don't worry you're included.
Spoiler:- your place in the fic:
you die in the first chapter. lol
@everyone who asked what i would do with all those numbers- i've called 3 already. the girls were nice. except one a dude answered and asked why i was calling his girlfriend. scared the hell outta me. as for their reasoning in leaving their numbers it was probably because they felt a bit sorry for me hobbling along the sidewalks of Chicago. i doubt it was, as Da.C put it "exuding badboy".
i don't reall look like the kind of guy who beat the crap out of people. mainly because i live how my dad taught me: only kick someone's *** if they break a pool cue or beer bottle over your head.
zanpakuto theme song
Survive by Rise Against. for one it talks about finding things in white flames. and two Oto and i would do anything to survive.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
If your Zanpaktou had its own theme song, what would it be?
I haven't listened to the radio for months...um...let's see...
The Marriage of Figaro - Overture.
...honestly, I prefer classical to whatever people listen to now...
Originally Posted by ILP
You.... And your condoms.
You got something against condoms?
@All the comments about my phone memory: I'm not entirely sure how much memory my phone has, but it seems pretty low since I have to periodically delete all my text messages just to make room for more...Yea, everyone does that but I seem to do it more often. Also, it used to be my mom's phone until she bought a new one and decided to just hand it down to me so it's got a lot of my mom's contacts. I haven't changed my handphone for years now...
Yes, my mom is more tech savvy than me.
Spoiler:- Manga:
Cool, Gin's bankai has dances.
I'm slightly interested in seeing how Matsumoto and Gin react to each other. Their relationship is one that actually makes me think...
The rest of the chapter is fairly uninteresting by comparison. Although Yoruichi's feet deserve special mention...
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Well, I thought this chapter was kind of disappointing. There wasn't much that happened. At least we know where Yoruichi got her outfit. So I guess it's not her shikai. Yoruichi and Kisuke had a funny argument though. I love theirs, and Isshin's, facial expressions. Gin was being pretty frank there, kind of not like him. Looks like Rangiku is going to try to convince Gin to come back to SS or something.
Please check out my 4th & 5th gen trade thread posts.
Am I the only one thinking that Rangiku might try to kill Gin? Or at least fight with him? She already knows that she can't change his mind. That's why she stood in his way and challenged him when he attacked Momo way back in the Soul Society Arc. She also took his back and had her sword at his throat at the Sokyoku, a little later in the SS Arc. I think she won't try to stop him from being under Aizen, because she knows it won't do anything.
Gin's quote about "everything's ****ed" stirrs a bit of doubt for me, but I still don't think so.
from what i gather seeing MC15's zanpaktou and Arceus03's, i figured they were the release now ask questions later type
Heh, you got that right! XD
I prefer releasing straightaway when battle commences. :P
Originally Posted by kusari
Casts are good too. Whenever i'd walk around (well hobble) with my cast on girls would walk up and ask to sign my cast on the street. after a week i started carrying around every color of sharpie availible. i counted (just now) 24 names. 19 from people i don't know. 13 were girls. 11 have phone numbers
Heheheh. This whole affair of signing on casts made me remember Rowley... From the Diary of a Wimpy Kid. :P
Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter
I need something Bleach in this post...
Spoiler:- Manga Spoiler:
Aizen talks a lot for a guy with no mouth...a leaking condom is not a good condom...
XD rofl
If your Zanpaktou had its own theme song, what would it be?
I prefer instru-mental music when it comes to this, so
Tomorrow is a Holiday is one of my favourite tracks.. It's kinda.. lively and lovely at the same time.
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
meh, its called being psychic. Using what you have to see into the future.
Hmmm. Looking into the future is not exactly a happy thing.... You should see this.
Promoting Jin's blog
Originally Posted by Eon Master
True, but if he releases against a Lighting type, he's screwed.
Heheh, if I'm against a lightning-type user, I'd still release it early. :P I can easily morph the water back into the sword.
Originally Posted by kusari
don't worry you're included.
Spoiler:- your place in the fic:
you die in the first chapter. lol
XDDDDD
Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter
You got something against condoms?
Spoiler:- Manga:
The rest of the chapter is fairly uninteresting by comparison. Although Yoruichi's feet deserve special mention...
Maybe he has.... Mmmmm...
lol, her feet. "Yeah, my legs." XDDD that was SUPER EPIC. With their expressions as well.
Originally Posted by Eon Master
Spoiler:- Manga 404:
That's why she stood in his way and challenged him when he attacked Momo way back in the Soul Society Arc.
She stood in his way? When? o.o
She also took his back and had her sword at his throat at the Sokyoku, a little later in the SS Arc. I think she won't try to stop him from being under Aizen, because she knows it won't do anything.
Yeah, but remember the episode after the incident? She was reminiscing what Gin had said to her, "Now if you could have held on to me a bit longer..."
Bold in comments. 8D
Ahh, anime. 8DD
Spoiler:
That was another great episode and we're _one_ step closer to FKT woo.
Heheheh. Senny said that someone on youtube said that 'I don't want to sub 'Kurosaki-kun'.' I can see that now. Orihime basically said thath word a zillion time in this episode. XD
Oh yeah. They toned down Ishida's arm getting cut down. Now it's only a severed stump of limp instead of blood dripping off from a torn arm. Hmm.. I guess it's inappropriate for kids, yeah...
We're seeing Rudobone's fight soon~ Eay~ Then Yammy will release~ Then back to FKT~~~~ ^^
Ahahahah. I can't believe Ulquiorra held Gin's eyes like that FOR A WEEK. XDD
I remember Gin's quote from last week: "You're that desperate huh?"
Last edited by arceus03; 21st May 2010 at 4:40 PM.
Silence.
The sky was a mix of grey and black, lightning danced through the sky as a downpour of rain fell on the Soul Society. Some run nad hide from this kind of weather, others bathe in its simple beauty, lighting danced across the sky as many Soul Reapers stood and watched in horror as the pillars of the Soul Society, the ones who lead them to victory many times before and protected them from certain demise, all bound by chains to a pole along with their zanpaktou manifested. The rain poured down harder and harder, thunder roared menacingly, as the Soul reapers screamed out in terror and hopelessness only being able to watch the horrible reality that even their own nightmare couldn't compare with. The enemy was covered by a simple black cloak and held a staff, his body seemed slender and meek while his staff seemed deadly with spike around the tip of it, a jewel glowing violently red at its center. The thunderstorm intense dance along with the overwhelming feeling of helplessness made this one of the darkest days in Soul Society history.
"Finally, after a centuary of improsionment, Anon, the true ruler of the Soul Society and all of existence shall be free to rule once more." the slender man yelled in an over excited fashion.
The Captain and Lieutenant, along with their zanpaktou spirits, had their spiritual power drainned and lifeforce slowly taken away, every breathe was filled with pain, yet the rain falling on their skin seemed to soothing.
"It look like its time for my last resort.." The Squad Six Captain said to the others.
"YOU"LL DIE!" His Lieuteant screamed.
"Its our only option, besides If it came down too it, I sacrifice myself to save you all with hestiation". He smirked and began to mentally signal his Zanpaktou for a final attack.
"As your Captain Commander, I forbid you from doing that!" The Captain General said in anger.
"I won't let you die!" The Squad 8 Captain said, unable to see the Squad Six captain due to being on the opposite side of the pole.
"SHUT UP AND LET THE MORON DO IT!" The 10th Captain yelled at everyone.
"Ant, Plan Supernova is a go." The 6th Captain said the 12th Captain.
The 12th Captain's body wasn't all shinigami, he experiment on himself and altered his body for maximum effect in battle and in life in general. He put his Index finger to his thumb and kept them pressed together for five seconds, a corresive acid then started to emit from his pours along with his sweat. the acid sweat melted parts of the chains, the 6th Captain managed to escape and in one swift motion, break the rest of the chains.
"Why didn't you two do that as soon as we got caught?" The 4th captain inquired.
"It takes awhile for the acid to be corresive enough..." The 12th captain said in a monotone voice.
