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    Silph is a science fiction Pokemon Fan Fic. it has mystery, action, and Pokemon!

    Note: I am not the best writer, and go ahead and giver your advice and comments but it gets a little heart breaking to me if you point out every error in my fic.

    here is the introduction, it's a little short, but intros and prologues are usually short:


    SILPH

    Introduction:
    Silph Co.


    Kevin William Silph was born on June 13, 1934 in Saffron City. He was, according to several interviews with his relatives, an eager and intelligent child. He didn’t play with his toy spaceships, he took them apart and studied them. He was said to be the smartest person in Kanto, and even the world.

    At age seven, he joined the Young Professors Community (YPC), a foundation that helped young boys into becoming future Pokemon Professors. Every week, he would go to a meeting and learn as much as he could about Pokemon and the world they lived in. He was a strong member until he was eighteen years old.

    By the age of twenty-two, he was got the job of a manager at a local restaurant in Saffron City called “The Growlith.” According to his relatives, he disliked cooking or having a career involving food. At age thirty-one, he bought the restaurant.

    After he had bought The Growlith, he had stopped talking to his family. He had isolated himself from his friends. No one knew what he was up too. He closed his restaurant, but never sold the building. It confused many people.

    By Kevin’s late thirties, people began to know him as the strange crazy man who never left his house. One day however, the people of Saffron where astonished of what they saw at the old building that was once The Growlith. Two hundred men and Machamps working on a skyscraper sized building that extended from The Growlith.

    Kevin William Silph finally spoke to his family in years, and told them what he was doing. Kevin had been working almost non-stop on a new of holding information; the computer. He invented the device mainly for storing information, yet he had also created a type writing system on it as well. He signed up with PokeTech Co. (the company that later invented the PokeGear.) the company made an entire building for studying and researching the power of computers.

    By his late fifties, Silph was doing far better than anyone had expected. The computers were selling in Pokemon labs all over the world. He did so well that separated from PokeTech and made his building in Saffron into his own company, which he named after himself; Silph Corporations.

    Kevin William Silph died at age 60 in 1994. His son, Steven Silph, took after his footsteps and ran his company. Unfortunately, he was tied with Team Rocket, a local gang, activity and was forced to resign. The company is no run by Barney Burns.
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    Here is chapter one, hope like it. It'll start picking up it's story soon.

    Chapter One:
    The Three Disc


    Barney Burns walked out of his office, holding the newest version of the PC called the AlakazamStage3. It wasn’t released for the public yet, but Barney practically invented it (at least his company did), he thought he deserved to use it. He sat the computer down and grabbed a clipboard.

    He walked past the hallways of Silph Corporations, checking in every room. He pasted the office of George Henry, he was in charge of kitchenware. He looked in the room, it appeared he was in a meeting with another coworker. He stepped into the office, holding the clipboard that read a list of improvements; Barney was reviewing workers.

    As he stepped in, he realized that there were three people in the room. He saw George sitting on his soft chair, and an old skinny man with a beard and overalls on the floor, milking a Miltank with his bare hands. Barney was surprised, and deeply confused.

    Barney watched as the man grabbed a jar of milk and squeezed it’s utter. Milk squirted out of a tit and into the jar. Barney’s eyes twitched. He saw George sitting, somehow he was not disturbed.

    Barney had to interrupt. “George, what the hell is this?,” Barney said, George and the bearded man looked. “What’s going on here?”

    George smiled, showing his widely spread apart teeth. “It’s okay boss, I’ve just been working on a new electric cheese grater,” George said, as if it was a satisfying explanation.

    “So why is their a farmer milking a Miltank in the building?” he now seemed irritated. Barney looked mud that trailed across the white carpet in George’s office.

    “Boss, we’re making cheese using Miltank milk, it’s quite obvious,” he smiled, thinking he was smart. George had never really been known to be smart, but this was ridiculous.

