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    Roots // Professorfic


    INDEX //

    0.1 // Chapter One
    0.2 // Chapter Two
    0.3 // Chapter Three
    0.4 // Chapter Four
    0.5 // Chapter Five
    0.6 // Chapter Six
    0.7 // Chapter Seven
    0.8 // Chapter Eight
    0.9 // Chapter Nine
    1.0 // Chapter Ten
    1.1 // Chapter Eleven
    1.2 // Chapter Twelve
    1.3 // Chapter Thirteen
    1.4 // Chapter Fourteen
    1.5 // Chapter Fifteen
    1.6 // Chapter Sixteen | (2)
    1.7 // Chapter Seventeen
    1.8 // Chapter Eighteen
    1.9 // Chapter Nineteen
    2.0 // Chapter Twenty | (2)
    2.1 // Chapter Twenty-One
    2.2 // Chapter Twenty-Two
    2.3 // Chapter Twenty-Three
    2.4 // Chapter Twenty-Four
    2.5 // Chapter Twenty-Five
    2.6 // Chapter Twenty-Six
    2.7 // Chapter Twenty-Seven
    2.8 // Chapter Twenty-Eight
    2.9 // Chapter Twenty-Nine
    3.0 // Chapter Thirty
    3.1 // Chapter Thirty-One
    3.2 // Chapter Thirty-Two
    3.3 // Chapter Thirty-Three | (2)
    3.4 // Chapter Thirty-Four (Coming soon)


    INTRO //

    Hey everyone. This is a little idea I had a while ago, and I think it needs a certain introduction before we begin.

    As the title says, this is a Professorfic. Specifically, it's about the childhood of Professor Rowan, and how he grew up to be the person he is today. The games/canon gave absolutely no information about this whatsoever, so I had a lot of creative room to work with. The result was, for better or worse, the thread you see today.

    Rating: PG-13 for swearing. That's pretty much it, but if there's ever an exception, I'll let you know.

    Chapter sequence: I label each chapter as a decimal, so whatever number it is, just imagine the decimal point moving one place to the left. Chapter 1 is written as Chapter 0.1, Chapter 2 is Chapter 0.2, and so on. This means that Chapter 10 will be Chapter 1.0. (Chapter 0.5 is not half a chapter!)


    A NOTE ON CULTURE AND TECHNOLOGY //

    This story is set in 1963, so there will be some obvious differences between it and a story set in today's world. Obviously, people in 1963 didn't have all the super-cool gadgetry we (and therefore, the trainers in the games) have today, but I think that makes the story all the more interesting.

    About songs. I don't like to put much music in the writing in general, but some chapters are the exception. What you have to know is that I do take some liberties pertaining to release dates. The story is set in 1963, but a lot of awesome songs were released after that, and I think they set the mood perfectly for some scenes, so I use them. When I do, I'll make sure to put the real release date in an author's note, for those who are interested.

    The essence of this fic is based on the games, especially certain characters and situations within them. It's supposed to be a story of how the young Rowan grew up to be a professor, but really, it's much more. I will sometimes stray from the common geography of Sinnoh and its towns for the sake of the story, so if you notice a particular thing that doesn't seem to be in its correct place, rest assured, because everything is 100% intentional.

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    And here... we... go!



    0.1

    Summer 1963 was the peak of the year, and in more ways than one. Temperatures soared into the 90s, sending half of Sinnoh's inhabitants indoors, and the other half outside. Newspapers and televisions broadcasted the heat of the Space Race, an ongoing competition between them and the Hoenn region. Citizens marveled the newly-invented pokéball, which had only recently appeared in stores.

    May 17th was no day in particular for Jubilife City. The sky was cloudless. Traffic was heavy. Everyone seemed to know where they were going, for the most part at least.

    In a quieter corner of the city, well beyond the din of big business, was a school, the only one in West Jubilife. Its paint was peeling, and its bell was rusty. The students and faculty were all inside, leaving the building still and quiet. It was here, behind a scruffy hedge in the empty backyard, that a lone Stunky stood shaking.

    His purple and beige coloring stood out against the brown and green of the trees. With their every rustle his ears perked, then flattened again. Black eyes darted back and forth, as if diligently searching for something within the playground.

    For a few minutes, the only sound was the creak of swings rocking with the wind.

    And then, a single cry sliced through the silence.

    "THERE IT IS! GET IT GET IT!" Something large and metal collided with the ground, inches away from his leg. The pokémon reacted instantly.

    He sprang over the hedge and sprinted forward, almost too quick for the eye to see. The Stunky clawed across the grass and gravel, his target a rusty garbage can standing by the fence. The deafening beat of footsteps behind him drowned out the frantic quivers of his heart. The Stunky skid to a halt in front of the garbage can and made to turn behind it, but there was already someone waiting there.

    "Gotcha!"

    A strange pair of hands shot out and grabbed the Stunky by the tail. He tried to wriggle free, but their grip was iron. They lifted him like a worthless piece of paper, and he watched as the clumps of dirt grew smaller and smaller...




    //////



    Michael Rowan stood up slowly. His smile was wide, and there was a mischievous gleam in his blue eyes. He hoisted the Stunky up into the air like a fresh kill, ignoring its squeals and flails.

    From the other side of the playground, two other boys ran to catch up with him. The first was blond and bespectacled. The second was a bit taller, and carried a large net with him. Upon seeing the squirming Stunky, he dropped it into the mud.

    "Dude... how did you catch that thing?" he panted, wiping a film of sweat from his forehead.

    "Yeah that must have been, like, seventy miles per hour!" said the first boy.

    Michael shrugged nonchalantly. "Stunkies are stupid. They can run fast and everything, but all you have to do is corner them." He shook the Stunky a little, and the pokémon's cries increased. "Well that was a good use of eleven minutes. It was nice hunting with you today. Cory. Brendan."

    The boys all shook hands. Their arms were covered with dirt, leaves, and bruises.

    "So you see?" Michael grinned. "I told you this would be better than history!"

