OMG I gotta read the manga~~ LOL I CANT BELIEVE IT SLIPPED MY MIND DAMMITTTTTTTt
Anyway I have a subscription to an on demand thisng called Anime Network on Demand and they have this special show called Bento Beat Box which showcases various Japanese pop and rock music... and I just wanted to plug them coz one of the songs they featured is "Daidai" by Chatmonchy - that song was an ending song for Bleach a little while back... I think it was during the arrancar or hueco mundo arc... something around there I believe. XD
anyway, just wanted to say that and imma go read chapter now. XD
EDIT: MANGA
Spoiler:
here are my reactions to certain pages:
page 9: HOLY... WHAT THE HELLLL????? O.O
page 18: <3 <3 <3 *insert fangirl squeel here*
page 19: OME YEEEEEEEEESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! *insert another fangirl squeel here*
umm yeahhh... XD DEICIDE 21 FTWWWWWWWWWW
Yeah and btw before reading that I wasn't really hyper but... that's over now. sry. XD XD XD XD XD
edit again:
umm I just read ILPEH's spoiler tag thingy
my response to that (and yea i kno i should have responded before but mehhhh)
Spoiler:
"Abandon your arrogance" Aizen you hypocrite.
^
|
WIN.
...all the DBZ stuff, I have NO IDEA what the heck you're talking about - I never liked DBZ. and I have nothing against it, but I'm just not a fan of the super muscular type of art and stuff... uhh yeah. bad wording, sorry. but you get my point, right...????? and I'm just not a HUGE fan of the older manga style in general... again, no offense to any artist (mangaka or otherwise) that draws that way. i just have my opinions... so yeah. in short, I'm glad I dont know much about DBZ so that when I read this part of Bleach, I can ENJOY it without COMPARING it to stuff. XD LOL
ANYWAY
That was such a dramatic image, when Ichigo said "Is that all you've got?"
LOL TOTALLY
And at least we get to see the Final Getsuga Tenshou next chapter. It better be freaking worth it.
YARLY. I mean seriously, it's been a great buncha chapters in between the "announcement" (if you can call it that) of the FGT and now, but stillll I wanna see it soo bad!!! it had better be good~~~
Last edited by minchan; 10th September 2010 at 5:49 AM.
Here is the second chapter of my fanfic.
I hope you guys like it.
Spoiler:- Chapter 2:
As Cameron Blue’s onslaught continued, Seijuro tried to think of a way to escape without having to seriously hurt Blue. He could not outrun the Squad 11 captain, and he was too busy blocking Blue’s strikes to use any Kido. Seijuro also knew that his zanpakuto abilities would not be much help. He decided that he would have to blindside Blue by temporarily over powering him before he had the chance to use shikai. But that is harder than it sounds. Although Cameron Blue is known to be an instinctual fighter, he has the ability to sense danger in battle and act accordingly with remarkable dexterity.
Seijuro waited for the right moment and then amassed his strength. Cameron was intrigued to see what Seijuro was up to and paused to observe. Seijuro became enveloped by a dark blue cloak of spiritual pressure.
“This may smart some Blue, but you left me no choice.” Seijuro twisted his sword so that the blunt edge was front-facing. “Yamatatsu!*”
Cameron barely had enough time to bring up a defensive stance. The force of the strike was strong enough to send the teenage captain into a neighboring wall. A large amount of dust and rubble was expelled when he made contact with the wall. The impact could be heard for several miles in every direction. As the cloud of dust started to dissipate, everyone looked for signs of life. Seijuro’s face turned to shock as he heard coughing and laughing.
Cough cough “Ahahaha, you sure got me there Arashi. Guess I’ll have to take it up a notch now,” Cameron said as he walked out of the dust cloud, brushing off rubble.
“What the hell, you should be knocked out cold after that attack!”
“Ha ha, you think something like that would take me down? But I have to admit that it was stronger than I expected,” he said with grin.
“Ah ****.”
“Well now it’s my turn to attack. I’ll retaliate with twice the force!” Cameron gained his trademark sadistic smile as his spiritual pressure began to rise.
“Ah double ****…”
“Disappear and Reappear, Kag-“
“Bakudo number 61, Rikujokorou!”
Six beams of light pierced Cameron’s midsection in the form of an asterisk and froze his movements. Seijuro and the onlookers turned their heads to see captain of Squad 3, Kida Ookami standing on a nearby rooftop. Kida’s hair seemed to stand up and her tail was erect. In the next instant, she flash stepped in front of Cameron Blue. Cameron’s facial expression looked nervous, if not afraid. Kida raised the boy by his robes so that they were eye to eye.
“Damn it, you little *******. I’m going to be late for my lunch with Dauc because you couldn’t resist whipping out your sword!” The female captain’s fangs were now showing.
Zameric Kajiya and Akira Mizuhashi, captain of Squad 4, couldn’t help but snicker at what Kida had said.
Kida sharply turned her head at the two captains and snarled, “Shut up you two or I’ll kill you!” The two immediately stopped their snickering and retorted as if they were about to be whacked with a rolled up news paper.
“Here Seijuro, he’s yours now. I’ve got more important things to do.” She then threw the young captain to the ground and flash stepped away.
Zameric appeared before Cameron Blue and used Bakudo # 63, Saju Sabaku to tie him up since Kida’s spell would soon wear off.
“Me, Ryuu and Senny’ll go drop Blue off in his barracks. You should have Akira check you for any serious injuries.”
“Hey Zam, what about me?” Cameron asked with a slight frown on his face.
“You’re fine…” the captain said with a lack of empathy.
“Thank you Zameric,” Captain Arashi said as he sat down.
Zameric and the two other captains flash stepped away as the Squad 4 captain began to inspect Captain Arashi.
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“What do you mean?!” Ambassador Renjiro was flabbergasted.
“Nicholas Morgan, a Quincy living in America, was found dead in his apartment about 5 hours ago. The police report said that there were several unexplained puncture wounds on his torso, but no signs of forced entry even though the doors and windows were locked,” the messenger reported.
“So the police have no suspects?”
“At this time, no.”
Renjiro just stood there for a few minutes, taking in what he had just heard and thinking about what his next action should be. Once he was done, he instructed the messenger to return to the world of the living and waited for the Kido Corps to prepare the Senkaimon for his return to the real world.
“I am very sorry for your loss Renjiro. I hope this mystery is solved soon.” The Head Captain tried to console his friend.
“So do I Golde. But feel that something is odd about this. I might think he was killed by a hollow, but any hollow strong enough to kill him would have been noticed. And if a hollow had tried to eat him, the body wouldn’t be left behind.”
