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    ^ ya know you might get done for that post, excessive font size and all that jazz *nods*

    get you're skinny *** on msn, btw you're now my hubby as Senny is technically taken

    I've sent you her personality, unfortunatly she doesn't really have one, as in she's quite monotone and you get the impression she really isn't all quite there, bit like Paranoid Andriod Marvin and the Mad Hatter mixed together.

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    Quote Originally Posted by VizardBlue View Post
    I guarentee chapter 1 will be up by tommorow. hopefully[/s]im lieing[/s][/s]noseriously[/s][/s]probablyonfriday[/s]. yeeep. Tommorow.
    Epic Tag Fail.

    If you could have a pokemon as a zanpaktou spirit, which one would you choose?
    Dialga or Palkia, obviously. Maybe some fusion of the 2 (Dialkia). Though when I use my Black Hole attack, Giratina probably has to be thrown in there...

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    A very well veiled comparison to Kisuke Urahara. Nicely done.
    *facepalm*
    And to think, Urahara was originally the reason why I joined the 12th Squad in the first place.



    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Because he's a living computer :P
    You don't know how often I get that.


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    *hands ILP a trophy engraved with the words 'Understatement of the Year Award'* No freaking kidding.
    *Takes* I'd like to thank NL for writing that scene and making me say that.

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    I could see it being either seeing as Ant is a perv in MC's fic.
    waitwhat



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    Well, not a whole lot to talk about. I'm glad that we now have some more names. I also just realised that we now have 13 Captains, so whoever's bleeding... Hmm....

    Quote Originally Posted by ~.:Northern Lights:.~
    OH, guys, if it isn't too much trouble i need you guys to give me a description of what your inner worlds look like. I'll pick a few to use in coming up chapters, but i can't progress far until i have them =]
    Ooh... this should be interesting...
    It's basically a large dark dome on top of an infinitely long space. We (me and Mugen Utsuro) are inside the dome. If you look very carefully, you can see that a ton of wires come from out of the dome and spand infinitely long.
    In the centre of inside the dome, on the ground, there is a hole, about the size of an adult (which is pretty big for me). I don't know how deep it goes, but it seems like it goes on forever.
    Also you can walk on the dome (and be upside down 8D)
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    If you could have a pokemon as a zanpaktou spirit, which one would you choose?

    Umbreon. Why? Because it embodies the moon. It's a reflection of the brightly shinging sun, giving light and hope to those in the darkness. And Umbreon dwells among that same darkness, so it knows the horror those who live in it feel.

    It's inspirational, in a slightly creepy way :P

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    If you could have a pokemon as a zanpaktou spirit, which one would you choose?
    Dialga or Palkia, obviously. Maybe some fusion of the 2 (Dialkia). Though when I use my Black Hole attack, Giratina probably has to be thrown in there...
    Giratina would probably cover for all of it, really... If you think about how the Distortion World is, it's really messed up in the Time/Space department.

    *facepalm*
    And to think, Urahara was originally the reason why I joined the 12th Squad in the first place.
    Haha

    You don't know how often I get that.
    I meant in the fic. You don't act like a living computer, at least not on here. :P

    *Takes* I'd like to thank NL for writing that scene and making me say that.

    Lol.

    waitwhat
    MC's comedy fic? Your chapter was entitled "Now We Have the Pervy Nerd... I mean Ant..."

    Yeah...

    Also you can walk on the dome (and be upside down 8D)
    I'd probably fall off and end up stuck somewhere in hammer space XD

    Quote Originally Posted by ~.:Northern Lights:.~ View Post
    OH, guys, if it isn't too much trouble i need you guys to give me a description of what your inner worlds look like. I'll pick a few to use in coming up chapters, but i can't progress far until i have them =]
    Gladly, I love this one.

    Mine is a mountain-top view, the peaks all covered in snow. The sky is constantly covered with bluish-grey clouds, and there's always snow falling. The peculiar thing is, the snow never sticks, it touches the ground but the snow doesn't get any deeper. The ammount of snow is entirely dependent on how stressed I am, when I'm stressed it gets deeper and when I'm relaxed it gets thinner. The clouds also sometimes crackle with dark blue lightning. There's always a bit of a chilly breeze, and that never changes. If you fall/jump off the mountain, you fall for about twenty feet and then it flips so that you're falling up rather than crashing. It's actually quite fun if you're bored.

