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    I have a new fic! 8D It's been so weird the past month and a half with absolutely no fics to worry about. O.o Scary! Contest Tie is done, that's why.
    Anyway, so, I promised DarthOrsiris that I would take on his request in the Request Shop after this semester was over and Contest Tie was over - it is that time!
    He requested a Recruitshipping fic (name unofficial as of now, I researched it quickly) - it's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon flavored - Hero X Guildmaster Wigglytuff with essence of Wigglytuff/Chatot and Hero/Partner. If you want more details and spoilers, look in the request shop. This will be multi-chaptered and homosexual. Rating: PG

    Without further adieu, I present "The Joke's on Me".
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    Had I known what would befall me in the few months prior to this narration, I would have never even stepped foot into Wigglytuff’s guild that one bright afternoon. As I approached the large, pink manor in the likeness of the one that would change my life forever, I actually had confidence. I held my chin up high and proceeded to become part of a team that would go down in history, or so I thought.
    I climbed the stairs alone, all along thinking of how I was finally doing something I had always wanted to do. I had heard stories of the mystery dungeon teams and their plight within the endless caverns throughout the region as they relentlessly caught criminals and rescued those in need for the good of the community. Now, finally, I could be a part of that. I stood motionless in front of the main entrance, staring up at the building. Wigglytuff had been in a plethora of the stories I had heard – even still he reigned supreme as one of the best explorers of the time. He was a household name, really. However, only his successes were documented. His personal life and attitudes were completely unknown to the public, in which I would soon find out.

    “It’s a Pikachu! A Pikachu!” cried a large voice from just underneath my feet, certainly a Loudred, I knew.

    Frightened, I jumped back. I had not even realized I was standing on an open grate that covered a tunnel that reached below the ground.

    “What is your business?” shouted the Loudred again.

    I could not see the Pokemon that addressed me, but I answered back, “I am here to join the guild. I wish to become a famed explorer.”

    I was honest, as I was sure that was what they wanted. However, the Pokemon below giggled at me as the main doors opened to welcome me. I stepped inside, down a ladder, and was taken aback at what I saw. It was a true, working guild. The main floor was a single room, but Pokemon of all sorts crowded around the two bulletin boards, as others addressed their teams about what to do next. Magnezone was also present, and I actually got to see him carry off a criminal Snubbull within my first few seconds at the guild. It was exciting! I looked around, trying to figure out what to do next, though. I was sure that the first plan of action was to find Wigglytuff so that he may offer me a job. However, I was lost. The latter I had come down on led further down a rabbit hole, surely to a new level, so I was unsure where to go, or if I was even allowed down there.
    So, I looked around and finally spotted a Cyndaquil, standing all alone and looking petrified. I approached him and asked, “Excuse me, but would you happen to know where Wigglytuff’s office might be?”

    The Cyndaquil seemed to be relieved, and then giggled. “I’m standing right in front of it!”

    I looked up and wanted to so badly hit myself in the face. Right above the Cyndaquil’s head was written “WIGGLYTUFF” upon the wooden door.

    “But I’m glad you showed up. I’ve been meaning to go in and start a team, but I’ve been nervous. I don’t know if Wigglytuff will reject me or something,” the Cyndaquil chimed into my thoughts of my own stupidity.

    “Rejected? I don’t think he’d reject us,” I said, baffled by the thought.

    “Well, I always think of the worst case scenario. I’m kind of pessimistic…I can’t help it,” the Cyndaquil answered. “Would you want to be on my team? If we join together we’d have a better chance of getting through the dungeons anyway.”

    I only had to think of this for a second. Of course! How silly of me. There is no “I” in team, I’d need a partner at the very least to watch my back! I quickly agreed to this random union, and together we marched into Wigglytuff’s chamber.
    I knocked first of course, in reality, and a Chatot answered the door in a way which I found he’d rather be anywhere but letting us in. Wigglytuff, on the other hand, was completely welcoming. He did not move from his seat, but he was terribly flamboyant.

    “Welcome! Welcome!” he said in a bubbly, yet stern voice. It was the voice of a leader, with the tone of a happy child.

    As he motioned us to the seats in from of his cherry wood desk, I evaluated him and his partner. Chatot seemed to be the brains, where, as I would soon find out, Wigglytuff had lost his, or so it seemed.

    “So, what can I do for you boys today?” Wigglytuff asked. His personality shined through every word he ever spoke. He was classy, yet I had never met a Pokemon more amiable.