    "Yeah, I'm sick of learning about this stupid country," the blond boy, Cory, said. "Why should it matter how it began if we weren't even there?"

    "Yeah," Brendan agreed. "Mr. Caesar's a total dunce. He doesn't even know what he's talking about, all he does is give us work."

    "I say we egg his house on the last day of school," Michael said.

    Cory laughed. "That would be so cool! I heard another group of kids was gonna do the same for Mrs. Stanton. And they were gonna spray paint her car."

    "Dude, we should so do that. And it's not like we'll get in trouble either, cause no one can give detentions over summer."

    "Yeah." Cory's gaze fell on the Stunky. "So what're we gonna do with it?"

    "Let's see if it'll shoot musk at us," Michael said. "Come on ugly! Is that all you've got?"

    "Shake it a little," Brendan suggested.

    Michael bit his lip and shook the pokémon from side to side. When nothing happened, he shook it harder, until the Stunky's torso became a blur. A dim green gas began to emanate from somewhere underneath it, like a car's exhaust. It billowed around the three boys, who instantly began to cough. The smell reminded Michael of rotten eggs.

    "Man! Isn't this smell supposed to last for days or something?" Brendan wheezed.

    "Weeks, actually," Michael corrected.

    "Hey, let's dunk its head in the toilet next!" Cory snickered. "I call holding it."

    "Nah, we need to be more creative." Michael said, his nose still buried under his shirt collar. "Why don't we bring it home and use it for experiments or something?"

    "Yeah, we'll be like those badass scientists in the newspaper," Cory said. "We can do surgery on it and try to clone it and stuff! We'll have a lot of time over break. All we need is a cage."

    Michael beamed. "Awesome. We'll go to the hardware store and get us a cage." He lifted the Stunky so their eyes were level. "Did you hear that, little fella? You're coming home with us." The Stunky shivered.

    "BOYS!"

    Instantly, all three heads turned to the direction of the sound. Through his tears, Michael could see a woman exit the building. Her lips were slightly parted, and she was descending the stairs as fast as her two-inch heels would allow.

    Cory turned back to Michael, his eyes wide. "Teacher!"

    Michael groaned. "Shit! We have to get out of here!"

    "Are you kidding? We'll be in even more trouble!" Brendan said.

    "That's if we get caught, now lets go!" With the Stunky in hand, Michael turned and sprinted away.

    He was a pretty decent runner for his age, able to outrun nearly every boy in his class. The only person who was faster was his older brother, Richard. They'd always be having races, before he left.

    Michael's eyes remained fixed on the fence, narrowing on a line of palm trees. Behind them was a section lower than the others, a forgotten construction error he had discovered in the beginning of the year. With the right angle and timing, he could jump over it.

    "GET BACK HERE RIGHT NOW!" the woman shrieked again, but her voice quickly faded.

    "Fat chance," Michael couldn't help but whisper.

    He neared the fence in a few second's time. Gasping, he drew his arm back and threw the Stunky over to the other side. Then he leaped over the fence himself, using the diamond-shaped gaps as handholds. Brendan and Cory followed suit. When they had all landed safely, Michael jumped to his feet.

    "Now RUN!" He grabbed the Stunky's tail and, without a second thought, sped off towards freedom.




    //////



    Three days later, Michael sat in a quiet classroom, his eyes cast downward. The desk's surface was blackened from years of gum and carving. His mother, Patricia, sat beside him. Her back was stiff and her hands were folded in her lap, her classical business pose. To the left, a large window gave glimpse of a happy outside world. Michael yearned to be there, but it seemed that the authority figures had other plans.

    Mrs. Maxwell's space was a little island at the head of the classroom. Unlike everything else in the room, her things were not dirty or worn-down. All her papers were in their designated places. She had separate folders for each period. She never ate in class, so there were no lingering odors around her desk.

    Though Mrs. Maxwell was usually calm, she still looked a little crabby after the chase. Michael watched as she scribbled something onto a piece of paper and slammed the pencil back into the holder. When she rose from her seat, her chair skid off towards the wall.

    "Unbelievable. Simply unbelievable... and for someone of his intelligence!" She planted herself in a nearby stool, facing them both.

    "What did he do this time, Barbara?" Patricia asked, more tired than angry. She was fidgeting with the gold chain around her neck. After all the times Michael had been called in, the two women had become so familiar that they addressed each other by their first name.

    "I caught Michael skipping class on Tuesday with two other boys. I went to look for them, and I found them in the playground, harassing a wild Stunky." Mrs. Maxwell turned to face Michael, who made a valiant effort not to look back. After bolting from school that day, neither he nor his friends had heard anything from the school about their misconduct. Yet, when they returned the next day, all three found a notice waiting on their desk, informing them that they were called in for a conference sometime during the week. Brendan and Cory were able to get theirs over with on Wednesday and Thursday, and wash the smell off of themselves and their clothes. As usual, Michael was the only one left waiting.

    Upon hearing Mrs. Maxwell's words, Patricia let out a sad sigh. For a minute, Michael wondered if she was about to cry. And as much as he hated to admit it, it scared him a little. His mother wasn't the crying type. But then again, there were still a lot of things he didn't know about her.

    "I don't like to deal with these things, Patricia," Mrs. Maxwell continued. "The first time, well okay, maybe he just didn't know his place. The second time, well, I'll have him clean the desks after class. I can even excuse a third for a kid like him, but this is simply intolerable. We've tried every single punishment under the sun - cleaning, writing lines, but nothing seems to be getting to him. I read the rules to my classes on the first day of every year. I always tell them that after they've caused enough trouble, the next step is suspension. So, it hurts me to say this, but I will have to suspend your son for the remainder of the school year."

    She paused to let the words sink in. Michael puffed out his cheeks, waiting to be overcome by some sort of emotional response. But the truth was, he didn't feel anything. The word 'suspension' had lost meaning for him a while ago. And besides, it was only one week. What could be so unfathomably important that he simply had to be at school to see it? The last days consisted of nothing but free periods, since teachers were busy with their grade books and assignment records. They couldn't assign any more work either, since it would only add to the things they themselves had to do. So what else was there to miss? A party?

