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    Arc: Since I don't really have time for a full reivew, this will have to do. [/bad rhyme]

    That was a good fight scene, nice discription. MC saying "whatever" a million times made me lol.
    I can't wait for my scene, I'm wondering how you're going to make all of this work out as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    Kusari: VB constraining everyone for order? Oddly I can't see that happening. I think he'd do just the opposite. XP

    So your new name is Zoma, I take it? Not a Vizard huh.... But directly an Espada? Hmmm..
    @Arc: i did the thing with VB because he needed to do something cool for once. lol. i know he would normally do the opposite but: tense time. some officers missing already. captain just kidnapped by hollows. no one is really acting like themselves.

    the directly an Espada thing: in the zan inner world description i put up for my self i wrote there is a shadow figure that lives on the cliff above the fall. that combined with the mass overload of hollow energy eaten and the pure hollow energy fused with the formed hole has a devistating effect.

    and Zoma is just the name i chose for my time as a hollow.

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    @NL
    I know the feeling, except i'm starting to watch Inuyasha - also CAPTAINS WHO HAVN'T GIVEN ME INNER WORLD REFERENCES [you know who you are] you won't be in the next chapter until i get them =.= - that's MC, Kusari and Flash Step
    Ok ill get that to you later ima work on it 2nite and post it.

    hey everyone I plan on throwing a Party on Serebii...(pointless..yea but figured since im tha party guy i'd host one) its been awhile...New years was the last party i threw but ay this is jus to celebrate all of the FanFics being made and to give Dac a proper welcome back....never did.

    *runs off to clean up the barracks*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Arc: Since I don't really have time for a full reivew, this will have to do. [/bad rhyme]

    That was a good fight scene, nice discription. MC saying "whatever" a million times made me lol.
    I can't wait for my scene, I'm wondering how you're going to make all of this work out as well.
    Hmmm. Write a full review if you have the time later on
    Your scene... would have to be edited... a bit. I originally wanted you to meet up with ILPy and Jin, but since both of them have powers that you can't counter, I had to tweak up some more.... XP

    Quote Originally Posted by kusari View Post
    @Arc: i did the thing with VB because he needed to do something cool for once. lol. i know he would normally do the opposite but: tense time. some officers missing already. captain just kidnapped by hollows. no one is really acting like themselves.
    Ah. Okay then.

    Quote Originally Posted by Flash_Step View Post
    @NL
    hey everyone I plan on throwing a Party on Serebii...(pointless..yea but figured since im tha party guy i'd host one) its been awhile...New years was the last party i threw but ay this is jus to celebrate all of the FanFics being made and to give Dac a proper welcome back....never did.

    *runs off to clean up the barracks*
    Ermmm.... I can prepare the cookies....

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    So... Zero and Darkness are 2 different forces then? I couldn't make out what was happening in the beginning, but it's starting to form now..

    waitwhat. Does this mean that the original Captains we saw in Chapter 1 part 1 aren't members from the club?
    I'm COMPLETELY confused now.

    I wouldn't be too surprised if Chapter 1 Captains weren't us, because you normally wouldn't keep a character's name hidden unless it was for a special reason.

    Quote Originally Posted by Flash_Step View Post
    hey everyone I plan on throwing a Party on Serebii...(pointless..yea but figured since im tha party guy i'd host one) its been awhile...New years was the last party i threw but ay this is jus to celebrate all of the FanFics being made and to give Dac a proper welcome back....never did.

    *runs off to clean up the barracks*
    Hmm, I don't think I've been to a proper Bleach Club party...

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    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    I'm COMPLETELY confused now.
    To be honest, I only understood, maybe half of the later explanations too. The characters are a bit too many.

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    Kido.. that could happen. Well.. At least he did learn the basic of all Kido, at any rate.

    Soul Society living in concealment sounds like a good idea.