    “We’d like to start up our own Rescue Team,” I answered immediately. “I’m sure if we go on enough missions, our team will grow.”

    “But of course,” Wigglytuff chimed. “After all, the beginning is where we all start.”

    Wigglytuff motioned to Chatot, “Bring me the sign on papers, would you?”

    Chatot obeyed, and flew to a shelf on the bookcase where he fetched a packet of paper in which he dropped in front of me. Apparently Cyndaquil didn’t exist.

    “If you want to work for me, I’ll give you the basics – 80% of your reward money goes to the guild where it will pay for all of your housing and food expenses.”

    And there was the catch I knew would come. However, where most would run away, I found this to be a great opportunity. Cyndaquil looked at me as if he did not agree with these terms, but I did not return the glance. I was not in this for the money, nor was I concerned with that percentage. If Wigglytuff was going to house and feed us, then what was money really for in the first place? Surely if we did enough, that 20% would grow into more than we needed. As a third rate team, we could use all the help Wigglytuff could give.

    “That’s completely fine,” I said, and surely shocked the crap out of Chatot as I signed my name on the dotted line.

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    Not to be nitpicky and/or ungrateful, but that doesn't seem to be the plot I requested. Unless, of course, this is just a prologue, and the fun starts next chapter. The original request was that Bidoof and Sunflora rope the hero into proving whether or not Wigglytuff is gay. The hero uses Attract to see if it works on him, and it doesn't - but that's not what Wigglytuff wants the hero to think. It's still good, though.
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    I am very aware of that. You are right, the fun does start next chapter. I'm being slow, I know...the only things I'm not doing right are that you asked for a Oneshot (which I completely missed until after I posted this -.-) and the "hero" isn't the real hero from the games because that one's actually human and I thought that'd be really...weird. X.x
    But all and all, it's going to be good, you'll see. :P I appreciate the swift response.
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    Aw, no one else replied. Oh well. Here's chapter two.
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    That night, Cyndaquil and I got to know each other. Apparently, he had the same dreams as I did for our mystery dungeon team. However, with his fragile attitude, I quickly assumed leadership unofficially. He did not seem to mind this. We named ourselves Team First Strike. It was all Cyndaquil’s idea – he had been thinking about it all his life, or so he told me. I could not object.
    We also toured the guild. As an official team working under Wigglytuff, I finally felt that I had a place to be, and soon took it upon myself to go down the ladder further into the guild. Downstairs was accessible to other teams, and other services were available. Croagunk told us how he made new items from ones we would find out in the field, and Chimecho kept records of all the teams’ outer acquaintances. There was then a dining hall and rooms for the teams, like I was at the time, that lived in the guild building.
    Dinner was most interesting. There was an endless supply of food, and as I shoveled it into my mouth, I could not be happier with my current situation. However, I should mention, it was after this feast that things got interesting.
    Wigglytuff assigned a Bidoof and a Sunflora to escort us to our room - a vacant, dug out burrow stemming from the main hall of residencies for which we dependent teams stayed. There was nothing but the softest hay to lie on, but I was content with this new home and Cyndaquil did not seem to mind after taking in that he finally had his own place.

    “So, you like it here?” the Sunflora asked, as I’m sure she saw us giddy with excitement.

    “Yes, thank you very much,” I replied.

    “What did you guys think of Wigglytuff?” the Bidoof asked.

    “I thought he was a little demanding, but I guess he’s nice, too,” Cyndaquil squeaked an answer.

    “I would say he’s fair,” I replied, and said nothing more.

    “He’s a famed explorer and a hero to many,” Sunflora began. “But no one really knows much about him.”

    Bidoof chimed in. “We were willing to find out for ourselves.”

    I quirked my head. They sure did ease into what would become the bane of my existence. “What do you want to know?”

    “Well,” the Sunflora proceeded, as if unsure how to go on. “I know that Wigglytuff did not hide his personality from you...”

    “We think he’s gay,” the Bidoof blurted.

    I was taken aback by the notion. Though simpletons might have thought this orientation might have made Wigglytuff a lesser hero, it seemed to perk these Pokemon’s interest in seeing if it was so. Whether or not that would change how people saw Wigglytuff was beyond me, but I’m sure it would not be good. I had to admit, though, that I found Wigglytuff had a strikingly flamboyant personality, so I could not blame Bidoof and Sunflora for making the assumption. However, there was no proof.

