The Bleach Club...2.

[minchan]

I STILL HAS MY AWESOME BAKERY. RAWR.

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I just realized something: I don't think I've ever took the time to look at you guys' zanpakuto and profile information. I think I may have skimmed a couple of them...

I'm sorry! I'll do that as soon as I get the chance... I mean, people apparently have looked at mine, so... XD

[Ice Heart]

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Zanpaktou Name: Ōrorafenikkusu
Type: Fire and Ice

Zanpaktou Spirit: A phoenix that is white in color.(as the name states) The tribal designs protruding from the torso can intimidate very well. The tail feathers of the Ōrorafenikkusu trail behind as a gown would a ball dancer. When active the designs start to glow with the power of the Aurora Borealis

Release Command: Dance.

Shikai Details:

Transformation: The Zanpaktou ignites in a blazing white fire that takes the transformation of the Zanpaktou to Shikai.

Description: After the transformation the Zanpaktou takes the form of a scepter. This scepter has a long staff like shape. At the tip lies a crystal with elemental properties. The crystal is in the shape of a short blade that can be used for Close-Combat. The foe would think that this was the main blade of the staff, but it’s not. At the base of the crystal a ribbon flows. The ribbon is double in length of the staff. The ribbon looks like just a pretty decoration but it’s not. The ribbon is actually the main blade. The ribbon is sharp and can lash out like a steel whip. Half way down the staff lies a small indention where it is to be held. The main staff has designs that are tribal-like. These also glow with the power of Aurora Borealis when active.

Moves:

Frost Fire: The ribbon starts to spin in a cyclone motion. A blue fire spits out of the eye and frosts anything in contact.

Icy Incineration: An Ice shard is pelted toward the foe. If hit successfully it erupts in a fiery explosion.

Star Shoot: A energy ball form at the end of the Crystal (the source of the power) and shoots toward the foe. It leaves a trail like a comet would that is close to earth.

(Final Move) Aurora Heart: The heart of my character starts to shine. Then an actual Aurora forms in the sky. An energy filled heart the size of a fist starts to form in the space in front of my character. The heart is made of ice but burns with the energy of the Aurora. The hearts shoots with such power that it looks like a comet in motion. The heart somehow always hits the heart of the opponent stopping it cold. This Move takes tremendous spiritual energy and can actually harm the user to a great extent.

Special Ability: I didn’t want to put this in the move list because it is sort of an ability. I call it Frost Toxin. During close-combat the user has to use the crystal in blade form to fight (like I said in the description.) Well the staff obviously is not the best clos-combat weapon so it uses a toxin to give it an upper hand. When cut by the crystal the foe is then poisoned. This poison isn’t no ordinary toxin. It doesn’t go for the Nervous or Repertory Systems. It starts to freeze the opponent from the inside out. If it cuts a limb, if the user is not taken down in a period of time, has the potential to freeze the foe’s whole body.

Bankai Name: Ōrorafenikkusu

Bankai Details: The crystal has gotten larger and the ribbon has split into two pieces. The staff got longer and the detail has gotten more depth. With the new ribbon the staff can now have two main blades. A set of wings have appeared at the base of the STAFF. These are very sharp and can now aid in Close-Combat.

Added Moves:

Flare Feathers: the wings at the base of the staff become animated for the sake of this move. They release feathers that are sent slashing at the foe.

Ribbon Dance: The ribbons glow with a blue light then rapidly lash at the foe. At this point in the move the ribbons can seep the Frost Toxin.

Final Move remains Aurora Heart

Anything Else: Not really. ; )






 

[Eon Master]

^ Oh wow, you weren't kidding. Fire and Ice as one, nice combo. I especially like that the Zanpaktou's main weapon is the ribbon, very original and cool.

My only issue is with the name of the Bankai. It's one of those that doesn't change its name? I suppose it doesn't matter, but it might be better to change it slightly. Maybe Asayake Ōrorafenikkusu (Morning Light Aurora Pheonix)? Feel free to leave it as is though, I quite like it.


I'm going to try making a Fullbring again, this time with an ability that suits me more than any other.

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Fullbring Name: Eternity Key

Item: An old stylized brass key. It hangs from a string around my neck.