    “Yeah, sure, continue,” Barney almost dropped his pen. He left the office, looking at his list of improvements. He followed his finger to the name “HENRY, GEORGE” and then circled “HEATH EVALUATION IN NEED.” He shook his head. He continued to walk through the hallways, going to the other important members of Silph Co.


    Barney Burns was a heavyset man, with black hair that was on the verge of turning gray. He wasn’t the smartest man in Silph Co. He was only hired to be the CEO because he was the vise president of Silph Co back when Steven Silph was in ccharge. he was only the vice president then only because he had begged for a job.

    Barney was born in Unova, and moved to Kanto at age seventeen. His first Pokemon was a Darmanitan. He became a fire type trainer, using mostly fire typed Pokemon. His team consisted of a Darmanitan, Houndoom, Magmar, Camerupt, and an Alakazam. Although he had tough Pokemon, he was never into battling much but he was never into making computers either. He didn’t like his job fore he was quite lazy.


    Barney Burns walking into the office of Ms. Angelina Young, an attractive coworker in charge of the PokeGear Applications. Although the PokeTech company was the original creator of the PokeGear, Silph Co. was able to make their own due to Capitalism.

    Angelina Young was only twenty-four years old. Barney thought she was highly attractive, it was the only reason he hired her. She had elegant blonde hair, that shined brightly. She had a slender body that had the classic, attractive shape that Barney wished all women had. Her waist waved sideways as she walked. Barney always got butterflies in his stomach when he saw her.

    Barney went ahead and circled “NO IMPROVEMENTS NECESSARY” on her name. He was finished reviewing his workers. It was time for Barney to do the thing in which no one knew, except for Steven Silph and himself.

    Barney went in an elevator, and made sure he was alone. He pressed a button that went to the bottom floor. The elevator began to move. Barney took a Pokeball out of his pocket. He threw it lazily into the air. Jolts of red and blue electricity zapped randomly in the air from the Pokeball. An Alakzam appeared out of the electricity.

    Barney looked at the Alakazam, which barely fit in the elevator. Barney grabbed his hand. “Alakazam, use Teleport!,” Barney yelled. The Alakazam nodded, his eyes glowed and they suddenly disappeared with a pop.

    The elevator stopped, reaching the bottom floor. The doors opened, revealing hundreds of men and machinery making computer parts. Several men looked at the elevator, confused. “Someone’s got to fix that thing,” a man said, pressing a button to a large machine.


    Barney and his Alakazam appeared in a dirty hotel room. The walls were covered mold and some sort of brown stain. The carpet floor was slightly damp with dirt all over it. Barney looked at a bed near by. Steven Silph sat on the bed, reading a book.

    “Steven, I’m here,” Barney said quietly.

    Steven quickly turned his head and slammed his book down on a dresser next to the book. He seemed angry for a few moments, then smiled. “Barney, good to see you my friend. You’ve come with what I want, I hope?”


    Steven Silph use to be a moderately handsome man, but after he was forced to resign, he had become a lot thinner. He grew bold, and his black beard was long and thin and drizzled own to his chest. He always talked like he had a soar throat. He was a very unpleasant man.

    Barney Burns had been meeting with Steven ever since he took the job of CEO. Barney couldn’t think of any new inventions, let alone make any. He relied on Steven, who was able to make a new invention every week. They would usually trade with something Steven wanted from the company.


    “Yes, I’ve brought them, and their incredibly hard to get outside the company so please if you could-”

    “Barney, my friend,” Steven interrupted, “I stay true to my word, I will give you my latest invention once I have received my request. I am fully aware of how rare the disk are, especially the last one.”

    “Very well,” Barney said, he took out his pocket. He opened it, and took out three discs, all oddly colored. He handed them over to Steven. “So, what do you want them for, sell them on the black market or what?”

    “No, why would I do that? The Casino in Celadon does that already. I wouldn’t find enough customers because of them. No, I have a different purpose for these disc.”

    “Other than Pokemon?”

    “Yes-I’d appreciate it if you didn’t ask any more questions.”

