The Bleach Club...2.

[I like Pokemon (...)]

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Killing of a God?
That means, if this keeps up until Aizen dies, then we'll be at like Deicide 30...ish.

 

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I doubt that they'd keep the Deicide title until they actually KILL the "God".
 

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He referenced Masaki, though...I mean...Even though he's a "go save the ****ing world" father now, that was harsh.
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I bet $5 that the Masaki poster gets taken down by the end of Bleach. No, really.

 

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I agree that it was harsh, but it was an effective way to kick Ichigo's arse and get him going again. I don't think there are many other ways to get Ichigo motivated besides that.
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I think it'll stay XP
 

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Well, Isshin was going to just rush all the way to Karakura Town. But then he noticed something missing - The Worm Train. According to him, that worm train is supposed to constantly move around the place, forcing any intruders to move out of that realm immediately. Because it is no longer around, Isshin decides to take this golden opportunity to train Ichigo, helped out by the fact that they're cut off from space and time.
Basically, if that worm thing was still there, Isshin would still be 'Let's go Save Karakura Town'. Turns out it's gone.
 

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I suppose when you explain it like that, it makes more sense and he can get away with it.
 

[Senbonzakura]

HELLO BLEACH CLUB

Senny-taicho is still breathing as a concerned member asked me if i was still doing so.

it has taken me too long to get to sppf for some reason its slow to load for me and that is the reason to my inactivity. i am still alive nod up to date with bleach.

yes, like most i think the manga is going a bt sque-wiff. but its bleach and i love bleach so im still gonna read bleach

also what does every think about the little revaltion in the anime? personally i love the fight at the moment and it has made one of the characters one of my favourites now.

so yeah just an update, top 5 characters:

shunsui
tia
starkk
gin
rojuro

ill try to post a bit but ill be quite inactive,

golde i understand if you wanna demote me because of this

and as far as fanfics go im reading kida's via email

bye-bye *waves*

[Eon Master]

SENNY!!!

Oh my god, it's been too long man. Glad to see you again. How long, four months?

Oh, and Golde would never demote you (I think?). You're one of the most likable members of the club. Not to mention Kida would probably kill him if he did XD

It's nice to see you again, if you couldn't already tell, lol.

@Everyone: I've finally started work on the next chapter of my fanfic, now that school is over, I'm home free.

[Senbonzakura]

hahahah well because i have the day off i thought it was with the wait t come back on today so i might be able to check in more often than i have been, pls. exams finished nod holidays in two weeks.

anime +topic
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What do you think about Tia's filler flash back revealing she was a vasto lorde?

i think tat the top 4 were vasto lorde just because they were saying like they were had to recruit etc and we know barragan and starrk are stringer than Tia and i think ulquiorra showed immense strength so yeah

im loving how much more epic Tia seems. serious, she is awesome (not because of her boobs) but i wish she still had the long bits in her hair
 

[arceus03]

hahahah well because i have the day off i thought it was with the wait t come back on today so i might be able to check in more often than i have been, pls. exams finished nod holidays in two weeks.

anime +topic
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What do you think about Tia's filler flash back revealing she was a vasto lorde?

i think tat the top 4 were vasto lorde just because they were saying like they were had to recruit etc and we know barragan and starrk are stringer than Tia and i think ulquiorra showed immense strength so yeah

im loving how much more epic Tia seems. serious, she is awesome (not because of her boobs) but i wish she still had the long bits in her hair
 

Long time no see... On SPPf welcome back, lol.

waitwhat.
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It didn't specifically say that she was a Vasto Lorde, did it? o.o And anyway... The scene was too short anyway. You meant this scene, right?

Not because of her boobs.... made me lol.
 

We need a topic...

[Zameric]

waitwhat.
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It didn't specifically say that she was a Vasto Lorde, did it? o.o And anyway... The scene was too short anyway. You meant this scene, right?

Not because of her boobs.... made me lol.
 

We need a topic...

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Well I think we can surely assume that she was a Vasto Lorde from her humanoid form when she was a hollow. That part wasn't in the manga, right?
 

Hey, welcome back Senny!
It has been a while since we've seen you post in the club.
I'll send you a PM about the Battle Data Charts. ;p

[I like Pokemon (...)]

HELLO BLEACH CLUB

WHY DO YOU HAVE TO SHOUT SO LOUD GODAMN I HAVE A HEADACHE DAMNIT.

Senny-taicho is still breathing as a concerned member asked me if i was still doing so.

Always a good thing to hear.

it has taken me too long to get to sppf for some reason its slow to load for me and that is the reason to my inactivity. i am still alive nod up to date with bleach.

SPPF is always slow. And at least you're keeping up with Bleach.

so yeah just an update, top 5 characters:

shunsui
tia
starkk
gin
rojuro

Rojuro? Whonow?

bye-bye *waves*

But you JUST came!

I should probably watch the anime to join in on you guys' talking of Hallibel.

[VizardBlue]

Yooo Guys! oh look! it's a topic! We haven't had one in forever. >.>


Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?

Yes. Yes i do. But i'll love it anyway. better be a damn sequel, with a better protaganist.

Oh, and a side topic to anyone who knows me well: What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'

[I like Pokemon (...)]

Yooo Guys! oh look! it's a topic! We haven't had one in forever. >.>

Yay~

Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?

By an insane amount. He has quite a few plot holes that it seems like he won't really fix up, mainly "what the hell were these people doing?!"

But, as you said, I'll love it anyway. And then I'll completely rewrite it.