    Hopefully that works for you. Anything I missed?

    EDIT: NEW CHAPTER UP!

    This Chapter showcases what I'm best at when it comes to writing. Battle/fight scenes. 11 Pages worth of typing on MS Word, three days of total frusturation, and lots of effort went into writing this. Most battle chapters will follow a trend of being longer and the non-battle chapters will be shorter.

    Anyway, enough of listening to me ramble on. After all, you just want to read the story, right?

        Spoiler:- Chapter 1: Eye of the Hurricane:


    Alright, it's finally posted. And just before I go to bed too. Hope you like it, I'll be looking forward to some critique when I get home from school tomorrow.
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    Quote Originally Posted by NL
    OH, guys, if it isn't too much trouble i need you guys to give me a description of what your inner worlds look like. I'll pick a few to use in coming up chapters, but i can't progress far until i have them =]
    I don't know if I'm in your fic but this seems fun enough for me to pass the time.
    My inner world is a completely white blank of nothingness. You can walk any way you want there, any place can act as a surface. It's simply an empty void.
    For reference, look at Kubo's backgrounds.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post

        Spoiler:- Chapter 2:
    [/SPOILER]

    Alright, it's finally posted. And just before I go to bed too. Hope you like it, I'll be looking forward to some critique when I get home from school tomorrow.
    I almost cried when i heard those bolded lines. cried. and then killed something out of boredom. And ima firin mah lazorz? Brillaint i say. briliant.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ILP

    We're Mad.
    Our 1st Squad Captain has an insane sweet tooth
    Our 2nd Squad Captain is some super-ninja
    Our 3rd Squad Captain is part wolf
    Our 4th Squad Captain bakes cookies and cuts up anyone who makes him mad
    Our 5th Squad Captain is some party-crazy army man
    Our 6th Squad Captain is calm, prideful and pervy
    Our 7th Squad Captain seems to be, barely, the only sane one
    Our 8th Squad Captain is missing
    Our 9th Squad Captain is a shy, respectful, boring and pervy
    Our 10th Squad Captain hates some of our OWN captains
    Our 11th Squad Captain is a sadistic maniac
    Our 12th Squad Captain is an insane nerd
    Our 13th Squad Captain is sleeping

    That's Gotei 13

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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    I think someone needs to inform Golde that he had kusari both on Squad 3 and 13.... on the front page. Hmmmm..
    I probably have at least once before. I'll try to remind him the next time I see him on WLM.

    Quote Originally Posted by ~.:Northern Lights:.~ View Post
    OH, guys, if it isn't too much trouble i need you guys to give me a description of what your inner worlds look like. I'll pick a few to use in coming up chapters, but i can't progress far until i have them =]
    Well, mine is just like a swirly, shadowy, mercury colored world. Kind of like a the inside of a shadow game from the first Yugioh season.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Giratina would probably cover for all of it, really... If you think about how the Distortion World is, it's really messed up in the Time/Space department.
    But Giratina is, I believe, the Pokemon of Antimatter which my Zanpakutou doesn't really touch on. Except the "Reverse World" but that's not really antimatter per se.

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    I meant in the fic. You don't act like a living computer, at least not on here. :P
    I think I act somewhat differently on here than in real life. Idk, I'm not exactly the same in real life, at least.

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    MC's comedy fic? Your chapter was entitled "Now We Have the Pervy Nerd... I mean Ant..."
    Oh THAT one, XD. I thought you were talking about his current fic.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter View Post
    I don't know if I'm in your fic but this seems fun enough for me to pass the time.
    My inner world is a completely white blank of nothingness. You can walk any way you want there, any place can act as a surface. It's simply an empty void.
    For reference, look at Kubo's backgrounds.
    You don't know how tempted I was to have that as my inner world. I guess great minds seem alike.
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    Sorry for the dissapearance.