Activation description:

When I activate my Fullbring, the key glows gold and resonates with my spirit energy, seeming to throw off a shimmering distortion around me as it powers up. I release it, and it floats horizontally, and grows longer until it forms a three-foot long staff tipped with a 1.5 foot-long blade, a guran dao. The string becomes the tassel attached to the blade. The weapon is very lightweight, but still has enough heft to get a decent swing off with minimal effort.

Ability Details:

My ability is very complex, but has a simple concept: understanding. Any spiritual thing my blade touches is "unlocked", which happens in a flash of green light from my Fullbring and the object it's touching. After a few seconds, the blade flashes gold, and my eyes shine with the same glow for a moment, signifying that the knowledge has passed into my mind.

Being "unlocked" by my Fullbring means that I can percieve and comprehend every power, weakness, strength, dimension, technique, and limit of what my blade has touched (basically everything I could possibly want or need to know). This includes people. Things like clothes (that aren't spiritually enhanced or formed) don't matter, nor do walls and the like (unless they're made of reishi or pure spirit energy).

An interesting point is that I can also apply my Fullbring's abilities to myself if I cut myself (lightly of course) with the blade and bleed on it. This allows me to comprehend my own strengths and weaknesses to my opponent's, to come up with the perfect plan to best them.

While this might seem broken, this is the only thing my Fullbring can do. It has no offensive capabilities (other than being a blade), and no bodily enhancement. I have to rely on my other Fullbringer abilities to do anything in combat.

What it looks like:

Key:


Guran Dao:

 

Mhm. And if anybody has a better name, feel free to suggest it. I'm not big on my current one.

EDIT: Squad Page updated. Luke and Cyndagirl are now official members of Squad 7, and Kai's Bankai is now on-site.

[Ice Heart]

Thanks Eon. That actually is a very good suggestion. I like the Morning Light part. I will very highly consider it.Your key thing is cool the way it goes from a key to the Guran Dao.

[Lucario0708]

i dont know, maybe.... Obelisk Key?

uhh... Chrono Key? gah, I have no idea

[MasterCharizard15]

@All members

Please watch the one-liners, we require at least three sentences for posts not to be considered spam or one-liners.

Also very nice Zanpaktou...each are unique.

...I wonder...if maybe...to reduce clutter...Fan fics should be posted on the fan fiction part of this site, but be linked to here and vice versa?

Thoughts?

[theo_cupent42]

If I may clear a few things up, "hoshi" means "star", not "sky". Also, "bow" (the weapon that goes with arrow) is "yumi" in Japanese. "Yume" is dream and really, Star Dream is not the type of name you'd want to give to a zanpakutou (unless it shoots rainbows).
So "Sky Bow" would be "Sora no Yumi" and "Sky Sword/Blade" would be "Sora no Ken".
And another thing about your "Bakuhatsu Suru" attack. "Bakuhatsusuru" is actually one word so dividing it into two parts to call out while attacking results in something like this:
You: *Stretches bow* EX-!
You: *Releases bow, arrow zips towards opponent*
You: *Arrow strikes a head* PLODE! *Head dies*
Kinda silly don't you think?

Thanks for that - I did those translations ages ago, and I literally copied and pasted the description from elsewhere. I haven't looked at that for ages, so it's been fixed now. I'm well aware of the words そら and ゆみ, but I also know that hoshi can be used to mean sky, but genrally means star. Yume/yumi I have no excuse for, except mistranslation ^^.I had a lot of problems translating between め　and み when I began my studies. As for "explode" - I didn't realise that one. I was always taught it - by several teachers - that it was always two words. I'll keep that in mind! (technique name has been changed now, anyway - explode doesn't say much...)


@ eon mater: I thought about it, but in conjuction with its abilities alread, it's going overboard. Besides, I wanted a melee weapon for my bankai, and the design is already fairly similar - six circles/ six sides of the hexagon, the central circle, the long blades being similar to the bow limbs.

@ cell: the bankai passes through things, including itself, but it cannot pass through a soul (or anything related - that includes any other zanpakuto, another person's attacks, kido etc.) or anything made of steel. The fire simply acts like fire and burns stuff. if water touches my blade in any way (whether it touches the fire or not), the fire goes out.

