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    Oh my bad, I guess it isn't that obvious or maybe it is depending on what you take away from the lucario/chansey encounters.

    Now I made it even worse. "Shut up Azurus!!"


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    Quote Originally Posted by Azurus View Post
    Oh my bad, I guess it isn't that obvious or maybe it is depending on what you take away from the lucario/chansey encounters.

    Now I made it even worse. "Shut up Azurus!!"
    Hey, no problem, this is still behind the scenes... It won't be a secret in-universe much longer, anyway!

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    Chapter 43

    Lonesome Hunchback Lucario



    A hateful storm rages over the southern region of Kanto. Unhindered by natural formations, the chaotic weather whips the normally calm seas into a blur of water and wind. The time has come for sailors to stay home, flying-types to perch on land and water-types to sink to the bottom of the great blue for sleep.

    Upon one of the many Seafoam Islands, a mysterious figure can be seen. It is wearing a brown cloak, shielding its upper body from the wind and cold. While it has the shape of an adult human, two very hairy and strange black legs protrude from under the cloak, and a mysterious lump is sticking out where nothing but a flat back would be expected. Even though it is right in the middle of the worst storm of the century, it is completely dry from head to toe as the constantly approaching raindrops are all pushed away by an unseen force.

    Walking from the beachhead to a large cave covering most of the island, the creature suddenly stops itself. Looking ahead, it sees another strange figure moving through the mist created by the rain. It was a similar creature, also wearing a brown cloak. Although slightly shorter and with much finer black hair covering the legs underneath, it also had a peculiar hump residing on its back.

    The new arrival stopped right after the first did, as the two of them stared at each other. Suddenly, both their backs began rustling in an unusual manner, as if something was moving around underneath the cloaks. One of the creatures hunched over slightly, as a small green face looked out from under the hood. The face might have easily passed for a common plant, almost completely featureless aside from two stalk-like appendages. However, there was no missing the two large emerald eyes, or the curious smile that began to form underneath them.

    "Mew…?" the face asked, stirring yet another series of movements from the other creature's cloak. A few seconds later, an unexpectedly pink face poked out from under that hood as well. Like the first, it was small and nearly featureless apart from the large eyes, currently far more blue than the ocean and skies ravaged by storm all around them.

    "… Celebi?" the new face said carefully as the pink head stuck itself out further, this time making the other cloaked being gasp in surprise.

    "Mew!" Celebi shouted happily, flying away from the cloak and towards her old friend.

    "Celebi!?" Mew responded in surprise, mirroring her movement as they both nearly collided in midair, stopping just barely a decimeter away from each other. Both of their smiles grew brighter as they looked at each other, Celebi's stalk-like eyebrows twitching with impatience as Mew's tail swished around excitedly. They both had a million things to tell the other, and simply had no idea where to start. Finally, everything broke lose as they started chatting back and forth in rapid succession, leaving everyone but themselves unable to keep up.

    Meanwhile, the cloaks they had left still stood tall, seemingly still looking at each other. The cloak Mew had left behind suddenly moved its arms up and pulled the hood back, revealing yet another head. This one was blue, hairy and considerably larger, with a long snout and large ears that began reaching for the skies now that there wasn't anything holding them back. A smile crossed over the creature's face.

    "Hey there, Zerobi," Lucario said confidently, remembering well how she looked while wearing a cloak. The other cloak also pulled its hood back and immediately showed a colorful explosion of red, yellow and black. While the head of this creature was slightly smaller, its newly freed wine-red hair stood tall and clashed against the black face which had a tiny, yellow crystal embedded in its forehead.

    "… I knew it was you, Lucario!" Zerobi replied cheerfully, returning his smile with one of her own as she ran up to him.

    "Heh. What gave it away, the Mew?" Lucario said with a chuckle, before finding Zerobi coming right for him and awkwardly embraced her in a hug, feeling a slight prickling sensation at his back as her claws brushed over him.

    "Still keeping your wit sharp, I see," Zerobi snickered, the hug feeling good and making her calm inside, just as it had the last time.

    "Still… Keeping your claws sharp, I feel…" Lucario replied slowly with a painful tone, the prickling sensation turning more and more into a sting with each passing second.

    Zerobi quickly let go and took a step back. She had not realized how hard she had been gripping him. It had felt good enough for her to want to stay that way for a while, but would not want to risk it never happening again due to actually hurting him. For now, she was happy enough just to be seeing him after such a long time.

    "Nice weather we're having," Lucario said with a shrug in an attempt to make the situation less awkward.

    "I'm just glad we brought our umbrellas," Zerobi replied while looking at Mew and Celebi, hoping their speedy chattering would not make them forget to keep everyone shielded from the storm. Still feeling dry and seeing the rain seeping down around them as if hindered by an invisible wall, she knew her fears had been unfounded.

    "So… What've you been up to?" Lucario asked curiously while scratching his back. Going by how she was doing the last time they met, he had almost expected her to not even be here now.

    "I found out who my real parents were, disowned my only sister, rescued a legendary Pokémon, almost got us both killed by a random wilder, reunited with Celebi, and that's not even getting started on the journey here…" Zerobi counted up one by one on her long claws, before turning her face towards Lucario with a nonchalant stare, "You?"

    "I had my ribs shattered, declined an offer to lead some big organization, defeated another champion, ran into Mew and found out how I became a Pokémon…" Lucario replied with a somewhat uninterested tone before shrugging, "… Oh, and two prison wardens now recognize my scream."

    The two of them stood quiet for a moment, eyeing each other and trying to comprehend what the other had just said. Finally, Lucario broke into a sinister smile.

    "You had it worse," he said triumphantly.

    "Like hell, I did!" Zerobi argued with annoyance in her voice, "Whatever I went through, at least my chest always stayed in one piece!"

    "Don't you mean two pieces?" Lucario pointed out while subconsciously looking down her form, before snapping his eyes back in place and feeling relieved she was too deep in her own thoughts to notice anything, "… Anyway, I was out the whole time it healed, so it was no biggie."

    "… Prison wardens? Wait, so right after you told everyone that you'd be able to handle things on your own…" Zerobi grumbled as she continued thinking for a moment, before suddenly raising her voice to a sharp hiss, "… You went and got yourself captured!?"

    "Not RIGHT after… A few days had passed, at least!" Lucario replied confidently in order to hide his embarrassment, searching for a way to change the subject, "Besides, sounds like you were busy saving someone else's hide, I simply couldn't wait in line that long!"

    "Well, yeah. I came across the legendary Azelf who had been captured, and…" Zerobi began explaining before catching on to Lucario's confused expression, "… You have no idea who I'm talking about, right?"

    "Nope," Lucario responded casually, "But that's OK. I've got a story about this guy named Zoroark who you probably don't know anything about, so I get to sound smart for once too."

    "Zoro… Ark?" Zerobi repeated, trying to grasp the unfamiliar pronunciation, "What kind of Pokémon was he?"

    "Uh… A 'Zoroark', from what I could tell. His appearance reminded me a lot of you," Lucario explained while trying to imagine Zerobi with flowing hair and a snout with a perpetually sinister smirk on it, "If some parts were shorter and others were longer… Or something."

    "Are you sure it wasn't just, you know, a male Weavile?" Zerobi asked, ruling out the possibility of Lucario encountering a new species of Pokémon in favor of him being oblivious, like usual.

    "Oh, man, don't remind me…" Lucario groaned, the mental image gained during his escape from prison still fresh enough to make him fret and perhaps even worry about where his eyes instinctively flutter, "No, he was definitively his own thing. He busted me out of jail which was cool, but had this huge stick up his butt about humanity."

    He suddenly felt like complimenting Zerobi somehow for not being male, but was fairly certain it would be interpreted the wrong way. Instead, he walked forward and gave her a pat on the shoulder.

    "… What was that for?" Zerobi asked curiously as the nice, rare gesture remained unexplained.

    "Heh, for you being you," Lucario chuckled, amazed by his own smoothness before deciding to continue his story, "… Anyway, apparently he was spying on us during our travels."

    "W-What!?" Zerobi exclaimed with shock, "What… What did he see!?"

    "Everything, more or less…" Lucario responded while finding her strong reaction unexpected, "What's wrong? We were just wandering around, weren't we?"

    "That's, uh, you know…" Zerobi started, but stopped herself as she quietly looked away, "… Never mind."

    "Huh?" Lucario asked suspiciously before scrunching up his face, "Were you up to some funny business when I wasn't looking?"