    My stats again (fixed to 80's):

    Offense: 40
    My offensive power is decent with kido arrows in my Shikai form and when I go bankai, I can attract and repel objects, including my own spear. This can make for some fast and powerful stabs with a short reach.

    Defense: 70
    Mobility: 70

    With my globe ability of repelling metal objects, I am quite protected against metal objects, this doesn't stop Kido so I have to have decent to very good mobility to get a chance to survive against Kido experts. To keep my weapon in attacking range against an opponent, some good mobility is needed too.

    Kido/Reiatsu: 60
    I have good kido skills with quite a lot of reiatsu for my arrow techniques, I am more specialised in Hado, however. My trademark is Hado 11: Tsuzuri Raiden which compliments my ability well.

    Intelligence: 80

    I have high intelligence which compliments my bankai, while I activate my defence every angle is covered but if I cannot see the attack coming I can't guard against it. That's why I have to constantly calculate (possible) incoming angles to guard against sword blows I cannot see. [Should have paid more attention in the barrier classes]

    Physical Strength: 0
    I have little to no physical strength, because in my shikai I use a long-range bow and in my bankai I have a medium range spear on a chain, I have no point in going in close. I always try to hold fights on long/medium distance so I can dodge and/or deflect.

    Total: 320

    The inner-world thing.. hmm the only thing I can think of this:
    A rainy dark forest with occasional lightning currents on the ground and floating magnetic 0's and 1's.


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        Spoiler:- Eon's Chapter:


    Offense: 40
    My offensive power is decent with kido arrows in my Shikai form and when I go bankai, I can attract and repel objects, including my own spear. This can make for some fast and powerful stabs with a short reach.

    Defense: 70
    Mobility: 70
    With my globe ability of repelling metal objects, I am quite protected against metal objects, this doesn't stop Kido so I have to have decent to very good mobility to get a chance to survive against Kido experts. To keep my weapon in attacking range against an opponent, some good mobility is needed too.

    Kido/Reiatsu: 60
    I have good kido skills with quite a lot of reiatsu for my arrow techniques, I am more specialised in Hado, however. My trademark is Hado 11: Tsuzuri Raiden which compliments my ability well.

    Intelligence: 80
    I have high intelligence which compliments my bankai, while I activate my defence every angle is covered but if I cannot see the attack coming I can't guard against it. That's why I have to constantly calculate (possible) incoming angles to guard against sword blows I cannot see. [Should have paid more attention in the barrier classes]

    Physical Strength: 0
    I have little to no physical strength, because in my shikai I use a long-range bow and in my bankai I have a medium range spear on a chain, I have no point in going in close. I always try to hold fights on long/medium distance so I can dodge and/or deflect.

    Total: 320
    Your stats seem logical.

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    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    But Giratina is, I believe, the Pokemon of Antimatter which my Zanpakutou doesn't really touch on. Except the "Reverse World" but that's not really antimatter per se.
    I tend to think of Giratina as the Dimension Pokemon, but w/e

    I think I act somewhat differently on here than in real life. Idk, I'm not exactly the same in real life, at least.
    Fair enough, that's also somewhat true for me.

    Oh THAT one, XD. I thought you were talking about his current fic.
    I realized afterwards that it sounded like that XD


    White hair... The only one I can think of is Gin (yeah, his hair is more silver-y but I think he might be able to get away with it), Hitsugaya and Ukitake. Though, in the back of my head, I think it's secretly Ichigo 8O.
    No comment.

    I freakin' knew it.
    As though I didn't already make it obvious enough.

    I seems like Soul Society falls for that too much.
    Might have to change that slightly.

    Okay, so we know that he has white hair, a mask (which could be a Vaizard mask), he was an enemy of the Espada, and he's not particularly bright.
    You utterly misread that portion. Ulquiorra was talking about the probability of Ichigo being the masked leader.

    What's Kensei's mask like?
    It's sorta like a hockey mask.

    Wait, actually, I just realised. Who ARE these "remaining Arrancars"? Yammy probably died, Starrk died, so did Barragan, Harribel, Ulquiorra (well, he's with the opponent) Nnoitra died, Grimmjow... Might still be alive, Zommari is died, and so is Szayel and Aaroniero.
    Remember who you're talking to. Of course he's alive.