"Escape is impossible! Anon will be here shortly, I stole your powerful Zanpaktou spirits so you have no hope left, just give up!" the slender man yelled.
"Tch, who do you are talking too? Anon , yourself and army will all bare witness the reason why we are called captains." The Captain with a royal slevees said.
"...and lieutenants." said the Lieuteanats who stood behind their captains.
A dark a portal tore through the thundering sky, a gaint purple demonic hand with long black nails reached out of it.
"Anon, the Demon child of destruction!" The Man yelled in awe.
"How fitting, The Captain of destruction fighting against the demon of destruction, lets see who is more destructive! BANKAI!" the 6th challenged.
"Foolish shinigami! You can't possoibly challenge Anon! you''l be crushed like the insect that you are!"
"NO!" A Majority of captains and Lieuteanats yelled...
"Go for it!" the 10th captain encouraged.
"Kickass old man" The 7th Squad Lieutenant yelled out.
The 6th capatin absorbed all the power and heat he could from everything and person around him, until he glowed a violent red he charged into the dark portal and caused an explosion.
The rain stopped and the stormed started to clear, the man satred in horror , wondering if Anon was actually killed.
"Is it over?" the 13th captain asked anyone in general.
The demonic hand reappaered bleeding , blue blood poured from the sky and a brillant ball of black enery was seen to gathering from the center of it palm.
"YES! ANON, BRING OF THE END, KILL THEM ALL NOW!" the man screamed in joy.
The Captains actiavted their bankai s along with lieuteanat who could and prepared a final attack.
"If this fails, activate operation 00179." The 12th capatin relayed to his assaiants in his lab/Squad.
The attacks calshed causing an awe inspiring explosion, smoked covered the sky and the rain had stopped.
"Anon-" Before the man could finnish, the demon hand apapered again and stabbed a bulding, turning it into ash.
"OPERATION IS A GO!" The Captin of the 12th Squad yelled.
A brillant light covered the entire soul society, when it faded, the demon was gone along with the Captains and lieutenats.
"What just happened!?!" Anon cried out in confusion.
Well....what do ya think?
Last edited by MasterCharizard15; 21st May 2010 at 9:55 PM.
I need Character bio's for my story.. Since im yah know, Making a Club Fanfic, Any character bio's you send would be needed highly appreciated.
Originally Posted by ILP
We're Mad.
Our 1st Squad Captain has an insane sweet tooth
Our 2nd Squad Captain is some super-ninja
Our 3rd Squad Captain is part wolf
Our 4th Squad Captain bakes cookies and cuts up anyone who makes him mad
Our 5th Squad Captain is some party-crazy army man
Our 6th Squad Captain is calm, prideful and pervy
Our 7th Squad Captain seems to be, barely, the only sane one
Our 8th Squad Captain is missing
Our 9th Squad Captain is a shy, respectful, boring and pervy
Our 10th Squad Captain hates some of our OWN captains
Our 11th Squad Captain is a sadistic maniac
Our 12th Squad Captain is an insane nerd
Our 13th Squad Captain is sleeping
You don't have to, y'know. Especially since I won't be able to listen to it.
Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter
You got something against condoms?
Spoiler:- Manga:
Cool, Gin's bankai has dances.
I'm slightly interested in seeing how Matsumoto and Gin react to each other. Their relationship is one that actually makes me think...
The rest of the chapter is fairly uninteresting by comparison. Although Yoruichi's feet deserve special mention...
The 5 main things in your post: condoms, dances, Matsumoto, relationship, and Yoruichi's feet.
MC's fic: I fixed up some spelling and grammar. It won't be perfect, but the most obvious ones (to me, anyway) will be fixed.
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
Spoiler:- Chapter One: Revenge and Rebirth.:
Silence.
The sky was a mix of grey and black, lightning danced through the sky as a downpour of rain fell on the Soul Society. Some ran and hid from this kind of weather, others bathe in its simple beauty. Lighting flashed across the sky as many Soul Reapers stood and watched in horror as the pillars of the Soul Society, the ones who lead them to victory many times before and protected them from certain demise, were all bounded by chains to a pole along with their Zanpaktous in their manifested forms.
The rain poured down harder and harder, thunder roared menacingly, as the Soul reapers screamed out in terror and hopelessness only being able to watch the horrible reality that even their own nightmares couldn't compare to. The enemy was covered by a simple black cloak and held a staff, his body seemed slender and meek while his staff seemed deadly with spike around the tip of it, a jewel glowing violently red at its center. The thunderstorm was intense, and seemed to dance along with the overwhelming feeling of helplessness made on one of the darkest days in Soul Society's history.
"Finally, after a century of imprisonment, Anon, the true ruler of the Soul Society and all of existence, shall be free to rule once more!" The slender man yelled in an over excited fashion.
The Captain and Lieutenant, along with their zanpaktou spirits, had their spiritual power drained and lifeforce slowly taken away, every breathe was filled with pain, yet the rain falling on their skin seemed to be soothing.
"It look like it's time for my last resort..." The Sixth Squad Captain said to the others.
"YOU'LL DIE!" His Lieuteant screamed.
"Its our only option, besides if it came down to it, I'd sacrifice myself to save you all without hestiation". He smirked and began to mentally signal his Zanpaktou for a final attack.
"As your Captain Commander, I forbid you from doing that!" The Captain General said in anger.
"I won't let you die!" The Eighth Squad Captain said, unable to see the Sixth Squad Captain due to being on the opposite side of the pole.
"SHUT UP AND LET THE MORON DO IT!" The Tenth Squad Captain yelled at everyone.
"Ant, Plan Supernova is a go." The Sixth Squad Captain said the Twelfth Squad Captain.
The Twelfth Squad Captain's body wasn't all Shinigami: he experiment on himself and altered his body for maximum effect in battle and in life in general. He put his index finger to his thumb and kept them pressed together for five seconds, a corrosive acid then started to emit from his pours along with his sweat. The acid sweat melted parts of the chains, the Sixth Squad Captain managed to escape and in one swift motion, break the rest of the chains.
"Why didn't you two do that as soon as we got caught?" The Forth Squad Captain inquired.
"It takes awhile for the acid to be corrosive enough..." The Twelfth Squad Captain said in a monotonous voice.
"Escape is impossible! Anon will be here shortly, I stole your powerful Zanpaktou spirits so you have no hope left, just give up!" The slender man yelled.
"Tch, who do you think you are talking to? Anon, yourself, and your army will all bare witness to the reason why we are called Captains." The Captain with a royal sleeves said.
"...and Lieutenants!" Said the Lieuteanats who stood behind their captains.
A dark a portal tore through the thundering sky, a gaint purple demonic hand with long black nails reached out of it.
"Anon, the Demon Child of Destruction!" The Man yelled in awe.
"How fitting, the Captain of destruction fighting against the demon of destruction. Let's see who is more destructive! BANKAI!" The Sixth Squad Captain challenged.
"Foolish Shinigami! You can't possibly challenge Anon! You''ll be crushed like the insect that you are!"
"NO!" A majority of Captains and Lieutenants yelled.
"Go for it!" The Tenth Squad Captain encouraged.
"Kickass, old man!" The Seventh Squad Lieutenant yelled out.
The Sixth Squad Captain absorbed all the power and heat he could from everything and every person around him, until he glowed a violent red. He charged into the dark portal and caused an explosion.
The rain stopped and the stormed started to clear. The man stared in horror, wondering if Anon was actually killed.
"Is it over?" The Thirteenth Squad Captain asked, not to anyone in general.
The demonic hand reappeared, bleeding blue blood. It poured from the sky and a brillant ball of black energy was seen to gathering from the center of it palm.
"YES! ANON, BRINGER OF THE END, KILL THEM ALL NOW!" The man screamed in joy.
The Captains activated their Bankais along with the Lieutenants who could, too, and prepared a final attack.
"If this fails, activate operation 00179." The Twelfth Squad Captain relayed to his assistants in his lab/squad.
The attacks clashed causing an awe inspiring explosion, smoked covered the sky and the rain had stopped.
"Anon-" Before the man could finish, the demon hand appeared again and stabbed a building, turning it into ash.
