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    Quote Originally Posted by Golde View Post
    Like I said, make a fanfic page...that'd make everything so easier. ALL OF YOU! MAKE THE DAMNED PAGES ><
    I'd love to, but unfortunately, I don't have a finalized title, a title banner, and I'm riding a huge brainwave on my fic right now, so I'm kinda otherwise occupied.

    If you keep dressing me in stuff I wouldn't wear, I'm going to be mad.
    I (oddly enough) think my Lieutenant is on the right track. Lol @ him calling you Edlina.

    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    Good for you =D
    ...I mean, Rotrum was worrying no one was reading his story..
    I've been reading it, I've just not had the motivation to review.

    All I know about England is that Gerrard got a yellow card =D
    Klose got a red one XD
    England hasn't won a match yet. Then again, neither has the US, and Algeria hasn't even scored yet. So England is pretty much tied for second in Group C.
    That made me so angry, dammit. Das war nicht wichtig! (That wasn't cool/fair/right.)

    Uh-oh. Sotaicho-chan sama is mad. Do what he says, everyone. XD
    So far, I think only MC, Golde himself, NL and me has those pages. Which means... Eon, kusari, rotrum and Dac haven't made them yet. Well, I remember seeing a prologue from VB, but he seems to be not continuing his story.. like me
    Well excuse me for being a dedicated writer :<

    And don't you dare, I must see... wait, I musn't spoil it for everyone else =D

    Keep dressing you in stuff you wouldn't wear? :3 *naughty thoughts for next chapter*
    I laughed, probably immoderately so.

    Quote Originally Posted by kusari View Post
    it does sound a lot like los lobos. and you are under ILP so it would have to be, at least a bit, math or science related.
    Actually, it reminds me more of Rantao's Kido Shotgun, but w/e.

    i'll make a fanfic page when i feel like it. i'm just really lazy.
    No. Bad.

    yeah, i was following the world cup. i was a france fan. i like to root for the underdog and france is basically the underdog of the world in everything.
    I made the mistake of rooting for France in '06, it cost me $25 in a bet >.>

    i'm gonna put up a chapter later probably then take this coming week off. i'm not going to do anything this week. no internet, no parties, hell i probably won't even leave my apartment.
    Wow, you're just going to sleep?

    @Everybody: I'm working on my next chapter, probably done either today or tomorrow.

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    @ NL - Well, sorry. I tend to be forgetful with things. Like I said, remind me :P

    @ Da.C - Banners and stuff aren't needed. Ya just gotta link all the chapters on one thing. No fancy name or banner or finalized title for my page e.e

    And Edelina isn't new, lol. Maybe if we ever talked on WLM :P

    I was mostly joking. I figured it was the disease thing once I read it as well.

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    Well, I finished Chapter 9. Shouldn't be long before I post it here. :] As long as the lags don't bore me out and I stop trying to post... Anyway. Possible spoils: Eon is in =D

    ...I said possible, right? XP
    Working on the 10th, idk when I'll finish it. XD

    Eon I think Golde meant that for you, but whatever. XD But yeah, mine hasn't got a title/banner too. Unless you want to be pretty picky about it.

    Rotrum~ Well that was an interesting finish =D I wonder when did I have the ability to control the ocean... But I thought I was a mere human, not yet turned into a SH? How did I have the abilities then? o.o

    What I saw in the manga thread~
    More Kubo answers from an interview. Explains all the characters who do jack crap.

    Q. How long does it takes for you to create a character?
    A. It doesn't take time. When I do my daily activities characters idea one by one suddenly spring into my head. Then it's all about the timing when will I put them on top of the paper.

    Q. Why Kyouraku didn't go Bankai? If he get serious he might defeat Aizen!
    A. Shunsui's appeal is not to defeat Aizen. But I let the readers think that 「If he goes Bankai he might be stronger than Aizen」

    Alright, that last answer was just stupid.
    Well... Now we know why everyone won't go bankai to stop Aizen. Because it's not their job. They're probably buying popcorns while waiting for Ichigo to face Aizen now... =\
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    Quote Originally Posted by Golde View Post
    @ NL - Well, sorry. I tend to be forgetful with things. Like I said, remind me :P
    Can I remind you that I have my story cataloged on my Squad Page, so I don't technically need a story one for you to find it easily?

