Dac; wow you're story is getting complicated all of a sudden
That's... interesting, to say the least. I wonder if you'll explain it, later.
I know i do in my story. I'm also guessing that due to the Zanpaktou's change in health is is affecting our mental health in return, so we're becoming a little ... strange.
I must say, I am very disappointed in this chapter...I would never dress like that!
First of all, I would've hated having large breasts and would've gotten rid of those. And I would never wear tight leather, ugh. I'd wear something cuter. e.e
And...am I evil? O.o
@Eon - The reason why I asked him to make me female was because the last fanfic he made, he made me female WITHOUT me asking. That means in the year or two he knew of me, he thought I was female the whole time. And for those who know me, I have a very feminine personality. Sooo...I was curious to see how I'd be portrayed. But he never finished his last one.
MC - idc now about the amount of characters.. I'll just read them. XD
That Renji part made me lol quite for some time.
Dac - Like NL said, your fanfic got complicated out of the blue. I'd like to know why MC stabbed ILPy.
Kusair - Foreign language class in the middle of the desert, lol.
Rotrum - You need to explain the battles.. better, I guess. XD But Ibis has, like, 2 shikai? Woah. Not to mention both are named after 2 ending songs from Naruto, lol
And what is the 'source' they're talking about? I'm guessing you're going to explain that soon?
Spoiler:- Anime:
Well that was fun. Hitsugaya vs Halibel part 1 is now done. Arrogante next week ^^ Hyouten Hyakkaso looks nice. XP
I think we'll see Los Lobos next 2 weeks, or next week. Woo~
*patiently waits for Hachi to come and fight with Barragan*
This week's, and last one's, previews were funny. XD Soi Fon made Barragan seem like a cheating fraud during a contest, looking down at his hands. XD
And this one's, losing fat under the skin about 20kg. lol
The Shinigami's Cup is hilarious as well. XD The ETDT are back, and Yamamoto is mad at Hitsugaya. XDDD I lol'd quite some time at that.
And... Manga:
Spoiler:
Woah, a denser time. Something tells me ILPy is going to love this whole thing about time and space explanation.
Isshin was going to use _all_ of his reiatsu to stop the current... Which indicated that Ichigo is going to get all the fighting to himself again. WHAT. THE. HECK.
I see.. Training for thousands of years, because Ichigo took the shortcut to achieving Bankai back then, right?
Aizen must also know that the train thing stops people from staying in the Precipice for a long time. He would also suspect that Ichigo and Isshin wll follow him. Meaning... He could be destroying the train on purpose...?
GAH. We're going to get another "I already knew this would happen" scene from Aizen? Heck please no.
"And don't touch her ***" made me lol. XDD Why were they awake, anyway? People with higher-than-normal-but-lower-than-shinigami spiritual energy?
Zangetsu is gonna go wild... This will surely be interesting to see...
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I must say, I am very disappointed in this chapter...I would never dress like that!
First of all, I would've hated having large breasts and would've gotten rid of those. And I would never wear tight leather, ugh. I'd wear something cuter. e.e
And...am I evil? O.o
@Eon - The reason why I asked him to make me female was because the last fanfic he made, he made me female WITHOUT me asking. That means in the year or two he knew of me, he thought I was female the whole time. And for those who know me, I have a very feminine personality. Sooo...I was curious to see how I'd be portrayed. But he never finished his last one.
Patience =) all will be revealed =)
but yes, NL hit the nail on the head. The zanpaktou sickness is affecting the mental stability of its owners =)
as for ILP's commemts, all i am going to say is some were spot on, and some were so way off, i never saw them coming looool.
p.s. this completely off topic, but go to www.google.com and type in "lol limewire" and click "i'm feeling lucky" =) and enjoy looool. its quite entertaining
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Sadly, there is a strong chance that he could, he does not do some kind of miracle ***-pull that explains a lot of the current plot holes.
What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'
You'd probably kill several lower ranked soul reapers and a lieutenant or captain before we could stop you.
