The Bleach Club...2.

[rotrum]

I officially HATE Shakespeare. IF I had a time machine I would give him a modern dictionary and a book of grammer while simultaneously dressed up and holding stuff that wasn't invented yet.

I still feel like using songs as titles. I feel sad, whenever I post a fic the thread dies. And I didn't get any guesses on which of you guys were actually around there. Well, too late now.

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The Captain-Commander continued to look around listlessly before a brave but unidentifiable shout rang out for him to continue. He nodded for a second before clearing his throat and continuing.

"Firstly, I feel I should explain the Super-Human Project more thoroughly. You know its purpose and how it would probably work, of course. That the project itself identifies humans that exist on Earth who were born with supernatural powers. Theoretically, the granting of shinigami powers should enhance their powers and allow them to channel their powers more clearly through their zanpakutou- although our numbers increasing was our original intent. However now we believe this could grant a sort of power and abilities that normal shinigami could not manage anywhere near as easily. This is our first test subject. SPX (Sounds cooler than S-HP whether or not I makes sense) 001 L.U.P.P.I"

A girl shunpoed from somewhere amongst the 12th division’s midst next to Golde and gave a sort of a nod to the shinigami. She wore a normal shinigami uniform, including a sword at her side. She appeared to be about 16 and had long blonde hair. "Hello Golde-Sama,” she said simply before stepping back behind him.

Golde nodded to her and then began to speak again, "This human had the power of water manipulation to a small extent before. After being converted to a shinigami water itself is her weapon. Her strength is also enhanced a great amount while in spiritual form. Observe her against...him" he said as the fifth seat of the eleventh squad was hurriedly pushed to the front of the crowd-the rest of the crowd backs up.

"Taifuugan she said, not needing a command to control her own powers. Her sword morphed only slightly, but it was hard to tell as water began to violently swirl about the blade. The 5th seat only smirked and unremorsefully unleashed his zanpakutou. The result was a sword 20 feet long and 3 feet wide-it was sharp enough to cut air for a second. He grinned maliciously as he brought the blade down on her. She only raised the blade in one hand as the two blades met, her arm didn't waver a bit. "Is that all you got?" She said as she slashed back. The water rippled violently as the other's shikai came loose into the vortex that surrounded the blade. It was sent flying back at its master-who narrowly dodged the blade by unreleasing it. The man didn’t give up at his and quickly his blade was lengthened once more. The blade split in half and became two one-sided blades. He charged angrily at her, but she only raised her sword again as the vortex became reminiscent of a tornado branching off of the guard-if the crowd hadn’t backed up earlier someone surely would have been sucked into it. She slashed as if it was just part of her sword and the force sent the man hurling back-seconds from slamming into the 4th division area-if not for a shou pushing him back and landing on his face. He weakly got up before being unceremoniously knocked out by a medic who knew the 11th squad’s motto.

(^Lazy because more fighting later)

"As you can all see, the Super-Human project has turned up amazing results. We are planning to send a squad to Earth in attempt to find more people like her-we need more high leveled people at the very least to combat this whatever. Although we are not completely sure that we can even risk sending people. Unfortunately we cannot risk sending anyone south to investigate due to our lack of knowledge of who and what they are-" Then he was interrupted.

A large mass of lightning nearly hit him-but he dodged, a product of years of skill. The Raikouhou was then blocked by the mysterious cloaked figure’s raised sleeve-reflected up into the air where it dissipated into nothingness soon after. A brown haired shinigami walked nervously up from the direction of the Hadou. He was not even a seated shinigami, and his body quaked with every step. "My name is Ryoto" he started randomly (I should start thinking of my own names…) "I know a little something about the southern force." Everyone stopped moving at this-even a small projectile fired at him stopped in mid air. "They are the Exiles through history, their power is immense...they look for the weaker shinigami and attract them to join their side. By some means they have gotten some of their powers back-and many are powerful even with the seal. Their goal is to perfect their power source and destroy the seal. After that they plan to take over Soul Society and supposedly, do everything that Soul Society has failed at. Including change of war strategy and the destruction of Los Noches; the hollow stronghold.

I know this because..I am part of their society. Roar, Leone di Cielo (Sky Lion)" He finished and drew his blade. It glowed bright orange and wings sprouted from his back. Massive steel claws jutted from the upper part of his wrists and his blade's guard became a lion's head. His blade itself had a glowing orange tip now, down for an inch. He jumped up and soared over the group at speed which would put racecars to shame. "Hadou no Hachijuuhachi! HIryugekizokushintenraihou!" He exclaimed as bright blue energy gathered in front of his two outstretched hands.