    @ Da.C - Banners and stuff aren't needed. Ya just gotta link all the chapters on one thing. No fancy name or banner or finalized title for my page e.e
    But that's boring.

    And Edelina isn't new, lol. Maybe if we ever talked on WLM :P
    Maybe if my computer actually had the power to support it :P

    I was mostly joking. I figured it was the disease thing once I read it as well.
    Fair enough.

    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    Well, I finished Chapter 9. Shouldn't be long before I post it here. :] As long as the lags don't bore me out and I stop trying to post... Anyway. Possible spoils: Eon is in =D

    ...I said possible, right? XP
    Working on the 10th, idk when I'll finish it. XD
    OMGPOSTITPOSTITPOSTIT!!!

    Eon I think Golde meant that for you, but whatever. XD But yeah, mine hasn't got a title/banner too. Unless you want to be pretty picky about it.
    Mehh, no banner = boring archive page. IMO.

    Well... Now we know why everyone won't go bankai to stop Aizen. Because it's not their job. They're probably buying popcorns while waiting for Ichigo to face Aizen now... =\
    That is quite possibly the most idiotic thing I've ever heard.

    Anyway, new chapter~

        Spoiler:- Chapter 2: The Stuff of Nightmares and Fanfiction:


    A nice little cliffhanger to keep you guys interested, as it could be a while until my next chapter.

        Spoiler:- Author's Notes:


    Everything cool? Feedback is greatly appreciated

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    More Kubo answers from an interview. Explains all the characters who do jack crap.

    Q. How long does it takes for you to create a character?
    A. It doesn't take time. When I do my daily activities characters idea one by one suddenly spring into my head. Then it's all about the timing when will I put them on top of the paper.

    Q. Why Kyouraku didn't go Bankai? If he get serious he might defeat Aizen!
    A. Shunsui's appeal is not to defeat Aizen. But I let the readers think that 「If he goes Bankai he might be stronger than Aizen」

    Alright, that last answer was just stupid.
    He knows when to put characters in the manga but he doesn't know how to use them effectively...
    I mean seriously, some of the espada die too quickly...You know the ones...

    And Kubo has just admitted that he is pretty much trolling the readers with the bankai thing...

    Parent: Why is your answer sheet completely blank?
    Child: My appeal is not to pass the test. But I let the teacher think that if I had answered, I might pass the test.

    What the hell man?
    Check here for my Gijinka Project. (Alright, so I'm not good with advertising, is that such a big problem?)
    Check here for my comic series, Fettuccine and Friends. (Well, at least I'm trying to advertise.)

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    well i didn't come through with the promised chapter. but whatever.

    Eon: good story. i can see this going to a very good place. and it didn't sound as jammed together as you made it seem.

    well that's all i got to say. taking my break now. expect me back with a new chapter in 7-10.
    One mischievous little woodpecker
    Another day, pecking your holes
    Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
    The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
    Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
    Your food with toxins rife
    Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
    Oh, sad little woodpecker
    Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks

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    I think I'll just review Eon's fic.

        Spoiler:- Chapter 2: The Stuff of Nightmares and Fanfiction:
    YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
    Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
        Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:


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        Spoiler:- Chapter 2:


    idk, the flashback looks fine as it is.

    Quote Originally Posted by Jinchuuriki Hunter View Post
    He knows when to put characters in the manga but he doesn't know how to use them effectively...
    I mean seriously, some of the espada die too quickly...You know the ones...

    And Kubo has just admitted that he is pretty much trolling the readers with the bankai thing...

    Parent: Why is your answer sheet completely blank?
    Child: My appeal is not to pass the test. But I let the teacher think that if I had answered, I might pass the test.