    “We were wondering if you’d be willing to use Attract on him and see if it works,” Sunflora asked, almost ashamed.

    Bidoof had no shame, and quickly explained, “Attract only works on Pokemon of opposite genders, but it has been proven that it’ll work for same genders if the one being attracted is gay. However, they need to be in the same egg group.”

    “That’s where you come in! You’re a Pikachu! You’re in the same egg group as Wigglytuff,” Sunflora chimed in.

    I could not believe what I was hearing, but, eh, I had been studying the move Attract for a while, prior to my journey to Wigglytuff’s guild. I supposed I could kill two Pidgey with one stone if I went along with this. Little did I know their interest in Wigglytuff was not as deep as I had believed at the time.
    So, I agreed to the terms and would teach myself Attract to use on Wigglytuff the next time he called me into his office. Arcues only knew, and did nothing to stop, what was about to unravel.

    Though Cyndaquil and I went on our first petty missions that starting week, I spent the majority of my free time learning Attract and perfecting it in the name of history for Sunflora and Bidoof. Cyndaquil came to watch and laugh at me a few times, in which case I’d test it on him to embarrass him away.

    “Looks like it’s coming along well,” I heard Bidoof’s voice one day as I finished the final touches on Attract.

    It was a windy day, exactly one week since I had been admitted to the guild.

    “Yeah, I think I got it down,” I said. “Hey, it might work out well in dungeons in the future. Who knows, maybe I’ll attract new recruits.”

    I laughed at my own funny, but Bidoof didn’t budge.

    “Since you’ve been working hard, Wigglytuff wanted to see you. He wanted to give you a special item,” Bidoof said.

    I shrugged it off and followed him back to the guild. Without words, Bidoof seemed to remind me that this was the perfect moment to initiate the Attract that would reveal Wigglytuff for who he truly was. I was excited, but at the same time nervous. I did not know if it would wear off, and then what would become of me?
    I walked into Wigglytuff’s office and Bidoof left me to my devices. I knew he and Sunflora would spy, so I was confident that this would be over quickly.
    Wigglytuff sat in his chair unaware.

    “You’ve been doing very well for yourself this past week. It seems like you did a mission every day – very productive,” he noted. “And thank you so much for your rescue of that poor, defenseless Nidoran. Her mother was about to wring my neck! If I had one…”

    He chuckled at his own joke, and I joined him, seeing as how it was true. I also joined in my own pat on the back as I tried to ease into my plan in using the move I had diligently been studying alongside these missions.

    “Yes, I think I’ve leveled on every one. I feel like I’ve grown,” I lied, becoming haughty.

    “Is that so?” Wigglytuff was intrigued.

    “Yeah…do you think we could perhaps have a battle? I’d like to test out my strengths on someone as tough as yourself,” I said, adding in the compliment to earn this privilege.

    However, Chatot stepped in. “The Guildmaster does not take challenges!”

    “Oh, hush up,” Wigglytuff moved Chatot to face him. “I can handle myself, thank you very much! I just had myself a Perfect Apple, so I’m in the best of moods. I shall take up your challenge!”

    I was eager to fight him, even if I had not been planning on doing Sunflora and Bidoof’s dirty work. This would be interesting. Wigglytuff jumped from his chair, around the desk and to the rounded door. Opening it, my friends fell to the floor. Sunflora picked herself up immediately, but Bidoof took his time.

    “Oh, hello!” Wigglytuff beamed, as if unaware they had been eavesdropping. I could almost feel Chatot rolling his big eyes. “We’re about to have a gentlemen’s duel, so, please back away!”

    Sunflora and Bidoof made way for Wigglytuff, who, to my surprise, positioned himself some distance further into the main guild chamber. Luckily it was later in the day, and the other satellite teams had gone home for the day.

    “Well, come on, you wanted to have this fight!” Wigglytuff called to me, pointing his fingerless hand towards the area beyond him.

    I took my position, nervous.

    “Begin the match!” Chatot shouted, allowing the entire guild to hear.