"Impossible!" Golde said in pure shock as the energy ball increased in size-nearly the full size to fire. He didn't say another word as the large mass of electricity began to rain down on them. The cloaked figure did not speak a word but a mass of energy equal in size appeared over him and slammed into Ryoto's-cancelling them both out in an odd firework-like display.

The figure launched up in a surprising burst of speed as Ryoto aimed his blade at him. The ball at the end grew for a second before launching a massive burst of orange energy at the figure. The orange energy was an even larger than the Hiryu had been it let off reiatsu that was enough to bring some of the shinigami to their knees from that distance. It stopped in mid air as a circular shield appeared over it and blocked the blast (Enkosen). Ryoto held up a hand, "Senju Kouten Taihou!" The energy let off by the Hadou came in the form of a hundred blasts of energy the size of the 11th squad, fifth seat’s zanpakutou. The figure raised a sleeve at the incoming blasts as a black cage engulfed and stabbed into all of the blasts. Some of the blasts continued and a glass-like barrier appeared and the remaining blasts were destroyed. "Perfect." Ryoto snickered, "Itto Kasou!" he smirked as a fiery blade appeared on the glass and completely shattered it, turning the blade over and slashing straight through the surprised figure. Golde wiped at his eyes at the sight of his strongest captain's ashy carcass began to plummet down to Earth. Then it ended as the figure reappeared in the air-confused as the reiatsu of Ryoto disappeared completely from detection towards the south-an illusion.

"How could an illusion get by me..." the figure thought solemnly right after figuring out what had happened before reappearing down below to the group. (First dialogue, or monologue I guess, from him and its thought)

Then, a mass of reiatsu was everywhere-shinigami but...altered somehow. Shinigami formed a massive dome of red energy around the group. At the very top of the dome was a single man with a rapier. "Shakkahou" the word rang out as fireball after fireball headed towards the shinigami. The figure raised a sleeve, "Kuukanten'i" was written in a circle above the group over and over again-and they all disappeared as blast after blast hit...the ground. The entirety of the loyal shinigami was teleported several feet out of the dome.

The dome of shinigami was surprisingly organized as they all shunpoed back towards the south. Any attempt to stop them was thwarted by the last man-the man with the rapier. He used Kyoumon to slow down their movement until the shinigami that sided with the Exiles (Now called Ex-shinigami) had escaped. As the glass disappeared he raised the thin sword and walked nonchalantly forward-no one moved as if they suspected some sort of trap. He raised the sword up to the Rainbow-Wolf-Woman.

“Hello Kida, remember me?” he said in a silky voice as he observed her reaction. She stared at him cluelessly for a few moments before her face turned into one of pure dread.

“YOU!” she snarled as she drew her blade-it was already a paintbrush even though no one had heard a release. Most people figured it was part of her snarl. The man smiled, brushing a blonde lock out of his face and raising the rapier as a ray started to immediately blast out of the tip. The ray stopped halfway as the black-clad stealth shinigami from before appeared-this time a haori was wrapped around his figure. “Jin this is MY fight” Kida said simply as she quickly drew wind in the air-a gust of wind dislodging the rapier. “Show your real shikai” she said, visibly calmer.

He tsked at her with a smile on his face as the rapier returned to his hand. “You know I cannot do that-even with our…power source we cannot fully restore out sealed powers.” While this happened a symbol lit up as fire nearly engulfed him-smothered by the white rays of energy that emanated from the tip of the piercing sword. “Just think what this could do if it made contact.” He said playfully as he jumped upwards-firing the ray at the crowd-a repetitive attack used by them. But as the light subsided he was gone-no trace. Not even a flicker of reiatsu remained. A large danku was taken down as the smoke cleared.

Golde looked disapprovingly at Kida, “Who.” He said simply as he stared at her- a thousand eyes (Not pairs) stared her down as she began to speak

“He was an exile-before you became Captain-Commander (NL is ooooold). He was the 3rd lieutenant for a short while and later of the Kidou Corps. He was exiled for murder…after he escaped prison. He murdered..Narcisse Dauc.”


 

Waay too much fighting not enough quality but I got lazy...1795 words

[Northern Lights]

Rotrum; nice chapter, so we have a rogue shinigami who i am very angry with for good reason, wow you really do hate him XD i'm older than Golde .... lol

Had my last exam today, so freedom fot he next 4 days 8D - story should be up by weekend if i'm not too pre-occupied with graphics =]

There's quite a bit of hate going around for Bleach atm, something about lack of plotline >.>

[Zameric]

Here is your new battle data chart Kusari, sorry about the confusion earlier.