    What the hell man?
    Yeah.. I think we all agreed that he's a troll anyway. This just confirmed it. Maybe he'll have a BIG twist in the end, who knows..

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    I'm not sure it was appropriate to put pineapple head a sentence before Nemu died.
    You're right it wasn't. And I just noticed Nemu died after that. Totally missed the last part of the sentence. o.o

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    Just... wow. Too many people died now, I think.
    Well, it was mentioned in the prologue wasn't it? o.o That the only remaining survivors are Rukia, Hanataro and Hitsugaya?

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    Damn it, I wanted to know who it was.
    Ditto.
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    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    I think I'll just review Eon's fic.
    Ya know, I'd normally wait to reply to your review, but hell, at this rate, I'm not going to be getting any others for a few days.

    Ah, yes, fanfiction. Made of damn scary stuff.
    Scariest stuff on the planet, man. Have you ever tried to do a search on FF.net for either Grimmjow or Ichigo? *shudders* Never again.

    Definitely got my personality on the dot, there.
    Excellent. Then I'm right on target for my next chapter Which I've been writing all day and I expect to have up sometime this week >.>

    That's a DAMN COOL outfit!
    I literally fell out of my chair and started rolling on the floor laughing.

    Ah, so with Hitsugaya being the Head Captain, Golde becomes the Captain of the 10th Squad, taking Rotrum's place since he's now Hitsugaya's Lieutenant.
    Exactly.

    Ah, this'll be interesting...
    Usually starts out with a good hook.

    Hmm, that definitely seems like something that Mayuri would do, and that would work. I'm also glad that they both died (even if they are 2 of my favourite Captains D8) and more people need to die in Bleach >.>
    Yeah, it's more or less the first thing that made any semblance of sense.

    Oh, wow, a trap. That is such a piss take that it.
    Yeah, Aizen would do something sneaky like that.

    Woo! Grimmjow!
    *throws a party and invites the Bleach cast*

    I can see Grimmjow saying that. Though doesn't he say Kurosaki?
    Yeah. He alternates is the dubbs, so I just put it. Meh, w/e.

    Aww, Yachiru died? D8. What about Nel? She was with Yachiru, right?
    Nel is fine... well, I won't say fine, but she's not dead.

    That was DAMN COOL.
    *goes on an ego trip* Oh wait, that's Duac's job...

    D8 Byakuya~
    :'''(

    I'm not sure it was appropriate to put pineapple head a sentence before Nemu died.
    Highly innapropriate, but I'd been working for about four hours before I tried revising, so cut me some slack.

    Just... wow. Too many people died now, I think.
    I actually agree with you. That's what I meant when I said that it was jammed together. But, such is writing when you have a limited ammount of space and time. Unlike you >.>

    Well, at least if Ichigo killed Aizen, at least he died too.
    Heh.

    That definitely seems fitting for what we'd do... Though I'd like to think we'd be more organised. Also, Luppi Kenpachi. Awesome name.
    Thought so. And thanks, but since she's the 11th Squad Captain, that had to be her name, lol.
    I don't think so >.>
    Judging from what I've seen, never mind what I've heard, without Golde around, crazy crap happens. So, it makes sense to make us all a bunch of misfits under Hitsugaya's command when he's not paying attention.

    Ah, yes, a frustrated Hitsugaya is always fun to watch.
    Gotta love it when Shirou-chan starts throwing a temper tantrum.

    Were these tests mentioned in the first chapter? I don't remember >.>
    No, but they're about something very important to the plot that will be revealed next chapter.

    This... idk, it seems really weird. You send a Spirit Wave Transmission to talk with your enemies?
    No, you use it to send a series of demands, and if they don't agree, declare war.

    8O.
    So, definitely epic and creepy enough.

    Damn it, I wanted to know who it was.
    You'll find out in the next chapter anyway...

    Idk, I'm not very surprised that the man is Seijuro's brother. It seemed predictable with Seijuro's reaction.
    How? Out of all the people it could be, why would you instantly jump to the conclusion it was his brother? That doesn't make sense to me.

