibana,” he whispered. He watched as the blade liquidized and turned into a stream of gushing water. The water then started to revolve around him. He smiled joyfully.

“Shiroda was awesome mummy,”

**I like Pokemon (...)** · 21st May 2011, 6:29 PM

Spoiler:- chapter 4:

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

1) In my previous chapter, at the beginning, the mysterious blue haired man was supposed to be VizardBlue's zanpaktou spirit, however, the day i released the chapter was the day that she made golde change her zanpaktou details on the first page, I am, however, too lazy to rewrite that scene, so just imagine her new zanpaktou spirit in that place

Ah, okay.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

Arceus unsheathed the zanpaktou his mother had given him days before, for the first time. He did not like violence, and so was scared to hold such a dangerous weapon in his hand. He carefully placed it on the ground directly in front of him and looked at it, inspecting every detail.

I like how you've given Arc the more... timid, pacifistic character. It gives him plenty of room to grow as a shinigami, and as a person. I'm assuming that, much, MUCH later, he'll probably have to kill someone. Perhaps in rage. That always gets the quiet ones out of their shells.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

It was easy to tell that this sword had been build a long time ago. The extraordinarily large hilt, the extremely long blade and the type of metal used. Most zanpaktou's today are forged with a metallic alloy that is extremely difficult to break but very light. This zanpaktou was very heavy, forged from pure iron, though little flecks of shininess hinted at some attempt to mix the iron in with gold, an element that was even heavier than iron. The guard was shaped in the form of a water droplet, and a beautiful silky blue thread, the same length as the hilt, extended from the hilt.

Nice bit of history.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

He wanted to meet Tsukibana, and so he closed his eyes, crossed his legs, and began to meditate. In his mind, he imagined the sound of running water, his families heirloom strength. He let the sound of water overpower him. It grew louder, and louder, overtaking all other senses. All he could smell was salty seawater, all he could taste was fresh spring water, all he could hear was a waterfall, and all he could feel was a hot geyser. When his senses had started relaxing, he opened his eyes and was overjoyed.

~~Excuse me while I pop over to the bathroom.~~
so i figured it was necessary to make arc's as cute as possible“Its the language they used in the time I was forged,” she responded. Arceus gasped in shock and quickly stopped swimming. He planted his eight tentacles on the ground and bowed in a Japanese fashion.

“I humbly apologize for not having recognized you. Tsukibana, please forgive me,” he said. [/quote]
D'awww
^I'll be saying that a lot

Originally Posted by Da14u.c

“I, Arceus the Third of the Southern Royal Family of Serebii, that represents the Southern Royal Pillar of Serebii, would like to graciously take up the position as ruler of Shiroda. I hereby promise to...” and the speech went on for an hour. The entire congregation looked fascinated because they had never heard such a language before. Tsukibana was holding in a giggle. She did not have the heart to tell him that no one understood the modern dialect of their language.

Aha, that was quite nice.
One thing that did kind of stand out to me, was that he said "I, Arceus the Third". In his official bio, he says that he is the third captain from his family. ~~Just felt like saying that~~

Originally Posted by Da14u.c

Arceus woke up in bed, his zanpaktou in on the pillow next to him. He looked around and saw his mother sitting patiently in a corner with a hot cup of tea.

I was half expecting you to say that he wet himself XD

Originally Posted by Da14u.c

“Shiroda was awesome mummy,”

Everyone say it: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

**Zameric** · 21st May 2011, 7:09 PM

Nice chapter, Dauc. I lawled at the merman Arc.
I'm eager to see what you'll do for me.

Originally Posted by cookies kill you

Battle Stats:

- Offense: 80

- Defense: 80

- Mobility: 90

- Kidou/Reiatsu: 0

- Intellect: 70

- Stamina: 80

Sorry, almost forgot to make your battle data chart.
Here it is...

**PKMN Trainer Rex** · 21st May 2011, 8:42 PM

Spoiler:- Chapter 3:

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

Chapter 3

“YOU SLAPPED OUR BABY!” she screamed. The man turned around, his entire face consumed with rage and drunken anger. He grabbed a knife.

“No, please don't...” she whispered, so terrified that her voice was going. He plunged the knife straight into her heart. There was a baby lying against the wall, crying at the top of its lungs. There was a clear red hand print across its face. The mother crawled to the baby.

“My dear Vizard... please be safe,” she finally choked on her own blood and died. The baby continued bawling at the top of its lungs. The man turned his attention to the baby, but before he could do anything, the room had become eerie. A pale male teenager had appeared, his blue hair shimmered in the pale light. His red eyes flashed dangerously. Shadows had started dancing. The man looked terrified. He dropped the knife and ran, but one cannot escape their own shadow.

Blood spilt everywhere.