[badmanjaro]

Thanks for that - I did those translations ages ago, and I literally copied and pasted the description from elsewhere. I haven't looked at that for ages, so it's been fixed now. I'm well aware of the words そら and ゆみ, but I also know that hoshi can be used to mean sky, but genrally means star. Yume/yumi I have no excuse for, except mistranslation ^^.I had a lot of problems translating between め　and み when I began my studies. As for "explode" - I didn't realise that one. I was always taught it - by several teachers - that it was always two words. I'll keep that in mind! (technique name has been changed now, anyway - explode doesn't say much...)


@ eon mater: I thought about it, but in conjuction with its abilities alread, it's going overboard. Besides, I wanted a melee weapon for my bankai, and the design is already fairly similar - six circles/ six sides of the hexagon, the central circle, the long blades being similar to the bow limbs.

@ cell: the bankai passes through things, including itself, but it cannot pass through a soul (or anything related - that includes any other zanpakuto, another person's attacks, kido etc.) or anything made of steel. The fire simply acts like fire and burns stuff. if water touches my blade in any way (whether it touches the fire or not), the fire goes out.

I like your bankai a lot btw theo! Very creative


Also! Can anyone recommend me a squad to join?

[fesbuk7474]

thanks for share good sharing

[Eon Master]

@BMJ: I thought you'd already joined Squad 6, but I'd recommend that. MC's cool, and he's a good mentor. He's been a partial mentor to... I think, three captains now? Me, Senny, and Blue.

Considering that you have fire-based abilities and MC's Zanpaktou is the most powerful Fire-type Zanpaktou in the club, it'd be a good fit.

EDIT: What the f*ck? To the above, OUT.

[Zameric]

Zam~
Well Tsuyokin is written with the characters for "strong" and "gold" So it's more like "strong gold" or "golden strength".
And the bankai name is Kokoro no Tsuyokin in which "Kokoro no" is "heart" in the possessive. (golden strength of the heart)

"force" was close though... XD
...You get half a cookie. =P

Ah, I saw strength in the list of possible translations, but didn't know which to pick.

O.e - two days away, and four pages further...I gotta come back more often!!!

curious: I'm interested in writing a fan-fic involving all the shinigami already in squads (i.e those whose names are posted into positions in the first post) is this a good idea? y/n.

I kind of forgot you joined.
I'll put you in my next note to Golde.

Sure! Practically all the fanfics in the club have used club members as characters.

I'll get some of the PMd data off of you.

What data are you talking about? xD

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Combat Stats:

Offense - 90

Defense - 70

Mobility - 85

Kido/Reiatsu - 90

Intelligence - 75

Physical Strength - 80

Overall : 490
 

I'll get to work on your BDC soon, buddy.

I just realized something: I don't think I've ever took the time to look at you guys' zanpakuto and profile information. I think I may have skimmed a couple of them...

I'm sorry! I'll do that as soon as I get the chance... I mean, people apparently have looked at mine, so... XD

Read mine first, I command you to.

Also! Can anyone recommend me a squad to join?

Well, based on your zanpakuto, you probably aren't suitable for squads 3 or 4.
You might fair better in offensive types, such as Squad 11, 5 or 6.
Others are relatively neutral between offense and defense; Squads 8, 9, or 10.
Squad 2 is kind of stealth (like in the series) and Squad 12 is R&D.

[Ice Heart]

Speaking of squads. I was wondering who would want me on there squad. I do still have to make a profile though. Could somone give me the form (if there is one) for my characters profile?

[Eon Master]

^ There isn't really a specific form, but you could always just copy the layout of somebody else's. It's what I did, iirc, my first profile was made ages ago >.>

And I'm sure you'd fit into just about any squad, you seem pretty well rounded. Though just from your Zanpaktou, Squad 3 would be a good fit. They're a more defensive squad, prefer long range attacks, and work best in combination with other Shinigami. Their Lieutenant spot is open, contrary to the first post, but you'll probably need to stick around a little longer to get in, Kida's had some bad luck with keeping members for extended periods of time sorry Kida.

[Jinchuuriki Hunter]

Zanpakuto - Howling force - Chikara o hauringu

Release Phase: (Ikkini daun shite, anata no emono o ubau) Swoop down and snatch your prey


Zanpakuto spirit: an adult sized bird with wings of electric and a body mixed with flames.

Non released form - a regular type of sword (the size of tensa zangetsu). Extremely light.

