The Bleach Club...2.

[MasterCharizard15]

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"Wow. That didn't go over well. Anyone for Yoshi raise your hand." Blue, Dauc, Akira, Dre and Zam raised their hands. "And for Yoshi?" The remaining captains raised their hands. "So that makes one for Sei, five for Katsumi and six for Yoshi. That makes the new Squad Thirteen captain Yo..."

You said Yoshi twice...
Other than that...why am I helping Hayashi? This had better be a complex plot point mister!

 

If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?

[Northern Lights]

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Ichigo's kind of annoying with wanting to be normal and then just kind of being, "OKAY I'LL GET MY POWERS BACK."
Actually I think he wanted his powers back to begin with, you never know how much you like something until you find it missing.

Emo Fullbringer guy with the hat creeps me out. So does that lady in the dress.
Emo guy?

I suddenly realized that we never met Chad's parents when I was reading the chapter that revealed he became a fullbringer. NICE.
Wondering where and who the guy with the book that boom backshotted Uryu is.
Yeah, Ichigo will be angry about that, unless he's YET another villian.

I can never remember Ginjou's full name without checking Bleach wiki. D:

Also, lol Riruka. I want a battle between Riruka and Orihime. Maybe some Senna thrown in for good measure.
SENNA!! I loved Senna so much, why idd she have to leave TT.TT

And the butler's name is Giriko? Really? Really? Lmao. His Fullbring thing will be chainsaw. Calling it.
Goddamn, good call, I never noticed that was his name until now. Hey maybe we should all guess what they're fullbring weapons will be.


 

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If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?
Probably the same as my actual zanpaktou spirit, seeing as ones Zanpaktou spirit reflects on the persons soul anyway.

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What would your Fullbring Weapon be?

I have a necklace with an Egyptian Arrow on it, i'd manipulate it to melt the metal chain link into a spear, and the egyptian arrow into a rounded triangular blade at the end.

 

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"And for Yoshi?" The remaining captains raised their hands

I wouldn't vote for a male. Not being sexist, but Yoshi sounds like a pig and i'm usually a good judge of character, plus the captains ranks needs more females!! D=

Yey, I back up Hayashi in the end

[CyberBlaziken]

If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?

Uhh the same power my Zampakuto has

Isn't there going to be a new chapter this week?

[arceus03]

NOTE: the long italic parts at the beginning and end are like a narrator-type dealy.

That's interesting. I'd like to see how it goes. Thogh I need to make a list of which captain confront which, lol

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What would your Fullbring Weapon be?

I have a necklace with an Egyptian Arrow on it, i'd manipulate it to melt the metal chain link into a spear, and the egyptian arrow into a rounded triangular blade at the end.

 

Kubo caught the flu bug, so there won't be a chapter... probably.
And, that's a pretty cool weapon. =D Though we don't know yet whether those weapons are pure weapons or like they have some sort of special power like a zanpakto.

If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?
Repeat: Probably the same as my zanpakto. ^.^ And by default, there should be like, an increase in power as compared to a normal release, like we've seen in the filler. Yeah.

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What would your Fullbring Weapon be?
I think mine would be a lightweight iron ring/bracelet on both hands. When activated I'd get a chain sort of weapon Octopus Arms that would be hidden in my sleeves. There'd be about three chains on each hand.

idk. XD If you watch MAR, you'll easily get the picture. XD
 

Answering that topic reminded me... Fullbring weapons = MAR arms. :P

[kusari]

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You said Yoshi twice...
yeah i know. i just didn't notice until it was up and i didn't feel like fixing it.

Other than that...why am I helping Hayashi? This had better be a complex plot point mister!
the basic answer: i trust you.
the complex answer: explained later.

 

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What would your Fullbring Weapon be?

I have a necklace with an Egyptian Arrow on it, i'd manipulate it to melt the metal chain link into a spear, and the egyptian arrow into a rounded triangular blade at the end.

 

that's pretty awesome.

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I wouldn't vote for a male. Not being sexist, but Yoshi sounds like a pig and i'm usually a good judge of character, plus the captains ranks needs more females!! D=
it's part of the plot! playalonggoddamnit!!!!!!!

Yey, I back up Hayashi in the end
You're not on my side. for the long run i picked Da.c over you. now, you both are technically fighting for me. just for different reasons. you're trying to get me to come back, but essentially we're still enemies. considering i'm technically a traitor, as is everyone aligned with me.

That's interesting. I'd like to see how it goes. Thogh I need to make a list of which captain confront which, lol
[B]I'll do it for you. fic names and club names (even if it is redundant at times).
Dauc (Da.c) vs. Kida (NL)
Hayashi (me) vs. Rotrum (Rotrum)
Zam (Zameric) vs. Ryuu (ILP)
Akira (Arc) vs. Dre (Flash)
Blue (Blue) vs. Sei (Min)
Katsumi (Arenak) vs. Jin (Jin)
Golde vs. Norio, Kohaku, Midori, Tetsuo, Yoshi, Iwao, Ran, Masanori, Hideo and Shigeo

And it can be assumed by the chapter that these fights may happen:
Jordan (MC) vs. Seijuro (Eon)
Someone vs. Akitsu

i wondered when this would come up.
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the item form is a black, fingerless glove on my right hand. on the back of my glove is a silver cross that stretches down my middle finger.

the weapon form is a black lance that covers my arm up to the elbow and is about five feet from my hand. from the tip to about one and half feet back is silver with a silver line all the way back on the top, bottom and both sides. (think a black and silver version of Gallantmon's Gram Lance)

 

[Northern Lights]

Wow been awhile since my last chapter, so I did a quick recap at the beginning

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The Captains have been faced by a new threat unearthed by ILP as Captains reiatsu started to behave erratically, the cause; a previously thought extinct virus that has a new taste for captain status power. The captains have tried and failed to converse with and stabilise with their Zanpaktous, instead unwittingly unleashing the virus, they are infected with, into corporeal form. Now they wait for their reflections to make their move…

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The Captains and some of their subordinates had congregated in the Captains hall, seated on the floor in varying positions, waiting for Golde to return from wherever he had disappeared to. Kida was curled up asleep resting beside Dauc after aimlessly following a butterfly around the room, Arceus was spread out on the floor with Kusari beside him on his stomach, head resting on stapled fingers, leaning against the walls were Rotrum and Jin, both silent and deep in thought. Cell was fidgeting trying to remain stoic like his captain, but personalities tend to get in the way. Newly appointed Captain Blue paced around in circles, throwing punches and fighting off imaginary foes, Lieutenant Eight was watching his Captain with great interest, as Kida’s tail flicked from side to side every so often.

“Anybody got any bright ideas?” Master Charizard asked, fuming at their defeats.

“We wait,” said Master Eon calmly.

“Tch!” Master Charizard growled.

Arceus sighed looking out the window as Arenak settled on the floor to conserve energy.

So far they had summarised the current events to their lieutenants, who were being briefed into what was slowly becoming war. Dauc had had to explain to Eight what was going on as Kida at the time had been very intent on climbing to the highest vantage point she could find.

Dauc looked down at Lieutenant Eight, as he followed Kida’s rapid ascent of Seireiteis pillars, “I guess it’s a predator thing, you know, to keep on eye on potential rivals or prey”, Eight said, moving on as if he’d seen nothing out of the ordinary.

Soul Society has unearthed a new and old threat; a Reiatsu Virus. It’s a parasitic like essence that infects multiple shinigami. The first stage is weakening of the shinigami as it drains the reiatsu; the second is infestation and disturbance of the Inner World, aiming to incapacitate a Shinigami’s Zanpaktou spirit. The third stage, once it has absorbed enough reiatsu, is to take corporeal form which mimics that of its host. The fourth and final stage is fatal, in which the mimicking virus, which we refer to as the Reflection, defeats their host in one to one combat taking over their form permanently.

At least, this is what Captain ILP read out to the group after he’d spent a couple of hours hacking into his own goddamn system to unearth all the nasty little secrets the previous 12th Captain had kept hidden.

They were all mulling over the events they had each experienced, trying in vain to connect with their spirits, only to receive an everlasting dial tone in response.

Suddenly, Kida’s ears pricked and she bolted to an upright position hitting Dauc in the process.

“Nooooo,” he wailed, “not my face, my beautiful face!” Dauc clutched at his face in mock horror, then peered through the fingers to she Kida bouncing on the balls of her feet again.

“They’re here,” he said.

He didn’t need to say more as the captains and subordinates drew their swords and advanced through the doors and out into the bright light of the sun, Kida dashing up the wall to reach the roof.

At first, they didn’t see anyone, so they sent their gazes sky wards, and there they were standing on various pillars and buildings looking down at them.

“Ah, so nice of you to join us,” this was Jin’s Reflection, smirking at them as they lined up against their alternate others.

Dauc’s Reflection hopped down and stepped up to Dauc looking him up and down.

“Meh, could have been worse,” he clicked his tongue disapprovingly.

