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    Default The Lucario Mach-3 Razor! Guaranteed to Make the Battle a Close Shave! (OU Warstory)

    Hey people, how's it going? Time for my first (technically second) Serebii warstory.

    This was a ladder match between me and bt05 on Shoddy, to test out my newest team. It was a pretty decent battle, once I started taking it seriously. It ended up with a nice finish, so I decided to post it on here. Enjoy!

    My Team:

    bt05's Team:

    Note: Our moves will mirror the colors of our names.
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    Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause, Soul Dew Clause
    bt05 sent out Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
    Eon King sent out Gliscor (lvl 100 Gliscor ?).
    Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
    A sandstorm brewed!

    100%

    -VS-

    100%

    Hmm... I'm a bit rusty on LeadTar, but iirc it has Stone Edge, Payback, Rest, and SR. Of these, I don't want SR on the field or it Resting off damage, so I go with Taunt.

    Gliscor used Taunt.
    Tyranitar fell for the taunt!
    Tyranitar used Ice Beam.
    It's super effective!
    Gliscor lost 100% of its health.
    Eon King's Gliscor fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.

    0%

    -VS-

    100%

    Ugh, MixTar or Tyraniboah. He was probably using it to fake LeadTar and KO the opposing lead while it used Taunt. Clever, but not good enough. Machamp will make short work of him. 5-6

    Eon King switched in Machamp (lvl 100 Machamp ?).
    Tyranitar used Superpower.
    Machamp lost 41% of its health.
    Tyranitar's attack was lowered.
    Tyranitar's defence was lowered.
    Machamp used Dynamicpunch.
    It's super effective!
    Tyranitar lost 100% of its health.
    bt05's Tyranitar fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Machamp is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Machamp lost 6% of its health.
    Machamp's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Machamp restored 6% of its health.

    59%

    -VS-

    0%

    So he knew he couldn't switch into Machamp and sacrificed Ttar. Superpower did a bit more damage than I had anticipated, but it's not a big problem. 5-5

    bt05 switched in Lucario (lvl 100 Lucario ?).
    Lucario used Close Combat.
    Machamp lost 59% of its health.
    Eon King's Machamp fainted.
    Lucario's defence was lowered.
    Lucario's special defence was lowered.
    Lucario lost 10% of its health.
    The sandstorm rages.

    0%

    -VS-

    90%

    I really need to stop overestimating Machamp's Defenses. He's no Suicune. Shaymin should outspeed and OHKO with Earth Power, so I'll switch. 4-5

    Eon King switched in Shaymin (lvl 100 Shaymin).
    bt05 switched in Rotom-c (lvl 100 Rotom-c).
    Rotom-c makes ground moves miss with Levitate!
    Shaymin used Earth Power.
    Shaymin's attack missed!
    The sandstorm rages.
    Rotom-c is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Rotom-c lost 6% of its health.
    Shaymin is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Shaymin lost 6% of its health.
    Shaymin's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Shaymin restored 6% of its health.

    100%

    -VS-

    100%

    For god's sake, I need to stop screwing around. He's making a fool out of me. Leech Seed should put a stop to his antics, but if it's a Trick Sweeper, I'm going to have a problem later.

    Rotom-c used Trick.
    Rotom-c obtained Leftovers!
    Shaymin obtained Choice Scarf!
    Shaymin used Leech Seed.
    Rotom-c was seeded!
    The sandstorm rages.
    Shaymin is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Shaymin lost 6% of its health.
    Rotom-c is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Rotom-c lost 6% of its health.
    Rotom-c's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Rotom-c restored 6% of its health.
    Rotom-c's health was sapped by leech seed!
    Rotom-c lost 12% of its health.
    Shaymin regained health!
    Shaymin restored 6% of its health.

    100%

    -VS-

    88%

    =/ Great, exactly what I didn't want to happen. However, his next move will almost certainly be Shadow Ball, meaning I can switch in ScarfTran and get the leg up on him.

    Eon King switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
    Rotom-c used Shadow Ball.
    It's not very effective...
    Heatran lost 21% of its health.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Rotom-c is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Rotom-c lost 6% of its health.
    Rotom-c's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Rotom-c restored 6% of its health.
    Rotom-c's health was sapped by leech seed!
    Rotom-c lost 12% of its health.
    Heatran regained health!
    Heatran restored 9% of its health.

    88%

    -VS-

    69%

    Exactly as predicted, for once.

    bt05 switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
    Heatran used Flamethrower.
    Heatran's Flash Fire raised its fire power!
    The sandstorm rages.