What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'
God knows.
Though I'm near tempted to find out.

[kusari]

well here it is. battles start next chapter. i can write decent battle scenes but not great ones, so tips anyone?


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The squad of soul reapers, clad in black shihakushos, appeared from the gate into a desert of white sand. Schiffer was the first to speak.

"Omnem dimittite spem, o vos intrantes". The others gave a look of astonishment.

"What the hell was that?" Mizuhashi exclaimed.

"It's Latin. It means "Abandon all hope, ye who enter here." It's the inscription over the gates of hell in Dante's Inferno." Zameric replied. "He's telling us we may not make it out of here alive."

While the captains were having a foreign language class, Seijuro and Cameron had already begun walking. They had made it almost 700 feet before the others noticed they were gone.

"Hold up kid. Let em catch up." Seijuro grabbed Blue's shoulder.

"What the hell are you two thinking?" Zam glared at them. "We're going to move as a single unit, they don't sneak up on us."

"You idiots were back there taking a Latin class and talking about classic literature and we got tired of waiting." Blue shrugged.

"Whatever. Let's just get moving. We'll walk in single file. I'll go first. Ryuu you follow me, behind him will be Mizuhashi, then Seijuro and Blue you head up the rear." After some unneeded yelling from Blue, Zam's orders were followed.

They walked for nearly two hours and the landscape hadn't changed at all. An infinate expanse of white sand with sad, withered trees.

"Uuuurooooooaaaaar." Blue turned.

"What was that?" The lieutenant asked no one in particular.

"What was what?" Arashi asked back.

"That roar. It sound like those small fry hollows."

"Well I didn't hear anything, so shut up and keep walking."

"Uuuuuuroooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrr." It seemed as if the sound was getting closer. Cameron chalked it up to his imagination and kept walking.

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Just as the soul reapers entered Hueco

"Well my Espada and Fraccion. The reapers are coming." Zakei spoke to the nine Espada and eighteen Fraccion in the meeting room.

"Sir you're wrong." A male Espada with piercing yellow eyes and black-streaked orange hair, spoke.

"What did you say, Brak?" Zakei cracked a mocking smile.

"Sorry to contradict you master, but the reapers aren't coming. They're here. They are traversing the desert as we speak." Brak replied.

"How many are there?" Raya questioned.

"Five. All seem to have high levels of spiritual pressure. Your orders sir?"

"I think we'll let Zoma send the first wave. Those "heroes" are his former friends." Zakei replied. "So Zoma, what are your orders?"

"Ok I think i have something that can stop them. Lakir you work the doors into the compound don't you?" The fifth Espada nodded yes. "Well then. When they come through close the door leaving only one outside. Claw, Fang, go grab your pets and follow them. When the one is isolated you strike. And Raya, if the twins happen to be beaten you take Ave and Akra out there and finish him off. And the rest of you, I have no doubt in my mind they will spilt up. Once they do feel free to take whichever one you like."

"Well then. You're all dismissed." Zakei said.

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"Whoa. That's a huge building!" The lieutenant exclaimed. He was reffering to a white, dome surrounded by four white pillars.

"Ok Blue now shut up and look for a door." Seijuro responded. As if by magic a door opened in front of Zam.

"Ok everyone through. Same order as walking." Zam ordered.

Just as Cameron was about to enter the threshold the door slammed shut.

"Oh what the hell! C'mon guys this isn't funny!"

"Blue, damnit! Stand back and I'll blow a hole in the door." Ryuu yelled.

"No you won't Schiffer." Seijuro laid his hand on his fellow captain's shoulder. "That wall's made of Sekiseki. You won't break through. Blue try and find another entrance. We're gonna keep moving."

"Ok. I'll catch up later."

The group of four took of down the dimly lit corridor while Blue ran along the outside wall.

"Uuuuuuuuuurrrrrooooaaaarrrrrrr!" He stoped dead in his tracks. He knew he wasn't imagining things. "Uuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrooooooooooaaaaaaarrrrrrr r!" It was getting closer.

"What the f..." His sentence was cut short when two white whales lept out of the sand. Claw rode one, while Fang rode the other. Claw's mount dove at the young lieutenant. Blue closed his eyes, clenched his teeth and waited for the end.

He waited but felt nothing. It seemed nothing was happening.

"UUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRAA AAA!" The beasts were screeching in pain. Cameron opened his eyes to see the whales fading into black dust. Fifteen feet in front of him stood a man with red-brown hair. He wore a shihakusho and held a zanpakuto in his right hand. Draped over his shoulders was a brown fur covered in hollow masks.

"What the? Who are you?" Blue stuttered.

"My name is Ashido. I live in the Menos Forest below the ground. Those hollows came for the whales. I followed them hoping they would stay down there but I guess they didn't." The man chuckled at his own joke. "Anyway, there's two of these guys and two of us so, how about you help me kill them?"

Blue stood up and drew his sword. "This'll be fun. I get to kill." He licked his lips.

*"Gowa gan noka." Fang growled.

*"Gra hasga nenva noka." Claw grumbled in agreement.

The four warriors locked eyes and prepared for battle.

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*Fang: Time to kill, brother.

*Claw: And drink their blood, brother.

 

Well there ya go. VB gets first fight. And the reason I chose Ashido to help is he was a great character but didn't get any real screen time. And you could probably tell I made him a little less serious than he was in the anime.

Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
As stated above Ashido.

[I like Pokemon (...)]

