Plot Twist? Was Darkarai the reason for Zerobi's Vampirism, or is it entirely intentional? Is Zoroark planning something big? WILL EVE'S BABY BE NAMED BEN OR BENNY? 2 of these will be answered, next timeihope.
Other than that, no first-run-visible grammar mistakes (my specialty) and great chapter overall. And seriously, will Eve's baby be named Ben, or Benny. I have to know! XP
Don't you just hate it when you're reading something and then you accidentally mistake someone's signature for part of their post? I do too.