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    Ahhhh, no. I hope not. I'm SICK of Yammy. I just hope he gets finished by those who were fighting him.
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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    To be honest, I only understood, maybe half of the later explanations too. The characters are a bit too many.
    I suppose all will be revealed... eventually. Chapter 3 is meant to "explain it all".
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    Kido.. that could happen. Well.. At least he did learn the basic of all Kido, at any rate.
    It'd be better than just spamming Getsuga Tenshous.
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    Soul Society living in concealment sounds like a good idea.
    It's just something I randomly came up with on the spot. Like most of my ideas.
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    Ahhhh, no. I hope not. I'm SICK of Yammy. I just hope he gets finished by those who were fighting him.
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    wow kind of a slow day. not much to say i just kinda wanted to break the silence. i'll be putting a chapter up later. and as of last night i have all hollows and their zanpakutos done, as well as all the fights planned. so yeah later today i guess.
    One mischievous little woodpecker
    Another day, pecking your holes
    Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
    The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
    Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
    Your food with toxins rife
    Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
    Oh, sad little woodpecker
    Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks

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    Default Chapter 3: Pain

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    ..Yeah the spolier tags won't work for me...

    Favorite Kido spell?
    Hado # 54 Haien...turns you into Ash...

    Hados #31-33 Fireballs FTW!
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        Spoiler:- chapter 3:
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    Favorite Kido spell?
    Eh, I don't think I have an actual favourite at the moment. No, wait, what about the     Spoiler:

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        Spoiler:- Manga 406:


    Quote Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15 View Post
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    Another good chapter MC. The conversation between Molly, Sonja and Adam was a little hard to follow though. And I don't fully agree with how I am being portrayed, but it's not horrible. Looking forward to the next chapter. ;p

    Favorite Kido spell?
    My favorite would probably be Bakudo #63: Sajo Sabaku.
    It's great when I use in conjuction with one my shikai moves.
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    Quote Originally Posted by arc03
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    According to the latest Manga Volume Sales Statistics Thing, Bleach is starting to fall behind (None of its volumes made it into the top ten this time). One Piece is dominating the sales with two volumes in first and second place (whose total sales can beat the sales of all the other volumes in the top ten added together...like wow...), followed by Full Metal Alchemist which also has two volumes in the top ten (3rd and 5th place respectively) with Nodame Cantabile in 4th place. Naruto has three volumes in places 6-8, Kimi no Todoke has one in number 9, and Hunter X Hunter takes the tenth place, beating Bleach in sales after coming back from hiatus.

    For overall volume sales (that means total amount of volumes sold, including volumes not listed in the top ten), One Piece still dominates with first place (again, with enough volume sales to beat all the other 4 candidates added together...like wow...), 2nd is taken by Naruto, followed by Fairy Tail (shock!), Full Metal Alchemist and Nodame Cantabile.

    Kubo, you gotta get your story together, you're losing your place as one of the 3 shounen manga kings. (In my opinion, Hunter X Hunter would be a better candidate...if not for the constant hiatuses...)

    Just a bit of information for you guys.

    Favorite Kido spell?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter View Post
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    According to the latest Manga Volume Sales Statistics Thing, Bleach is starting to fall behind (None of its volumes made it into the top ten this time). One Piece is dominating the sales with two volumes in first and second place (whose total sales can beat the sales of all the other volumes in the top ten added together...like wow...), followed by Full Metal Alchemist which also has two volumes in the top ten (3rd and 5th place respectively) with Nodame Cantabile in 4th place. Naruto has three volumes in places 6-8, Kimi no Todoke has one in number 9, and Hunter X Hunter takes the tenth place, beating Bleach in sales after coming back from hiatus.

    For overall volume sales (that means total amount of volumes sold, including volumes not listed in the top ten), One Piece still dominates with first place (again, with enough volume sales to beat all the other 4 candidates added together...like wow...), 2nd is taken by Naruto, followed by Fairy Tail (shock!), Full Metal Alchemist and Nodame Cantabile.

    Kubo, you gotta get your story together, you're losing your place as one of the 3 shounen manga kings. (In my opinion, Hunter X Hunter would be a better candidate...if not for the constant hiatuses...)

    Just a bit of information for you guys.

    Favorite Kido spell?
    Bakudou #83: Danku. Probably.
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    Probably because Kubo has been trolling so much over the past chapters... You know...     Spoiler:


    Danku is #81.

    Favourite Kido spell... gee, idk. XD Any electric based spells, firstly, because they complement Tsukibana. Yeah. Hado #63, Raikoho would be great. (Byakurai would be too weak, and Hiryugekizokushintenraiho is strong enough on its own...) And maybe Tsuzuri Raiden.
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    I should stop writing my fics in Algebra, especialyl with finals coming up, oh well~.

