This is my first time at writing a fan fiction; it's about Pokemon; but in a whole new light! In my story, Pokemon are just as clever as human beings, and are in control. Most of the time, Pokemon live alongside humans without death and torture, but there are clans of Pokemon that hate humans and hurt them for sport. There will be a lot of gore in this, but the story behind it is a heart-warming tale! Please... read on!
I will give you the first chapter of the story here, if you enjoy it, please comment and I'll write the next chapter soon.
Chapter one: Torment
Screams ripped through the air as a young woman was thrust upon a bed of poison spikes. She twisted and buckled as she tried to roll off the bed, which only made the thorns sink in deeper. Her voice was suddenly reduced to a low, pain-filled moan as she gave in to the overwhelming force. She was lying face up, in a cold small cave. Other instruments of torture were lying around, scattered on the floor. She could not move, as the spikes were long and had already sunk into her muscles, flesh and bones. Poison was leaking into her body, crawling through her veins; it would not kill her, only make the pain of her 'session' worse. She closed her sad, chocolate brown eyes, and cried.
"See!" Umbreon squealed, "They are a weak race, they give in too easily!" He was slowly stalking round the table, eyes never leaving the poor, naked, seventeen year old girl. The girl tried to lift her head, but like lightning, Umbreon pounced on her chest; front paws on her face, thrusting it back onto the death trap below. "Naughty! Naughty!" He giggled, "Little girl must sleep tight, no moving!" Umbreon began to shove his paw down her throat, making her gag. The girl began to scream, but it was muffled from the huge, oversized paw choking her. Just as her eyes unfocused and her body relaxed as death tried to claim her; Umbreon withdrew his paw, the girl gasping and choking for a breath. "You thought you had it easy there! But Umbreon won't let you have the luxury of death... yet!" He neatly leapt off the table, his back to the sobbing girl, and made his way over to his wife.
Espeon had no emotion in her face, but because her husband was used to this, he didn't ask about her detached look. Her fur was long and sleek, cleaned to perfection. Strangely, her fur was not a purple or pink like other Espeons, nor was it the rare shiny green, it was a colourless white. Her eyes were red, an odd combination. Her looks were the thing that Umbreon was drawn to when he first saw the beautiful, dainty and quiet Espeon.
"Having a good time, my dear?" Umbreon questioned, "I'm glad you decided to join me on today’s work!" He was salivating and had foam lining his lips.
"She is in a lot of pain." A rich, confident and lush voice came from seemingly nowhere. Espeon, unlike her husband, did not need her mouth to speak, only her thoughts. Espeon slowly nodded to herself, "I feel her pain." She turned towards her husband, letting all three of her eyes gaze upon him. She saw an overly big, powerful Umbreon looking eagerly back at her. His head would reach an adult's waist, his body was one metre long, thick and chunky muscles bulged out of his sides. She was half the size of him, and only half as strong in body power. Umbreon's fur was normally well kept, but now it was splattered with blood and gore, a stench was coming off him, a smell that reminded people of death. His eyes were a bright blue, like ice, and they were twitching and dancing in their sockets. There was no doubt that Umbreon was crazy, but his wit and cunning ideas made him a genius.
"COME!" He laughed gleefully, "Let us leave this cave and wash our bodies from this human filth!" He sprang around to face the girl, "I'll be coming back for you later!" he screamed, "I'm leaving you now so the poison can do it's work! You'll go CRAZY from the pain, but don't worry!" He said the last sentence with an almost kind voice, but it vanished in his next one. "It won't seem like anything when I'm done with you!" Umbreon didn't laugh, he just smiled and waved a paw goodbye. He then trotted back into the darkness, his wife trailing after him.
The candles lining the cave walls slowly melted as the girl moaned and groaned, finally the candles spluttered out, the cave falling into darkness, leaving the red haired girl to pine for her mother, leaving her to pain....
Thanks for reading this! I'd really like to hear what you think of it! I know it's not much of a chapter, but I'll give longer and more satisfying ones if people like the story! All opinions welcome, VM me if you have any ideas! Thanks!
Edited out all mistakes, please comment if you spot one!