    "Absolutely not!" Zerobi shouted angrily as she snapped her head back, "I mean, everyone needs privacy every now and then, but I guess that's just too much to ask… Never mind."

    "… Uh…" Lucario started, unaware of what to how to proceed, "What are-"

    "NEVER MIND," Zerobi interrupted him immediately, a very stern look on her face. Lucario stood flabbergasted for a few moments, before suddenly moving closer.

    "Heheh…" Lucario chuckled before once more putting his hand on her right shoulder, "It's good to see you again, Zerobi."

    "You too, Lucario," Zerobi replied, repeating Lucario's action and carefully putting her free claw on his left shoulder. Lucario smiled, as this time the claws felt light as a feather and did not hurt him even the slightest. Zerobi smiled back.

    - - - - - - - - -

    "Look at the two of them…" Celebi whispered from a distance away, glad to finally see her sister getting along with someone other than herself, "They seem so happy!"

    "Yes…" Mew whispered slowly, thinking about everything Lucario had told her about Zerobi, and was surprised to find herself a little irked at their close friendship. Lucario had been with her for several months, but still seemed to have more fun talking to Zerobi than he ever did with her.

    "How was it, traveling with Lucario?" Celebi asked, noticing her best friend's downtrodden mood.

    "Soooooo slow," Mew sighed quietly as she turned her attention away from them and directed it back at Celebi, "Remember when uncle Giratina took us to see Palika? Much, much worse than that."

    "You seem far too burdened for something like that to be the cause," Celebi said before looking down, eyes narrowing at the Lucario who was getting very touchy-feely with her sister, "He didn't… Do anything to you, did he?"

    "Not him, but…" Mew started, but choked on her own words as the flood of very unpleasant memories regarding Deoxys came upon her and immediately shattered what was left of her good mood, "… I tremble, simply thinking about it. Let me tell you in private later, I do not wish to worry the others."

    "Mew…" Celebi whispered sadly, not knowing what to say. She had expected their reunion to be the happiest day of their lives, sharing stories about their adventures and finally getting the chance to introduce her sister. However, she could feel Mew's psyche weighing heavily upon her, slightly reminding her of Mewtwo's presence.

    "… I… I think I finally understand now… How you felt after fighting Pikablu…" Mew spoke slowly and carelessly, feeling like she was at long last able to talk to someone without being forced to keep up an act, "I simply cannot forget what happened, it was so terrible… I thought it would go away with time, but… How were you able to get over it?"

    Celebi looked shocked for a moment, thinking back to the time immediately following her perilous battle. At that time, Mew had been the cheerful one while she herself had been a complete wreck. She had been so shaken up that she could hardly think, and much less sleep or work. However, at the same time her head had been filled with several new thoughts and ideas brought about with Pikablu, and by the time she had gone through them, she had finally gotten over everything. She recalled one event in particular being a highly contributing factor, and was not able to help herself as she slightly turned her head towards the ground in embarrassment.

    "… Well…" Celebi whispered quietly, a very faint blush appearing on her face, "… Yes, let us save that for when we are in private…"

    - - - - - - - -

    "Huh… Look at those two going at it," Lucario said while looking up, having noticed the incessant chattering between the two legendary lowering in tone, "Never thought I'd see Mew acting like… Y'know, a little girl."

    "That's what a lifelong friendship does to you," Zerobi explained, reminding herself that the same could be said with a lifelong enemy as her encounter in Snowpoint had proven, "Also, Mew is... Less natural than I'd expected."

    "I know, right!?" Lucario replied, perfectly understanding what she meant even with her poor description. While Celebi was like a plant with strong radiance, Mew was like something completely out of this world. Lucario remembered how he had once compared her to a cartoon character come to life, something so bright and clean it stuck out like a sore thumb in this plane of existence. He knew this effect to only be a fraction of what she was capable of, as another more urgent thought suddenly hit him.

    "Oh, yeah!" Lucario said triumphantly as he pointed to himself, "Check this out! I've learned a new technique!"

    "Oh?" Zerobi exclaimed with an interested tone, "Cool. Let's see it."

    Lucario immediately struck a pose, holding his arms out in front of him and making Zerobi worry that he was actually going to attack her with whatever he was planning. However, he slowly pulled his arms back towards his body and put his hands together, his eyes closed and his face filled with concentration. After a few moments, he crossed his arms, opened his eyes and looked at Zerobi, a big grin on his face.

    "See?" he said confidently.

    "… See what?" she responded, crossing her own arms in disappointment.

    "I can erase my own aura!" Lucario said loudly before pointing at himself again, "To psychics and those detector-things that busted us before, I'm practically invisible!"

    "Uh…" Zerobi stammered, unsure of what to say.

    "Hey, come on!" Lucario persisted with a slightly pleading tone to his voice, "This is impressive stuff!"

    "Yeah, you've just learned how to do something I attained at birth," Zerobi replied with a snarky voice, "Want me to give you a few pointers on how to walk?"

    "Whatever, you'll be jealous in a few moments, anyway," Lucario muttered before regaining his confidence, "That technique's just the warm-up. Let me show you the crowning achievement of my training!"

    "Can't wait," Zerobi said before quietly snickering, wondering just how big the explosion of failed aura would be this time.

    Lucario leaped back as far as he could, so Zerobi would see the full glory of his new technique. His previous attempt at posing had not impressed her, so he decided to cut out all the useless movements this time. Clenching his fist, he used it as a targeting point as he summoned up strength from every part of his body, feeling a stinging sensation flow through his right arm as he carefully directed it on a straight, harmless path.

    For an instant his concentration broke, and a splash of intense pain shot through his elbow as a small explosion of blue flames leaked through. A few months ago, this would have sent him to the ground as a screaming mess, and made the rest of the flow explode into an even bigger and more painful catastrophe. However, his training had been focused at learning how to ignore the pain, and he continued directing the flow of aura through his arm, towards his right hand.

    He unclenched his fist as he held his palm skywards, a miniature swirl of blue fire beginning to form above it. The sensation made his fingers tingle, reminding him of just how insanely painful it would be if he were to fail the technique now. Knowing there was no going back, he carefully added more of the restless mitochondrion from his arm to his hand, watching the swirl of aura grow larger and larger into a circular vortex. At this point, it was beginning to take the shape of a sphere.

    Finally, the flow that had once filled his entire being was now focused solely in the palm of his hand. Thrusting his hand in front of him, he let go of his concentration, causing the mitochondrion still in his palm to violently explode, sending the blue sphere flying forward at an extremely high speed. It zoomed past Zerobi who did not even have time to react, and continued soaring a few feet above the ground without losing velocity. It kept going for about a hundred meters before weakening in intensity, the magnificent Aura Sphere finally disappearing into thin air.

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    Sweet, they finally met up after forever, no real action but you leave us at a cliff hanger man, ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN NOW, I wonder if the aura sphere hits anything... Anyway keep this coming, I hate being so impatient in waiting for good stuff to show up.

    Well cya next update or response or whatever untill then I'm gonna sleep forever, well untill 8 hours pass, then off to work.


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    Heh, you call this a cliffhanger? Just for that, I'll show you a REAL cliffhanger the next time!

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    Chapter 44

    Vicious Intellectual Mewtwo




    "Aura Sphere, baby! Perfect aim, too!" Lucario said with a smile, trying to cover up the fact that he had not been aiming anywhere near Zerobi to begin with.

    Zerobi stood completely frozen, staring into space with a terrified look. The attack had not hit her, yet still a numbing sensation spread from her torso and paralyzed her lungs, making her breaths came quick and hard. It spread to the rest of her body before she suddenly fell to her knees.

    "N… N…" she said with a meek voice as she grasped at the ground, "Never use that again…"

    "Huh? Why?" Lucario asked, still prideful over having successfully pulled it off, "This thing's awesome, I'm going to use it all the time from now on!"

    "Not against me, you idiot!" Zerobi shouted angrily as she looked up, wishing she could explain to him that he had almost successfully recreated the most traumatic moment of her life, "I… I told you before, I hate that attack…"

    "… Heh," Lucario huffed and crossed his arms, "Be glad you didn't see what Rukario did when I ran into her again, then."

    "… She found you again? I had a feeling…" Zerobi mumbled while getting to her feet, telling herself to get over what had just happened, "Where's she now?"

    "Uh… Last I saw of her, she was being carted off to a hospital," Lucario replied and started wondering to himself if she had finished healing yet, "She was beaten pretty badly, so she might still be there."

