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    have an idea for a fanfic...let me warn you, it's quite original...so here it goes!


    Let's say there are three Universes. There's the Paralyzed Universe (Sounds Similar to a Paralyzed World, doesn't it? [This would be known as hell]). Then there's the Living Universe (This would be the one where you and I live in; it contains multiple galexies and planets and whatnot), and then there's the Everlasting Universe (Okay, I haven't actually thought of a name for the last one, but I'm working on it [This would be known as heaven]). I'm not going to tell you excatly how those three universes came to be yet, but I'll ppost that on here shortly.
    And for each universe, there is a ruler. For now, I'll just let you guess the rulers for the Everlasting and Paralyzed Universes, but do you know the ruler of the Living Universe?
    ...
    Done guessing? Alright, it's Arceus! Arceus guards the Living Universe from not just assults from the Paralyzed Universe (From demons [bad souls]), but Arceus also has the power to bring all souls back to life if their death was untimely/not supposed to happen that way (This doesn't happen often, so don't get freaked out).
    I'm not quite finished with this post, but I have school soon and should be getting ready
    Okay, now I can continue!

    So allow me to explain how the Ruler of the Living Universe came to be. The rulers of the Paralyzed and Everlasting Universes were just always there; try to wrap your brain around that. When Life was created in the Living Universe and . . . well when life started to happen, it was decided that a guardian was essential to govern and protect the Living Universe. So, the two rulers created an Egg. The Egg hatched, and thus the birth of Arceus (And if you don't know what happens after the Egg hatches, check out the Library in the Sinnoh Region). The three guardians managed to balance each other's power out for a long, long time.

    But one day (This is still way before Humans were created), the ruler of the Paralyzed Universe has the Demons (Souls deemed bad when their life as something alive ended) attack the Living Universe in the attempt to gain...area...and more bad souls, and manages to destroy Arceus as he tried to protect the Universe. The ruler of the Everlasting Universe barely manages to drive out the Bad Souls (thus saving the Living Universe), and from that point on the two Universes kept a close eye on each other.

    Another day, long into the future (Awhile after humans are created) and some more fighting between the two Universes, the Everlasting Universe decided that Arceus really was needed to guard the Living Universe, because the ruler of the Everlasting Universe couldn't protect both efficiently. So Arceus was secretly re-created, but because he couldn't be created with the help of the Paralyzed Universe's ruler, he had some flaws; like he had to be born into a human. The ruler of the Everlasting Universe understood this, and deemed him still able to protect the Universe. So Arceus was re-born in the form of a human girl to the parents of Emily and Spencer Prescott, and she was christined Lilly Prescott.

    Let me know if you want to hear me continue, because I know this is a lot of info right here!
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    I follow Satoshi's Pokémon training philosophy; a balance of love & hard work is needed to overcome adversity. I treat my Pokémon as partners and friends while bringing out their best with EV & moveset building. That's just me ;P Feel free to copy and paste this into your sig if you feel the same way about Pokemon =D (Started by Emperor Empoleon)

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    Sounds kind of like Mortal Kombat. I'd read it.

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    Aw, you mean it's not original? Well now that I think about it, there will be a lot of fightning between these Universes later in the story..

    I can post some more if it'll help the idea make sense. But I did finish chapter one of my fanfic (FINALLY), so that's there too!
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    My fanfic idea: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...3#post11668583

    My fanfic: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=467795

    I follow Satoshi's Pokémon training philosophy; a balance of love & hard work is needed to overcome adversity. I treat my Pokémon as partners and friends while bringing out their best with EV & moveset building. That's just me ;P Feel free to copy and paste this into your sig if you feel the same way about Pokemon =D (Started by Emperor Empoleon)

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    If you give us more information and history on the universes and their differences I can see this working out to be a great fic.

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    History on the universes and how they're different? Uh...what kind of information are you looking for? In the Living Universe, there's living organisims and it's all ruled/kept in balance by Arceus (Yes, not just the Pokemon world). The everlasting universe is what we would call heaven; a place where good souls go when they die in the Living Universe, and is ruled by a being. The Paralyzed Universe is Hell; a place where evil/bad souls go where they die in the Living Universe, and is also ruled by a being.
    What else do you think I can add to that to give you more information?
    This is good stuff guys, keep it comin'
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    My Current Team(SoulSilver):

    My fanfic idea: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...3#post11668583

    My fanfic: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=467795

    I follow Satoshi's Pokémon training philosophy; a balance of love & hard work is needed to overcome adversity. I treat my Pokémon as partners and friends while bringing out their best with EV & moveset building. That's just me ;P Feel free to copy and paste this into your sig if you feel the same way about Pokemon =D (Started by Emperor Empoleon)

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    You can tell us about previous conflicts between universes. Describe in depth the motives, and try not to portray things as definite good or bad. No being should be inherently evil.

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    Well see that's the thing...I'm trying to figure out how that is. I want to say some sort of weird virus that developed somewhere somehow, but I'll have to develope that further.
    Needless to say, that's like questioning how heaven and hell were created...cause that's what they are I'd be happy to provide more information on anything else!
    Lilly

    My Current Team(SoulSilver):

    My fanfic idea: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...3#post11668583

    My fanfic: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=467795

    I follow Satoshi's Pokémon training philosophy; a balance of love & hard work is needed to overcome adversity. I treat my Pokémon as partners and friends while bringing out their best with EV & moveset building. That's just me ;P Feel free to copy and paste this into your sig if you feel the same way about Pokemon =D (Started by Emperor Empoleon)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lilly2 View Post
    Aw, you mean it's not original? Well now that I think about it, there will be a lot of fightning between these Universes later in the story..

    I can post some more if it'll help the idea make sense. But I did finish chapter one of my fanfic (FINALLY), so that's there too!
    Sorry it took me so long to post back; I haven't been able to get a lot of free time lately.

    It isn't not original, but it is impossible to run a fanfiction without someone comparing it to another story. I'll check it out.

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    Oh why thank you! I've actually finished the first chapter, so that's up, and I'm about halfway done with the second...
    The entire story line is planned out, I just need to get all the information down.
    I actually went out of order, so some of the more epic areas of the...story have been worked on since I was eleven. The longest takes place in Kanto...and is one of my favorite parts
    But I am getting off topic. Do have a look at what I have if you should desire, and let me know what you think!
    Lilly

    My Current Team(SoulSilver):

    My fanfic idea: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...3#post11668583

    My fanfic: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=467795

    I follow Satoshi's Pokémon training philosophy; a balance of love & hard work is needed to overcome adversity. I treat my Pokémon as partners and friends while bringing out their best with EV & moveset building. That's just me ;P Feel free to copy and paste this into your sig if you feel the same way about Pokemon =D (Started by Emperor Empoleon)

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