    Note: Soul Society is now a lone city on the Northern Hemisphere of Heaven (Now a planet)

    Other Note: I'm too lazy to read Profiles

        Spoiler:- Bleach Exile: Prologue:


    How was that?

    Speech is going to continue into Chapter One, I Might as wel make it a Chapter one Part 1 and 2 like whoever did but w/e.

    Any guesses on who is who and who isn't there period?

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    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    That whole reaction scene made me literally laugh out loud.

    So Arceus has one... Sora and Hikari were after you and me, so we both have keys, too, right?

    So let me get this straight:
    Zero Unit fought Bleach Club Captains and sent us to Bleach Universe, leaving clones of us there.
    Team Darkness go and fight our clones, which was what the first chapter was, right?
    lol, Zommari was wondering how Aizen kept his hair like that XD

    Hmmm... I rather thought he meant Orihime. Well, whoever. XD
    But I'm losing track of the characters now.. And which character belong to which side.

    Ah. Your last statement made it much clearer to me XD
    MC, you probably will have to write a chapter putting in ALL the smaller details. So far, we know little bits from here, and little bits from there... And with so many fanfics going on and writing mine too honestly I can't remember the explanations... Especially if they're put in passing. So, yeah. One chapter explaining these all, plox? :P

    Oh yeah. the dots and commas and exclamation marks and question marks go before the punctuation mark. XD

    Quote Originally Posted by rotrum View Post
    I should stop writing my fics in Algebra, especialyl with finals coming up, oh well~.

    Note: Soul Society is now a lone city on the Northern Hemisphere of Heaven (Now a planet)

    Other Note: I'm too lazy to read Profiles

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    How was that?

    Speech is going to continue into Chapter One, I Might as wel make it a Chapter one Part 1 and 2 like whoever did but w/e.

    Any guesses on who is who and who isn't there period?
    Hmm... That was definitely better than outright facts. XD
    Let's see... Squad 4, 5 and 6 aren't there. Why, if I may ask?

    And make sure you adequately explain all these.. XD;


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    well i had personal stuff going on so i couldn't write the chapter so i'll try to get it up sometime this week and another one next weekend.

    Rotrum: yeah just like Arc said, a lot better than straight facts. i'd like to see where this goes. and yeah i had dialouge.

    MC: the one who likes sleep the most is the first one awake. great. and i seem so serious. that's awesome. great chapter too.
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    One mischievous little woodpecker
    Another day, pecking your holes
    Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
    The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
    Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
    Your food with toxins rife
    Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
    Oh, sad little woodpecker
    Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks

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    Cold club

    I've been rewatching the Soul Society arc, and was thinking... You know, it'd be funny if we can adopt what happened in the real Bleach to this club.... Like...

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    Well idk =\ I'm not very good with these kind of things. XD It's usually MC.
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    Lmao, that was great Arc! Please do more, please.
    Although please refrain from making one of me in the scene were Tosen releases his resurrección, and then a'slopdes. >.<

    Ok Cell, here is your Battle Data Chart.
    I'm sorry for my earlier confusion.


    Also, I've decide to just use the captain chart for everyone, but label it as "lieutenant-class" for all non-captain members. I believe some of you will be happy about this new change. So they will be on the same scale to make it easier to give me your numbers, but just know the "lieutenant-class" charts are like a metaphorical level below captains. So you could have a non-captain have a 100 for say, agility, but that particularly doesn't mean they are faster than a captain with 80-90 in agility.
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    ok as promised chapter 3. this is pretty much a chapter about preparations on both sides. so well be switching back and forth a lot. *deep breath* here we go.

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    There we go the squad has left and the Espada are preparing for battle. All the fights have been planned out already so don't ask to fight any particular number. So yeah. And any of you who know your ancient history you should see the reference I'm trying to make. So until next time.
    One mischievous little woodpecker
    Another day, pecking your holes
    Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
    The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
    Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
    Your food with toxins rife
    Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
    Oh, sad little woodpecker
    Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks

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    @ Kusari
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    Intresting Chapter, Lets see how many people complain about yours happening in the Bleach universe I wonder how your battle scenes will go..

    @ Arc

    Funny...keep doing them if you want, I could even give pointers if you want...

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