Sup everyone....us to let you all know my birthday was on Thursday...and umm i havent watched any anime or manga lately because ive been in the field for a week ...thats why you guys havent heard from me.
I will be posting again later to comment on the manga and anime
later XD
Captain of Squad 5 Where Fire Rages on and Battles Are Won
So Join THE BLEACH CLUB
MC and Ilp were in shock, the hollow that seemed unstoppable was just defeat, by a giant heart shaped blast. The user of that attack, landing in a very graceful way, appeared in front of the two males. The sky was clear and the shinigami that attacked the hollow were lying unconscious on the ground.
The person was wearing a Squad two uniform, but it didn't hide the fact she was curved like a woman, only blues eyes and part fair skin could be seen, she stood around ILp's height.
"Who are -" before Ilp could ask, Hikari spoke.
"You and your companions are to be escorted to the Captains."
"Fine," Mc said dragging Ilp off.
Inside Squad 4, Ilp was being lead forcefully by MC to the room NL and Dac were in. Each step caused his grip to become more painful until...
"Let go, your hurting my wrist..."
"Fine."
"Whats wrong?"
"..."
"..."
"..."
"Answer me."
As the two walked along the white halls, looking for the room, they were silent for several minutes. As they were two doors away from their destination, MC finally spoke up.
"They waited so long to question us, what should we tell them, what will happen? What if they want to execute us!?"
"I don't think they will be that extreme, plus if they want yo kill us, we still have plan Omega."
The two stood outside of the room Dac and NL were staying, they herd a casual conversation the two have...
"Cow."
"Bastard."
"Fluffy."
"Nancy."
"How pleasant". Ilp said.
After a quick explanation of the situation the four left with Hikari to meet the Captains. The walk ,or Flash Walk to be more accurate, was quick.
The four were lead by Hikari, she left as the door closed, leaving the four to stand before the most powerful shinigami in the Soul Society.
"You four were found half dead in the Seireitei, how did you get here? Who are you all?" Yamamoto asked them calmly.
"We don't know how we got here." MC said calmly.
He took the role of being the group representative, they others seemed to go with it, as Ilp was busy looking around the room and Dac and NL seemed to glaring at each other...
"You all were found wearing not only a Shinigmai's uniform, but also a Captain's Hiyaori..." Yamamoto stated.
MC was famous for his quick thinking, in battle it saved lives and wiped out foes, it also earned him the disdain of the tenth Captain Rotrum, who held the record for being the fastest shinigami in anything.
With a serious face MC answered with the following "We are from another Universe in which we are Captains in our own Soul Society."
Silence filled the room, Byakuya and Unohana had their eyes closed and an unreadable expression. Komamura, Shunsui, Jushiro, and Kenpachi looked on, waiting for more information. Mayuri had an intrested look in his eyes and Hitsugaya and soi Fon looked at MC, like he was an idiot.
Yamamoto sat there and opened one eye and told them what he thought of the story..."Bullshit."
-
Senny and Muffin were swamped with all the work. After the battle, which was aptly name the Soul Apocalypse. The remaining shinigami went into a panic as soon as their Captains vanished. Since Senny and Muffin were the only two left of Lieutenant or Captain rank, everyone depended on them to run things.
"Squads 10 and 11 are fighting!" A Sinigami yelled.
"Squad 7 is trying to eat Squad 9!"
"Squad 4 is trying to Kill Squad 12!"
"Well STOP THEM YOU (Censored) IDIOTS! GOD< AS SOON AS YOUR CAPTAINS ARE GONE YOU ALL LOSE YOUR (Censored) MINES!" Muffin yelled in a rage.
Senny could on be seen by his hat, the paperwork covered his desk that badly.
"Central 46 is out of control with this paperwork!" Senny shouted.
"Lets ditch it and go back on vacation!"
"Nah...they probably try to kill us with more boring stuff..."
-
He opened his eyes, turning his head to gaze wistfully at the palace of this inner world, surrounded by a mist from the waterfall which flowed behind it. He knew his Zanpaktou Spirit was waiting in there for him; he turned his head the other way to see a water fountain with a miniature model of the temple in the middle, 3 fish swimming around it lazily, occasionally breaking the water’s surface.
He faced the sky again, which was just a pale expanse of nothing, mist clinging to everything, even the floor on which he lay.
He closed his eyes again, I’m coming home.
Um, Kida? Have you been reading my draft for my next chapter? This scene is so similar my first one, right down to the thoughts at the end. Creepy...
Btw, is this Senny's inner world?
He encountered said 5th Seat looking behind potted plants and under desks, as if you he was looking for…
“Cell, I’m over here…” Jin said exasperatedly, Cell always tried to find his Captain when he went ‘walk-a-bouts’ as Cell referred to them as, Jin called then Meetings.
Haha, truly funny. Exactly what I'd expect from the division of ninja's. I'd normally make a bad Naruto pun right now, but I'm not in the mood.
“Oh, Hello, Captain” he bowed as a sign of respect, “I was wondering where you had-“
“Captains meeting, Cell, now I’d appreciate it if you could do me a favour”
“Yes, Captain?!” Cell, always eager to please, asked
“I need you to keep all of the other seated members, including my lieutenant, should he return, away from my office, is that understood?”
Cell saluted and dashed off down the corridor, no doubt straight into the training dojo, to warn the others of their impending deaths should they disturb the Captain.
Um. Impending deaths? Jin isn't that bloodthirsty. Even if he is annoyed.
Arceus the Third had strolled straight into his office, closed the door, then opened the door again to let an arm out and fix a sign on the outside of the door. It had six words on it and a smiley face.
Please don’t make me hurt you.
O_O I's scarded...
Flash Step had chosen to stand in the middle of his dojo and scream at the top of his lungs for him to be left alone.
Lol, I can see it now...
"Hey, did you hear that all the Captains are shutting themselves awa-"
"ALL SQUAD 5 MEMBERS ARE TO LEAVE ME THE HELL ALONE!"
"0_o I have now..."
Master Charizard had enveloped himself in a ring of fire out in 6th Divisions grounds, acting as an efficient deterrent for any shinigami, seated or not, with Sapphire, his lieutenant, glaring at anyone who came to close and telling them to go about their effing day quietly.
Haha, sounds like those two.
Master Eon, ever the harassed Captain of 7th Division with the newly appointed Lieutenant Vizard, who was currently tearing every seated officer a new one, decided not to say anything at all, leaving him to be the distraction he so dearly wanted at the moment, flash stepping to the grassy bank of a river not too far away.
Ugh, I wish that wasn't me, but it's actually perfectly portrayed. >_>
Nice job though.
Preserving formatting is a pain, so no more.
Zameric had gone for a slightly more lengthy approach, telling his subordinates that he was not feeling his best and wished to converse with his Zanpaktou, effectively asking them to leave him alone until he had finished, thankfully, his seated officers were neither suicidal or stupid and took the hint.
Zam is sooo lucky...
Rotrum refused to do something so trivial as to explain his whereabouts to his officers, sitting cross legged on his Barracks roof, already in a state of deep meditation.
Sounds about right.