    "Wh-What!?" Zerobi exclaimed with a startled voice, recalling when Lucario punched the crying woman in the face back in Snowpoint City, "What did you do to her this time!?"

    "Nothing, nothing!" Lucario said quickly as he waved his hands in front of him, "We ran into trouble, that's all."

    Zerobi became quiet, and Lucario was about to say something when it suddenly occurred to him that they were no longer standing in the middle of a storm. He looked around and realized he must have been focusing so hard on the Aura Sphere he hadn't noticed it stopping. His vigorous movements earlier and free-flying Aura Sphere told him that neither Mew nor Celebi were using barriers anymore, but he still knew that no regular storm could possibly disappear so quickly.

    "… So, no Aura Spheres, no blood and nothing involving a handshake…" Lucario muttered as he felt like getting back to talking, "… Pretty high maintenance, huh?"

    "Oh, that's rich, coming from a guy who knew nothing about anything and still managed to be hunted by two murderous legendary Pokémon," Zerobi replied with an annoyed expression before crossing her arms, "Please tell me you've at least got that thing sorted out."

    "Uh…" Lucario mumbled, "Does 'I will hit them with my Aura Sphere if they come back' count?"

    "You've got to be joking…" Zerobi groaned, "No wonder you stuck with Mew like glue. She's the only thing standing between you and a horrible death!"

    "Well, maybe at first, but the real reason is…" Lucario said while thinking back, and suddenly realized he had forgotten to tell the most important news of all, "… Oh yeah! I found out exactly which human I used to be before becoming a Pokémon, name and everything!"

    "… You didn't know?" Zerobi asked with a confused and somewhat irritated stare, "You said you remembered all that!"

    "Well, uh, I did… Kind of," Lucario stammered as he tried to explain, "I forgot everything relating to Pokémon, so let's just say my professional life got hit pretty hard with amnesia."

    "You mean… You used to be a Pokémon profess-" Zerobi said before hearing herself and starting to laugh at the ridiculous notion, "AHAHAHA! HAHAHAHA! OK, no, I'm just kidding…"

    "You were close… I guess?" Lucario responded with a scrunched up face, trying to figure out why him being a professor would seem so farfetched.

    "… Oh, I see, you were a trainer?" Zerobi said with clarity in her voice after she stopped laughing, "I should've known, the way you were eyeing me with that Master Ball!"

    "That's right!" Lucario exclaimed happily, eagerly awaiting the astonished look on her face when she realizes exactly who he used to be, "And I wasn't just any trainer, I was a real famous one! Take a guess!"

    "Brock?" Zerobi answered almost immediately.

    "Who?" Lucario replied just as quickly.

    "Brock, Brock, tough as a rock?" Zerobi chimed with a smile, the old rhyme from her days at school still fresh in memory. Her smile faded as she saw Lucario looking back at her with complete confusion.

    "… Bill?" Zerobi said, trying another guess.

    "Don't know who that is," Lucario said carefully, wondering if she had resorted to saying generic names in the hopes of getting it right.

    "… Aha, I know! You were a female human!" Zerobi nearly shouted as the sudden explanation as to why Lucario had not been looking for closer relations now seemed very obvious.

    "WHAT!? No!" Lucario burst out, shocked to the core by the idea, "I… How… Why would you ever think that?"

    "Hmm… Well, you do scream an awful lot wherever you get hurt," Zerobi mused, although she knew from past experience that men could easily scream just as much when dismembered in just the right way. She felt a little sickened by the thought, mostly because she had thought of it during this cheerful moment. She knew she could never escape her past, but wished it would leave her alone when things were important.

    "Hmpf. Just for that, I'm not telling you which human I used to be," Lucario muttered, his demeanor growing sour. He threw a quick glance behind himself and saw Mew and Celebi still talking to each other, wondering if Mew could somehow vouch for his awesomeness without giving anything away.

    "Like I care," Zerobi said with a shrug, replacing her inner turmoil with the fact that there were millions trainers in the world with only a select few she knew anything about, "Unless you were really, really famous or something…"

    "I'll have you know, I was really, really, REALLY famous!" Lucario said loudly and with pride, "It would've blown your mind!"

    "… Lance?" Zerobi asked after a moment of silence, racking her brains to try to figure out which famous trainer he was, excluding those she had already seen try to kill him.

    "No!" Lucario shouted angrily, wondering if maybe he had overestimated Ethan's popularity. He suddenly remembered that Zoroark had told him Ethan disappeared from the public's eyes nearly 10 years ago, so Zerobi was probably too young to even remember him. Lucario grumbled to himself, wishing his past self had posed for the cover of an occult magazine or something to win him a couple of points now.

    "Oh, hey," Zerobi said as she looked behind Lucario, who turned around to see both Mew and Celebi slowly drifting towards him. Lucario held his hand up to welcome them, but instantly stopped himself as a sudden chill ran through the air. He knew he was not the only one who felt it, as everyone apart from Zerobi visibly flinched. Even Mew seemed shaken by this, the same creature he had not gotten to even twitch after waking her up by knocking on her head. The chill only lasted a moment, but even after it had disappeared, a new and much worse sensation lingered in its place.

    If the sensation Celebi's aura radiated could be described as peacefulness, this new one was the complete opposite. Hate and anger surged unhindered through Lucario, but did not affect his disposition. Instead, it made him feel bad inside, like he had just upchucked a particularly nasty berry, or was feeling the first stages of a developing sickness.

    "He… He actually came?" Mew said as quickly as she could catch breath, her psychic power scrambled to adjust itself to this new presence.

    "… He cannot sense sis!" Celebi suddenly burst out as she swooped down and grabbed Zerobi's arm, "Let me take her inside!"

    "Hey, what's…" Zerobi protested, standing completely still while being tugged by Celebi's weak arms. Her sister's eyes told her the situation was too urgent to explain, and she quickly decided to follow on her own accord, silently waving goodbye to Lucario who was too shell-shocked to notice.

    "Lucario!" Mew exclaimed as she lowered herself to the level of his eyes, finally getting him to respond.

    "Wh… What…?" Lucario stammered, not sure of what to say, "I can sense it… What is it?"

    "Mewtwo is coming," Mew said sternly before looking behind her, making sure that no one was listening, "He has already noticed your aura, so I fear it is too late to erase it. Stay back, stay quiet and under no circumstances tell him that you are Ethan!"

    "Mewtwo… Your clone?" Lucario repeated as he vaguely remembered hearing her talk about him before, "Why not? You said something about him being an ally, right?"

    "Mewtwo despises humans," Mew explained, never breaking eye contact to enunciate the importance of what she was saying, "If he finds out about you, he might kill you!"

    "Pfft, yeah right," Lucario exclaimed confidently while shrugging, "With the Aura Sphere, I could defeat him before he even has time to blink."

    "To kill someone like you, he will not need that long!" Mew insisted as she moved so close their hairs were nearly touching, "Please!"

    "... OK, OK…" Lucario said quietly as he pulled his head back. He had never seen Mew this worried before, and as much as he was itching to use the Aura Sphere in an actual fight, he was less eager to die on the doorstep of their long-awaited destination.

    "One last warning," Mew whispered while looking away shamefully, "He… Might hurt me. You absolutely must not intervene if that happens."

    "What!? Like hell, I'd let him…" Lucario yelled, his previous fears of dying whisked away at the thought of someone beating up Mew without him doing anything. He stopped himself when he realized the two of them were no longer alone, a figure coming from seemingly nowhere and gracefully setting down on the ground in front of them.

    The Pokémon before him was nothing like what Lucario had been expecting, and he wondered if Mew really knew what a clone was supposed to be. Mewtwo was tall, humanoid and standing upright, reminding him much more of himself than the small legendary floating beside him. The two did share a few similarities, however. Their heads looked about the same with the exception of Mewtwo's being less wide, probably to match his much taller torso. Mewtwo's feet were also nearly the same size as his legs, but unlike Mew they seemed to be more muscular and not just there for show. In the same sense, Mewtwo's tail was strong and thick instead of long and slender, and also appeared to be fused into his lower body like a third leg or another rather common appendage Lucario had no intention to draw parallels to.

    The closer Lucario looked, the more he realized that Mewtwo really was a warped version of the legendary he knew so well. Where Mew's large blue eyes glittered with pure wisdom, Mewtwo's purple counterparts showed cold intelligence. Where her three-fingered hands lay restless against her side, his much bigger duplicates were flexed and seemed ready to crush something at any moment. Where she would show curiosity by carefully looking someone over, he would be analyzing every detail with a judgmental stare.