Pretty graphic, but cool.
-

“All of you, divide yourselves into pairs and spar. I want to grade you on your stance after half a semester in my class,” Rex Trainer chuckled. He was a big and muscular man, however, no one was scared of him due to his hearty sense of humour and friendly face.
Sweet, I have a last name. If you call 5'5'' big, but I did model the character after me. So I'm a little chunky in the stomach.

“Kusari, you're with me,” Zameric stated has he ran to attack his friend. Kursari was quick on his feet, entering a matrix-like dodge as Zameric horizontally swept his wooden katana. Kusari then countered with a kick as Zameric was recovering from his move, however, Zameric had his feet spread out in order to lower his centre of gravity, therefore preventing him from falling off balance. Kusari blinked in surprise. Zameric used that opening and thrust the wooden katana, smacking Kusari right in the centre of his chest. Zameric smiled. Victory was his.

Master Charizard the fifteenth stood over Arceus the third. He had beat him with three powerful blows. Two that knocked the wind out of Arceus each time he parried, and one that sent him crashing to the ground. He looked around, surveying the people still in battle.

Kida rushed towards Dauc. Dauc dodged. She side stepped and aimed a kick at him while simultaneously doing a sweep of her wooden katana to block any chances he had of running away. He quickly lay on the ground to dodge both and stood up again. He did not have his wooden katana on him, it lay discarded on the floor, and he made no attempts to return Kida's attacks.

“You are going to get the beatdown of your life!” she yelled.

“But... I am like eye candy, why would you want to do such to me?” he replied. She ran at him, he ran away.

“Shameful Dauc! Fight like a man!” Rex boomed from across the room. Dauc stopped running for a second, turned around and shot a glare around the room, and then continued.

“You heard him, stop and fight like a man!” Kida ordered.
Sounds like something that I would actually say. But more smartical.

“You are such a man!” he replied. Kida, who was already annoyed, now sped up. Dauc sped up as well. In seconds, Rex was accross the room, grabbed Dauc by the collar and propped him up on a coat hook. Kida smiled gleefully and dropped her wooden katana. She was going to beat him senseless. She landed five punches on him, when he suddenly burst, and a weird sticky gooey substance had landed on everyone. Kida gasped, she had seen this goo before.
Did I just help bully you lol?

“NO ONE MOVE! This is Dauc's special case of exploding motion sensor goo. It will ignite the second you move your body,” she explained. She was trying to control her anger. How could I be so clueless, I know that Dauc hates kendo class and so skips it most of the time!

-

“Captain Commander Golde, we have a problem. Apparently, Dauc skipped class again...” her lieutenant reported. Golde sighed. Everytime Dauc skipped class, there was a problem, and it normally involved a life or death situation.

“Which teacher is currently in charge at this moment?” she asked

“Rex Trainer,”
So was in charge? AWESOME!!

-

“Strike and burst Bakugeki Kakuhan!” Rex called out. The wooden katana that he kept at his side shattered and a normal katana appeared. The zanpaktou was clear one moment, then the air around it seemed to blurr, and as one looked on, they saw two zanpaktous instead of one, each then curled intself up into two balls and a string shot out from the back of each of them, connecting with the index finger on each of Rex's hands respectively.

“Shiku bumu!” he called out. The yo-yo's extended to the end of their string and started spinning around creating a vortex that sucked in all the goo. Rex then turned and faced a window. People moved out of the way as a massive explosion was released, shattering the window and saving everyone.
I handled that LIKE A BAAUSS!
-

“WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!” Kida yelled. Dauc smiled and pointed at a sleeping ILP.

“He was feeling sick, I suppose an effect of me leaving him open. Luckily I strengthened his organs, so now his blood is filled with tons of diseases and viruses. A simple cut would cause a plague!” Dauc smiled gleefully. Kida glared.
Now you sound like Mayuri, hahahaha
“He was crying, I could not leave my baby,” Dauc defended himself.

Comments/commentary/thoughts in bold.

Originally Posted by DAUC

) I am going to be doing a lot of discovery stories of how people discovered their abilities. If you give me creative liscence, I hope you like it. if you have a specific story you wnat me to use, please send it to my inbox.

As long as it doesn't make me look too stupid, I'm fine with it.

**Cell** · 21st May 2011, 10:44 PM

Spoiler:- Chapter 7: Remembrance:

To clarify on the recent happenings:

The people who send in a profile and added a yes to 'can I kill you off' have almost nothing to worry about.

However, if you have put 'no, you can not' are certain of dying in a gruesome way.

**cyndagirl** · 22nd May 2011, 12:23 AM

oh, I'd love to know where you go to make one of those battle data charts^^

I've always just written it down but didn't seem very neat, or official at the very least.