    Michael stole a sideways glance at his mother, readying himself for tears or an angry glare, but saw her to be perfectly calm. She was staring ahead with a pensive expression, her chin resting in her hands.

    "It's not your fault, Patricia," Mrs. Maxwell was quick to say.

    Michael grumbled. The only thing he hated more than conferences was the invisible rule that everyone there seemed to adhere to - it is always the student's fault.

    Meanwhile, Patricia was shaking her head slowly, as if she was just as confused as Mrs. Maxwell was. "I try, I really do... but I just don't know what's gotten into him."

    Mrs. Maxwell managed a small smile. "It really hurts me to do this, Patricia. Especially since his grades are perfect. I'm really starting to wonder if there may be any outside sources that are causing his bad behavior. How is your relationship with Michael?"

    Patricia looked startled by the question. "Fine!"

    "How often do you converse?"

    "I try to talk with him as often as I can. But it seems like he doesn't want anything to do with me."

    Partially true, Michael thought. The only times he didn't like his mother were when she tried to make conversation that didn't want to be made, gluing a fake smile to her face and asking him about things she never used to care about. She did that more often nowadays, so he responded likewise.

    Mrs. Maxwell continued. "Has Michael ever shown any interest in extracurricular activities? The science club? Debate team?"

    Patricia shook her head again. "No. I offered it to him, but he refused."

    "You know, those who are enrolled in afterschool clubs or weekend activities tend to have better performances in school, and a better attitude overall. So, maybe it's time to consider something for your son." For the first time during the meeting, the two women turned to face Michael.

    "Well, Michael? What do you have to say?"

    "Science club is for geeks," he said simply. "I don't want to build a rocket out of a plastic bottle. I'd rather have the real thing."

    Mrs. Maxwell sighed. She went back to her desk and took a long sip from her water bottle. "Well, then there's very little I can recommend for you. Are there any problems at home that may be causing him stress? That can often cause someone to act up in school."

    Patricia's eyes widened. "Of course not! Not that I know of, at least."

    "What about you, Michael? Do you have anything to add?"

    "No." Nothing I'd say to you, that is.

    Mrs. Maxwell nodded again. She did this so frequently, it reminded him of a bobblehead. "Another thing I've been noticing over time is that a source for bad behavior can often lie in the type of friends someone has..." her eyes trailed off towards the ceiling, then came down to find Michael.

    Instantly, he did a double-take. Cory and Brendan were his two best friends, and nothing would ever change that. They had met on the third day of school after finding themselves in the same detention room.

    That day, Michael had brought a pack of water balloons to school, hoping to liven up the usually boring recess hour. Little did he know, two other boys had been thinking the exact same thing. They had all snuck into the building to fill the balloons. They were fighting over water fountain privileges when a teacher came and caught them all.

    "Great minds think alike, I suppose," Michael had said, and a bond was forged.

    From that day on, he, Cory, and Brendan sat together at lunch, during lessons, and on the bus. Though the two didn't get good grades, and couldn't understand half of their homework, Michael enjoyed being in their company. They would meet on the weekends to play sports in the backyard. On rare occasions, they could wander around the downtown with whatever allowance their parents gave them. They'd also pull pranks on people they didn't like, but it was always something simple, like a fake letter or a quarter stuck to the ground. Sure they goofed off in class sometimes, but who didn't?

    "My friends are normal!" Michael countered, staring at Mrs. Maxwell with disbelief. "I don't care about their grades! And you're the one who's always talking about rights. What happened to everyone being equal?"

    Mrs. Maxwell shook her head sadly. "You are who your friends are, Michael. I think that if you spent your time with the responsible people at this school, you'd be more responsible yourself."

    "So you'd rather have me make friends with the dweebs in the science club just because I have the 'potential'?"

    "Don't talk back to her, Michael! She knows what she's talking about!" Patricia immediately came to Mrs. Maxwell's defense. Still no surprise there.

    "But my grades are perfect! Look, she even said so herself!"

    "It's not just about grades, Mike! It's about your entire personality! Before you entered middle school, you were a sweet little boy. Now look at you! When was the last time you washed your hair?"

    Michael reached up and found a small black tuft that hung limp on his forehead. He combed his fingers back, feeling the strands shift and twist away. They were soft, though a bit dirty from all his time spent outside.

    "My hair's fine!" Michael sank back into his seat, his cheeks reddening.

    For a few moments, Mrs. Maxwell did not speak. Her eyes moved back and forth between the many posters on her back wall. They depicted moronic phrases like "Reading makes you a better person!" and "Bully-free Zone!" She seemed to be weighing an idea on her tongue, arranging and processing it before speaking.

    "There's another thing I wanted to discuss with you, Ms. Rowan. As you know... it's that time of year again." Michael closed his eyes and let out a sigh. "Nine-year-olds from all over Sinnoh will be coming to get their starter pokémon from Professor Emerson. Are you going to take Michael this year, or are you going to postpone again?"

    Patricia made no response.

    "He is thirteen, and most kids his age already have their pokémon. He might be feeling left out."

    "I don't know... He can be so reckless sometimes, that I just don't know... That Stunky... what if the same thing happens to his starter?"

    "Perhaps having his own pokémon will teach him a thing or two about responsibility? You and Michael can raise the pokémon together. Then, whenever you feel he's ready, you can take him to get his trainer card and it will be legal for him to collect badges."

    Patricia looked over to Michael, who shrugged. "I don't want a starter."

    "And why not?" asked Mrs. Maxwell.

    "Because it's a scam."

    Mrs. Maxwell began to shake her head, a laugh escaping her lips. Patricia joined in, probably out of guilt. But to Michael, it made perfect sense.

    Obviously, people who gave out free pokémon would be expecting something in return. There had to be some sort of business deal going on. They needed money too. Would it involve a contract? Would he have to advertise their company? Were they just using kids as pawns to raise their pokémon to their full power, then demanding the kids to return them? The possibilities were endless. Michael stared at the palms of his hands for a while, caught in a loop.