ILP, however, had gone back to his division’s lab and rummage through every single research report he had ever made on the bizarre substance, now known to contain a lethal virus. He found no clues as to an antidote of some kind, after all, how could there be an antidote to a sentient virus capable of draining a shinigami’s reiatsu to preserve its own life through blackmail? He settled himself on one of the Lab tables, concentrated hard; Zanpaktou laid out in front of him.
You've got pretty much all of us down really well.
Kusari, who hesitated to mention that he had yet to master conversations with his Zanpaktou, locked himself in his office, and closed his eye, humming slightly, to bring himself in phase with his Zanpaktou.
I have a feeling he'll be sitting there a while...
Dauc was not one for panic, but from what Kida had told him of this current disaster, this virus would affect him as well, and he certainly did not want to die just yet, he had so many things to do, many Kida would probably not approve of.
That made laugh, that's so like him, especially the last part.
Kida’s ears twitched with irritation, she was already nervous about going back into her Inner World after what happened the last time, without Dauc trying to bugger it up, it wasn’t his fault of course, not that she’d admit that but she was incredible tense at the moment.
Just so you know, Kida, the forums don't censor bugger. And I don't blame you for being tense.
Kida felt rather than saw where she was, the lake, or rather in the lake, of her inner world, she opened her eyes to see the light sun shining through the water above her, and she watched bubbles float upwards and burst as they reached the surface, she turned over to gaze at the bottom of the lake, which actually showed the cosmos, complete with stars, galaxies and the full moon. She turned sideways in this ethereal lake of the universe, to see the inverse of the cherry blossom tree above her, swimming towards it she could see it was still charred and brittle.
How the heck did you end up in the lake? And jeez, the tree is still in bad shape.
Then she saw a bright pink bud, just one, in the heart of the trees branches, a tiny little bud threatening to burst into full bloom, she smiled, reaching forward to stroke it as it gave out a wave of warm reiatsu.
Oh thank god, he's alive. I knew it all along...
Dauc registered his presence in the middle of his Inner World to be the centre of the mansion, he scowled, usually he turned up somewhere on the first floor. Trekking through the many rooms, corridors and staircases he eventually found a lone ball of golden energy. Getting closer he saw the full structure of his Zanpaktou, bright gold colouring, black crown, staff and all.
Of course, he would have a mansion with a Wasp King as his spirit world and Zanpaktou :P
He had walked out into the meadow with the cherry blossom tree lake only to see a female resembling the one in the tank. She was cupping her hands around a cherry blossom, a small light blue puppy at her feet, looking up at it too with large yellow eyes. He had tried to walk away without being heard, but the lupine ears had twitched in his direction, the girl turning her head slowly to face him, blue and black kimono shifting slightly in the breeze, she had smiled and then vanished.
He later found out that at the same time somewhere in Seireitei, a Shinigami by the name of Senbonzakura had achieved Bankai.
Your past, eh? I hope you tell us your history with Senny, that'll definitely be interesting.
The next time he had walked into the room where she was being held, there was pandemonium, the cylinder tank had shattered and the female shinigami was standing in the middle of the room, eyes pitch black with claw like nails, forearms drenched in blood, with slashes over her black crop top and skort [A/N; Skort = Skirt and Shorts all in one, think Envy from FMA outfit]
Whoa. Out of control.
Being a seated officer he had darted forwards to protect his, albeit worthless, Captain, stopping just short of her as her eyes returned to an unfocused blue, collapsing onto him out of shock and exhaustion. Coincidently, it seems, it wasn’t long after that until the Sotaicho heard about what had transpired within 12th Division destroying the programme and soon making Dauc Captain of 12th Division, the former Captain was never heard of again.
And how deserving he was of it.
Shuddering, she stood up and looked around, it was too still, where was the breeze, the grass did not rustle and the cherry blossom tree remained static, frozen.
*jaws music plays*
As if the presence lying in wait registered her growing unease, it pounced, its initial target was pushed back into the water by Dauc as he sensed the oncoming threat, having it collide with him instead, a clawed hand fastened around his throat, he instinctively closed his eyes from his attacker. Chi Rinpa was indignant; no-body attacked his master and expected to get away with it, diving towards the intruder, the newcomer turned to face the Zanpaktou Spirit, long, sharp canines bared in a maniacal grin, it snapped its dark blue wolf tail at Chi Rinpa, thwacking it away to one side. His poison seemingly ineffective, he fell to the ground, or would have down had he not been cushioned by a light blue fully grown dragon wolf, splayed out on the grass unconscious behind them.
Whoa, it's defeated both Zanpaktou spirits and masters in an instant? Yikes.
Dauc tried to pry the hand off his throat; it was difficult though when the intruder was currently resting on all fours on ones chest, further limiting his steadily reducing air supply.
It, or rather she, leaned down to whisper in his ear.
“Thank you for setting me free”
Oh shit.
Then the figure and its mass weighing down on his lungs disappeared. He rolled over drawing oxygen into his lungs, plunging his arm into the lake and fastening his grip around fabric. He hefted Kida out of the lake and pulled her up onto the grass again.
Why did it go? It could have killed all four of them first, so why?
“Ow ow ow ow ow,” Dauc had not grabbed fabric but in fact her ears, but at the moment he did much care, now rolling onto his back to stop his heart beating so fast. It was unnatural, he was never this scared, being a Captain he had many near death encounters, but why now of all times was his fight or flight instinct screaming at him to go for flight.
I don't want to laugh at your pain, but that was actually kind of funny. And when you're getting attacked by something that is coming from the spirit of your friend, and it's strong enough to kill both of you and both your Zanpaktou spirits, then your spiritual alarm system had better be going off or there's something wrong with you.
A small whimper to his left made him open his eyes and look over; Kida had Ryookami’s unconscious form in her lap, and she had picked up Chi Rinpa in her hands, delicately cradling him from further harm. Dauc nearly gave up on his brain completely; she hated wasps, why the sudden nurturing need. Then he remembered his attacker, as he painfully put two and two together, his attacker had seemed an awful lot like a ghost from their past, but what had Feral Kida meant by ‘setting her free?’ This didn’t make any sense and his head hurt too much.
Didn't see that coming at all. You are more caring than your cynical nature would suggest, it seems.
It suddenly came crashing down upon him as he realised that going into their Inner worlds was a huge mistake.
NL: Smiley signs are cool =D Though with a smiley on the notice, I'd probably write something like "Come in only if you want to be dissected" XD;
Spoiler:- idkwhyIputthisinspoilertags:
So that's why you asked me that question
I think I know the answer to Eon's question of them not killing the shinigami: they're trapping the 'real' owners in their own spiritual world, and went outside to create havoc, am I right?
MC - AWWWWW I wanna go to SS now =3 UNOHANA =D
Last edited by arceus03; 26th June 2010 at 8:46 AM.
MC; XD it sounds like absolute pandamoneum at the moment in your fic, plus you got me right, i would resort to petty name calling after my stock of colourful language had dissapated - but the amount of OC's are confusing me ten fold, theres too many.
Um. Impending deaths? Jin isn't that bloodthirsty. Even if he is annoyed.
No, but Cell wanted to make his point
Just so you know, Kida, the forums don't censor bugger. And I don't blame you for being tense.
Really? oh good =]
How the heck did you end up in the lake? And jeez, the tree is still in bad shape.