**minchan** · 22nd May 2011, 1:16 AM

Wahhh so many people posting fanfics!!! I feel bad that I've had writers block since around 8th grade... 4 years later you'd think I'd have come up with SOMETHING by now!!! XD XD XD

Well I watched 2 more episodes of Bleach. Almost caught up... XD Just finished 314...

Just 8 more to be up to date. =D Well by the time I get around to it, it'll be like 9 or 10, but still, not too bad, considering last week I was about 20 behind. XD

**Da14u.C** · 22nd May 2011, 1:19 AM

Since MC15 has been bugging me a lot for this, I will post it now.

Chapter 6 is dedicated to Zamerc's release story and very heavily involves vizard blue

Chapter 5

“What exactly is the plan boss?” a short raspy man asked.

There were thirty five hollow in the desert having a meeting. Every single one of them was a different, shape, size and had different abilities. Their only similarities were, as hollows, they had fragments of skulls on and around them, and they each had a hole somewhere on their body. However, two stood out for many reasons. One was the fear around them. The surrounding hollows feared and admired the two special hollows. Secondly was the more humanoid form they had taken. If one did not spot the hole that one carried in the middle of his forehead, or the ankle bracelet he “wore” that was clearly made of bone, one would have thought him completely human. His shorter companion had the hole in the very centre of his palm and had a ring that was seemingly made of bone. The third difference was the two humanoid hollow carried swords in sheaths with them. The final difference being, the humanoid hollow wore cloths.

The taller man had his blond hair cover the hole in his forehead. He wore long white trousers and white leader shoes on his upper torso, he wore a white blazer that he left open, revealing his muscular bare chest. His name was Puto.

The shorter man had on what looked like a long, all covering night gown. He opted not to wear shoes, and over his hands, he wore white gloves.

“We are going to destroy one of the pillars of Serebii tonight, disappear, come back again, destroy another, until all four are destroyed.” the taller man stated. The shorter man looked towards the sky and decided it was time.

“Lets start with the Eastern pillar.” the shorter man said as he opened the gateway to the shinigami world of Serebii.

-

The Charizard family always ate dinner in the parents' bedroom. This was because Madame Charizard the fourteenth was a sickly. Any disease that could be caught, she had caught, and so was always under strict bed rest orders from her doctor. Master Charizard the fourteenth believed in whole family dinners and so insisted that Master Charizard the fifteenth eat with them in their bedroom.

This was another normal night. Father and son were not talking to one another and the mother lay in bed smiling at her two conflicting men. They had two maids nearby who would run in to refill glasses, take away used plates, and make sure that Madame Charizard's bed remained unsoiled. The two men sat on chairs at opposite sides of the table, and the large bed was placed at the lengthy side of the table.
They could hear a siren. Master Charizard the fourteenth stood up immediately and ran out to see what was going on. Master Charizard the fifteenth remained with his mother. He saw the two maids run out and two guards run in as protection. Master Charizard the fifteenth had his zanpaktou under his chair (because that's where he had dumped it upon his arrival home).

The window shattered and ten hollows crawled into the room. The guards had on them electrified poles that they used to attack. They jumped to be ready, but one of the hollows had the ability to release termites from its body. These termites devoured one guard, whereas another hollow shot out a beam from its mouth that disintegrated the other guard.

Master Charizard the fifteenth turned around and saw his mother coughing up blood. He ran to her, but she pushed him away.

“Rise with anger, destroy with rage. Unleash your power Oyu!” she called. She then dissolved into a coughing fit. The hollows smirked.

“A child and a sick woman, this will be easy,” one had the audacity to say. Three hollows went to attack her and she smiled dizzily. All of a sudden, hot pressured water burst through the ground and pushed the three hollow backwards. Madame Charizard then stood up, using the bed post to lean against, and that's when one noticed a dragon shaped bracelet around her arm, and its eyes were glowing red.

“Mummy, relax, I can handle these guys,” Master Charizard the fifteenth soothed. He then turned around, incredibly angry and unsheathed his zanpaktou.

“Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat! Bakkudo number nine, strike!” Master Charizard the fifteenth cast upon all the hollow. The spell involved some complex hand movements, following which the hollow were engulfed in red and completely paralysed.

He then flash stepped around the room at a blinding speed and finally settled by his mother. The room instantly erupted with blood as each of the died, then disappeared into nothing.

“Take me to your father,” she commanded.

“But mum -” he started. She gave him a glare so deadly, his insides curled. With her leaning against him, they moved towards the outside of the compound where the guards and his father were fighting a lot more hollows. As soon as they stepped out, however, they noticed that the hollow army was moving back.

The guards started screaming and blood erupted from them as they were slashed by an unseen force. Master Charizard the fifteenth heard a loud BOOM sound and next to him was a blond haired man. He smiled cruelly and lifted his zanpaktou, and got blasted by a hot geyser just bursting from the ground.

Madame Charizard burst into fits of coughing after attacking.