    "Michael, how could it possibly be a scam?" Mrs. Maxwell said. "It's such a great learning experience. Think about it, we spent all this year talking about the different species of pokémon, and next year, you'll be able to have hands-on experience! It's a vital part of the curriculum."

    "I don't want one, I already told you."

    "You know, I think we should try this year," Patricia said, giving her son a glare. Michael's heart sank. If something had his mother's approval, it would happen no matter what. "Maybe it's the fact that he's never had a pokémon of his own that causes him to misbehave."

    "I hope I'm right!" Mrs. Maxwell let out a cackle. Apparently, it was supposed to be funny.

    By some invisible trigger, the two women rose and shook hands, officially ending the meeting. Patricia turned to leave, but before Michael could follow, Mrs. Maxwell put a hand on his shoulder and held him back.

    "You're a smart kid, Michael," she whispered. "Don't waste your talents."

    There was something in her eyes that he couldn't decipher. Hope? Forethought? She patted him on the shoulder, and he walked off without another word.




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    The Rowans were lucky enough to have a house just outside the city, instead of being bottled up in an apartment like so many others were. It was back from the days when the family had money, when Michael's father was still alive and his two brothers, Richard and Brian, were still living with them. Michael secretly referred to them as the 'good days', though there had been nothing good about them at all. With three family members gone, all that was left were two strangers.

    The house had two floors. Michael's bedroom was separate from the others - a cozy loft placed just above the kitchen. It had one large window overlooking his tiny backyard, and walls that were covered with posters. His shelves were overflowing with records, board games, and other random objects. It was nothing to be proud of, but a room was a room.

    The first thing Michael did after coming home was slam his door and flop down onto his bed. He threw his backpack onto the ground, letting all the junk inside spill out.

    Suspended for the rest of the year... What kind of idiot does that? And she even said that I get good grades. Moron. Even worse, now I have to survive a drive all the way to Sandgem to get some stupid pokémon from some guy I've never even heard of before. Why can't Mom just suck it up and accept the fact that I don't want to be a freaking trainer?

    "Sku sku!"

    His train of thought was interrupted by a muffled screech. Michael sprang up.

    "Shit!" he whispered. He ran over to his closet and slid open the doors.

    The Stunky was still there, in the cage he had bought from a hardware store. It was circling the perimeter uncertainly, its tail quivering. When it saw him, the Stunky let out an accusing growl.

    "Shut up, shut up!" Michael kicked the cage a little, and it shrank back into a corner. He had not told his mother that he had kept the Stunky, and was very careful to keep it hidden until Cory or Brendan could pick it up. Patricia was the biggest pro-pokémon rights person he had ever seen, and if she ever found out, there was no telling what could happen.

    "Mike? Is everything all right?" came Patricia's voice.

    Michael looked at the Stunky one last time, giving it the sharpest, coldest glare he could manage. He closed the doors just as Patricia entered the room. She carried a metal tray and a kitchen towel.

    "Yeah, everything's fine." Michael stepped away from the closet and sat down in his chair.

    "What was that screech I heard?"

    Michael kept a straight face. "Don't know. Probably just something outside."

    Patricia smiled a little. "Well, okay. Dinner will be ready soon. And I want you to go to bed straight after that, okay?"

    "Why?" Michael said cautiously. Though he already knew what her next words would be, it was a good stalling technique.

    "I'll be driving you to Sandgem tomorrow. You'll be getting your starter. Come on, you already know this. You heard your teacher."

    Michael did not hide his grimace. "She only said that to make you happy, Mom. I don't want my starter. It's all a freaking scam!"

    "It is not a scam, Michael. It teaches you responsibility. This has been one conference too many. It's time you started thinking about your future and what you want to do with your life. I don't want you ending up a failure like..." Patricia paused, her lips pursed. "I don't want you ending up a failure at all, okay? No more arguments. I'll call you when the food's ready." With that, Patricia turned to leave.

    When the coast was clear, Michael slid open the closet doors. The Stunky was peering at him through the bars, scared, but silent. He sighed with relief.

    "That was a close one. You better keep quiet from now on, you little cretin. Hear me?" Just as he closed the doors again, the Stunky began to whimper. With a groan, Michael opened a door and looked down at the pokémon.

    "What now?"

    No answer.

    "Are you bored?" he asked.

    The Stunky blinked.

    "Are you tired?"

    The Stunky blinked again. There was an intelligent gleam in its eyes.

    "Are you hungry?" he tried again.

    The Stunky growled. Michael rolled his eyes.

    "Too bad."

    And then he closed the door.
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    Let me start this review by saying that I've always had a fondness for books and movies set in this time period, so I'm very excited to find a story like this. Admittedly, I would've preferred Professor Oak (I'm a huge nostalgia-lover, so don't take it personally) but reading this I can see that tough, conceited Rowan makes a much more interesting character than do-good, Gary-Stu-ish Oak.

    I found one (I think) mistake:

    When she rose from her seat, her chair skidded off towards the wall.
    So far, everything looks good. The antics, the meeting (I found the narrator's faint, dry sarcasm in a few places to be particularly funny), and the pretty original plot setup added up to nice little read, more than enough to keep me interested until the next chapter.

    You're a very good writer. I don't know where else to go with this, I just wanted to let you know. XD

    There's not much I can criticize, to be honest, since this fic was pretty much exactly what I like, but one thing I managed to come up with is the possible overuse of "dude." The dialogue sounded like something you'd hear today, not so much in the 1960s. Of course, I don't know how much they used "dude" back then, but I thought its usage in that way was something fairly new.

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    Writing in a different time period was somewhat of a challenge. (I had to look up sixties slang, and I was surprised by what I found :P) 'Dude' was used in a somewhat different context, (according to the site I'm using, it means someone who's not cool), but I decided to use it in a modern way for the sake to familiarity.