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
Well, I'd always like to see more Chad, but I guess he's a got pretty good amount of screen time.
I think I'd like to see a proper Unohana fight or two.
Originally Posted by arceus03
And... Manga:
Spoiler:
Woah, a denser time. Something tells me ILPy is going to love this whole thing about time and space explanation.
Isshin was going to use _all_ of his reiatsu to stop the current... Which indicated that Ichigo is going to get all the fighting to himself again. WHAT. THE. HECK.
I see.. Training for thousands of years, because Ichigo took the shortcut to achieving Bankai back then, right?
Aizen must also know that the train thing stops people from staying in the Precipice for a long time. He would also suspect that Ichigo and Isshin wll follow him. Meaning... He could be destroying the train on purpose...?
GAH. We're going to get another "I already knew this would happen" scene from Aizen? Heck please no.
"And don't touch her ***" made me lol. XDD Why were they awake, anyway? People with higher-than-normal-but-lower-than-shinigami spiritual energy?
Zangetsu is gonna go wild... This will surely be interesting to see...
Spoiler:- manga 408:
Well, Ichigo is going to be training for at most an hour, but how long does it take to form to Oken? I'm starting to guess that there will have to be someone to stall Aizen & Gin until Ichigo aND Isshin are done in the hyperbolic time chamber Dangai Precipice World.
Yeah, I'm also afraid this might also be apart of Aizen's plan. I hope it does turn out the Ichigo is used like a tool like he was by Muramasa. :/
Yeah, I wanna see this wild Zangetsu too. ;p
Spoiler:- anime 275:
Ah, the supossed end to the Hitsugaya vs. Halibel fight. I always love watching the anime for these kinds of scene where they show sort of complex abilities. Just helps me to visualize them better than the manga ever could.
I forgot about Starrk being able to fire a cero without a posture, that is a pretty awesome skill to have.
I think this was a really good introduction of Baraggan's release, Arrogante. I think probably one of the one members in the club that could take on, let alone beat, Baraggan is Ant.
Last edited by Zameric; 17th June 2010 at 9:31 PM.
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Overall, the chapter was interesting. I'll go more in-depth to the physics of the Precipe World in the in-depth review. Though I'm glad to see Tatsuki after so long.
Haha, that first bit made me lol. Oh, Ichigo, no pain no gain.
"The Precipe World is a place in which severed space is piled up on top of one another, surrounded by raging streams of time."
NOTE: Skip this paragraph if you don't really like physics DA.C
This is an interesting description. Especially since it describes it as "severed space piled onto each other." A quick Einstein "theory" for you, he said that gravity can bend space-time. The larger the gravity, the more that it is bent, and the more that space and time is stretched.
Due to the severed space being piled onto each other, we can guess that the space is very dense in mass (and therefore has a great gravity), which can affect the space and time in its area (that being the Precipe World itself). If we ignore the fact that the gravity would crush everyone who passes through it, it would make sense in theory.
Though an interesting thing is that he mentioned "raging streams of time". I take this to mean that the time is not a constant flow (another one of Einstein's ideas) and that it moves erratically, depending where you are. Some areas it would move much slower than outside, and others, much faster. In this case, it moves a lot faster, though it should also shift.
I'll keep this rather tame for now, so I can get on with the rest of the chapter.
What exactly is this "Kouryuu current" he keeps on mentioning? I seemed to have missed the explanation.
So Ichigo has only 3 months to conquer Zangetsu? If it was 3 months non-stop (which is an interesting idea, seeing as how as they are Souls, they have no need for food or sleep, so it could make sense) then I can see it MAYBE happen, but Captains take years to master/attain Bankai, no?
So Ichigo's going to call out Zangetsu? This will be VERY interesting, considering how HIchigo is obviously going to come out too, and what with the fight against Ulquiorra having his Hollow form, and using his new mask...
Ah, Tatsuki and Keigo. 2 of the people with Urahara. I wonder where Muzuiro is.