“You dare attack my family?” a deadly voice echoed. Master Charzard the fourteenth seemed to grow as his rage unconcealed itself. Lava started dripping from his mouth, his eyes caught fire, “you have no idea who you are dealing with,”

Master Charizard the fifteenth knew that while his father carried around two katanas, only one of them was a zanpaktou, the other was a normal katana. The blond man smiled.

“Master Charizard the fourteenth of the Eastern Royal Family of Serebii. Pleased to meet you. I am Lord Kamakaze, and I shall be your oponent,”

As the man finished speaking, Master Charizard the fourteenth was next to him and delivered a powerful blow. The swipe of his katana killed three nearby hollow simply because of air pressure released. The blond man dodged and appeared behind Master Charizard the fourteenth. He them attempted to slice Master Charizard the fourteenth's face. Rather than dodging, Master Charizard the fourteenth grabbed the blade with his teeth and attempted to slice the surprised Lord Kamakaze i half. The humanoid hollow let go of his zanpaktou and jumped back, with a gash in his stomach area.

“You are as gruesome and powerful as the rumours say, I cannot play around with you. Explode Sekienton!” he called. The zanpaktou that Master Charizard the fourteenth held in his mouth melted into the ground. White clouds then burst forth from the ground and surrounded Lord Kamakaze.

“Erupt,” Master Charizard the fourteenth was so powerful, he felt no need to call out his zanpaktou's name. The katana in his right hand melted onto the ground, forming a pool of lava. The immense amount of spiritual energy now coming from Master Charizard the fourteenth killed off all the weaker hollows.

“I would suggest you wait until Lord Kamakaze is done transforming,” a short man said. He had appeared out of nowhere and had his zanpaktou around Master Charizard the fifteenth's neck.

“Bakkudo number eight, Repulse,” Master Charizard the fifteenth whispered. A blue ball appeared near the zanpaktou blade of his opponent and repelled him slightly. Using that moment of surprise, Master Charizard the fifteenth moved quickly. He appeared behind the humanoid hollow and attempted to slash him. Instead he slashed the air. He looked around, confused, and suddenly his torso erupted blood. The short man stood in front of him.

“You are too young to even dream of taking me on,” he muttered. Master Charizard the fifteenth fell to the floor. Using his zanpaktou to prop him up, he wobbled up.

“Hado number four, Pale Lightning,” he choked as he pointed towards the short man. He dodged the weak blue streak and appeared behind Master Charizard the fifteenth. He then stabbed his zanpaktou right through him. Master Charizard the fifteenth screamed in pain.

“Bakkudo number eighty one, Splitting void!” Master Charizard the fourteenth called out. A barrier appeared in front of his wife just as the short man tried to take her hostage. He had a look of such shock on his face when he smacked himself right into an invisible screen. A hot geyser then erupted below his feet and pushed him far away.

Master Charizard the fifteenth lay on the floor, losing consciousness fast. Just before everything went dark, he noticed all the hollows moving towards his mother as the clouds around Lord Kamakaze cleared. His father was too grossly engaged in battle to notice and the hollows were attacking the barrier.

-

“Weak!” a raspy voice said.

“What?” Master Charizard suddenly stood up. It took a moment for him to notice he wasn't hurt, nor was he at home. “Iroriryuu... we have met once before,” he commented.

The large serpentine dragon looked at him with disdain. His scales were as red as the sunset while his eyes were as golden as the sunrise. He was so massive that just one eyeball was the size of Master Charizard the fifteenth himself.

“Iroriryuu, you refuse to lend me your power, and I fought, I tried against such a difficult opponent!” Master Charizard angrily yelled. Iroriryuu said nothing. Furious, Master Charizard walked away and ended up exploring his surroundings.

He seemed to be in a large canyon with large mountains as far as the eyes could see. The lighting seemed to be that of a constant dusk, with everything bathed in an orange light. There was a large volcano randomly spaced amongst the range of mountains. Iroriryuu closed both his eyes, seemingly going to sleep. Master Charizard snapped.

Roaring, he ran towards Iroriryuu and started kicking, biting, punching and kneeing one of his scales. Iroriryuu opened one eye to witness the scene and simply budged slightly. That threw Master Charizard sideways, letting him hit the sides of the canyon walls painfully.

Master Charizard had never felt such rage in his life. His eyes started flaming, he roared once more, and this time, the volcano responded by erupting. The mountains started to shake and landslides started to occur. Ash filled the air as the volcano continued with the eruption before the wave of lava reached the canyon.

Iroriryuu smiled, baring his long, large, sharp pointed teeth.

“Maybe you do have some strength in you afterall. Ask me to burn,” the dragon commanded, then smacked Master Charizard with his tail.