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    I've gotta say, I'm really impressed by your writing. When I first read what you said this fic would be about, I'll admit I wasn't incredibly interested. But the way you delivered it and the way you introduced Rowan as such a little rebel slacker kept me going through the entire chapter with my eyes glued to the screen. xD It seemed strange to me that he would treat the Stunky that way, but that just makes this fic all the more fun to read in my opinion. It really makes you wonder how he changed to the calm, business-like man he is in D/P/Pt (kinda like his mother was during the conference. o: ) It's a really unique idea, and you really followed through with it quite well.

    I don't want you ending up a failure like..." Patricia paused, her lips pursed. "I don't want you ending up a failure at all, okay?
    Oooh, suspense. I love it. Just who ended up a failure? Is it his mom? Hahahah. Either way, you did a really amazing job with this. I can't wait to read the next chapter! If you don't mind, could you add me to the PM List too? I wanna know what happens next. >: D

    P.S.- It's a stupid side note, but it made me laugh. xD In my fic, the mother of the main character is named Patricia too hahah. I love coincidences like that.
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    Hey Dawn Hero, thanks for stopping by. PM List updated!

    P.S.- It's a stupid side note, but it made me laugh. xD In my fic, the mother of the main character is named Patricia too hahah. I love coincidences like that.
    That's very interesting :P I'll have to read it sometime.

    Anyways, I'm very glad you liked the story See you next chapter.


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    Very interesting and unique concept. Maybe I be on the PM list because I am certainly looking forward to the next chapter.

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    This was really good. I like the personality you've given to Rowan, especially the parts where he really doesn't care if Stunky is happy or not. I read this the other day, so I don't remember too much... just that I liked it (: I don't want to be on any PM List just because then I'll feel bad if you spend the time to PM me and I don't end up reading for some reason :x


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    And BA, I understand perfectly. I'm glad you liked the story!

    Heads up guys: chapter 2 will be posted on Friday, or late Thursday. (Depending on when I can come online.) It's all done, I just need to look it over one last time.

    See you next chapter!
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    All right, here it is. Chapter two! It's one of the shorter ones, but it shouldn't be too bad.

    0.2

    The next morning, Michael was awakened by a loud tapping on his door, followed by a shout from his mother.

    "Michael, wake up! Come down for breakfast, I don't want you to be late!"

    He pulled the covers over his burning eyes, shielding them from the outside light. From the confines of his closet, he heard the Stunky begin to shuffle around, and from downstairs, the clatter of silverware. Morning sounds.

    Here goes nothing...

    Taking a deep breath, Michael threw off the covers and sprang to his feet, ignoring the rush of dizziness that followed. He threw on a random combination of clothes - ripped jeans, and a T-shirt that advertised a long-forgotten brand. After giving the Stunky's cage a good kick, reminding it to keep quiet, Michael descended the stairs.

    Patricia awaited him behind the kitchen counter, already fully dressed and made up. She greeted him with a quick smile.

    "Eat up, Mike. You have a big day ahead of you." She gestured towards the table. On it stood a bowl of cereal and a bruised apple.

    A series of snide remarks ran through Michael's mind, conveniently arranged for him to choose. But he managed to remain silent for the rest of his meal, figuring it would only make things worse if he talked back. Michael forced down the cereal, took a few bites out of the apple, and was in the car in a matter of minutes. He hoped to stretch the silence through the entire ride, but as always, Patricia had other plans. Upon starting the car, she immediately sighed and began to gush.

    "Oh, Michael, you have no idea how long I've waited for this day to come! You, getting your first pokémon and being able to raise it all by yourself..."

    "Mrs. Maxwell said that you had to help me," Michael replied.

    But Patricia was too lost in her rant to notice. "Aw, you'll be able to handle it, Mike, I know you will! So which one will you choose? They have a selection of three. They're all very adorable. I went to get a brochure, and I saw pictures of them. Um, what were they called again? I think they were... Turtwig, Chimchar, and Piplup? Yes, that's right! Turtwig, Chimchar, and Piplup. Has a nice ring to it! Don't you think so? Turtwig, Chimchar, Piplup... Turtwig, Chimchar, Piplup... Turtwig, Chimchar, Piplup..."

    It went on like this for another one hour, twenty-seven minutes. By the time the car pulled up into a sunny town, Michael's brain was fried from counting and the car's engine was sputtering.

    "Well, here it is! Sandgem Town!" Patricia beamed, as they passed a very colorful billboard. Michael lifted his cheek from the car window, his head heavy. But almost as soon as he laid eyes on the town, Michael knew he had seen all there was to see.

    Sandgem, as he expected, was far less populated than Jubilife. Its roads were unpaved, and as far as he could tell, there was no traffic-control system enforced. Instead of sidewalks and busy intersections, the wide brown path cut a crude line through the town, a universal avenue that veered every so often into dead ends. Wide, grassy pastures bathed everything in green, broken infrequently by square farmhouses and tall windmills. To the far south, Michael could see the beginnings of a white beach. The entire place seemed so quiet, so secluded, that Michael wondered how a famous pokémon professor could ever live here.

    The Pokémon Research Lab appeared in the middle of nowhere, against a background of puke-green trees. It was a stone building of about three floors, with badly-painted windows and a narrow chimney sprouting from its roof. A long line of people stood on the front lawn, the largest gathering Michael had yet seen. The majority consisted of little boys and girls, all talking animatedly with their smiling relatives. The people mixed and mingled as one would during a birthday party, and to top it all off, there was a bouquet of balloons tied to the wooden sign, bobbing with the wind. Suddenly, Michael felt very, very stupid.

    Patricia pulled over to a patch of grass beside the building, where countless other cars were lined up in rows around them. Even as he sank in his seat, Michael couldn't help but stare.

    This event must be a pretty big deal, he thought. When Michael opened the door, a rush of cool, light air blew into his face. After a lifetime of rubbery tire smoke and city pollutants, the sweetness was almost gagging. He stumbled out of the car, taking a few slow breaths.

    "Mmmm, isn't it lovely here?" Patricia inhaled, then let out her breath with an aaaaah.