Haha, Keigo being a perv XD.
And they've obviously clocked it with Ichigo straight away. Looks like he's not very good with keeping his life a secret.
So, Aizen and Gin are ready to do things now.
And "wild" may be an understatement. I just hope that this won't be a HUGE anticlimax.
Originally Posted by Golde
@Eon - The reason why I asked him to make me female was because the last fanfic he made, he made me female WITHOUT me asking. That means in the year or two he knew of me, he thought I was female the whole time. And for those who know me, I have a very feminine personality. Sooo...I was curious to see how I'd be portrayed. But he never finished his last one.
OH, so you ASKED to be a girl. Nevermind then >.>
Originally Posted by arceus03
Spoiler:
Woah, a denser time. Something tells me ILPy is going to love this whole thing about time and space explanation.
Spoiler:
A little bit, yes. I could go ON AND ON about it, though.
Originally Posted by arceus03
Spoiler:
Isshin was going to use _all_ of his reiatsu to stop the current... Which indicated that Ichigo is going to get all the fighting to himself again. WHAT. THE. HECK.
Spoiler:
Kubo's been "foreshadowing" this for AGES.
Originally Posted by arceus03
Spoiler:
Aizen must also know that the train thing stops people from staying in the Precipice for a long time. He would also suspect that Ichigo and Isshin wll follow him. Meaning... He could be destroying the train on purpose...?
GAH. We're going to get another "I already knew this would happen" scene from Aizen? Heck please no.
Spoiler:
Perhaps, but I have a feeling that even Aizen isn't expecting Ichigo to do this, even if he was expecting him to follow him.
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
as for ILP's commemts, all i am going to say is some were spot on, and some were so way off, i never saw them coming looool.
Haha, good. I sometimes like being on the dot about guesses, and other times, I like being WAY OFF.
Originally Posted by Zameric
Spoiler:- manga 408:
Well, Ichigo is going to be training for at most an hour, but how long does it take to form to Oken? I'm starting to guess that there will have to be someone to stall Aizen & Gin until Ichigo aND Isshin are done in the hyperbolic time chamber Dangai Precipice World.
Spoiler:
Hmm, true. I think it WILL take a while for Aizen to create the Ouken. And like everyone else, Ichigo will end up coming in the nick of time to save the day.
Last edited by I like Pokemon (...); 17th June 2010 at 9:45 PM.
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Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Hello all! I'm back. Forgive me for my absence. I was busy with my final exams and GTA III afterwards. I recently got addicted to the manga. I've also seen that you guys have got battle charts. They look pretty awesome, that's all what I can say. But first of all, what do I do to receive it from a fellow member? I don't know whether I've said this before or not but I fell like ditching my zanpaktou. The katana doesn't go with me well, I thought I'd take permission from you guys to swap it with a Tommy gun capable of launching kido spells in the form of colored bullets and firing colored lasers with the power and range of a sniper rifle. So... How's everybody doing?
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
I think so. The endings of most dramas and animes have been crappy... I hope its ending doesn't turn out to be bad as well. >.< I also pray that Bleach SHOULD'NT end! It should go on and on just like Pokemon. An anime like Bleach is too good to end.
What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'
Who? Me? The same thing that would happen to you if you'd get a six star wanted level in GTA. The Soul Society would be one me like a fungus on a toe nail. They'd want me dead because the Seretei would be piling up with the souls of corrupt polictians and religon fanatics
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
I think Unohana, Byakuya and Aizen deserve more attention.
Last edited by Emperor Giratina; 17th June 2010 at 10:04 PM.
Well here goes. i had a crappy day so i haven't read the manga yet. i'll do that soon.
Welcome back Emperor Giratina. We've never really talked i just wanted to be the first to welcome you back. Oh and as for the 'can i kill something now' topic, its not reffering to the responder. it was started by Vizard Blue and its based on his sort of catch phrase, which is: Can i kill something now? Don't worry you'll hear it a lot from here on out.