    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    Hahah. It's that golden rule. When you say what else could go wrong, you'll find out what else can go wrong.
    Bingo, lol.

    lol. I think it'd be great if you can include him muttering formula to solve the Rubik, then someone (like Zam) interrupting and saying, "What, you'd need a formula for THAT? Aren't you the 12th Squad Captain?" then ILPy spouting a whole lot of stuff on Rubik like (quoting Wiki XD)     Spoiler:


    Then the person who started that just gaping.
    After reading all of that, all I could do was stand there gaping XD

    Wait.. Didn't Tesla died when Kenpachi slashed him? o.o
    No, in the chapter after Nnoitra died, there was a scene where he was crying. Idk about the anime, though.

    That was the most amusing reaction in the room. XD
    Kida always bring the laughs. And the artwork. And sometimes the firey, lightning-y, windy, watery, and nature-y death. By a paintbrush. o.o

    I wonder who could they be.....
    Next chapter.

    idk, the flashback looks fine as it is.
    Mehh, see my responses to ILP's review.

    Yeah.. I think we all agreed that he's a troll anyway. This just confirmed it. Maybe he'll have a BIG twist in the end, who knows..
    It had better blow Harry Potter out of the water if he wants to save his trolling ass >.>

    You're right it wasn't. And I just noticed Nemu died after that. Totally missed the last part of the sentence. o.o
    See my response to ILP on this.

    Well, it was mentioned in the prologue wasn't it? o.o That the only remaining survivors are Rukia, Hanataro and Hitsugaya?
    Yep~

    POST YOUR NEXT CHAPTER, ARC! PLEASE! IMMA firin mah lazor BEGGIN' YA!
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    @ILP: Don't worry, it'll be governed by scientific principles. It's a tommy gun, for cryin' out loud! :P Oh, and those who say it's based of Starrk's Los Lobos, you're wrong. I got the idea from Scarface. Is'nt his Los Lobos a pair shotguns?

    @kurusai: Oh, it will be! It's ruled by scientific principles! Expect alot of physical and possible chemical principles.

    @Golde: Congrats on the new computer! My laptop needs a little servicing. It's hinges are a little loose.

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    ^Los Lobos is a pair of machine pistols, but his Cero Metralleta technique (literally Cero Submachine Gun) is pretty similar to what you're planning on doing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    lol. I think it'd be great if you can include him muttering formula to solve the Rubik, then someone (like Zam) interrupting and saying, "What, you'd need a formula for THAT? Aren't you the 12th Squad Captain?" then ILPy spouting a whole lot of stuff on Rubik like (quoting Wiki XD)     Spoiler:


    Then the person who started that just gaping
    I don't know what's scarier. The fact that I nodded along, understanding it, or that I actually want that to be added now XD.



    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    Well, it was mentioned in the prologue wasn't it? o.o That the only remaining survivors are Rukia, Hanataro and Hitsugaya?
    I don't remember. Though Eon says yes.

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Scariest stuff on the planet, man. Have you ever tried to do a search on FF.net for either Grimmjow or Ichigo? *shudders* Never again.
    Have I? What do you think I do in my spare time besides maths?


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Excellent. Then I'm right on target for my next chapter Which I've been writing all day and I expect to have up sometime this week >.>
    Yay~


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Yeah. He alternates is the dubbs, so I just put it. Meh, w/e.
    Ah, okay. I didn't know that.


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Nel is fine... well, I won't say fine, but she's not dead.
    Well, at least she's alive.

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Highly innapropriate, but I'd been working for about four hours before I tried revising, so cut me some slack.
    XP


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    I actually agree with you. That's what I meant when I said that it was jammed together. But, such is writing when you have a limited ammount of space and time. Unlike you >.>
    Bwuahaha


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Judging from what I've seen, never mind what I've heard, without Golde around, crazy crap happens. So, it makes sense to make us all a bunch of misfits under Hitsugaya's command when he's not paying attention.
    Haha, true.