“Say that again!” Dauc snarled, grabbing his reflection by the scruff of his robes.

The reflection raised his fist back, only to let out a howl of pain. Looking round his reflections head, Dauc saw Kida sinking her sharp canines into the Reflections fist. He had no idea how she had gotten there so quickly, but felt rather relieved that she was on their side. Those teeth hurt, a lot. Of course, if Kida was here, so was her reflection, and right on cue, a blur came speeding down, head butting Kida in the ribs. Both Kida’s rolled away snarling at each other.

Dauc Reflection advanced on Kida, as her reflection tackled her to the ground.

“Hold it you two,” the reflections looked up at ILP’s reflection, he was standing on the very edge of a nearby building, looking rather seriously at them, “explanations first, you can kill them after, it’s just polite that way.”

The other reflections chuckled.

“OF F*** YOU ILP!” Kida’s reflection screamed, “JUST BECAUSE YOU’VE BEEN GAINING POWER LONGER THAN US DOES NOT MAKE YOU THE LEADER!!” she muttered a few choice insults, holding onto one of Kida’s ears and pulling, as Kida bit her ankle, making her look down, “Why you little -“

A stream of expletives and a series of attacks by the two females followed this, making the captains wince.

“Cat fight,” Flash Step uttered.

“Don’t you mean wolf fight?” added Arceus as one of the Kida’s was slammed into the floor, splintering the wood, only for the other to retaliate and poke her in the eye.

In the end the Reflection backed off, back onto her perch beside Dauc’s Reflection. Kida didn’t seem to be fazed by the numerous slashes and harsh language, probably not understanding most of the words in her current state; instead she just sat back on her feet, licking the cuts on her arm.

Master Eon and ILP looked at each other, and identical looks of comprehension adorned their faces, as they looked back at Kida who shook herself slightly.

“Now, to business, Rotrum is you would please,” Eon Reflection said, drifting a hand over to where Rotrum stood atop one of the pillars.

“We are your shadows, the doubts and collective dark recesses of your mind and soul, manifested into a corporeal form. But we are mere reflections, in order to gain full control we have to destroy you. Simple really,” He mused, becoming uninterested in the proceedings and looking up at the sky, which had started to turn cloudy and dark.

“Yeah, so do us a favour, just roll over and take it like a man…” Charizard Reflection paused, “Or women”, indicating Kida with an inclination of his head.

This was bad, without their Zanpaktous they couldn’t easily defeat their reflections and without their spirits, honour bound they could not use their dormant forms, but soon they noticed they neither of their alter others had Zanpaktous either. Guess this meant a battle of brawns then; some of the captains were fine with this, cracking their knuckles and standing in their fighting stances. They heard a scratching and looked over as the blue lupine Female started to gouge the floor with her claws, grinning as she bared her canines up at her reflection, who grinned cruelly back.

The captains suddenly realised that they had never killed with their bare hands before, always using weapons to kill or injure. Not this time though, this time it was going to stain their skin.

By now the sky had turned threatening as crackles of light zipped across the clouds.

“Well do you want to die?” The captains turned round, and faced their Commander. Golde, it seemed, had finally returned. They shook their heads simultaneously.

“No? Then grow a pair and FIGHT THEM!”

 

[I like Pokemon (...)]

I also agree, that would be a great power.
Rangiku probably wouldn't mind playing with Hitsugaya and Ichigo too. xD
But now I expect Ant to make an Ichigo fanboy list. xD



My Lieutenant! *bear hugs*

so i got a chapter for you guys. also, i'm now in the PASBL so if any of you guys are i think it'd be cool to battle.

Rotrum and Jin get their screen time in this chapter and there are a shitload of fights starting.

NOTE: the long italic parts at the beginning and end are like a narrator-type dealy.

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One week after the attacks upon the Soul Society, things were still in a state of disconnection.The officers who had fought were still dealing with their wounds. Dre barely survived Ethan's Spregen and was taken straight to the operating room by the team sent to retreive Zam. The ninth captain himself was limping a bit on his right leg but seemed to be physically fine. The wound Blue had been dealt by Akitsu served as no hiderance to the young captain.

Enzeru had it the worst. The third lieutenant had nearly died, even with Tsukibana's healing. For the first four days of his recovery he layed, unconcious, in the Squad Four barracks. The other three days Enzeru was slipping in and out and could hardly remember the events of that night.

The lieutenant's injuries affected Katsumi as well. She dropped all other patients and stayed as Enzeru's personal caretaker. Her mind seered at the thought of the infamous night. She felt responsible. She was the veteran. She was supposed to protect him and failed. She couldn't get over it.
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"Kida? To what do I owe this pleasure?" Narcisse Dauc gave a playful smile. His right hand gripped the neck of a bottle. "Want a glass? '76 Montrachet. Exquisite wine if I do say so."

"No. I don't want your wine. I need to talk." Kida's eyes reflected her mood. They had become a dull gray hue and seemed, in a way, lifeless. "It's about last week."

The ex-captain quickly became serious. With a flick of the wrist he commanded his legion of maids to exit the room. He placed his glass on the small table next to his chair. "What about that night? I thought you already told me everything."

Kida took a seat in the plush chair on the opposite side of the table. She slowly raised her head, "I talked to Schiffer. According to his tests, Hayashi was her that night. He's the one that attacked Kira and Katsumi."

"But you don't think it was him?"

"No. I know it wasn't him. That level of brutality and the way they said the battle went down..." she took a long pause to collect her thoughts, "...that's just not his nature."

"And why do you say that?"

"Well the report said the attacker did most of his damage with Kido, but Hayashi fought using little to no Kido. The zanpakuto brings up issues too. Hayashi and Oto fought with flaming, hand-to-hand weapons. This guy used a black sword and manipulated mist. And..." Her eyes lowered and she fell silent.

"And what?"

"And...he always said he never wanted to turn out like his father. I never knew what he meant until I saw his memories. His father was, and still is, a violent prick. Hayashi always tried to fight without being to violent."

"That makes sense, but I am a man of science. If science said it was him, then I'm compelled to believe it." At the line, Kida jumped up and stormed out. Dauc could tell she was pissed.

"By the way, Golde wants you at a captain's meeting in two hours." She said the words in a harsh tone. The words stung Dauc's ears like a terrible poison. If Golde wanted him there, things weren't going to be good.

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Golde, perched on his small platform at the head of the room, looked at each of the elite subordinates before him. The captains of squads two through seven stood on his right, and eight through twelve on his left. "First of all, I'd like to welcome back captains Jin and Rotrum, from their missions."

"Glad to be back," Rotrum, the young Squad Ten captain, yelled from the far left.

"Also, I'd like to thank Dauc for taking the time to come take part in this meeting." The former captain, who stood next to Ryuu on the far end, responded with a nod. "I called this meeting because..." the head captain turned to face the back wall, "...it's been a month..."

"You're not about to say what I think you're going to say..." Blue intercepted.
Golde gave a nod towards the eleventh captain. "...it's been a month...and I think it's time we consider replacing Hayashi." The other captains seemed to grow distressed. After giving the others a moment to let the notion sink in, Golde said, "this selection will be different from the norm. I'm going to let you nominate the officer you think deserves the position. If someone seconds your nomination, the nominee will be put on the short list. The person who seconds a nomination will have to tell why they seconded it. Anyone have anything?"

Akira's hand shot up first. "I nominate Squad Four, fifth seat, Katsumi Sakurai."

"Seconded," Kida added quickly.

"Why?" Golde asked.

"She has a bankai and can expertly control it. She's an efficient battler and healer. She may have slipped up and caused a comrade to be injured, but she stayed with him and kept him alive until help arrived. She has demonstrated multiple times that she is a good candidate for the job."

"Anyone else?"

"Lieutenant of Squad Five, Sei Yamakiri," Dre spoke up.

"Reluctantly, I second it," Ryuu said. "She may be unbearably annoying but she has talent. In training she's been show to have effecient use of her bankai. The hyperactivity she normally expresses keeps her fighting longer than most. I feel that if she doesn't get the position this time, she should be put on the short list for the next vacancy."

"A very compelling arguement. Does anyone else have anything to add?"

"Yes. I do," Norio, the Squad Eight captain, flashed a considerate smile. "If I may, I'd like to nominate the fifth seat of my squad, Yoshihiro Arima."
At the mention of the name, a shock surged through Zameric. "No. No one will second that. Yoshi is a monster. He should be thrown into the Maggot's Nest, not given a captain's position."

"I second the nomination," Jordan said from his postion opposite Ryuu. "During his second week here, Yoshi came and asked to train with me. He said he wanted to fight a captain at full strength, so we went into the mountains of the Rukongai. We fought shikai-to-shikai for a while. The guy backed me into a corner and asked me to release my bankai. I told him it would be wrong for a fifth seat to fight a captain in bankai form but he insisted."

"This is utter ********," Zam cut in. "You're going to give the nomination to a sexually sadistic bastard like Yoshi just because Jordan seconded it!"