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The squad of soul reapers, clad in black shihakushos, appeared from the gate into a desert of white sand. Schiffer was the first to speak.

"Omnem dimittite spem, o vos intrantes". The others gave a look of astonishment.

"What the hell was that?" Mizuhashi exclaimed.

"It's Latin. It means "Abandon all hope, ye who enter here." It's the inscription over the gates of hell in Dante's Inferno." Zameric replied. "He's telling us we may not make it out of here alive."

I'm not surprised that Zam and I both know Latin XP Since I learned a bit in real life too.

While the captains were having a foreign language class, Seijuro and Cameron had already begun walking. They had made it almost 700 feet before the others noticed they were gone.

"Hold up kid. Let em catch up." Seijuro grabbed Blue's shoulder.

I'm surprised that Seijuro, a Captain, would let him and a Lieutenant walk off in Hueco Mundo. It doesn't seem right.

"Uuuurooooooaaaaar." Blue turned.

"What was that?" The lieutenant asked no one in particular.

"What was what?" Arashi asked back.

"That roar. It sound like those small fry hollows."

"Well I didn't hear anything, so shut up and keep walking."

"Uuuuuuroooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrr." It seemed as if the sound was getting closer. Cameron chalked it up to his imagination and kept walking.

Isn't it a bit odd that only Cameron heard the noise?

"Ok I think i have something that can stop them. Lakir you work the doors into the compound don't you?" The fifth Espada nodded yes. "Well then. When they come through close the door leaving only one outside. Claw, Fang, go grab your pets and follow them. When the one is isolated you strike. And Raya, if the twins happen to be beaten you take Ave and Akra out there and finish him off. And the rest of you, I have no doubt in my mind they will spilt up. Once they do feel free to take whichever one you like."

Maybe, soon, you can make a sort-of list of all the characters, because there are quite a lot. Maybe just "These are the Captains and their fraccions" and then whoever we know.

"What the f..." His sentence was cut short when two white whales lept out of the sand. Claw rode one, while Fang rode the other. Claw's mount dove at the young lieutenant. Blue closed his eyes, clenched his teeth and waited for the end.

I'm not quite sure that Blue would just "wait for the end". If he was attacked, I'm pretty sure he would release his Zanpakutou instinctively.

"My name is Ashido. I live in the Menos Forest below the ground. Those hollows came for the whales. I followed them hoping they would stay down there but I guess they didn't." The man chuckled at his own joke. "Anyway, there's two of these guys and two of us so, how about you help me kill them?"

Nice, Ashido.

Blue stood up and drew his sword. "This'll be fun. I get to kill." He licked his lips.

THAT'S more like Blue.

*"Gowa gan noka." Fang growled.

*"Gra hasga nenva noka." Claw grumbled in agreement.

moar latin?
 

Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
Pretty much every Lieutenant and Captain that hasn't got a lot of screentime. We see a lot of Renji and Hitsugaya, but I'd like to see more Komamura and Kira, for example.
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Also, the Espada. We ddin't really see a whole lot of them besides Yammy, Ulquiorra and Grimmjow. Almost all of the others either had very little to say in an Espada meeting, or went into battle and died and that's it. [This is why I spoilered it]
Starrk, Hallibel, Aaroniero and Zommari I'd have liked to see some more. Nnoitra and Szayel did get a bit more than them, though.
 

[kusari]

damn ILP you responded fast. ok my comments on your comments.

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Seijuro went with Blue. so he was covered.

it's a special frequency only blue can hear

list of hollows: see below

the wait for the end part was so Ashido could enter in a cool way

and no Claw and Fang don't speak Latin. their brains just don't work all the way right.
 

And as you guys can see from the story i like history. things from history will be used a lot. Nero playing the fiddle, Latin, Dante's Inferno. Oh yeah as for the Latin thing i've been studying it since i was 9 and i've read Infero in Latin and English.

And since ILP asked here's a list of Espada and their fraccion.

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1) Grell
-Baz
-Trig

2) Zoma
-Leaf
-Eve
-Drake
-Nero
-Claw
-Fang

3) Koba
-Jenk

4) Raya
-Ave
-Akra

5) Lakir
-Bora

6) Lazin

7) Brak
-Cada
-Marra
-Vello

8) Ocas
-Barra

9) Drin & Cral

10) Grenka

 

[I like Pokemon (...)]

damn ILP you responded fast. ok my comments on your comments.

Thank you subscriptions.

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Seijuro went with Blue. so he was covered.

Hmm.... But still, something just feels a bit odd about that.

it's a special frequency only blue can hear

Isn't that kind of... "co-incedental" (the only other word I could think of was Arse-pullish). The fact that only Cameron can hear it.

the wait for the end part was so Ashido could enter in a cool way

Eh, I'll let you off on that one.

and no Claw and Fang don't speak Latin. their brains just don't work all the way right.

So that's gibberish?

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1) Grell
-Baz
-Trig
2) Zoma
-Leaf
-Eve
-Drake
-Nero
-Claw
-Fang
3) Koba
-Jenk
4) Raya
-Ave
-Akra
5) Lakir
-Bora
6) Lazin
7) Brak
-Cada
-Marra
-Vello
8) Ocas
-Barra
9) Drin & Cral
10) Grenka

 

Ah, I see. Zoma sure has a lot of fraccion. And both Drin and Cal are Espada number 9? I'm guessing that's like Aaronier, but we'll have to see.

Zakei spoke to the nine Espada and eighteen Fraccion in the meeting room.

I only counted 10 Espada and 16 Fraccion...
 