“Yes, it is strange, but we can’t say yet if this was something spiritual in nature or not.”
“I suppose so, but I cannot shake this feeling I have. I will talk to you again later, Head Captain Golde.”
And with that, the Quincy Ambassador stepped through the Senkaimon with his escorts. Golde waited for his lieutenant to return through the Senkaimon before walking back to his office. Golde was troubled by the incident, but put it in the back of his mind since he had more important duties. The Head Captain pulled a lollipop out of his pocket, put it in his mouth, and got to work on the stack of papers on his desk.
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As Kida Ookami approached the manor of Narcisse Dauc she slowed her step. Narcisse Dauc was the captain of Squad 12 and head of the Research and Development Department before the current captain, Ryuu Schiffer. Narcisse retired several decades ago and now serves as the head of the Royal Dauc family. He is a tall man, one of the only men on par with the Head Captain. He is usually always seen wearing brilliant purple robes and still carries his zanpakuto with him.
As Kida walked through the manor, she couldn’t help but notice how…empty it felt. It was not rare to see the family members missing, but usually their servants are about, performing their duties. She decided to check the back gardens, since Dauc frequented them often. Kida noticed a small crowd in the courtyard and approached to see what was going on. The crowd consisted of mainly maids and female Soul Reapers, standing in a crescent formation.
Kida worked her way through the crowd to come upon a sight she had not expected. Narcisse Dauc, Squad 6 Captain Jordan Michishige, and Squad 5 Captain Dre Funeno were all shirtless and striking poses to show-off their forms. Woos and whistles of several women were heard, along with a pretty boy Soul Reaper yelling Go Captain!
“W-what the hell are you three doing?!” Kida demanded an answer with an embarrassed tone of voice.
Everyone stopped to look at Kida, which made her feel a bit nervous.
“Ah, mon amie**, good to see you here. We were just having a contest of masculinity, which originally started as an argument. But it soon gathered the following you see before us and the rest is history.” Dauc explained with an eccentric tone.
“We tried to invite a few others to participate, like Zameric and Seijuro, but they were too busy,” added Dre.
“Only you could come up with something like this, Nancy.” Kida’s mood appeared to have changed to somewhat annoyed. “Now put your shirts back on so we can have lunch.”
“But the contest isn’t over mon amie. This panel of lovely ladies was about to pick the winner.” Dauc stroke another pose, which caused a reaction from crowd.
“Oh, it’s over alright.” Kida cracked her knuckles and showed Narcisse Dauc what she thought about his contest.
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* = (mountain sever/cut) A two handed, horizontal sword strike of great force and speed.
** = mon amie (my friend) An informal French phrase, kind of like buddy/pal.
Anyway I have a subscription to an on demand thisng called Anime Network on Demand and they have this special show called Bento Beat Box which showcases various Japanese pop and rock music... and I just wanted to plug them coz one of the songs they featured is "Daidai" by Chatmonchy - that song was an ending song for Bleach a little while back... I think it was during the arrancar or hueco mundo arc... something around there I believe. XD
Remind me to subscribe to them when I get sound back (and you WILL know when I get sound back).
Originally Posted by minchan
Spoiler:
...all the DBZ stuff, I have NO IDEA what the heck you're talking about - I never liked DBZ. and I have nothing against it, but I'm just not a fan of the super muscular type of art and stuff... uhh yeah. bad wording, sorry. but you get my point, right...????? and I'm just not a HUGE fan of the older manga style in general... again, no offense to any artist (mangaka or otherwise) that draws that way. i just have my opinions... so yeah. in short, I'm glad I dont know much about DBZ so that when I read this part of Bleach, I can ENJOY it without COMPARING it to stuff. XD LOL
Spoiler:
You, too, have no childhood*shot*
Anyway, well, yeah, you're entitled to your own opinion of what kinds of manga you like or don't like, there's no need to apologise.
And for those of you who have seen DBZ, it can be really easy to find similarites XD
Father and son train in a place where time and space moves differently to that on earth. Son becomes stronger than father. Villain aspires to reach the "ultimate" form (perfect form, or God form). Villain transforms during the fight. Son beats villain using a technique that his dad taught him.
For those of you who can't remember, I'm talking about Goku, Gohan and Cell.
Spoiler:- Chapter 2:
Originally Posted by Zameric
As Cameron Blue’s onslaught continued, Seijuro tried to think of a way to escape without having to seriously hurt Blue. He could not outrun the Squad 11 captain, and he was too busy blocking Blue’s strikes to use any Kido. Seijuro also knew that his zanpakuto abilities would not be much help. He decided that he would have to blindside Blue by temporarily over powering him before he had the chance to use shikai. But that is harder than it sounds. Although Cameron Blue is known to be an instinctual fighter, he has the ability to sense danger in battle and act accordingly with remarkable dexterity. Seijuro waited for the right moment and then amassed his strength. Cameron was intrigued to see what Seijuro was up to and paused to observe. Seijuro became enveloped by a dark blue cloak of spiritual pressure.
Something that stood out rather strongly to me was how the sentences were structed:
Cameron did this.
Seijuro did that.
Cameron did this.
Seijuro did that.
Try making your sentence structure more varied; use more "-ing" verbs to start your sentence, and pronouns, and descriptive nouns (the shorter boy, the older captain, etc.)
Originally Posted by Zameric
Six beams of light pierced Cameron’s midsection in the form of an asterisk and froze his movements. Seijuro and the onlookers turned their heads to see captain of Squad 3, Kida Ookami standing on a nearby rooftop. Kida’s hair seemed to stand up and her tail was erect. In the next instant, she flash stepped in front of Cameron Blue. Cameron’s facial expression looked nervous, if not afraid. Kida raised the boy by his robes so that they were eye to eye.
I feel very fearful for him.
Originally Posted by Zameric
Zameric Kajiya and Mizuhashi Akira, captain of Squad 4, couldn’t help but snicker at what Kida had said.
I'm ashamed to say, I did too.
Originally Posted by Zameric
“Nicholas Morgan, a Quincy living in America, was found dead in his apartment about 5 hours ago. The police report said that there were several unexplained puncture wounds on his torso, but no signs of forced entry even though the doors and windows were locked,” the messenger reported.
Is Nicholas Morgan an actual person/character?
Oh, also, I'm predicting that it's something along the lines of a rogue Shinigami. Possibly something to do with the cold that going around; I immediately think of some kind of Vizard-infection of sorts, or perhaps another kind of Hollow-Shinigami hybrid (Hollow like thinking; feeding on people, but with a zanpakutou, or a sword of sorts).