"Zam, I understand your concerns but please just let Jordan finish." The head captain punctuated the sentence by casting his hand toward the sixth captain.

"Like I was saying, he insisted I release my bankai, so I did. I told him he should do the same, if he had a bankai. He confirmed that he did but it wouldn't be needed. I began an all out assault but the guy dodged all of my attacks. He could've killed me if that were his objective. Yoshi is just as fast, if not faster, than Jin and he has the determination equal to that of Blue."

"I don't think I've ever heard you talk someone up so much, Jordan." Seijuro cracked from Jordan's right.

"Okay then. Is that everyone?" Golde asked.

Zam scoffed but that was the only thing anyone did.

"Okay. Tomorrow morning, ten a.m. Please captains, bring the nominees with you."

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That night Zam laid awake for hours thinking about the events of the meeting. Just picturing Yoshi wearing Hayashi's haori disgusted him. Sleep was finally beginning to take hold of him when a Hell Butterfly fluttered onto his shoulder. It's message was short: Zameric, four a.m., Maggot's Nest.

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As per the insect's message, the limping captain arrived at the Maggot's Nest at four. This place was used to hold the most dangerous criminals in the Soul Society. Between four and five a.m. the Onmitsukido rotated their guards. If
Zam was caught here without clearance when the guards returned, he'd be thrown in there himself. "Where are you?" The night gave no answer to his question. "Where are you?"

The night responded this time. "Right here Zam." A figure stepped from the shadow of the large wall. The full moon above illuminated the stranger. The moonlight caught his cobalt eyes as a smile crossed his lips. Shaggy black hair fell around his head. "I didn't think you'd come."

"Who are you?"

"Guess. Here's a hint: I'm supposed to be dead."

"It can't be. I mean the report said you were but you can't be. I watched you die.

Is it really you Hayashi?"

"In the flesh."

"Why'd you try to kill Enzeru?"

"I didn't mean to. I just got carried away. That's not important though. What's important is that you're on my side during the coming events. Things are going to get crazy and I need strong allies. Of my nine I only have one left." As if on cue a woman with burgandy hair, which fell over a green eye, stepped from behing Hayashi. "This is Akitsu."

"Wait. What do you mean things are going to get crazy?"

"I mean exactly what I said. Now, there's a lot I need to discuss with you."

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"This special captain's meeting is now called to order. Today we're going to choose a new captain of Squad Thirteen. Yoshi Arima, Sei Yamakiri, Katsumi Sakurai. Would you all please step forward," Golde commanded.
You'll know when to move. That was the message Hayashi gave Zameric that morning. It had replayed in his head all day. Zam had been informed of everything.

"So how's this work, Golde?" Rotrum piped.

"Good question. This will be an open vote. I say the name of the nominee, you raise your hands and the person with the most votes will be the new captain of Squad Thirteen."

"Kinda informal. Don't ya think Golde?" Jordan snorted.

"So is calling me Golde insted of Head Captain."

"Whatever. Let's just get on with this."

"Ok then. Let's get to it. Who wants Sei as the new captain?" Only one hand raised. Ryuu looked around the room as the only vote. "Wow. That didn't go over well. Anyone for Yoshi raise your hand." Blue, Dauc, Akira, Dre and Zam raised their hands. "And for Yoshi?" The remaining captains raised their hands. "So that makes one for Sei, five for Katsumi and six for Yoshi. That makes the new Squad Thirteen captain Yo..."

"Head Captain Golde!" A Squad One officer burst through the doors. "Ryoka have infiltrated the barracks and are headed this way."

"How many?"

"Two. One male and one female. According to Akon from Squad Twelve, Saiga Hayashi is back. The woman is unk..." The officer was cut as Hayashi threw him into the wall.

"Damn right I'm back." The raven haired man wore a maniacal sneer. "I believe you were just about to give my postion to a weakling like Yoshi." The former captain reached for his sword. His hand never made it. Before Hayashi could blink, Yoshi had his blade to the dark haired man's neck.

"Beckon, Arashikage." Yoshi's blade quickly morphed into the serpentine blades that had cut Sophia to pieces.

"You always were the smartest one of the bunch Yoshi. You just didn't have any common sense. You thought I would come here without back up. Move now." Upon command Zam tackled Yoshi to the ground.

"Zam what the hell?" Rotrum yelled. "You're attacking an ally to save an..." The young captain's voice trailed off as his eyes widened. His hand moved swiftly to his sword. "Freeze, Yuki Sendo." The blade spilt in two become two dagger-like swords. "Die Hayashi." At this command Rotrum released a flurry of ice daggers.

"Not quite." Hayashi and Rotrum watched as a wall of fire appeared between them and melted the oncoming knives.

"Burn, Iroriryuu." Jordan called from across the room, a smoking cannon on his right arm. "I'm afraid you'll have to stop there, Ice-boy."

"No Jordan. Let me handle him." Hayashi turned to Rotrum. "Meet me up on Sokyoku Hill. I know you think you can beat me, so I'm giving you the chance. I expect to see you on the Hill in seven minutes." Hayashi casually turned and began to walk away.

"No you don't!" Dre yelled. He now stood face to face with the former captain. Behind him stood Jin, Kida and Sei, all with swords drawn.

"You've got nowhere to run," Jin said.

"Let's just do this without violence," Sei added.

"Give up quietly and we'll have no problems," Kida spoke.
He didn't listen. Hayashi charged ahead with Akitsu in tow. They sped by Dre. He struck, attempting to stop them, only to cross swords with Akira. "Sorry Dre, but there's more to this than you know."

"Empty, Rek..." Jin's release crashed to a halt as a blade crossed his own. The opposition was Katsumi.

"Forgive me Captain, but a friend needs my help and if it means I have to fight you, then so be it."

Sei and Kida stood side by side, ready to attack. Dauc and Blue divided them, Dauc taking Kida to the right and Blue taking Sei to the left, leaving a clear path through the hall. As soon as Hayashi cleared eyesight the officers aligned with him ran in the same direction.

Seijuro looked up at Golde. "Orders sir." All the remaining officers turned to look at the Head Captain.

"You four in the hall go after the one that attacked you. Schiffer you go after Zam. Rotrum go to the Hill. Seijuro trail Rotrum and don't let Hayashi know you're coming," the blonde man said with a fake look of distress. "Jordan will probably be is back up. You're in charge of taking Burn-boy on if it comes to it. Now go."

"Yessir," They said in unison, before shunpo-ing away.

"Why no orders for me?" Norio asked.

"Because you think you're smarter than us. You think we won't notice who you really are. Why do you think Hayashi and I put this whole plan together? Kaguro Tagawa."

"So you remember me after all, Captain."

"How could I forget. It was the first time the Hayashi brothers had a problem with me personally. I let two officers get away with the murder of seven people. That day Senny and Hayashi murdered Kaguro Tagawa, his sister and five followers."

"You would'nt be talking about these people now, would you?" Kaguro, aka Norio, snapped his fingers. Around Golde appeared Kohaku, Midori, Tetsuo, Yoshi and Iwao with Ran on his shoulder. "And it wouldn't be a party without the Hayashi family." Upon a second snap Masanori, Hideo and Shigeo were behind the Head Captain.

"Where's Mitsuo?"

"Dead. He found out about the plan and didn't want any part of it," Tetsuo answered.

"So your plan is to ambush me? I am head of the Court Guard Squads for a reason you know."

"We know. That's we we're gonna finish you off," Midori said, grinning wickedly.
All the swords around Golde were drawn. "Well then," he said, drawing his own blade, "we have work to do Zachiru."

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Around the Seireitei battles are beginning. Upon the cliff of Sokyouku Hill, Rotrum prepares for his long desired battle with Hayashi. Seijuro lies in wait, just out of sight, for Jordan to appear.

At the West Gate, Dauc and Kida are reluctantly ready to fight for Hayashi. Dauc turning against the Soul Society to help a friend's plan. Kida fighting to bring her former subordinate back to the Squads.
In a courtyard near the Squad Nine barracks, Zameric and Ryuu stare eye-to-eye with ferocious intensity.

Cameron led the lieutenant Sei into the sewers, where he would have dominance.
While trying to escape from the East Gate, Akira is confronted by Dre. A battle Dre knows he has a disadvantage in is staring him in the face.

As Katsumi runs about the side streets and alleys that run like veins through the Seireitei she is silently being stalked by the commander and most gifted member of the Stealth Force.

Inside the meeting hall, Golde faces down opponents who severely outnumber him. His demeanor shows confidence but beneath the facade he truely believes he cannot win. How could he possibly win.

And just who is Norio Tsukihara? Golde referred to him as Kaguro Tagawa and claimed that Kaguro and his followers were killed. So just how is the group executing this mysterious plan of their's? Why are the Hayashi brothers helping this madman?

All shall be made clear soon enough.
 

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You said Yoshi twice...
Other than that...why am I helping Hayashi? This had better be a complex plot point mister!

 

If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?

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If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?
Probably the same as my actual zanpaktou spirit, seeing as ones Zanpaktou spirit reflects on the persons soul anyway.

