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    Cool chaps! Sorry I didn't reply to the last one. That one was cool too ^_^

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    did i say u rule yet? well u do very interesting u r the best writer in history!!!! *is serious*

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    Nice chapter, but I found one mistake in that chapter. Here it is:

    “Did you actually a knock like that would stop my precious machine!?” the driver yelled.
    I think you meant to say this:

    “Did you actually think a knock like that would stop my precious machine!?” the driver yelled.

    Other then that, I didn't see any other mistakes.
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    Cs32: Thanks mate. *Corrects the mistake* Done!

    DC: It's all right. Thanx anyways.

    Blaziken1234: Yep, you did say that. You are very kind.

    ssw: The update is here!

    Chapter 3

    Before Wes came, all of the pokemon that Jenny, Jesse, James and Rui were using were knocked out. All was lost for these four but Wes finally ran into the battle scene along with his Tyranitar, Umbreon and Espeon.

    He was about to shout out his next attack. But suddenly, a pair of tentacles shot out of the machine and laced around everyone, except Rui who barely dodged out of the way. The people and pokemon struggled to get themselves free but to no avail.

    “Huh! Eight out of nine ain’t bad!” the driver shouted. “You can only watch your friends scream in pain, little girl. Then you can see this lovable machine toss them all out to sea!”

    The tentacles began to squeeze the people and pokemon captured; soon they would be out of breath. “Oh no you don’t!” Rui yelled as she took out a gigantic mallet she had in her bag.

    “Hey! Where did she get that hammer from!?” James said in a scared tone as he struggled to be free.
    “I’ve no idea,” Wes replied as an anime sweatdrop appeared on his forehead.

    “THIS IS FOR HURTING MY WES!!” Rui yelled as she smashed her mallet on the tank, creating a huge dent in it.
    “No!” cried the driver. “Not my beautiful machine!”

    The tank began to malfunction and, the tentacles began to loosen up, releasing Wes and the others. “Thanks, Rui,” Wes said as he landed on his feet. Some of his comrades weren’t so lucky as they fell on their faces or lower back.

    “Now,” Wes said. “Where was I?”

    The driver began to panic as he knew that Wes about to order another attack. “Umbreon!” Wes shouted. “Use Confuse Ray!”
    “What!?” the driver yelled.

    Umbreon’s eyes glowed a hint of purple at the tank and the grunt’s eyes became swirly as he became confused.

    “Now, Espeon!” Wes shouted. “Zap Cannon!”

    Espeon leapt into the air and charged up his electric powers. After he became completely charged, he shot out a small ball of electricity. The move connected and the inside of the tank began to malfunction.

    “No! She’s gonna blow,” yelled the grunt. He quickly made his escape as he jumped out of the tank. He landed on his feet and attempted to make a run for it. Officer Jenny and the others were about to give chase, but to their distraction, the machine exploded. The force made everyone fall down as they lost balance.

    After the explosion, everyone picked themselves up. Wes helped Rui up to her feet. “You must be the craziest girl I’ve ever met,” Wes said in a caring tone. “Thank you.”
    “No need,” Rui need as tears of joy came out of her eyes. “You’re safe, that’s the most rewarding part.”

    Wes showed a small blush upon hearing that. Rui had a look of realisation on her face as she took out the necklace she bought earlier.

    “Wes, I bought a gift for you,” she said as she showed him his gift.
    “For… me?” Wes asked as he gazed at the beautiful necklace.
    “Yeah. If you wear it, it’ll bring you good luck,” Rui replied while blushing.

    “Oh no!” Officer Jenny said, not knowing that she was disturbing the moment. “That Team Dark crook has gotten away. The least we can do now is find him.”
    “There’s no need for that!” yelled a familiar voice.

    There was a huge earthquake that made everyone lose their balance again. Rui dropped the necklace in the process. It turned out that the Team Dark grunt was back, accompanied by a huge robot.