"OPERATION IS A GO!" The Twelfth Squad Captain yelled.
A brillant light covered the entirety of Soul Society. When it faded, the demon was gone, along with the Captains and Lieutenants.
"What just happened!?" Anon cried out in confusion.
Well....what do ya think?
Fixed most of the spelling and stuff. And odd things I felt like changing (like when you referenced the Captains. Why not just use their names?).
I like the descriptions at the beginning of the chapter. Really set the mood.
So all of the Zanpakutou spirits were taking and chained to a pillar? And all of the Shinigami, too? I'd like to see how you'd explain that.
I quite like the use of corrosive to release the Captains. Though in truth, I'd probably try and release Golde first, what with him being the Captain Commander. Though if you can throw in a "he released the closest person to him, that being the Sixth Squad Captain." Or something. Which reminds me, why no names?
I like that I had a numbered plan. That seems like me.
One thing, too. Anon is the giant hand/monster thing right? Then how did it ask "What just happened?!"? I'm somewhat confused.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
You don't have to, y'know. Especially since I won't be able to listen to it.
The 5 main things in your post: condoms, dances, Matsumoto, relationship, and Yoruichi's feet.
MC's fic: I fixed up some spelling and grammar. It won't be perfect, but the most obvious ones (to me, anyway) will be fixed. Thanks.
Fixed most of the spelling and stuff. And odd things I felt like changing (like when you referenced the Captains. Why not just use their names?). The names will be explained later on...
I like the descriptions at the beginning of the chapter. Really set the mood. Thank you very much...
So all of the Zanpakutou spirits were taking and chained to a pillar? And all of the Shinigami, too? I'd like to see how you'd explain that. Later Chapters
I quite like the use of corrosive to release the Captains. Though in truth, I'd probably try and release Golde first, what with him being the Captain Commander. Though if you can throw in a "he released the closest person to him, that being the Sixth Squad Captain." Or something. Which reminds me, why no names?
[B]Actually, for Supernova to work,you HAD to free me so...[B]
I like that I had a numbered plan. That seems like me.
One thing, too. Anon is the giant hand/monster thing right? Then how did it ask "What just happened?!"? I'm somewhat confused. Next Chapter...
To Everyone: The Squad pages have links to bios...
Apparently everyone likes my writing style but few people care enoguh to comment about my actual ideas sabotages Dac's writing/typign implements with ice so I'm goin' for a crossover this time
Its...midnight as I type so I am only gonna describe fanfic ideas and say that the last manga chapter was boring (Admittedly I'm usually to lazy to make sure I understand what goes on in fighting in the Manga anyways)
My Older sis also graduated from UM yesterday. I left the house at 5 and got home at 12. I decidedly hate speeches.
My first Idea is a dimension travel at present time Earth. Crossover'd with Katekyou Hitman Reborn and will thus have a ridiculous amount of "WTF we outnumber them and we are ghosts yet we are being evenly matched?" Fights. It /does/ end up going somewhere of course.
Second idea is dimensional travel (Again) with 2500 Earth. Crossover'd with Super Robot Taisen Orginal Generation and will thus take place in space as much as earth and have more (*coughboringcough*) plot as the shinigami find themselves beign replaced and outpowered by technology (Giant mech ftw)..but what do Dac and Ant have to say about that?
Opinions/recomendations/votes/criticism (-holds daggars-)/yelling to go back to pure bleach (-moar daggars-) (somewhat) accepted
Last edited by rotrum; 22nd May 2010 at 5:16 AM.
Originally Posted by Northern Lights
I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>
The 5 main things in your post: condoms, dances, Matsumoto, relationship, and Yoruichi's feet.
Touche. Honestly though, I'm probably more interested in Gin's sword than condoTHE OTHER SWORD!!
Spoiler:- Manga:
Benihime and whatever Yoruichi's zanpakutou is have yet to be released as well. Hopefully, they won't disappoint.
Check here for my Gijinka Project. (Alright, so I'm not good with advertising, is that such a big problem?)
Check here for my comic series, Fettuccine and Friends. (Well, at least I'm trying to advertise.)
@MC, so I guess everything will be revealed eventually?
Originally Posted by rotrum
My Older sis also graduated from UM yesterday. I left the house at 5 and got home at 12. I decidedly hate speeches.
Congrats on your sister graduating. Also, speeches are very useful for playing DS, if you can do it sneakily enough.
Originally Posted by rotrum
My first Idea is a dimension travel at present time Earth. Crossover'd with Katekyou Hitman Reborn and will thus have a ridiculous amount of "WTF we outnumber them and we are ghosts yet we are being evenly matched?" Fights. It /does/ end up going somewhere of course.
Right off the bat, I have to mention that I don't watch/read Katekyou, which means that you're going to have to be very good with explaining the characters, and the universe, and things like that.
Originally Posted by rotrum
Second idea is dimensional travel (Again) with 2500 Earth. Crossover'd with Super Robot Taisen Orginal Generation and will thus take place in space as much as earth and have more (*coughboringcough*) plot as the shinigami find themselves beign replaced and outpowered by technology (Giant mech ftw)
Also, I have to mention that I don't watch/read SRTOG, which means that you're going to have to be very good with explaining the characters, and the universe, and things like that. Though with there being giant mechas and stuff, I'm sure that my character will enjoy being there.
Originally Posted by rotrum
..but what do Dac and Ant have to say about that?
Well, with the whole "travelling through shows", it seems as though I'll be involved quite a bit. Off of the top of my head, I can't really think of circumstances that will allow "show travelling", though if you can/have thought of some ways, PM me and we'll talk, because if it doesn't seem like it'll work, and it's put in the fic, you can be sure I'll be on your case about it.
Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter
Touche. Honestly though, I'm probably more interested in Gin's sword than condoTHE OTHER SWORD!!
Spoiler:- Manga:
Benihime and whatever Yoruichi's zanpakutou is have yet to be released as well. Hopefully, they won't disappoint.
Spoiler:
Not to Isshin Zanpakutou. From what I remember, that hasn't yet been released. Not to mention their Bankais, too. I don't really like that Aizen is in his maxed out power and he's fighting 3 people... who haven't released. No wonder he's pretty much thrashing them.
Bah, too much writing. I think I'll stick to forwarding the same character profile to everyone.
Also, it seems like everyone's using the 12th Squad for all of the "abnormal" things (Rotrum's show jumping, Blue and his Vaizard powers, NL and her canine-like things...)
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
^that's because Division 12 IS the science and research division - it's expected that any abnormalities would originate from there.
Spoiler:- Begining of the Inverted Souls Arc:
Seireitei was filled with the ever lasting buzzing and bustling of it’s busy inhabitants, never did a day go by when the place was ever truly silent; prospective shinigami students studied and practiced in the academy grounds, seated and unseated officers a like trained and refined techniques and attacks in their Division training grounds, and the captains, well the captains … if they were around that is … were bored stiff.
One Captain was busy observing soul society goings-on as she flash stepped her way over to 8th Division. She wasn’t in any particular rush; she just liked visiting, even if it had been empty for some time now, it’s Captain had taken a few select students and left for the edges of Rukongai several weeks ago. He still had not returned. She missed him.
She stopped at his office door, sliding opening the divider to see the usual homely clutter he loved to leave around; it was quite a comforting site, until she remembered that it’s usual occupier wasn’t around to share the odd in-joke or marvel at the increasing stupidity of some academy students, as they attempted, and failed, to perform techniques way beyond their academic level. She sighed. She had been doing that a lot lately.
One of her lupine blue ears twitched as she heard someone approaching, but she didn’t reach for her Zanpaktou, she knew who it was.
“Well, Hello there, Arceus,” she turned to see Arceus the Third leaning against the wooden railing lining the walkway next to Senbonzakura’s office, for he was the currently absent Captain of 8th Division.
“Nice to see you too, Kida, your reiatsu seemed slightly strained, you’re not becoming ill or anything are you?”, he inquired, that’s Arceus, as Captain of 4th it was his duty to make sure fellow Shinigami were a picture of health, however, this seemed to come naturally to him.