    With his call, the fight began. Wigglytuff sprinted towards me, faster than I could have imagined, delivering a Double Slap to me, only to quickly make distance between us. However, I was sure he was only testing me. I let out a Thundershock, a move that entangled him with its stinging flashes of light. He was damaged, but it seemed to do little as he ran towards me again. I stood my ground, my mind wavering here and there about whether I should use Attract now or wait until it seemed necessary. I decided to go with the latter.
    This time, he hopped into the air, and positioned himself mid-air for a Body Slam. As he came tumbling down, I jumped up for a Tackle. I hit him, but it did not stop his heavy, pillow-like body from crushing me. At the time, I was pretty weak in comparison to the pink rabbit I called a guild leader, so the attack almost knocked me out. I showed much fatigue on my face, as Wigglytuff ran up to me for the final blow. I figured it was now or never.
    I struck my sexiest pose and released the Attract heart. The bubble hit my target as it popped in Wigglytuff’s face. He seemed to be awestruck, or completely dumbfounded, and he stood like that for quite a while. By this point, some of the other guild members had gathered around, but I’m sure it was not as many as Bidoof and Sunflora had wanted. When Wigglytuff awoke from his dumbfounding, he looked at me in a desirous way, his big blue eyes completely checking me out.
    My face turned red, from what I could feel, and I started to sweat. I had used Attract and it had worked! There was Sunflora and Bidoof’s proof, but, now what? It appeared as though the Guildmaster was in love with me! I had gained unwanted lust. Wigglytuff approached me, this time slowly and as harmless as he had been the first time I met him. Catching himself, he turned around to the other guild members watching. I was not sure if they understood what was going on, but Wigglytuff shooed them away as he handed the match victory to me. With everyone gone, even Chatot, Wigglytuff resumed his dazed approach toward me.
    My heart started to beat faster. I wanted to run, but I remained put. In front of me, he looked down at me and smiled.

    “I knew you were teaching yourself Attract, but to use it on me,” Wigglytuff began. “Trust me, darling, it wasn’t necessary.”

    I stood in place, feeling completely dazed and confused, as if some heavy sheet had been thrust over my better judgment.
    “Come see me anytime, sweetheart,” Wigglytuff said as he bid me adieu and disappeared into his chamber, only to leave me completely alone and beside myself.
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    Last chapter. Hope someone enjoyed it.
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    As the days passed, I became more and more upset with my situation, or so I thought at the time. As each hour went by with each day afterward, I began to feel funny and light headed, but not in a physical way. I began to think fondly of Wigglytuff, and whenever he passed me by, I felt as though I ought to follow him – to where was anyone’s guess. He had a power to him that I’m sure is rarely seen in nature. He had no claws or pointed teeth. The man ate Perfect Apples his whole life, for goodness sake, and pranced and flitted in and out of my scope of vision like a Celebi might. He was fearsome in battle, but I noticed his leadership much more, and I can still say now, that had been what I admired most about him. He kept the Guild in order with so much as lifting a finger or becoming silent. It was amazing to see him in action. However, I felt incredibly shy, and though I wanted to see or speak with him so badly, I hid myself from him, feeling ashamed for no reason at all. I always felt that he was playing with me, and not once did he try to seek me out after our match. Although, at dinner, he’d stare at me for a while, wink, or try and get me to sit next to him. I figured he did not want to make too much of a scene, but at some point, I felt as though he had the same feelings for me that I, regrettably, had began feeling for him.
    My partner did not approve of this, and often tried to get my attention out of no where. He did not know, but I can only guess what he thought.

    One week to the day after our match, I was called into Wigglytuff’s office. I was nervous, as anyone would after trying to avoid him. I had no choice, though, after all, his firm grip on the whole guild included me.

    I stepped wearily into his chambers, and not a moment sooner my jaw dropped with the scene before me. Chatot was nowhere to be seen, and Wigglytuff’s room was dim, illuminated only by candle light coming from the candle sticks that were perched on the desk. He sat facing me from his desk, which he had gone through the trouble of adorning with a white, laced table cloth, wine glasses made from the finest sands of Northern Desert, and a decorated, porcelain dish that served Perfect Apple Pie, a sheer delicacy. Wigglytuff motioned that I sit in the chair opposite him, and I obeyed.

    “Do all the members get to enjoy Perfect Apple Pie?” I joked, laughing nervously, my face beet red.

    “Oh, heavens, no!” Wigglytuf began, leaning back in his seat. “Not even Chatot knows I have some.”

    “Oh,” I said nervously, and knew there Wigglytuff had invited me on a most private date.

    “Tell me,” he leaned towards me. “Why have you been avoiding me? I would so like it if you sit next to me during normal dinners.”