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What would your Fullbring Weapon be?

I have a necklace with an Egyptian Arrow on it, i'd manipulate it to melt the metal chain link into a spear, and the egyptian arrow into a rounded triangular blade at the end.

 

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I wouldn't vote for a male. Not being sexist, but Yoshi sounds like a pig and i'm usually a good judge of character, plus the captains ranks needs more females!! D=

Yey, I back up Hayashi in the end

That's interesting. I'd like to see how it goes. Thogh I need to make a list of which captain confront which, lol



Kubo caught the flu bug, so there won't be a chapter... probably.
And, that's a pretty cool weapon. =D Though we don't know yet whether those weapons are pure weapons or like they have some sort of special power like a zanpakto.

If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?
Repeat: Probably the same as my zanpakto. ^.^ And by default, there should be like, an increase in power as compared to a normal release, like we've seen in the filler. Yeah.

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What would your Fullbring Weapon be?
I think mine would be a lightweight iron ring/bracelet on both hands. When activated I'd get a chain sort of weapon Octopus Arms that would be hidden in my sleeves. There'd be about three chains on each hand.

idk. XD If you watch MAR, you'll easily get the picture. XD
 

Answering that topic reminded me... Fullbring weapons = MAR arms. :P

Wow been awhile since my last chapter, so I did a quick recap at the beginning

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The Captains and some of their subordinates had congregated in the Captains hall, seated on the floor in varying positions, waiting for Golde to return from wherever he had disappeared to. Kida was curled up asleep resting beside Dauc after aimlessly following a butterfly around the room, Arceus was spread out on the floor with Kusari beside him on his stomach, head resting on stapled fingers, leaning against the walls were Rotrum and Jin, both silent and deep in thought. Cell was fidgeting trying to remain stoic like his captain, but personalities tend to get in the way. Newly appointed Captain Blue paced around in circles, throwing punches and fighting off imaginary foes, Lieutenant Eight was watching his Captain with great interest, as Kida’s tail flicked from side to side every so often.

This was such a cute scene in my mind.

At least, this is what Captain ILP read out to the group after he’d spent a couple of hours hacking into his own goddamn system to unearth all the nasty little secrets the previous 12th Captain had kept hidden.

They were all mulling over the events they had each experienced, trying in vain to connect with their spirits, only to receive an everlasting dial tone in response.

Two of the best lines in the whole chapter.

“Nooooo,” he wailed, “not my face, my beautiful face!” Dauc clutched at his face in mock horror, then peered through the fingers to she Kida bouncing on the balls of her feet again.

Dauc is such a fun character to beat up, isn't he?

“Hold it you two,” the reflections looked up at ILP’s reflection, he was standing on the very edge of a nearby building, looking rather seriously at them, “explanations first, you can kill them after, it’s just polite that way.”

The other reflections chuckled.

“OF F*** YOU ILP!” Kida’s reflection screamed, “JUST BECAUSE YOU’VE BEEN GAINING POWER LONGER THAN US DOES NOT MAKE YOU THE LEADER!!” she muttered a few choice insults, holding onto one of Kida’s ears and pulling, as Kida bit her ankle, making her look down, “Why you little -“

I lol'd way too much.
So my reflection was the first to gain power? Did you give a reason for this before (like was I the first to be infected?) or is this because of something else?
And Kida's reflection can talk, but she can't?

“Cat fight,” Flash Step uttered.

“Don’t you mean wolf fight?” added Arceus as one of the Kida’s was slammed into the floor, splintering the wood, only for the other to retaliate and poke her in the eye.

I have a feeling you had too much fun writing this chapter

“Now, to business, Rotrum is you would please,” Eon Reflection said, drifting a hand over to where Rotrum stood atop one of the pillars.

“We are your shadows, the doubts and collective dark recesses of your mind and soul, manifested into a corporeal form. But we are mere reflections, in order to gain full control we have to destroy you. Simple really,” He mused, becoming uninterested in the proceedings and looking up at the sky, which had started to turn cloudy and dark.

Did they rehearse this or something?

This was bad, without their Zanpaktous they couldn’t easily defeat their reflections and without their spirits, honour bound they could not use their dormant forms, but soon they noticed they neither of their alter others had Zanpaktous either. Guess this meant a battle of brawns then; some of the captains were fine with this, cracking their knuckles and standing in their fighting stances. They heard a scratching and looked over as the blue lupine Female started to gouge the floor with her claws, grinning as she bared her canines up at her reflection, who grinned cruelly back.

I wonder if ILP and R!ILP will decide to fight this over a game of chess.

“Well do you want to die?” The captains turned round, and faced their Commander. Golde, it seemed, had finally returned. They shook their heads simultaneously.

“No? Then grow a pair and FIGHT THEM!”

Golde doesn't have a reflection, right? I wonder what he'll do...

 

In other news, I have braces now. I'm one step closer to becoming a God robot.

[I like Pokemon (...)]

I also agree, that would be a great power.
Rangiku probably wouldn't mind playing with Hitsugaya and Ichigo too. xD
But now I expect Ant to make an Ichigo fanboy list. xD

If I can be bothered, yes.

so i got a chapter for you guys. also, i'm now in the PASBL so if any of you guys are i think it'd be cool to battle.

The PASBL?

NOTE: the long italic parts at the beginning and end are like a narrator-type dealy.

Which I quite like, it reminds me of all the things that happened, and sums up everything rather neatly.

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"You're not about to say what I think you're going to say..." Blue intercepted.

Golde gave a nod towards the eleventh captain. "...it's been a month...and I think it's time we consider replacing Hayashi." The other captains seemed to grow distressed. After giving the others a moment to let the notion sink in, Golde said, "this selection will be different from the norm. I'm going to let you nominate the officer you think deserves the position. If someone seconds your nomination, the nominee will be put on the short list. The person who seconds a nomination will have to tell why they seconded it. Anyone have anything?"

That's... a very simple way of doing it. Maybe this is how it should've been done from the beginning XD

"Reluctantly, I second it," Ryuu said. "She may be unbearably annoying but she has talent. In training she's been show to have effecient use of her bankai. The hyperactivity she normally expresses keeps her fighting longer than most. I feel that if she doesn't get the position this time, she should be put on the short list for the next vacancy."

Sounds like me to say something like that

"During his second week here, Yoshi came and asked to train with me. He said he wanted to fight a captain at full strength, so we went into the mountains of the Rukongai. We fought shikai-to-shikai for a while. The guy backed me into a corner and asked me to release my bankai. I told him it would be wrong for a fifth seat to fight a captain in bankai form but he insisted."

"This is utter ********," Zam cut in. "You're going to give the nomination to a sexually sadistic bastard like Yoshi just because Jordan seconded it!"

"Zam, I understand your concerns but please just let Jordan finish." The head captain punctuated the sentence by casting his hand toward the sixth captain.

"Like I was saying, he insisted I release my bankai, so I did. I told him he should do the same, if he had a bankai. He confirmed that he did but it wouldn't be needed. I began an all out assault but the guy dodged all of my attacks. He could've killed me if that were his objective. Yoshi is just as fast, if not faster, than Jin and he has the determination equal to that of Blue."

"I don't think I've ever heard you talk someone up so much, Jordan." Seijuro cracked from Jordan's right.

That's very true.
But that is the level of the 5th seat? Makes me wonder if he's put there so other people (who don't know his true strength) will underestimate him, or if he really IS the weakest.

"Who are you?"

"Guess. Here's a hint: I'm supposed to be dead."

"It can't be. I mean the report said you were but you can't be. I watched you die.

Is it really you Hayashi?"

"In the flesh."

Well then, official confirmation. I'm sure Hayashi is smart enough to change his battle style, and I'm sure his Zanpakutou's change will be explained unless it has already and I just forgot.

"Good question. This will be an open vote. I say the name of the nominee, you raise your hands and the person with the most votes will be the new captain of Squad Thirteen."

"Kinda informal. Don't ya think Golde?" Jordan snorted.

"So is calling me Golde insted of Head Captain."

I lol'd

"Ok then. Let's get to it. Who wants Sei as the new captain?" Only one hand raised. Ryuu looked around the room as the only vote. "Wow. That didn't go over well. Anyone for Yoshi raise your hand." Blue, Dauc, Akira, Dre and Zam raised their hands. "And for Yoshi?" The remaining captains raised their hands. "So that makes one for Sei, five for Katsumi and six for Yoshi. That makes the new Squad Thirteen captain Yo..."

Okay, of them, Dauc, Zam, Akira, Blue and MC are with Hayahi (unless I'm wrong somewhere?). All of them except for MC voted for Katsumi, which means that this voting is probably not directly in line with Hayashi's plan, unless he WANTS Yoshi to not be captain in which case, Jordan wouldn't have voted for him so Hayashi probably doesn't care if he's captain or not.

"Damn right I'm back." The raven haired man wore a maniacal sneer. "I believe you were just about to give my postion to a weakling like Yoshi."