    Lucario gulped, seeing how that 'someone' was now him.

    "Hello, Mewtwo!" Mew said with a surprisingly cheerful voice, "I am glad to see you decided to come!"

    "This one reeks of you, original," Mewtwo said with a deep, cold voice as he remained motionless, "What is he?"

    "He... He is…" Mew stammered, finding herself at a rare lack of words when she understood the gravity of the situation. Mewtwo already knew something was unusual about Lucario, and depending on how much he knew, she realized her friend might simply explode into a cloud of guts and gore at any moment. The fact that he hadn't already meant Mewtwo probably did not know Lucario's true nature, or he did and was just instilling her with a false sense of security for his own amusement. She knew both to be very probable scenarios.

    "A bodyguard," Lucario filled in for her, hesitating a little as both their gazes fell upon him, "Her bodyguard. So, you'd best not try anything, pal."

    Mewtwo's eyes flared in anger, and Lucario compared his presence to swimming around freely underwater before suddenly being crushed underneath the weight of a boulder. Even so, Lucario had gained a familiarity towards such a strong presence after spending so much time with Mew, and was able to stand tall without flinching as the hateful sensation grew stronger.

    "What is he?" Mewtwo repeated, turning his menacing eyes away from Lucario who despite his resilience quickly filled up with relief, as if breaking the surface after almost drowning.

    "He is… An accident," Mew responded, hesitating shortly as she carefully picked her words and hoped Lucario was not the type to hold a grudge, "A perversion of nature, brought about by my own recklessness. I felt sorry for him and decided to let him accompany me here, to ask the legendaries for counsel."

    Lucario instantly told himself it was just something she said to mislead Mewtwo from the real question, but it did little to lessen the impact. In a single moment, he understood that what he had just heard was a far more likely explanation to her helpfulness than the fact that she genuinely cared for him. The fearful radiance surrounding him helped him come to this conclusion as he felt worse inside than ever before.

    "Are you attempting to fool a being of superior intellect?" Mewtwo asked with a frighteningly deep voice before suddenly turning his eyes back to Lucario, "You. Explain to me precisely what you are."

    "… You know, don't you?" Lucario replied bitterly, forcing himself to meet the fearsome eyes. The combined forces of Mewtwo's presence and Mew's betrayal had made him depressed enough to throw all caution to the wind and let his rebellious nature roam freely.

    "Lucario, no!" Mew shouted quickly in an effort to stop him, not caring about how to defend her actions to Mewtwo and not wanting to see Lucario get hurt.

    "I'm not a Pokémon…" Lucario said bluntly, staring directly at Mewtwo who stared back with severe intensity.

    "I'm human."

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    NOOO!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rotomknight View Post
    NOOO!
    Azurus you must die.
    No way! He's one of the few readers I've got, you'll have to go through me first!

    Haahh... Why don't more people like this story? It's bumming me out.

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    1. this is great.
    2. never stop this story.
    3. Is azurus your beta reader?
    4. look at my siggy.
    5. When will we see the next chapter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ShadedSkies View Post
    [center]Chapter 44

    "Wh… What…?" Lucario stammered, not sure of what to say, "I can sense it… What is it?"

    "Mewtwo is coming," Mew said sternly before looking behind her, making sure that no one was listening, "He has already noticed your aura, so I fear it is too late to erase it. Stay back, stay quiet and under no circumstances tell him that you are Ethan!"
    Well that was kinda random...

    Quote Originally Posted by ShadedSkies View Post
    [center]Chapter 44

    "I'm not a Pokémon…" Lucario said bluntly, staring directly at Mewtwo who stared back with severe intensity.

    "I'm human."
    Lucario! You idiot! -smack-
    Do you want to get yourself killed??


    Quote Originally Posted by ShadedSkies View Post
    Haahh... Why don't more people like this story? It's bumming me out.
    I love this story! :3
    I think it's very creative. I meen, the Pokemon games are kinda repetitive, and I like that this story puts a spin on things. I think my favorite part of the story is the characters, they all are so different, and have different pasts and I like learning about them all. Don't get discouraged, I'm sure as you keep writing, it's popularity will increase, even if it's slower then you hoped.

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    And just when you thought I was dead and gone, I return in a blast of fire! Hah!

    Regretably I don't have that much time on my hands currently, so I'll be quick.

    Great chapter, the one before it was good too, glad we finally see what happened to Lucario and Mew. Definately glad that Zerobi is back, she's one of my favorite characters in this series. (Yes, the cold-hearted, blood crazy murderer/former cult leader is one of my favorite characters).

    I cannot wait to see what sort of unplesentaries Mewtwo has in store for Lucario now that the truth is out.

    P.S: Don't worry, I'm sure you have many readers, silent, but readers none-the-less. That's how I was a few months ago. So they'll surface sooner or later.

    Knightfall signing off...

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    Azurus must die -Posted by that one zoroark dude/dudette


    "What? what did I do? I only say what we are all thinking.... why are you looking at me like that?" *runs*
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    #3 is Azurus one of your beta readers? -posted by crazy psycho awesome zoroark.

    #3 as far as I know I'm not, I just comment a lot.


    Anyway meant to right a response to what I read before, just it is is really hard to write on 3DS.

    Oh man hes done it now... Lucario (can never remember his real name and am too lazy to look it up) has no idea when to shut up, seriously he always shoots his mouth off getting himself in trouble, and he fails to realize that fighting moves are all but useless on psychics (so much for being a pokemon trainer/researcher)
    Luckily for him we can't have him killed off since he isn't a minor character... or maybe we can, you have shown time and time again you can kill off anyone without interrupting the flow of the story.

    Look forward to more of this and keep it coming. I also like how zerobi shows up again, I kinda figure she would since she was with celebii but it's nice anyway.


    P.S. He must have a unique trait like hustle which isn't normal on lucario, increased damage but less than perfect accuracy. It shows in a few fights but I think that's more artistic license rather than game play mechanics working in the story. (I could also be saying comepletely stupid things, in which case disregard everything dumb)
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    No way! He's one of the few readers I've got, you'll have to go through me first!

    Haahh... Why don't more people like this story? It's bumming me out. -posted by shadedskies/awesomestory writer

    Nice, the TC/Author/Bossman/Gentlemanwouldliketobattle/ is willing to defend me. Also if you check out your forum topic view, you will see more people are reading it or at least looking than you think. You have like 11000+views with only like 140ish replies, most fan fictions have less than have those views with like 5 times as many replies. Not sure if that's actually a good thing to be honest now that I say that, but it does mean we really anticipate the next chapter. So there, feel better already dangit. JK about that whole rudish cheer up but seriously tho, you are doing a good job and people look forward to this.

    I apologize for not using forum buttons properly, its just my 3DS is weird with stuff like this. Definitely should have combined this into 1 post but was worried I'd have to set this down and actually have to work at work.
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    You made the cliff hanger with aura sphere.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rotomknight View Post
    You made the cliff hanger with aura sphere.
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    grats and oh I see... well now it's even better.


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    Chapter 45

    Restless Thunderbird Zapdos




    Mewtwo glared at Lucario, eyes so ferocious he was certain he would go blind if he did not look away from them. Supposedly the powerful psychic had the ability to kill him before he could even blink, and so he sharpened his reflexes as much as possible and was ready to leap away at the slightest notice of an attack. Meanwhile, the dark radiance grew so thick and hopeless that Lucario wondered if maybe he had already been attacked, life fading away from him as he was slowly dying.

    Instantly, everything let up as Mewtwo turned his back to them through a swaying motion, Lucario falling forward in surprise.

    "Farewell," he said, bending his legs to the ground and getting ready to take off.

    "Wait, Mewtwo!" Mew shouted in surprise as she flew towards him, "You came all this way for nothing!?"

    "Silence, original!" Mewtwo roared ferociously, stopping himself but still not turning around, "I tolerate your presence under protest. If you wish me to mingle with other legendaries, regular Pokémon and this abomination as well, you ask too much."

    Mew stared intently at her clone, wondering if there was anything she could do at this point to convince him to stay. She wanted to explain herself, to tell him of Lucario's true nature as Ethan, the human who helped save the world. However, the fact that he was still standing beside her meant that Mewtwo already knew, or at least suspected as much.

    "I understand," Mew whispered and slightly lowered her head, "See you again at Christmas."

    With that, Mewtwo suddenly lifted off the ground, ascending into the sky like an accelerating rocket. With every second that passed, Lucario felt the abnormal sensation that had threatened to choke him waning, yet still his newfound inner turmoil grew stronger. He needed to know the truth, even though he feared her response more than he had Mewtwo's.