[rotrum]

Hi

If I actually start getting positive comments after this chapter, then I’ll make a library. or rob Arc's

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(Technically its instrumental...and a BGM for a game...but it’s a song and it has to do with the newest character. I need to stop borrowing names though..)

Golde looked at the shinigami that had met around them with a strict and emotionless face. He would have been the picture of seriousness if only for one thing-the lollipop stick that was visible sticking out of his mouth and the slight difference between the size of his cheeks. There were fewer than 50 shinigami in each of the squads-the total number of shinigami in all 14 of the squads was around 650. Originally there was the Zeroth Squad as well, but all but one of them had disappeared after their excursion to the South. Golde had rejected the idea, but they were determined and eventually convinced him. One of them stayed behind for nervousness.

"I know that it has only been a week since our last full attendance meeting, but the situation has escalated even further then we thought could be possible in such a short time." Golde started, sounding neutral but on the inside he didn't feel like he should be the one talking. His mind worked it out though. "We recently lost all contact with Squad Zero when they insisted on travelling to the South. Although not a single shinigami has come back, nor a Hell Butterfly-one member remained here and if she would please continue?" He had an evil laugh mentally, his lollipop now the main concern of his mouth as the multi-flavored hard candy began to meld into flavors across his tastebuds-he barely paid attention as she began to speak.

"H-hello. My name is Ibis” she started, her voice wavering and her tone unsure-she still spoke anyways. "I didn't want to investigate so I stayed back when the rest of them left. Kida, Jin, and I have been guarding the Sereitei from recent attacks, as you all know, and we have noticed that only seated shinigami with shikai, no weaker or stronger, have appeared to fight us-no exiles either. Other then that it is notable that the remains of my Squad have yet to send word back to us. Als-" she stopped and stood straight up, drawing her sword as the others-even the other captains- were staring at her like she was an idiot.

"Smart little girl." The rapier-wielding man appeared behind her. She was shorter than him by at least a foot and barely had time to duck out of the way as he scraped his fingers against her retreating...clothing. "No wonder you are as smart as you are, staying here and living, unlike you squad mates."

She opened his eyes and span around in alarm-at the same time Kida was being held by a variety of bonds, a shadow was wrapped around her left leg, a golden chain and anklet on her right leg, water suspending her right arm, her left arm in a bubble, and her torso being bound by a number of trees all sticking branches around her. She was busy chewing on a twig angrily.

"Katsu Kara sono Yoru, Nagareboshi (Rip through the night, Shooting Star)" Ibis said as she turned. She sprouted wings of the purest night-stars and all-that immediately lifted her into the sky without a beat-she moved swiftly and ridiculously even as still as her wings were. IT wasn't exactly easy for the wings to be seen though-without a clear dividing line other than pure color. He zanpakutou melted into liquid metal and floated in a ball near her-following her every move as she moved at hypersonic speeds.

"Nice trick." The man said as his sword melted into the rapier-a brightly light being produced as he was completely invisible to sight. When the light faded he was surrounded by tiny pinpricks of light-each one a different shade of one of the seven colors of the rainbow. He charged and before it could even be recognized, he was close to her...but far at the same time. There were seven of him; each one was slightly a color. Each one were surrounded by a seventh the amount of original pinpricks. He smirked, the shinigami in the area scattered for the fight-as tiny beams of bright lights began to fly everywhere from the pinpricks of light.

Ibis wasn't phased as the wings became massive suddenly-or did the sky change partially-and enveloped her completely behind its starry shield. The darkness of her shield refused to be illuminated or destroyed and he, or rather they, gave up with the light attack. They all raised their rapiers and together charged at her from seven different directions. The night sky took over from the daylight sky, it was not impossible to find out where her wings were- as they matched perfectly with the sky wherever she moved. But, she wasn't through. The ball had a purpose. The liquid metal formed into a sword off of the hilt as the guard began to enhance into a long rectangular (Not all the way around like a katana) hilt. The liquid metal became a long gigantic blade that attached to the hilt. A single wave and the night sky itself seemed to cut open from the sheer force of the attack. The blade was parried by all of the man-but the sky itself came out at them and sliced straight through red and violet-two down. Orange had dodged, Yellow had countered it with light, green had blocked it, blue dodged it as well, and indigo had gotten hit but survived.

The red and violet pinpricks added to the rest of the clones and they all seemed to be more confident. Ibis raised her sword confidently as the entire sky-leaving infinite whiteness where the sky should be-covered her sword. Her sword became absolutely massive and invisible because of her equally massive wings. She snapped her fingers-zooming around to evade light beams as she did so-as the blade, sky and all, reverted to liquid metal. she smirked.

"Meteor Shower." She said. The liquid metal ball seemed to form a million blade and starry sharp fragments around them. "Die” she finished as the sky began to rip into the rainbow clones. From somewhere unidentifiable the sound of a happy cheer rang out randomly. As the tiny itsy bitsy pieces of clones fell and the sky turned back into sun, Ibis remarked silently about her lack of using bankai (as if she needs one.)

A male laugh rang out. The man stepped out of nothing, perfectly fine as the pinpricks began to gather around him-coming from the direction of the fallen.
"Naive little girl! Did you think that was all that I could do? Hah! As soon as we get the perfect light you'll be done for. For now, lets just see how powerful you really are, Squad Zero." He purposefully made it sound like he referred to her as all of Squad Zero. She bared her teeth as she said her release…sort of. "Katsu Kara sono Yoru, Ryuusei!" (Rip through the night, Shooting Star.) Her release had a slightly different name, although not that different. It looked very similar. There was liquid metal flowing freely around her, a night sky painting the sky black and starry, and without any sword or even a hilt.