I'm still waiting to do Golde's chart. 8D

There's quite a bit of hate going around for Bleach atm, something about lack of plotline >.>

I can kind of understand where that's coming from. :/
Hopefully Kubo will turn this around and improve the quality of the story.

[Jinchuuriki Hunter]

There's quite a bit of hate going around for Bleach atm, something about lack of plotline >.>

It's been going on for quite a while now. Somewhere around the beginning of the Hueco Mundo arc.
How many years ago was that?
People only watch Bleach for the characters and abilities...at least, that's what I watch it for (And also to get constantly trolled by Aizen). If I wanted plot, I'd go for either One Piece, Fullmetal Alchemist, or Hunter X Hunter.

[Eon Master]

^I agree with that, Jin. Bleach was never much on plotlines.

However, One Piece doesn't qualify as having a plot. It really doesn't. After the Alabasta arc, the whole series just went to hell in a hand grenade. It was like a scatter drill.

[Zameric]

However, One Piece doesn't qualify as having a plot. It really doesn't. After the Alabasta arc, the whole series just went to hell in a hand grenade. It was like a scatter drill.

I'll pretend I didn't just read that.
*glares at you then at my signature*


Here is your Battle Data Chart, VizardBlue.
You're the second Lieutenant class chart.

[VizardBlue]

I'll pretend I didn't just read that.
*glares at you then at my signature*


Here is your Battle Data Chart, VizardBlue.
You're the second Lieutenant class chart.

Woo! Go me and Meh Awesome Chart! xD

[arceus03]

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"C'mon Mizuhashi we need a medic." Cameron whined, trying to muster fake tears behind his blue hair. This was their plan from the beginning: if someone wouldn't join Blue would beg and fake cry until they joined.

"Blue you can stop now. I see it's not going to work. Akira's just being a wuss and doesn't wanna get hurt." Schiffer said.

This was their back up plan. Make fun of the wanted ally until they joined to prove the group wrong.

"Yeah Ryuu let's go. Mizuhashi would never make it out in the field." Hanako snorted.

"Shut the hell up guys! I'm coming and I'm going to kill more of those ugly *******s than any of you." It seemed the taunt had gotten through to the medic.
 

You nearly got me right. I would react that way to being taunted, but in my mind. I wouldn't say it out loud. XP

And I doubt ILPy and Zam would say that to me... If they know what's good for them.. >D

@ Arc

Funny...keep doing them if you want, I could even give pointers if you want...

Uhh no. I can't do these on a regular basis. XD It's more like I watch an episode or something, then a 'flash of inspiration' (lol), then I could write. Cracking up jokes on my own was something that I could never do. XD

People only watch Bleach for the characters and abilities...Hunter.

Yeah.. I just wanna see Unohana, for now. >.<

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I like how they added Harribel's reminiscence. IIRC that was never in the manga. Her whole mask was awesome <3
 

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I wonder what Isshin meant by Ichigo not understanding Aizen's reiatsu... Hmmm.

"What are you going to do instead? Cry?" XDD

"Captain Aizen decided to be a little naughty." Trust you, Gin. XD

I wonder what 'bad thing' will happen if they don't do anything about the reiatsu train thing... Hmm.. And what did Gin say again? That it's a being that dwells in the realm of reason? @.@ what's that? It sounds cool, nevertheless

Oh God. Another frickin' Getsuga Tenshou. Damnit Kubo. Get a grip already. I'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ever bored of that move. =.=

Hmmm. I wonder if Bleach really does end after this. I hope not >.< Much as I don't like the plot, it's the only manga that I keep up-to-date with apart from Detective Conana lol. But then even if it continues, with such plotholes, it wouldn't be good either.

And we still haven't seen Unohana =(
 

rotrum - You should stop putting in your notes in the middle of chapters like that... XD Whatever suits you, though.

[I like Pokemon (...)]

Kusari and Rotrum, I've read your chapters, I'm just not really bothered to review them right now.

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I kind of liked this chapter. There was enough to move the plot along, but a big problem, I think with Bleach in general, is that some characters end up being left forgotten. Urahara and Yoruichi is defeated, but what are they doing? Are they just unconsious or something? So Isshin was the only one who can actually do anything?

A "Realm of Reason"? That's interesting, especially from a scientific view of Reiatsu and Reason being 2 more forms of "energy" and universes.

Based on what I could see, Aizen blew Kototsu with his mind/Reiatsu. I hope the latter.