    "… Mew…" Lucario said after Mewtwo had disappeared from sight, heart pounding loudly in his chest, "… You didn't… Mean those things you said, right…?"

    "Of course I did not!" Mew yelled before turning towards him and showing a very irritated look on her face, "You are my precious friend… Although after this, I am not so certain about that anymore!"
    "Ah!" Lucario exclaimed in shock as a large amount of relief tinged with shame washed over him, "… I'm sorry."

    "… It cannot be helped. That is the way he is," Mew said with a sigh, calming down as she knew there was no point in getting angry, "I had never expected him to come in the first place. Easy arrival, easy departure?"

    "Listen, I'll… I'll make it up to you," Lucario replied, all of his earlier worries transformed into gratefulness towards Mew for being such a good friend, "Yeah, you can rely on me when it comes to fixing this situation; I'll show you that I'm way more useful than he'd be!"

    "I am certain of that," Mew giggled lightly, no longer having to worry about Mewtwo bringing down everyone's mood. She had hoped for his assistance since he was most likely powerful and intelligent enough to solve the state of the world all on his own, but still worried that his solution might not turn out to be in humanity's best interests. The fact that he had left Lucario alone did show a lot of improvement on his part, however, and she took pride in knowing she had made the right choice by letting him live after their ferocious duel in the past.

    Lucario wondered what Mew was thinking about as they headed towards the rocky formation he thought to be the cave of their destination. More importantly, he wondered if she knew the way in, and if this really was the right place. While the mountainous rock covered most of the island, it was just barely a hundred meters in height, so he had no worries about needing to climb very far.

    Mew had told him that the closer they got to the meeting, the less he would be able to sense the aura of other creatures. True enough, Lucario noticed little going on behind the rocky walls that supposedly held some of the most powerful beings on the planet.

    "At long last… Here we are," Mew said cheerfully as she pointed towards a small opening in the ground, moving back to let Lucario get a good look at it.

    "Wait… We're not going in there?" he asked, pointing to the small mountain he had expected to be hollow.

    "What a terrible hiding place," Mew said bluntly as she followed his finger, "It is too big and obvious."

    "… You know I found you by sticking near the biggest thing on the face of the earth, right?" Lucario said as the tiny legendary lowered her head a bit.

    "If only the others were as good at hiding themselves when in plain sight…" she whispered before facing Lucario with a stern look, "Just remember, you should not tell them that you used to be human, because-"

    "We can't prove it, and my past as a trainer would complicate things," Lucario interrupted her before getting on his knees to inspect the hole, which seemed to lead into a horizontal passage, "We went over this, what, eight gazillion times?"

    Mew stopped herself from pointing out the obvious, wondering if Lucario had already forgotten what he had told Mewtwo. Even so, she could not blame him for what he had said - She knew how badly Mewtwo's mere presence could affect those not used to it, which would be anyone except her. Even Celebi had described their occasional meetings as unpleasant, and not just because of his unfriendly demeanor.

    The dark, rocky passage reminded Lucario a bit about his visit to Zerobi's home. A dank, uninteresting scenery that led into a small dead end, humbly decorated with a bed and a small source of light. By comparison, the place where he and Zoroark had gone before separating looked less rugged, with plants that shone and actual thought put into the design. It had been as cleanly built as something made out of dirt can get.

    However, what he saw when entering the cavern beyond the passage was far and well beyond anything he had imagined. A massive room loomed beneath him, making him realize the actual cave was well underneath ground level. The ceiling was covered by thick vines that produced light so strong it felt like a sunny day, but the light was surprisingly soft and did not sting his eyes in the least. The cavern itself was impressive, but had absolutely nothing going for it compared to its inhabitants. Lucario took a deep breath before leaning forward and looking down, certain of his own amazement at the large variety of legendaries beneath.

    His first impression was that he was not looking closely enough. After squinting for a few moments, he realized that he could only spot three individual creatures. Two of them seemed to be even smaller than Mew and Celebi in size, and the third one was just a yellow bird.

    Disappointment hit Lucario like a truck. After hearing Mew's tales about the glory and magnificence among the legendaries, his expectations had soared higher than ever before and he was ready to have his mind blown on several different levels. Instead, he had come upon a scene slightly less interesting than what he could find in any place with Pokémon.

    "Hey…" a sharp yet strangely sweet voice echoed throughout the cave, "Hey! New arrivals!"

    The echoing made it difficult to tell the origin of the noise. Lucario looked down to see who had spoken, only to see all three of them looking up in his direction.

    "Selphie, why didn't you tell me they were coming?" the voice sounded again, as the yellow bird turned its head towards one of the small creatures.

    "Your shift starts in five minutes," a light and calm voice very much like Mew's came from somewhere, "I didn't think you'd have the time-"

    "Of course I have the time!" the first voice spoke more determinately this time, before the yellow bird suddenly started flapping its wings and flew up towards them.

    Lucario instantly regretted having underestimated the group, finally realizing just how quickly the bird was covering up his vision. He estimated it to be slightly larger than Suicune, yet it was coming at them at more than twice his maximum speed. The unrealistic agility was more akin to teleportation than flight, and before he even knew it the bird had perched on the ledge.

    Every part of it was screaming yellow, feathers looking even more ruffled than his hairy chest after a particularly bad case of static electricity. He noticed a few patches of black feathers around the eyes and back, but most were obscured by the strong yellow lying over it. It had a very slender beak, as long as his own arm and sharp enough to give Zerobi's and Zoroark's claws a run for their money.

    Something like a thunder strike suddenly roared through the cave, the bird's form lighting up in brilliant white. This light was far harsher than the one in the rest of the cave, Lucario looking away instinctively and keeping his face covered until he noticed the light growing weaker. When he looked back, he nearly lost his breath at what he witnessed.

    The same bird as before stood before him, yet it was very different. Its massive wings were spread and feathers were shooting out in every direction like an explosion frozen in time, Lucario realizing exactly why they had looked so ruffled before. The bird shone yellow as bright sparks of white lightning crawled around it, making every feather it touched sway a little from the magnetism.

    Another strike of lightning sounded, and the bird became engulfed in a pillar of blue lightning. As quickly as it had appeared, the electricity around the bird calmed down while it fell back into a more casual posture. Lucario shook his head a few times, several reddish spots appearing where the image had been burned into his eyes, Mew peeking out from behind Lucario's back to see what was happening.

    "Hello, I'm the legendary thunderbird known as Zapdos," she said happily, Lucario standing frozen for a moment before pointing in her direction.

    "That… Was awesome," Lucario gasped as he looked at her with eyes beaming in amazement, "You… Are awesome."

    "Hahaha! Not one to mince words, are you?" Zapdos laughed as she looked over the Lucario, surprised that someone had been so blunt as to actually told her something like that right on their first meeting, "What's your name?"

    "Ethan," Lucario immediately responded, Mew's jaw dropping in protest. She realized she had wrongfully blamed Mewtwo's presence for clouding Lucario's already poor judgment.

    "Ethan…? Hey! I battled a trainer with that name many years ago!" Zapdos said cheerfully, thinking to herself for a few seconds, "… Yes, it's a fine name."

    "Well, it's no 'Selphie', but it gets me through the day," Lucario replied, now recognizing Zapdos to be the owner of the sharp yet far from unpleasant voice he had picked up earlier.

    "Hehehe… Tressie's gonna love you…" Zapdos snickered before seeing a small pink figure peek out from under Lucario, and she immediately straightened herself up, "M-Mew! Sorry, I didn't see you there!"

    "Hello, Zapdos," Mew said calmly as she flew up to hover a few paces left of Lucario, not wanting to get between the two who seemed to be hitting things off surprisingly well, "I saw your handiwork on the way here. You have become very skilled."

    "… And awesome, apparently…" Zapdos whispered under her breath, exchanging a quick look with Lucario. She was still perplexed that Mew of all Pokémon would be the one bringing a guest to the meeting, but knew better than to be disrespectful towards the older and much more powerful legendary. Mew had come to visit her and her siblings all throughout their childhoods, and they loved and respected her far too much to ever question her occasionally confusing motives.

    "Tick-tock," the voice that sounded somewhat like Mew's came from the lower level, a different noise sounding from above it. From a passageway just barely visible in the bright ceiling of the cave, a large figure clad in red and yellow descended.

