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    Default My Bisharp Poem/Ballad

    was bored in class yesterday, so I wrote a poem about bisharp, enjoy!

    Bisharp Ballad



    When me and you first met,
    I was looking through Serebii.net.
    Your nearly scizor like stat,
    and your power ranger combat,
    Was enough to make me decide,
    that a physical sweeper was inside.

    But Your typing is complete murder,
    Four times weak against common pokes like gurdurr.
    The fact is you have so much potential,
    But EV training your speed is too essential.
    Dark/steel wasn't Gamefreak's best move
    and the base speed of 70 is something I'd improve

    But alas I still think you're a great poke,
    Even-though Smogon members think your a joke.
    But Bisharp you don't need any approval,
    Even if fighting types can quickly cause your removal.

    By Dragoniteftw

    Another one, I quickly wrote today after being inspired by a bad experience with some emgolas while trying to train on low level audinos in shaking grass Disclaimer: I don't actually hate Emolga, just hate him when I am training.


    Dear Emolga,

    When I first saw you on the 'new Pokemon page'
    You were the one that made me rage
    A flying pikachu is what we have here
    Going straight to the Never Used tier

    Shaking grass is good for audinos you see
    Great for getting me bags of XP
    But when your sprite comes on my screen
    I want to put my head in a sewing machine
    Your annoying flying type makes you impossible to faint
    The fact I can't use ground attacks is not my only complaint

    We've seen you before as a Pachirisu
    Even then I wanted to continually hit you
    Your double team move makes you impossible to hit
    Overall as a pokemon you're a pile of s***

    By dragoniteftw

    I think I am going to have a break for abit after this, but heres a chandelure one

    Chandelure

    With Chandelure, what you see is what you get,
    Unfortunately It's not a bikini clothed brunette.
    It's a candle stick holder with 145 special attack,
    Gamefreak have you been smoking that crack?

    I can see Smogon University getting very upset
    Shadow tag ability will get banned first I bet
    The Competitive battlers will get stressy you see
    'Put Chandelure in uber, hes way too OP'
    The mass of complaints will keep me very amused,
    as he defiantly won't be moving from Over Used

    Nevertheless he is great in the main game,
    A dinner table lamp that can put gengar to shame.
    But I guess in this gen we get animated lights
    Like I said before; I prefer hot women in tights

    By Dragoniteftw


    lol.

    Future poems: haxorus and I am Open to suggestions
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    It's funny. The first couplet was the funniest.

    But I doubt it should go here. =/

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    That's a good one. It's a nice poem.
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    cheers, I wasn't really sure where else to post it to be honest

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    Well, it is about pokemon, so it should be here.
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    Ah, that's a really nice poem! Makes you feel a little sorry for the guy, he's a great Pokemon just unfortunate in places.

    It could go in the Fanfiction forum possibly?


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    'and the Base speed of 70 isn't something that I approve.'

    How about changing that to...

    'and the Base speed of 70 is something I'd improve.'

    It sounds better IMO.

    Other than that this is pretty funny! Well done, will we see more of these? ;D

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    hahaha,
    I have alot of boring lessons at school, so it could be possible you will see more of them :P
    I'll see what I can do, this was just a random attempt and I wasn't expecting much from it, but I'll try and look for another Pokemon I could make one for, chandelure could be interesting.

    thanks for your kind words though


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    'and the Base speed of 70 isn't something that I approve.'

    How about changing that to...

    'and the Base speed of 70 is something I'd improve.'

    It sounds better IMO.

    Other than that this is pretty funny! Well done, will we see more of these? ;D
    I argee, thanks for the help

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    It looks nice =D i like it..Bisharp is a really awesome Pokémon
    Wish i could write Poems/Ballad
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    I'd like more poems on pokemon. Could you do Chandelure or Emboar next if you do?
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    Yeah, I would like to see some more too.

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    Ooh, good ones to do would be ones in your team, like Krookodile, and Braviary, and Chandelure.
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    Haha nice. Great use of time in class!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dragoniteftw View Post
    and your power ranger combat,
    Was enough to make me decide,
    Lol
    I take it you've never heard of Ultraman? XD



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    I laughed at the Ultraman photo, but power rangers was what I first thought of when I saw bisharp because of the red/black/gold/white colour arrangement :L

    http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_84HeiAqCAx...r___Shield.jpg

    Ultraman looks more like him, but To be honest I have never heard of ultraman lol

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    I love this. You should make more.

    And yes, the Fanfiction section does allow poems to be posted
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    Yeah, that was pretty good. I'm hoping I'll see more.

    But... I disapprove of your ignorance to education.

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    Well, this is amazing. Excellent work, and funny too.
    Keep making more of these.

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    Wow, didn't expect such good feedback it means alot

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    Just fix your grammar- you're instead of your.

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    New poem in the OP

    hope it lives up to the first one

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    Very nice. Funny, too; especially the second one.

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    That was great :]

    I like Emolga, but that last poem was full of lulz XD


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    I like the second one, I've always said Emolga is a Pikachu and Pachirisu rip-off.
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    I don't approve of dissing Emolga, but funny poem.
    Nice work.

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