    Nel is probably also alive, and Pesche and Dondo-Chakka. I wonder how these all will be useful.
    Yep, yep, and yep. You're still missing one. I'll bet that Zam would know.

    That's a good idea. And at least it let's us see all of these "Zombie characters" as I'll call them. It'd be interesting to see if Aizen would be brought back, since he'd probably try and overtake whoever is currently the villain, and also, Ulquiorra and him would be... Interesting to see how they'd react with each other.
    Yeah, that was my thinking as well. And, no Aizen. I effing hate him. Kariya makes a much better villain than Aizen, Kariya doesn't godmod. Or maybe I will have him bring Aizen back, just so the leader can kill him.

    Which would make Ichigo 85 or so. Possible that he could make some form of an appearance (though of course it would depend on how he aged, and what Soul Society decided to do with him).
    Refer back to the prologue, nobody has seen him in 70 years.

    Seeing as how you have a long-arse fighting scene, I won't pick out certain bits that I don't remember from after reading it.
    Though it definitely was a very descriptive, long fight. I definitely liked it, I could easily imagine this being a scene from an anime.
    Excellent, seems like my experience with writing Pokemon battles transfers over to Bleach too.

    Huh, seems like he's a Lieutenant. And later on, he mentions a "Captain Yamada"... Yamada Hanatarou? It'd be awesome if he was a Captain now.
    Though why would Arc be a Lieutenant?
    Arc is the Squad 4 Lieutenant, and Hanatarou Yamada is the Squad 4 Captain. Arc is Lieutenant because Yamada is Captain.

    Oh I'd so love someone to draw that XD.
    Let's ask Golde.

    I... Have no words for that.
    Well, it's an improvement over Arc, who was suffocating from laughter.

    Quote Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15 View Post
    Very well written.
    Thanks

    The fight scene was very descriptive, I could see the battle in my mind...sorta...
    Battle Discription = My strength.

    You pretty much got my personality down pat...but since you said I didn't know you had a Bankai, that means our Bankai fights never happened? Or was I playing dumb?
    That's true, but the fact is, you've never faced off against Garou before. In fact, nobody has faced me, least of all in Bankai.

    Your last line was brillant.
    I blame Dr. Octagonapus.
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    "Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."



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    Eon Master; Imma Firin mah lazor mad me laugh quite a bit, i was drinking ginger beer at the time too it hurt - but your fight scene was great, i'm not so good with fight scenes, but i'm going to have to write a few myself.

        Spoiler:- Chapter 3:


    PEOPLE, SEND YOUR ZANPAKYOU PERSONALITIES TO DA.C PROMPTLY SO HE CAN CONTINUE HIS STORY PLOX
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    That's true, but the fact is, you've never faced off against Garou before. In fact, nobody has faced me, least of all in Bankai.
    Intresting.

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    If you could use a Zanpaktou of any character, whos would it be and why?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Fair enough, that's also somewhat true for me.
    It's probably true to near everyone, to some degree, anyways.


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    No comment.
    Hmmmm


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    You utterly misread that portion. Ulquiorra was talking about the probability of Ichigo being the masked leader.
    Ah, damn. Well that's one guess out of the way...


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Remember who you're talking to. Of course he's alive.
    Fair enough.


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Yep, yep, and yep. You're still missing one. I'll bet that Zam would know.
    That worm-thingy? Bawabawa?


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Refer back to the prologue, nobody has seen him in 70 years.
    Wow I suck at remembering these things.


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Arc is the Squad 4 Lieutenant, and Hanatarou Yamada is the Squad 4 Captain. Arc is Lieutenant because Yamada is Captain.
    Well, at least I was right.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~.:Northern Lights:.~ View Post
    PEOPLE, SEND YOUR ZANPAKYOU PERSONALITIES TO DA.C PROMPTLY SO HE CAN CONTINUE HIS STORY PLOX
    I'm so glad that a) Mugen Utsuro has a very simple personality, and that b) I don't have a fire based Zanpakutou.