Originally Posted by Zameric
The crowd consisted of mainly maids and female Soul Reapers, standing in a crescent formation.
This will not be good.
Originally Posted by Zameric
Narcisse Dauc, Squad 6 Captain Jordan Michishige, and Squad 5 Captain Dre Funeno were all shirtless and striking poses to show-off their forms. Woos and whistles of several women were heard, along with two Soul Reapers that cheered Go Captain at the same time and started to argue who’s captain was better.
Something tells me MC will not like how you portrayed him XD
Though at the same time, I can definitely imagine Da.c doing that.
Oh, also, yeah, Eid Mubarak and all that jazz. *Hunts for Ed's candy*
Last edited by I like Pokemon (...); 10th September 2010 at 10:25 AM.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
if u dont change that name... well this isnt a threat or anything, but i'll be too distracted to read your story. im not even exaggerating - i'm serious... i get like that... it's kinda... awkward. and i would like to read it... well w/e but i'm just letting you know my opinion and such... i do think the plot is interesting though..........
oh and btw its not just your story. it's a lot of things..... i tend to have trouble reading or following (in general) anything that has my aliases in them, intended or otherwise, because it just makes me think too hard about things and such... yeah i know i'm kinda strange but it's how i am, sooo...........
oh and ilpehhh it's not a youtube channel or anything. it's anime network on demand which is available on certain digital cable providers for a fee. (about 7 USD per month i think) well anyway it's still worth checking out anime network's website... just google them. they have an online player too, so..........
anyway, later today i have an assignment to do so i wont be online too much later today. (like 5pm-7pm-ish eastern)......yeah just letting u kno. ^_^
Something that stood out rather strongly to me was how the sentences were structed:
Cameron did this.
Seijuro did that.
Cameron did this.
Seijuro did that.
Try making your sentence structure more varied; use more "-ing" verbs to start your sentence, and pronouns, and descriptive nouns (the shorter boy, the older captain, etc.) I don't think it was all that bad, except maybe I could have used their actual names less.
My English teacher, in college, told us to try to not use -ing words as much. xD
I'm ashamed to say, I did too. Yay, it worked. ;p
Is Nicholas Morgan an actual person/character? No, just a name I made up from other random people.
Oh, also, I'm predicting that it's something along the lines of a rogue Shinigami. Possibly something to do with the cold that going around; I immediately think of some kind of Vizard-infection of sorts, or perhaps another kind of Hollow-Shinigami hybrid (Hollow like thinking; feeding on people, but with a zanpakutou, or a sword of sorts). Eeeeeehhh...maybe, maybe not.
My replies are in bold.
Originally Posted by minchan
im angry slowpoke. u stil stole my name. D=
if u dont change that name... well this isnt a threat or anything, but i'll be too distracted to read your story. im not even exaggerating - i'm serious... i get like that... it's kinda... awkward. and i would like to read it... well w/e but i'm just letting you know my opinion and such... i do think the plot is interesting though..........
e.e It's not like I meant to use the same name on purpose. It just popped into my head back when I was making my Ryoko Redux Arc. Is it so bad being Senny's pretend counsin? xD
Please check out my 4th & 5th gen trade thread posts.
Because my character isn't supposed to have family.
She's so carefree just because she doesn't have a family.
Oh yeah, and I joined MC's Bleach club at GTS. XD
Just figured I'd say that.
And ugh I have a dentist appointment today, then I have to come home and do homework. So during the middle of the day, I won't be on much, probably. (11am-5pm eastern, approx.)
Just so you know~~
Ooh and ep3 of the Amagai arc is on tonight/tomorrow morning/whatever you wanna call it!! XD
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OMG I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING
slowpoke stole two things now!!! the club frm golde and my name from me. XD XD XD XD XD FAILLLLLLl
...*ahem*
but stillll do something about the name. i can even help u think of a name if u need but stillllllllllllllllllllllllllll
Last edited by minchan; 11th September 2010 at 7:56 AM.
Because my character isn't supposed to have family.
She's so carefree just because she doesn't have a family.
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OMG I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING
slowpoke stole two things now!!! the club frm golde and my name from me. XD XD XD XD XD FAILLLLLLl
...*ahem*
but stillll do something about the name. i can even help u think of a name if u need but stillllllllllllllllllllllllllll
Alright, I tried to be tolerant and understanding of you at first. But you just kept nagging and nagging. And then I saw the PM you sent, and that miffed me a little bit, but I was willing to move on and changed the name just to shut you up. But now this post is the last straw. Anyone here could tell you that I am one of the hardest captains to piss off, but you have done it, and you will feel my wrath.
I did not steal your name or anything else!
And now I'm going to go change Senny's last name back...and some other things.
Please check out my 4th & 5th gen trade thread posts.
Zameric; XD damn, you made me sound quite posh - Late for Lunch with Da.c ... can we have peppermint tea as well? 8D - My reaction to the Man Off contest at the end was perfect, not to mention my little spaz at Cameron >]
im angry slowpoke. u stil stole my name. D=
if u dont change that name... well this isnt a threat or anything, but i'll be too distracted to read your story. im not even exaggerating - i'm serious... i get like that... it's kinda... awkward. and i would like to read it... well w/e but i'm just letting you know my opinion and such... i do think the plot is interesting though..........
Yeah it is. D=
Because my character isn't supposed to have family.
She's so carefree just because she doesn't have a family.
Well, when you write YOUR fanfic you can be an orphan. It's Zameric's FanFic, he can do what ever he likes with it, it's called Artistic License.
Please stop being so immature in future, it's really starting to grate me, and i'm one of the most tolerant members in this club. Thank you.
Zameric, if I had been you, i would have kept the name, it's called Fan Fiction for a reason, but you have decided to take the moral high ground, so kudos to you =]
Spoiler:- manga:
Is it me or has Ichigo's IQ points suddenly shot up? ... Aizen has gained another level, Aizen learned Scream of Fury.
I think Aizen might have broken a few vocal chords with that scream of fury, Chapter Page = Big Eye ... O.O
Aizen is Evolving, Aizen has evolved to Butterfly Squid ... seriously what IS that thing?
Goddmoddy powers no longer amaze, he's going to have to raise the bar at some point, or add more gore.
Wow we might actually see the Final Tetsuga ... i bet it'll involve having half of Ichigo's clothes removed >.>
I'm no off to make Pizza with my mother, toodles. =D
chapter will come later today. my family shows up, stuff happens. yeah.
and i've got a topic. Besides Soul Reaper/Arrancar/Vizard, what spiritual being would you want to be?