    88%

    -VS-

    100%

    BLAAAH. He had his own Heatran, probably also Scarfed. Nothing I can do now but switch to Starmie.

    Eon King switched in Starmie (lvl 100 Starmie).
    Heatran used Earth Power.
    Starmie lost 45% of its health.
    Starmie's special defence was lowered.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Starmie is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Starmie lost 6% of its health.
    Starmie's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Starmie restored 6% of its health.

    55%

    -VS-

    100%

    And Starmie is dead now. One after another, I'm just sucking today. I can't even hit it with Surf now, thanks to that haxy Special Defense drop.

    Starmie used Surf.
    It's super effective!
    Heatran lost 62% of its health.
    Heatran used Earth Power.
    Starmie lost 55% of its health.
    Eon King's Starmie fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.

    0%

    -VS-

    38%

    Wait, it landed? That means it's most likely a ShucaTran, but that won't save him at only 38% health. He'll most likely scrifice it, it's not going to help him much in the long run. 3-5

    Eon King switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
    Heatran used Earth Power.
    It's super effective!
    Heatran lost 38% of its health.
    bt05's Heatran fainted.
    The Shuca Berry weakened Earth Power's power!
    The sandstorm rages.

    88%

    -VS-

    0%

    Looks like I'm finally starting to get my edge back. 3-4

    bt05 switched in Latias (lvl 100 Latias ?).
    Eon King switched in Scizor (lvl 100 Scizor ?).
    Latias used Calm Mind.
    Latias's special attack was raised.
    Latias's special defence was raised.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Latias is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Latias lost 6% of its health.
    Latias's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Latias restored 6% of its health.

    100%

    -VS-

    100%

    I decided to take a gamble here, and it's going to pay off. The Lefties recovery tells me that he's got a Defensive CMLatias, and the fact that he switched it into Heatran tells me he's got Surf on it, rather than HP Fire. Game over for Latias, Bug Bite for the OHKO.

    Latias used Surf.
    Scizor lost 63% of its health.
    Scizor used Bug Bite.
    It's super effective!
    Latias lost 100% of its health.
    bt05's Latias fainted.
    Scizor lost 10% of its health.
    The sandstorm rages.

    27%

    -VS-

    0%

    And Latias goes down. It's all tied up now. 3-3

    bt05 switched in Rotom-c (lvl 100 Rotom-c).
    Rotom-c used Thunderbolt.
    Scizor lost 27% of its health.
    Eon King's Scizor fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Rotom-c is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Rotom-c lost 6% of its health.
    Rotom-c's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Rotom-c restored 6% of its health.

    0%

    -VS-

    69%

    I don't know why I didn't use Bullet Punch, maybe I didn't care anymore. Either way, I know I'll probably win this thanks to my two Scarfed sweepers. 2-3

    Eon King switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
    Heatran used Flamethrower.
    Rotom-c lost 62% of its health.
    Rotom-c used Thunderbolt.
    Heatran lost 50% of its health.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Rotom-c is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Rotom-c lost 6% of its health.
    Rotom-c's leftovers restored its health a little!
    Rotom-c restored 6% of its health.

    38%

    -VS-

    7%

    That's what I get for being stupid and not exploiting every edge I can. Had I used Bullet Punch, I would have won easily, instead of it coming down to the wire like it will now.

    Heatran used Flamethrower.
    Rotom-c lost 7% of its health.
    bt05's Rotom-c fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.

    38%

    -VS-

    0%

    And now it's even again. I'm still clueless as to what his last Pokemon is, so that could be the deciding factor. 2-2

    bt05 switched in Swampert (lvl 100 Swampert ?).
    Eon King switched in Shaymin (lvl 100 Shaymin).
    Swampert used Ice Beam.
    It's super effective!
    Shaymin lost 32% of its health.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Shaymin is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Shaymin lost 6% of its health.

    62%

    -VS-

    100%

    He predicted the switch to Shaymin, but it makes no difference. Now for an OHKO with Seed Flare. So long as I predict his Lucario correctly, he has no chance.

    Shaymin used Seed Flare.
    It's super effective!
    Swampert lost 100% of its health.
    bt05's Swampert fainted.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Shaymin is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Shaymin lost 6% of its health.

    56%

    -VS-

    0%

    I doubt even a Rindo Berry would have saved him from that. This is in the bag now. 2-1

    bt05 switched in Lucario (lvl 100 Lucario ?).
    Shaymin used Seed Flare.
    It's not very effective...
    Lucario lost 40% of its health.
    Lucario used Swords Dance.
    Lucario's attack was sharply raised.
    The sandstorm rages.
    Shaymin is buffetted by the sandstorm!
    Shaymin lost 6% of its health.