Released form - duel wielded dagger with elemental abilities. One dagger has an electric time and the other fire. As my sword are small in length they give me extreme speed and amazing evasion accapiablities.

Moves

Bright beams - Buraito wa, bīmu

I take a sword, electric or fire doesn't matter, and crush with my bare hands. If I crushed the electric one there's some typeof ball filled with that type of energy. If I crushed the fire the same happens just a different type. With the hand I didn't crush the sword with, the sword I am carrying will extend to the size of a regular sword (tensa zangetsu) and will change to the form i did not crush my hand with. Ex. Sword electric and the hand is fire. The sword will be mainly for defense while hand is my offense ability. With my hand I can shoot some type of cero(no I'm not a espada). I can shoot as much I can handle.

A. Spark of Destruction - Hakai no Hibana
Electric cero.
B. Cold Fire - Kōrudo-hi
Fire cero.



Final temptation - Saishū-tekina yūwaku
(last zanpakutos move)

I raise my hands into the air, my two swords take their separate form and duplicate themselves about 50 times and just fire at the opponent. Once the fire has started and misses, it will vanish and will be shot again. I will shoot as many as needed to my opponent. About my defense? No worries I will have two swords of the type of my choosing. But they have no form and don't have much power put into them as I have my elemental powers on my bullet type of thing.
Even while fighting in close combat I can control my swords from the sky. The bad part is while fighting closely with my opponent, the shots I fire from the sky may accidentally attack me as well.


Bankai - Heaven's Force - Ten no chikara
I get wings made out of fire and electric giving me flying capabilities.

Duo slashes - De~yuosurasshu

I raise my hands once again, this time I release my electric sword into the air manipulating the weather allowing me to bring thunderbolts from the sky. With my fire sword I stab it into the ground then it vanishes. Allowing me to bring fire blasts from the ground. The only problem about this is my defenses. I guess I can make walls of fire and lighting deflecting any incoming attack. When the attack is done the swords return to me.

A. Roaring Thunder - Narihibiku kaminari
Thunder
B. Burning Earth - Bāninguāsu
Fire


Swinging Doom - Unmei o yurasu
(final form)

This is my final attack FORM. Both of my swords disappear in my hands and become claws. You should know this by now lol, their made out of fire and electric. I can also shoot the type of ceros again but from this time from both of my hands. When they come close I can battle them with my claws. My reistsu can't hold the power I have for so long. If I am fighting with this form for to long I will end up electrocuting and burning myself.





Swing of Faith - Shinkō no suingu
(FINAL FINAL FINAL ATTACK)

I place all of my power into my blades causing them to both disintegrate, turning into dust. I blow the dust in my hand which magically turns into a double tipped spear. I then swing it into the air (Think about when Ulquiorra swings his sword to deflect one of Hollow Ichigos swings, just swinging it in the air),
As I'm swinging it, bolts of lightning from the sky and fire from the ground are just going inside the blade. I then run up to my opponent with one last blow. By doing so, this may seriously injure me as my powers are very dangerous a bit to much for my to handle.

Thank you Zameric with some name suggestions!

First of all, never use the conjunction "o" in a name, it connects the object and the verb in a sentence together and generally isn't used for anything like names.
That means your "Howling Force" would have to be translated as "Hoeri Chikara".
"Buraito wa beam" should be "Buraito Beam" or "Akarui Beam". "Wa" is another conjunction that should not be used in naming; it connects the subject to the predicate.
"Cold Fire" can be translated as "Hiyashibi" which sounds better than the engrish "Cold-hi".
The translation you used for "Duo-slashes" is complete engrish. Let's try calling it "Nirengiri".
"Swinging Doom" should be "Yurashi Unmei". Ah, I see the problem now. You put "Swinging Doom" in some kind of translator and they thought you meant "I am swinging doom around" or something to that effect.
"Swing of Faith" can be "Shinkou no Yurashi" or "Shinkou no Furi" or if you want to have a bit more fun and use "swing" as in the type you find in playgrounds, then "Shinkou no Buranko".

[Da14u.C]

hey guys..... GUESS WHO IS BACK!!!!

i just finished my last two exams today (friday 29th) and I am too tired to go out partying

how is everyone? I bet ya'll missed me =D

ooooh, we have newbies!!!!
Hi ice heart!
i wonder who else is new?
oooh, badmanjaro? and theo_cupent42 too?

