Nice story ScourgeOfHell, I agree with what everyone else said about being very good at getting the characters. Too many stories have the characters being OOC, especially the ones I've read with Iris involved. Usually the author ignores her hard shell and independent nature to make her look like a typical school girl in love, and that bores me. There's no drama or realism, it's like they just wanted to push a romance story. But that said, you did a good job with your story and I look forward to more from you.