16th November 2011, 3:29 AM
Wow. I didn't notice you had posted so many chapters. Once I started reading, I couldn't stop. xD
There weren't any grammar mistakes I noticed, and the description is amazing! You have a talent to draw your reader in with the suspense and excellent detail. It wasn't hard to imagine everything that was described, and it certainly painted a vivid picture in my mind.
It seems like Reverse Darkrai and White Darkrai are formidable foes. Celebi sure had a rough battle. I can't wait to see what happens when Mew and Darkrai step in.