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Kubo is going to, pardon my french, **** all over this ending.
What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?
You'll start killing out right. then get cocky and start jumping out from around corners for surprise attacks and one time you won't be watching your back and someone will bust you over the head with a sheath.
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
I'm adding to my own topic. Unohana, Hanataro and Rekichi.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Yes... Aizen has been made ridiculously powerful, and somehow Ichigo will win, even though Yamamoto lost. I get that Ichigo is supposed to be the hero, but seriously??? how does the captain commander and strongest shinigami LOSE against Aizen??
What kind of hell would be brought upon the Seretei's enemys if someone answered 'yes' if i asked 'Can I kill something now?'
???
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
UNOHANA
MAYURI
Kira
yamamoto's lieutenant
yumichika (he rarely fights)
YACHIRU
I'm liking how the manga's going...better...plotholes aside.
Which reminds me, I still wanna see Hayate Gekko's gf in Naruto XDD
Somethings going to happen to someone in Karakura...I'm hoping some cool powers! I think...Keigo is it? The guy who keeps getting clotheslined. Something involving legs with him.
And I better see some damned long hair sexy Ichi after 3+months of training.
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Good news Bad news...
Good news - I'm getting a brand spankin new computer tomorrow. Meaning no more drag, meaning Word, GIMP, etc should run AMAZING.
Bad news - I'm leaving town from the 19th to the 24th and shouldn't have internet. So, yaoi time.
Good news more - I'll probably work on my fic in my spare time...I haven't had the motivation to finish this fight e.e
Hello all! I'm back. Forgive me for my absence. I was busy with my final exams and GTA III afterwards. I recently got addicted to the manga. I've also seen that you guys have got battle charts. They look pretty awesome, that's all what I can say. But first of all, what do I do to receive it from a fellow member? I don't know whether I've said this before or not but I fell like ditching my zanpaktou. The katana doesn't go with me well, I thought I'd take permission from you guys to swap it with a Tommy gun capable of launching kido spells in the form of colored bullets and firing colored lasers with the power and range of a sniper rifle. So... How's everybody doing?
Which character deserved more screentime than they got?
I think Unohana, Byakuya and Aizen deserve more attention.
Good to see you again =D
Spoiler:
Your new idea.. Seems pretty much like Starrk's Los Lobos, but idk.
UNOHANA 8D YES
Aizen.... already got a HUGE amount of screentime lately...
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
Yes... Aizen has been made ridiculously powerful, and somehow Ichigo will win, even though Yamamoto lost. I get that Ichigo is supposed to be the hero, but seriously??? how does the captain commander and strongest shinigami LOSE against Aizen??
Well... Spoiler:
Aizen didn't actually win over Yamamoto. It's more because of Wonderweiss butting in and sealing Yamamoto's powers.
Originally Posted by Golde
Bad news - I'm leaving town from the 19th to the 24th and shouldn't have internet. So, yaoi time.
Good news more - I'll probably work on my fic in my spare time...I haven't had the motivation to finish this fight e.e
I'm sad that no one would read my fic so I am writing the next chapter now.
Summer Vacation officially started for me yesterday.
NO idea who Emperor Giratina is.
Stealing more ideas from other stuff to incorporate into my fic.
Laughing at Golde's outfit.
Reading Manga Later.
Spoiler:- Bleach: Exile: The Last Element:
(A/N: I need to think of songs better. Japanese Digimon song now..)
The scientist smirked, recovering from his momentary awe as he looked behind him. He glanced back for only a moment before looking at the glorious marvel that stood before him. It was just a tiny suspended crystal, a stereotypical diamond about a half foot tall. It glowed with a dim orange energy-and it seemed to be filled with conflict without ever moving. It looked as if red clouds and orange lightning crackled in the diamond-shape, but if you blinked it’d just be normal again. Behind the crystal by a couple feet was an unconscious young man, around 18 or 19 years of age, who was in too much shadow to be properly seen. As the scientist peered at him, the image of a fox burned briefly in the crystal before returning to normal.