Because the lake whas where i was last time i left my Inner World
Your past, eh? I hope you tell us your history with Senny, that'll definitely be interesting.
I could if you like, i'll probably bring it in when-
*jaws music plays*
XD damn straight
Whoa, it's defeated both Zanpaktou spirits and masters in an instant? Yikes.
In fairness, they weren't expecting it as she doesn't give off reiatsu
Why did it go? It could have killed all four of them first, so why?
*winks*
Didn't see that coming at all. You are more caring than your cynical nature would suggest, it seems.
Are you calling me heartless? That's part of the problem which gets explained later
I think I know the answer to Eon's question of them not killing the shinigami: they're trapping the 'real' owners in their own spiritual world, and went outside to create havoc, am I right?
Hey guys, here is my next chapter.
sorry I havent been on much and replying much. I have a physics exam next week.
Anyway, enjoy
"What....just....happened?" Rotrum stuttered. He looked so bewildered that Arceus the Third actually patted him on the shoulder as a sign of affection. He looked around the captain's meeting room, taking in the new taint of blood. ILP was healing nicely though, his regeneration process almost completed.
"Why those three?" Seijuro was in a corner of the room chatting with Him. He shook his head in response, He had no idea. He paused for a moment and gazed upon the unconscious Kida, and suddenly smiled mischievously. Pulling a camera out from one of His pockets, He shifted Kida into awkward and possibly sexually suggestive positions and snapped pictures. He was going to make her blush beetroot red when she woke up once more.
Arceus the Third went over to Kida, and put her in a more appropriate position, and began to examine her. He took readings of her pulse, recorded any visible scars he could find, took note of how pale her skin was, and then he forced one of her eyes open to judge her pupils.
"What the!" he jumped back, like he had just been attacked with lightning. ILP's father was automatically at Arceus' side, looking slightly worried. Arceus had jumped back straight after taking one look at Kida's eyes, and in his whole life at Serebii, he had never known Arceus to jump back from anything.
"Her eyes... they are not there..." Arceus muttered. Arceus looked at His face, waiting for a reaction, He walked over to Kida and opened her right eyelid. Arceus had not been being overdramatic. There really were no eyes in the eye socket. Just an empty space. A tear left His eye. I will figure this out Kida, trust me, He thought to Himself.
"Master Charizard the fifteenth, captain of squad six, Ruler of the Fire region of Serebii..." ILP continued. As he said the full title of Master Charizard the fifteenth, He looked towards Kida, depression clear on his face.
"-eye's were strange," ILP finally concluded.
"What do you mean strange?" Seijuro questioned.
"Well, they were not human, they looked reptilian," ILP responded. The other captains all entered states of thought. This was indeed a strange case, not only did two captains behave abnormally, but one of the affected captains was the captain commander Golde.
"You are right son, I remember looking into Commander Golde's eyes as I asked her why she was dressed so..... provocatively, and they were green, Commander Golde's eyes are normally brown," He looked towards His son in wonder. Seijuro sat down crossed legged in a corner. Dre then asked a question that no one seemed to have thought of.
"Why those three? Why Kida, Captain-Commander Golde and Master Charizard the Fifteenth, captain of squad six, Ruler of the Fire region of Serebii, protector to those..." Dre commented looking around. All the other captains were in shock. It was rare enough that they heard Dre speak, let alone contribute to a conversation. The captain of squad five was of medium height. A rather muscular man, his looks alone made the ladies swoon, though when ready to battle, even the toughest of enemies felt a prick of fear. He was not the type of person anyone underestimated, and his silence just amplified his intimidation factor.
"Yes, that is a good question, why them? Why aren't all of us going crazy. What do they have in common?" Seijuro commented. The room remained silent.
"I have an idea, let's just go and search for them," Senbonzakura muttered, and in seconds he was gone. Dre followed suit without another comment. Rotrum and ILP left together (to His distaste). Seijuro and Him strolled out and eventually the rest of the captains had disappeared.
---
"Zachiru, Iroriryuu, lend me your strength," the little black dragon wheezed.
"Yes master," Golde and Master Charizard the fifteenth said in unison. They held hands, electricity surrounded Golde while fire covered Master Charizard the fifteenth. The little black dragon started to grow back to its former glory, absorbing the power of two of the most powerful people in all of Serebii.
---
"NO ZACHIRU! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" Golde yelled. She was stuck inside a cage, in her own head. What annoyed her even more was that everthing in her head was following one train of thought, one pattern. Normally, her inner world was a mass of contradictions. A football stadium painted pink, a swimming pool in the rain, a cold desert, a mudhut with a plasma screen TV. Right now it was a a desert. A hot, dry, wasteland of sand for miles around. She was looking at Zachiru, her beautiful zanpaktou, moving as if bound by puppet strings. Her green eyes glistened with tears, as she tried to struggle against what controlled her but could not.
Golde sighed heavily. She had to think of a way out of this. What if the other captains were involved as well? There had to be a cure to this madness that seemingly occured out of nowhere. She had to do a forbidden technique. She so hated breaking the rules, but right now she, as the captain commander, should not be controlled like a dummy. She did not have much time, she could feel her spiritual energy going down at an alarming rate. She wished she could see out of her own head, but it was like she could not open her eyes!
She started to hum. Zachiru was hers and no one else's. She was going to claim sovereignty.
---
Master Charizard the Fifteenth looked around his inner world. Turmoil and chaos were evident everywhere, from the crumbling rocks to the barren flat land. His inner world was a series of canyons, there was supposed to be no flat land. To top it off, he was in a cage, in his own inner world.
"IRORIRYUU! I COMMAND YOU TO STOP!" his voice echoed through the remaining valleys. He used the same voice he used to command his troops as a captain, and his people as a noble. It always worked, it never failed him, until this moment. He could see faint puppet strings attached to his dragon's body. Iroriryuu cried softly. He could see the tears fall down the scaly cheeks and cause erosion in the ground. Acid tears.
"Hm... thats new," Charizard commented to himself. He had to get out of here, he could feel his spiritual pressure draining, but he had no idea what was going on with the outside world.
---
"Kida, how do you feel?"
"Narcisse?"
"You called my name, been a while,"
"Where...what?"
"I don't know but I came back and found you in a cage,"
"Ah... Ryookami... strings?"
"Don't worry, Chi Rinpa sedated Ryookami. She can't go rogue now,"
"Do you remember?"
"Yeah..." He replied. She was referring to the day they met their zanpaktou spirits. They had been out training, practicing kido with all their might, however neither of them seemed able to land Hado number ninety. They had been taking a break when two kids walked up to them, both looking rather rough and uncouth. Kida had been worried about practicing in one of the poorer areas because she was worried some kids might come to harm them. She had given Him a smug look because she had been correct about the kids coming to harm them. He had smiled at her, letting the impish grin across His face reveal his deep pool of arrogance. She had then hit Him on the head. Very hard.
"Idiot," she had whispered into His ear. He had whispered something back about the loss of brain cells.
"What do we have here? Some little kids playing around with spell books," The taller of the two kids had sneered. Kida said nothing, her temper was not as quick in those days.
"Do you realise who you are speaking to? His Royal Highness, Prince..." He had began. Kida had shaken her head, He used to be so quick to fight for his pride.