Quincy. No doubt about it. Bows are badass. Energy bows are even more badass.
I've been thinking about it a lot lately. Fire zanpakuto's are a bit overrated. so i have created a new zan i'm hoping to have approved.
Zanpaktou Spirit: Shinkiro's spirit is that of Garuda. Garuda is a hindu diety with the body of a man, large wings and the beak and tail feathers of a hawk. The wings and tail feathers are scarlet and look as if they are flaming. The body shines in golden light. still reffered to as Oto.
Inner World: clearing in a forest. lake with a rock in the middle. Oto meditates on the rock. giant cliff behind lake. waterfall flows over the cliff into the lake.
Release Command: Susurrate
Shikai Details: a machete with a 1' 6" blade. the non-cutting edge is gold. a groove runs along the non-cutting edge for draining blood.
Abilities Shi Dageki (Four Strikes): I manifest three clones and we strike from all sides. Juugun Ooi (Perfect Cloak): A thick fog surrounds the battlefield. (active from release) Kiri Utsushi (Mist Clone): I can create up to three clones from mist. however when they attack or are attacked, they instantly dissipate.
Bankai Name: Jaaku Shinkiro (Wicked Mirage)
Bankai Details: a nodaichi, cutting edge to just above mid-blade is black. from black to non-cutting edge is gold.
Abilities Enmu Kakkou (Haze Form): To avoid energy based attacks i can turn my body to a mist. Shisei-ken (Four Holy Swords): A blade extends from the mist to the left, right, front and back of the opponent, impaling them though the torso.
ther it is.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Is it me or has Ichigo's IQ points suddenly shot up? ... Aizen has gained another level, Aizen learned Scream of Fury.
Aizen is Evolving, Aizen has evolved to Butterfly Squid ... seriously what IS that thing?
Wow we might actually see the Final Tetsuga ... i bet it'll involve having half of Ichigo's clothes removed >.>
I'm no off to make Pizza with my mother, toodles. =D
Spoiler:
He's just not being an idiot, that's all.
Also, XD
He's a Tentaquil.
I'm expecting some ripped clothing in this fight, actually.
Besides Soul Reaper/Arrancar/Vizard, what spiritual being would you want to be?
Well, besides the ones in the topic, as well as Hollows, Bounts and Quincies (and Zanpakutou at a stretch), what else is left?
Originally Posted by kusari
I've been thinking about it a lot lately. Fire zanpakuto's are a bit overrated. so i have created a new zan i'm hoping to have approved.
That's good. Too many Zans of one type gets boring.
Spoiler:- new zan:
Originally Posted by kusari
Type: mist/illusion (but not Aizen godmod illusion)
After reading through it, it's not really an "illusion" type. Google defines illusion as: "an erroneous mental representation", which your Zanpakutou does not do (except for clones, more on them later).
Originally Posted by kusari
Release Command: Susurrate
Which means what?
Originally Posted by kusari
Shi Dageki (Four Strikes): I manifest three clones and we strike from all sides.
You say that, is it just like "3 more of me appear for this one strike" or is it "3 more appear, our tactic is attacking from all sides"?
If the latter, then I will Ninja Blue and say that clones are going to be pretty damn overpowered. In fights, all you have to do is pull a "YOU HIT MY CLONE LOL" and your opponent will be weakened, and you will be normal health.
Unless there are some limitations (which you should edit for, if there are), then it will be too powerful. If they're like Naruto's Shadow Clones, or maybe your strength is split between the 4 of you?
Originally Posted by kusari
Juugun Ooi (Perfect Cloak): A thick fog surrounds the battlefield. (active from release)
Shouldn't that have gone first?
Originally Posted by kusari
Kiri Utsushi (Mist Clone): I can create up to three clones from mist. however when they attack or are attacked, they instantly dissipate.
I think this is at least more acceptable (if not entirely), especially if there's a limit to how many you can make (like if it drains up some reiatsu, or there's a limited amount clones you can make, as I'm assuming that it's 3 at a time, and not 3 per release or something).
Originally Posted by kusari
Enmu Kakkou (Haze Form): To avoid energy based attacks i can turn my body to a mist.
Will this block physical hits, or can you still be hit by those?
Originally Posted by kusari
ther it is.
It's cool, and definitely more unique than a fire type. I like it, though I think perhaps being slightly more specific with your abilities would make it easier to understand.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Alright, I tried to be tolerant and understanding of you at first. But you just kept nagging and nagging. And then I saw the PM you sent, and that miffed me a little bit, but I was willing to move on and changed the name just to shut you up. But now this post is the last straw. Anyone here could tell you that I am one of the hardest captains to piss off, but you have done it, and you will feel my wrath.
I did not steal your name or anything else!
And now I'm going to go change Senny's last name back...and some other things.
oh come on geez
i posted that before i got your replies. D=
check the time stamp??
...seriously though. i was only half serious about the "stealing" part. =P
take a joke? i mean come on. you know me. -.-;;
@nl
i understand what your saying but i'm just pointing out that *i think* he should have known that was my name because he has my msn which contains that name.
ok but anyway i know i was a bit pushy and i'm sorry guys. ok?
but regardless, i still think he should have checked the timestamp on the posts. -.-;;
anyway do what you want with your fanfiction... but i am sorry, but i honestly cant read stuff that distracts me so much. ok? i'm not kidding about that at all. i'm kinda strange when it comes to that stuff but it's how i am.
anyway i'm sorry for causing a commotion. i guess i'm just a bit too stubborn for my own good. =P (gotta work on that)
well i just wanna request that you dont use my character too much in your fanfiction, please because i would at least like to reserve my right to have my character not be in certain works. i know you didnt put her in yet anyway but i'm just saying... i think it's fair enough to ask for MY character not to be used in YOUR fic. no offense. just... saying. and umm... if you WANT to use my character, you can, but just use the old design of "Min Kazami" then, ok?? if you want to use her at all.
again i didn't mean to be rude or anything. i'm reallllly sorry for pushing you guys the wrong way.
oh yeah and in response to the manga comments:
Spoiler:
Ichigo DOES seem smarter... I can't believe I totally didn't notice that until you mentioned it. =P
Aizen can only evolve so much....... -.-;;
Ok well umm I wanna bring it up again because not many people replied to what i said a while ago...
I'm really bad at writing fanfictions on my own. See, I tend to have great plot ideas and whatnot but formatting and such is a really hard thing for me to do. This is why English is my weakest subject in school...