“Hmm? No, no not at all, but thanks for asking,” she fell silent again, and for the infinite time, she sighed.
Arceus looked knowingly at her, he may look young, but he was decidedly wise at times, but then again a complete fruit cake at others.
“He’ll come back you know”
Kida jumped, completely off in her own little world, returning to Soul Society with a grumble.
“How is it that every time I sigh, someone goes, ‘he’ll come back’?” Kida asked exasperated.
“You two just seemed like such good buddies, is all, it’s obvious you miss him, as normal people do when a friend goes away for such a long time, have faith in him, although…”
Arceus had that look in his eyes which Kida associated with an impending awkward conversation, for everyone involved.
“You two did seem rather close, very close actually…”
She held her breath and braced herself for the inevitable comment about to hurtle her way.
“Was there anything going on between you tw-“
“No.”
“I only meant that you seem far more depr-“
“NO!”
“Alright, alright, but if I didn’t ask, others would.”
Arceus became his serene and collected self once again, while Kida tried to erase that particular conversation out of her brain, as another in-joke between herself and Senny, her nickname for him, began replaying in her mind. Arceus then started grinning, alarm bells went off inside Kida’s head.
“Ok, so if not him, how about that Royal guy, Narcisse Dauc, you hang around him so much you practically live at his place.”
“I’m leaving now, Arceus,” Kida said smirking as she briskly started walking away.
“What? Not even going to deny it either?” he shouted after her, Kida responded by shoving her hands over her ears.
“Well, I’d go visit him if I were you, he seems bored.”
-----------------
Why? Why does everyone have to do that? Admittedly I am very close to both of them, but I am not THAT close. Or am I? Maybe I should back off a little.
It was at this point she found herself standing right outside Dauc’s door.
“Huh?” Kida looked around, she had seemingly walked subconsciously over to Dauc’s province automatically. She inwardly scowled, staring down at her feet, “traitors.”
“Ya’ know, talking to yourself isn’t a good sign,” said a voice above her.
She looked up into that arrogant face of Narcisse Dauc, current head of a very old noble family, situated to the East of Seireitei, and Ex-Captain of 12th Division.
“Really? The amount you do I’m surprised your mirror hasn’t died of boredom,” she retorted.
“Oooh, someone’s in a bad mood,” Dauc said holding his hands out in front of him as a sign of peace.
Kida sighed. Again.
“Sorry, I’ve not been feeling all that great today.”
“Really? Hadn’t noticed, I just thought you were always this cranky.”
She deadpanned his chest, it was at her eyelevel and therefore the easiest part of him to try and glare a hole through.
“Come on, Bluey, inside you can sit down and chat,” he tugged on one of her ears, a dangerous move for anyone who didn’t know her, but he always got away with it, “so, why the doom and gloom, oh don’t tell me, Cap’n Senny still isn’t back, right?”
Kida’s shoulders slumped dejectedly.
Point to me, Dauc thought, smiling, he made his way to his favourite chair, sinking back into it, “Come on Kida, you know him, he’ll come back, he’s a strong captain, what could possibly be so dangerous out there anyway,” he crossed his legs and made a vague hand gesture towards the window, which showed his private gardens and the scenery of Soul Society beyond.
“Famous last words, and I don’t know, It’s just … promise you won’t tell anyone?” she asked quietly, this was serious.
“I sincerely Promise,” holding three fingers up to oath, smile still plastered on his face
“I think he’s dead.”
Dauc’s smile remained for a few seconds while he registered this new information.
“WHA?!” his jaw nearly hit the floor as he gaped at her, “oi, that’s a serious thing to say.”
“I know, that’s why I wanted you to promise not to tell anyone. Every time I wake up I just get this cold dread, and when I sit down and attempt to locate him, try as I might I can’t find his reiatsu anywhere, he wouldn’t have ventured that far out for me not to sense him, would he?” she sounded genuinely worried, so Dauc took this seriously.
“Kida, he’s a captain, he can take care of himself, and I hate to sound like a git here, but if he has been killed, then whatever did it is probably our next biggest threat, we don’t have time to worry about a missing Captain.”
“So you admit that he’s now considered missing?” Kida pointed out.
He heaved a huge sigh, “Granted, he’s been away longer than the higher ups expected, even the Sotaicho is getting a bit antsy, but he’s just concerned when he’ll come back, he’s not worried for his safety at all, he can take care of himself,” he pronounced the last six words slowly.
Kida looked liked she was going to argue, but dropped it. Abruptly, she stood up and stretched, ears pricked up, tail flexing behind her, then relaxed smiling again.
“Thanks Dauc, guess I just needed to talk to someone, Arceus has a funny way of telling you things,” she grinned, then she pulled a face as if she just remembered something important, “hey, as we’re a Captain short, why don’t you re-join the 13 Division Guards, you’re Captain Level, we could do with some extra skill around.”
“There isn’t a Captain vacancy,” Dauc said, chin in palm, elbow resting on knee as he leaned forward in his chair.
“There’s a Lieutenant space in my Division,” she said quietly.
Dauc smirked, “surely not, was that an invitation?”
The smugness in his voice made Kida start as she realised what she had just said, “forget it,” she amended quickly, making her way over to the door, opening it to step outside and leave.
Dauc smug grin widened as he dashed over to the door and grabbed her arm, leaning over her shoulder.
“No, seriously, can you not survive without me that much?”
Dauc’s four letter expletive of pain could be heard on the other side of Seireitei as Kida’s fist made contact with his nose.
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Silently fuming on 10th Division barracks roof, Kida stared out over the terracotta rooftops wondering what it was like to be rain. She felt a sudden increase in reiatsu behind her and turned round.
Rotrum was standing there, looking bored, like every other Captain.
“I felt a rather oppressive reiatsu above my office and thought I should check it out, should of known it was the only currently present female Captain around, Nancy still driving you crazy?” he asked a picture of innocence, ‘Nancy’ being Kida’s nickname for Dauc when she was angry, “only I feel some of the more innocent Division member’s ears will be burning for some time.”
“I punched him in the face,” she replied simply.
Rotrum blinked, and then dropped to his hands and knees, banging his hand against the roof tiles howling with laughter. Kida raised an eyebrow, what was wrong with everyone today? Or maybe they were always like this and she was just different? Philosophy was never her forte.
“Oh dear, give him my deepest condolences next time you see him won’t you?” Rotrum said, straightening up again.
“Don’t hurt yourself, I know you hate him”
“Speaking of hate, or a lack of there of, in your case, 12th Division current Captain,” Kida snorted, “acquires your presence,” Rotrum made quotation marks with his hands.
“Really? Hmm, wonder what Captain Ilppy wants,” another affectionate nickname for another unfortunate Captain, her ears wiggled as she thought for a moment, “thanks for the notice Rotrum,” she stood up, dusted off her uniform and shook some loose strands of strawberry blonde hair out of her eyes.
“Just one thing before you go,” Rotrum said quickly, before she leapt off the roof.
“Hmm?”
“How come you never call me nicknames, you call the other Captains by their nicknames, why not me?”
Kida smiled.
“Because I’m not stupid enough to give you one, besides you’re young enough as it is, you don’t need one,” she winked and leapt off the roof onto the adjacent one, flash stepping towards Division 12.
The atmosphere around Division 10 got decidedly colder.
Yes, I too have fallen to the current FanFic virus going round, so this is just first chapter that my mind spewed out for me. The title being Inverted Souls for the whole story, but this was just to set up current goings on and scene, plus establish relations and characters, don't worry, Golde, ILP, Zameric, Eon and Vizard you all appear in the next chapter, in which the plot is established.
The 13 year old kid stepped sneakily out the Seireitei, looking around warily. His blue hair reflected off the sun. He was a fairly average 13-year-old, other then the fact that he was a Soul Reaper, his Zanpakutou hanging on a sash across his back due to the size. His pale skin standed out compared to the background.
"CAMERON!! WHERE ARE YOU?!" Cameron winced, recognizing the voice instantly.
