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EDIT: Chapter 3 and so on will be added as posts and I will post the newest chapter here, just so you know the current chapter.
Current Chapter: 4
This is the first chapter of my first Fan Fiction story! It's about twin brothers named Logan, the clumsy one, and Rory, the smart one, who find a strange Pokémon raiding their fridge. The Pokémon starts chasing the twins after Logan tries to catch it. To find out the rest, read this chapter!
Chapter 1: The Beginning Flare
"Hey, Rory", said Logan.
"What?", responded Rory.
"I heard something downstairs!"
Rory sighed and said, "Okay, let's go..."
So Logan and Rory quietly tip-toed downstairs into the kitchen to see what was going on.
"Rory", Logan called, "look over there in the fridge, something is eating the food!"
Rory looked and said, "It's a Pokémon, but I've never seen it before!"
"Cool, I'm going to check it on my Pokédex and catch it", replied Logan.
The Pokédex said, "Victini, the Victory Pokémon. Victini is said to spread victory to it's trainer, which will allow itself to win any battle, no matter what Pokémon type."
"Wow, that's amazing," Logan shouted a little too loud, "I have to catch it!"
Victini had heard Logan's loud talking. It turned around to see what was happening behind it, and it saw Logan and Rory talking. It had two big blue eyes, two orange ears shaped like a V and a pair of wings on it's rear. But it's sweet eyes turned a deep, glowing red. Then, it's ears started to blaze with fire!
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH", screamed Logan and Rory simultaneously.
The twins ran screaming out of their home. Victini was chasing them leaving a path of burning destruction behind it! Logan and Rory didn't know where they were running, but that they knew they had to get away from the rampaging Victini.
"LOGAN, SEND OUT SAMUROTT SINCE IT"S A WATER TYPE IT CAN PROBABLY STOP VICTINI!"
"OKAY OKAY, SAMUROTT HELP US OUT!"
Samurott came out and Logan ordered it to use Hydro Pump on the Victini. Samurott did as told but when Hydro Pump hit Victini, it blasted it into Acacia city. Acacia city was the biggest city in the Rennoh Region.
"Logan, that Pokémon could destroy the city and eventually the entire region if it keeps acting like that!"
"I know... let's go get Lyla!", Logan told Rory.
Logan and Rory ran to Lyla's house to tell her the crazy thing that had just happened. Rory kept muttering something about Victini under his breath. Logan assumed Rory was just telling himself how horrible the situation was, but Rory was saying something else, but what?Eventually they got to their destination and told Lyla the whole thing about Victini.
"LOGAN, HOW COULD YOU DO SOMETHING SO STUPID?!", screamed Lyla.
"What, was I supposed to do, let Victini kill me?!"
"Okay okay, first things first. We have to find out what's making Victini go on a rampage like this, and fast!", Lyla suggested.
Lyla was always getting sucked into Logan and Rory's problems, but this was different. How were they going to stop a rampaging legendary Pokémon like Victini? Lyla couldn't think about that though, she had to keep positive.
"Well, let's go get us a Victini", said Rory.
Logan thought for a second and said," Okay guys, looks like we have a Pokémon Quest!"
End of Chapter 1
So please rate my first Fan Fiction Story/Chapter! Also, please don't be too rough on this, since it's only my first, but give some constructive criticism.
I'm also probably going to make these longer in the future.
Please Don't Close This, It is My First Fan-Fic And I Can Make The Rest of The Chapters Longer!!! So Please Don't Close This!!!!
EDIT: I know that it is short, it's my first one and I was stuck for ideas, and I will try to stretch my sentences
P.S. Thanx Absol and millarc!
EDIT 2: I have re-vamped the story a little bit.
Chapter 2: Rory's New Friend
"Are we there yet?", complained Logan.
"Stop complaining", said Lyla.
"It's just sooooooo far away", exaggerated Logan.
"Logan, we'll be at Juniper's lab soon", said Lyla with a sigh.
Rory was strangely silent the whole trip. This was very unusual for Rory, he was usually a talkative boy. Logan wondered what was going on in his brainy head. Logan was worried. Logan is usually never worried, in fact he wasn't even worried about Victini too much. But when it came to his twin brother, Logan wants Rory to be in the best mood possible. Logan and Rory have only had one fight before. Rory had just picked all of the Oran berries off of the bush outside their house. Logan had accidentally tripped, since he was accident prone, into the berries. Rory yelled at Logan, because he was going to make the Oran Berries into a pie. Logan yelled back. The fight lasted about half-an-hour. Ever since then, Logan has always been nice to Rory, because the memory had scarred him.
Logan asked Rory what was wrong. He didn't answer. Logan kept asking, and asking. Rory tried to ignore him, but that's pretty much impossible when it comes to Logan. Rory eventually told Logan that if he gave Rory 5 minutes of quiet, he would tell him. So Logan was quiet for 5 minutes, it was really hard, but he did it. Then he told Rory that it had been 5 minutes. So Rory told him.
"It's just that....", his words trailed off.