The liquid melted around her and she became a statue-but she could move...at the speed of sound. She roughly grabbed at him-light beams being deflected by the shiny metal. He smirked as he raised his rapier at the quickly approaching metal girl-a ray pushing her into the sky. She disappeared. She appeared again. Once again, sort of. She was glowing with dark blue energy and her metallic armor was no longer so shiny looking-it was hard to see her under the light. As she went crashing down a yellow light overtook the dark blue one and she went at speeds that would blur the vision of RoadRunner on steroids with rockets, skates, and crossbred with the fastest plane known to man.

In one second she went from the barrier that was supposed to protect Sereitei down to the lone exile. He had his own flashy display to protect himself. His rapier melted into pure light that engulfed his form-simply saying, “Two can play at that game.” Friction burned as the two made contact-light sparking everywhere and blurring vision. With the best sunglasses in the world, one would notice that the crashing girl was being held back by a single hand.

It ended almost exactly a minute after it started and the two both went stumbling back. As her metal covering faded back into her sword she mumbled something along the lines of, “There goes Zero…” as her energy-less body thudded into the ground. There wasn’t a scratch on her, and she didn’t even use her bankai. Before she fainted, even she wondered why she felt so weak.

Meanwhile a good 40 feet away the man stopped glowing and then glowed once more. This time a small clear object floated out of his body and shattered-the pieces invisible. His rapier slowly became a katana again as he cursed. He grabbed the sword bitterly and shunpoed southward. He slammed into a wall of air and fell down pathetically. He looked around wildly. A certain 3rd Squad Captain, 12th Squad Deputy, with a vengeance walked slowly as the winds calmed down-released and already drawing another symbol-Lightning. He, wide-eyed, looked upwards as blinding electric light came crashing down on him. He felt himself dying. Then it stopped and he blinked. He was in a glass box, being carried by 2nd squad members. He cursed himself before letting himself fall into the unconsciousness that had been nagging at him.
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“We lost Ratsel’s reiatsu signature, Sir” the figure said, kneeling at the taller man-both looking at the various monitors.

“What did I tell you about calling them by their names? What you should be worried about is the C level Source that was destroyed. That girl...she must have an amazing reiatsu if the siphoned destroyed itself so soon…we must prepare the sources that we currently have and commence operation C-Human.” The taller replied emotionlessly.

The other simply nodded and walked away calmly, freaking out on the inside. If they already lost one of the few [I]Sources[/I[ they had-how could they get enough of their powers back to combat the shinigami. He dropped it and shook his head-walking into a dark room-just a single glowing object suspended in it…

 

Exactly Four Word Pages. The Italicized Sources represent other words that I dont' feel like saying. Reason I didn't post this earlier (was 95% finished a while ago, just finished it now.) Review. First Fight scene.

[VizardBlue]

Yay~

Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?

By an insane amount. He has quite a few plot holes that it seems like he won't really fix up, mainly "what the hell were these people doing?!"

But, as you said, I'll love it anyway. And then I'll completely rewrite it.

What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'
God knows.
Though I'm near tempted to find out.

I googled 'Can I kill something now?'. And the FIRST link that showed up was me registering on another bleach forum. *chuckle*

[Da14u.C]

NEW CHAPTER IS UP!!!


Master Charizard the Fifteenth sat at his desk attempting to focus on the paper work he had due in the next day. His chaotic sprawl covered the pages. His eyes were starting to see double. He yawned, suddenly feeling very weak. He stumbled away from his desk and fell onto the black leather couch he kept in his office. On a regular basis, the couch was slept on by his lieutenant, but for the moment, it was empty. Master Charizard the Fifteenth desperately tried to keep his eyes open, but was gone.

He tried opening his eyes once more, and this time it was very simple, however he did not see his office. He blinked twice just to make sure he was where he was seeing. He was in a canyon, multiple pillars containing statues of people in his past and present life. A beautiful blood red stream flowed peacefully, considering there was a large storm approaching, and fast.

"You....must....help...me..." He heard a weak voice whisper. He turned to see a fiery red scaly lizard laying on its stomach. Its eyes were closed, and its breath felt weak. Puffs of smoke escaped from its nostrils.

"What's going on?" he said, running to the dragon.

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He lay down, His eyes could not focus.

"Your handsomeness, are you OK?" one of His maids asked. He could not reply. His eyes refused to remain open, in seconds they were closed. After constant battling, he was finally able to open his eyes, and he was in a giant fancy room filled with golden objects, each representing places visited. He walked out of that room into a giant hallway filled with numerous rooms, each meticulously labelled. He sighed, he knew exactly where he was.

"Chi Rimpa why did you summon me?" He called out.

"I am outside!!!" a minuscule voice replied with all the authority it could muster. Sighing dramatically, He flash stepped down the stairs and to the door. He pushed it open seeing a gorgeous meadow, overflowing with beauty. The grass was green, flowers were blooming. Butterflies flew around, the sky was peaceful. It was heaven on earth.

"What are you doing in Ryookami's space?" He asked. He spotted a tiny wasp buzzing around frantically and held out his hand. The golden creature landed on His hand, making sure to keep its crown straight.