“Hmm…CPX 001 F.S. is still here with the crystal. Poor guy, he was born with more than he can handle. And now, it ours…The A Ranked Crystal of Storm…” He murmured as he walked carefully around the crystal. “Can’t believe they are sending it out already…I wonder what they’ll do about the shinigami without it…although they were distracted by a C rank for a while…”
“WHAT IS TAKING YOU SO LONG?” A voice boomed and his heart stopped for a second. He breathed deeply for a few seconds before carefully removing the Crystal from its floating pedestal. He held it like a hot potato, switching hands as if it would burn him for holding it too long in one hand. When he came back out a man was waiting for him. The man had short silver hair and a one-piece hood-including suit that covered all but his face and feet. The robe was orange and appeared to change color very slightly and randomly. He looked calmly at the scientist until the crystal was held before him. He stared at it in awe before outstretching his arm and then holding his palm vertically. The crystal slowly dived into him and he was burning. Literally, fire engulfed his being and cursed were barely heard under his cool exterior. It all stopped and he got back up calmly, dusting himself off, nodding at the first scientist (The one who didn’t retrieve the crystal.)
Meanwhile, a short distance away Ryoto stood in a similar room, this one was empty. He was staring at a 5-inch long crystal that was a brighter orange-it just radiated calm and bright energy. He smiled briefly before holding his hand up like the last man and absorbing the crystal-then leaving the dark room without a sound-alone but fully aware of his next destination.
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I.L.P ver. 2 stood solemnly in the outskirts of Rukongai’s Southern regions. Ibis, Kida, and Jin weren’t far back. He was just an alert system. He had no zanpakutou, he was a copy of a near perfectly human robot. This didn’t upset him, it was nearly impossible to upset him; hell, it was nearly impossible to refer to him with masculine pronouns. He was an incomplete version of Narcisse’s legacy-ILP. He was just like ILP, intelligence, attitude, and appearance-wise at least. However he had little real emotion and served as little more than a moving supercomputer-although not as advanced. After ILP was lost at the equator ILP ver. 2 was hastily scrapped together and took over as the 12th Lieutenant.
“Heh. You don’t even have a Zanpakutou! Pathetic Lieutenant.” The voice said wickedly. The once shy teen walked confidently and briskly up to ILP. ILP already had alerted the other patrols and switched to physical defense mode. This was a strange setting that jumbled-ly mixed up different martial arts to combat enemies until back-up could appear. “I won’t release mine either then.” Ryoto smirked as the B-Sky-Crystal’s orange energy engulfed his hands-which also got into fighting position
“Analysis…Non-Seated 10th Squad Member...Reiatsu Levels…Third Seat level….Zanpakutou…Leone Di Cielo…Low Tier Zanpakutou…Abilties…Energy manifestation and speed.” ILP ver. 2 continued for a second-quieter as Ryoto punched his glowing fists to ILPV2’s metallic ones. The two were evenly matched. This surprised ILPV2 and he burst backwards-his sides opening up as small missiles launched themselves at Ryoto. He jumped him up into the air-but the missiles followed him up and he held his hands together
“Raikouhou!” He exclaimed as electricity slammed through the missiles-blowing them up a safe distance away before beginning to fall back down to the ground. Ryoto put himself right side up and prepared to kick at ILPV2-who blocked it just barely. With tiny metal claws digging into the dirt, the force propelled him backward a few feet even as he remained upright. He cringed as Ryoto aimed his hand at him.
“Kongobaku!” A voice rang out, as a red fiery ball struck the ground in front of Ryoto-who stumbled back in surprise. After the smoke began to clear-Jin made an overdramatic appearance standing in the smoke-gesturing a black-covered hand to ILPV2 to back up. Ryoto bared his teeth as Jin became in full view-sort of as he was wrapped in black fabric other than his face.