Anyway my point is that I'd like to start a collaboration fic with some people. I'm NOT saying this due to the recent events just now, because I posted about this a while ago, and I wanted to do this for a while. Anyway, it's perfectly okay if you don't want to. But if you're at all interested, or even intrigued about the idea in itself, PLEASE send me a PM. thanks. ^^
OMG I'm sorry guys, this post is getting so long... I started rambling again... oops~
but i guess I'll stop typing for now... besides, bleach is on in less than half an hour. so i'll be watching that. Ruri~~ <3
haha... later guys, and again, sorry for how i was acting...
Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...);11605650[SPOILER="new zan"
After reading through it, it's not really an "illusion" type. Google defines illusion as: "an erroneous mental representation", which your Zanpakutou does not do (except for clones, more on them later). I had it more illusion based but it seemed too much like Ichinose's, just without the light.
Which means what?
to make a soft rustling sound
You say that, is it just like "3 more of me appear for this one strike" or is it "3 more appear, our tactic is attacking from all sides"?
If the latter, then I will Ninja Blue and say that clones are going to be pretty damn overpowered. In fights, all you have to do is pull a "YOU HIT MY CLONE LOL" and your opponent will be weakened, and you will be normal health.
Unless there are some limitations (which you should edit for, if there are), then it will be too powerful. If they're like Naruto's Shadow Clones, or maybe your strength is split between the 4 of you? the clones are just like ones below. once they make physical contact or are hit physically they fade. so as soon as they make contact they disappear. they're basically to make the enemy think they're being stabbed from all sides when only I actually hit them.
Shouldn't that have gone first? probably, but i don't prioritize.
I think this is at least more acceptable (if not entirely), especially if there's a limit to how many you can make (like if it drains up some reiatsu, or there's a limited amount clones you can make, as I'm assuming that it's 3 at a time, and not 3 per release or something). it can be up to three but no more than three. because of the power needed to sustain the clones only six (ie. two sets of three) can be created during each release of the sword.
Will this block physical hits, or can you still be hit by those? physical hits can still hurt, as well as energy hits i don't see coming.
It's cool, and definitely more unique than a fire type. I like it, though I think perhaps being slightly more specific with your abilities would make it easier to understand. did i make it specific enough now.
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here is the next chapter. in reviews could i ask you guys to tell me what you think of the title. TV-Tropes said chapter title, the weird ones like Satan From Orbit, would sound cool as band names. so i found sites that had odd band names and found one i liked. so yeah.
also Flash Step is in this chapter. i don't have a profile to refer to so i just winged it for now. please correct me if i'm wrong.
Min you're in it too but in your profile there was no hair color so again I winged it. i also used the same last name for Senny that Zam used so i went back and changed your's to Kazami like you said to.
heads up: in this chapter Dauc flips the fuk out. and ILP and MC, don't say anything about what Dauc does to MC in this chapter.
All this happens during Zoma and Kida's fight.
Eon: if ILP asks for the translation of German phrases in this chapter, you have to give them.
Spoiler:- Chapter 13: Baptism By Puncture Wound:
Dauc and Jordan sprinted across the wasteland of Hueco Mundo. A hollow kidnapped Kida. They had to get her back. That's all they cared about.
"Kida!" Dauc yelled, going faster, pulling ahead.
"Damn it." Jordan muttered to himself. He shunpo-ed up and grabbed the former captain by the back of his shihakusho. "You impulsive dumbass. She's strong. She can take care of herself. We don't need to rush and save her."
"You don't get it." He whipped around. "The hollow she was fighting was number four. It was the same hollow that beat and captured Hayashi and it was effortlessly killed by another."
"Yeah it was killed by taking a sword through the back. An attack it never saw coming."
Silence fell between them. They stood like that for nearly two minutes. Dauc delivered a sharp right hook to Jordan's right cheek. The sixth captain fell straight into the sand. The unexpected punch knocked him out cold.
"Sorry. But I have to save her." Dauc flash stepped away.
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"C'mon Brak let's have a little fun." Blue gave a wide toothy grin.
"Heh heh." Brak laughed and gave an impressed smile. Maybe this kid isn't as week as I thought.
"Oh well. If your not coming I will." Blue jumped with Kagebu ready to stab.
Brak reached out and clutched his left hand around the dark sword. "Gotcha kid."
"No got you." Electrical sparks discharged from his sword hand. "Hado #11: Tsuzuri Raiden." An electrical surged traveled the length of the zanpakuto.
The large hand recoiled, the other tore into the lietenant's chest. Blue flew and crashed into the wall. "I'm gonna kill you and I'm gonna enjoy doing it."
Cameron hopped from the rubble. "Hey, Bjork, you stole my line."
"The name's Brak, kid. And if you've forgotten I'm the eighth espada."
"Ok, Brick, you're an espada, but you're still number eight." The short teen laughed at his own joke.
Brak swept his hand through his fiery orange hair. "It can't be helped. I'm going to rip off your bottom jaw, then pull out your vocal chords one by one."
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"Genug mit all den Machenschaften, Kleine." Coba yelled through the Body Garden.
"What the hell?" Seijuro wondered out loud.
"Gotcha." Coba launched his halberd like a javelin. It made it's mark inches from Arashi's face.
"****." The seventh captain turned 180 to see the third espada charging, kilij drawn. "Double ****."
"**** indeed, mein fraulein." The hollow smirked. "Zeit für den Tod."
The captain kicked off the handle of the halberd. He had no idea where he was going with that plan. "Got it." He snatched the legs of one of the hanging corpses.
"Sie müssen sich schließlich kommen."
"I don't have any idea what you're saying!" Seijuro screeched. A ripping sound emanated from the legs the captain held. "Triple ****."
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Dark, impending clouds loomed in the sky. The head captain stood on the roof of the meeting hall. His electric blonde hair matched the flashing lightning that was jumping from cloud to cloud.
A man appeared behind him. A squad five haori adorned his back.
"Dre. When did you get back? I thought you weren't coming back for another week?" Golde said, not averting his gaze at all.
"About an hour ago. We finished the mission early. But I have important information for you. Akane Hayashi came to find me."
"Damn it. Not Masanori."
"Not just him, they're all coming."
The head captain groaned.
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The compostion of the Soul Society began to part. A gate opened. Six figures stepped out. Five men, one woman.
"Time to pay the good head captain a visit." Masanori barked. Six feet, six inches, jet-black hair and a hulking frame.
"Father." Akane squeeked.
"What is it weakling?"
"May I go see Sai...I mean Yasushi?"