"Are your fancy guards around to protect you? Do you want to scream for mummy?" the shorter of the two had finally jeered. Kida watched as He started an incantation for the blue fire crash-down. The two boys apparently had zanpaktous as each removed them from a sheath. Kida pulled hers out, glancing back at Him waiting for the spell to be completed.
"...wait at the far heavens, Hado number sixty-three!" He yelled out. Kida ducked as blue lightning flew out of His hands straight at their attackers. Since they were tired though, it had little effect. It did increase the bloodlust they spotted in the boys eyes. He swore. Kida rolled her eyes and ran to attack. As she clashed with one boy, He clashed with the other. He had unsheathed his dagger, and was basically just trying to avoid getting cut.
"*********************!" Kida screamed out a myriad of obscenities, bringing Him out of His flashback.
"Wake me up!" she commanded. He shook his head.
"If I wake you up, I wake Ryookami up, which means we get another rogue captain. What I do need to figure out is why you three?" He questioned.
"Why which three?" Kida asked. He filled her in on what had happened at the captains meeting.
"The creature absorbs abilities right, what if it only wants specific abilities?" Kida suggested.
"Draconic abilities.... fire... lightning," an epiphany had hit Him.
---
Seijuro wondered. He could not figure out why only those three.
Vizard watched his captain pace around the room, practically wearing a hole into the ground with his constant pacing. Up and down. Around and around. Eventually he got ticked off and just said, "Its a dragon. Look at the abilities of the ones its controlling!"
Seijuro looked at Vizard in a whole new light.
"Thank you so much Captain Blue!"
Vizard instead muttered "Disappear and reappear Kagebu."
His zanpaktou turned pitch black. Seijuro, recognising that as Vizard's zanpaktou released form jumped back.
"What are you doing Lieutenant Blue?"
Vizard rushed to attack, looking like a blood hungry demon. Seijuro unsheathed his zanpaktou, appeared behind Vizard, and stabbed him mercilessly. Then he realised what Vizard was attacking, it had not been him. He screamed as he was cut down mercilessly by the creature his lieutenant was trying to protect him from.
---
ILP had finished recovering. He and Rotrum were sitting down, having a nice cup of tea when all of a sudden, they heard a scream.
"Was that a girl?"
Last edited by Da14u.C; 26th June 2010 at 4:28 PM.
Because the lake whas where i was last time i left my Inner World
Ah. Ok then.
I could if you like, i'll probably bring it in when-
Yes, I think most of us would be interested to find out.
In fairness, they weren't expecting it as she doesn't give off reiatsu
Aha, I see.
Are you calling me heartless? That's part of the problem which gets explained later
No, no, it's just that you're a more caring person that you let people believe. God, now I feel like an ass. -_-
@Dauc: Just a nitpicky thing, I'd never just completely miss the pattern betweeen the Zanpaktou that had been affected. I'd have trouble with the details, probably.
Last edited by Eon Master; 26th June 2010 at 10:05 PM.
The two stood outside of the room Dac and NL were staying, they herd a casual conversation the two have...
"Cow."
"Bastard."
"Fluffy."
"Nancy."
"How pleasant". Ilp said.
XDD
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
Yamamoto sat there and opened one eye and told them what he thought of the story..."Bullshit."
That sure gave me a good laugh. But what will they do with us o.o
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
Senny and Muffin were swamped with all the work. After the battle, which was aptly name the Soul Apocalypse. The remaining shinigami went into a panic as soon as their Captains vanished. Since Senny and Muffin were the only two left of Lieutenant or Captain rank, everyone depended on them to run things.
"Squads 10 and 11 are fighting!" A Sinigami yelled.
"Squad 7 is trying to eat Squad 9!"
"Squad 4 is trying to Kill Squad 12!"
"Well STOP THEM YOU (Censored) IDIOTS! GOD< AS SOON AS YOUR CAPTAINS ARE GONE YOU ALL LOSE YOUR (Censored) MINES!" Muffin yelled in a rage.
Senny could on be seen by his hat, the paperwork covered his desk that badly.
"Central 46 is out of control with this paperwork!" Senny shouted.
"Lets ditch it and go back on vacation!"
Ah, poor Senny and Sapph... Must be hell.
Originally Posted by MasterCharizard15
...part 2 will come soon...*Recovers*
D8 I was wondering why the chapter seemed so short.
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
Hey guys, here is my next chapter.
sorry I havent been on much and replying much. I have a physics exam next week.
Anyway, enjoy
Good luck with your exam!
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
He paused for a moment and gazed upon the unconscious Kida, and suddenly smiled mischievously. Pulling a camera out from one of His pockets, He shifted Kida into awkward and possibly sexually suggestive positions and snapped pictures. He was going to make her blush beetroot red when she woke up once more.
XD irl, I don't think any of us would have let you get away with that XP
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
"Her eyes... they are not there..." Arceus muttered. Arceus looked at His face, waiting for a reaction, He walked over to Kida and opened her right eyelid. Arceus had not been being overdramatic. There really were no eyes in the eye socket. Just an empty space.
...Just wow.
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
"Master Charizard the fifteenth, captain of squad six, Ruler of the Fire region of Serebii..." ILP continued. As he said the full title of Master Charizard the fifteenth, He looked towards Kida, depression clear on his face.
Heh, sounds like me to say the whole name.
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
"NO ZACHIRU! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" Golde yelled. She was stuck inside a cage, in her own head. What annoyed her even more was that everthing in her head was following one train of thought, one pattern. Normally, her inner world was a mass of contradictions. A football stadium painted pink, a swimming pool in the rain, a cold desert, a mudhut with a plasma screen TV. Right now it was a a desert. A hot, dry, wasteland of sand for miles around. She was looking at Zachiru, her beautiful zanpaktou, moving as if bound by puppet strings. Her green eyes glistened with tears, as she tried to struggle against what controlled her but could not.
Golde sighed heavily. She had to think of a way out of this. What if the other captains were involved as well? There had to be a cure to this madness that seemingly occured out of nowhere. She had to do a forbidden technique. She so hated breaking the rules, but right now she, as the captain commander, should not be controlled like a dummy. She did not have much time, she could feel her spiritual energy going down at an alarming rate. She wished she could see out of her own head, but it was like she could not open her eyes!
She started to hum. Zachiru was hers and no one else's. She was going to claim sovereignty.
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Master Charizard the Fifteenth looked around his inner world. Turmoil and chaos were evident everywhere, from the crumbling rocks to the barren flat land. His inner world was a series of canyons, there was supposed to be no flat land. To top it off, he was in a cage, in his own inner world.
"IRORIRYUU! I COMMAND YOU TO STOP!" his voice echoed through the remaining valleys. He used the same voice he used to command his troops as a captain, and his people as a noble. It always worked, it never failed him, until this moment. He could see faint puppet strings attached to his dragon's body. Iroriryuu cried softly. He could see the tears fall down the scaly cheeks and cause erosion in the ground. Acid tears.
"Hm... thats new," Charizard commented to himself. He had to get out of here, he could feel his spiritual pressure draining, but he had no idea what was going on with the outside world.
Ah, I see. So they have absolutely no control over what's going on... hmm...
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
"*********************!" Kida screamed out a myriad of obscenities, bringing Him out of His flashback.