    “I still have one more: where’s my latest invention?”

    “Ah, yes,” Steven raised his finger then got up and headed to a closet. He grabbed a cardboard box and gave it to Barney. “Look inside it.”

    Barney opened the box, which revealed a metal object in the shape and size of a microscope but with out the base on the bottom. There were several tiny tubes, seventeen in all, sticking out of it. “What is it,” Barney asked, glaring at it.

    “A device”, Steven said, impressed with himself, “in which contains the ores of each Pokemon type, and once you press the button the device will shoot a concentrated ray that can blast through the strongest walls.”

    “First time you’ve made me a weapon. I’ll get Jerry Needly, he’s in charge of weapons. You got the designs for it?” Sure enough, Steven pulled a stack of papers full of the directions and designs of the machine. “Thanks, see you next week.”

    “Yes, see you too.”

    Barney held his Alakazam’s hand. “Alakazam, use Teleport!,” Barney ordered. He disappeared along with his Alakazam.

    A Chatot flew into the window of disgusting hotel room, next to the bed. Steven Silph sat on the bed and began petting it. The Chatot chirped it’s name. Steven grabbed the three discs and but them in a small box. He tied the box to the Chatot’s leg.

    “Hello, little Chatot,” Steven said, finishing the knot, “I want you to send this package to a man in Vermillion City, he lives in the fourth house from the city’s Gym. He will have his window open, waiting for you. This is important, so don‘t screw up this time.”

    The Chatot looked at him, it’s eyes looking in separate directions. It bobbed it’s head. “Fourth house from the Gym, Vermillion City, don‘t screw up!,” the Pokemon squealed. It flew off out of the room.
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    Science fiction? Good; we don't see enough of that around these forums!

    You've done a pretty good job so far. I don't want to point out every single discrepancy I find seeing as you don't want them pointed out...so I'll just do a few.
        Spoiler:- Just some suggestions:

    Lol, George needing a health evaluation was pretty funny.
    So umm...yeah, I'll be awaiting the next chapter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by GastlyMan View Post
    Science fiction? Good; we don't see enough of that around these forums!

    You've done a pretty good job so far. I don't want to point out every single discrepancy I find seeing as you don't want them pointed out...so I'll just do a few.
        Spoiler:- Just some suggestions:

    Lol, George needing a health evaluation was pretty funny.
    So umm...yeah, I'll be awaiting the next chapter.
    Thanks for replying. Yes, i choice science fiction becuase it's rare in pokemon fan fictions and it's also my favorite genre.

    and the reason why i don't want people pointing about all of my mistakes is that it just depresses me discourages me from writing. I edit what i can, and I'm not a good editor to begin with.

    chapter two is on it's way.
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    Chapter Two:
    The Wrong House


    “Go, Charizard!,” Jonathon Que yelled out, throwing a Pokeball into the yellow sunset sky of Vermillion City. A large scaly Charizard popped out of the Pokeball, giving an echoing roar that filled his and his opponent’s ears. It flew in the air, then stomped menacingly on the ground. The earth shook vigorously.

    “Ha!,” laughed Freddy Dodson in intimidation, “Go, Steelix!.” Freddy threw his own Pokeball into the air. A gigantic metal Steelix popped out, it’s rocky body quickly dug into the near by dirt. It gave a loud ominous moan.

    “Use Flamethrower, Charizard!” Que yelled, pointing at Freddy’s Steelix, who’s head was poking out of the ground. His Charizard nodded, then looked at the Steelix. It blasted the Steelix with fire, but it poked it’s head back into the ground; Charizard had missed.

    “Nice job Steelix, now use Earthquake!,” Dodson yelled. Suddenly, the earth shook beneath Que’s legs. He fell on the dirt, but his Charizard flew from the ground with his mighty wings, avoiding the ground.

    “You idiot!,” Que laughed, “He’s part Flying type!” Que got up, dusting off his pants, he had a wide smile across his face. “Use Fire Spin, Charizard!” His Charizard opened his mouth and blasted a spiral of fire. The Steelix headed back underground, but the spiral of fire followed. Moans were heard through the dirt.