"Well, you have Samurott, and Lyla has Whimsicott."
"What about our Pokémon?"
"I want to have a Pokémon like you guys, I just feel so lonely."
Logan thought for a second and replied, "Then let's go get you a Pokémon!"
Lyla turned around and yelled," NO! We need to focus!"
Now, Lyla was often very sweet. But when she had a goal, she stuck to it. No matter what. She wasn't going to let Rory's little problem distract them from the primary objective. Lyla did not want to have another mission to go on. Lyla usually gives in to Rory and Logan, because they just constantly ask and complain. Logan way more than Rory.
"Come on", insisted Logan, "we have Pokémon. It's only fair good ol' Rory here gets one too!"
Lyla finally said "Fine, but I'm not helping!"
Lyla sat on a tree stump. She grabbed a Pecha Berry from a nearby bush, and started eating it. Eventually, she fell alseep. During her slumber, Lyla had a very disturbing and frightening dream. It was about Victini. It was burning and destroying everything in sight. The whole region was on fire. Lyla was watching Victini flying around, leaving a trail of burning fire behind it. Even though it was a dream, it was like Lyla could feel the boiling heat, and sense the anger, rage, and frustration in Victini's energy. She finally awoke when she heard Rory yell, "That one!"
Rory was pointing at a Minccino frolicking around. He was jumping from tree, to ground, back to tree and so on. Rory saw how much joy Minccino had and though he would be perfect.
"How do I catch it? I don't have any Pokémon to battle him with."
Logan said, "You can use my Samur-"
"No, I have to catch him myself."
Rory had a plan as usual. He was after all the smartest one. Rory put a bunch of berries under a nice, cool, shaded tree. That way, Minccino wouldn't get hot. Then he left a trail leading to himself. That way, Minccino would realize Rory was a nice guy and friend. Thus, him capturing Minccino, leading to a wonderful friendship. It was just so perfect. Or at least that's what Rory thought.
Minccino, saw the berries. He pranced over to them and started eating. He then skipped along the berry trail stuffing them all in his mouth. 'So far so good', thought Rory. Minccino got to Rory and looked up at him with his big sparkling eyes. Minccino paused, then quickly ran away. But tragedy struck when Minccino tripped over a tree root that was popping out of the ground. Minccino went flying through a tree and slammed against the ground.
Some Swoobat angrily flew out of the tree. They saw that Minccino had disrupted them and their eggs. So what did they do? Attack! Minccino tried to get up and run, but the Swoobat were all around him. There was no escape. Rory was watching this all happen so quickly, he was paralyzed with fear, he couldn't move. But Rory knew that he had to save Minccino. So, he ran over to the Swoobat to save Miccino as fast as he could!
Rory was trying to swat them away, but the Swoobat started biting him. What made it even worse was when the Swoobat started to use Air Cutter. Minccino was staring at Rory again. He couldn't believe that a human was trying to protect him, even though he was getting hurt in the process. Minccino wanted to attack the Swoobat, but he was just too weak. Minccino felt horrible that he couldn't help. Rory was getting many scratches and wounds, but eventually, he swatted away all of the Swoobat.
Logan and Lyla rushed over to Rory to see how he was doing. Logan thought to himself, 'How could I have just stood there!?'
They both kept asking Rory if he was alright. He never answered he just kept holding Minccino in his arms with an expressionless face. His eyes got really heavy as he stared up at the clouds. Logan kept yelling, "RORY, STAY WITH US! COME ON, KEEP YOUR EYES OPEN!!!" Rory couldn't do it! He closed his eyes, fell back, and fainted.
Rory kept seeing a disturbing image in his head. It kept replaying like it had been set on a loop. The image was him and Minccino getting bitten and cut by the Swoobat. He wanted it to stop, he wanted to think happy thoughts, but he just couldn't control his mind. The only thing he could think of was the horrible scene. He also couldn't stop asking himself if he was dead. He tried to promise himself he was alive, but he wasn't sure if that a promise he could keep. All he could do was pray he would wake up soon.
Rory did wake up eventually. He was in a hospital bed with a cast on his left arm, and gauze around his right arm, his left leg, and wrapped around his whole head, but above his face. Rory felt horrible and felt pain all over his body. Then he remembered Minccino. He had to find Minccino.
Lyla said to Rory,"Hello, sleepy head!"
Logan said, "Hold on a seco-"
"Where. is. Minccino?!" Rory said this with a very serious and angry tone which is also unlike him.
Logan told him,"He's in the room next to us."
Rory got out of bed to go see Minccino. His friends told him to get back into bed. He just pushed them aside and kept going. He was going to go see Minccino and that was that. That had to be the first thing he was going to do. He entered the room with Minccino in it. He walked over to Minccino, and hugged him. Both of their eyes started to water.
Rory started to cry first. Minccino couldn't help but to cry as well. Both cried tears of pain, suffering, and just being scared. Although they did cry tears of joy for their brand new friendship, which they both knew would last for the rest of their lives.
End of Chapter 2