“Haien!” Ryoto exclaimed as the fiery Hadou burst out of his outstretched hand-Jin only slashed his sword and a rippling crescent cancelled out the Haien. Ryoto smirked as he noticed the odd shape of Jin’s blade. “Ahh…so you have already released. Very well, let’s go. Roar, Leone di Cielo!” Ryoto released his Shikai, but it was different now. A feral look in his eyes, and fangs sharp in his mouth, he had orange glowing wings that each were his height-about 5 feet long each. Claws made their way out of his feet and hands-his sword was not a sword this time though. He held a long spear with a small diamond-shaped blade at the end-it glowed bright orange. He quickly burst into the air and tried to stab into Jin from above.
“Hyaah!” Jin grunted as he fired vacuum after vacuum at the ever falling Ryoto. Ryoto smiled as the orange energy began to flow from the spear-tip, creating an orange barrier that sharpened to a point. Jin cursed before disappearing entirely-noticing that too much energy was present behind Ryoto to strike from there as well. “Zenbu Kuu!” Jin exclaimed as the air rippled everywhere-moving vacuums going in every direction like some sort of a vacuum bomb.
“Pathetic!” Ryoto exclaimed as he floated nonchalantly a few feet away-holding out the spear before a huge beam burst from its tip. He burst into a stab behind the beam-safely avoiding the vacuum slashes. Jin easily moved out of the way. “Enough playing. Time to destroy you.” He visually sped up and Jin, the stealthiest and fastest captain, had trouble dodging the flying stab that came at him-and was completely caught off guard by the long thin beam of orange energy that drilled into his side.
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-A Mile Off the East Coast of The United States of America-
A Young Man with long white hair stood on the surface of the ocean’s water-wearing ridiculous stereotypically Tropical vacation clothing, flowery patterns and all. He was very kind looking but at this moment he was very serious, staring down a strange silver-haired and orange-robe wearing man-the same who had absorbed the A-Crystal of Storm, he floated a few feet above the water. Nearby was a black-haired teen, wearing a white polo and black cargo shorts, that stood nonchalantly on a small platform of ice that crusted over a small part of the ocean. On the horizon was a large cruise ship floating away without any notice of its two missing passengers.
“Give up. Just stand down” The silver-haired man spoke calmly, as if he wasn’t carrying a five-foot long sword in his hand and pointing it at the two people. “Do not force me to use…force”
“Kid, leave.” The White haired man said, walking on the waves a step towards the silver haired man, he held up a hand as water began to rise up and swirl around the two. Clouds started to gather in the area-appearing from nowhere but gathering directly above the duo.
“You think you can stop me? Pathetic.” The Silver Haired man stated. He snapped his fingers and a fiery corona completely disintegrated the watery prison. “If you insist on resisting, I WILL destroy you.”
“My name is Akira, Mizuhashi Akira. And I will stop you from harming innocent people” The white Haired man replied, not at all full of himself. He bent down and put his hand in the water, pulling out a crude watery rifle. He aimed and fired a bullet of super-condensed water at the Silver-haired man, simultaneously waving his other hand behind him and making a wall between them and the other.
“I’m not going to stand back here and watch, or run. For future purposes call me R, not ‘Kid’” he said angrily. He dashed forward-the water being replaced by smooth ice as he went-sliding straight up the now-frozen wall of water.
“Kids these days, eh? Makes my job easier. My name is Sanger. Remember it, it’s the last name you’ll hear the way you are. Burn, Visone Tempesta!” His sword was suddenly on fire, except for the hilt, and around 7 feet long. “Flamma Scarletta!” The fire leaked off of his sword and even the water and the air caught on fire. Fire spread wildly everywhere and in every direction-easily destroying the water and ice that tried to get in its way-eventually making a dome around the three people.