    It was quite. Que and Dodson looked at each other, Que was smiling. The Steelix’s head popped out of the ground, dirt and sand shot upward. Dust filled the air, then Que could see it’s face. The Steelix’s eyes were closed. It snored heavily.

    “Aw man,” Dodson moaned, he grabbed his Pokeball and sent his Steelix back. Que put his Charizard back into his own Pokeball as well. They stood on the dirt ground in the outskirts of Vermillion City. The shook hands.

    “You did good, Freddy,” Que said, padding him on the back. “Although you should have known Charizard is Fire and Flying type.” Your Steelix did wonderful, he can dodge moves nicely with his Dig.”

    “Thanks,” Dodson said as he kicked the ground, “I can’t believe I forgot about Charizard’s typing. It won’t happen again, I promise you that.”


    Jonathon Que was a thin fifteen year old trainer with blonde hair that was cut military style. He was known well in Vermillion because he was trained by Lt. Surge, the Electric trainer Gym Leader of the city. He was a good trainer and was skilled with his main Pokemon, Charizard in which he got from the famous Pokemon Professor Oak when it was just a small Charmander. His main team consisted of a Charizard, Arbok, Lanturn, Dragonair, Togekiss, and an egg which he got as a gift; it had not hatched yet.

    Freddy Dodson was a somewhat chubby trainer, the same age as Que. He had long curly black hair and was far smarter than Que. Dodson was the opposite in many ways, he was chubby and unfit while Que was very fit. Dodson also wasn’t good at training with his Pokemon, while Que was almost to his eighth Gym Badge. He never got a Pokemon from a professor like many other trainers, he was given an Onix from his father which later evolved into a Steelix. His team consisted of a Steelix, Magneton, Beedrill, Golduck, Metang, and a Noctowl.

    They met in Trainer School at age five, and became friends since then. They didn’t have much in common, yet there was something that kept them together. They grew up together, battling their Pokemon together, and learning together. Que helped Dodson train while Dodson helped Que learn math and computers.


    They headed back to the city, waving hi to some old man who was making Machops stomp on the ground. They traveled on the dirt trail which slowly turned to a road with cars passing through at dangerous speed. They walked to a group of building that were built next to the city’s Gym in which Que was familiar with greatly.

    They made it back to Dodson’s house, third from the Gym, when they saw something in the sky. It was moving in zigzag lines, with the sound of hideous squealing. Que and Dodson stared at the sky, confused yet very curious. The object moved closer to the ground and they were able to see the image.

    It was a Chatot, flying clumsily across the sky. It was being dragged by a package that was tied to it’s leg. It crashed into Dodson’s neighbor’s roof. It fell from the roof and landed on the cement sidewalk.

    “Oh my Arceus!,” yelled Dodson. They ran to the Chatot, and looked at it as it squealed around the ground, flapping it’s wings. “Hey, are you okay?”

    “Are you okay?,” it squealed at them, “Are you okay? Are you okay?”

    “It’s a Chatot, Freddy,” Que said, picking the Pokemon up, “it can repeat what you say, it can talk. But, this guy is a messenger and has a package for your neighbor.”

    “Yeah, lets give it to Mr. Gray.”

    “What? No, lets see what’s in it.”

    “Why would you want to do that? He’s home right now, he’ll notice!”

    “But, what if-?”

    “I’m sure it has nothing to do with Team Rocket. He doesn’t do that stuff anymore, not since that Giovanni guy was sent to jail.”

    “Well, I’m going to steal it and you can’t stop me!,” yelled Que. He grabbed the package from the Chatot’s leg and it flew away. He ran to his house, a few yards away, and ran inside it. Dodson ran slowly after him. He gave up half way and walked inside.

    He opened the door, and saw Que tearing the box open. Dodson yelled in anger. Que was laughing to himself. He picked up the objects inside, the Dodson suddenly went silent. It was three disc, all vividly colored. Dodson opened his mouth in total aw.

