At first the render didn't load for me, so I saw only the quote. While I'm not a fan of Assassin's Creed, I think AC characters make for good fan art. Your signature's a little tall, but it matches the text... I think. The grammar Nazi in me is annoyed with the incorrect stanza formatting and punctuation.
Anyways as I said before, the render and text do look nice together. 6/10
Also your username is awesome.