HI!!! i am Da14u.C
i dunno when you joined but late welcome

by the way:



WOOOOOOOOW!!!!!
royal wedding was so romantic me and a whole bunch of friends woke up at 5am (our time) to watch it! Dieu protège le Prince Will et Catherine M || God save Prince Will and Catherine M

oh, and something bleachy - the new animé arc looks really addictive. I would like to see Mayuri in full power though, I dislike that he was grabbed so easily :|

[theo_cupent42]

First of all, never use the conjunction "o" in a name, it connects the object and the verb in a sentence together.

Actually, "o" isn't a conjunction - it's a particle which denotes the object in a sentence. It doesn't do any linking. It's the same with wa - it denotes the subject.

There's an important reason for this: you can rearrange a japanese sentence to emphasise certain points, except the verb, which must always be at the end (you knew that, right?). for example, the sentence "I go to school at 8:00" would generally be written as "Watashi wa hachi ji ni gakou he ikimasu" (literal translation of hiragana) (私は八時に学校へ行きます。). However, if you wanted to emphasise the point that it is 8:00 that you travel to school, you can rearrange the sentence to place hachi ji at the start - but it must keep particle ni, not wa. this is because it isn't the subject, "I" is. so, it would end up as "Hachi ji ni watashi wa gakoo e ikimasu." (八時に私は学校へ行きます。) get the idea?

Although I agree that in the naming plain form should be used and therefore o should be admitted, it doesn't do any linking. the linking particles (I know of & use regularly - there's probably more) are ya, to and no, with each one having its specific use.

[minchan]

Wow this has become a total Japanese Lesson thread... XD XD

Well umm I guess I did learn a couple of things... Or rather I refreshed memory of a couple things. XD So I can't REALLY complain... HAHA...

Oh yeahh I watched another episode on my way to *attempt* to catch up on the Bleach episodes. Just watched 300... Still far behind but not TOO bad... Not like I used to be, nearly a hundred episodes behind, and I caught up in a couple months~ That's like... 1/10 the time it took to air that much... Less than that, I think. (Unless my mental math is failing me, in which case, I need some sleep.)

Tomorrow (technically today since it's 1 am, but...) I'm going to the Sakura Matsuri. I saw a couple Bleach cosplayers there last year. I'm not gonna cosplay Momo or any Bleach character though, I never do this event. IMO, it'd be kinda odd to go to a hanami event as a shinigami. LOL Well, unless you're cosplaying Kyoraku... His jacket thingy would probably blend in. XD XD XD (Actually I *believe* it was a Kyoraku cosplayer I saw last year... I could be wrong though. It WAS a year ago, after all!)
Oh, and I may also go Sunday... Not 100% sure though.

[theo_cupent42]

Wow this has become a total Japanese Lesson thread... XD XD

hey, that's a pretty good idea - does it already exist???

[Jinchuuriki Hunter]

Actually, "o" isn't a conjunction - it's a particle which denotes the object in a sentence. It doesn't do any linking. It's the same with wa - it denotes the subject.

There's an important reason for this: you can rearrange a japanese sentence to emphasise certain points, except the verb, which must always be at the end (you knew that, right?). for example, the sentence "I go to school at 8:00" would generally be written as "Watashi wa hachi ji ni gakou he ikimasu" (literal translation of hiragana) (私は八時に学校へ行きます。). However, if you wanted to emphasise the point that it is 8:00 that you travel to school, you can rearrange the sentence to place hachi ji at the start - but it must keep particle ni, not wa. this is because it isn't the subject, "I" is. so, it would end up as "Hachi ji ni watashi wa gakoo e ikimasu." (八時に私は学校へ行きます。) get the idea?

Although I agree that in the naming plain form should be used and therefore o should be admitted, it doesn't do any linking. the linking particles (I know of & use regularly - there's probably more) are ya, to and no, with each one having its specific use.

Oh right, particle. So that's what they're called. I have a hard time trying to remember the names of whatever those things are called in sentences myself but I do know how to use them.
What are conjunctions again? I forget.

Oh, and a Japanese lesson thread existed for a short while but subsequently died out.

And just so this isn't off-topic, anybody want a zanpakutou with the ability to melt the blade into an all-cleansing white substance that can cleanse even common sense? We can call it Bleach.
The bankai transforms you into an all-white condom butterfly.