Akira tried in vain to put out the fires as geyser after geyser rose into the air, failing miserably but not giving up. He eventually aimed the rifle-like water mass and fired a bullet into the dome-making a hole he continued. R started to blow at the flames, like a birthday candle except the water that touched his breath froze-including the water vapor made by the heat and causing a large fog inside the dome
Ryoto and Jin stared at each other from about 10 feet away-being watched by Ibis, Kida, and ILP ver.2. Neither moved-but Ryoto prepared to. Tensing, he suddenly burst into the sky at speeds a shuttle would be jealous of. Jin followed suit, but was surprised as Ryoto flapped his wings and powerful waved of energy and air were launched at him-then there was the more focused beam of energy form the spear coming down at him. He cursed as he fired blasts of vacuum at the mass of energy raining down at him…
Ehhh…decided to make next chapter explanation and finishing battle chapter cause this is already loooooooooong and I’m laaaaaazy
Last edited by rotrum; 18th June 2010 at 6:14 PM.
Originally Posted by Northern Lights
I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>
I'm liking how the manga's going...better...plotholes aside.
Which reminds me, I still wanna see Hayate Gekko's gf in Naruto XDD
Somethings going to happen to someone in Karakura...I'm hoping some cool powers! I think...Keigo is it? The guy who keeps getting clotheslined. Something involving legs with him.
And I better see some damned long hair sexy Ichi after 3+months of training.
>>
Good news Bad news...
Good news - I'm getting a brand spankin new computer tomorrow. Meaning no more drag, meaning Word, GIMP, etc should run AMAZING.
Bad news - I'm leaving town from the 19th to the 24th and shouldn't have internet. So, yaoi time.
Good news more - I'll probably work on my fic in my spare time...I haven't had the motivation to finish this fight e.e
NOOOOO!!!!
ok, when you get back, you MUST look for the next chapter of my story!!!! No matter how many pages you missed!!!!! =)
Summer Vacation officially started for me yesterday.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
=) the joys of me not attending an american high school :P (or middle school or w/e)
As for your story Rotrum:
I have to say, excellent description. You are definately improving. You kept the characters vivid, you kept the reactions realistic, though I find it interesting that a robot which analysed them was unable to determine that one was violent and would attack without warning lol. But it was all very well written, and a decent length too. You spaced out your paragraphs very well (an improvement from that block of text you wanted us to read haha) and you did not use too many contractions, and each was explained fully. The mysterious ending definately helps one look for the next chapter in anticipation =)
I think I will go and watch Karate Kid today.... hm....
Other than my wonderful English friends (Well, just NL) is there anyone else watching the world cup?
Last edited by Da14u.C; 18th June 2010 at 5:05 PM.
Forgive me for my absence. I was busy with my final exams and GTA III afterwards. I recently got addicted to the manga.
Well, you're here now, anyway.
Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina
I've also seen that you guys have got battle charts. They look pretty awesome, that's all what I can say. But first of all, what do I do to receive it from a fellow member?
You make your stats based on how you think you are in battle, and you can either make your own chart, or I'm sure Zam will be happy to make it for you.
Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina
I don't know whether I've said this before or not but I fell like ditching my zanpaktou. The katana doesn't go with me well, I thought I'd take permission from you guys to swap it with a Tommy gun capable of launching kido spells in the form of colored bullets and firing colored lasers with the power and range of a sniper rifle.
Hmm... As long as it's still science/maths related somehow...
Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina
Do you think Tite is going to completely screw up the ending of Bleach when it comes?
I think so. The endings of most dramas and animes have been crappy... I hope its ending doesn't turn out to be bad as well. >.< I also pray that Bleach SHOULD'NT end! It should go on and on just like Pokemon. An anime like Bleach is too good to end.
If it never ended, Bleach would SUCK.
Originally Posted by Golde
Spoiler:- Manga:
And I better see some damned long hair sexy Ichi after 3+months of training.
Spoiler:
HELL YES.
Originally Posted by Golde
Good news Bad news...
Good news - I'm getting a brand spankin new computer tomorrow. Meaning no more drag, meaning Word, GIMP, etc should run AMAZING.
WOO.