    “I, um,” I couldn’t speak. I was so nervous, I felt like a novice in front of Casanova. I had already come to grips with my feelings, but my mind refused to let them be expressed. “I…have been a bit confused over the past week…since our match, I mean.”

    “Oh? And why is that, sweetie?” Wigglytuff asked, and gently stroked my left ear.

    I felt like a complete idiot and incredibly cruel. Though my feelings were true, they had come about under a lie, and I just had to expose my so-called friends.

    “Our match was…not completely genuine,” I blurted. “Bidoof and Sunflora…or, mostly Bidoof, had me practice Attract to use on you to…”

    I could not finish. Saying it out loud made it the cruelest thing in the world, especially now that I had found out my own homosexuality towards this most worthy of Pokemon. However, Wigglytuff, did not seem to think it was cruel, but in fact funny and went right along to finish my sentence, “…See if I was gay?”

    “Yes, and I feel terrible for siding with them. You don’t deserve that kind of treatment,” I apologized. “I’ve only come to respect and admire you more since then, Wigglytuff.”

    I rattled away without hearing him all the way. I stopped and looked up, shocked he was smirking and then shrugged.

    “Wait…you know?” I asked, puzzled.

    “Oh, sure, they do that to the rookies all the time. Why do you think there aren’t a lot of other rookies around but you and that Cyndaquil?”

    “But…” I tried, but was so confused.

    “Listen, honey, my business will be known to the world when I’m dead, but for right now, I like keeping them in the dark. I like to party, I get drunk off of the finest ciders, frolic around, and live like a princess, but here’s the catch – I’m not gay. Straight to the moon, baby. I only wanted to end this fiasco as soon as I could, seeing as how you were getting so awkward. I couldn’t think of any way else to break you. You can be certain Bidoof and Sunflora will get their’s.”

    I listened, and though my respect for him grew, and I laugh at it now, at the time, my heart was breaking, and I was sure he could see it shatter in my eyes. I did not laugh at his own, self-perception, I could not even smirk.

    “Are you all right?” he asked, seeing as how I was not joining him in a friendly banter.

    I did not move. I did not want to admit my feelings now that I knew for sure they would not be reciprocated. However, Wigglytuff saw right through me as my face explained all the hurt I was hiding.

    “Oh my goodness, you really fell in love with me,” Wigglytuff blurted and probably felt like a jerk. “Oh…I suppose when you hit me in our fight, the Cute Charm actually worked…”

    I had never thought of it, but it must have been true.

    “I’ll, um…be leaving now. If you want, put Cyndaquil as the leader for Team First Strike,” I told Wigglytuff as I got down from my seat.

    He was shocked and answered, “We can still be friends, I don’t blame you for what happened. And besides, do you really think that Cyndaquil can hold his own in a dungeon? You haven’t even recruited anyone to take your place!”

    “I appreciate the offers, but I can’t stay here.” I said, and walked away, holding back tears and leaving my pride at the door.



    I can only imagine what became of Bidoof and Sunflora. Though I traveled some ways away from the Guild, they were able to find me. My old partner, Cyndaquil, happened to pass by and recognized me as I worked here at my current location and self-owned business, Berry Express. He had come over to buy a ton or so of Oran Berries when he recognized me. He was happy to tell me he had continued with our rescue team, and become quite the leader in my absence. He begged me to come back, but I refrained from doing so. There was no going back, though I was happy to hear Bidoof and Sunflora got what was coming to them. Apparently, Wigglytuff only let them eat Tomato Berries for a week and even force fed them at one point. Heh, sounds like something I would enjoy doing at some time in my life. For all that happened, I can’t say my shame has gone away, but I am content with myself. Perhaps things will change and I will go back again, confident and wiser. For now, I tell my story only to those who need some cheering up. After all, what could be more embarrassing that having a joke like that played on you?
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    Whoa. I'm disappointed, Encyclopika. When I first submitted this request, I had a vision of a lighthearted romp dancing in my head. Seeing this angst-fest... depresses me.

    Don't get me wrong, it was very well written. I just wish it wasn't so... serious.
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    I liked it . I've never actually read a Pokemon x Pokemon fic before, but it was entertaining. I loved the first chapter when Pikachu was first recruited. Cyndaquil was cute and the way you described Wigglytuff (one of my favorite pokemon btw) was really good. The whole dungeon scenario was described pretty lucidly, which is great because it can be a drag to read something you don't understand.