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    No, but they're about something very important to the plot that will be revealed next chapter.
    Ah.


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    No, you use it to send a series of demands, and if they don't agree, declare war.
    Can you explain it a bit more indepth, please? I'm really interested in it now.


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    How? Out of all the people it could be, why would you instantly jump to the conclusion it was his brother? That doesn't make sense to me.
    Well, it has to (obviously) be someone that Seijuro knows very well, as well as have to have develop a hatred for. Following the stereotype of most fanfictions, a sibling is the most common. Though it could just as well have been a close friend, or maybe someone that killed his friends/family or something.


    Quote Originally Posted by Emperor Giratina View Post
    @ILP: Don't worry, it'll be governed by scientific principles. It's a tommy gun, for cryin' out loud! :P

    @kurusai: Oh, it will be! It's ruled by scientific principles! Expect alot of physical and possible chemical principles.
    That's definitely good. Plenty of physics.
    Just as long as it's clearly different to Starrk's resurreccion, it's fine.
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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY SOTAICHO-SAMA =D


    Not that he's here though.... XD

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Kida always bring the laughs. And the artwork. And sometimes the firey, lightning-y, windy, watery, and nature-y death. By a paintbrush. o.o

    POST YOUR NEXT CHAPTER, ARC! PLEASE! IMMA firin mah lazor BEGGIN' YA!
    By a paintbrush. Yes. XDD

    You really want to see yourself huh... :P

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    I don't know what's scarier. The fact that I nodded along, understanding it, or that I actually want that to be added now XD.

    Can you explain it a bit more indepth, please? I'm really interested in it now.
    ...You understood that? Woah XD I didn't

    I think... it's like a ransom call, just via spirit transmission instead of a phone. XD If they agree to pay, the kidnapped person is released, if they don't, or contact the police, the kidnapped get killed. XD;

    Uhhh, since you're really on it-


        Spoiler:


    There. Make sure you heavily review and comment and critique and whatever else read it. XP
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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    ...You understood that? Woah XD I didn't
    Yeah. I had to read over it again once, just to make sure, though.

    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    I think... it's like a ransom call, just via spirit transmission instead of a phone. XD If they agree to pay, the kidnapped person is released, if they don't, or contact the police, the kidnapped get killed. XD;
    No, I mean how it actually works. Like do they record it (in real time), turn it into Spirit Transmissions, send it to us, and then we turn it back into electricity/whatever and put it on a screen?

        Spoiler:


    EDIT: How could I forget,
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY GOLDE~
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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY SOTAICHO-SAMA =D
    Happy Birthday Golde! *bakes a cake*

    Not that he's here though.... XD
    Oright. *devours cake*

    By a paintbrush. Yes. XDD


    You really want to see yourself huh... :P
    YES! Actually, it was because I wanted something else to read besides my own fic :P Proofreading gets dull after a while...

    I think... it's like a ransom call, just via spirit transmission instead of a phone. XD If they agree to pay, the kidnapped person is released, if they don't, or contact the police, the kidnapped get killed. XD;
    Right.

        Spoiler:- Arc Chapter 9:



    There. Make sure you heavily review and comment and critique and whatever else read it. XP
    Done.

    @ILP: To answer your question, look at episode 142. The Hitsugaya Advance Team is using reiha, or spirit waves, to communicate with the Soul Society in that episode.
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    That was quick. XD

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    No, I mean how it actually works. Like do they record it (in real time), turn it into Spirit Transmissions, send it to us, and then we turn it back into electricity/whatever and put it on a screen?
    Oh. I never thought you meant how it works technically. XD

    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    Massive paragraph.

    Ah, water, so useful.

    We need to see more Zachiru (and Zanpakutou spirits in general).
    >.< Maybe I should split them some more. lol.