He sighed, turning around, looking up at the intimidating figure of his captain- Cameron himself was only 5'5, while his captain was quite a ways taller. He sighed.
"Yes, Capn' Arashi?" Seijuro glared down at him, piercing cold eyes questioned him.
"And where do you think you’re going?" With a mix of bloodlust and boredom in his white eyes, Cameron answered:
"Where the hell do I think I’m going? Hueco Mundo." He sighed, an air of recognition hanging around him. Cameron glared at him, "I have to kill SOMETHING, and I can't kill anyone here, or I’ll get sent to the punishment center. Again." Seijuro looked at him bluntly, a bit of annoyance and anger in his tone.
"Get back in the Seretei. Right now. You’re NOT going to Hueco Mundo, again." Cameron's shoulders slouched, and he depressingly dragged himself back into the Seretei.
"Yes," Cameron replied with malice in his voice, "Captain".
As Cameron stumbled lamely through the Seireitei, he pondered on what he could do until nighttime when his captain was asleep. He could visit Ryuu, then, with a grim look on his face, he pondered the pros and cons of that. The pros were that he could possibly have a cool, new, wacky invention to show him. On the other hand, he would probably USE it to experiment on him. Another problem was that, last time, when he was bored, he had crashed through the ceiling. Ryuu had looked up, emotionless as ever, thrown his rubix cube at his face, slashed his neck, and thrown him back out of the ceiling. As his want to go visit Ryuu dropped lower and lower, he realized that he would challenge him to chess. With a pang of fear striking him in the stomach, he recalled the last time that he had lost: Ryuu had given him a 5 hour lecture on how to move your pawns at the beginning of the game. With a grim smile of recognition, he flash-stepped away from the Research and Development center, trying to find something else to do.
He recollected himself, looking around, and with a shock of astonishment on his face, realized that while he had been trying to figure out what to do, he had made it to night-time! With a bark of laughter, he took out a recorder, and started recording the curses and insults of the four gate guardians around the Seireitei. After he had recorded all of them, he started replaying their voices to the other 3, and, floating high above Seiretei, roared with laughter as he watched them beat each other up. His plan had worked to perfection, he had waited for the four guardians to trash talk the others under their breath, then, recording it, he replayed it to the other 3, angering them, making them seek out the other gate guardians in anger. The reason why he did that? He was bored.
With a content sigh, he started shunpo-ing towards the south entrance. Once he reached the top of the wall, he jumped down, carving 'Cameron Was Here' into the side of the wall. As he landed skillfully at the bottom, he turned away from the wall, and looked straight into the face of a Hollow charging a cero from its mouth. His eyes widened, and right before the blast hit, he uttered one thing:
"Oh son of a bi-".
Yah, That's my Prologue.. i know it's short, but i purposely made it short because my first chapter is probably going to be extremely long. hopefully for all of those who sent in bio's and didn't get put in, i apologize, i'll try to fit you in as soon as possible.
Last edited by VizardBlue; 22nd May 2010 at 9:09 PM.
Originally Posted by ILP
We're Mad.
Our 1st Squad Captain has an insane sweet tooth
Our 2nd Squad Captain is some super-ninja
Our 3rd Squad Captain is part wolf
Our 4th Squad Captain bakes cookies and cuts up anyone who makes him mad
Our 5th Squad Captain is some party-crazy army man
Our 6th Squad Captain is calm, prideful and pervy
Our 7th Squad Captain seems to be, barely, the only sane one
Our 8th Squad Captain is missing
Our 9th Squad Captain is a shy, respectful, boring and pervy
Our 10th Squad Captain hates some of our OWN captains
Our 11th Squad Captain is a sadistic maniac
Our 12th Squad Captain is an insane nerd
Our 13th Squad Captain is sleeping
well here we go. got nothing else to do so here we go. sidenote: deciced not to go with a prolouge and instead go straight to chapter one
Spoiler:- Chapter One: Corruption pt.1:
Rukongai, 6pm, June 15
"Which one of us is waking him up?" Kida inquired. The Third Captain was looking down towards Yasushi Hayashi, Captain of the Thirteenth Squad. He was laying passed out in the dirt. His shaggy black hair was flecked with brown spots. The entirety of his body was under his white captain's haori.
Around him stood two other soul reapers. The afformentioned third captain and the ninth division captain, Zameric Hanako. Kida was the the stranger of the two. Well not too much stranger, she just had blue wolf ears protruding from her strawberry blonde hair.
"Rock, paper, scissors?" Zameric suggested, breaking into a wide grin. This was a regular thing. Kida always lost and always got chewed out for waking him up. Somewhere under his black hair Zam always knew it would be that way.
"One, two, three." They said in unison. Zam threw paper and Kida threw rock.
"Damn it. Not again." She yelled. "Here we go." She moved the haori using only her right thumb and index finger. She had no clue what would be under it. The crotch of his shihakusho was wet. "Crap! He ****** his pants again."
Zam threw his head back and started laughing uncontrollebly. Kida extended her canines and chomed on Zam's shoulder. He yelped in pain. The sudden loud sound caused Hayashi to awake and spring upward all in one motion.
"What the? Where? How?" He slurred. "Kida? Zam? Why are you guys in my room?"
"We're not in you're room. You're in the middle of the 55th district of the Rukongai." The third captain answered, releasing Zam's shoulder.
"Well, how'd i get here?"
The other captains began to tell him of the events of the night that had just passed. Though they had no idea what was happening not a mile away.
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Not far from the site where the three captains where having their incident an event was happening that would have a lasting impact on the Soul Society.
In a clearing in the forest. The spirit particles that made up the Soul Society began to part. A dark hole opened. Out of it stepped a young woman. Her wild hair was as white as the tube top and baggy pants she wore and her blue eyes seemed to blaze. There was a number 4 tattooed on her right bicep. And her most distinct features: a hole was in her stomach. It went all the way through to her back. And on her left hip was a thick plate which looked like bone.
She was followed by three men. The first wore no shirt and a shoulder length, short sleeve jacket with an open front. He donned pants identical to his female companion's. From his wrist to his elbow on his left arm was the same thick bone like material. His hole rested in his right hand.
The two that followed were identical in look. Standing hunched over their long black hair concieled the holes in thier shirtless chests. They wore the same pants as their allies.
"Heh heh heh. Boys this is gonna be fun." The female chuckled grinning.
"Whatever." The first man grumbled.
"Damn Leaf. You really are a constant down, aren't you?" She snapped.
"I guess by your standards I am, Raya." Leaf spoke dull and harsh.
"Gah hagh nah ga." One of the beasts gurgled.
"Look's like Claw is on my side." Leaf's voice seemed to show more emotion this time.
"Sah na gasg nee sag." The other beast grumbled.
"Well Fang's on my side." Raya responded. "Now shut up and let's get to work."
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All three captains immeadiatly went silent. Kida's ears began to twitch.
"You felt that too, right?" Kida asked the men in front of her. She was referring to the change in spiritual pressure of the area. The third and fifth captains dropped their haori on the ground. The three exchanged glaces and began flash stepping towards the disturbance.
They appeared in the clearing just in time to see the gate the four strangers had stepped out of close.
"Well what do we have here? A few no good arrancars." Zam said smiling.
"They're not just any arrancars, Zam." Hayashi said, seeming suddenly sobered up. "Look at the girl. The number on her arm. You know what that means."
"Espada." Kida replied in a whisper. "This won't be easy."
The captains drew their swords and took battle stances.
"Leaf, you take the one with the spiked hair. Claw, Fang you get the girl. I want the one with the shaggy hair." Raya commanded.
Just as she said Leaf dashed towards Zam, who dodged into the woods. Claw and Fang dove at Kida who raised her sword to block. Even with the block she was blow back to the woods, going the opposite way as Zameric. That left Raya facing Hayashi.
"My name is Yasushi Hayashi. I am captain of the thirteenth division of the Thirteen Court Guard Squads and I will kill you."
"My name is Raya Erasa. Espada number four of Hayate Zakei's arrancars and you have no chance of beating me." She drew her sword.
They launched at eachother; ready to slash. The sound of metal hitting metal rang as their sword's clashed. The warriors smirked.