    The robot was the same size as Wes’s Tyranitar, it had arms and legs built in along with different kinds of weaponry. The grunt began to laugh evilly as he held a remote control. “You destroyed one of my precious creations,” he snarled. “Now you all will pay!”

    He pressed various buttons to control the robot as it leapt into the air. Rui was about to pick up the necklace that she had dropped, not knowing that the robot was about to land on her. Seeing this, Wes desperately tackled Rui out of harm’s way. But the necklace wasn’t so lucky as the robot landed right on top of it, crushing it into little pieces, much to Rui’s shock.

    Wes quickly got back up. “That wasn’t very nice!” he said. “Picking on a girl like that!”

    The grunt wasted no time as he took control of the robot as it ran towards Wes and attempted to punch him, but missed as Wes dodged out of the way, taking Rui along with him.

    “Tyranitar!” Wes yelled. “Stomp attack!”

    Tyranitar jumped and landed on top of the robot, knocking him down. The robot easily shoved Tyranitar off its back. “Good, that grunt is distracted,” Wes said as he placed Rui at a safe distance. “Stay here, Rui.”

    He ran off to continue battling while Rui looked at the destroyed necklace with sadness. “Wes’s necklace…” she said as tears formed in her eyes. “Wes won’t be lucky without this…”

    Suddenly, She had a fiery look in her eyes. “That robot’s gonna get it now,” she said angrily.

    Back at the battle, Tyranitar was being held down by the grunt’s robot. “You see!” the grunt taunted. “Your pokemon is no match for this robot!”
    “We’ll see about that,” Wes replied. “Tyranitar! Try to fight back!”

    Tyranitar struggled to get himself back up using his great strength. As he got to his feet, he shoved the robot away. “Not bad,” the grunt said. “Let’s see if you can cause a dent.”
    “With pleasure!” shouted an angry yet girly voice.

    Rui held up a mallet, which was much bigger than the one she held before, while everyone was staring at her direction. “Think you can smash Wes’s things and get away with it!?” she yelled as she leapt into the air. She slammed her mallet onto the robot’s head, much to everyone’s awe, with Jesse and James being the most scared.

    The robot, without the head, had its hands out as though it became blind. Still angry at the robot, Rui continued to smash the robot to pieces.

    “I have to get out of here,” the grunt said in a nervous tone. As he turned round, Rui was suddenly there in front of him and she gave him an angry look, much to his surprise. “How did you get here so fast?” he asked in a scared tone.

    She didn’t answer as she raised her gigantic mallet. “Don’t do it!” the grunt yelled cowardly. But Rui didn’t listen as she slammed her weapon onto him, causing a huge explosion upon impact.

    Everyone’s eyes became widened with shock and concern at the nearby explosion, with Wes being the most concerned. “Rui!” he cried as he ran into the smoke of the explosion, his pokemon were about to follow him but Jenny stopped them.

    It took a while for Wes to get Rui out of the smoke. They were both coughing as Wes was carrying the exhausted Rui on his arms and laid her on the floor. Rui’s eyesight became blurry as Wes whispered to her, “Hold on, Rui… hold on.”

    Her eyes slowly closed upon hearing that.

    A little later, Rui and Wes were sitting on the beach, alone together. They were both admiring the setting sun as they sat close to each other. “It’s beautiful isn’t it?” Rui asked.
    “Not as beautiful as you,” Wes replied.

    Rui looked at Wes’s smiling face and blushed. “I love you, Wes.”
    “I love you too,” Wes replied.

    Their faces began closing in with closed eyes. They were about to kiss, when suddenly…

    “Plusle!”

    Plusle leapt in front of Rui’s face as she quickly opened her eyes. She found out that she was in a familiar room as she was still wearing the red bikini. She also noticed that the nurse was sitting next to her. It all turned out to be a dream.

    “Well, it looks like sleeping beauty’s awake,” the nurse said.
    “Where am I?” Rui asked.
    “You’re back at the pokemon center. Wes and the others brought you back here after you passed out.”
    “Wes! Is he okay!?”
    “Yes, but he went over to the beach a short while ago.”