-

“AHHHHHHHHHH!” Master Charizard the fifteeth suddenly screamed as he inhaled a break of air and felt the pain from his wounds. They seem to have been seared closed.

“MC, on thank goodness!” Madame Charizard called out. Master Charizard the fifteenth could actually see cracks on the barrier his father had created. When he glanced around for his father, he saw a blur that left a trail of lava, and a blur of white dancing around one another. He turned towards the twenty-something hollows remaining.

“Burn Iroriryuu,” he commanded, holding out his zanpaktou. His entire body ignited with flames. The flames moved around his body and hardened into metal, giving him light weight armour. One of his arms became encased in metal, forming a cannon shape, and the other arm, the arm that held his zanpaktou was covered in armour. The katana itself transformed into a claymore, and remained on fire.

He smiled as he felt the power.

“Furea-Tsugeki!” he called out as he held out his cannon-encased arm. A hundred fire balls shot out and destroyed every remaining hollow.

“Interesting kid,” the short man had reappeared. Master Charizard the fifteenth turned around to face him.

All of a sudden, the short man disappeared screaming as a puddle of lava below his feet sucked him in. Master Charizard the fourteenth walked by, seemingly unscathed and clapped his son on the shoulder.

“Well done,”

"Someone get Arceus," Master Charizard the fifteenth said before everything went black.

**minchan** · 22nd May 2011, 5:14 AM

I'm here to celebrate. NEXT WEEK IS THE TURN BACK THE PENDULUM ARC IN AMERICA!!! YAY!!! As it's my favorite arc, I'm SUPER EXCITED. Just wanted to drop a reminder for those in the USA who wanna watch... BECAUSE IT'S A SUPER AWESOME ARC. DESU.

...Yeah, that's really all for now. Sorry...!!

**I like Pokemon (...)** · 22nd May 2011, 2:23 PM

Originally Posted by Zameric

DOWNWARD FACING PACMAN!
Spoiler:- Chapter 7: Remembrance:

Originally Posted by Cell

The fight had ended quickly, Jaku had been overpowered by the hollow and was lying on the cold desert sand.

Missed moment of awesome?

Originally Posted by Cell

The moment Ryuu was going to move, the hollow's mouth opened. A light blue ball of energy was forming between the teeth and the released energy was warping around the sphere at a high speed.

CERO!

Originally Posted by Cell

A bright flash was visible for miles.

They know that they're there.

Originally Posted by Cell

Jaku was still lying on the sand, blood trickling out of his mouth. His golden armour was shining brightly, but the greaves had sunk into the sand. The cero had obliterated the lower part of Jaku's body just before the armour covered it. Slowly the armour started disappearing, turning back into the light it once came from. Leaving only the dying Jaku behind. Slowly some blood was dripping into the crater the cero had made.

Bloody.

Originally Posted by Cell

He shouted again, the piercing sound could be heard for miles.

They're screwed.

Originally Posted by Cell

Instead of hitting the hollow, the scythe had been grabbed by a hand made out of sand. A figure was walking towards the scene of battle.

OHNO

Originally Posted by Cell

"Hmm close but not quite, this shinigami has lost his former self to his hollow. He did not go down without a fight though... the though bastard took 5 hours to finally give the throne away. But the result isn't too bad."

5 hours, wow.

Originally Posted by Cell

Ryuu walked forward to Jaku's body and shrunk it down. He took out a small box filled with ice out of his pocked and put the mangled body inside it. "We should go back and report about this, plus I have some data to analyse."

Lol.

I want to know a bit more about the hierarchy of the antagonists (at least, what you've told us about). Because Ragi is strong, with his powers, and he clearly has SOME kind of power in that he told the trio to leave - without needing to consult to- or worry about - anyone of higher status.

Spoiler:- Chapter 5:

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

One was the fear around them. The surrounding hollows feared and admired the two special hollows. Secondly was the more humanoid form they had taken. If one did not spot the hole that one carried in the middle of his forehead, or the ankle bracelet he “wore” that was clearly made of bone, one would have thought him completely human. His shorter companion had the hole in the very centre of his palm and had a ring that was seemingly made of bone. The third difference was the two humanoid hollow carried swords in sheaths with them. The final difference being, the humanoid hollow wore cloths.

So we have 33 Hollows and 2 Arrancars? Interesting - they'll have to become more important later in the story. Arrancars are VERY rare naturally, and I think the only instance of that was Grand Fisher. And an organised group of Hollows is also rare, with the only instance of that happening, I think, was Barragan, and Hallibel's small group, unless I'm mistaken?

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

The taller man had his blond hair cover the hole in his forehead. He wore long white trousers and white leader shoes on his upper torso, he wore a white blazer that he left open, revealing his muscular bare chest. His name was Puto.

The shorter man had on what looked like a long, all covering night gown. He opted not to wear shoes, and over his hands, he wore white gloves.