[theo_cupent42]

basically a conjunction joins two words, phrases or sentences together.

"and" "but" "or" "however" are all conjunctions.

japanese conjunctions include と、が、の、や。

On-topic part: I've started the fan-fic! it's going to be in the format of a diary entry, and it'll be from my perspective.

[PKMN Trainer Rex]

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Revised Release Command: "Strike and Burst". Old Command: "Yo!"

Revised Attacks:

Vacuum Boom (Shiku Bumu): Yo-yo extends to the end of the string, spins creating a vacuum (7ft radius) then explodes (8ft blast radius). If one yo-yo is used to do the initial attack the second can be used to hit the opponent if the opponent dodges, or as a secondary strike if it does it. If both yo-yos are used, doubles strength of vacuum and explosion.

Exploding Barrage (Bakuhatsu no Arashi): formally Rensa Bakuhatsu. Rapidly (as fast as I can) alternates yo-yos creating an onslaught/barrage of explosions, with every strike blast radius grows about 20 strikes recoil damages me.

Slingshot Impact (Suringushotto no eikyo): Yo-yos are shot into the ground/wrapped around an object (grappling hook fashion). Yo-yos fling/catapult me at high speeds in to enemy. I come flying in with a kick, punch, headbutt, or cannonball style (I can spin like a drill if I choose to.)
It can also function as a way for me to travel, in a Batman/Spider Man-esque fashion as long as my Zan can reach it.

Concussion Wave (Shindo-ha): Yo-yos are swung at full extension starting at my sides to my front causing a thunderous clap/massive forward moving concussion wave.

Seismic Charge (Jishin Tanto): Yo-yo are flung to either my sides or my front at full force into the ground, with my strongest explosion (depending on how much reitsu I put into it) causes a local seismic event. A 5ft wave of Earth radiates from the epicenter. Leaves my yo-yos stuck and exhausted from the energy usage.

 

Sorry it took so long, I had tests and quizzes up that area.

[Ice Heart]

I always wanted to learn Japanese...*sigh*
Well anyways I guess I'll stick around for a while, post my profile, and then pick a squad when the time is rite. But I'm finding it very difficult to find another profile anywere in this thread...Help please : )

[I like Pokemon (...)]

Welcome to the Club, New Nembers, I have no idea how many of you have joined :| ( Can someone list me the names XP )

I'm very slowly going through the club and getting all the names and zans. In the first 8 pages, there are some 7 souls who haven't been added to the list on the first page.

and im not sure which episodes are on which dvd, i just caught a glance of them, the cover images were masked ichigo and ulquiorra

Get that one.

...I wonder...if maybe...to reduce clutter...Fan fics should be posted on the fan fiction part of this site, but be linked to here and vice versa?

Well, what it was meant to be was that each author has his/her own library for his/her fanfics, and they update it. I don't know if everyone who has made a fanfic has done that, though >.>

What data are you talking about? xD

Stuff like new members, new zans, that kind of data. Because I'll probably miss some stuff as I go through the club.

hey guys..... GUESS WHO IS BACK!!!!

Welcome back.

ooooh, we have newbies!!!!

A lot of them.

And just so this isn't off-topic, anybody want a zanpakutou with the ability to melt the blade into an all-cleansing white substance that can cleanse even common sense? We can call it Bleach.
The bankai transforms you into an all-white condom butterfly.

ohyou

Anyway, I've read through all the zans, and they're very good. Nothing really specific that I need to point out, I guess. It also seems we have a sort of... third generation, almost, of newbies and dual-elemental zans. XD.

But I'm finding it very difficult to find another profile anywere in this thread...Help please : )

I should have a super-awesome profile made by Sunday. I'm going through the club and taking all the characteristics from each profile that you might want to have.

[Red Globe]

Hey! I'm finally posting my shikai!

Immah hold back on my actual bankai for a while, though. :U Thanks to zam, ant and blue for the help!

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Zanpaktou name:Dai Hachi no Fushigi (Eighth Wonder

Type: Electromagnetism

Zanpaktou Spirit: A small golden monkey, perched on my shoulder. He speaks in deep tones, and will not fall from my shoulder, no matter what. Only those whose intentions are true when their blade strikes mine can ever see him. He also has 8 tails.

Release Command: Attract, Dai Hachi no Fushigi!