"Hell no!" Shigeo snapped, his hand moved to the hilt of his blade.
"Don't even think about it you lecherous scum." Takeo's sword rested against his younger brother's throat. "You know I won't hesitate to kill you."
"All of you stop." Hideo took off his glasses and cleaned them on his sleeve. "Father please settle this."
"Takeo take the weakling and do whatever. The rest of you come with me." At their father's command, Akane and Takeo flash stepped towards squad 13. The rest went with Masanori to the first division.
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"Captain." A young dark haired girl appeared next to Dre.
"Kazami. What is it?" Dre said in reference to his lieutenant.
"They've arrived." Sei responded.
"Hell yeah we have." Shigeo crowed. "Kinda small. I think we should throw her back." The ******* dangled her over the side of the roof. A light rain began to fall.
"Someday a real rain will come and wash all this scum off the streets." Golde said, staring the same we he had the entire time.
Dre delivered a kick to Shigeo's head, while pulling his lieutenant from harm's way. "I believe he was talking about you."
The fourth brother growled. "Gather..."
"Shigeo stop." Mitsuo crossed his sword with his younger brother's. "This isn't the time or place."
"Masanori, why are you here." Golde was now staring down the father Hayashi. The madness behind, barely seemed to phase them.
"You need someone to replace eighth squad captain Senny Yamakiri, no?" The burly man huffed.
"Correct." The blond man responded.
"Well we have your man."
"What makes you think I'll give him the postion?"
"Because I've got the backing of the entire Royal Guard. The man I've brought will be made captain and anyone he brings with him will be given postions in the squad. No questions asked." A sneer spread.
"I can't just appoint this guy. It would break rules and tradition."
"You'll appoint him. No questions asked. No resistance. Hideo, give him the order."
The first son pulled a scroll from his robes and handed it to Golde. "You'll find it has been signed by fifteen members of central 46, all captains of the guard and a high ranking member of the Kajiya clan." Hideo said.
"So it's iron-clad?"
"Yes sir."
"Fine. Have your guy show up tomorrow at six a.m. sharp."
"Thank you for your compliance." Hideo thanked Golde.
"Let's go." Masanori commanded. He vanished, followed by the brothers.
"You just agreed so easily?!" Dre yelled.
"I had to. There was no other choice." His eyes shifted back to the sky. If they went through all that, just to get that guy in, nothing good can come of it.
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"Takeo?" Akane asked.
"What is it?"
"Why do you care about me and Saiga so much?"
"Because you're my brother and sister. The rest may hate you but I don't."
Akane stopped suddenly. Takeo stopped and changed direction. He stood by his sister. It began to rain. A light rain. A real rain.
She wrapped her arms around him. Tears were streaming from her eyes. Like rain.
"Thank you." She sobbed. "I thought I was the only one who cared about him."
"No problem. Now let go so we can get out of this rain." They quickly moved on to the thirteenth baracks.
Soon after the siblings arrived at their brother's office. Takeo slid the doors open. "What the hell?!" The doors opened to an office with empty liquor bottles strewn about. At the opposite side was a desk, stacked high with paperwork. A man with navy blue hair was asleep at the amidst the clutter.
Akane and Takeo waded through mess towards the man. Akane shook him awake. "Who the hell are you?" She inquired.
"I'm Katsu Umino. Third seat of squad 13. Captain Hayashi is away at the moment and I'm stuck doing his paperwork."
"Well when is he..." A small black swallowtail landed on her shoulder. "Damn."
"Let's go Akane." He brother said.
"Damn." She cursed again.
They flash stepped away.
Damn it. Where is he? Akane thought.
remember Eon: german translations are your's.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Interesting zanpakuto, Kusari. I think if you just put some more description into it, it'll be a lot easier to understand. Otherwise it's fine to me.
Originally Posted by minchan
oh come on geez
i posted that before i got your replies. D=
check the time stamp??
Yes, I read the PM before the post, but I knew about the PM before the post because of email notifications. But still, both were not needed, one would have sufficed.
The rest of my replies will be in a PM.
Please check out my 4th & 5th gen trade thread posts.
umm yeahh... my character has dark brown hair so u were rite lol
just think this way- its really dark brown n oft mistakn 4 black. XD
uhh im sry for bad typing but my laptops rly bad n it died so im usin my wii. hrd 2 type with...
err 2day i got2 finish homewrk so i mite not b on l8r.... but wen im on again, i wil be on a real comp. so i wnt b talkn in chatspk....... srry for that lol
I had it more illusion based but it seemed too much like Ichinose's, just without the light.
Ah, okay. Well, with the clones being illusion-based, I guess it makes more sense.
Originally Posted by kusari
the clones are just like ones below. once they make physical contact or are hit physically they fade. so as soon as they make contact they disappear. they're basically to make the enemy think they're being stabbed from all sides when only I actually hit them.
Hmm.... That's fine by me, I guess. Though Blue may or may not still have some complaints.
Originally Posted by kusari
it can be up to three but no more than three. because of the power needed to sustain the clones only six (ie. two sets of three) can be created during each release of the sword.
Again, yeah, this is fine by me.
Originally Posted by kusari
did i make it specific enough now.
Yup, looks good to me.
Originally Posted by kusari
here is the next chapter. in reviews could i ask you guys to tell me what you think of the title. TV-Tropes said chapter title, the weird ones like Satan From Orbit, would sound cool as band names. so i found sites that had odd band names and found one i liked. so yeah.
They're right.
Originally Posted by kusari
heads up: in this chapter Dauc flips the fuk out. and ILP and MC, don't say anything about what Dauc does to MC in this chapter.
I'll comment on it anyway.
Originally Posted by kusari
All this happens during Zoma and Kida's fight.
A note, the way it was written suited and fit it, definitely. Very anime like, where you have small clips of scenes going on at the same time happening one after the other.
Originally Posted by kusari
Eon: if ILP asks for the translation of German phrases in this chapter, you have to give them.
Which I do Why not just have them written at the end of the post?
Spoiler:- Chapter 13: Baptism By Puncture Wound:
Originally Posted by kusari
Dauc and Jordan sprinted across the wasteland of Hueco Mundo. A hollow kidnapped Kida. They had to get her back. That's all they cared about.
Originally Posted by kusari
Silence fell between them. They stood like that for nearly two minutes. Dauc delivered a sharp right hook to Jordan's right cheek. The sixth captain fell straight into the sand. The unexpected punch knocked him out cold.
"Sorry. But I have to save her." Dauc flash stepped away.