    The two began to walk towards the lab, and with every step, Michael grew more and more apprehensive. Now that he was out, the garbled noise of the crowd was overwhelming. The children were all racing around while their parents held their spots in line, though some, he noticed, hung back with them. Patricia tried to take Michael's hand, but he immediately yanked it back.

    "Will you stop? I know how to walk."

    Michael shoved his fists into his pockets, and Patricia sighed.

    Upon nearing the line, he was pleased to see that no one was paying any particular attention to him. Apparently, the children there were too excited about getting their first pokémon to think about anything else. When they reached the lawn, Michael noticed something he didn't see before - a tall outdoor clock positioned just in front of the lab, where everyone standing in line could see it. It was a very new model - a digital one that counted down instead of up. The timer was at 0:15, and was counting down the seconds with audible clicks. When it reached zero, a loud bell rang, and a batch of four or five people rushed inside the lab. There were a few seconds of uproar and cheer as they entered the double doors, then the clock reset itself to 5:00 and the line shifted forward.

    Michael and Patricia took their places in the very back, right by the picket fence, and for the next hour or so, Michael stood with his shoulders hunched, drawing circles in the dirt with his shoes. The people around him were chatting breathlessly, throwing around rapid, irrelevant questions. The minutes passed, sometimes, in short bursts, and other times they drawled on incoherently. Michael focused his attention on the clock's display as it ticked from 5:00 down to 1:00. Ding ding! Four more out of the way. The children rushed into the lab with a kind of playground enthusiasm, jumping ahead of their parents and seeing who could get there first. It was a silly sight, almost embarrassing to watch.

    When at last his portion of the line was called, Patricia escorted him in with a girly squeal. He trailed behind with the parents, letting the children run ahead and push open the doors to the lab.

    Inside, the building was spacious and drafty. The walls were adorned with drawings of pokémon, all wearing cartoon-character smiles. The children crowded around a mural of the starters. It was obviously hand painted; the lines were wobbly and the color was smeared in some places. Nevertheless, the children gazed upon it as if it were a great masterpiece.

    The only thing inside the lab that piqued Michael's interest - also the thing most of the children ignored - was a colorful timeline running across the lobby's perimeter. It depicted a brief history of pokémon research, and was decorated with photos, lengthy facts, and occasionally even relics. Michael ran his eyes across its length, which covered the years from 2000 B.C. all the way to the present. The current year was left blank, because there was always more to come.

    "Excuse me, excuse me!" said a voice. Michael turned to see a short, elderly man shove his way through the crowd. At first he didn't notice him, because the man was a head shorter than most of the adults. He wore a white lab coat with the label 'Professor Emerson' stitched on the pocket. His smile seemed friendly.

    "Welcome to my laboratory!" he wheezed. "Children, this way. Parents, may I please ask you to wait in the lobby?"

    The parents all obeyed without hesitation, waving as they watched their children go. From somewhere among them, Michael caught a glimpse of his mother's face. She was smiling directly at him, her eyes dancing. He felt his face redden. What was this, a graduation ceremony?

    Professor Emerson ushered the kids through a narrow hallway. They were all chatting amongst themselves, carrying on their conversations from outside. And Michael was right in the middle of it. At some point, he felt a tap on his shoulder.

    "So which one are you getting?" asked a girl with pigtails.

    "I don't know," he replied, keeping his eyes fixed on the professor's bald spot. He could almost see his own face reflected in it, long and expressionless.

    The professor led them into a small room, well distanced from the hubbub of the front lobby. The walls weren't even painted here, and the floor was dirty. The children all crowded around a long wooden table. Fortunately, Michael was taller than the rest, so he didn't have to push them out of his way to see what was on it. The table contained three large boxes standing side-by-side. Each contained a different label - 'PIPLUP', 'TURTWIG', and 'CHIMCHAR' - scrawled in black marker.

    Michael couldn't help but think, That's it?

    The professor stepped behind the table. "All right, kids, ah, pick out whatever one you -"

    Before he could finish, the kids leaped forward. A tide of squirming hands rose up towards the boxes, each trying to get the other out of their way.

    "Kids, please be patient! You will all get your turn!" Professor Emerson shouted, but to no avail.

    One hand clasped firmly around the ridge of the Piplup box and pulled. A second later the box was on the floor, with hundreds of gray pokéballs rolling around the room. The professor screamed.

    "No no no! What are you doing? Boys and girls, pick those up right now!"

    He was ignored.

    "I got dibs on the Piplups!" one boy shouted, and dove down into the pile.

    "Hey I wanna go next!" another boy said.

    "That's not fair!" the pigtailed girl stamped her foot. "Stop it!"

    "Enough!" the professor shouted, his neck cords bulging. "Children, please, form an orderly line in front of the boxes!"

    "Hey professor, why does your face go all red when you yell?" another girl said.

    The professor's smile was beginning to twitch. "It's a cardiovascular condition. Now please, form a line."

    "Is that like your heart?"

    "Form a line please!"

    "Hey look, I can juggle!" Michael turned his head. A boy had crept up beside the Chimchar box, and was tossing three pokéballs into the air. Several kids began to clap.

    "Please, put those down now! Go on, form a line!"

    "I wanna juggle too!"

    "Me too!"

    The professor jumped back as another box was ripped in half. The kids amassed in front of the table, grabbing as many pokéballs as they could hold. Two girls began running around the room, pelting each other. Others were trying to juggle, hitting the ceiling lamps and walls. Meanwhile, the professor was treading through the mess, arms flailing.

    "Children, please, calm down! Pick one, just one!"

    The Turtwig box was the only one still intact, and was being pulled apart by two boys. Shreds of cardboard lay at their feet. When Professor Emerson rushed to separate them, he slipped on a pokéball and fell on his side. His yelp was lost in the laughter. Finally, he let out a scream.

    "Everyone take a pokémon and OUT!"

    The box fell to the floor, and the boys ran off in separate directions.

    "OUT! OUT! OUT!"

    One by one, the children slowly left the room. One boy skipped away with four pokéballs hidden in his shirt. The professor didn't notice. The last one to go was a weeping girl, who left with nothing at all.