    Chapter 2 and 3 were alright. Firstly, what I loved about chapter 2 was the fight scene , I've never read a pokemon or well a pokemon from pokemon dungeon describe a battle. Also, I completley forgot about Wigglytuff's Cute Charm ability until you introduced it in Chapter 3. No wonder Pikachu was falling in love! What I didn't like about these chapters, however, was how the tone shifted toward being serious. Honestly, I couldn't really take the whole, as Darth Osiris put it, "angst-fest" seriously. With the romantic dinner scene, wine and Pikachu unsure of his feelings, it all just seemed too real for a world where furry little creatures run rampid eating Perfect Apples.

    Also, I don't understand why Wigglytuff was able to have been Attracted by Pikachu in the first place? Was Wigglytuff just playing along with sunflora and bidoof and if he was what did he have to gain from it? If Wigglytuff was really Attracted to Pikachu and it faded away, wouldn't the same have happened to Pikachu who was hit by Wigglytuff's Cute Charm.

    The ending where it was just like "Oh, I'm not gay", "I cant stay here goodbye" just didn't really fit well. A lighthearted romp, as Darth had described would probably have been better.

    Don't get me wrong though, I really did enjoy reading this. Your fics are always great! And I look foward to seeing what you come up with next
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    Quote Originally Posted by Darth Osiris
    Whoa. I'm disappointed, Encyclopika. When I first submitted this request, I had a vision of a lighthearted romp dancing in my head. Seeing this angst-fest... depresses me.

    Don't get me wrong, it was very well written. I just wish it wasn't so... serious.
    I'm sorry. I figured as much, but it's just not my style...I can get a few laughs in, but I just can't write comedy, and I don't read any of it either. I had gotten a request years ago for a ship that involved Jigglypuff/Paper towel/Socrates - and even with a messed up ship such as that, I managed to make it serious, even with how ridiculous it was. I realize all of my stories never get out without heartbreak or some kind of agony. ^^;;; It's just what I write and what the people who follow me /should/ expect.
    I'm sorry, this was the vision I had. ^^; If you like, you do not have to return your half of the trade, or you could make my Respectshipping idea extremely hilarious. I'm still glad you thought it was well written, at the very least.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tbone2356
    Also, I don't understand why Wigglytuff was able to have been Attracted by Pikachu in the first place? Was Wigglytuff just playing along with sunflora and bidoof and if he was what did he have to gain from it? If Wigglytuff was really Attracted to Pikachu and it faded away, wouldn't the same have happened to Pikachu who was hit by Wigglytuff's Cute Charm.
    Wigglytuff was never attracted to Pikachu - as Darth Osiris asked for in his request - Wigglytuff was playing around. His initial idea was to scare Pikachu or make him feel awkward, therefore, indirectly punishing him for going along with Bidoof and Sunflora. Pikachu, on the other hand, was attracted to Wigglytuff, and I tried to make it seem as though Pikachu admired Wigglytuff the moment he met him - Cute Charm either only solidified it, or had nothing to do with it - it was only Wigglytuff's guess.

    With the romantic dinner scene, wine and Pikachu unsure of his feelings, it all just seemed too real for a world where furry little creatures run rampid eating Perfect Apples
    .
    I only tried to make it realistic in the sense of Pokemon Mystery Dungeon, where our furry little creatures form mystery dungeon teams, have police forces, and perfectly made buildings, living as people would. Having this exchange of feelings and unsureness only follows it, but I respect your view.

    I can honestly say this was not a success, I suppose. :/ Oh, well - I can't win 'em all.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Encyclopika View Post
    Wigglytuff was never attracted to Pikachu - as Darth Osiris asked for in his request - Wigglytuff was playing around. His initial idea was to scare Pikachu or make him feel awkward, therefore, indirectly punishing him for going along with Bidoof and Sunflora.
    Well, for what it's worth, you're a frickin' genius for thinking of that, or at least smarter than me. It never even crossed my mind that Wigglytuff was indirectly punishing Pikachu for going along with Bidoof and Sunflora's plan. I like to call that the Grimmjow's Arm Paradox.

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    Well, for what it's worth, you're a frickin' genius for thinking of that, or at least smarter than me. It never even crossed my mind that Wigglytuff was indirectly punishing Pikachu for going along with Bidoof and Sunflora's plan.
    Hehe, thanks a lot. I try. :P
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