What I don't get was why you gave the first one a name, but not the second one. Or why the second one was given a name as part of his description, as opposed to a self-introduction to another character, or when someone talked to him.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“We are going to destroy one of the pillars of Serebii tonight, disappear, come back again, destroy another, until all four are destroyed.” the taller man stated. The shorter man looked towards the sky and decided it was time.

I'm assuming the pillars are the Royals? Because I don't remember any ACTUAL pillars. I could be wrong.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

The Charizard family always ate dinner in the parents' bedroom. This was because Madame Charizard the fourteenth was a sickly. Any disease that could be caught, she had caught, and so was always under strict bed rest orders from her doctor. Master Charizard the fourteenth believed in whole family dinners and so insisted that Master Charizard the fifteenth eat with them in their bedroom.

Nice bit of information.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

They jumped to be ready, but one of the hollows had the ability to release termites from its body.

I don't like how you said "one of the hollows had the ability to release termites". It doesn't sound right. "One of the hollows released termites" seems to flow more easily; you're describing WHAT happened.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“Mummy, relax, I can handle these guys,” Master Charizard the fifteenth soothed.

I can see that MC would have a more... informal relationship with his mother. Like, while around his father, he would refer to her as "mother", or while talking to his father, he might even refer to him as "sir". I'm probably looking into it too much, though.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“But mum -” he started. She gave him a glare so deadly, his insides curled.

Why are all the mothers Unohana?

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

As the man finished speaking, Master Charizard the fourteenth was next to him and delivered a powerful blow. The swipe of his katana killed three nearby hollow simply because of air pressure released. The blond man dodged and appeared behind Master Charizard the fourteenth. He them attempted to slice Master Charizard the fourteenth's face. Rather than dodging, Master Charizard the fourteenth grabbed the blade with his teeth and attempted to slice the surprised Lord Kamakaze i half.

One thing that stuck out to me was that you use "Master Charizard the fourteenth" 4 times in that paragraph. You should switch it around, using other nouns. "The clan's head blah blah" or something.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“Erupt,” Master Charizard the fourteenth was so powerful, he felt no need to call out his zanpaktou's name.

Has any other shinigami been able to do this? Because if captain level shinigami can't do this, then you've made MC14 stronger than a captain.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

He looked around, confused, and suddenly his torso erupted blood. The short man stood in front of him.

Woah.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

He then stabbed his zanpaktou right through him. Master Charizard the fifteenth screamed in pain.

I can't tell if you dislike MC or not.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

Roaring, he ran towards Iroriryuu and started kicking, biting, punching and kneeing one of his scales. Iroriryuu opened one eye to witness the scene and simply budged slightly. That threw Master Charizard sideways, letting him hit the sides of the canyon walls painfully.

This was chibified in my head XD

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“MC, on thank goodness!”

Why did she call him that? Would a mother call her son by initials? Maybe "Charizard" on its own.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

“Burn Iroriryuu,”

You know, without a comma, Iroriryuu becomes the object of that sentence.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

His entire body ignited with flames. The flames moved around his body and hardened into metal, giving him light weight armour. One of his arms became encased in metal, forming a cannon shape, and the other arm, the arm that held his zanpaktou was covered in armour. The katana itself transformed into a claymore, and remained on fire.

You won't be giving him all of his powers from the very beginning, right? XD Because damn that'd be overpowered for an 8 year old.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

"Someone get Arceus," Master Charizard the fifteenth said before everything went black.

I like how he didn't ask for a doctor but for Arc.

**Da14u.C** · 22nd May 2011, 4:09 PM

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

So we have 33 Hollows and 2 Arrancars? Interesting - they'll have to become more important later in the story. Arrancars are VERY rare naturally, and I think the only instance of that was Grand Fisher. And an organised group of Hollows is also rare, with the only instance of that happening, I think, was Barragan, and Hallibel's small group, unless I'm mistaken?

nope. not mistaken

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

What I don't get was why you gave the first one a name, but not the second one. Or why the second one was given a name as part of his description, as opposed to a self-introduction to another character, or when someone talked to him.

to signify who was the important one

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

I'm assuming the pillars are the Royals? Because I don't remember any ACTUAL pillars. I could be wrong.

yup. They are.