Originally Posted by Golde
Bad news - I'm leaving town from the 19th to the 24th and shouldn't have internet. So, yaoi time.
Well, at least there's Yaoi. And it's only for a few days.
Originally Posted by Golde
Good news more - I'll probably work on my fic in my spare time...I haven't had the motivation to finish this fight e.e
WOO!
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
Other than my wonderful English friends (Well, just NL) is there anyone else watching the world cup?
*Emo corner*
England suck at football, I have to say. And USA's goalie is really good.
Rotrum, I'm incredibly lazy today, so I'll read your fic tomorrow and give a proper review like I normally do with everyone else.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Like I said, make a fanfic page...that'd make everything so easier. ALL OF YOU! MAKE THE DAMNED PAGES ><
If you keep dressing me in stuff I wouldn't wear, I'm going to be mad.
Remember Edelina, Da.c DID say that the whole disease thing was causing mental instability of the owners, so maybe that's why your wearing that very...revealing outfit. ~ Tata, im off to lop someone's head off out of boredom.
Originally Posted by ILP
We're Mad.
Our 1st Squad Captain has an insane sweet tooth
Our 2nd Squad Captain is some super-ninja
Our 3rd Squad Captain is part wolf
Our 4th Squad Captain bakes cookies and cuts up anyone who makes him mad
Our 5th Squad Captain is some party-crazy army man
Our 6th Squad Captain is calm, prideful and pervy
Our 7th Squad Captain seems to be, barely, the only sane one
Our 8th Squad Captain is missing
Our 9th Squad Captain is a shy, respectful, boring and pervy
Our 10th Squad Captain hates some of our OWN captains
Our 11th Squad Captain is a sadistic maniac
Our 12th Squad Captain is an insane nerd
Our 13th Squad Captain is sleeping
As for your story Rotrum:
I have to say, excellent description. You are definately improving. You kept the characters vivid, you kept the reactions realistic, though I find it interesting that a robot which analysed them was unable to determine that one was violent and would attack without warning lol. But it was all very well written, and a decent length too. You spaced out your paragraphs very well (an improvement from that block of text you wanted us to read haha) and you did not use too many contractions, and each was explained fully. The mysterious ending definately helps one look for the next chapter in anticipation =)
Good for you =D
...I mean, Rotrum was worrying no one was reading his story..
Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...)
*Emo corner*
England suck at football, I have to say. And USA's goalie is really good.
All I know about England is that Gerrard got a yellow card =D
Klose got a red one XD
Originally Posted by Golde
Like I said, make a fanfic page...that'd make everything so easier. ALL OF YOU! MAKE THE DAMNED PAGES ><
If you keep dressing me in stuff I wouldn't wear, I'm going to be mad.
Uh-oh. Sotaicho-chan sama is mad. Do what he says, everyone. XD
So far, I think only MC, Golde himself, NL and me has those pages. Which means... Eon, kusari, rotrum and Dac haven't made them yet. Well, I remember seeing a prologue from VB, but he seems to be not continuing his story.. like me
Keep dressing you in stuff you wouldn't wear? :3 *naughty thoughts for next chapter*
[QUOTE=Emperor Giratina;11364463]I don't know whether I've said this before or not but I fell like ditching my zanpaktou. The katana doesn't go with me well, I thought I'd take permission from you guys to swap it with a Tommy gun capable of launching kido spells in the form of colored bullets and firing colored lasers with the power and range of a sniper rifle. So... How's everybody doing?
[QUOTE]
it does sound a lot like los lobos. and you are under ILP so it would have to be, at least a bit, math or science related.
i'll make a fanfic page when i feel like it. i'm just really lazy.
yeah, i was following the world cup. i was a france fan. i like to root for the underdog and france is basically the underdog of the world in everything.
i'm gonna put up a chapter later probably then take this coming week off. i'm not going to do anything this week. no internet, no parties, hell i probably won't even leave my apartment.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
[Kida Ookami]
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
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