    Lucario instantly winced as he realized that it looked red and yellow because it was literally on fire. It had the shape of a bird and left a trail of smoke behind as it came crashing down towards the ground, Lucario bracing himself for a fiery explosion. However, while still in midair, the bird turned its head and looked at him, before suddenly making a sharp turn in his direction. Lucario scrambled backwards and looked over at Mew and Zapdos, both of which seemed surprisingly calm considering the impending doom heading their way. While not nearly as fast as the first one had been, the new avian was upon them before Lucario had time to take cover, and much to his surprise landed carefully on the ground with its feet instead of crashing against the wall with its beak.

    The firebird looked a lot like Zapdos whenever she was not charged with electricity, with yellow feathers that were not ruffled but instead jagged around the edges. It was still on fire, but seemed to not care all that much, intensive flames burning around its head, wings and tail. Lucario could feel the heat from where he was standing, scrambling his mind to remember which legendary the bird could be while it looked down at him with a casual demeanor.

    "Hey Tressie, guess what? New arrivals!" Zapdos suddenly said, the burning bird staring at her before quickly looking back at Lucario.

    "Oh, hello," he said with a calm and polite voice, "I saw you arrive earlier, and let the weather calm down fo-"

    "Quick, ask the Lucario what his name is!" Zapdos interrupted, using her beak to impatiently tug at a lower part of the firebird's right wing where there were no flames.

    "… What is your name, Lucario?" he asked after a moment of hesitation, apparently wondering if he had met the Lucario sometime in the past.

    "… Ethan?" Lucario answered carefully, growing more doubtful if he was doing the right thing by giving his real name. Mew shook her head disappointedly as Lucario looked up and saw a meaningful smile crossing over the fiery bird's beak.

    "Isn't it great!?" Zapdos exclaimed happily before turning around, "Well, see you later, I've got to get to work."

    "… Work?" Lucario asked hesitantly, not sure if she was joking or not.

    "Who d'ya think's keeping this storm going?" Zapdos responded with a smile, before setting off and flying up into the ceiling. Before he even knew it her yellow form had disappeared in the light, and she was gone.

    "Forgive my sister's… Hyperactivity," the burning bird said with a reluctant sigh, "All the electric charges from whipping up a storm do that to her."

    "I like it," Lucario replied while scratching his chin, checking to see that it had not caught fire without him noticing, "You are…?"

    "Hmm? Is it possible you have not heard of the legendary firebird Moltres before?" he answered with mild surprise in his voice before giving off a sigh, "Seems you are 'Ethan' in name, only…"

    "Well-" Lucario started before a small pink figure quickly zoomed in front of him.

    "Hello, Moltres!" Mew said loudly, intentionally interrupting Lucario while throwing him an irritated glance, "How are you?"

    Lucario did not get to hear Moltres' answer as he was busy interpreting why Mew was staring at him with such a hopeless and confused look on her face.

    "You said he was the legendary bird OF fire, not ON fire," he whispered to her, wondering if she wanted to know why he had been trying to take cover earlier.

    "… Tell me, why is Articuno not with us?" Mew asked as she turned her head back to Moltres, dissatisfied with Lucario's explanation but deciding to drop it until they were alone again.

    "She's…" Moltres said while letting his voice trail off, apparently reluctant to saying what he was really thinking, "… Not feeling well."

    "… Has it gotten worse?" Mew asked in a worried manner, "I can sense her aura just outside, maybe I should talk to her?"

    "Outside? Whoa, wait!" Lucario interjected as he took a step forward, "If she's sick, that storm's not going to make things better!"

    "Don't ask," a familiar voice whispered behind Lucario, making him twitch in surprise, "I went to have a chat with her. She's not sick, she's a nutcase!"

    Lucario turned around to see the easily recognizable Weavile standing behind him, coming through the same passage as he had and getting to her feet. She was no longer wearing her cloak, and he could see that she had not changed much in the few months they had been apart. Her form was as slender and elegant as ever, making him feel like a hairy slob just by standing next to her. His eyes narrowed at the sight of her sharp claws, remembering well how they had cut through his throat.

    "Takes one to know one," Lucario said with a snarky tone, glad to see that he could finally joke about what happened instead of lament over it.

    "We share a few interests when it comes to snow, but that's it," Zerobi said, unwilling to admit that they were more similar than that, and not in a good way. She knew that Articuno could very easily turn into bad influence, and she decided to return to be with the rest for the time being.

    Mew and Moltres continued talking as Zerobi waved Lucario over, suddenly jumping down the ledge. He shrugged and followed, landing on an incline underneath and running down the rocky ground. He stumbled a few times over the unpredictable terrain as Zerobi sped ahead of him, her clawed feet no doubt better suited for maintaining a good foothold.

    Lucario eventually made it to the bottom of the cave without any damage. He heard voices in front of him, the first being Zerobi's and the other being the one that had sounded a bit like Mew's. He saw his friend standing ahead, talking to a very small creature that was floating in midair, again reminding him of Mew. For the first time, Lucario felt like he recognized the voice from somewhere else, and he tried to recall from where. A mysterious pain flashed over his chest as he remembered it being around the time he was captured and sent to jail.

    Zerobi suddenly noticed that Lucario had made it down, and waved him over to them.

    "Hey, here's that guy I told you about!" she said happily, the small Pokémon next to her giving off a nervous gulp.

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    Sweet, another update! I'm a little disappointed at the lack of confrontation with mewtwo, but oh well. Also, I never would have imagined the legendary birds with personalities like that, it seems that you don't always follow the stereotypical personality/element thing which is a nice touch.

    Good job at getting the nervous embarassment across with mew watching Ethan tell his name, I literally turned away to get ready to psyche myself up to read more because of situation, (those times where characters do stupid things and you have to leave room or close the book to avoid it but you come back anyway to find out what happens? maybe it's just because I feel like the fool being represented.) so that was awesome.

    Keep the chapters coming, I look forward to it.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Azurus View Post
    Sweet, another update! I'm a little disappointed at the lack of confrontation with mewtwo, but oh well.
    Mewtwo and Mew already fought in the past, so a new confrontation's not too crucial... For now. For the record, Mewtwo is the strongest Pokemon in this entire series, and while that doesn't guarantee victory I wouldn't place my bets on the survival of whoever his enemy is, even Mew.

    Quote Originally Posted by Azurus View Post
    You have like 11000+views with only like 140ish replies, most fan fictions have less than have those views with like 5 times as many replies.
    Yeah, what's up with that!? This story's going to be SO good in a few chapters, people will be missing out! If you have any idea on how to reach out to more readers, feel free to share!

    Quote Originally Posted by Azurus View Post
    I apologize for not using forum buttons properly, its just my 3DS is weird with stuff like this.
    Hmm, I might get a 3DS if the new Paper Mario's any good. I love the writing in that series!

    Quote Originally Posted by Knightfall View Post
    Definately glad that Zerobi is back, she's one of my favorite characters in this series. (Yes, the cold-hearted, blood crazy murderer/former cult leader is one of my favorite characters).
    Ah, I love hearing which characters people like the most. I like her too despite the whole child murdering massacre she had going, good to see that you don't hold that too much against her.

    Quote Originally Posted by Rotomknight View Post
    3. Is azurus your beta reader?
    No. The demand would be grueling, I usually finish the chapter barely a day before it's posted. Nice nail polish on that Zoroark, BTW.

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    I think my favorite part of the story is the characters, they all are so different, and have different pasts and I like learning about them all.
    Cool, I put a lot of effort into making the characters as interesting and colorful as possible. Many writers seem to think that a gender, verbal tick and vague backstory is enough to make a character, but I go all out and plan them with such detail that they might pass for actual people.

    There's no shortage of character I've planned out for future parts of the story, but I've got to be careful not to introduce too many - There's not nearly enough room for them to be there all at once!

    Who's your favorite?

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    Mine is Lucario/Ethan.
    The way he reacts to pokemon culture is fasinatingly funny.
    When will there be more berry stuff. (It would be funny if he liked dried berries.)
    Will we see Rukario again. I'm to lazy to look back and see if she is dead.
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    I like Zerobi and Ethan.

    Zerobi because she is awwesome (meant to spell it like that) and while I can't give direct examples because I suck at describing/explaining/pointing things out, I do like the effort she puts in to change her past image.

    Ethan because lucario is cool and like rotom(k?)night said the way he tries to adapt is hilarious, also for how clueless he is.

    @Rotom(k?)night the female lucario was taken to a pokecenter or something if I recall.


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    I agree with Azurus, Ethan and Zerobi just resonate with me as characters, not so much as something I can easily explain.