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

I don't like how you said "one of the hollows had the ability to release termites". It doesn't sound right. "One of the hollows released termites" seems to flow more easily; you're describing WHAT happened.

it felt wierd randomly saying the hollow released termites. hm.... but you are right, what i wrote also sounds wierd. damn english language

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

Why are all the mothers Unohana?

most mothers are warm and nurturing and dead scary when you piss them off :P
but when i was designing his mother, I actually had Jūshirō Ukitake in mind and how he deals with his two warring 3rd seats

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

One thing that stuck out to me was that you use "Master Charizard the fourteenth" 4 times in that paragraph. You should switch it around, using other nouns. "The clan's head blah blah" or something.

yeah, i did not know how to switch it up. i suppose i could have used the "current" head and "future" head, but i feel like that would have overcomplicaed things

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

Has any other shinigami been able to do this? Because if captain level shinigami can't do this, then you've made MC14 stronger than a captain.

correct me if i am wrong, but i think general Yamamoto was able to do it. plus, i did not want to google japanese names for a zanpaktou name for MC14 :P

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

I can't tell if you dislike MC or not

its all love

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

This was chibified in my head XD

damn, now it is chibified in my head and so damn funny

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

Why did she call him that? Would a mother call her son by initials? Maybe "Charizard" on its own.

if she called her son Charizard, then what would she call her husband? plus, she is Madame Charizard, so i feel like it would be wierd if she called her son that. if she calls him by the initial MC, and her husband by Charizard, it varies things up

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

You know, without a comma, Iroriryuu becomes the object of that sentence.

Isn't it supposed to be the object of that sentence?

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

You won't be giving him all of his powers from the very beginning, right? XD Because damn that'd be overpowered for an 8 year old.

he is a teenager :| like everyone else in the story that is above the age of 15 except golde and pkmn trainer rex

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

I like how he didn't ask for a doctor but for Arc.

I felt it would add to the bromance i am trying to brew

**I like Pokemon (...)** · 22nd May 2011, 4:23 PM

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

to signify who was the important one

He was described first, so I would assume that he is more important. You could have thrown in "it was obvious that Puto was the leader of the two."

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

it felt wierd randomly saying the hollow released termites. hm.... but you are right, what i wrote also sounds wierd. damn english language

Yup. You get used to it, though.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

most mothers are warm and nurturing and dead scary when you piss them off :P
but when i was designing his mother, I actually had Jūshirō Ukitake in mind and how he deals with his two warring 3rd seats

XD Yeah, I was going to throw in that she was like the fusion of Ukitake and Unohana XD
I hope not all mothers are, well, motherly. That would get rather boring.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

correct me if i am wrong, but i think general Yamamoto was able to do it. plus, i did not want to google japanese names for a zanpaktou name for MC14 :P

Even still, he's now around the same level as the Captain Commander? You could have implied a release, instead of showing it. Like when MC15 comes back from his inner world, his father had already released and was kicking ***.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

damn, now it is chibified in my head and so damn funny

Chibification makes everything funnier!

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

if she called her son Charizard, then what would she call her husband? plus, she is Madame Charizard, so i feel like it would be wierd if she called her son that. if she calls him by the initial MC, and her husband by Charizard, it varies things up

She could also call him Charizard. I don't know much about how it works, when the father and son share the same name, but in my family at least, my mum rarely calls my dad by his first name.

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

Isn't it supposed to be the object of that sentence?

That means that Iroriryuu is being burned. I think of it as "Command, subject", or that the Zanpakutou is doing the verb (like Kagirinai-Kuuhaku is bending, not being bent).

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

he is a teenager :| like everyone else in the story that is above the age of 15 except golde and pkmn trainer rex

I know, I know, but it's funnier to think of him as 8 years old. I'll probably say it again, even though I know he's 15+

Originally Posted by Da14u.C

I felt it would add to the bromance i am trying to brew

LOL

**Eon Master** · 22nd May 2011, 6:53 PM

Originally Posted by ILP

Has any other shinigami been able to do this? Because if captain level shinigami can't do this, then you've made MC14 stronger than a captain.

Renji can do it. And not just with his command, he can do it wordlessly. See his battle against Byakuya. According to what Byakuya had inferred, you can do this once you acchieve Bankai. iirc, he says "You can release your Zanpaktou without calling its name. So then, you've..." and the part that trails off is likely "acchieved Bankai" or something similar.

Just thought I'd point that out.

I'll get around to sending you a profile thing, Dauc. I need to rework my character quite a bit for your story =P

Speaking of fanfics, my own is coming along, if a bit bumpily. I have no trouble with roughly 3/4 of the characters in the club, but a few key people are giving me issues.

**Ice Heart** · 22nd May 2011, 7:45 PM

Sorry for not posting for a LONG time guys. Track regoin was friday and I was so busy. I had to go to NC yesterday. I should be free for at least 15 days. Then it's off to camp. So i'll be as active as I can be.

