Alright guys, this is my first fanfic EVER, so work with me here. I really would like criticism to point out what I may be doing wrong, or what I could improve on. Thanks ^_^ Here we go....
First just a little outside information. My two main characters, Georgie and Cait, are based on me and my friend(I'm George and her name is Caitlin). Anyways, they are new trainers who are going to start their Pokemon journey together. This journey will take place in the Hoenn Region(I wanted it to be in the Johto Region, but Caitlin wanted a torchic starter >:])
The antogonist's name is James, who is an experienced trainer. Sorry if I'm being boring right now; I tend to be that way in the beginning. Well I'm just gonna stop now and begin the story. The beginning might seem a little WTH-ish but trust me, when they finally get their pokemon, it will start to get good. :]
Chapter One: A New Adventure
A sunny day in Lilycove city, as usual, which always made me happy. I couldn't believe today was the day when my best friend Cait and I were getting our first Pokémon. Oh yes, this was gonna be a great day, although I should probably wake up...
"Georgie, why won't you wake up?!"
I awoke to a girl with brown curly hair and crystal blue eyes staring right down upon me.
"Caity! What are you doing in my bed? Have you ever heard of a thing called privacy?"
"Well sorry," she said in a sarcastic voice, "but we're going to be late if you don't hurry up! The ferry to Petalburg City is leaving in thirty minutes. Ugh this is gonna be a tiring day..."
"Why is it going to be tiring? We're getting our Pokémon. That should give you enough incentive to stay excited."
"Well did you realize that we have to walk all the way to Littleroot town after we get off the ferry?"
"Walking never killed anybody," I said in non-empathetic tone.
"Whatever, let's just go!"
She was always very impatient. I never took long to get ready, a maximum of five minutes. Exactly five minutes later I called down to her and told her that I was ready.
"Well then come on! Let's leave!"
As we walked out of my house, I was sure my mother was going to make a scene and try to convince me not to go. I was wrong. She was asleep!! On the most important day of my life she was asleep...wow. I left a note as I walked out of my silent house. We got to the ferry ten minutes before departure, ten extra minutes that I could've slept. When we got to our seats on the ferry, I immediately fell asleep. Did I mention I sleep a lot? Well yep, that's me.
Hours later when we arrived, Cait woke me up. We were here! Cait was practically jumping out of the boat as we reached the Petalburg Harbor. Now was the simple part- walk to Littleroot Town and get a POKEMON! Things raced through my mind as we started walking toward our destination. Things like, should I nickname my Pokémon?, will I be a good trainer?, and I hope my Pokémon like me...
Before I knew it, we were there! "Whew, that was a long walk, " Cait said sounding exhausted. I made no witty remark because I couldn't speak from the excitement. We walked towards a large, white building, which we assumed to be Professor Birch's. I was ready, here we go!
As we walked in many assistants to the professor greeted us. Then a rather large man, with brown hair and a brown beard came towards us. "Ah, you must be the new trainers, Georgie and Cait. Correct? "
"Yep, thats us professor. We're really excited!"
"Alright, then I won't keep you waiting. Here are three pokeballs, each with one of the Hoenn starters. Choose wisely." Caity chose first, because she is a rather impatient girl if you hadn't noticed."
"Alright! I want this Torchic!"
"Haha, great. And which one would you like Georgie?" the Professor said chuckling to himself.
"I'll take the Mudkip please," I said while grabbing the pokeball.
THE ADVENTURE BEGINS!