    “What are they?,” Que asked, holding the disc to his head.

    “It’s the Porygon Series!,” Dodson cheered, he took them from Que’s hands. “These two disc can evolve a Porygon! They’re really rare!”

    “Rare? Sweet. Lets sell them!”

    “No. you’re the Pokemon expert, you should know that we should keep these. But, I don’t know what this third one is.”

    “Maybe evolves the Porygon again.”

    “I’ve never heard of another Porygon besides Porygon, Porygon 2, and Porygon Z. this must do something else. Lets try putting into your computer.”

    “Sure, lets do it. Mr. Gray must be pretty angry though.”

    Dodson went to his PC, an Abra10, and put the disc that they couldn’t figure out into the server. They looked at the computer curiously.

    The blue screen read “STORAGE BOX”, “PERSONAL INFO”, “EMAIL”, and “DISC.” Dodson clicked on “DISC” and they waited it to load up. Then screen switched colors to a dark blue, then zeros and ones started popping everywhere on the screen.

    “It’s a Matrix,” Dodson said, surprised. Suddenly, they heard windows shatter. They ran into the living room and saw a man with red hair with a Primape were standing there.

    “Oh ****, it’s Mr. Gray!,” Que yelled. The Primape ran on top of Dodson with amazing speed ad began punching him the face. Que, panicking, threw out a Pokeball and sent out his Dragonair.

    The Dragonair looked at Que and Freddy. Then saw the man and the Primape. The Pokemon quickly blasted a lightning strike at the Primape. It was thrown a few feet away, breaking Que’s television set.

    Que helped Dodson up. Dodson quickly sent out his Golduck as they saw Mr. Gray sending out a Graveler. It threw rocks at the boys, and Que hit the floor. Dodson’s Golduck spit a blast of water at it and the Graveler slammed against a couch. The ground started moving, because it used Earthquake. The Golduck fell.

    Mr. Gray grabbed the two disc and left in a hurry. He sent his two Pokemon back into the Pokeballs. Que and Dodson were in shocked and just watched as he walked to the door.

    Que and Dodson stood, looking at the broken window and the broken television set. He rubbed his eyes in fear. It was like a nightmare. “My mom’s gonna kill me!,” Que yelled.

    Dodson went back at the computer and looked at all the zeros and ones. Mr. Gray didn’t take the last one. Suddenly the numbers turned into letters that read:

    “PORYGON VIRUS.
    “PORYGON VIRUS.
    0 INGREDIENTs
    UNABLE TO OPERATE AT CURRENT TIME.
    THIS PROGRAM IS THE PROPERTY OF SILPH OPERATIONS.”


    “Silph Co?,” Que said, surprised. “Silph Co made a virus? What for?”

    “I don’t know,” Dodson said, “wanna find out?”
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    Chapter Two:
    The Wrong House


    “Go, Charizard!,” Jonathon Que yelled out, throwing a Pokeball into the yellow sunset sky of Vermillion City. A large scaly Charizard popped out of the Pokeball, giving an echoing roar that filled his and his opponent’s ears. It flew in the air, then stomped menacingly on the ground. The earth shook vigorously.

    “Ha!,” laughed Freddy Dodson in intimidation, “Go, Steelix!.” Freddy threw his own Pokeball into the air. A gigantic metal Steelix popped out, it’s rocky body quickly dug into the near by dirt. It gave a loud ominous moan.

    “Use Flamethrower, Charizard!” Que yelled, pointing at Freddy’s Steelix, who’s head was poking out of the ground. His Charizard nodded, then looked at the Steelix. It blasted the Steelix with fire, but it poked it’s head back into the ground; Charizard had missed.

    “Nice job Steelix, now use Earthquake!,” Dodson yelled. Suddenly, the earth shook beneath Que’s legs. He fell on the dirt, but his Charizard flew from the ground with his mighty wings, avoiding the ground.