    50%

    -VS-

    50%

    F*ck. I was expecting him to predict a switch to Heatran and spam Close Combat, but he did the smart thing and went with Swords Dance. Now he can KO Shaymin with Extremespeed, and as weakened as Heatran is, Max damage will likely KO.

    Lucario used Extremespeed.
    Shaymin lost 50% of its health.
    Eon King's Shaymin fainted.
    Lucario lost 10% of its health.
    The sandstorm rages.

    0%

    -VS-

    40%

    Now it's all up to chance. If Extremespeed rolls twoards minimum damage, I win. If it's twoards max, he wins. What will the die roll? 1-1

    Eon King switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
    Lucario used Extremespeed.
    It's not very effective...
    Heatran lost 33% of its health.
    Lucario lost 10% of its health.
    Heatran used Flamethrower.
    It's super effective!
    Lucario lost 31% of its health.
    bt05's Lucario fainted.
    Eon King wins!

    5%

    -VS-

    0%

    *has a heart attack* I actually won?! Wow, not what I expected. Thank you, damage gods. Final score: 1-0 in my favor.

    +Props and Slops+

    Props:

    My Heatran: For killing or assisting 3 members of the opposing team.

    My Shaymin: For the assists on Rotom and Lucario, as well as the Swampert OHKO.

    My Opponent: For playing an excellent game that nearly outwitted me in the end.

    His Lucario: For wiping out two of my strongest team members and almost finishing a third.

    Slops:

    Me: For not taking the battle seriously from the beginning.

    My Opponent: For not putting HP Fire on Latias. Heatran isn't as much a threat to his team as Scizor is.

    Me Again: For becoming overconfident and not Bullet Punching Rotom when I had the chance.


    Well, what did you think? Was this battle good enough? What could I improve on in picking out my next warstory? do yew leik mudkipz?

    Thanks, and until next time.

    Eon Out
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    "Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."



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    Wow! It was a good battle and it was close!
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    Quote Originally Posted by calze6 View Post
    Wow! It was a good battle and it was close!
    Thanks, calze. I know you don't give compliments like that easily. I'm not usually serious unless someone starts making a fool out of me, in which case the battle usually ends up like this one did, me coming back from three down to win, though not always as close.
    "I'm fighting because there's a battle to be fought, Archer. I'm fighting to win. That's all."
    "Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."



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    I like your style. Enjoyed

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    I can't believe how close that was. 5% HP left on your last pokemon? i haven't seen a match that close in my whole life

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    thats awesome. good job on winning.
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    awsome story, loved it.


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    That was absloutly GENIUS! I Normally et bored within the first 3 words and just dont complement. But this. This was SOMTHING ELSE. Your Great!!!!

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    Standard Lead Tar runs Ice Beam. Just saying.

    Good battle.

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    ^Lol, no. Standard LeadTar ran exactly what I said it did (Stealth Rock, Payback, Stone Edge, Rest). I'd show you the set on Smogon, but they removed it since then, so I can't :P

    And lol @ bumping this thing.
    "I'm fighting because there's a battle to be fought, Archer. I'm fighting to win. That's all."
    "Hm. Alright, Rin. You are indeed my ideal Master. There is no one else I could hope to serve."



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    Thumbs up I love my Lucario

    I once had a close call myself on PBR. I was using (I think?) Ninjask, Rhyperior, and Lucario. Enemy was using Salmence, Metagross, and Milotic.

    Battle started out with my Ninjask using Swords Dance, Milotic of course used Ice Beam, but I had my Focus Sash. I use Baton Pass to switch to Rhyperior, but the milotic used Surf. So, switch back to Ninjask, got a X-Scissor on him before getting KOed. So now it's just my Sp. Attack Lucario left. Predicting my Aura Sphere (or any fighting move in general), he switches to Salmence. Does little damage of course. He uses Dragon Claw (guess his Salmence didnt have a super effective move) Doesn't do much to Luc, I use Dragon Pulse and KO it. Next out is Metagross. I use Sphere, does %50, He uses Psychic, and take Luc to red or near red. I use Sphere and KO Metagross, so now it's mildly wounded Milotic vs. badly wounded Lucario. This is the epic fail on his part and the epic win on mine. I use Sphere and almost kill it put it's not enough, but then...Milotic uses.....Ice Beam. Lucario hangs on by the skin of his teeth and finishes Milotic off with Aura Sphere.

    This has happened another time with an enemy that was using a KYOGYRE. Moral of the story is: Do not underestimate Lucario, and also always have at least most of your pokemon carry move super ffective to Steel.



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