He just calls him a weakling, but he really could've said the same thing about the others.

"Burn, Iroriryuu." Jordan called from across the room, a smoking cannon on his right arm. "I'm afraid you'll have to stop there, Ice-boy."

I'm sure he enjoyed calling him that.

"Sorry Dre, but there's more to this than you know."

Of course Akira would apologise

the blonde man said with a fake look of distress.

I KNEW there was something up with him.

"Because you think you're smarter than us. You think we won't notice who you really are. Why do you think Hayashi and I put this whole plan together? Kaguro Tagawa."

Xanatos Gambit, Xanatos Gambits everywhere.

"You would'nt be talking about these people now, would you?" Kaguro, aka Norio, snapped his fingers. Around Golde appeared Kohaku, Midori, Tetsuo, Yoshi and Iwao with Ran on his shoulder. "And it wouldn't be a party without the Hayashi family." Upon a second snap Masanori, Hideo and Shigeo were behind the Head Captain.

My memory is bad with all the names, but this is all the new people, and Hayashi's brothers, right?

All the swords around Golde were drawn. "Well then," he said, drawing his own blade, "we have work to do Zachiru."

I'm certain Head Captain will be able to hold his own, but if they're all as good as Kaguro... Well, this could be trouble.
 

If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?
I'm guessing this is related to the recent filler that I haven't yet seen?
And it'd probably be the same as my current powers.

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What would your Fullbring weapon be?
My glasses. Then they'd turn into a bazooka.
 

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The Captains and some of their subordinates had congregated in the Captains hall, seated on the floor in varying positions, waiting for Golde to return from wherever he had disappeared to. Kida was curled up asleep resting beside Dauc after aimlessly following a butterfly around the room, Arceus was spread out on the floor with Kusari beside him on his stomach, head resting on stapled fingers, leaning against the walls were Rotrum and Jin, both silent and deep in thought. Cell was fidgeting trying to remain stoic like his captain, but personalities tend to get in the way. Newly appointed Captain Blue paced around in circles, throwing punches and fighting off imaginary foes, Lieutenant Eight was watching his Captain with great interest, as Kida’s tail flicked from side to side every so often.

This was such a cute scene in my mind.

At least, this is what Captain ILP read out to the group after he’d spent a couple of hours hacking into his own goddamn system to unearth all the nasty little secrets the previous 12th Captain had kept hidden.

They were all mulling over the events they had each experienced, trying in vain to connect with their spirits, only to receive an everlasting dial tone in response.

Two of the best lines in the whole chapter.

“Nooooo,” he wailed, “not my face, my beautiful face!” Dauc clutched at his face in mock horror, then peered through the fingers to she Kida bouncing on the balls of her feet again.

Dauc is such a fun character to beat up, isn't he?

“Hold it you two,” the reflections looked up at ILP’s reflection, he was standing on the very edge of a nearby building, looking rather seriously at them, “explanations first, you can kill them after, it’s just polite that way.”

The other reflections chuckled.

“OF F*** YOU ILP!” Kida’s reflection screamed, “JUST BECAUSE YOU’VE BEEN GAINING POWER LONGER THAN US DOES NOT MAKE YOU THE LEADER!!” she muttered a few choice insults, holding onto one of Kida’s ears and pulling, as Kida bit her ankle, making her look down, “Why you little -“

I lol'd way too much.
So my reflection was the first to gain power? Did you give a reason for this before (like was I the first to be infected?) or is this because of something else?
And Kida's reflection can talk, but she can't?

“Cat fight,” Flash Step uttered.

“Don’t you mean wolf fight?” added Arceus as one of the Kida’s was slammed into the floor, splintering the wood, only for the other to retaliate and poke her in the eye.

I have a feeling you had too much fun writing this chapter

“Now, to business, Rotrum is you would please,” Eon Reflection said, drifting a hand over to where Rotrum stood atop one of the pillars.

“We are your shadows, the doubts and collective dark recesses of your mind and soul, manifested into a corporeal form. But we are mere reflections, in order to gain full control we have to destroy you. Simple really,” He mused, becoming uninterested in the proceedings and looking up at the sky, which had started to turn cloudy and dark.

Did they rehearse this or something?

This was bad, without their Zanpaktous they couldn’t easily defeat their reflections and without their spirits, honour bound they could not use their dormant forms, but soon they noticed they neither of their alter others had Zanpaktous either. Guess this meant a battle of brawns then; some of the captains were fine with this, cracking their knuckles and standing in their fighting stances. They heard a scratching and looked over as the blue lupine Female started to gouge the floor with her claws, grinning as she bared her canines up at her reflection, who grinned cruelly back.

I wonder if ILP and R!ILP will decide to fight this over a game of chess.

“Well do you want to die?” The captains turned round, and faced their Commander. Golde, it seemed, had finally returned. They shook their heads simultaneously.

“No? Then grow a pair and FIGHT THEM!”

Golde doesn't have a reflection, right? I wonder what he'll do...

 

In other news, I have braces now. I'm one step closer to becoming a God robot.

[GalladeX]

The PASBL?

The Pokemon Anime-Style Battling League, iirc.

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What would your Fullbring Weapon be?
A fancy wine glass that turns into a Civil War Cannon.

Or maybe my headphones. They'd turn into an awesome bladed boomerang type thing.

 

Also, poor Kubo. D:

My Lieutenant! *bear hugs*

*Squished*

[Eon Master]

Hello, just dropping in again. Damn my never having time for extended discussions, or coming on when nobody else is.

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What would your Fullbring weapon be?

I like this topic, for once.

Hmm... probably either my steel etched-cross ring becoming a giant chakram blade, or an old key I have would become a Gwan dao. If you don't know what that is, here's a picture: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_Yxa877hbFD...M/s320/guandao
 

Somebody should do a fanfic of us as Fullbringers. It would be amazing.

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"I don't think I've ever heard you talk someone up so much, Jordan." Seijuro cracked from Jordan's right.

First sign something is up. Jordan never talks anyone up... at least not anything more than whether they're strong or weak and why. Although, you did get me perfectly, I would be the one to say that.

"Ok then. Let's get to it. Who wants Sei as the new captain?" Only one hand raised. Ryuu looked around the room as the only vote. "Wow. That didn't go over well. Anyone for Yoshi raise your hand." Blue, Dauc, Akira, Dre and Zam raised their hands. "And for Yoshi?" The remaining captains raised their hands. "So that makes one for Sei, five for Katsumi and six for Yoshi. That makes the new Squad Thirteen captain Yo..."

Second sign. Me not voting for the veteran. I believe in experience > talent, especially for a command position. Also, third sign, Kida not voting for the woman.

Also, why did Dre not vote for his own Lieutenant? Nothing wrong with that, it just struck me as odd.

"Who are you?"

"Guess. Here's a hint: I'm supposed to be dead."

"It can't be. I mean the report said you were but you can't be. I watched you die.

Is it really you Hayashi?"

"In the flesh."

Slightly cliched, but decidedly epic.

"Damn right I'm back." The raven haired man wore a maniacal sneer. "I believe you were just about to give my postion to a weakling like Yoshi."

Judging from the way you're acting, either you're out for revenge, you're doing a damn good job of acting, or someone/something is controling or impersonating you. None of those is a good thing.

"That makes sense, but I am a man of science. If science said it was him, then I'm compelled to believe it." At the line, Kida jumped up and stormed out. Dauc could tell she was pissed.

Why do you make Dauc into such an idiot?

A) There is no scientific method / device that is infallible. A man of science like him would know that better than anyone, no matter how arrogant he is.

B) He clearly didn't notice that Kida was already struggling with herself. No powers of observation.
 

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Lieutenant Eight was watching his Captain with great interest, as Kida’s tail flicked from side to side every so often.

For a minute, I though you meant the Lieutenant of Eighth Division, but then I realized it was Circ and laughed. He's not going to be happy with his nickname.

“Anybody got any bright ideas?” Master Charizard asked, fuming at their defeats.

“We wait,” said Master Eon calmly.

“Tch!” Master Charizard growled.

Ah yes, of course. Still analyzing the situation.

Dauc looked down at Lieutenant Eight, as he followed Kida’s rapid ascent of Seireiteis pillars, “I guess it’s a predator thing, you know, to keep on eye on potential rivals or prey”, Eight said, moving on as if he’d seen nothing out of the ordinary.

Circ would do that xD

Master Eon and ILP looked at each other, and identical looks of comprehension adorned their faces, as they looked back at Kida who shook herself slightly

I was waiting for that >=] I'd figured it out at about the same time.

This was bad, without their Zanpaktous they couldn’t easily defeat their reflections and without their spirits, honour bound they could not use their dormant forms, but soon they noticed they neither of their alter others had Zanpaktous either. Guess this meant a battle of brawns then; some of the captains were fine with this, cracking their knuckles and standing in their fighting stances.

I knew it. Since we didn't have swords, they wouldn't either. They grow stronger from the presence of Shinigami abilities, so the only thing left is hand-to-hand combat. Nicely done.
 