Shikai Details:


Credits go to Clover Studios, because I'm incredibly unimaginative. T_T
Nah, I just thought this design looked awesome, and I wanted to use it. It's from the game Okami, for the PS2. I just cleaned the background. xD
The effect of my shikai is that, whatever it touches, becomes a pseudo-magnet, even if it's not a metallic object. Also, the sword itself feels incredibly light to me, but it'd feel insanely heavy to anyone else who tried to pick it up, because using it's powers allows me to constantly keep it off the ground by propelling it from the earth around me. This uses an extremely tiny amount of reiatsu, because it's a thing I do subconciously.
Anything the blade touches gets shocked. Once an object becomes a pseudo-magnet, I can manipulate it when I'm within a 2 metre radius.
Depending on how I change the strenght and the polarity of the object, I can push it away with a great deal of force or attract it.
Not only can I change the strenght and the polarity of the object(s) that is a pseudo magnet, I can also change the strenght and polarity of my own Zanpaktou.
So for example, if I went to attack an enemy with a big marble statue, I could just touch it then send it flying at the opponent, or if my sword clashes with the opponents zanpaktou, I could then send it flying or pin it to my blade while leaving the enemy open.
I can also use the molecules around my feet, making their polarities the same as mine, and use it to give myself a burst of speed - but constantly doing it when running expends a good deal of reiatsu.
Also, my hilt, which, as you might see is a wheel, does an eighth of a turn every second, thus making a full turn in 8 seconds. For every 10 full turns (or 80 seconds) I get one metre of range. So that's 9 metres in 10 minutes, and 17 metres in 20 minutes.

Needless to say, the stronger the pushes/pulls are, the more reiatsu they expend. I can only change the polarity and strenght of an object when I'm touching the object.
 

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Zanpaktou Name: Ōrorafenikkusu
Type: Fire and Ice

Zanpaktou Spirit: A phoenix that is white in color.(as the name states) The tribal designs protruding from the torso can intimidate very well. The tail feathers of the Ōrorafenikkusu trail behind as a gown would a ball dancer. When active the designs start to glow with the power of the Aurora Borealis

Release Command: Dance.

Shikai Details:

Transformation: The Zanpaktou ignites in a blazing white fire that takes the transformation of the Zanpaktou to Shikai.

Description: After the transformation the Zanpaktou takes the form of a scepter. This scepter has a long staff like shape. At the tip lies a crystal with elemental properties. The crystal is in the shape of a short blade that can be used for Close-Combat. The foe would think that this was the main blade of the staff, but it’s not. At the base of the crystal a ribbon flows. The ribbon is double in length of the staff. The ribbon looks like just a pretty decoration but it’s not. The ribbon is actually the main blade. The ribbon is sharp and can lash out like a steel whip. Half way down the staff lies a small indention where it is to be held. The main staff has designs that are tribal-like. These also glow with the power of Aurora Borealis when active.

Moves:

Frost Fire: The ribbon starts to spin in a cyclone motion. A blue fire spits out of the eye and frosts anything in contact.

Icy Incineration: An Ice shard is pelted toward the foe. If hit successfully it erupts in a fiery explosion.

Star Shoot: A energy ball form at the end of the Crystal (the source of the power) and shoots toward the foe. It leaves a trail like a comet would that is close to earth.

(Final Move) Aurora Heart: The heart of my character starts to shine. Then an actual Aurora forms in the sky. An energy filled heart the size of a fist starts to form in the space in front of my character. The heart is made of ice but burns with the energy of the Aurora. The hearts shoots with such power that it looks like a comet in motion. The heart somehow always hits the heart of the opponent stopping it cold. This Move takes tremendous spiritual energy and can actually harm the user to a great extent.

Special Ability: I didn’t want to put this in the move list because it is sort of an ability. I call it Frost Toxin. During close-combat the user has to use the crystal in blade form to fight (like I said in the description.) Well the staff obviously is not the best clos-combat weapon so it uses a toxin to give it an upper hand. When cut by the crystal the foe is then poisoned. This poison isn’t no ordinary toxin. It doesn’t go for the Nervous or Repertory Systems. It starts to freeze the opponent from the inside out. If it cuts a limb, if the user is not taken down in a period of time, has the potential to freeze the foe’s whole body.