    What I really like is how you put so much detail into the character's pasts and backstories. I makes the characters seem much more...alive than the characters of other fanfictions and even some books by professional authors.
    I hope you continue to produce the same great A+ quality work that I've come to admire as a fellow aspiring author.

    As for ideas for advertising this fic, well, I'm all ready doing my part in my sig, but I sugest making an entry into the Fan Fiction Catalog: Entry Thread. I dunno, just a little more exposure for this fic.
    Maybe a Trailer for it (even though it's not a new fic), or a request in the Review Exchange thread?

    Hope these ideas help with the "need more readers" problem.


    Knightfall signing off...
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    Plz tell me you are close to being done.
    Will you give us a picture of astrid.
    I would make one but My photoshop is on the computer without the net.

    Maybe make a special chapter about Astrid.
    Maybe clone her.
    Or at least tell us how she evolved.
    I WANT MORE ASTRID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Who will we meet next chapter.
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    Chapter 46

    Awkward Fairy Azelf


    Mew had at one point told Lucario that everyone in this cave was stronger than he was. He was doubting it even more now than back then. Even so, as underwhelming as his first impression of the legendaries had been, Lucario had grown more eager after talking to Zapdos and Moltres and decided to give this new, unaccented Pokémon a chance.

    The first thing Lucario noticed about the small legendary next to Zerobi was that fact that it had a large crystal embedded in its forehead, just like she did. It was red, and the rest of his body was in a grayish blue color. The supposedly organic piece of glass had to be more than just a coincidence, and he wondered if the two of them were related somehow. He noticed similar crystals stuck at the tip of the creature's two tails, something he hadn't seen on his friend before, and wondered if maybe he just needed to look harder.

    Lucario marveled over the synchronized movement of the two appendages for a moment before realizing that the small legendary was examining him as well. Its head was severely misshapen, but in an aesthetically pleasing manner, making it appear to be wearing a hat made out of its own flesh and blood. Its yellow eyes were beady, at least when compared to Mew and Celebi's humongous optics. The rest of the legendary looked much like them, but its body was even smaller. It was holding an unfolded newspaper in one of its short arms, and the paper itself could easily be used as a bag to cover it up entirely.

    "Azelf, this is Lucario," Zerobi introduced him to the Pokémon beside her, whose eyes opened up in sudden realization.

    "… Ah, Selphie?" Lucario said as the voices from earlier came to mind.

    "That is… Only Zapdos calls me that," Azelf replied with embarrassment before getting a grouchy expression on his face, "But she makes up names for everyone! I tried calling her Zapi once, but then she got mad!"

    The three of them stared at each other for a while, apparently having run out of things to say already.

    "… Want to tell him about how I saved your life?" Zerobi asked with an irritated tone, nudging Azelf's side.

    "Oh! Right!" he exclaimed before looking at Lucario with determination, "She, uh… Saved my life!"

    Lucario snickered quietly as Zerobi carefully put her palm to her forehead, using her free arm to aggressively poke the head of the small legendary who in turn seemed to grow more nervous by the second. A strange feeling suddenly crept upon Lucario, slowly realizing that the three of them were not the only ones in the vicinity. He saw a fourth creature sitting on the ground, one that had completely slipped from his notice until now.

    A clear pattern formed in his mind as this new creature was just another one in the line of very many legendaries that reminded him of Mew and Celebi. This one was so similar to Azelf they simply had to be related, the only difference being that its hat-head was yellow instead of blue, and the fact that it was sitting down. However, Lucario quickly realized that this new creature was nothing like the one he had just talked to, and had a good idea of why it had slipped his notice in the first place.

    Ever since arriving in the cave, Lucario had felt that he was no longer sensing anyone's aura. Mew had explained it to him that there was a legendary Pokémon capable of masking everyone presence, and as such was always present at legendary meetings. He had made a point of remembering the name of such an important Pokémon, making up for the fact that he had forgotten those of the rest. That way, he would at least appear smart to one of them.

    "Oh! This is…" Azelf started as he noticed Lucario looking at his brother, but stopped himself as Lucario held up a hand.

    "Don't worry, Mew's told me all about you…" Lucario said as he prepared for his moment of glory, "… You're Uxie, aren't you? I'm Lucario, nice to meet you!"

    Uxie did not budge. Actually, it was not even looking at him, just sitting completely still and keeping its eyes closed.

    "Weak," it finally spoke after a few seconds, its voice hazy and bland.

    "… What!?" Lucario shouted, any hopes of kindling a friendship immediately shattering, "I'll have you know, I've trained my butt off just so I can kick YOUR butt off if-"

    "No, no, no, you misunderstand!" Azelf flew between them to protect his brother, "He only means you don't need to weaken your aura on purpose anymore, it's something he can handle for you."

    "Oh, um…" Lucario mumbled while scratching the back of his head, feeling somewhat embarrassed, "… Thanks?"

    "Stupid," Uxie uttered, still remaining motionless.

    "What's he saying this time?" Lucario asked, not wanting to jump the gun again as Azelf gulped loudly.

    "… He, uh, thinks you're stupid," Zerobi said from behind him, looking at Azelf who nodded carefully in response. Lucario sighed in defeat, wishing he could go back in time and focus on learning the name of a cooler legendary, like Zapdos or Moltres. He looked back at where he had last seen the two birds, and was surprised to see Mew on her way towards them. Moltres was still perched by the entrance, pecking at his wings with his beak and looking more relaxed than before.

    "Hello, Azelf!" Mew said as she completely flew past Lucario without even giving him a look, "Do you have any news regarding the situation?"

    "Hello, Mew! Yes, big, big news!" Azelf chimed happily as he opened up the newspaper and started reading, "Have you heard anything about the soaring shark?"

    Mew thought to herself for half a moment before shaking her head.

    "Apparently, this soaring shark is a new species of Pokémon," he continued with a tone of importance and pride before holding the paper in front of him, "It says here, soaring shark assembled a crew and went to town on humanity! That's pretty bi-"

    "Zoroark," Lucario interrupted with a casual voice.

    "Excuse me?" Azelf asked, peeking out from behind the newspaper.

    "It says 'Zoroark', and it's pronounced 'Zoroark'," Lucario muttered as he pointed to the part of the article he was currently reading, "It also says he assembled an army and occupied a town of humanity."

    "You… You can read human writing that well!? Amazing!" Azelf exclaimed as he turned the paper back to himself, and both Lucario and Zerobi suddenly crowded around him to read. The small legendary suddenly went rigid as the two of them accidentally rubbed against him, his face betraying him as his eyes leered to the side, his mouth drying up and his cheeks starting to blush.

    "I'm pretty good, too," Zerobi pointed out as she continued reading further down, wondering if Azelf had completely given up on reading since he was looking at her instead of the newspaper, "… And from the looks of this, it really does seem like he went to town on humanity!"

    "There is an article about Zoroark?" Mew asked as she also moved over to Azelf, hovering above him and trying to remember what Lucario had already told her about Zoroark, "What does it say?"

    "… Ah, shit…" Lucario muttered reluctantly as he began to understand the content of the article, "… Listen to this…"

    Lucario proceeded to read the article out loud to everyone. It detailed the ongoing revolution, the rise of No Man's Land and Zoroark's role behind everything. The descriptions were all fairly vague, as not even the writers themselves knew much about the situation and the mysterious new Pokémon. When he was finished, Lucario recounted his personal experiences with the revolutionaries, leaving out minor details such as Astrid and the fact that he was defeated and had to flee like a coward.

    "… No…" Mew said to herself after Lucario had finished talking, drawing out a worried gasp from Azelf.

    "I... I had expected something like this, as a worst case scenario," she continued as she tried to focus and get her rampant thoughts under control, "It is happening much sooner than I had thought, however."

    "Man, Zoroark actually pulled it off…" Lucario said, voice a bit hoarse from talking so much, "Busting me out of prison's one thing, but taking over a whole city? I doubt it'll improve the relation between humans and Pokémon."

    "This... This changes everything…" Moltres said, Lucario flinching as he had not even noticed the firebird standing right behind him, having chalked up the sudden rise in heat as a bodily reaction to his urgent need for water, "Mew, what is your verdict?"

    Mew became quiet, knowing that explaining her thought process would slow her down immensely, and there was no longer any time to spare. She had been expecting a development like this, and feared that she would come to the same conclusion as the last time. After several minutes of intensive thinking, searching through every loophole to assure herself that the potential disaster could never come to pass, she knew her fears had been correct.