P.S: In track I got 3rd in both my races(like any of you care lol)

**Lucario0708** · 22nd May 2011, 11:10 PM

@cell: thanks alot for killing me

I believe I specifically told you NOT to because I had my own fic

ah well, I may just pull a "he's the main hero so he lives and his lower part of his body comes back in some ridiculous way after his friends quest for a way to revive him" kinda thing, anyway, **** you I mean, ya, thanks for including me in your fic as a cocky bastard for a few seconds, don't take this the wrong way, but thanks for putting me in your fic anyway

@dauc: I guess you can put me in your fic, the profile and everything is on the front page, I haven't thought up a zanpakuto story, so can you hold off on that part until I figure one out?

on unrelated bleach news, last thursday I graduated from 8th grade, and today it's my birthday, i'm 14 years old

@blue: I read your comments, and I acknowledge them, and all unexplained parts in this chapter are explained in the next, why the captains didn't interfere, how he wen t human again, why he has awesome phoenix regeneration power thing that makes him sound slightly overpowered

@new bleach episode: This ep was hilariously funny, pretty good for a filler,

Ichigo: I got it!
Yoruichi: *snatches ball*
Ichigo: *looks over, Yoruichi is a naked woman* GEEZ, PUT SOME CLOTHES ON!

Kon: I'm a modsoul, extra leg power model! *jumps up and kicks ball*

Kon: *gets blasted by rukia's bankai* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *slams into ball* I think I broke my nose

all in all, hilarious

anyway, i'm off to play some LA Noire

EDIT: @eon: I'm in your fic definitely, right? i'm 5th seat 7th squad, so I should be

**I like Pokemon (...)** · 23rd May 2011, 12:11 AM

Originally Posted by Eon Master

Renji can do it. And not just with his command, he can do it wordlessly. See his battle against Byakuya. According to what Byakuya had inferred, you can do this once you acchieve Bankai. iirc, he says "You can release your Zanpaktou without calling its name. So then, you've..." and the part that trails off is likely "acchieved Bankai" or something similar.

Ah, alright, thanks. I forgot about that fight. It makes sense, from that, that if a person has Bankai, then they can release without needing to say anything. In which case, it's logical for MC14 to do that.

Originally Posted by Ice Heart

Sorry for not posting for a LONG time guys. Track regoin was friday and I was so busy. I had to go to NC yesterday. I should be free for at least 15 days. Then it's off to camp. So i'll be as active as I can be.

P.S: In track I got 3rd in both my races(like any of you care lol)

Congrats on getting 3rd!

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

@cell: thanks alot for killing me

I believe I specifically told you NOT to because I had my own fic

I don't see what that has to do with your character being killed in his fic. They happen in two separate universes, what happens in one has no affect on the other.

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

ah well, I may just pull a "he's the main hero so he lives and his lower part of his body comes back in some ridiculous way after his friends quest for a way to revive him" kinda thing,

Which will be a total asspull

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

on unrelated bleach news, last thursday I graduated from 8th grade, and today it's my birthday, i'm 14 years old

Happy birthday!

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

@blue: I read your comments, and I acknowledge them, and all unexplained parts in this chapter are explained in the next, why the captains didn't interfere, how he wen t human again, why he has awesome phoenix regeneration power thing that makes him sound slightly overpowered

Blue's reply:

Originally Posted by Blue

i think he's just reading all our plotholes, and then pulling an excuse out in the next chapter
if any of his explanations involve reverse time, pure willpower, or anything of the sort, im calling BS

**arceus03** · 23rd May 2011, 8:09 AM

Dac ~~Why do I feel so cute after reading your story? XD~~ Also, you named the underwater castle Shiroda, nice. Keep writing the chapters. I enjoy them

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

Aha, that was quite nice.
One thing that did kind of stand out to me, was that he said "I, Arceus the Third". In his official bio, he says that he is the third captain from his family. ~~Just felt like saying that~~

XD I thought YOU were the one who said that fanfics don't have to be canon with the official bio ~~like how you were Dac's child in here~~

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

I'm assuming that, much, MUCH later, he'll probably have to kill someone. Perhaps in rage. That always gets the quiet ones out of their shells.

Strangely enough, I did have a scene in mind about that XD

Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)

Everyone say it: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Originally Posted by Zameric

Umm, cookies? I think it's a bit too high. Sure, the total is only 400 out of 600, but that's because your Kido is zero. It's a similar case to Kenpachi. Your others stats are on par with a Captain.

Originally Posted by Eon Master

I have no trouble with roughly 3/4 of the characters in the club, but a few key people are giving me issues.

Hopefully that's not me.

Originally Posted by Lucario0708

@cell: thanks alot for killing me

I believe I specifically told you NOT to because I had my own fic

I believe he mentioned it in his post:

Originally Posted by Cell

To clarify on the recent happenings:

The people who send in a profile and added a yes to 'can I kill you off' have almost nothing to worry about.

However, if you have put 'no, you can not' are certain of dying in a gruesome way.

And anyway, like ILPy said, it's his fic, he's free to do whatever he wants, basically.
~~Now I wonder what would be my fate since I answered "Up to you" when he asked that question~~

I think I have yet to read chapter 5... *goes to read*

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