"Reason exists for those who can not go on living without clinging to it." At first this confused me. I suppose, thinking it over, he's basically saying "I don't care what I do, I can do what I want now that I'm so strong."

"Let's go to the Edge of Reason" either this is a physical place (Soul King's Universe?) a mental place (meaning there shall be a, literaly, insane fight) or just a metaphor.

Isshin likes to headbutt, it seems XD.

Page 9, where Isshin walks past Ichigo, reminds me of when Byakuya fought Ichigo and broke his Zanpakutou in half, very near the beginning.

"You gonna sit there and cry? Whining about how you weren't able to protect something again?" This was harsh. If I'm right, he's referencing Masaki. That's a bit of a harsh (though effective) way to get Ichigo to come.

Ah, how conveniant, Aizen and Gin are a bit away from Karakura, so Ichigo and Isshin can catch up.

Woah woah woah, the Precipe World is cut off from time and space. And then he says Kototsu was meant to stop people from staying there for a long time.
I suppose the Precipe World acts like a sort-of last minute Room of Spirit and Time rip off from Dragonball Z. Also, one big Deus ex Machina.

"The Final Getsuga Tenshou" = Super Kamehameha?

Wait, that's Keigo, right? Which means that Muzuiro and Tatsuki are likely to be there as well. Urahara was with them for a bit, so it's possible that Urahara told them all about Ichigo and Aizen (and since they can see souls, they can probably see Aizen and Gin). I think that maybe, just maybe, these 3 can hold off Aizen and Gin for Ichigo to come (because we don't know where their Senkai Gate ends in Soul Society).
 

[GalladeX]

Ugh. Sorry I haven't posted for a while TT_TT
ANYWAY.
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LOOOOOOOOOOLEEEEEE AIZEN HAS A MULLET
...Realm of reason?
And why are all the chapters called Deicide?
And Isshin headbutted Ichi again x)
Isshin seems to be a little...harsh lately.
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HOLY CRAP IT'S KEIGO.
AJFWRHUYWERTIUHWET8344545
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[Jinchuuriki Hunter]

However, One Piece doesn't qualify as having a plot. It really doesn't. After the Alabasta arc, the whole series just went to hell in a hand grenade. It was like a scatter drill.

...Um...k...I'm trying to see how it resembles a scatter drill...
I just deleted a whole bunch of One Piece because I remembered this is a Bleach club. Anyway, I have one important question to ask. Did you watch the 4kids dub?
If not, then I'd like to hear your explanation through PM.

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And why are all the chapters called Deicide?
 

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Deicide means "Killing of a God". Think about it.
And Isshin has always been like that. It's what makes him more awesome than his son by comparison.
 

[Golde]

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The final Getsuga Tenshou? I don't like that for multiple reasons.

1) Since it's his signature move, it insinuates that there's nothing else...unless he learns a new move...or there's more to deal with with his hollow self, but even Aizen said he mastered the mask...and more.

2) Copy/Paste pisses me off when it's on people...

...Here's why I like it, though...XD Apparently they never tested to see if zanpakutou's were hereditary.

I smell Eugenics.

Is it bad I'm actually starting to like Aizen though? He seems much cooler now that he has a real reason to be a self confident douchebag.

I keep freaking fearing the Gin is gonna get pwned by an impatient Aizen...

And now we see plot no jutsu activate and give these little *******s powers. I think Kiego or whatever will kick people


 

[Cell]

Thanks for the shart, Zameric.

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Final Getsuga Tenshou? Seriously?


Nobody else finds it strange that they're like 'Lets go save Karakura town!' and suddenly Iishin is like 'Time to fire my lazor train'.

And don't get me started on that whole 'time chamber' thing, Tite is seeing Dragonball as a huge inspiration...

And why didn't they all just go bankai on Aizen... >___<

Seriously, teach him (Ichigo) some Kido and new original moves already. -.-


 

[arceus03]

Thanks for the shart, Zameric.

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Final Getsuga Tenshou? Seriously?


Nobody else finds it strange that they're like 'Lets go save Karakura town!' and suddenly Iishin is like 'Time to fire my lazor train'.

And don't get me started on that whole 'time chamber' thing, Tite is seeing Dragonball as a huge inspiration...


 

Let's count just how many people are tired of Getsuga Tenshou already. I'm in.

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The reason they're training.. Uhh, it's probably because of the time distortion thing that the tunnel has. Like when they're about to save Rukia in the early episodes, didn't they come out at SS and find out that they had an extra 7 day or something like that? Yeah.

