Wrong. Altaria are based off Dragons and Budgies/Parakeets. They are NOT based upon Flightless bird species.
Originally Posted by shac
There's the other fact there are other flightless birds you could use, a parrot, Emu's, Rea's, ancient birds..
And Mantill does look to much like Mantine, and it makes no sense for what you made it evolve into. What something as big as a whale? For what reason? Mantine are based off of the rays that live in austrilia, I forget their names but they're the BIG ones. They're the BIGGEST ones ever. It feels like you just made Mantine to try and be a 'whale and lapras' replacement. You also need to seriously work on the detailing.
Kingdridra- there ARE other animals in the pokemon world. Maybe none that we see as it's about POKEMON not existing animals, but it hints at creatures like bugs and etc live. And fish. So Krill would exist as they are basically tiny shrimp. As would plankton as it's made up of tiny organisms.
The other thing is your pokemon don't really look, like pokemon. The Hedgehog looks nothing like one, but instead a Cyndaquil ripoff. The 'moonfish' looks more like a slice of cheese with how it's colored :/
Soustrich is to much like Doduo, partly the build, partly the body, maybe if you made the body look more like a bush, and put a bit more detail into the head/neck, maybe make it look like soil or pebbled cover skin or something.
And for the Earthworm, they wouldn't navigate with sound waves, vibrations possibly but not sound waves unless you made them able to have some sort of natural sonar like bats.