"Ya know, now that I get a look at you up close you're actually kinda cute." Yasushi complimented.
"Gracias. But ya know flattery will get you nowhere." She retorted. Both stepped back to opposite sides of the clearing.
"Ignite, Nobaoto." His sword became encased in flame. When the fire disipated a pair of black trench knives were on Hayashi's hands. The top half of his black robes had also burned off.
"Kinda puny for a shikai, don'tcha think." Raya giggled.
"I guess to some but i think it gets the job done fine. Ignite, Hihashira!"
His knuckles erupted in flame and were quickly stabbed into the ground. As quickly as the flames came they disappeared.
Nothing happened for a moment. Then Raya broke the silence,"really that was your big move nothing hap..." Her sentence trailed off when five pillars of fire raised around her.
Hayashi stood up and prepared to walk away when Raya appeared in front of him standing on her hands. She drove her right ankle into the side of his head, and flipped back onto her feet.
The captain picked himself up from the ground only to fell himself wrapped in the embrace of the hollow known as Fang.
"Hah heh hah." Fang "laughed."
"I guess my boys got the signal." The fourth Espada chuckled. Leaf and Claw appeared seconds later. "Leaf open the gate."
Another hole, just like the one the arrancars showed up in, opened in front of the man. Seconds later hundreds of small fry hollows flooded from the gate.
Claw moved to to Fang and pried open Hayashi's mouth. All the lesser hollows, as if almost instinctivly, rushed into the captain's gaping maw and down his throat.
After all the monsters had been eaten, the twins released. Nobaoto had gone back to its original form and been re-sheathed by Leaf. The sword's master had, by then, gone unconcious.
"Back through the gate boys." Raya ordered. Leaf went through first. Followed by Raya and then Claw.
Kida and Zameric showed up just in time to see Fang walk into the gate, with their comrade in his arms, and vanish. Both tried to make it in but were only seconds too slow.
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Two hours later at the squad four barracks
"Damn it!" Zam yelled. "Two weeks! He's been a captain for two weeks! And now we've lost him. It was our job to make sure he didn't get hurt."
"Zam shut up!" Kida yelled back. "I know we failed. Just shut up about it."
The squad four captain, Mizuhashi Akira, entered the room. "Um, guys someone's here to see you."
A man wearing a captain's haori entered the room.
"Golde." Zam and Kida muttered simultaniously. They both knew nothing good would come from this visit.
Wow. Damn that took a while. Well the plot is already in motion. If you can figure it out you win ten cookies from Arc. And to NL and Zam the fights you two took place in weren't covered because they really don't change the plot much. Now all of you i want to know what you think. Positive and negative reviews greatly accepted. And on that note I haven't really thought of a title for the story. Title suggestions also greatly accepted. Corruption is the name of the first two chapters.
Last edited by kusari; 23rd May 2010 at 5:34 AM.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Fanfiction frenzy. I suppose I'll skip voting and stick with the ONE vote i got (over PM too -_-)
We should, like, totally start a fanfiction Club lol.
anyone else notice how NL writes her character's relations to the others
Writing Prologue!
Spoiler:- The Super Robot War Prologue (Cliche title ftw!):
(I treat SS and Earth as two dimensions that are separated by a thin barrier which Shinigami can open a door into with ease)
(The first part is Intro to the series. Bleach itself doesn't come in until the middle)
(Sections of War. DC War, EFA vs EOTI/UCC. L5 Campaign, EFA vs Aerogators. NDC War, EFA vs NDC. SM/I War, EFA vs Shadow Mirrors/Investigators)
The Planet Earth in this universe is quite strange. A one-of-a-kind universe where few events are predictable by other dimensions, a parallel universe that branches quite differently from the rest. Twists of fate are common and are usually centric on the Three Noah Ark Class Battle Ships, Kurogane, Hagane, and the Hiryu Kai. The first notable occurences were two Meteors, labelled as one and two, landed on earth in the mid 2000s. The meteors slowed the technology rate heavily, so you might wonder why it is so technologically advanced a mere 200 years later. On the turn to the 22nd century, people began to colonize space and from then on the years were dubbed as S.E., or Space Era. In the mid 100s a third meteor struck Aidoneus Island, labelled Meteor 3. Meteor 3 itself had landed seemingly perfectly and retained a ridiculously large amount of its body-at the time it seemed impossible but when they began to look into it they forgot the meteor itself. Inside of Meteor 3 were technologies and materials that had never been discovered before. A council was made by the Earth Federal Government (EFG) for this technology, dubbed "Extra-over Technology" (EOT)and thus the Council was the Extra Over Technology Investigative Institute (EOTI, not a typo.) The head of the EOTI was Bian Zoldark, who foresaw an alien invasion and joined up with United (Space) Colony Corps Commander Maier Branstein (UCC, try saying the full version 5 times fast, with the commander part O.o) to form the Divine Crusaders (DC)-a broadcasted force to fight the Aliens and an enemy of the EFG/EFA. EFA Commander Laker send the SRX and ATX experimental teams in the Noah Class ships Hagane and Hiryu Kai, in a turn of events, to defeat the DC with a rag-tag group of Once-enemies, a group of teens, and a few professionals to take down the DC and calm the populous to show the EFA/EFG would be victorious. However, Bian and Maier had actually been making a secret plan to help train the Two ships, originally the entire EFA, and sacrificed many lives and worked with many truly wicked people-dying in the end of their efforts before they were able to see the fruits of their labor in Operation SRW (A mission to defeat the original Alien Threat). The alien threat were humans brainwashed and kidnapped by the alien race of Balmarians-this group was dubbed as the "Aerogators" by the EFG. Peace followed for six more monthes before the Hagane and Hiryu would begin to Unite again to fight off many other opponents. The initial was the Neo-Divine Crusaders (NDC) who only knew of Bian's public goals and lived off of them and not off of Bian's true goal. They were brought to power by the Shadow-Mirrors, people from another dimension who believed war was best to advance technology and to avoid corruption-but due to events happening faster in thier world without the power of Meteor 3 they needed to relocate dimensions. They eventually teamed up with Aliens (confusing huh?) called the Investigators. The Investigators weakened and maintained potentially hazardous planets from travelling into deep space and disturbing others. And of course they target Earth-the practical embodiment of civil war. Somehow or another they pull off another miracle as they finally bring peace to their planet once again and destroy the Dimensional Teleporter "The Door of Agueies" (SP, may be spelled oddly in my story cause it’s a hard word >.<) of the System XN. OR did they?
The year is 190 S.E. and 3 years have passed since the last war on and around the planet Earth. The EFG president Brian Midcrid has regained power after begin overthrown by Graien Grusman. Meanwhile in the colonies the new UCC leader is Elzam Branstein and he carefully acts as a leader figure for the colonies altogether-although each colony does have its own figurehead. The EFA has all but faded and thebrnt of their force is located on their 5 Noah Ark class Space/air/submarine Ships; The Drill ship Kurogane, the Tronium (Powerful EOT Metal/power Source) Ship Hagane, The Space Voyager Hiryu Kai, And the carrier ships Shirogane Ver. 2 and Ver. 3-the first lost a year ago in the war. The majority of the members of the Hagane and Hiryu currently pursue outer goals. To the knowledge of the UCC and EFG, no threats have been detected and the Hiryu takes common trips out from Saturn to Pluto to monitor unusual behavior.
However, hidden to the majority of the human race, Commander Laker and the rest of the Izu Base in Japan have kept the System XN and restored it with the help of now “Human” (Personality, decision making, etc) Bioroid Lamia Loveless ended up helping the restoration. Much to one Gilliam Yager’s chagrin they had and are attempting to keep it secret to him-the original user and creator of the device. For the past 3 years they have been monitoring another dimension directly with spies and cloaking to watch this other universe. Originally, they had watched them by sending small probes through to the dimension-it being among the closest to their own. But with the help of the System XN they have made frequent observing trips to discover this dimension also had an Earth that its residents often visited. They found out about the social classes, the small bits of magical kidou, the swordplay of killing hollows and the teleportation effect of Konso. The EFG made Izu their Supernatural government section in 188 S.E. after seeing the results of the System XN. The EFA were still wary of their own space and they began to closely observe the technology and firepower of this world..this world called Soul Society.