    Yes, yes it is =D

    dw. There'll be a chapter where they'll do the main talking and we just interrupt here and there

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Happy Birthday Golde! *bakes a cake*

    Oright. *devours cake*
    rofl. XDD

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    XDD His hat.
    Yeah XD I must admit, I got that idea from MC's fanfic when ILPy said "That's as much chance as you not wearing that hat". XP

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    I could totally see this. It's what happens everytime Hitsugaya and Ukitake talk XDD
    Hahah, I totally forgot about them. XD Yeah, I guess.

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    I would never say " 'Tis I." Never. I don't talk like that.
    I didn't know
    And 'Tis I' was a dialogue I saw somewhere, but can't remember who said that. I found that rather funny. XD

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    That simple fact probably saved his life. If he was going at full speed, I'd have used my pivot techniques and gutted him like a fish.
    Your pivot technique, how?

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    And Arc saves the day


    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    You're forgetting Zameric. His sword rain is technically part of his Zanpaktou, so I can't absorb it. It's the same story as with your water attacks.
    Oooh, yeah, I forgot. XP Should include that in.. *don't want to be rained with blades from Zam*

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    Wait, I though Jin was with ILP?
    Yap. When I said missing, I meant he wasn't there yet. XD



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    @Arc: My pivot technique as in what my first move was against Kariya in Chapter 1 of my fic. The faster you move, the harder it is to avoid.

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    Rotrum's *Lost Count* Blizzard Library


    Prologue
    http://serebiiforums.com/showpost.ph...postcount=3841

    Chapter One
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    I have that effect on most men for some reason. no wonder i've been feeling lesbian lately >.>

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    Quote Originally Posted by I like Pokemon (...) View Post
    I don't know what's scarier. The fact that I nodded along, understanding it, or that I actually want that to be added now XD.
    I'll add that in my fic. XD

    Quote Originally Posted by Eon Master View Post
    @Arc: My pivot technique as in what my first move was against Kariya in Chapter 1 of my fic. The faster you move, the harder it is to avoid.
    If the opponent flash steps behind your back, you turn your sword around, like that?

    Rotrum - I have an S ranked crystal? =D YAYYY
    So, what happens when the crystal is extracted from the subject's body? Does the human lose his powers?

    Though, I think you'd better make your page somewhere else where it doesn't get mixed with a chapter. A post has a character limit and putting in a chapter in your archive... well, you might run out of space.

    And you can kinda use the word Prologue, Chapter 1, 2 etc as the link. There's no need to post the link and put the chapter number beneath it. It looks kinda messy, the way you do it.

    e.g
    [URL="http://www.google.com"]*Chapter Number Here*[/URL*]
    would look much neater. But whatever floats your boat :P


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    Quote Originally Posted by arceus03 View Post
    I'll add that in my fic. XD
    I sorta added a bit in this next chapter, lol.

    If the opponent flash steps behind your back, you turn your sword around, like that?
    Well... it's like this.

    *opponent attacks from behind*
    *I spin my sword around and spin into their attack*
    *Their momentum takes them into the path of my sword (and the faster they are, the harder it is to stop) and my arm's speed takes the sword into their plane of motion*

    The only way to dodge it is pretty much what Kariya did, by throwing yourself completely to the ground with everything you have to avoid the sword, and even then, sometimes it wouldn't work completely. Not to mention that it leaves them totally vulnerable and the spin lets me set up a second attack. It's based on real martial arts moves, and since I'm a Martial Artist irl, I know how to do it.

    Anyway, new chapter...

    Yeah, I basically did a whole 12 Page Chapter in a day and a half XD
    I've been on a writing hype the whole time. Anyway, despite my best efforts to keep it light, the chapter ended up pretty heavy. A fair bit of swearing mostly on my part >.>, somebody from the last club dies, and the Soul Society is one Captain short with a lot of discontent and secrets revealed by the end of the chapter. Its title even comes from a song by Drowning Pool, and if you know them, they're not a happy band.

    In other words, if you're looking for sunshine to brighten up your day, stay as far away from this chapter as possible.

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    There... I think that's everything... *collapses and falls asleep*

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