    "… War," she said bluntly, eliciting a reaction from everyone present.

    "Wh-What!?" Zerobi exclaimed in shock, her reaction being the loudest.

    "You've got to be kidding!" Lucario jumped in with a confused expression, "War? Over something like this?"

    "I fear that it is indeed a possibility, one weighed out by many differentiating factors…" Mew explained as she closed her eyes.

    "Diff… Different factors?" Lucario tried to repeat before shaking his head, "Like what?"

    Mew smiled as she opened her eyes and looked at him.

    "Us," she said with a clear voice before falling silent. Her words had taken away whatever else was on everyone's mind, and they were all busy trying to comprehend what the future held in store for the world. Both Azelf and Moltres were looking longingly at Mew for guidance, while Zerobi hated herself for wondering if she could somehow take advantage of the surplus of spilt blood that was sure to come from this. Lucario groaned inwardly, and had a feeling Mew was doing the same. This was not going to make their plans any easier.

    "No, there is no time to waste," Mew suddenly said as she knew something had to be done about it, preferably as quickly as possible, "Moltres, summon your sisters! We must commence with the meeting immediately!"

    "Right now?" Azelf asked with a startled voice, sounding even more like a little boy than before, "But everyone isn't here yet!"

    "We will have to manage without them," Moltres said while calmly shaking his head, making a few embers fly off in both directions, "Mew, Celebi and dad are already here, and I doubt the rest of us can add anything to their decisions."

    "Please, you know we listen to what you have to say," Mew said hopelessly as she wished she had any time to comfort him and especially the heavily troubled Articuno, "I will inform your father. Tell your sisters to come to the chambers and make the necessary preparations."

    "I understand," Moltres said with a courteous nod before looking at Lucario, "I'll see you around, Ethan."

    Moltres took off into the air, flying towards the ceiling as Mew flew off deeper into the cave. Lucario reached out as if to follow her, before realizing she was moving way too fast for him to catch up, and slumped back.

    "… Ah, I had a feeling there were more of you," Lucario said as he remembered what Azelf had said and looked at him, "Who are we missing?"

    "You mean… Intentionally or unintentionally?" Azelf asked, giving off a curious stare.

    "Uh… Intentionally?" Lucario answered with a confused voice.

    "We didn't invite everyone. Mew says that even in our most dire hour of need, only a few legendaries can be located in the same area at once," Azelf explained, glad to finally be of any use, "If something were to happen to all of us, the effects upon this world would be disastrous, and we can't take that risk."

    "You forgot to answer him," Zerobi snickered, before turning quiet once more. She had not said anything for a while, and Lucario could see that something was obviously bothering her.

    "Currently, we are expecting the Latis-twins, Reshiram and Jirachi," Azelf said, his voice getting progressively less interested before it was more like a sigh, "Odds are, the last two will not even consider showing up."

    Azelf suddenly twitched as if he was struck by something.

    "Oh, right!" he exclaimed, "I need to go tell my sister about all this! I'll, uh, I'll see you later!"

    He dove down to pick up Uxie, and instantly disappeared from Lucario and Zerobi's notice as if he had never even been there to begin with. He sighed, wondering how his brother could stand being treated like this all the time as they quietly flew away. Zerobi and Lucario hardly even noticed that anything happened, both of them much too busy thinking to themselves.

    "Jirachi…?" Lucario repeated as the name struck a strange note in his head, "I've heard that name before."

    "Oh?" Zerobi exclaimed in surprise, "You mean you were actually listening to me when I told you about the legendaries?"

    "You or Mew, kind of hard to keep track of at this point," Lucario said with a shrug and gave up on figuring out where he had picked up the name from. He knew he had more important things to be using his head for than going through the list of hundreds of names that had been imprinted there. There was only one name that was important for him to never forget, anyway.

    "… Ethan, Ethan…" Zerobi suddenly said, startlingly Lucario as he wondered if she had read his mind "… You know, I could've sworn Moltres just called you Ethan."

    "Well, you know how he likes to make up names for everyone," Lucario replied quickly, trying to figure out just how much Zerobi knew.

    "That was the other one," Zerobi pointed out sternly, remembering how Celebi had confused Zapdos into thinking her name was Sis and then kept referring to her as 'Sissy'.

    "Was it, really?" Lucario said with a condescending tone, trying to confuse her as best he could, "In that case, why would he call me Ethan, hmm?"

    "… Don't tell me… That famous trainer you used to be…" Zerobi muttered before raising her voice as the realization hit her, "… It was Ethan!? Ethan, the peerless ace!?"

    "Hey, bingo!" Lucario replied, dropping his charade and feeling happy that she had finally gotten it right, "I know the name's not as big as Brock, Brock, dumb as a rock-"

    "No way, this is much bigger!" Zerobi exclaimed while grasping the absurdity of the situation, "… Also, 'no way' in general! How the hell could someone as clueless as you be the greatest trainer of all time!?"

    "Like I said, I forgot about everything related to Pokémon…" Lucario explained, wondering if he should start counting how many times he needs to repeat it, "… Which, as it turns out, was a whole lot."

    "Oh yeah?" Zerobi exclaimed and scoffed at the convenient excuse, trying to remember everything she knew about Ethan in order to disprove his claim, "Where were you born?"

    "A nice little place called New Bark Town," Lucario answered as he thought back to his childhood, "Right in the middle of a forest, which we weren't allowed to go deeper into. I did it every day, anyway."

    "Uh…" Zerobi mumbled, impressed that he got it correct and decided to move on to more personal questions, "… What were your parents like?"

    "Can't remember my father, although that might just be because he had something to do with Pokémon…" Lucario muttered and got the distinct feeling that he was just a lousy parent who was never home, "… Wish I could say the same for my mother."

    "… If you honestly were the real Ethan, that means your mother's still alive," Zerobi said as she calmed down a bit, the story sounding surprisingly accurate to what she could remember, "You… You're not planning on seeing her?"

    "Eh. I'm sure she'd just complain about my new hairstyle," Lucario muttered, stroking through the fur on his chest, "And, well, I've already got enough problems without her piling on. Maybe later… Much, much later."

    "… You have your reasons, I suppose…" Zerobi whispered disappointedly, feeling a sudden longing for a parent that was neither captured nor dead. She wondered if her adoptive parents would even recognize her if they were to meet, or her them in the same situation. She shook the thoughts form her head and continued with her inquiry.

    "… Well then, what about your vast army of super-powerful and extremely loyal Pokémon?" she asked with a smirk appearing on her face, "Planning on contacting them at some point?"

    "… I can do that!?" Lucario suddenly blurted out in shock, "Hot damn! How?"

    "As far as I remember, Ethan is famous for releasing all his Pokémon before fading into obscurity…" Zerobi mumbled, wishing she had kept a copy of the magazine detailing Ethan's life, "… They're all scattered, but you're bound to run into some eventually if you ask around."

    "But… Damn it, I don't have any concrete proof that I'm Ethan…" Lucario muttered in disappointment, imagining trying to convince people like Red and Raikou of his identity through words alone. He figured he would have approximately 3 seconds before getting shocked and captured.

    "That's… Problematic. You'll just have to convince them to believe you," Zerobi said with a shrug, obviously thinking along the same lines as him, "But hey, if you got a legendary like Celebi or Mew to vouch for you, it'd definitively boost your chances."

    "Yeah, that'll happen…" Lucario groaned sarcastically, having a hard time imagining the extremely shy and careful Mew coming out of hiding just for his sake, "So… Do you believe me?"

    "I guess so," Zerobi said, wondering if it even made a difference since his memory was in shambles, "Teaching the greatest trainer of all time everything he knows about Pokémon will look better on my record, anyway."

    "… Zerobi!" Lucario exclaimed in surprise, overcome with happy feelings that someone would recognize him for what he really was, "You… You really are a great friend!"

    Zerobi wondered if maybe she could use this as a get-out-of-jail-free card if he ever found out about her true identity, but found her thoughts trailing off as Lucario put his hand on her shoulder and looked her straight in the eye. It felt as if no matter what happened between them, their friendship had formed a bond that would never break. The two of them looked at each other for a while, the atmosphere around them growing denser by the second.

    "Now, come on," Lucario said with a smile on his face, "I've got something very important I want to do with you."
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    Nice...
    I want action, I hope Ethan meets his mom...
    Make us a picture of astrid or provide us a link.
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    This the aquabats song awesome forces:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dx4sL0w3SHM
    and here is their song shark fighter: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L3wchrctxFo

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