Due to the rules about powerful techniques in the Sereitei, and the main use of swordplay when fighting hollows-the EFA was led to believe they had discovered a weak planet with technology much weaker and less widely distributed then their own that was hogged by few-and had a weak government to boot. By the time it was spring Laker and Midcrid were already consulting and planning to colonize the world-aware of the risks but figuring it would be less risky then overpopulating the partially destroyed moon or going deeper into space. By May, the plan was finalized and a small army, including many Hiryu and Hagane members, were prepared for initial invasion. They figured the hundred mechas would be sufficient to completely control the Shinigami and preparations began.
At the same time in Sereitei, Meteors 1 and 2 crashed straight into the 12th division’s main lab-destroying many important technologies and incapacitating the 12th squad captain and a visiting Noble-the two most technologically advanced shinigami ever.
What do you think?
Originally Posted by Northern Lights
I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>
Ohhh that looks neat. Wish I could do one, but I can't draw my character. XD
Originally Posted by ~.:Northern Lights:.~
Spoiler:- Begining of the Inverted Souls Arc:
“Well, Hello there, Arceus,” she turned to see Arceus the Third leaning against the wooden railing lining the walkway next to Senbonzakura’s office, for he was the currently absent Captain of 8th Division.
. . .
Arceus looked knowingly at her, he may look young, but he was decidedly wise at times, but then again a complete fruit cake at others.
. . .
Rotrum blinked, and then dropped to his hands and knees, banging his hand against the roof tiles howling with laughter.
. . .
“Really? Hmm, wonder what Captain Ilppy wants,” another affectionate nickname for another unfortunate Captain,
. . .
“Because I’m not stupid enough to give you one, besides you’re young enough as it is, you don’t need one,” she winked and leapt off the roof onto the adjacent one, flash stepping towards Division 12.
The atmosphere around Division 10 got decidedly colder.
That's funny, I just chatted with him. XP
Fruitcake, lol. You're quite right there
Woah. rotrum never laughs, ever since I knew him. Nice to know that he can *runs away from his daggers*
Why was there 2 p from Ilppy?
The final part was funny. XD
Sooo does this mean you're not continuing on your Kuchikukan fanfic? hmmm..
But this one looks good too. Want to see more.
Originally Posted by VizardBlue
Spoiler:- Prologue: Oh Son of a Bi-:
The 13 year old kid stepped sneakily out the Seireitei, looking around warily. His blue hair reflected off the sun. He was a fairly average 13-year-old, other then the fact that he was a Soul Reaper, his Zanpakutou hanging on a sash across his back due to the size. His pale skin standed out compared to the background.
"CAMERON!! WHERE ARE YOU?!" Cameron winced, recognizing the voice instantly.
He sighed, turning around, looking up at the intimidating figure of his captain- Cameron himself was only 5'5, while his captain was quite a ways taller. He sighed.
"Yes, Capn' Arashi?" Seijuro glared down at him, piercing cold eyes questioned him.
"And where do you think you’re going?" With a mix of bloodlust and boredom in his white eyes, Cameron answered:
"Where the hell do I think I’m going? Hueco Mundo." He sighed, an air of recognition hanging around him. Cameron glared at him, "I have to kill SOMETHING, and I can't kill anyone here, or I’ll get sent to the punishment center. Again." Seijuro looked at him bluntly, a bit of annoyance and anger in his tone.
"Get back in the Seretei. Right now. You’re NOT going to Hueco Mundo, again." Cameron's shoulders slouched, and he depressingly dragged himself back into the Seretei.
"Yes," Cameron replied with malice in his voice, "Captain".
As Cameron stumbled lamely through the Seireitei, he pondered on what he could do until nighttime when his captain was asleep. He could visit Ryuu, then, with a grim look on his face, he pondered the pros and cons of that. The pros were that he could possibly have a cool, new, wacky invention to show him. On the other hand, he would probably USE it to experiment on him. Another problem was that, last time, when he was bored, he had crashed through the ceiling. Ryuu had looked up, emotionless as ever, thrown his rubix cube at his face, slashed his neck, and thrown him back out of the ceiling. As his want to go visit Ryuu dropped lower and lower, he realized that he would challenge him to chess. With a pang of fear striking him in the stomach, he recalled the last time that he had lost: Ryuu had given him a 5 hour lecture on how to move your pawns at the beginning of the game. With a grim smile of recognition, he flash-stepped away from the Research and Development center, trying to find something else to do.
He recollected himself, looking around, and with a shock of astonishment on his face, realized that while he had been trying to figure out what to do, he had made it to night-time! With a bark of laughter, he took out a recorder, and started recording the curses and insults of the four gate guardians around the Seireitei. After he had recorded all of them, he started replaying their voices to the other 3, and, floating high above Seiretei, roared with laughter as he watched them beat each other up. His plan had worked to perfection, he had waited for the four guardians to trash talk the others under their breath, then, recording it, he replayed it to the other 3, angering them, making them seek out the other gate guardians in anger. The reason why he did that? He was bored.
With a content sigh, he started shunpo-ing towards the south entrance. Once he reached the top of the wall, he jumped down, carving 'Cameron Was Here' into the side of the wall. As he landed skillfully at the bottom, he turned away from the wall, and looked straight into the face of a Hollow charging a cero from its mouth. His eyes widened, and right before the blast hit, he uttered one thing:
"Oh son of a bi-".
Well... that was short, but I'd like to see more.
That guardian part was funny.
You know, the first thing that comes to mind with the name Cameron is... Camerupt.
Originally Posted by kusari
well here we go. got nothing else to do so here we go. sidenote: deciced not to go with a prolouge and instead go straight to chapter one
Spoiler:- Chapter One: Corruption pt.1:
Rukongai, 6pm, June 15
"Which one of us is waking him up?" Kida inquired.
. . .
The crotch of his shihakusho was wet. "Crap! He ****** his pants again."
Wow. Damn that took a while. Well the plot is already in motion. If you can figure it out you win ten cookies from Arc..
Oh yeah. You hate being woken up. XDD
"Again"? Sounds like you do that.... a lot of times. Hmmm..
I can't figure it out myself, so I'll raise the offer to 15. XP Except maybe... they're torturing you to get some information.. But why the Hollow then? Vizards? With the title corruption, I guess that's it. Amirite?
Originally Posted by rotrum
Fanfiction frenzy. I suppose I'll skip voting and stick with the ONE vote i got (over PM too -_-)
We should, like, totally start a fanfiction Club lol.
anyone else notice how NL writes her character's relations to the others
Writing Prologue!
