
Originally Posted by
Crimson Penguin
I also want to thank you for completely changing my views about Lona (and Michael to some degree). Part of the reason this chapter was so successful, I thought, was because of all the buildup from the previous chapters, from seeing Michael and Henry's growth in their battling styles to finding out Lona's true beliefs and motivations behind her actions. And her philosophy of putting in honest effort to reap true success (which was a theme I appreciated seeing throughout the Solaceon arc, by the way) just hit with full force when she confronted Rick. I actually sympathized with her for once, especially when she was just sitting there crying at the end. It showed that she's a real human being, too, and you did a great job getting me invested in her character.