This fic is rated PG. Hello everybody, this is my first fic entitled "Pokemon Island." Please tell me what you think and enjoy.
“What is this place?” Began the exhausted pokemon. The pokemon laid on the ground wiped out. He had scars and bruises on all parts of his body. His body figure was that of a human. He had well defined arms and legs as well as a normal human-like face, eyes, and mouth. The only thing that separated his face from a humans, was the fact that he did not have a nose or ears. He also wore a championship belt around his waist. Like all Machoke, he had these features.
“All of the others didn’t make it.” After inhaling and exhaling slowly he talked to himself once more. Perhaps it is a habit of his to talk to himself, or maybe, he did this out of pure boredom.
“This place, this place, it is so… alive, and it feels… warm.” It is fair to mention the place Machoke rested on was, indeed a beautiful and amazing place. This area had enchanting qualities and to some degree was charming. The grass was ever-green and danced calmly in the winds soothing and gentle breeze. The waves splashed and washed softly against the warm surface of the land. Caterpeis crawled happily in the grass and felt safe and secure in its watch.
“Though I escaped, I still need to find my friends.” After that note, he slipped into a black out.
Machoke awoke surprised and confused to a new scenery. He was now lying in a bed; this bed was a far more comfortable surface then the itchy and dirty grass. It also appeared he was indoors. The house had standard furniture including Machoke’s bed. The walls and floors were made out of solid, gray rock. Machoke wondered if he was safe or if he was kidnapped off the land.
Suddenly, the door squeaked opened, and a figure of another Pokemon appeared. The shadow turned on the light to reveal his body. The first thing Machoke took notice about this body was the brown rock shell. A round head with eyes and a mouth poked out of the top the shell. In addition to these features, the creature had two arms and two legs appear from the shell. His arms and legs were short and stubby, yet, still had the quality of elbows, knees, hands, feet, fingers, and toes, respectively. All of his body, was different shades of brown.From these clues, Machoke guessed he is a Golem.
“I cant believe you finally woke up!” Shouted the creature. “My wife has been caring for you for 12 hours. I better go tell her the news”
The Golem left the room to alert his wife that the visitor had awoke. From what he said, Machoke assumed he had been passed out for 12 hours, and from friendliness and concern from his voice, he thought the possibility of him being a friend is broader, but he was still not sure and a little concerned, for he is still weak. He could not escape if they were crazy or criminals.
At that moment, the door flew open once more. Golem appeared with another person. From the similar features to Golem accept for the red dress she wore, Machoke assumed her to be Golem’s wife.
“O goodness, I cannot believe you are awake!” The new person spoke with a sense of relief. “Hello, I am Golem’s wife Golet, pleased to meet you.”
“I’m Machoke.” Replied the patient.
“I was worried about you. My husband found you passed out on the coast, so he took you in here to take a look. I took your temperature, and you’re not sick, but those bruises and scars on your body concern me.”
Machoke looked at his whole body to observe these marks. He had to have at least 10 marks of injury on this body. Luckily, none of them looked to be threatening.
“Well, don’t feel too worried. I feel much better then I did 12 hours ago. Maybe a good rest was all I needed.” Replied Machoke.
“That’s great, dear. Take some time to relax and call me if you need me.”
Because of her tone of voice and what she said hinted compassion and concern, Machoke Was sure he was safe here and could relax. He was in deep thought about what happened. Where am I? Where are my friends? What can I do?
Time passed, and he felt like a lonely prisoner laying in the bed. Finally, he decided he will try to stand up out of the bed. First, the arched his back carefully into an up right position. His back was soar when he did this, and his joints popped and cracked. Then, he bent his knees into a sitting position. Finally, with a little bit of strength, he erected his knees and was standing upright.
“Hey Machoke,” He heard Golem’s voice walking down the hallway and into the room. Golem opened the door and said.: “If you want to eat, Golet just finished cooking supper.” Golem paused for a moment. “Hey! Your standing up just fine! Well, as I was saying supper is all ready. Just follow me into the kitchen. My wife always prepares a great meal with what I find out there to cook.
Machoke followed Golem into the kitchen. This room had the same rock features the other room Machoke was in. The table was rock, the silver ware was rock, but fortunately the food was not rock. The food was fresh out of the oven and smelled great. There was bread, meat, and vegetables. Machoke felt a little embarrassed to be this well catered upon, but he ate anyway.
To his surprise, Machoke had a full force appetite, ate fast, and did pause in between bites. The The food tasted as great as it smelled. It was the first meal he ate in 24 hours. He was more hungry than barely any other moments in his life. The Golems seemed to be a little surprised about his eating too.
After dinner, Machoke was no longer hungry and felt like he had a belly sticking out. Golem and Golet were also full, so they decided to have a conversation.
“So Machoke,” began Golem. “You looked pretty beat up when we found you. If you do not mind us asking, we would like to what happened.”
Machoke began to recall the events. “Well, I was with my friends and we were running, running from something awful. I escaped and blacked-out, but my friends were not so lucky. That’s all I mind sharing with you.”
“We understand.” Replied Golet.
“Though, I do not understand how one can survive drifting in the sea.” Golem in-putted. “You are very lucky, Machoke.”
“I guess I am.” Machoke said confused and wondering.
Let me get one thing straight. This not to any extent a "I woke up in a strange place. Where am I story?" That is just to add the mystery of how Machoke got here. He knows where he is. The place does not turn out to be strange at all; it is normal. This is not a mystery story it is an adventure story. When I post the second chapter, you will see this. That is the first chapter. I am not to good at writing these begining, getting to know the character chapters. I know this was short to. It was only 2.5 pages on Microsoft. I promise it will get better. If you liked or hated it tell me. I am all up for criticism or praise. If your looking forward to the next chapter, it will be released on September 21st