"Ryookami is not OK," was all it said, Chi Rimpa then flew off, expecting Him to follow, which He did. Thats when he started to realise something was wrong. He could sense disorder trying to take over. He saw some grass tips yellow, some flowers dying. He noticed more clouds in the sky than usual. He and Kida had connected mental spaces. Neither of them knew when their spaces joined, or how their zanpaktou spirits befriended one another, but they knew that they held each other in balance. As long as one of them was stable, the other could not fall to chaos.

He saw the wolf-dragon laying on the floor. Chi Rimpa was using its stinger to put in as many different antidotes as possible, hoping one would work. He turned around and saw Kida crying.

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Kida was scolding Rotrum for letting the prisoners she and Him captured die.

"How many times is it we catch prisoners relatively unharmed? And what do you do? YOU FRIGGIN' KILL THEM!" Her voice started to ring in Rotrum's ears. He could feel the spiritual energy and anger in her words, and it was well know that Kida had a way of making you wish you had never set off her temper. All of a sudden, she collapsed. There was no warning. She was screaming at Rotrum and then suddenly just hit the floor.

"What happened...." she moaned, slowly opening her eyes. She was in her beautiful meadow. The perfection that took love and care to nurture, though the occurence of storm clouds was rare in this her inner world. She looked around for Ryookami, the familiar sight of her sweet zanpaktou bounding towards her with happiness was missing. She scanned around and spotted a tall figure at the other end of her meadow. She ran towards him, until she realised what he was standing over. She stopped dead in her tracks. The tears that followed were uncontrollable.

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Golde called the captains meeting to order.

"We have a very special meeting today," she began. She had decided to dress with shocking informality. She wore a tight leather dress that barely reached half way down her thighs, and a v-neck that revealed a lot more that just her neckline. The other captains stared at her, astounded at what they could say. She tried to ignore thier questioning glances, electricity had started cackling through the air.

"Ahem, Captain-Commander, why do you look like a prostitute?" He asked. She glared, with force enough to cause the light bulbs around them to shatter. She hated Him, but she had to invite Him to this meeting, his abilities and knowledge would be incredibly useful.

"That is what I am here to talk to you all about. My zanpaktou is sick. Apparently. She doesn't seem able to move, or use her abilities," she started. She looked around questioningly. It was obvious what she wanted, anyone else with a sick zanpaktou to come forward. Only two did. Captain Kida Ookami and Master Charizard the Fifteenth. He stepped forward too, but mostly due to his mental link with Kida, what she felt, if she felt strongly enough, he felt, and vice versa. This connection between them was both a blessing and a curse, and in this case, the curse aspect was obvious.

ILP brought forward the cage with the trapped dragon. The creature opened one eye and surveyed the room, before closing it once more.

"I know not what this creature is, but I know what it can do," ILP started. Blood suddenly spilled out of his mouth. Master Charizard the Fifteenth had stabbed him, right through the chest. Everyone stared in horror. Kida looked dizzy, He watched in horror as he saw Kida's zanpaktou start to go into its released form.

"Chi Rimpa, sleep dust! Now!" He yelled. Kida suddenly collapsed into a coma-like state. Something was going on.

Golde smiled cruelly and flash-stepped away. He looked towards ILP who was self-mending, and then realised the box he had held, containing the dragon, was gone. In seconds, Master Charizard the Fifteenth was gone too. Kida remained in her vegitable like state, He looked on, analyzing what had just happened.

"We will rule..."

[MasterCharizard15]

@Kusari
I share the smae opinion as Ant on that chapter...

@Dac

What happened at the end...I stabbed my zanpaktou and left with it? [o.o]

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-Innocence or Corruption?-

Hikari stood on top of the building, watching the Battle between MC and Ant against the mutant hollow. The sky was clear and the air was oddly calm for a battle that was going on. Hikari was watching in a punishment force uniform she mugged from a member that tried to question her, said member lying unconscious in the sewers of the Sereitei. As she watched the two struggle against the hollow mutant, she reflected on the meeting she had with her group before she came to the Soul Society.

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In the gothic looking castle, the midnight air ran thought it, giving everything a bone chilling sensation to touch. Each room furnished like any other castle, rugs, pieces of art and statues as well as artifacts. In the meeting room sat Master Darkness with his ten Soldiers, the team of Darkness, standing across from each other in two rows of five. All of them obscured by their Dark cloaks, so well that only their eyes could be seen, the cloak itself was soft yet firm, loose yet warm.

“After Setsuna and Dante returned from the Soul society, it seems that our first attempt to resurrect Anon has been temporarily set back, the child alone isn’t enough, and we need the four keys held hidden in the Sereitei in order to bring him back.” Darkness said staring down at them from his throne.

“That is easier said than done, Master, the Captains were replaced by Decoys specifically made prevent Anon from getting out early, plus according to child, the holders are in a Manga…” Dante said in a completely serious tone.

“Through my analysis of the events that occurred during the assault, a strange light that come from Squad 12 is responsible for it…” Setsuna interjected.

“What the hell kind of light makes a person go into a freaking manga!?” Molly inquired with the undertone of disbelief.

The air in the room was tense, the darkness, only being fended off by the flames of the torches behind the throne, not helping at all. Each of the warriors stood in the darkness, still and with feeling of despair radiating off of each and every one of them.

“Apparently Squad Twelve was working on a highly classified project that involved multi-dimensional travel, but records shown it was shelved due to the inability to properly control which dimension a user would end up.” Hikari stated without a hint of emotion.