    If you could use a Zanpaktou of any character, whos would it be and why?
    Aizen's. Simply because it's so insanely Godmod.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ~.:Northern Lights:.~ View Post
    Eon Master; Imma Firin mah lazor mad me laugh quite a bit, i was drinking ginger beer at the time too it hurt - but your fight scene was great, i'm not so good with fight scenes, but i'm going to have to write a few myself.
    Haha, glad it was funny, sorry it had to be while you were drinking ginger beer. Is that ginger ale, root beer, or something else entirely?

    If you need help with fight scenes, I can give you a few tips.

    Your chapter was excellent, I really liked it. Shinigami virus, sounds similar to something I came up with for an RP once.
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    @NL: hmm. made me think a little bit. i had to read it twice because it kinda went over my head the first time.

    @VB: that's right you did "volunteer". you won't be experimented on in a pit somewhere but you do get a special fight.

    ok the whole "inner world" thing: the inner world of my zanpakuto is a lake in the clearing of a forest. there is a cliff parallel to the tree line. a waterfall flows off the cliff into the lake. in the center of the water is a large rock that Oto is seen meditating on. though neither master nor spirit has traveled over the cliff there is a dark pressure from it and a shadow figure is sometimes seen looking off the bluff towards the water.

    as for the zanpakuto personality: Oto is on a normal sleeping schedule. calm, collected and wise. not easily provoked. also very critical of his master. (all in sharp contrast to me)

    and a public character profile:
    Name: Yasushi Hayashi
    Hair: shaggy and black
    Eyes: ice blue
    Build: not ripped, but strong. more like grimmjow.

    next chap: sometime between now and next tuesday.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cell View Post
    Sorry for the dissapearance.

    My stats again (fixed to 80's):

    Offense: 40
    My offensive power is decent with kido arrows in my Shikai form and when I go bankai, I can attract and repel objects, including my own spear. This can make for some fast and powerful stabs with a short reach.

    Defense: 70
    Mobility: 70

    With my globe ability of repelling metal objects, I am quite protected against metal objects, this doesn't stop Kido so I have to have decent to very good mobility to get a chance to survive against Kido experts. To keep my weapon in attacking range against an opponent, some good mobility is needed too.

    Kido/Reiatsu: 60
    I have good kido skills with quite a lot of reiatsu for my arrow techniques, I am more specialised in Hado, however. My trademark is Hado 11: Tsuzuri Raiden which compliments my ability well.

    Intelligence: 80

    I have high intelligence which compliments my bankai, while I activate my defence every angle is covered but if I cannot see the attack coming I can't guard against it. That's why I have to constantly calculate (possible) incoming angles to guard against sword blows I cannot see. [Should have paid more attention in the barrier classes]

    Physical Strength: 0
    I have little to no physical strength, because in my shikai I use a long-range bow and in my bankai I have a medium range spear on a chain, I have no point in going in close. I always try to hold fights on long/medium distance so I can dodge and/or deflect.

    Total: 320
    Ya sure about those new numbers?

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Yep, yep, and yep. You're still missing one. I'll bet that Zam would know.

    Yeah, that was my thinking as well. And, no Aizen. I effing hate him. Kariya makes a much better villain than Aizen, Kariya doesn't godmod. Or maybe I will have him bring Aizen back, just so the leader can kill him.
    You must be thinking of Gantenbainne Mosqueda then.

    True dat. Kariya is many times cooler than godmod Aizen.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zameric View Post
    You must be thinking of Gantenbainne Mosqueda then.
    Bingo. I knew you'd know.

    True dat. Kariya is many times cooler than godmod Aizen.
    That's probably partly due to the fact that Kariya doesn't bear any resemblance to a condom.

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    "Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."



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    Been supa busy lately with work, friends, new girlfriend...etc...(saw Shrek 4 today :P) And I feel like I should've replied more...eh, screw it...a few things though

    1) Check the main page. If there's anything re. you, your squad, or anything else that HAS NOT been updated/posted, please alert me~ K?

    And link me, if it's not.