XDD
I didn't really like the sudden jump into the flashback very much. It's kind of like "storystorystoryrandomflashbackstorystory"
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
Vizard rushed to attack, looking like a blood hungry demon. Seijuro unsheathed his zanpaktou, appeared behind Vizard, and stabbed him mercilessly. Then he realised what Vizard was attacking, it had not been him. He screamed as he was cut down mercilessly by the creature his lieutenant was trying to protect him from.
Wow. So Blue tried to attack some thing, but his Captain attacked him thinking that Blue was going to attack Eon? That last sentence seemed kind of ambiguous (too many "he"s).
Originally Posted by Da14u.C
ILP had finished recovering. He and Rotrum were sitting down, having a nice cup of tea when all of a sudden, they heard a scream.
That imagery just made me lawl for some reason.
Last edited by I like Pokemon (...); 26th June 2010 at 7:39 PM.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Yes, I think most of us would be interested to find out.
Aha, I see.
No, no, it's just that you're a more caring person that you let people believe. God, now I feel like an ass. -_-
@Dauc: Just a nitpicky thing, I'd never just completely miss the pattern betweeen the Zanpaktou that had been affected. I'd have trouble with the details, probably.
Let me ask you something Eon Master :P
If I have been getting your personality, capturing it near perfectly, and then all of a sudden, in this chapter, you seem muddle headed and are making rush descisions without thinking, why arent you asking yourself, whats happenning with your character.
this is a total spoiler, but he was infected, but not being controlled. Your zanpaktou absorbs other zanpaktous abilities. In one chapter I had you absorb NL's fire abilities remember?
ILP - yes, Seijuro killed his lieutenant accidentally =)
and thanks for the GL wishes
If I have been getting your personality, capturing it near perfectly, and then all of a sudden, in this chapter, you seem muddle headed and are making rush descisions without thinking, why arent you asking yourself, whats happenning with your character.
this is a total spoiler, but he was infected, but not being controlled. Your zanpaktou absorbs other zanpaktous abilities. In one chapter I had you absorb NL's fire abilities remember?
ILP - yes, Seijuro killed his lieutenant accidentally =)
and thanks for the GL wishes
Wai-wai-wai-wai-, im DEAD?! Crap! Ah great, i got killed off. *sigh* atleast im not used as the comic relief character in this story..
Originally Posted by ILP
We're Mad.
Our 1st Squad Captain has an insane sweet tooth
Our 2nd Squad Captain is some super-ninja
Our 3rd Squad Captain is part wolf
Our 4th Squad Captain bakes cookies and cuts up anyone who makes him mad
Our 5th Squad Captain is some party-crazy army man
Our 6th Squad Captain is calm, prideful and pervy
Our 7th Squad Captain seems to be, barely, the only sane one
Our 8th Squad Captain is missing
Our 9th Squad Captain is a shy, respectful, boring and pervy
Our 10th Squad Captain hates some of our OWN captains
Our 11th Squad Captain is a sadistic maniac
Our 12th Squad Captain is an insane nerd
Our 13th Squad Captain is sleeping
If I have been getting your personality, capturing it near perfectly, and then all of a sudden, in this chapter, you seem muddle headed and are making rush descisions without thinking, why arent you asking yourself, whats happenning with your character.
I don't know, maybe because I'm currently running on about 10 minutes of sleep for the last three days -_-
Yeah, I should've noticed that.
this is a total spoiler, but he was infected, but not being controlled. Your zanpaktou absorbs other zanpaktous abilities. In one chapter I had you absorb NL's fire abilities remember?
Which makes perfect sense. And as NL's Ryookami is both a dragon and a wolf, it'd make sense that my wolf-spirit Zanpaktou would be infected next.
ILP - yes, Seijuro killed his lieutenant accidentally =)
and thanks for the GL wishes
Oh hey look guys, it's a color page!
And 98% of it is white! The hell sort of color page is this?
At least the grass looked stunning.
Tensa Zangetsu looks a lot like Ulquiorra.
Oh my god, I feel like I've become unable to actually praise Bleach for anything anymore...
...Kubo still has a pretty awesome fashion sense though (Referring to cover page).
Check here for my Gijinka Project. (Alright, so I'm not good with advertising, is that such a big problem?)
Check here for my comic series, Fettuccine and Friends. (Well, at least I'm trying to advertise.)
well here's the next chapter. ILP i've heard it mentioned before but never read it myself, but i played off the pervy nerd thing. if it offends you i'm sorry.
and before i write the next chap. i need tips on battle scenes.
Spoiler:- Chapter 5: To Each His Own:
]"I'm out." The second espada said standing from his chair. "My plan seems to be working so far. So I guess the rest of you should start picking your enemy."
"Master," Leaf spoke, "would you like me to stay?"
"If you want. I guess if you don't won't to fight yet just leave."
The other espada nodded to their fraccion, accepting the policy Zoma proposed. The hollows filed out one by one leaving seven fraccion and the ninth espadas. Four etheral windows appeared on the meeting table revealing the locations of the four soul reapers who made it into the compound.
Eve, the brunette fraccion, and the twin espada, Cra and Drin, were looking into the same portal. Running down a dimly lit corridor was a soul reaper with short, spiky, black hair.
"I want the sexy nerd!" Eve yelled causing everyone in the room to jump.
"Hell no! We want him!" The twins yelled in unison.
"Would you three shut the hell up?" Jenk asked from across the table. His slate blue eyes full of disdain. "I'll make it fair. I'm thinking of a number between one and ten."
"Four!" Cried Eve.
"Seven!" Screamed the twins.
"The number was five. Eve you get the nerd."
"Well then, bye bye girls. I've got a man to tempt." The brunette hopstepped, then sonido-ed away. Jenk quickly did the same towards Zameric's path.
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Ryuu was sprinting down the dimly lit hall. Sixty feet ahead a door opened on the right wall. He planted his feet and stared into the chamber. The light inside wasn't much better than in the hall. Hesitantly he entered.
"I've got a bad feeling about this," the captain muttered under his breath. The door he had entered through slammed closed. " Damn it. I knew it."
"Oh it's not all bad." The young man turned towards the ledge opposite him. No one was there. He was trying to make sense of the whole thing, he felt fingers running through the hair on the back of his head.
Schiffer spun quickly and locked eyes with a cute brunette. His eyes ran up and down her figure. She was void of hole or fragment, or so he could see.
"Who are you?" He demanded.
She disappeared from his line of sight. "My name's Eve." The words being whispered in his ear sent chills up his spine and caused him to blush. He couldn't deny that she was beautiful but the whole situation felt wrong.
"I must kill you." Ryuu firmly declared.
"No you don't. I'm a lover, not a fighter." The words were spoken so seductively. "C'mon Ryuu. Give into your temptation. You know you want me."
"Wait, how do you know my name?"
"I have the ability to see the true desire of my opponents. By doing this I can also read their mind. So come one Ryuu."
The Head of R&D in the Soul Society and captain of squad twelve was prized as the smartest soul reaper, able to figure complex problems with ease. Yet he never had a problem like this. Temptation vs. Rationality.
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Elsewhere, Jenk was leaning against a wall waiting for Zam to come passing by. The black haired Acorazado saw the captain approching. As the ninth captain passed Jenk swept Zam's feet with his sheath.