“Further investigation uncovered that a few, more fool hearty members continued working on it in secret, apparently they managed to get it to work and had a way to retrieve a subject using the machine for multi-dimensional travel, but it was still being beta-tested for any side effects and other issues.” Dante informed the group.
“I’ve read the manga that they were sent too, if we are going to attack them there, there are a few people in that universe that could hinder us…or help us…” Setsuna pointed out to the group.

“We all read it Setsuna…” Lilly told the cold warrior.

Darkness’s eyes literally glowed a crimson red, his body becoming pitch black and his entire body seemed to tremble, he utter the following. “Simple, we’ll just distract them with a Crisis, that way; we can operate without being noticed.”

“Exactly how do you purpose we do that?” Molly asked with skepticism.

“Simple, kidnap Ichigo Kurosaki’s love interest…and according to Fanfiction, that would be Renji.” Darkness said this in an absolutely serious tone of voice.

Silence quickly filled the room; each Warrior’s expression was pure shock and amazement. Just processing the notion that Master Darkness, the leader of the Darkness Union, actually proposed such a ludicrous and down right outrageous plan, caused each of them to stand in the calm darkness in silence. The tenseness that filled the air before was now replaced with a new feeling, confusion.

After several minutes of silence, Molly interjected with the following statement. “It’s obvious that Rukia is his one true love, Master Darkness…”

“No, Orihime is his one true love!” Hikari yelled to contradict the previous declarations.

“Urahara is his one true love, what kind of stupid fan fiction have you all been reading?” Lilly declared to everyone in the meeting.

“If I were him, I’d go for Yoruichi.” Sora mumbled to himself.

“Only Kenpachi can be true love!” Sonja shouted at the group.

“Why are you all so set on him only having one, Rukia, Renji, Orihime and Uryu are all his lovers.” Hotaru said in a bored tone.

“I thought he had a harem of women…” Adam said to no one in particular.

“I thought it was a harem of men…” Sethor stated in confusion.

“Are we really having this conversation…beside we all know Grimmjow is his love.” Setsuna stated in annoyance.

Soon the conversation turned into a full blown shipping war, it quickly degraded into an insult galore and showed no sign ending.

“What kind of stupid moron would think that Ichigo would want anyone but Rukia, besides the ones that need to be smacked!?” Molly asked irked, that she was the only one that supported Ichigo and Rukia as a couple.

“Typical response for a supporter of that shipping…” Hotaru said irrated at molly’s immaturity.

“Why do all think he is straight anyway?” Sethor asked confused.

“Why do you think he isn’t straight?” Adam asked waiting for Sethor to justify himself.

“Excuse me, I’m the evil commander here, I say He wants Renji, so that is it, NO OTHER PAIRING WILL HAPPEN!” Darkness yelled.

Eventually the shipping war almost became a real war and they all were dismissed.

Each of them left into the darkness of the night, starlight being the only thing that battled the pitch blackness of the sky. Every member, save for Darkness, split into groups and went their separate ways. Hikari and Dante left for the Soul Society in the Bleach universe, Molly, Sonja and Adam left for Las Noches, with Hotaru leaving the real world by herself. Lilly and Sethor left to destroy the Soul society in their universe while Darkness stayed in the castle, waiting to reveal the child and to leave for the worlds himself.
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Hikari’s mind focused on what was going on around her at the moment. MC and Ant were struggling against the mutant hollow, it fired two ceros, one from its tail and another from its mouth, nearly hitting both of them.

She brought out her staff and aimed at the hollow, the staff shone in with pink light filled with energy, “Shocking Heartache!” she shouted. A giant heart symbol shot out of her staff and crashed into the hollow.

“RROOOOAAAARRRR!” The hollow shouted, unable to move due to it body being broken…


 

[Senbonzakura]

anime (last week)

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i believe hallibel is a vasto because it says about there shape and this was before arrancarisation and it matches the description.

and no it was nt. in the manga
 

new anime episode
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i quite liked it, music wasn't to dramatic though during barragans res' but it was good. they used the bount music but i believe it fitted quite well. i also like the semi permeability of his respira not just like a cloud or weird color it actually looked cool.

i think hitsugaya is overpowered like if he used hyowhatevr with full power then thats already a massive bankai by itself let alone with all the other techniques he has.
 

more screentime: soifon, ukitake, shunsui, hallibel and starrk

[arceus03]

Rojuro? Whonow?

Rose. I like him too. His mask and zanpakto are unique to say, at the very least. ^^

Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Gah. I hope not. I hope he'd be able to fill all those plotholes before it ends. Idk if it's nearing end now. I mean, One Piece and Naruto are both over 500 chapters (well, Naruto more like near 500 though) and yeah... like, what would we do if the series ends? Just fanfics? XD

If he ends up Bleach without showing ALL bankai, at least, I'm gonna be really mad.

What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'

...None.
Aizen would simply have you under his illusion. lol.

Or more probable still, he'd say he has everything planned, up to the moment you say that. And what you're saying just matches his expectation of you.

Unless you meant the Sereitei in fanfics.... Then no one is going to say yes. Unless he's high on candies.

Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
UNOHANA DAMMIT. We see her, arriving in Hueco Mundo, healing Sado and that Arrancar. Then we see her, going back. That's all. blah.

I'd like to see those Arrancars', too. Particularly those who haven't had time to show their full abilities yet. Like Harribell's 3 Fraccion.

anime (last week)

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i believe hallibel is a vasto because it says about there shape and this was before arrancarisation and it matches the description.

and no it was nt. in the manga
 

Ah. Remind me what is the characteristics of a Vasto Lorde again? Their release/original form is near humanoid, no?