    Michael was the only one left, standing amid a room that appeared to have been swept by a hurricane.

    Without a word, he stepped forward and extended a hand to Professor Emerson. The man rose to his feet, taking a series of long, deep breaths.

    "... Animals... those kids..." He bent over the table and clutched his stomach. "They don't pay me enough to do this... every blasted year the same thing..."

    "Sorry 'bout that," Michael said. "I didn't want to be here anyway. My mom, she only sent me because -"

    The professor raised his hand, grimacing with pain. "Look, I don't care, I don't care! Just grab a pokéball and get out."

    Michael looked down. The floor was littered with them. The pokéballs were all identical - shiny and metal. He bent down and picked one up. It felt cool in his hands.

    Michael looked up at the professor again. "Can I, uh, release it to see what it is? I still want to -"

    "Get out!" Emerson yelled. Michael flinched slightly, and the man sighed. "Just... just get the hell out, kid... I have fifty more waiting outside the lab..."

    The professor turned away. He sat down in a corner and began to light a cigarette.



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    When Michael reached the lobby, his mother greeted him with a bear hug.

    "Well, how was it?" she beamed.

    "The kids were crazy. They knocked the professor down and everything."

    "Well, kids will be kids! So, which one did you get?"

    Michael shrugged. "Don't know. The room was a mess and there were pokéballs everywhere, so the guy just made me pick a random one."

    "Oh." Patricia's smile faded a little. Evidently, this wasn't the heartwarming mother-son moment she had been expecting. "Well, let's find out! Is there some special way of releasing it?"

    Michael shrugged again and lifted it up to eye level. The pokéball was entirely smooth, except for a tiny crank somewhere along the center line.

    "Try turning that, see what it does," Patricia said.

    Michael took a deep breath. He turned the knob with his finger and held the pokéball out at arm's length. A blinding white flash filled the room.

    "Aaargh!" he groaned, hands flying to his face. The pokéball clattered to the floor. Instantly, he heard a series of gasps.

    "Whoa!" someone shouted.

    Michael opened his stinging eyes, and found himself staring at a runty Turtwig. It looked nothing like its drawing. For one thing, its skin was an aquamarine blue instead of the grass green it was painted with. The sprout on its head was paler than the norm. Its shell was a light brown, and its eyes were yellow. They stared back.

    "Tu-tur?" It cocked its head. Michael lowered his hands from his face, revealing a crowd of wide-eyed people surrounding him.

    "Your Turtwig's all funny-looking!" said a boy. "Look, mine's a different color than yours!" He pointed to his Turtwig, which was the exact copy of the mural.

    "Hey, mine too!" shouted a girl. Another carbon copy stood at her side. Same green skin. Same black eyes. They were staring at him too.

    A feeling of dread filled Michael's heart. "You mean... mine's defective?" He looked back at his own Turtwig, not sure what to do. The other kids had begun to laugh. They were younger and less mature than he was. And they were laughing.

    Patricia rushed to his side and wrapped her arms around his shoulders. "Now now, there is no such thing as a defective pokémon! We'll just go see the professor and ask him about it. Pick him up, Michael."

    With great reluctance, Michael lifted the pokémon into his arms. It wasn't heavy at all. The people parted as Patricia led him through, but their amused grins burned into Michael's eyes.

    I have a defective pokémon... a fucking defective pokémon. And I didn't even want a pokémon.

    Patricia rounded the corner and entered the same hallway Michael had left moments ago.

    "Where was the room?" she asked, and Michael pointed to the door. When she knocked, Michael heard a faint groan.

    "Come in!" Professor Emerson said, his voice coated with honey. Patricia pushed open the door and entered. The professor was still sitting in his chair, amidst all the rubble. This time he was chewing gum, though the smell of smoke still lingered in the air.

    When he saw Michael, his face fell. "Oh, its you. What now?"

    Patricia stepped forward. "My son here received a Turtwig from you, and it looks different from everyone else's. We were wondering about that." She motioned for Michael to come forward. The Turtwig squealed as he held it up to the light.

    Professor Emerson rose from his chair to take a look at the pokémon. He cupped its head in his large hands, his gaze lingering on its oddly-colored skin.

    "Hmm... well, yes, there appears to be a slight difference in pigmentation... Eh, I don't know. Probably a birth defect. Nothing to worry about. You may go now."

    Before they had time to protest, Emerson ushered them out of the room. As he reached for the doorknob, he took a quick glance down the hallway.

    "If there are any more people coming, tell them that they can wait." He winked, and shut the door.

    Patricia turned to Michael and opened her mouth to speak, probably some predetermined phrase of consolation. Michael sighed. "Whatever. I don't care. Just take me home already." He dropped the Turtwig onto the floor. Then, he reached into his pocket for the pokéball, turned the knob, and watched the creature melt away.
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    Ooh, a shiny Turtwig, eh? That's not what I was expecting. xD Poor thing, everyone's treating it like a monster. And speaking of monsters... Those kids... ._. You think Rowan wouldn't want to ever be a Professor after that. Poor Emerson. Lol. 'Cept he doesn't exactly seem like the most wonderful guy either. Oh well. Oh, and I'm half-excited to see how Patricia will handle Michael's attitude if he keeps acting like that towards Pokemon. You've really done a great job already developing them and their relationship. :3

    All in all, great chapter, even if it was a bit on the short side. I couldn't really find any problems with your grammar or spelling, so that's great too. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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    "Sorry 'bout/about that," Michael said.
    I'm not sure which you meant, but it was originally just "bout," which I don't think is correct (but what do I know? XD)

    Anyway, I'm naturally a little wary of a shiny Turtwig for probably obvious reasons, but I'm sure you'll handle it fine. That was also a good (and funny as well :P) way for apathetic Michael to pick a Pokemon without actually having to show any preference.

    Not much happening but that's to be expected in a chapter like this. I'm starting to get curious as to what Rowan will be doing on his journey (I assume gym battles, if nothing more than to have something to while he's on the road) and what will happen with the Stunky. Part of his team, I guess?