"What the hell?" Zameric picked himself up only to be met by a strong hand gripped around his neck.
"Kinda scrawny. Why the hell'd I pick you?" His grip released and the captain fell to the ground. His opponent was massive. He was at least 6' 9'' and must have weighed 270 pounds. It looked to be all muscle. Waist lenght black hair fell from his head.
"What do you mean 'pick'?"
"Master Zoma told us to pick our targets. Your nerdy friend is fighting one of Master Zoma's fraccion and the little boy is fighting two more of Master Zoma's."
"Ryuu and Blue. Damn." Zameric cursed. "Wait you kept saying 'Master Zoma'. Does that mean you're...?"
"Yup. I'm only a fraccion. A servent of the third espada. My name is Jenk Kelm and I'm your killer."
The captain jumped back. This won't be easy. He thought. "Well Jenk, I'm Zameric Kajiya and I'll be your killer."
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Seijuro had dropped to the ground with his back against a wall. It seem like the hallway would never end. He took a drink from the bottle of sake Jordan gave him on his last birthday.
"I need to get moving again soon." He groaned. "Man I hope this hall ends soon. I'm actually starting to get tired."
"Well you're not very enthusiastic. Are you?" An approaching voice chimed. A golden haired woman stopped next to the squad seven captain. He latched onto her outstreched arm and was pulled to his feet.
"Not when I've been running forever."
The woman giggled. "You're kinda funny. My name's Cada Hayros. And you?" Her hazel eyes showed no threat at all.
"Oh yeah, I'm Seijuro Arashi." His back straightened and he stood at attention.
"Heh heh. Easy soldier boy." She gave a light smile. "Mind if I..." she motioned towards the sake in his hand.
"Sure." He handed her the bottle. Cada threw her head back and began to drink, while simultaniously opening a door on the wall.
"Come in Seijuro." The blond stepped into the room. It was well lit and semi-large. In the center sat two black couches with a table in between. "Sit and I'll grab another bottle."
Seijuro plopped down on the soft cushion and waited for his host to return.
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Outside Blue and Ashido were drawing their zanpakuto.
"Disappear and Reappear, Kagebu." The sword of the young lieutenant grew a bit and turned pitch black.
"Nice sword kid. Guess it's my turn. Shake the Heavens and the Earth, Kurodaichi." The older reaper's sword grew in length. It became engulfed in a black aura and changed form. It reappeared as a black war hammer with silver studs.
"Here we go!" Blue yelled. The shadows of the trees around them formed into a pair of hands. "Grip." The hands wrapped around Claw. The hands moved in sync with the sword in Cameron's possesion. The hollow was repeatidly slammed into the ground.
"Ge ge ge ge ge!" It seemed being slammed into the ground was fun for the hollow. Claw spread his arms and dissipated the shadows.
Ashido's luck was just as bad. He was swinging at Fang who easily dodged his attacks. The hammer was too big and too slow to make contact.
In unison the hollows rushed the soul reapers, putting them into the wall of the compound.
"We have to come up with a strategy and work together." Ashido's face wasn't as calm as before. Blue had the same look.
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"Where do I want to go now?" Mizuhashi wondered. He entered a room filled with palatial marble pillars. He walked over and ran his hand up it. It was cold and smooth to the touch.
"Like em?" A young brunette man walked from behind a pillar just down the row from the captain. "I carved them by hand."
"All of them?"
"Yes."
"But there must be..."
"230."
"What?!"
"Yes. All by hand. One by one." The men were looking face to face. The brunette out stretched is hand. "Vello Marx."
The captain grabbed the hand of the hollow. "Mizuhashi Akira.
"Shall we get to it then?"
"Get to what?"
"Our battle. I'm hollow. You're a soul reaper. Our races have fought for centuries and I think it's time we do our part."
"Well how can I refuse such a generous offer?" Akira asked jokingly. Both drew their swords with a smile on their faces.
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"Looks like they all found a fight." Raya sighed.
"Yeah. I don't think we'll have to deal with the kid after this but that Ashido is helping him." Brak replied. "What's your opinion Zoma?"
"Personally I'm not so sure. They're all competent and can hold their own." He brushed his hair from his eyes. "I'm definatly gonna step in if Cada's about to be killed."
"Oooh. Someone's got a crush on Cada." Coba yelled. His white hair was flecked with red spots from a fresh torture.
"I do not." Zoma retorted, blushing a bit. "I'd step in for Leaf, Eve, Lakir or Raya just as quickly."
"I'm sure." Brak said sarcastically.
"Whatever. Screw you guys."
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"Golde you son of a *****! Where are they?" Kida growled, fangs showing. Her limbs had been weakly healed due to Akira's absence.
The captain commander, not wanting to get bitten, quickly surrendered his information. "They're in Hueco on a rescue mission."
"Goddam." Kida stormed out of the squad one barracks towards the home of Narcisse Dauc.
She burst through the wooden double doors of the mansion. A young man appeared in the next doorway.
Kida grabbed the front of his robes, "Garganta. Now."
well. comments greatly appriciated.
on an unrelated note: i'm getting a dog and i need names. suggestions anyone.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
ILP - yes, Seijuro killed his lieutenant accidentally =)
8O Would you do a Arrancar Encyopedia with Gin?
Sure. It would be interesting, to say the least.
Originally Posted by kusari
ILP i've heard it mentioned before but never read it myself, but i played off the pervy nerd thing. if it offends you i'm sorry.
Nah, it was fine. It wasn't very pervy, it was funny, and it seemed slightly realistic, so it's fine.
Spoiler:- Chapter 5: To Each His Own:
Originally Posted by kusari
"I want the sexy nerd!" Eve yelled causing everyone in the room to jump.
"Hell no! We want him!" The twins yelled in unison.
XDD You don't realise how much this made me LOL
Originally Posted by kusari
The Head of R&D in the Soul Society and captain of squad twelve was prized as the smartest soul reaper, able to figure complex problems with ease. Yet he never had a problem like this. Temptation vs. Rationality.
*Decided to cut that whole scene into one paragraph since not much happened*
It'll be interesting to see what decision I'll/Ryuu'll take... And I think Eve as an opponent best suits the most socially awkward person of the group.
Originally Posted by kusari
"Kinda scrawny. Why the hell'd I pick you?" His grip released and the captain fell to the ground. His opponent was massive. He was at least 6' 9'' and must have weighed 270 pounds. It looked to be all muscle. Waist lenght black hair fell from his head.
I was about to mention how Zam (in my head) isn't scrawny... But hell, with that height and weight, EVERYONE is scrawny.
Originally Posted by kusari
"Yup. I'm only a fraccion. A servent of the third espada. My name is Jenk Kelm and I'm your killer."
The captain jumped back. This won't be easy. He thought. "Well Jenk, I'm Zameric Kajiya and I'll be your killer."
Quite badass.
Originally Posted by kusari
"Come in Seijuro." The blond stepped into the room. It was well lit and semi-large. In the center sat two black couches with a table in between. "Sit and I'll grab another bottle."
Seijuro plopped down on the soft cushion and waited for his host to return.
It's a trap, isn't it. She'll come back with a poisoned bottle of sake (maybe to make him sleepy) or something like that. Whether or not he'll fall for it (using some epic deduction) is the question.