[I like Pokemon (...)]

I googled 'Can I kill something now?'. And the FIRST link that showed up was me registering on another bleach forum. *chuckle*

Wow.

"You....must....help...me..." He heard a weak voice whisper. He turned to see a fiery red scaly lizard laying on its stomach. Its eyes were closed, and its breath felt weak. Puffs of smoke escaped from its nostrils.

"What's going on?" he said, running to the dragon.

I'm assuming that that's Iroriryuu?

"Your handsomeness, are you OK?" one of His maids asked. He could not reply. His eyes refused to remain open, in seconds they were closed. After constant battling, he was finally able to open his eyes, and he was in a giant fancy room filled with golden objects, each representing places visited. He walked out of that room into a giant hallway filled with numerous rooms, each meticulously labelled. He sighed, he knew exactly where he was.

Ah, so physically, He's somewhere with His maids (probably at home or something) while He's mentally in His Zanpakutou world place thing.

He and Kida had connected mental spaces. Neither of them knew when their spaces joined, or how their zanpaktou spirits befriended one another, but they knew that they held each other in balance. As long as one of them was stable, the other could not fall to chaos.

That's... interesting, to say the least. I wonder if you'll explain it, later.

"We have a very special meeting today," she began. She had decided to dress with shocking informality. She wore a tight leather dress that barely reached half way down her thighs, and a v-neck that revealed a lot more that just her neckline. The other captains stared at her, astounded at what they could say. She tried to ignore thier questioning glances, electricity had started cackling through the air.

"Ahem, Captain-Commander, why do you look like a prostitute?"

He took the words right out of my mouth.
So why DOES Golde (who you've turned female) look like a prostitute?

"That is what I am here to talk to you all about. My zanpaktou is sick. Apparently. She doesn't seem able to move, or use her abilities,"

How is that related to Golde looking like a prostitute?

ILP brought forward the cage with the trapped dragon. The creature opened one eye and surveyed the room, before closing it once more.

"I know not what this creature is, but I know what it can do," ILP started. Blood suddenly spilled out of his mouth. Master Charizard the Fifteenth had stabbed him, right through the chest. Everyone stared in horror. Kida looked dizzy, He watched in horror as he saw Kida's zanpaktou start to go into its released form.

So MC stabbed me in the chest, and Kida released. Damn dragon.

Golde smiled cruelly and flash-stepped away. He looked towards ILP who was self-mending, and then realised the box he had held, containing the dragon, was gone. In seconds, Master Charizard the Fifteenth was gone too. Kida remained in her vegitable like state, He looked on, analyzing what had just happened.

"We will rule..."

And MC took the dragon away. It could be Iroriryuu, since that's the only dragon I can think of. And what's up with Golde being weird. Is (s)he not the real Golde?
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“Through my analysis of the events that occurred during the assault, a strange light that come from Squad 12 is responsible for it…” Setsuna interjected.

I'm slightly surprised, though I really shouldn't be.

“What the hell kind of light makes a person go into a freaking manga!?” Molly inquired with the undertone of disbelief.

I'm surprised. I'd think that the meeting would be as strict as the Soul Society meetings are.

“Apparently Squad Twelve was working on a highly classified project that involved multi-dimensional travel, but records shown it was shelved due to the inability to properly control which dimension a user would end up.” Hikari stated without a hint of emotion.

“Further investigation uncovered that a few, more fool hearty members continued working on it in secret, apparently they managed to get it to work and had a way to retrieve a subject using the machine for multi-dimensional travel, but it was still being beta-tested for any side effects and other issues.” Dante informed the group.

Eh, I suppose I'll let you get away with it. Since my Bankai allows travelling to non-"created" universes, and this allows me to do just that.

“Simple, kidnap Ichigo Kurosaki’s love interest…and according to Fanfiction, that would be Renji.” Darkness said this in an absolutely serious tone of voice.

I... You had a lot of fun writing that, I can tell.

After several minutes of silence, Molly interjected with the following statement. “It’s obvious that Rukia is his one true love, Master Darkness…”

“No, Orihime is his one true love!” Hikari yelled to contradict the previous declarations.

“Urahara is his one true love, what kind of stupid fan fiction have you all been reading?” Lilly declared to everyone in the meeting.

“If I were him, I’d go for Yoruichi.” Sora mumbled to himself.

“Only Kenpachi can be true love!” Sonja shouted at the group.

“Why are you all so set on him only having one, Rukia, Renji, Orihime and Uryu are all his lovers.” Hotaru said in a bored tone.

“I thought he had a harem of women…” Adam said to no one in particular.

“I thought it was a harem of men…” Sethor stated in confusion.

“Are we really having this conversation…beside we all know Grimmjow is his love.” Setsuna stated in annoyance.

Soon the conversation turned into a full blown shipping war, it quickly degraded into an insult galore and showed no sign ending.

“What kind of stupid moron would think that Ichigo would want anyone but Rukia, besides the ones that need to be smacked!?” Molly asked irked, that she was the only one that supported Ichigo and Rukia as a couple.

“Typical response for a supporter of that shipping…” Hotaru said irrated at molly’s immaturity.

“Why do all think he is straight anyway?” Sethor asked confused.

“Why do you think he isn’t straight?” Adam asked waiting for Sethor to justify himself.

“Excuse me, I’m the evil commander here, I say He wants Renji, so that is it, NO OTHER PAIRING WILL HAPPEN!” Darkness yelled.

I'm just.... stunned.