I love this fic! Its perfect all around! I do wish Fedora would be back soon though... Any idea when winter will be over?
Sadly, Kyurem the Bowling Ball is no more... Oh well.
Also, I love how you turned Hilbert around. At first I thought he would be the same old annoyingly popular rival that thinks he's all that but respects the main charecter in the end. Having him start anew is a wonderful idea. I cant wait to see his hatched pokemon.
I cant wait till N changes his mind about pokemon liberation...
Now about Pricila. What happened to her? Did N rerelease her? Is she back in the forest? I felt very bad for her when N released her the first time...
Dont you think its time Cheren caught a new pokemon?
One last thing! It seems in the first chapter that when calling out a pokemon a red light appears. However, in the anime the light is white. Recalling a pokemon is red. Also, water gun and ember are not little elemental bullets but rather a straight stream of water and a bunch of condensed sparks.
Please post a new chapter as soon as possible!
Last edited by 3D992; 22nd February 2012 at 4:51 AM.
I used to liek mudkipz, then I took an arrow in the knee. However the arrow turned out to be a seaking. It yelled "F*** yeah" so I screamed "FUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!". The seaking's face became that of a troll while mine became forever alone. The situation was super effective.