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    Default VS zapdosblitz

    This was just a friendly battle against zapdostheblitz. It was quite close. My comments in blue.

    My team: Jirachi, suicune, gengar, salamence, magnezone, rotom-h.
    Zapdo’s team: Infernape, rotom-c, metagross, scizor, salamence, vaporeon.

    Rules: Evasion Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Sleep Clause, Soul Dew Clause, Species Clause, Timed Battle
    calze6 sent out Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
    zapdosblitz sent out Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
    Infernape used Fake Out.
    It's not very effective...
    A critical hit!
    Jirachi lost 11% of its health.
    Jirachi flinched!
    ---
    Jirachi used Trick.
    Jirachi obtained Focus Sash!
    Infernape obtained Choice Scarf!
    Infernape used Fire Blast.
    Infernape's attack missed!
    ---
    Lol. I thought he would’ve SR first.
    calze6 switched in Suicune (lvl 100 Suicune).
    Suicune is exerting its pressure!
    Infernape used Fire Blast.
    It's not very effective...
    A critical hit!
    Suicune lost 46% of its health.
    ---
    Damn. That will hinder cune’s sweep power.
    zapdosblitz: trickscarf rachi huh
    calze6: damn
    zapdosblitz switched in Rotom-c (lvl 100 Rotom-c).
    Suicune used Calm Mind.
    Suicune's special attack was raised.
    Suicune's special defence was raised.
    ---
    Why’d he switch?
    Suicune used Hydro Pump.
    Rotom-c lost 107% of its health.
    zapdosblitz's Rotom-c fainted.
    Suicune lost 10% of its health.
    ---
    Offensive cune ruuuuuuuuuuules! After one CM boost, a hydro pump OHKOs rotom!?

    6-5

    Cune-44%
    Rotom-0%

    zapdosblitz: offense cune?
    calze6: lol
    zapdosblitz switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
    Salamence's Intimidate cut Suicune's attack!
    calze6: obviously
    zapdosblitz switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
    Suicune used Ice Beam.
    It's not very effective...
    Metagross lost 30% of its health.
    Suicune lost 10% of its health.
    ---
    Why’d he switch? Mence would’ve killed me…Suicune used Hydro Pump.
    Metagross lost 101% of its health.
    zapdosblitz's Metagross fainted.
    Suicune lost 10% of its health.
    ---
    Lol cune rules! Metagross too. Hydro pump over surf for that reason. The power difference gets NEUTRAL KOs on pokes with GOOD defense.

    6-4

    Cune-34%
    Metagross-0%

    zapdosblitz switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
    calze6: why not outrage
    Infernape used Close Combat.
    Suicune lost 39% of its health.
    calze6's Suicune fainted.
    Infernape's defence was lowered.
    Infernape's special defence was lowered.
    ---
    5-4
    Cune-0%
    Infernape-100%
    zapdosblitz: it's mixmence
    zapdosblitz: classic one
    calze6 switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
    Salamence's Intimidate cut Infernape's attack!
    zapdosblitz switched in Vaporeon (lvl 100 Vaporeon ?).
    Salamence used Substitute.
    Salamence lost 25% of its health.
    Salamence made a substitute!
    ---
    zapdosblitz: im on 2 battle so it's hard for me to think
    Vaporeon used Protect.
    Vaporeon protected itself!
    Salamence used Outrage.
    Vaporeon protected itself!
    ---
    Salamence used Outrage.
    Salamence went on a rampage!
    A critical hit!
    Vaporeon lost 108% of its health.
    zapdosblitz's Vaporeon fainted.
    Salamence lost 10% of its health.
    ---
    Lol fluke. It would’ve 2HKOed though.