I can't say that I was initially shocked Though it wasn't as bad as I thought but after looking at the situation more clearly, it definitely fits in and makes sense.
Dauc obvioulsy really cares for Kida, and wants to protect her no matter what- if she does die, then it will be on his conscience for the rest of his life. Jordan was getting in his way, stopping him from saving her, and the only way to stop him, would be to knock him out cold.
It suits Dauc's personality. I'm trying to start using fic names in reviews.
Originally Posted by kusari
"C'mon Brak let's have a little fun." Blue gave a wide toothy grin.
"Heh heh." Brak laughed and gave an impressed smile. Maybe this kid isn't as week as I thought.
Oh, yeah, he's definitely more Wednesday than Friday. I felt like taking the piss a bit XP
Originally Posted by kusari
"Genug mit all den Machenschaften, Kleine." Coba yelled through the Body Garden.
"What the hell?" Seijuro wondered out loud.
My exact reaction.
Originally Posted by kusari
"Sie müssen sich schließlich kommen."
"I don't have any idea what you're saying!" Seijuro screeched.
And I would like to know, please, Eon 8D.
Originally Posted by kusari
"About an hour ago. We finished the mission early. But I have important information for you. Akane Hayashi came to find me."
"Damn it. Not Masanori."
"Not just him, they're all coming."
The head captain groaned.
Ahaha, so it's obvious that they're all (or almost all as we see) ****heads.
Originally Posted by kusari
"Father." Akane squeeked.
"What is it weakling?"
ihatehimalready
Originally Posted by kusari
"You need someone to replace eighth squad captain Senny Yamakiri, no?" The burly man huffed.
Wait, what happened to him again?
Originally Posted by kusari
"Well we have your man."
"What makes you think I'll give him the postion?"
Which one? There are 4 men (not including the dad) so which one will be Captain?
Originally Posted by kusari
"Because I've got the backing of the entire Royal Guard. The man I've brought will be made captain and anyone he brings with him will be given postions in the squad. No questions asked." A sneer spread.
"I can't just appoint this guy. It would break rules and tradition."
"You'll appoint him. No questions asked. No resistance. Hideo, give him the order."
The first son pulled a scroll from his robes and handed it to Golde. "You'll find it has been signed by fifteen members of central 46, all captains of the guard and a high ranking member of the Kajiya clan." Hideo said.
"So it's iron-clad?"
"Yes sir."
Now, normally, I'd be trying to find holes in how this works, as you sure as hell know already. There's no way that the Captain Commander has enough power to overrule everyone who signed it.
Originally Posted by kusari
"I had to. There was no other choice." His eyes shifted back to the sky. If they went through all that, just to get that guy in, nothing good can come of it.
That is so true.
Originally Posted by kusari
Soon after the siblings arrived at their brother's office. Takeo slid the doors open. "What the hell?!" The doors opened to an office with empty liquor bottles strewn about. At the opposite side was a desk, stacked high with paperwork. A man with navy blue hair was asleep at the amidst the clutter.
This made me LOL.
Originally Posted by kusari
"Well when is he..." A small black swallowtail landed on her shoulder. "Damn."
I don't quite understand what happened here. You usually don't write information unless it's somewhat necessary, so what's up with the swallowtail?
Last edited by I like Pokemon (...); 12th September 2010 at 10:32 AM.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Ah, okay. Well, with the clones being illusion-based, I guess it makes more sense. ok then.
Hmm.... That's fine by me, I guess. Though Blue may or may not still have some complaints. i'll burn that bridge when i get to it.
Again, yeah, this is fine by me. good.
Yup, looks good to me. good
They're right. Yep. and i've got 14 more.
I'll comment on it anyway.
[B]i knew you would.[B]
A note, the way it was written suited and fit it, definitely. Very anime like, where you have small clips of scenes going on at the same time happening one after the other. plot device.
Which I do Why not just have them written at in the post? just for you, i'll put them in.
Spoiler:- Chapter 13: Baptism By Puncture Wound:
I can't say that I was initially shocked Though it wasn't as bad as I thought but after looking at the situation more clearly, it definitely fits in and makes sense.
Dauc obvioulsy really cares for Kida, and wants to protect her no matter what- if she does die, then it will be on his conscience for the rest of his life. Jordan was getting in his way, stopping him from saving her, and the only way to stop him, would be to knock him out cold.
It suits Dauc's personality. I trying to start using fic names in reviews. i was addressing the fact that Jordan gets knocked out and left in the middle of Hueco all alone.
Oh, yeah, he's definitely more Wednesday than Friday. I felt like taking the piss a bit XP what the hell does that mean?
My exact reaction. "Genug mit all den Machenschaften, Kleine." This means "stop with all the shenanigans, little one.
And I would like to know, please, Eon 8D. "Sie müssen sich schließlich kommen." This means "you have to come down sometime."
Ahaha, so it's obvious that they're all (or almost all as we see) ****heads. All but Akane and Takeo (to an extent).
ihatehimalready You hate Coba too. But that's cause he squashes little girl's heads. Masanori squashes their self-esteem.
Wait, what happened to him again? Not quite sure. As of right now he's MIA and the members of the club I've never met are out on missions. Like FS was up until this point.
Which one? There are 4 men (not including the dad) so which one will be Captain? None of the brothers, Akane or Masanori. That guy comes a six a.m. sharp tomorrow.
Now, normally, I'd be trying to find holes in how this works, as you sure as hell know already. There's no way that the Captain Commander has enough power to overrule everyone who signed it. I knew. and I craftily prevented it.
That is so true. Mainly because that action was setting the next arc in motion.
This made me LOL. Oddly this guy never makes another appearance.
I don't quite understand what happened here. You usually don't write information unless it's somewhat necessary, so what's up with the swallowtail? That was Daddy's swallowtail saying "Time to leave weakling."
And on a final closing note i will be announcing the titles of the chapters for the rest of this arc.
14. The Legend of Danger and Solstice
15. Swan Songs of the Weeping Willow
16. A Life Spent Learning
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Apparently Aizen can evolve as many times as he likes >.>;
nl
i understand what your saying but i'm just pointing out that *i think* he should have known that was my name because he has my msn which contains that name.
ok but anyway i know i was a bit pushy and i'm sorry guys. ok?
Good Good =]
Kusari; I'm so writing in your new Zanpaktou, it's so cool - Mist Clones 8D
Spoiler:- Kusari Chapter 13:
Silence fell between them. They stood like that for nearly two minutes. Dauc delivered a sharp right hook to Jordan's right cheek. The sixth captain fell straight into the sand. The unexpected punch knocked him out cold.