Bankai Name: Ōrorafenikkusu

Bankai Details: The crystal has gotten larger and the ribbon has split into two pieces. The staff got longer and the detail has gotten more depth. With the new ribbon the staff can now have two main blades. A set of wings have appeared at the base of the STAFF. These are very sharp and can now aid in Close-Combat.

Added Moves:

Flare Feathers: the wings at the base of the staff become animated for the sake of this move. They release feathers that are sent slashing at the foe.

Ribbon Dance: The ribbons glow with a blue light then rapidly lash at the foe. At this point in the move the ribbons can seep the Frost Toxin.

Final Move remains Aurora Heart

Anything Else: Not really. ; )

 

Gotta love this Zanpaktou, and the Spear like weapon staff weapons ftw and the whole Aurora theme is beautiful - I like your equal balance of Ice and Fire two, always a good combo.

And I'm sure you'd fit into just about any squad, you seem pretty well rounded. Though just from your Zanpaktou, Squad 3 would be a good fit. They're a more defensive squad, prefer long range attacks, and work best in combination with other Shinigami. Their Lieutenant spot is open, contrary to the first post, but you'll probably need to stick around a little longer to get in, Kida's had some bad luck with keeping members for extended periods of time sorry Kida.

As he said, you'd definatly be welcome in my Squad with a Zanpaktou like yours, but for some reason my members never stay long forever alone

hey guys..... GUESS WHO IS BACK!!!!

Oh gods.

HI!!! i am Da14u.C
i dunno when you joined but late welcome

^ He's our local narcissistic moron =]

WOOOOOOOOW!!!!!
royal wedding was so romantic me and a whole bunch of friends woke up at 5am (our time) to watch it! Dieu protège le Prince Will et Catherine M || God save Prince Will and Catherine M

I'm English, and even I didn't get that worked up about it.

Hey! I'm finally posting my shikai!

Immah hold back on my actual bankai for a while, though. :U Thanks to zam, ant and blue for the help!

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Zanpaktou name:Dai Hachi no Fushigi (Eighth Wonder

Type: Electromagnetism

Zanpaktou Spirit: A small golden monkey, perched on my shoulder. He speaks in deep tones, and will not fall from my shoulder, no matter what. Only those whose intentions are true when their blade strikes mine can ever see him. He also has 8 tails.

Release Command: Attract, Dai Hachi no Fushigi!

Shikai Details:


Credits go to Clover Studios, because I'm incredibly unimaginative. T_T
Nah, I just thought this design looked awesome, and I wanted to use it. It's from the game Okami, for the PS2. I just cleaned the background. xD
The effect of my shikai is that, whatever it touches, becomes a pseudo-magnet, even if it's not a metallic object. Also, the sword itself feels incredibly light to me, but it'd feel insanely heavy to anyone else who tried to pick it up, because using it's powers allows me to constantly keep it off the ground by propelling it from the earth around me. This uses an extremely tiny amount of reiatsu, because it's a thing I do subconciously.
Anything the blade touches gets shocked. Once an object becomes a pseudo-magnet, I can manipulate it when I'm within a 2 metre radius.
Depending on how I change the strenght and the polarity of the object, I can push it away with a great deal of force or attract it.
Not only can I change the strenght and the polarity of the object(s) that is a pseudo magnet, I can also change the strenght and polarity of my own Zanpaktou.
So for example, if I went to attack an enemy with a big marble statue, I could just touch it then send it flying at the opponent, or if my sword clashes with the opponents zanpaktou, I could then send it flying or pin it to my blade while leaving the enemy open.
I can also use the molecules around my feet, making their polarities the same as mine, and use it to give myself a burst of speed - but constantly doing it when running expends a good deal of reiatsu.
Also, my hilt, which, as you might see is a wheel, does an eighth of a turn every second, thus making a full turn in 8 seconds. For every 10 full turns (or 80 seconds) I get one metre of range. So that's 9 metres in 10 minutes, and 17 metres in 20 minutes.

Needless to say, the stronger the pushes/pulls are, the more reiatsu they expend. I can only change the polarity and strenght of an object when I'm touching the object.
 

Finally! Oooh, you went with Magnetism in the end then, huh?
I KNEW I recognised that sword from somewhere [never actually got that one in the game] I always used the seven pronged sword from Demon Lord Ninetails.