I've started writing for my chapter again as well, so hopefull I get it up... sooner or later :/

[kusari]

[font='arial'The Captains and some of their subordinates had congregated in the Captains hall, seated on the floor in varying positions, waiting for Golde to return from wherever he had disappeared to. Kida was curled up asleep resting beside Dauc after aimlessly following a butterfly around the room, Arceus was spread out on the floor with Kusari beside him on his stomach, head resting on stapled fingers, leaning against the walls were Rotrum and Jin, both silent and deep in thought. Cell was fidgeting trying to remain stoic like his captain, but personalities tend to get in the way. Newly appointed Captain Blue paced around in circles, throwing punches and fighting off imaginary foes, Lieutenant Eight was watching his Captain with great interest, as Kida’s tail flicked from side to side every so often.
Not to be weird or anything but i can't picture the part with Me and Arc without us hugging. it's just odd. and you are kinda acting...childlike in your demeanor.

“Nooooo,” he wailed, “not my face, my beautiful face!” Dauc clutched at his face in mock horror, then peered through the fingers to she Kida bouncing on the balls of her feet again.
lolololololololololololololololololol

“OF F*** YOU ILP!” Kida’s reflection screamed, “JUST BECAUSE YOU’VE BEEN GAINING POWER LONGER THAN US DOES NOT MAKE YOU THE LEADER!!” she muttered a few choice insults, holding onto one of Kida’s ears and pulling, as Kida bit her ankle, making her look down, “Why you little -“
You be omnomnomin all up on yourself.

“Cat fight,” Flash Step uttered.
get the mud and bikinis!

The captains suddenly realised that they had never killed with their bare hands before, always using weapons to kill or injure. Not this time though, this time it was going to stain their skin.
Blue is going to love these fights if he ever returns.

“No? Then grow a pair and FIGHT THEM!”
i already have a pair. thank you.
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Which I quite like, it reminds me of all the things that happened, and sums up everything rather neatly.
i'm going to try to start and end each chapter with a little narrator bit.

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That's... a very simple way of doing it. Maybe this is how it should've been done from the beginning XD
i just chose it because it is the easiest to write

Sounds like me to say something like that
well that's how i think the answer would be worded on a standardized test and when you talk that's what i think of, because you're so smart.

That's very true.
But that is the level of the 5th seat? Makes me wonder if he's put there so other people (who don't know his true strength) will underestimate him, or if he really IS the weakest.
Ran and Iwao are the weakest. if we look at it the TV Tropes way then you would call Norio/Kaguro the Big Bad and Yoshi would be his Dragon.

Well then, official confirmation. I'm sure Hayashi is smart enough to change his battle style, and I'm sure his Zanpakutou's change will be explained unless it has already and I just forgot.
sure.

I lol'd
lololololol

Okay, of them, Dauc, Zam, Akira, Blue and MC are with Hayahi (unless I'm wrong somewhere?). All of them except for MC voted for Katsumi, which means that this voting is probably not directly in line with Hayashi's plan, unless he WANTS Yoshi to not be captain in which case, Jordan wouldn't have voted for him so Hayashi probably doesn't care if he's captain or not.
P-L-O-T

He just calls him a weakling, but he really could've said the same thing about the others.
which others?

I'm sure he enjoyed calling him that.
probably.

Of course Akira would apologise
apologize.

I KNEW there was something up with him.
yeah. he's on my side.

Xanatos Gambit, Xanatos Gambits everywhere.
who's Xanatos?

My memory is bad with all the names, but this is all the new people, and Hayashi's brothers, right?
correct.

I'm certain Head Captain will be able to hold his own, but if they're all as good as Kaguro... Well, this could be trouble.
most of them are.
 

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First sign something is up. Jordan never talks anyone up... at least not anything more than whether they're strong or weak and why. Although, you did get me perfectly, I would be the one to say that.
one...


Second sign. Me not voting for the veteran. I believe in experience > talent, especially for a command position. Also, third sign, Kida not voting for the woman.
two...three...

Also, why did Dre not vote for his own Lieutenant? Nothing wrong with that, it just struck me as odd.
four...


Slightly cliched, but decidedly epic.
I liked cliches


Judging from the way you're acting, either you're out for revenge, you're doing a damn good job of acting, or someone/something is controling or impersonating you. None of those is a good thing.
D.) All of the above

Why do you make Dauc into such an idiot?
i try to make him blunt and oblivious but it doesn't come out right.

A) There is no scientific method / device that is infallible. A man of science like him would know that better than anyone, no matter how arrogant he is.
i expected ILP to say that.

 

so yeah. i'm tired.

[Golde]

Ok, been chatting with Blue and I am seriously considering immediately starting my fic up. Just saying.

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BULL. ****.

1. No way Kubo creates unique characters such as this, attack Uryu, show off with claymores, then just disappear with no powers. So, this won't happen the way they plan.

2. Chad? Leave? No. I think instead they should transfer their powers (mostly) to Chad, and he gets new powers. Ichigo deals his own way. Some spiritual radiation or something


Beh.
 

[I like Pokemon (...)]

The Pokemon Anime-Style Battling League, iirc.

Ah, thanks.

Somebody should do a fanfic of us as Fullbringers. It would be amazing.

Yes, yes someone should.
So the list of fics that should be written stands as:
Us as Arrancars, us as Fullbrings, and should I add us as Vaizards to that list too?

Not to be weird or anything but i can't picture the part with Me and Arc without us hugging. it's just odd. and you are kinda acting...childlike in your demeanor.

D'aww

lolololololololololololololololololol

You be omnomnomin all up on yourself.

get the mud and bikinis!

i already have a pair. thank you.

Why does this side of you seem so foreign to me?

well that's how i think the answer would be worded on a standardized test and when you talk that's what i think of, because you're so smart.

You're making me blush.

Ran and Iwao are the weakest. if we look at it the TV Tropes way then you would call Norio/Kaguro the Big Bad and Yoshi would be his Dragon.

Ah I really suck with names.

P-L-O-T

...What?

which others?

Katsumi and Sei. Ignore this bit, I kind of realised the flaw in my reasoning.

apologize.

I'm a Brit

who's Xanatos?

Aizen's dad.

Judging from the way you're acting, either you're out for revenge, you're doing a damn good job of acting, or someone/something is controling or impersonating you. None of those is a good thing.

D.) All of the above

I was not expecting you to say something like that XD

A) There is no scientific method / device that is infallible. A man of science like him would know that better than anyone, no matter how arrogant he is.

i expected ILP to say that.

I was thinking more along the lines of "Dauc would trust that Ryuu thoroughly tested it. He knows how strange the results are and would use as many tests as possible and see if they still come out as being Hayashi."

Ok, been chatting with Blue and I am seriously considering immediately starting my fic up. Just saying.

DO EEEET

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BULL. ****.

1. No way Kubo creates unique characters such as this, attack Uryu, show off with claymores, then just disappear with no powers. So, this won't happen the way they plan.

2. Chad? Leave? No. I think instead they should transfer their powers (mostly) to Chad, and he gets new powers. Ichigo deals his own way. Some spiritual radiation or something


Beh.
 

Completely agree with you. Except the second part. Something more... Complex will happen that that.

[Cell]

I'm just hopping by, I'll make sure to read all the posts since my last visit when I have made some time.



That aside, I have decided to scrap my Bankai (shikai undecided upon, although I do like it a lot) and design a new one. Looking back to it, it's awefully complicated and (just having read it) doesn't capture the essence I wanted off it.

I've been thinking about a new bankai (totally different than what I had) and I think I'll be finished with it when I'll hop in again. I'll probably make a sketch of what it looks like aswell.



And now I'm off again as another sleepless programming night lurks around the corner.

Ciaossu,

-Cell

[VizardBlue]

Welp, as you know, i haven't posted on here in a while, although, i've had alot of times to be ABLE to do it, i didn't do it, because i've always been pissed off by Serebii's lag, but it's working quite well right now, and i've decided to rewrite my prologue, and to the people who already reviewed it beforehand, let me tell you, ignore the bottom statement, since i already told it to you but...

WARNING, EVERYTHING past Edelinna's description was a total crapshoot, i REALLY wanted to get my backstory out of the way, and I REALLY hate it, but i wan't to get back to the main story, so i apologize.
Peace, Love, and Fighting, here's my new Prologue. <3

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Undead Flowers, Reroll
"Fear is a state of MIND. Luckily, I'm Insane! "

Peace. This may seem like a word that was easy to understand, easy to obtain, but it was not, and no one in the Seireitei had ever believed they would see it. You see, peace used to be abundant. Now I'm not saying that we’re not still at peace, the Seireitei wasn't at WAR. They just weren't all, well, you know, happy. A better phrase for what they were was 'momentarily disgruntled'. It all happened maybe 100 years ago. On March 12th: they all grew sick of the colour blue. If anyone asked WHAT happened on March 12th, they would all just grimace and say they would tell you when you were older.