    I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dawn_Hero View Post
    And speaking of monsters... Those kids... ._. You think Rowan wouldn't want to ever be a Professor after that. Poor Emerson. Lol.
    Yes, that part was really fun to write. Nothing like an old man being troubled by those rotten kids, right? :P

    About the Turtwig... there's a specific reason I made it a shiny, but it'll become clear later on.

    Quote Originally Posted by Umbreon Ruler View Post
    "Sorry 'bout/about that," Michael said.
    I'm not sure which you meant, but it was originally just "bout," which I don't think is correct (but what do I know? XD)
    Yeah, that's just the inflection Michael puts on the word. He's supposed to say "bout" instead of "about", and I just decided to leave out the apostrophe. But now that you mention it, I should probably add one in to make it clearer. Thanks for pointing it out!

    The Stunky will play more of a role in the next few chapters, but its significance will really come into play later on.

    Thanks for the reviews!
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    These characters are awsomely created! Rowan fascinates me, I am loving his character, but also wanting to see his transformation.

    Hate his mom. (Not that I hate how your portraying her, like I hate the character) She's annoying, which fits in well with Rowans character!

    I feel bad for Professor Emerson.
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    Hiya, I just read those chapters and I must say, you're a very skilled writer. You captured intricate personalities and pretty much brought them to life. Rowan actually reminds me a bit of myself sadly, when I was younger. xD I also like the time period, as others have previously stated.

    I've been in a slump lately because I haven't been able to find excellent fics lately, but I'm very excited for this one. Teehee. Keep writing and stay gold.

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    cooler3o5: I can't wait to write his transformation... it's very fun working with characters like Michael.

    As for Patricia, she's my vision of a nagging mother. She'll also be getting more of a role later on.

    Lost Dream: I'm honored at your comment. (And it's very interesting that Michael reminds you of yourself... haha :P)

    Thank you both for the reviews! Chapter three will be coming in about a week. See you next chapter.


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    Ooh, Roots, that sounds like an interesting read. *Click* Oh look. Something based on a character that we all know. Looks like this will be a normal journey fic where a do-gooder goes around battling gyms and eventually becoming the league champion before settling down to research for no reason. ... Sounds like my kind of read!

    That's what I was thinking, but this fic is a lot different to my expectations so far. In a good way.

    So yeah. Good story? I enjoyed reading it very much so? That Stunky seemed cool, but Michael was being all crazy to it, which made me dislike him, but my opinion is easily swayed. Shiny Turtwig, sounds like some huge coincidence that he happened to pick that one up. If I were to rate this which I am now going to, I would and will give this 4.65/5 without any clear method of how I am rating it. So bye then.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Paddypower View Post
    Ooh, Roots, that sounds like an interesting read. *Click* Oh look. Something based on a character that we all know. Looks like this will be a normal journey fic where a do-gooder goes around battling gyms and eventually becoming the league champion before settling down to research for no reason. ... Sounds like my kind of read!

    That's what I was thinking, but this fic is a lot different to my expectations so far. In a good way.

    So yeah. Good story? I enjoyed reading it very much so? That Stunky seemed cool, but Michael was being all crazy to it, which made me dislike him, but my opinion is easily swayed. Shiny Turtwig, sounds like some huge coincidence that he happened to pick that one up. If I were to rate this which I am now going to, I would and will give this 4.65/5 without any clear method of how I am rating it. So bye then.
    Hey, glad you liked it. The shiny is supposed to be a coincidence, but its significance will be explained later on. As for the Gyms, the storyline will be somewhat different from the traditional trainer story. Or a lot, depending on how you interpret it. Thanks for the comment!


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    Alright, count me in.

    I love what you're doing with Rowan. His devious, middle school boy from hell personality is endlessly entertaining-watching him become a trainer and professor will certainly be a delight.

    Your first chapter was good; I enjoyed how you altered your description to help set the tone. (Happened in your second chapter as well, "Puke green trees") Rowan's mistreatment of the Stunky was hilarious, and I enjoyed how you really highlighted his personality when he refused to feed it.

    I was a bit disappointed when, in your second chapter, Rowan received a Shiny Turtwig, although I liked how you handled it. In my fic, shiny's are not only not special, but are common as well, so I could relate to this. I guess the only reason I was irked by Rowan's shiny Turtwig is the fact that I think they're ugly. But oh well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Manaphyman View Post
    I love what you're doing with Rowan. His devious, middle school boy from hell personality is endlessly entertaining-watching him become a trainer and professor will certainly be a delight.
    Thanks for the review, Manaphyman. Michael was a fun character to write, and I can't wait to write more of his story. (The Gym leaders will be especially fun to do. Since the story's time period is different from the anime and games, I can think up all-new Gym leaders for the towns. It's like building a whole new world.)

    Quote Originally Posted by Manaphyman View Post
    I was a bit disappointed when, in your second chapter, Rowan received a Shiny Turtwig, although I liked how you handled it. In my fic, shiny's are not only not special, but are common as well, so I could relate to this. I guess the only reason I was irked by Rowan's shiny Turtwig is the fact that I think they're ugly. But oh well.
    I like your take on the shinies. I'll be doing it a little differently, but as I've said before, it'll be clear later on. (I don't think I'll be spoiling anything by saying this. In my story, shinies are a concept that's unknown to the majority. I'll develop that as the story continues.)

    So with that, I'll add you to the PM list. Welcome aboard!


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    I've really gotten into your story here, Mrs. Lovett. I never would have expected Rowan to have acted that way in his younger age, very interesting. (:

    I have been bored out of my mind for an unfortunate large majority of the summer, so I was just looking around the fanfics section, and found your fanfic. I used to write, and I would get all these ideas, and then just throw them away and forget about the fic in general because I'm a lazy ***. ;D Who knows, maybe I'll overcome it soon, boredom can change people.

    Anyways, great fic, yadayadayada, I would very much like to read the third chapter, so add me to the pm list if you'd like.

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