    “You idiot!,” Que laughed, “He’s part Flying type!” Que got up, dusting off his pants, he had a wide smile across his face. “Use Fire Spin, Charizard!” His Charizard opened his mouth and blasted a spiral of fire. The Steelix headed back underground, but the spiral of fire followed. Moans were heard through the dirt.

    It was quite. Que and Dodson looked at each other, Que was smiling. The Steelix’s head popped out of the ground, dirt and sand shot upward. Dust filled the air, then Que could see it’s face. The Steelix’s eyes were closed. It snored heavily.

    “Aw man,” Dodson moaned, he grabbed his Pokeball and sent his Steelix back. Que put his Charizard back into his own Pokeball as well. They stood on the dirt ground in the outskirts of Vermillion City. The shook hands.

    “You did good, Freddy,” Que said, padding him on the back. “Although you should have known Charizard is Fire and Flying type.” Your Steelix did wonderful, he can dodge moves nicely with his Dig.”

    “Thanks,” Dodson said as he kicked the ground, “I can’t believe I forgot about Charizard’s typing. It won’t happen again, I promise you that.”


    Jonathon Que was a thin fifteen year old trainer with blonde hair that was cut military style. He was known well in Vermillion because he was trained by Lt. Surge, the Electric trainer Gym Leader of the city. He was a good trainer and was skilled with his main Pokemon, Charizard in which he got from the famous Pokemon Professor Oak when it was just a small Charmander. His main team consisted of a Charizard, Arbok, Lanturn, Dragonair, Togekiss, and an egg which he got as a gift; it had not hatched yet.

    Freddy Dodson was a somewhat chubby trainer, the same age as Que. He had long curly black hair and was far smarter than Que. Dodson was the opposite in many ways, he was chubby and unfit while Que was very fit. Dodson also wasn’t good at training with his Pokemon, while Que was almost to his eighth Gym Badge. He never got a Pokemon from a professor like many other trainers, he was given an Onix from his father which later evolved into a Steelix. His team consisted of a Steelix, Magneton, Beedrill, Golduck, Metang, and a Noctowl.

    They met in Trainer School at age five, and became friends since then. They didn’t have much in common, yet there was something that kept them together. They grew up together, battling their Pokemon together, and learning together. Que helped Dodson train while Dodson helped Que learn math and computers.


    They headed back to the city, waving hi to some old man who was making Machops stomp on the ground. They traveled on the dirt trail which slowly turned to a road with cars passing through at dangerous speed. They walked to a group of building that were built next to the city’s Gym in which Que was familiar with greatly.

    They made it back to Dodson’s house, third from the Gym, when they saw something in the sky. It was moving in zigzag lines, with the sound of hideous squealing. Que and Dodson stared at the sky, confused yet very curious. The object moved closer to the ground and they were able to see the image.

    It was a Chatot, flying clumsily across the sky. It was being dragged by a package that was tied to it’s leg. It crashed into Dodson’s neighbor’s roof. It fell from the roof and landed on the cement sidewalk.

    “Oh my Arceus!,” yelled Dodson. They ran to the Chatot, and looked at it as it squealed around the ground, flapping it’s wings. “Hey, are you okay?”

    “Are you okay?,” it squealed at them, “Are you okay? Are you okay?”

    “It’s a Chatot, Freddy,” Que said, picking the Pokemon up, “it can repeat what you say, it can talk. But, this guy is a messenger and has a package for your neighbor.”

    “Yeah, lets give it to Mr. Gray.”

    “What? No, lets see what’s in it.”

    “Why would you want to do that? He’s home right now, he’ll notice!”

    “But, what if-?”

    “I’m sure it has nothing to do with Team Rocket. He doesn’t do that stuff anymore, not since that Giovanni guy was sent to jail.”

    “Well, I’m going to steal it and you can’t stop me!,” yelled Que. He grabbed the package from the Chatot’s leg and it flew away. He ran to his house, a few yards away, and ran inside it. Dodson ran slowly after him. He gave up half way and walked inside.