Originally Posted by kusari
"Where do I want to go now?" Mizuhashi wondered. He entered a room filled with palatial marble pillars. He walked over and ran his hand up it. It was cold and smooth to the touch.
"Like em?" A young brunette man walked from behind a pillar just down the row from the captain. "I carved them by hand."
"All of them?"
"Yes."
"But there must be..."
"230."
"What?!"
"Yes. All by hand. One by one." The men were looking face to face. The brunette out stretched is hand. "Vello Marx."
The captain grabbed the hand of the hollow. "Mizuhashi Akira.
"Shall we get to it then?"
"Get to what?"
"Our battle. I'm hollow. You're a soul reaper. Our races have fought for centuries and I think it's time we do our part."
"Well how can I refuse such a generous offer?" Akira asked jokingly. Both drew their swords with a smile on their faces.
I very much like Vello's character. He's one of those nice guys who you really don't want to kill, even though you have to, and he wouldn't want you not to.
Originally Posted by kusari
"I'm definatly gonna step in if Cada's about to be killed."
"Oooh. Someone's got a crush on Cada." Coba yelled. His white hair was flecked with red spots from a fresh torture.
"I do not." Zoma retorted, blushing a bit. "I'd step in for Leaf, Eve, Lakir or Raya just as quickly."
"I'm sure." Brak said sarcastically.
"Whatever. Screw you guys."
I quite liked this bit. It showed that even the villains teased each other and had were a bit silly.
Originally Posted by kusari
"Golde you son of a *****! Where are they?" Kida growled, fangs showing. Her limbs had been weakly healed due to Akira's absence.
The captain commander, not wanting to get bitten, quickly surrendered his information. "They're in Hueco on a rescue mission."
"Goddam." Kida stormed out of the squad one barracks towards the home of Narcisse Dauc.
She burst through the wooden double doors of the mansion. A young man appeared in the next doorway.
Kida grabbed the front of his robes, "Garganta. Now."
Well, I can't say I'm surprised that Da.c has a Garganta in his mansion, what with him the previous 12th Captain, and whatnot.
Originally Posted by kusari
on an unrelated note: i'm getting a dog and i need names. suggestions anyone.
Give him/her an epic ancient God name or something. Like Chronos or something.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
Nah, it was fine. It wasn't very pervy, it was funny, and it seemed slightly realistic, so it's fine.
it wasn't very pervy in this version. i had actually written another version but remembered the serebii rules. here she just tempts you, in the other it was worse.
Spoiler:- Chapter 5: To Each His Own:
XDD You don't realise how much this made me LOL
I knew it would.
*Decided to cut that whole scene into one paragraph since not much happened*
It'll be interesting to see what decision I'll/Ryuu'll take... And I think Eve as an opponent best suits the most socially awkward person of the group.
Well this fight is social awkwardness and the next is scientific.
I was about to mention how Zam (in my head) isn't scrawny... But hell, with that height and weight, EVERYONE is scrawny.
That's what i was going for.
Quite badass.
Indeed.
It's a trap, isn't it. She'll come back with a poisoned bottle of sake (maybe to make him sleepy) or something like that. Whether or not he'll fall for it (using some epic deduction) is the question.
Not a trap. no poison sake. but there is a twist.
I very much like Vello's character. He's one of those nice guys who you really don't want to kill, even though you have to, and he wouldn't want you not to.
Again, that's what i was going for.
I quite liked this bit. It showed that even the villains teased each other and had were a bit silly.
heh heh. comic relief.
Well, I can't say I'm surprised that Da.c has a Garganta in his mansion, what with him the previous 12th Captain, and whatnot.
he's one of the few that does have one. and the only one that would let kida use it.
Give him/her an epic ancient God name or something. Like Chronos or something.
its my neighbor's beagle puppies. i may take two, maybe six, more than likely one. I was thinking Apollo, God of the Sun.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
it wasn't very pervy in this version. i had actually written another version but remembered the serebii rules. here she just tempts you, in the other it was worse.
Oh? I'm now very interested in this version... perhaps a PM with the scene? XP
Originally Posted by kusari
Well this fight is social awkwardness and the next is scientific.
Ah, that's good. I'm interested to see what science I shall bring into the fight!
Originally Posted by kusari
Not a trap. no poison sake. but there is a twist.
Hmm... Well, I doubt I'll be able to get it out of you, so I'll just wait for your chapter.
Originally Posted by kusari
its my neighbor's beagle puppies. i may take two, maybe six, more than likely one. I was thinking Apollo, God of the Sun.
Ooh, Apollo is also a very good name. Reminds me of Ra.
In other news... err... there's less than 3 weeks of school for me! 8D8D8D8D8D8D
Last edited by I like Pokemon (...); 28th June 2010 at 8:27 PM.
YOU JUST LOST THE GAME!
Click HERE to be rickrolled... c'mon, you know you want to.
Spoiler:- I HAVE DEFIED ALL MATHS AND LOGIC!:
A = B
A^2 = AB
A^2 - B^2 = AB - B^2
(A + B)(A - B) = B(A - B)
(A + B) = B
A + B = B
B + B = B
2B = B 2 = 1
ILP: you're right. the club is kinda dead right now. you're also right in thinking you won't get the twist out of me but i can say you will be utterly surprised. and as for the original scene, if i feel like retyping it you will get it. i don't save my writing so i would have to retype the scene from memory.
next chapter will be put off until next week because, sorry in advance NL, from friday to monday i'll be celebrating my country's split from the tea drinking *******s known as the british, with massive amounts of explosives. again NL sorry.
interesting thing i found: this picture of ichigo's half hollow mask which, oddly enough, looks a bit like this a killswitch engage album cover.
Last edited by kusari; 28th June 2010 at 10:34 PM.
One mischievous little woodpecker
Another day, pecking your holes
Ruining the woods, tree wrecker
The angry old forest god turned your poor beak into a poison knife
Poor little wood pecker, your nesting holes are all tainted
Your food with toxins rife
Touch your friends, and they all will die falling at your feet
Oh, sad little woodpecker
Poisonous tears, shining brightly, as they stream down your cheeks
Hay Guys, guess what.. Buuuuh, buuh buh buuuh..BUH BUH!! Chapter 1 is here! Part 1 anyway, and don't expect part 2 anytime soon. . Woo.
so yeah. That is all. Btw, read the author's note's below before commenting on it, if you want to.
Spoiler:- Looks like we have testing to do..//Chapter 1, part 1:
The blue-haired boy awoke with a start. Sitting upright in the 4th Squad divisions. He looked around, not recognizing a thing. His eyes widened, seeing all the worried faces around him. "Who are you people? Who am I? Where am I? Why am I here?". Mixed emotions played across their faces. Fear, worry, pain, panic, some of them looked down with a grim look, other's turned away, and some simply stared, awestruck. He tried to recall something, anything.. "Why..Why can't I remember anything? SOMEBODY TELL ME!". The cry rang out, all through the seireitei.
All was alone. A sub-concious thought reminded him this was a hospital of some sort. But he didn't really care. "Well? Tell me dammit! TELL ME!!". He yelled, he raged, he was angry, sad, and confused. No one could help him, no one could give back lost memories.
