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    Default Derrick's Story, a black nuzlocke

    Synopsis:
    A country boy, Derrick Blakeson (age 15), and his friends start their own journeys, for their own reasons.

    Derrick is using this as an excuse to try to find his 'missing' father, who disappeared way back when he was a toddler. This excuse, though, is one that requires entry into the Unovan League to have access to their searchin' resources. Therefore, he has to get all the badges.

    Bianca "Belle" Lauray is going on her journey to prove to her sexist, drunkee of a father that she can make it in the world. She isn't necessarily needing to beat the league to prove, but rather get the badges.

    Cheren "Rinnard" Rinlin is going to make his mother, a previous champion of the country proud. He is aiming for the league.

    But not all follows accordingly for them, when a mysterious, shadowy being force them into his challenge of death, and an eco-terrorist group are thrown into their ways.
    Note:
    The art gets better after the first three parts, to the point ya barely recognize it's mine, story-wise also.

    Rules:

    Basic rules, minus a small clause on gift and wild pokemon being counted as different catches, as this was a first attempted run.

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    Table of contents:
        Spoiler:- Chapter One-Highway 20 Ride:
    Last edited by godo156; 6th August 2012 at 8:57 PM.

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    So far, so good!

    It's actually pretty good drawing.
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    I feel this is a copy of someone's D/P/Pt's adventure on manga....
    Anyways, good job and I'm looking forward for the next chapters.

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    Wow did you draw those? Nice drawing...


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    did you by any chance do a similer one om bulbafarden
    any so far so great

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    @Wardek: how would this be considered a copy of a DPPt manga, if you're saying this 'coz of Derrick's ability, I just thought it would be interesting for the character (and the idea came from the movie Next)
    @Draya: yep, this is on bulba
    @others: thanks for the comments.

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    The last one was funny.

    "What garbage was that? I don't have a problem with being owned"

    I actually thought the being owned part meant...well...getting owned by some random pokemon XD
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nightfall715 View Post
    The last one was funny.

    "What garbage was that? I don't have a problem with being owned"

    I actually thought the being owned part meant...well...getting owned by some random pokemon XD
    Well, if she did get owned, at least by your definition, she'd be dead
    oh, and I have the rest of chapter three uploaded.

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    hmmmm.... noones repyin' here....
    might as well say I have a small part of chapter four up

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    I deleted all the older pages on the site and replaced them with the new pages.
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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    omg this is a really good comic
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    Quote Originally Posted by soren12345 View Post
    omg this is a really good comic
    Thank ya sir/ma'am (not sure, and I don't want to offend ya by callin' ya by the wrong gender)
    Here's a gajinka of Mizi:
        Spoiler:- Mizi gajinka:

    Bacon and Vivent will be gajinka'd next.
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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    Who's this?
    Last edited by godo156; 8th June 2012 at 6:37 AM.
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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        Spoiler:- Part 4.3 textified.:
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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        Spoiler:- Part Four Complete:
    Last edited by godo156; 8th June 2012 at 6:43 AM.
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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    I can't find the link?
    I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE

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    Quote Originally Posted by Twinkie View Post
    I can't find the link?
    Huh?
    I don't know what ya mean by that, but if you're talking about the link to the folder on dA that has all the parts, here it is:
    http://godo-kun.deviantart.com/gallery/33827602
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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        Spoiler:- Part five part one::
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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    So I got the thread renamed, cleaned out the unnecessary posts, and here is the newest part.

        Spoiler:- Part 5 Part 2:

    Y'all waited long enough. Schools finally out! I think I managed to pass ninth grade with all A's and B's. So WhootWhoot!
    I can draw a whole lot more now! I can't make no promises, but I think I can update once or twice a week, depending on what's going on this summer. So let's see how that works out.

    This was all I had completely done at the time, and I thought it was presentable enough.
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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    *Takes swig of redo juice* BLUH! I'm sorry. THis is the last time I'm doing this, but I'm redoing the content of the first three parts. Dunno how many parts there'll be, but each part is broke into chapters now. Every thing is broke into pages (and, if you have a problem loading the first post, I'll put each of the pages into their own spoilers), read left to right now, and improved art, oh, and more writing then comics (for now)! There is currently 2000 words in the first chapter, and I'm still goin'! Sorry for making y'all have to go through this.
    Nope nothing here for you folks to see keep moving on, please, thank ya.

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