    2) With this massive as hell rush of fanfics, I gotta ask, has anyone made an archive page for their stories yet? One that can be linked from page 1? Because I'm actually interested in reading these myself XP

    3) @Kurris - Mind posting those same pics of my masks here, too? /Toolazy

    4) I may be reigniting my fanfic here soon too. So, yeah...nag at me on that one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~.:Northern Lights:.~ View Post

    OH, guys, if it isn't too much trouble i need you guys to give me a description of what your inner worlds look like. I'll pick a few to use in coming up chapters, but i can't progress far until i have them =]
    Okay... Let's see..
    It's an underwater castle. The castle, which seemingly is made of crystal, has a lot of rooms and is quite large. But there's only one entrance, and, to meet my zanpakto spirit, I just have to head straight forward the moment I enter and, after a seemingly long walk, I would come to a huge room, kinda like the main room, and there's Tsukibana. The layout of the castle changes every time I go to my inner world. Yeah, it's a bit... flashy. If anything, my wishing to have a Queen-based spirit as an Arrancar should point it out. XP

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    This Chapter showcases what I'm best at when it comes to writing. Battle/fight scenes.
    Hmmm. I wish I can write battle scenes well. I always have a problem when it comes to that.

    Quote Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15 View Post
    If you could use a Zanpaktou of any character, whos would it be and why?
    I was just thinking of making this topic~ Woo
    btw, you should add in there: Aizen's godmod Kyoukasuigetsu is not allowed.

    For me, I'd say Rukia. idk why. Often, recently, when I'm alone, I get a sudden urge to cry out "Mae, Sode no Shirayuki" XD

    I've even been designing new dances and bankai for her. :P

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    If you need help with fight scenes, I can give you a few tips.
    I'd gladly accept those.

    Quote Originally Posted by Golde View Post
    2) With this massive as hell rush of fanfics, I gotta ask, has anyone made an archive page for their stories yet? One that can be linked from page 1? Because I'm actually interested in reading these myself XP

    4) I may be reigniting my fanfic here soon too. So, yeah...nag at me on that one.
    NL has. The others hasn't, I think. And yes, please do so, everyone. I usually copy all of them and read the horde later, but sometimes if I forget to copy it (and you guys go on a posting spree) I find it quite annoying having to look through pages to find the chapter.

    4- Me too. I actually finished one chapter yesterday.... If anyone still remembers that, that is. I think (for now) my crappy fiction is continuing.

    And I will read the new chapters later. And comment on the anime/manga later, too.

    Dac - I just noticed - you misspelt 'assess' as 'asses' in your 4th chapter. Only one letter amiss, but the meaning went horribly wrong. XDD

    Err.... Does anyone know the exact verb for facepalming?
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    @Golde: Welcome back! No, I don't have an archive page yet, but I'm working on it. There's a link to the chapters in my squad page for now.

    @Arc: The biggest trick to writing fight scenes is using strong vocabulary words. Instead of hit, use smash, crush, or something else. It stops you from overloading on the discription. Also, imagine it like a scene from the anime and pick out words that come to mind. A thesaurus spelling fail is your best friend.

    Quote Originally Posted by You
    4- Me too. I actually finished one chapter yesterday.... If anyone still remembers that, that is. I think (for now) my crappy fiction is continuing.
    Excellent! I can't wait to read it again. *re-reads all the previous chapters*

    I'm working on Chapter 2, it's going to be less action, more explanation and humor. And it probably won't be anywhere near as long as the last one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    @Arc: The biggest trick to writing fight scenes is using strong vocabulary words. Instead of hit, use smash, crush, or something else. It stops you from overloading on the discription. Also, imagine it like a scene from the anime and pick out words that come to mind. A thesaurus spelling fail is your best friend.
    .
    Ah, I'll try that, thanks XD
    You remind me of that food reporter from DPPt...

    @The new chapters - They seem interesting, please continue.

    Erm... The bad thing about reading first and commenting later is that you usually forget what you wanted to say...

    MC How does the Captain Commander know that Anon is about to attack? o.o And that chapter seems to have some misspelling... Have you run a spell checker? Unless you type that on Notepad of course...

    Eon Allergic to fast moving air, lol.
    Mental sighing is awesome XD
    Er.... What does Iyasu mean? I'm pretty sure you made that one up since I don't remember using that name in my zanpakto description...