"Sorry. But I have to save her." Dauc flash stepped away.
He'll be my knight in shining bloody armor XD
Just popping in, my final year of school has started so I'm pretty busy most of the time.
Soooo how is everyone doint this weekend? lol Im really tired so im about to go to sleep..been up all nite so here is my present from me to you..hope you like
Spoiler:- Profile:
Name: Dre Flashy/Insane/Funeno dont mind if you call me either
Gender: Male
Rank/Squad: Captain of Squad 5
Zanpakto: Kitsune Na Hii
Blood group: A+
Personality: Usually Calm and to myself even tho i love to party...its complicated, Very hard to get me mad but when i do its definately not a good thing. Love to spar with friends though. And drink :-) Also Lazy
Battle style: Dont really like to fight ppl i dont have to but calm minded when fighting. Love to use Kido to combine with and boost my attacks and to create openings. I use my speed to my best ability
Backstory: Also part of a Noble Family. Parents wanted me to train, do school work and learn about our family history all at the same time. It was quite frustrating and i barely had anytime to play with friends which were MC, and Dauc at the time.
As i got older and was placed in Squad 5 i knew that this was the squad for me. I worked hard to impress my captain and Lt. while also trying to impress my family to let them know i was working hard to withhold our family name. As i moved up in ranks and became Lt so did MC and Dauc. we were all proud and swore we would all make captains soon.
As years past Dauc was the first to make captain then me and lastly MC. Once we made captain i stated throwing parties Dauc became obsessed with his looks and trying to win over...annnyway and MC became obsessed with trying to surpass me as a fire user. But my Zan and I have a Hidden Training Area that allows us to hone our skills and learn new techniques.
Thats about it really nothing special about my past.
Zanpaktou
Zanpaktou Name: Kitsune Na Hii (FireFox)
Type: Fire/Lightning
Release Command: Kogemasu zenbu (Burn Everything)
Manifested Form: Fox
Sword Description: A Katana
Spirit: Kitsune Na Hii’s a fox with it's tail, ears, and feet on fire, the eyes are red.
The body of the whole fox is white.
Shikai Information: The fire completely covers the sword except for the hilt. At the end of the hilt there is a red ball that is stored with a massive amount of energy that is only to be used for my bankai's true form. In Shikai form the flames I conjure up are red.
[Battle Data]
While in Shikai I am more of a distant fighter..using my attacks from a distance trying to figure out my opponents moves, strategy, and fighting style
[Techniques]
OLD
Arashi (Cyclone)
While spinning in the air, i release fire reiatsu so it forms into an high speed spinning cyclone diving into my target
Netsu Taihoo (Heat Cannon)
As I create a flaming circle I then shoot a blast of fire
Ryuusei Shawaa (Meteor Shower)
Flaming balls of fire raining down on my target..size may vary
Also Has a secret technique called…
Hinote Bookyaku (Flames of Oblivion)
Red and Black flames with devastating power able to engulf anything..also available in Bankai only the flames are blue
Bankai Information:
Name: Tengoku Mizuiro Kitsune na hii (Heavenly Blue Firefox)
Type: Fire/Lightning
Bankai Information: This sword is completely different in length, the hilt is all black and the sword has little a simulated black ivory grip. If you are cut by this sword that part of your body will feel cold for 5 seconds, then become very hot and painful. Lightning is also available from causing friction in the air.
This sword also has an incantation written on it (the red power ball I mentioned earlier was fused with these words). These words only the master of this sword can chant. When said the true power of this sword will be shown allowing the fox to come out and merge with it's master covering the person in blue flame, giving the user wings. While in this form the user has incredible power that can burn even the air. He’s also able to create a friction causing lightning to come forth. Being able to use lightning attacks freely.
Also the wielder is able to freely control fire being able to shoot fire from his hands. The sword is then turned into a spear looking weapon used for close combat if the opponent can get that close.Some of you may remember that this form drains a lot of energy and after I would be able to move for 12hrs..ive trained to to fix those flaws and now it only excausts me a lot but im still able to move..a little and depending on my energy before the merge depends on the time spend in this form
Well this is all I have for now if I have to edit then I will im really sleep now..i stayed up all nite jus to finish this so if some of it sounds weird or something then let me know I will fix it or make it better I take constructive criticism very well so hit me with all you’ve got
Last edited by Flash_Step; 18th September 2010 at 11:42 PM.
Captain of Squad 5 Where Fire Rages on and Battles Are Won
So Join THE BLEACH CLUB
Only one correction on your German. When you say "Zeit für den Tod", you're using Töten like a verb and conjugating it. You shouldn't do that, just leave it as Töten. Also, the article isn't den, but rather das. While den is used to refer to the direct object in a sentence, it's only used when the article of the noun is der. In this case, it simply remains das. Just thought I'd point that out.
Oh yeah, and Tod means death. I think you were aiming for kill, which would be more grammatically correct.
Dauc is an idiot, truly. If the Acoranado (or however you spell it, I know it means armored and how it sounds -_-) kidnapped Kida, then they're not just going to kill her, so they've got time to execute the plan as it was intended. Also, by going after her, he's playing right into the enemy's hands, since they'll be expecting that. They have so much intel on us that they'd surely know our relationships with one another. Finally, if Dauc really cared about Kida, he'd believe in her strength and let her take care of it herself. He knows she could hand him his ass on an off-day, so why should he be worried?
My reactions were funny. ****. Double ****. I DON'T UNDERSTAND A THING YOU'RE SAYING, RAWR! Lol.
Bjork, Brick, Brak. Same difference to Blue xD
What happened to Zam? I'm waiting for him to go Bankai on Jenk's ass.
All in all, an excellent chapter, and I'll be waiting for the next one.
Spoiler:- Deicide XXI:
Great, now Aizen just turned into Mothra. Now Ichigo is going to turn into Godzilla and then they'll have a cliched monster movie battle that'll end with a Final Getsuga Tenshou. Bleah.
"ABANDON YOUR ARROGANCE, HUMAN!" Aizen is really taking the piss, now. Anybody notice that he has three hollow holes, not just one?
"So you will truly not allow it after all, Hogyoku. For me to be defeated by a mere human." Is it just me, or does it sound like Aizen wants to be defeated?
Ichigo had an epic moment. "Is that all you've got?" *breaks Aizen's grip* "Let's put an end to this, Aizen. I'm sick and tired of your logic." Aren't we all, Ichigo.
Final year of High School sucks, I can't wait to graduate.
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Originally Posted by minchan