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The man resided in the dark room, blank and simple, a plate-glass window covering one wall of the room. On the other side of the window resided a almost identical room. In there, resided a hollow. With a snap of his fingers, a green-haired man entered the room. Looking around his 20's, blank eyes with no pupil, and a dull-lifeless look, he turned his head torwards the man. He brought his head up to the small device on his ear, his voice ringing through the room containing the other man. "Yes, Master Arika? Shall we start the expirement?". Arika stood up from the chair he was sitting in. His long brown hair messed into a unkempt hairstyle. Everything about him ringed uneasy, from his never-moving smile which sometimes turned crazy. His maniacal laugh. And his voice itself rung eary and strange.
Arika laughed, responding to his scientist. "Yes, Folle. Begin.". With a sigh, Folle took a thin and glistening sword from his deep black labcoat, easiliy holding down the hollow, not even of the menos grandes level, to the ground. He took the sword, muttering something that sounded like a release. The sword started rapidly shifting shapes between different hospitalistic objects, syringes, needles, and hospital equipment. It finnaly settled on a needle. Folle took it, injecting it into the top of the hollow's hole. Waiting for it to sink in. The beast started shrinking, finnaly settling into a humanoid shape, growing deep black hair. A sizzling sound appeared, and almost instantly along with it, a continous roar of pain. The mask of the hollow completely sizzled off, burning his face and leaving a almost human body, but a large hole in the middle of it's abdomen. The thing stood up, "My Name is Viruu Sakaho. I agree to work with you, I will not be commanded, but a partnership can be accepted. " Arika tilted his head from the other room, a maniacal and insane laugh ringing out. "Ahaha...AHAHAHAH! It's finnaly done!". Folle Selliny was pleased that his expirement had worked for his master, they would soon rain supreme, but one thought struck his mind. "Sir, What about the blue-haired boy we expiremented on? Even after we sent our failed arrancar after him, he was knocked out, he woke up not 10 minutes later, thrashed around, we had to knock him out once again. Even after we were expirementing on him, he used the powers we gave him to blast through, break out, even when we thought he was under our control, he destroyed half of my lab and escaped. What should we do of him?". Arika froze, then, a quick of pure anger broke out across his face. He broke through the glass, stepping through, and gripped Folle by the neck. "Never question my judgement, that boy is an anomalie. A failed test. Nothing to care about. ". With that, he threw aside Folle against a wall. "Now get back to work, you worthless piece of trash."
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Thing's went along quickly, yet painfully at the same time. Experts had been brought in to explain everything to him, who he was, what he was, why he was here, his rank, everything. They told him about how they had found him, brutally wounded with tell-tale signs of a hollow's cero marks on him. After asking what a cero was, and what an arrancar was, everyone looked shocked, and completely stunned. The mood drooped lower. He had been demoted for a while, and sent to a rehabilitation center in Squad 4, everyone was stunned that after 6 months, most of his old bloodlust and personality had returned, and almost all of his fighting skill had been brought back. Everyone was so stunned, he had come back out almost as normal as he was before, everyone so proud (well, as proud as they could be of Cameron..) that anyone could rehabilitate that fast. Thing's had been brought back to normal, he had been given back his Lt rank, re-achieved his old mastery of his zanpaktou, and everything seemed like it was going to be ok. But, The Seretei was worried, and still looking out for the individuals who outside the soul society would have the power to erase someone's memories so..completely.
Cameron sighed, he had to get along with it sometime. He pulled out the rubix cube he had stolen from Ryuu. He had tried cleaning off the blood as best he could, but after he had..uh..'borrowed' it, he had gotten in a HUGE fight with Seijuro. (Waffles will always be better then pancakes! ALWAYS!) He shunpoe'd along to the Squad 12 Division Barracks, walking in. He paused for a second, what was that reiatsu? It was quite a tad dark. Hopefully Ryuu wasn't in a bad mood. He didn't need that a moment, not with the rubix cube and all. A thought struck his mind. Why use the normal entrance? Why not spice up Ant's day a little? He quickly shunpoed to the top of the roof, and raised up his sword and..
"Ow!"
"Hell!"
"Crap!"
"Traps in the ceiling, really?!"
"AAAH! INTERNET MEMES!"
As a dazed and injured Blue lay in quite in akward lump on floor, Ryuu looked, (emotionless as ever I might add) with a raised eyebrow.
"Oh, Surreeeee Cam, trying to break through the ceiling of a high-developed sciene lab would be the easiest task in the world! Good job. Your lucky you didn't die, or worse..." Ryuu stated with a sarcastic tone.
As Cameron stood up, with a glare, he threw the rubix cube in Ryuu's face, then proceeded to pull out his zanpaktou.
"Yah yah, too bad-" Ryuu's eyes widened, realizing the stance; "But we're fighting, and if you say no, i'll MAKE you." Cameron then proceeded to start charging, Ryuu dissapearing then reapearring behind him, Cameron's sword instinctly finding it's way behind him, blocking the slash. The sadistic grin had already begun. "Sorry Senor Pacifist, I don't take kindly to sneak attacks". As he muttered something, the blade turning pitch black, Ryuu's eyes widened a moment too late, before realizing, "Ah cra-". The sentenced never finished, as Cameron in Ryuu's shadow, slicing him in the back. "HAHAHAH! SO FUN! SO FUN! THIS IS SO FU-". Cameron's eyes glazed over, and then...
It happened.
He started screaming, white bone substance crossing his face, half of his face being covered by a..mask. One horn curving sideways and back, almost as if a bandlet meeting halfway across the side of his head, with a blue stripe running across the middle, and a half grin, (due to the half mask) with large teeth appearing. His eyes turned black. Ryuu quickly reacted, taking a syringe out, after some extreme struggling from Cameron, and the rest of the mask forming, he fell to the ground. Ryuu raised his eyebrow, "Well, looks like we have some testing to do. " He started dragging Cameron by the hand, giving an almost akward sight as if Cameron was a teddy bear.
Spoiler:- Author's Notes:
Now you understand why he had to lose his memory. he can't go learnin how he got a mask. and neither can you. .
Indeed. blue DID try to break through the ceiling. [s]god knows why..*whistle*
For all of you who sent me profiles, im really really sorry your not in yet. i'll get back to you sometime.
Yes, i understand, this chapter is REALLLLYYYYY BADDD AND SHORRTTT. I ARE SORRY. DX. i just felt bad that i hadn't posted chapter 1 in forever, so i separated it into 2 parts, and made this horrible piece of demonic evil. :c.
Originally Posted by ILP
We're Mad.
Our 1st Squad Captain has an insane sweet tooth
Our 2nd Squad Captain is some super-ninja
Our 3rd Squad Captain is part wolf
Our 4th Squad Captain bakes cookies and cuts up anyone who makes him mad
Our 5th Squad Captain is some party-crazy army man
Our 6th Squad Captain is calm, prideful and pervy
Our 7th Squad Captain seems to be, barely, the only sane one
Our 8th Squad Captain is missing
Our 9th Squad Captain is a shy, respectful, boring and pervy
Our 10th Squad Captain hates some of our OWN captains
Our 11th Squad Captain is a sadistic maniac
Our 12th Squad Captain is an insane nerd
Our 13th Squad Captain is sleeping