So kinda like when they come out at SS, they're 7 days earlier again? But wait, Aizen is already there though.... Hmmm... Idk.
 

Jin: OH. So THAT'S what Deicide means. You know, for the last 8 chapters, I've been thinking that Kubo misspells Decide for no apparent reason... XDDD

[Flash_Step]

Let's count just how many people are tired of Getsuga Tenshou already. I'm in.

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The reason they're training.. Uhh, it's probably because of the time distortion thing that the tunnel has. Like when they're about to save Rukia in the early episodes, didn't they come out at SS and find out that they had an extra 7 day or something like that? Yeah.

So kinda like when they come out at SS, they're 7 days earlier again? But wait, Aizen is already there though.... Hmmm... Idk.
 

Jin: OH. So THAT'S what Deicide means. You know, for the last 8 chapters, I've been thinking that Kubo misspells Decide for no apparent reason... XDDD

IM IN...

Hey who all wanted a backstory/ info on me for a FanFic besides MC..i kan pm u tha info

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meh it was ok and another stage to the getsuga wow
 

[Northern Lights]

I'm in, he's needs to differentiate because as soon as someone learns to neutralise it, Ichigo will become useless.

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I think at this point even Gin is started to get creeped by Aizen, which is saying something, and bless father/son bonding time XD

Hmm, there's somethign amiss with Aizen, he apoligised to Gin for heavens sake, maybe theres something we don't know about him.

Oh god, Aizenencounters the Keigo and co.
 

[Eon Master]

I'm so in. Getsuga freaking Tenshou needs to die.

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Amazingly dull. Aizen destroys the cleaner which should be impossible, according to what Yoruichi said during the SS arc without touching it. Probably his Hogyokufied reiatsu.

Oh god, not another Room of Spirit and Time. Seriously Kubo, get some goddamn original ideas.

Final Getsuga Tenshou? For gods sake... he's going to make another RasenShuriken out of this, I just know it. Not to mention there's too many Getsuga Tenshou flying around in any given chapter already.
 

I'm almost getting sick of Bleach now... it's gone from epic to annoying.

[I like Pokemon (...)]

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Isshin seems to be a little...harsh lately.
 

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Well, he kind of has to now. He's no longer a "I'm going to protect you" father, he's a "go save the ****ing world" father.
 

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Deicide means "Killing of a God". Think about it.
 

waitwhat

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Final Getsuga Tenshou? Seriously?


Nobody else finds it strange that they're like 'Lets go save Karakura town!' and suddenly Iishin is like 'Time to fire my lazor train'.

And don't get me started on that whole 'time chamber' thing, Tite is seeing Dragonball as a huge inspiration...

And why didn't they all just go bankai on Aizen... >___<

Seriously, teach him (Ichigo) some Kido and new original moves already. -.-


 

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Well it seems someone doesn't like the chapter.
 

Jin: OH. So THAT'S what Deicide means. You know, for the last 8 chapters, I've been thinking that Kubo misspells Decide for no apparent reason... XDDD

Yeah, same.

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I think at this point even Gin is started to get creeped by Aizen, which is saying something, and bless father/son bonding time XD
 

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Hmm, yeah, I think Gin and Aizen's relationship will change quite a lot.
 

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Oh god, Aizenencounters the Keigo and co.
 

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Definitely interesting to see how that'll work.
 

[GalladeX]

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Deicide means "Killing of a God". Think about it.
And Isshin has always been like that. It's what makes him more awesome than his son by comparison.
 

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Killing of a God?
That means, if this keeps up until Aizen dies, then we'll be at like Deicide 30...ish.

 

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Well, he kind of has to now. He's no longer a "I'm going to protect you" father, he's a "go save the ****ing world" father.
 

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He referenced Masaki, though...I mean...Even though he's a "go save the ****ing world" father now, that was harsh.
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I bet $5 that the Masaki poster gets taken down by the end of Bleach. No, really.

 

[Jinchuuriki Hunter]

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Nobody else finds it strange that they're like 'Lets go save Karakura town!' and suddenly Iishin is like 'Time to fire my lazor train'.
 

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Well, Isshin was going to just rush all the way to Karakura Town. But then he noticed something missing - The Worm Train. According to him, that worm train is supposed to constantly move around the place, forcing any intruders to move out of that realm immediately. Because it is no longer around, Isshin decides to take this golden opportunity to train Ichigo, helped out by the fact that they're cut off from space and time.
Basically, if that worm thing was still there, Isshin would still be 'Let's go Save Karakura Town'. Turns out it's gone.