Of course, I've now piqued your interest. If I haven't, kindly leave the room before I press my secret button and you fall into a room full of everlasting fire where you will burn eternally. Thank you very much. So I guess before we get to the young kid running for his life across desert sands from the largest group of Vasto Lorde ever recorded, I’ll tell you what happened THAT day.

The Seireitei was peaceful, quite peaceful, as it had been for 500 years or so: with no major hollow outbreaks, no crazy god impersonators trying to take over the world because they could, no nothing. Some dubbed it “The Resting”. Others said we were just really damn lucky. Well, the Seireitei, was an organized place. The soul reapers who had the idiocy to tell humans about the Seireitei had mixed it up entirely. One of those humans was Tite Kubo. You should never trust him, and if you see him, shoot him. Twice. As I was saying...

The Head Captain, Edelina Logge, was worried. Extremely worried. Edelina Logge was someone to be feared, and the fact that she had a bloody lightning zanpakutou didn't help. No one would believe me if i said she was bouncing off the walls, so I'll stick with saying she was pacing back and forth eating candy. Edelina LOVED Candy. A lot, she ate it all the time, and it was a wonder how she kept her figure. Of course, things like figures were undescribed, and no one had bothered enough to question The Universe on why she wasn't immobile. Rumours even had it that she had a secret vault, that went as deep as a mountain, which was filled with just candy. She didn't have any redeeming features above the waste if you catch my drift… Ehem, onwards we go.

Edelina kept on receiving reports of murders, LOTS of Murders, in the past month. She had received reports of over 200 murders alone. Nobody even knew what the murderer looked like. All this was happening too fast. Although the mass murders were shocking, the fact that they were in district 80 was not. District 80, the sliming stink of the Seireitei, was where all the criminals, murderers, and violence was, the most horrid of the horrid, it was reviled. Of course, no one had BOTHERED to think that they should join them all together and treat everyone as equals. They had other matters to attend to, you know, like parties and stuff. As she was pacing, the 2nd squad captain, Jin, appeared behind her.
"Hey."
"EEP! I told you not to DO that!" Edelina cried with an exasperated sigh.
"15 more murders." Captain Jin said, a stoic expression that was not unknown on his face.
"WHAT?! That can't be, you just reported to me 8 hours ago!" said Edelina, clearly sick of all this.
"I don't control when murders happen."
"This is the last straw! I'm sending in the lieutenants to patrol District 80, 24/7!" Although Edelina was usually bubbly and quite fun to be around, she became very serious whenever trouble arose.
"These measures are unnecessary, we can simply send in Cell if you need someone to go th-"
They both froze. An immense reiatsu signature had just shown up. It was towering; they could both feel it easily from the middle of the Seireitei. Who could give off such a signature that they could feel it inside the reiatsu-cancelling walls of Squad 1?
"I’m going there now Jin, alert Zameric, I.L.P and Eon of this. Bring them all here, along with yourself. This ends NOW. Also alert Arcin if you can. I expect casualties." Edelina yelled, barely finishing before shunpo-ing off, the door of Squad 1 being blown off. Now she was worried, extremely worried; it was a massive reiatsu signature, but it was uncontrolled, clearly whoever had it had no idea what they were doing.
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Edelina arrived at the sign of the massive signature shortly, followed by Eon, I.L.P, Jin, and Zameric. Arcin had arrived shortly after, a confused expression on his face, and the cookie in his mouth falling on the ground, the scene before them was disgusting.

There, stood before them, was a kid of 5'4, simply covered in blood, holding a crudely made dagger. There, he stood, with long blue hair that was spiked in places and reached down to halfway down his back. On his face stood a look of rage, pure, cold, rage, and around him stood maybe 4 bodies, and a giant mob of 50 people. He started yelling.
"YOU THINK THIS IS FUNNY?! WHAT DID YOU WANT FROM THEM?!" He now had a look of maddening malice. His eyes were red, with a milky insane look to them.
"THEY HAD NOTHING, YOU IDIOTS! YOU'LL MURDER OVER A PIECE OF BREAD!?" He roared. He walked over to the nearest man, a sneering, crude looking man, and took the dagger, ramming it in his stomach. He kicked the dead body over with indifference, ripped the sword out of the dead hands, and began attacking the other members of the mob. Even with so many witnesses, and every captain's there, no one could describe the attack that stood before them. He had started attacking all of mob, side-stepping almost all of the attacks. All captains were reluctant to step in, not knowing if the 50 members had killed the dead family, or if he had. When later asked, the kid had said they were just random people, but, the most horrid part of is it all, he had killed every single one of them. Every single one. You could practically swim in all the blood that surrounded them. All the captains stood in horror, but after the kid had yelled the entire time, they had learned that those 50 were the last members of a horrific gang, the murders before them had all been this young boy, killing them all. As the kid finally roared in anger, lopping the head off of the final member. He just stood there, panting, on all four limbs. Some of his hair stained in blood. He then stood up, and began laughing. A laugh that they knew no sane person could laugh. The captains finally decided to react.
"RESTRAIN HIM AT ONCE!" Edelina yelled.
The other captain's shunpo-ed over, restraining him.
They knew he could no longer walk the streets; his signature alone was too strong to be walking the streets among these people. They would have to take him to the seireitei, and they didn't want him in The Maggot's Nest; he'd probably fight everyone there too, and sadly kill them. They would have to take him in, teach him how to use his reiatsu, and let him become a soul reaper. He would have to be taught and probably put in therapy too. With a grimace, and knocking him out, they took the boy back to the Seireitei, where he was first put in Squad 4's Hospital for the severe wounds he had suffered during the fight. He went through the Academy, surprisingly being put in Squad 7; most expected him to go into Squad 11, where he was shortly instituted as a Lieutenant. Shortly after that, he had participated in the shenanigans of the Squad 6's adventure to Hueco Mundo, the horrible incident with Hayashi, the squad 13 captain, and many more. After that, Luppi, the squad 11 captain at the time, wearily said she was resigning, and after a VERY short talk, Blue became the captain of Squad 11.

This was the beginning of the tale of Cameron Blue, now let us go back to how he's running his *** off, screaming obscenities, and running away from that giant horde of hollows I mentioned earlier. At this point we can conclude: the universe loves ****ing with Cameron Blue.



 

Yes yes, i know I mary sue'd half of this, and I apologize. As I told you before, I really wanted to get a backstory out of the way for the main story..

[Sapphiredragon929]

Hwoops I died.

If you were a zanpaktou spirit, what would your powers be?

I'd use flowers and attack with them. I'd just use petals for offense/defense/naughty thorn whips/tentacles/pollen attacks that can stun etc. etc. I could also create gusts of wind from a tiny tiny tiny tiny tiny tiny fan. B)

IT'D BE UBER AWESOME

[Eon Master]

Sigh... I'm sorry you guys, but the universe just seems to have my fanfic right now. I've had writers block, I can't think in coherent order for the sequence of events, and now Cell, who features prominently in the next chapter, is changing his Bankai, which I'd planned on showing.

So here are your two options.

1.) I either continue the current fanfic, which could take upwards of another month for the next chapter, and then there are still no garauntees I'd finish it.

2.) I post what would've happened in my current fanfic (i.e. the plot and its many twists), then move on and create a new fanfic with us as Fullbringers, fighting in a war against the Hollows. I've got an idea stream for the second one, at least. Not to mention I'd be including only the people who are semi-active, so I wouldn't have to stress over the inactive people like Luppi.

I'll give you guys until late tomorrow to decide. I'm personally leaning towards the second one.

[VizardBlue]

Sigh... I'm sorry you guys, but the universe just seems to have my fanfic right now. I've had writers block, I can't think in coherent order for the sequence of events, and now Cell, who features prominently in the next chapter, is changing his Bankai, which I'd planned on showing.

So here are your two options.

1.) I either continue the current fanfic, which could take upwards of another month for the next chapter, and then there are still no garauntees I'd finish it.

2.) I post what would've happened in my current fanfic (i.e. the plot and its many twists), then move on and create a new fanfic with us as Fullbringers, fighting in a war against the Hollows. I've got an idea stream for the second one, at least. Not to mention I'd be including only the people who are semi-active, so I wouldn't have to stress over the inactive people like Luppi.

I'll give you guys until late tomorrow to decide. I'm personally leaning towards the second one.

What exactly is a full bringer? is that something in bleach? I haven't been reading it recently. Explain pl0x? If i like full bringers, i'll probably vote for Number 2.

[MasterCharizard15]

1.) I either continue the current fanfic, which could take upwards of another month for the next chapter, and then there are still no garauntees I'd finish it.

2.) I post what would've happened in my current fanfic (i.e. the plot and its many twists), then move on and create a new fanfic with us as Fullbringers, fighting in a war against the Hollows. I've got an idea stream for the second one, at least. Not to mention I'd be including only the people who are semi-active, so I wouldn't have to stress over the inactive people like Luppi.

I'll give you guys until late tomorrow to decide. I'm personally leaning towards the second one.