    5-3

    Mence-65%
    Vappy-0%

    zapdosblitz switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).
    Outrage prohibits the use of this move.
    That always happens. Lol.
    Scizor used Bullet Punch.
    The substitute took damage for Salamence!
    Salamence's substitute faded!
    Salamence used Outrage.
    It's not very effective...
    Scizor lost 36% of its health.
    Salamence lost 10% of its health.
    ---
    calze6: ha
    Forgot that I was still locked on…
    Scizor used Bullet Punch.
    Salamence lost 60% of its health.
    calze6's Salamence fainted.
    ---
    4-3
    Mence-0%
    Scizor-64%
    calze6 switched in Magnezone (lvl 100 Magnezone).
    calze6: hahahaha
    Scizor used Bullet Punch.
    It's not very effective...
    Magnezone lost 14% of its health.
    Magnezone used Substitute.
    Magnezone lost 25% of its health.
    Magnezone made a substitute!
    ---
    hahahahaha magnezone sweep!
    zapdosblitz: XD
    Scizor used Bullet Punch.
    It's not very effective...
    The substitute took damage for Magnezone!
    Magnezone used Charge Beam.
    Scizor lost 24% of its health.
    Magnezone's special attack was raised.
    ---
    Scizor used Bullet Punch.
    It's not very effective...
    The substitute took damage for Magnezone!
    I wasn’t thinking… Terrible misclick.
    Magnezone's substitute faded!
    Magnezone used Charge Beam.
    Scizor lost 41% of its health.
    zapdosblitz's Scizor fainted.
    Magnezone's special attack was raised.
    ---
    4-2

    Magnezone-69%
    Scizor-0%

    zapdosblitz switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
    Salamence's Intimidate cut Magnezone's attack!
    Salamence used Fire Blast.
    It's super effective!
    Magnezone lost 128% of its health.
    calze6's Magnezone fainted.
    Salamence lost 10% of its health.
    ---
    Urgh…

    Magnezone-0%
    Mence-90%

    calze6 switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
    Gengar used Hidden Power.
    It's super effective!
    Salamence lost 136% of its health.
    zapdosblitz's Salamence fainted.
    ---
    Why didn’t he switch? I would’ve outrunned scarf or not and HP ICE was kinda obvious or I wouldn’t have switched in.

    3-1

    Gengar-100%
    Mence-0%

    zapdosblitz switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
    zapdosblitz: btw what u think good for this team?
    calze6 switched in Rotom-h (lvl 100 Rotom-h).
    Infernape used Fire Blast.
    A critical hit!
    Rotom-h lost 112% of its health.
    calze6's Rotom-h fainted.
    ---
    That wasn’t good. I had to switch or I'd be stuffed.

    2-1

    Rotom-0%
    Infernape-100%

    calze6 switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
    Infernape used Fire Blast.
    It's super effective!
    Jirachi lost 95% of its health.
    calze6's Jirachi fainted.
    ---
    I wasn’t sure if I could OHKO or survive with gengar so for no particular reason, I switched rachi in.

    1-1

    Rachi-0%
    Infernape-100%

    calze6 switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
    calze6: crap
    Gengar used Shadow Ball.
    Infernape lost 66% of its health.
    Infernape's special defence was lowered.
    Infernape used Fire Blast.
    Gengar lost 82% of its health.
    ---
    I didn’t get OHKOed? OMG! I won!
    zapdosblitz: well u still win
    zapdosblitz: gg
    Gengar used Shadow Ball.
    Infernape lost 102% of its health.
    zapdosblitz's Infernape fainted.
    calze6 wins!
    calze6: gg
    That was pretty close after his infernape comeback.

    1-0

    Gengar-18%
    Infernape-0%
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    What a great battle! I have never ever seen a sweeper cune! Super original, and I love it!
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    Ummm... I didn't make this warstory just for one comment.
    Start playing ubers, not OU. Serebii needs more ubers players!

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    well...it's kinda hard to read. You should pretty it up a bit. It's so hard to read so I've only read the first few turns and then the last few. Everything is stuck together like a court document so it's heavy on the eyes and it's very hard to make a battle interesting when the teams consist fully of OUs that you see all the time so seeing that might give readers a bad first impression.
    Last edited by elephantdog; 17th March 2010 at 11:30 PM.
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