Spoiler:- The Super Robot War Prologue (Cliche title ftw!):
(I treat SS and Earth as two dimensions that are separated by a thin barrier which Shinigami can open a door into with ease)
(The first part is Intro to the series. Bleach itself doesn't come in until the middle)
(Sections of War. DC War, EFA vs EOTI/UCC. L5 Campaign, EFA vs Aerogators. NDC War, EFA vs NDC. SM/I War, EFA vs Shadow Mirrors/Investigators)
The Planet Earth in this universe is quite strange. A one-of-a-kind universe where few events are predictable by other dimensions, a parallel universe that branches quite differently from the rest. Twists of fate are common and are usually centric on the Three Noah Ark Class Battle Ships, Kurogane, Hagane, and the Hiryu Kai. The first notable occurences were two Meteors, labelled as one and two, landed on earth in the mid 2000s. The meteors slowed the technology rate heavily, so you might wonder why it is so technologically advanced a mere 200 years later. On the turn to the 22nd century, people began to colonize space and from then on the years were dubbed as S.E., or Space Era. In the mid 100s a third meteor struck Aidoneus Island, labelled Meteor 3. Meteor 3 itself had landed seemingly perfectly and retained a ridiculously large amount of its body-at the time it seemed impossible but when they began to look into it they forgot the meteor itself. Inside of Meteor 3 were technologies and materials that had never been discovered before. A council was made by the Earth Federal Government (EFG) for this technology, dubbed "Extra-over Technology" (EOT)and thus the Council was the Extra Over Technology Investigative Institute (EOTI, not a typo.) The head of the EOTI was Bian Zoldark, who foresaw an alien invasion and joined up with United (Space) Colony Corps Commander Maier Branstein (UCC, try saying the full version 5 times fast, with the commander part O.o) to form the Divine Crusaders (DC)-a broadcasted force to fight the Aliens and an enemy of the EFG/EFA. EFA Commander Laker send the SRX and ATX experimental teams in the Noah Class ships Hagane and Hiryu Kai, in a turn of events, to defeat the DC with a rag-tag group of Once-enemies, a group of teens, and a few professionals to take down the DC and calm the populous to show the EFA/EFG would be victorious. However, Bian and Maier had actually been making a secret plan to help train the Two ships, originally the entire EFA, and sacrificed many lives and worked with many truly wicked people-dying in the end of their efforts before they were able to see the fruits of their labor in Operation SRW (A mission to defeat the original Alien Threat). The alien threat were humans brainwashed and kidnapped by the alien race of Balmarians-this group was dubbed as the "Aerogators" by the EFG. Peace followed for six more monthes before the Hagane and Hiryu would begin to Unite again to fight off many other opponents. The initial was the Neo-Divine Crusaders (NDC) who only knew of Bian's public goals and lived off of them and not off of Bian's true goal. They were brought to power by the Shadow-Mirrors, people from another dimension who believed war was best to advance technology and to avoid corruption-but due to events happening faster in thier world without the power of Meteor 3 they needed to relocate dimensions. They eventually teamed up with Aliens (confusing huh?) called the Investigators. The Investigators weakened and maintained potentially hazardous planets from travelling into deep space and disturbing others. And of course they target Earth-the practical embodiment of civil war. Somehow or another they pull off another miracle as they finally bring peace to their planet once again and destroy the Dimensional Teleporter "The Door of Agueies" (SP, may be spelled oddly in my story cause it’s a hard word >.<) of the System XN. OR did they?
The year is 190 S.E. and 3 years have passed since the last war on and around the planet Earth. The EFG president Brian Midcrid has regained power after begin overthrown by Graien Grusman. Meanwhile in the colonies the new UCC leader is Elzam Branstein and he carefully acts as a leader figure for the colonies altogether-although each colony does have its own figurehead. The EFA has all but faded and thebrnt of their force is located on their 5 Noah Ark class Space/air/submarine Ships; The Drill ship Kurogane, the Tronium (Powerful EOT Metal/power Source) Ship Hagane, The Space Voyager Hiryu Kai, And the carrier ships Shirogane Ver. 2 and Ver. 3-the first lost a year ago in the war. The majority of the members of the Hagane and Hiryu currently pursue outer goals. To the knowledge of the UCC and EFG, no threats have been detected and the Hiryu takes common trips out from Saturn to Pluto to monitor unusual behavior.
However, hidden to the majority of the human race, Commander Laker and the rest of the Izu Base in Japan have kept the System XN and restored it with the help of now “Human” (Personality, decision making, etc) Bioroid Lamia Loveless ended up helping the restoration. Much to one Gilliam Yager’s chagrin they had and are attempting to keep it secret to him-the original user and creator of the device. For the past 3 years they have been monitoring another dimension directly with spies and cloaking to watch this other universe. Originally, they had watched them by sending small probes through to the dimension-it being among the closest to their own. But with the help of the System XN they have made frequent observing trips to discover this dimension also had an Earth that its residents often visited. They found out about the social classes, the small bits of magical kidou, the swordplay of killing hollows and the teleportation effect of Konso. The EFG made Izu their Supernatural government section in 188 S.E. after seeing the results of the System XN. The EFA were still wary of their own space and they began to closely observe the technology and firepower of this world..this world called Soul Society.
Due to the rules about powerful techniques in the Sereitei, and the main use of swordplay when fighting hollows-the EFA was led to believe they had discovered a weak planet with technology much weaker and less widely distributed then their own that was hogged by few-and had a weak government to boot. By the time it was spring Laker and Midcrid were already consulting and planning to colonize the world-aware of the risks but figuring it would be less risky then overpopulating the partially destroyed moon or going deeper into space. By May, the plan was finalized and a small army, including many Hiryu and Hagane members, were prepared for initial invasion. They figured the hundred mechas would be sufficient to completely control the Shinigami and preparations began.
At the same time in Sereitei, Meteors 1 and 2 crashed straight into the 12th division’s main lab-destroying many important technologies and incapacitating the 12th squad captain and a visiting Noble-the two most technologically advanced shinigami ever.
What do you think?
There's already a fanfiction club... heh heh. But you're right there;
1. Dac
2. Emcee
3. NL
4. You
5. kusari
6. VB
7. Eon
Now that's a lot......... And like MC/Dac/NL/you have more than 1 fiction... though they weren't continued...
Okay....
1. Too many acronyms >.<
2. You should try separating the first paragraph into smaller parts. It was too long @.@
3. Hmmm... How to put this... Can you like convert the way you convey all the facts? Straightaway facts are soooo boring which was why I effing hate History so you can like turn them into a dialogue between 2 people, flashback etc...
You know what.... We seem to use NL a lot in our first chapters. I did, and Dac did, and kusari too.... Why are you so famous NL? XD
I was surprised Zam did not comment on last week's episode... Unless I missed his post. He usually does.
Last edited by arceus03; 23rd May 2010 at 6:20 AM.
I actually came online to post the next chapter to my story, but now I figure, I should probably wait until people have read and digested the new stories popping up =)
By far my favourite is NL's!!!! (we all saw that coming). But I like her writing style, and the fact that I am prominent within it. Also, what I especially like is that the dialogue seems real. Someone says something, the other person reacts. It does not feel scripted in the sense that you cannot predict what a character will say, unless you know the character.
Rotrum; your story has waaaay to many acronyms and is bordering on sci-fi. I guess its just not my flavour, but I am interested to see where it goees and how long you will keep to it
Kusari; I like your writing style, though I must say, you have a few typos. I like the plotline so far and I am looking forward to seeing it develop. The characters seem slightly 2D and the dialogue seemed too... i dunnno how to put it. Too scripted. I could predict what everyone would say before they said it because it seemed like each character had the same personality. But I like it and I cant wait to see what you do with it. I am sure it will develop as it progresses.
VizardBlue; interesting start. cant wait to see where it goes.
MC15; i like how you kept the names hidden so that we would have to guess who is who from the personalities you gave them or assume it was a previous squad. I like how the story line is going and how real things are seeming so far. I cant wait for the next chapter. a suspensful ending ~ classic
you die in the first chapter. lol
so mean!!! lol
... where to start, actually, because it would amuse you too much and i'm having a lazy day marking tests i won't bother even starting
well thanks for saying ya liked it. ok response time. i'll start with...
Da.C: i get what you're saying about the scriptedness. before i write the next chapter i'm gonna have one of my freinds, who has always been a good writer and is currently working on his own book, take a look and give me notes. as for the typos i know. when i read back through it i was just to lazy to fix them. next time i'm gonna type it in word and run spell check over it. and when i wrote your place i had just woken up.
Arc: ah hah you caught the all importent part: i like my sleep. the "did it again" part was just for fun. and honestly that's what my uncle does when he gets drunk. i was drunk the night before the chap if you didn't infer that already. and as for the plot i'll call and raise you to twenty for being close with the vaizard thing. i can assure you i will not be interrogated. i have a feeling you'll get where i'm going with it after the next chapter. and if you noticed i already named my villain.
NL and Zam: if you read this i want your input considering you were in the chapter. and if there's anyway i could improve you in the story i'd like to know.
Also i'm looking for volunteers. i need four for what i'm planning and you won't know for what until i write it.
and on my last note i have character descriptions of some of you but not all. these are the ones i have NL, Arc, Zam, ILP, MC and Senny. please any others ASAP.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
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so mean!!! lol