I vote for number 2, We already discussed my Fullbring...
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Chapter 11

Recap: Blue and Min killed some thugs, Ilp and Kida were unleashed on the world and MC stormed off somewhere.

~Do you remember the moonlight? ~

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Fear.

Pure fear filled the young boy’s heart and mind as he watched his teams get brutally killed by hollows. Their blood was being mixed in with rain and wet soil on the ground, storm clouds blocking the sun and lightning dancing in the sky. A tree was struck by lightning, being set a blaze to illuminate the massacre in front of him.

His blonde hair soaked with rain and blood and his brown eyes wide with terror of his situation. The hollows in the forest were overwhelming and easily ate the other academy students and their instructor. Five of the fiends slowly moved toward him to devour the last of the fool hardy class that dared to enter their domain.

Move.

His body refused to listen to him, the wet soil enhancing the sound of the hollows approach. He berated his body’s inability to move and cursed at predicament. His body trembling, either from the cold wetness of the rain and mud or from fear, it didn’t matter. He screamed at his body to move, to fight, to avenge his fallen classmates, to kill those murderous hollows, and to save him from such a horrible fate.

FIGHT!

It could have been adrenaline from the battle, hatred from the murder, rage from being attack, sadness from losing so many friends, or desperation to survive, but whatever it was it gave him to strength to take his sword a slice the first hollow he saw in half. The next swiftly across the mask, the third lost its legs before being stabbed in the head.

The boy’s movements were a dance, full of rage, anger, sadness, angst, despair and desperation. Every kill drove him deeper into his bloodlust, his brown eyes reflecting pure and utter carnage.

Death.

More hollows came to slaughter; eventually the boy’s body reached its limits, trembling after killing its twenty hollow killing spree. Ten more hollows came and surrounded him, each ready to eat the person that nearly wiped them all out. The boy was drenched in mud and blood and didn’t even have the strength to scream. His body too drained from battle to do anything other than lay stranded on the forest’s damp ground.

Hope.

“I came because I saw the fire, but it seems I have some things to take care of first.”

That was then the boy herd before three hollows were burned alive right in front of him, the next three were sliced in half and the final four were all blasted to bits by a giant fireball.

The rain connected with the fire, making steam rise and cover the burnt ground and hollow remains. From the flames came a guy walking with claymore in his right hand and canon on his left arm. He was wearing some long coat with a mark on it, possibly nobility or maybe something else. The boy struggled to stay awake but sadly his body betrayed him and he slowly blacked out, the last thing he saw was a hand from the guy reaching out to him.

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Rotrum, the flash freeze death child, walked up to see a squad 2 shinigami waiting for him on top a tree. It was cloudy and the ground was still wet, so he wondered how the ninja shinigami managed to avoid getting wet at all.

“Your late, little brother…” the ninja said with a tone of indifference.

“I had a client earlier, the mission took a bit longer than I expected.” Rotrum explained.

The two seemed so different; you would be forgiven if you didn’t believe they were brothers.

The older brother, Jin, was dressed in the ninja styled uniform of squad 2, while the younger brother, Rotrum, was dressed a regular Rukongai civilian.

Jin gave off an aura of calm, calculating and collected peace. Rotrum gave off an aura of rage, impatience and energetic fury. The two balanced each other’s presence one could say.

“So have you decided if you are going to become a shinigami yet?” Jin asked looking at the clouds.

“I’ll become one when you tell me who killed our father!” Rotrum screamed at Jin, rage in his eyes.

“You do know revenge won’t bring him back to us, so it’s pointless to let yourself be consumed with vengeance.” Jin said coldly, glancing at his little brother.

“Who are you to tell me what is pointless!? Why should you get to decide if I should seek revenge or not!? Whoever killed our father deserves to die along with everything they cherish!” Rotrum justified himself hand on his sword and fiery eyes glaring coldly at his brother.

“Calm down, killing me will just keep you from your vengeance, speaking of, since mother died giving birth to you, I should kill you then following your logic.” Jin countered while locking his eyes with Rotrum.

Rotrum eyes watered as he face began to twist in pain, trying to hold the tears back, he refused to shed tears for anyone, especially in front of his older brother. Rotrum held his head down and asked his brother a simple question.

“Is this your form of revenge? Is this to punish me for being born? To torture me with this knowledge until I do what you want!? I DIDN’T ASK TO BE BORN! TO HAVE MY PARENTS DIE ON ME! I DIDN’T WANT ANY OF THIS!” Rotrum cried as he ran away from his brother, the symbol of his past and his pain.

Jin watched as his brother ran away and cursed himself for being so harsh. He hated seeing his little brother like this, but he was convinced in what he was doing was protecting his brother. He knew Rotrum would die trying to get revenge, and telling him one of the most influences in the Soul Society was involved with their father’s death was not love, it was a death sentence.

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District 66, violence was its main flaw, as fighting was a common as a hello there, some may even go so far as to say that was the hello there. Two men came from the hollow forest covered in mud and blood and went into a house near the forest.

The storm had cleared and the sun was shining on the mud puddles. The taller one of them treated the many wounds of the other and took his soiled and torn academy student uniform and gave him a dry robe.
“Who are you and where am I?” The blonde boy asked looking around his surroundings.

“I’m just a person traveling; I saw you were injured so I treated you.” The dark haired guy told him.

“Why would you help a stranger?”

“It’s the right thing to do, also your uniform was soaking wet, so I cleaned it for you.” The guy said handing him the uniform, wrinkled but clean.

“Thank you, may I ask your name?”

“Sure, I’m Jordan Inferno, but I’m told it’s polite to introduce yourself before asking.”

“I’m Testu Shinku, but my friends call me Muffin.”

“Nickname basis already, huh? Then call me MC.”

The two traded pleasantries and ate afterward, slowly getting to know each other while enjoying each other’s company.

Sadly, this peaceful dinner couldn’t last as a huge outlet of spiritual pressure wash over the entire district, killing anyone who wasn’t strong enough to withstand the power, meaning only the two were left. They both grabbed their swords and rushed out to see what could have such a destructive presence.

“You know as well I do that your wounds will get in the way of combat, can you use Kido?” MC asked while running toward the power source.

“It’s my specialty!” Muffin said following MC, slightly wincing from his wounds.

The two arrived to a chilling scene before them, a creature that looked a cross between a Wolf and a man was wildly destroying thing with its claws while screaming in agonizing pain. It had a tail that swiped and failed around, leaving indents in the ground.

“What…the Hell is that!” Muffin asked as he watched the creature in fear.

“I don’t know…but whatever it is, we have to stop it from destroying everything and hurting itself.” MC said releasing his zanpaktou without saying a word.

“I’ll back you up with my kido, be careful, don’t think even a seated officer could handle that thing.”

MC shunpoed at the beast and quickly blocked a swipe of its claw, but nearly got beheaded by its tail. He quickly shot a fire ball at it, causing it to scream in more pain and try to literally bite his head off. MC managed to block his teeth with his sword but sadly left his torso open to a slap from his tail, sending him flying through two buildings.

“Hado # 54! Haien!” Muffin yelled as a purple blast of energy hit the beast and melted part of his fur.

The beast roared as it charged at Muffin, ready to tear his entrails out, but it was promptly hit with hundreds of tiny fireballs, and then hog tied with kido.

“Is it over?” Muffin asked looking at the beast.
It let out a roar that broke the kido and sent the two soaring into the sky.

“Forgive me but I have no choice left! Iten Sakusei Su-pa Inferuno Bakufuu!” MC called out as a blazing inferno engulfed him and the beast.

“JORDAN!” Muffin cried out.
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[kusari]

Sigh... I'm sorry you guys, but the universe just seems to have my fanfic right now. I've had writers block, I can't think in coherent order for the sequence of events, and now Cell, who features prominently in the next chapter, is changing his Bankai, which I'd planned on showing.

So here are your two options.

1.) I either continue the current fanfic, which could take upwards of another month for the next chapter, and then there are still no garauntees I'd finish it.

2.) I post what would've happened in my current fanfic (i.e. the plot and its many twists), then move on and create a new fanfic with us as Fullbringers, fighting in a war against the Hollows. I've got an idea stream for the second one, at least. Not to mention I'd be including only the people who are semi-active, so I wouldn't have to stress over the inactive people like Luppi.

I'll give you guys until late tomorrow to decide. I'm personally leaning towards the second one.

fullbringers. totally fullbringers.

What exactly is a full bringer? is that something in bleach? I haven't been reading it recently. Explain pl0x? If i like full bringers, i'll probably vote for Number 2.

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fullbringers are the new plot device. Chad is one of them. their parents were attacked by hollows when their mothers were pregnant. the hollow left some power on the child and made them a human/hollow hybrid (like how Ichigo is a human/Soul Reaper hybrid). they want to be human and can change by giving their power to a Soul Reaper (we're still debating if it's actually their powers or just their energy). Because of this they want to give Ichigo his powers back and give him their powers.
 

now you're all caught up.