    He opened the door, and saw Que tearing the box open. Dodson yelled in anger. Que was laughing to himself. He picked up the objects inside, the Dodson suddenly went silent. It was three disc, all vividly colored. Dodson opened his mouth in total aw.

    “What are they?,” Que asked, holding the disc to his head.

    “It’s the Porygon Series!,” Dodson cheered, he took them from Que’s hands. “These two disc can evolve a Porygon! They’re really rare!”

    “Rare? Sweet. Lets sell them!”

    “No. you’re the Pokemon expert, you should know that we should keep these. But, I don’t know what this third one is.”

    “Maybe evolves the Porygon again.”

    “I’ve never heard of another Porygon besides Porygon, Porygon 2, and Porygon Z. this must do something else. Lets try putting into your computer.”

    “Sure, lets do it. Mr. Gray must be pretty angry though.”

    Dodson went to his PC, an Abra10, and put the disc that they couldn’t figure out into the server. They looked at the computer curiously.

    The blue screen read:


    STORAGE BOX
    PERSONAL INFO
    EMAIL
    DISC


    Dodson clicked on “DISC” and they waited it to load up. Then screen switched colors to a dark blue, then zeros and ones started popping everywhere on the screen.

    “It’s a Matrix,” Dodson said, surprised. Suddenly, they heard windows shatter. They ran into the living room and saw a man with red hair with a Primape were standing there.

    “Oh ****, it’s Mr. Gray!,” Que yelled. The Primape ran on top of Dodson with amazing speed ad began punching him the face. Que, panicking, threw out a Pokeball and sent out his Dragonair.

    The Dragonair looked at Que and Freddy. Then saw the man and the Primape. The Pokemon quickly blasted a lightning strike at the Primape. It was thrown a few feet away, breaking Que’s television set.

    Que helped Dodson up. Dodson quickly sent out his Golduck as they saw Mr. Gray sending out a Graveler. It threw rocks at the boys, and Que hit the floor. Dodson’s Golduck spit a blast of water at it and the Graveler slammed against a couch. The ground started moving, because it used Earthquake. The Golduck fell.

    Mr. Gray grabbed the two disc and left in a hurry. He sent his two Pokemon back into the Pokeballs. Que and Dodson were in shocked and just watched as he walked to the door.

    Que and Dodson stood, looking at the broken window and the broken television set. He rubbed his eyes in fear. It was like a nightmare. “My mom’s gonna kill me!,” Que yelled.

    Dodson went back at the computer and looked at all the zeros and ones. Mr. Gray didn’t take the last one. Suddenly the numbers turned into letters that read:

    “PORYGON VIRUS.
    0 INGREDIENTS.
    UNABLE TO OPERATE AT CURRENT TIME.
    THIS PROGRAM IS THE PROPERTY OF SILPH CORPORATIONS.”


    “Silph Co?,” Que said, surprised. “Silph Co made a virus? What for?”

    “I don’t know,” Dodson said, “wanna find out?”
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    I think you accidentally double-posted the chapter. O.o

    Que and Dodson seem interesting. Good friends, yet...different in some ways.

    Ooh, a Porygon-related virus. Should be cool to see how that turns out.

    also, just for future reference:
    A gigantic metal Steelix popped out, it’s rocky body quickly dug into the near by dirt.
    You don't need an apostrophe over it's when you are implying possession.

    Anyway, keep up the good work and all; I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by GastlyMan View Post
    I think you accidentally double-posted the chapter. O.o

    Que and Dodson seem interesting. Good friends, yet...different in some ways.

    Ooh, a Porygon-related virus. Should be cool to see how that turns out.

    also, just for future reference:

    You don't need an apostrophe over it's when you are implying possession.

    Anyway, keep up the good work and all; I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
    yeah, i screwed up while copying and pasting the chapter from Word to my post, a made several mistakes including double posting. However, i can't edit them for some reason, probably due to the websites lag.
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