    Oh, would your Garou be able to absorb Jin's vacuum slashes?

    And late to the party
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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    Ah, I'll try that, thanks XD
    You remind me of that food reporter from DPPt...
    Haha, glad to help

    Erm... The bad thing about reading first and commenting later is that you usually forget what you wanted to say...
    I usually write the review as I read.

    Eon Allergic to fast moving air, lol.
    Sounded like something you'd come up with if you were clueless, lol XD

    Mental sighing is awesome XD
    And your simultanious death glare with MC is more awesome

    Er.... What does Iyasu mean? I'm pretty sure you made that one up since I don't remember using that name in my zanpakto description...
    The command form of the verb heal. I just included it for extra extravagance, giving a chant/name to your healing technique.

    Oh, would your Garou be able to absorb Jin's vacuum slashes?
    Nope. I can't even use Kaisou Shikon to deflect them, like I can with your water attacks I'd normally absorb them, but that would be cheating because the water is your sword's blade :P. But, as you could see from the battle, I don't need my Shikai to beat a wind type that's not going all out.
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    "Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."



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        Spoiler:- Chapter 29 - The Gods Aren’t Watching Right Now, Kid:


    Eh. I'l try to keep a more regular schedule...since there's still SOO much more I want to write. I'll probably do this through college XD

    maybe Kubo will take my story up *crosses fingers and wishes...*

    And yeah, I consider myself well with fight scenes, as well. I could help =)

    Oh, and I'd appreciate some...uh...can't remember the word...eh, opinions or whatever of my fic, much obliged.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    I usually write the review as I read.

    And your simultanious death glare with MC is more awesome

    The command form of the verb heal. I just included it for extra extravagance, giving a chant/name to your healing technique.

    Nope. I can't even use Kaisou Shikon to deflect them, like I can with your water attacks.

    That's the trouble, really. I usually copy first, read later, and reply even later on. XD

    Ah yes, that too. XP

    Ohh. I think I might include that in my zan description....

    Hmmm.... So how'd you beat Jin?

    Ermm.... Any other tips? XD I'm just, like, so blunt in designing various ways people fight so... yeah..

    Oh, NL, I just remembered. About the Shinigami virus, you said it 'splits the soul into half and turn the torn soul into something else'?

    ...Now that sounds like Horcruxes to me. I've been rereading HP #7 lately.. XD

    Ed Gonna read your chapter later... As usual 8D
    Glancing at it, though... I think that's one of the perks for being the only member having a healing-type zanpakto, I guess. I get a lot of parts in wars =P

    Oh f*ck. Noza is... ermm.................. He must be really fast, though, if he can slaughter Takai like that.
    Why did he say that Takai has lost the faith, though? Just because he said that Sereitei can run fine without a Captain Commander?

    'Our kind', lol. I really wonder how Noza kid himself into believing that they're akin to Hollow, lol. XD

    I wonder what could be Bars's true power... If what they're seeing now is just an illusion. Hmmmm.

    Spro's power is creating that illusion, right?

    Oh: "Written in what could only be blood is the correct sentence, I think.
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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    That's the trouble, really. I usually copy first, read later, and reply even later on. XD
    Lol, ok then.

    Ohh. I think I might include that in my zan description....
    DO IT.

    Hmmm.... So how'd you beat Jin?
    Erm... how did I? I haven't fought him yet.

    If you mean how would I beat Jin, I'd probably have to resort to my Bankai very early on. Of course, my Bankai can use all of its abilities by absorbing reishi, so I wouldn't be helpless anymore.

    Ermm.... Any other tips? XD I'm just, like, so blunt in designing various ways people fight so... yeah...
    Hm... well, that's not something that's easy to solve. You've seen the RP battles, right? Maybe try designing the fights like them to start, then adding more detail and putting them into story format later?

    @Golde: Intresting chapter. Love how you set it up so that you'll be one-on-one against Noza and everyone else will probably be fighting Pazzo. The message on the wall and your last line were completely badass, lol.
    The word you were looking for is critique.
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    "Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."



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