Lol, I joined just so I could comment on this fic.
You've portrayed rowan in a very different manner. Yes, you have the troublesome kid, but he really seems more than that. Maybe stemming from those unknown family issues...? His treatment of Pokemon also struck me. Much like Horizon said, I assumed he'd be the nerdy kid who absolutely adored Pokemon and the like, but he really couldn't care less. Perhaps another family issue? Meh, prolly way off.
As far as grammar goes, I think I saw Stunky spelt "Sunky" somewhere, but I don't have the initative to go find it >.< Everything seemsneat and easy on the eyes, and the description okay.
Anyways, a great read, and I can't wait for more. If you be so kind as to place me on your Pm list, I would love it ^_^
Poliwhirl is an awesome pokemon. So there. Think aout that long and hard. That's what she said.