    Jenny came into the room to check on Rui. “Ah, Rui,” she said with a smile. “You’re awake.”
    “What is it, Officer Jenny?” Rui asked in a down tone.
    “I just need to tell you that the man you beaten up was actually a robot, so no worries there. Also, the other police officers came round to look for the base. They found it and arrested the other grunts. My theory is that the robotic grunt was actually the general of that base, without him the other grunts didn’t stand a chance. Now it’s up to Black Jack and the others to deal with the rest.”
    “That’s great,” Rui said, still in a sad tone.
    “What’s wrong?” Jenny asked curiously.
    “Plusle?” Plusle asked, also curious.
    “I’ve bought Wes a necklace today,” Rui explained. “I was told that it would bring him good luck if he wears it.”
    “You don’t need to count on a piece of jewellery to have good luck,” Jenny replied. “Wes is a strong trainer. Besides, with you around him, I guess he’ll always have good luck.”

    Rui looked up to her teammate and smiled. “Thanks, Officer Jenny,” she replied.

    On the beach, not far from the pokemon center, Wes was admiring the sunset, along with his pokemon. “Rui’s right,” he said. “This beach is a great place to relax.”

    He placed his hand in his pocket, took an object out of his pocket and looked at it with a smile. It turned out that it was the broken necklace, which was now fixed.

    In a dark room, a shadowy was viewing Wes on one of his screens while placing his finger on his chin. “Too bad I lost a base,” he said. “But perhaps I can have them as my advantage… and to my amusement.”

    Next episode: Black Jack’s team arrive at a camp full of homeless people… and gets captured by Team Dark. How will the team and the hopeless get out of that predicament?
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    awsome!i hope you update really soon!

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    Awesome chap! ^_^ Can't wait for the next one! Keep it up

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    Hey, I liked the giant mallet scene, kind of added a cartoonish kind of thing to the chap. I only found this, but don't know what you wanted to put in it originally.

    In a dark room, a shadowy was viewing Wes on one of his screens while placing his finger on his chin.
    shadowy what? A shadowy figure perhaps? Notice how i've started to pick out the mistakes finally.
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    Cs32: Thanx for point ing that mistake out, mate. *Corrects mistake* Done!

    ssw and DC: Thanx! The update is here!

    Episode 4: Pick on the weak

    Chapter 1:

    It was a cold dark night in an oasis. A lot of people in rugged clothing were living in patched-up tents; a lot of poor pokemon were there as well. Suddenly, a bunch of men in Team Dark uniform came round and knocked them about with metal rods and their unleashed pokemon.

    “How many times have we told you before, you freaks!” yelled one of the Team dark grunts. “This is our territory! Now get lost!”
    “B-but…” cried one of the poor people nervously. “Where will we…”

    Before he could say another word, he was knocked out by another Team Dark grunt in the face with the metal rod.

    “Not our problem,” he replied. “You guys better listen or else!”

    Two shadowy figures were standing on top of a tree branch, spying on them. One of them was six-foot ten and the other was five-foot ten. “How brave of you Team Dark punks,” the taller figure said out loud, catching their attention. “Picking on the weak.”

    They picked out their pokeballs and tossed them out.

    “Mightyena, go!”
    “Get’m, Feraligatr!”

    The two pokemon popped out of their pokeballs and yelled out their battle cries.

    “Mightyena! Take Down attack!”

    Mightyena leapt into the air and tackled a bunch of Team Dark grunts in one attack.

    “Feraligatr! Hydro Pump!”

    Feraligatr breathed in heavily and then let out a big jet of water spray out of his mouth and shoved the other bunch away.

    The large figure spotted one of the grunts taking out a gun. He jumped down and landed on the grunt’s back. He grabbed the gun that the grunt had dropped and broke it into pieces with his hands. All of the grunts immediately recognised him as the one and only, Black Jack.

    “Y’know, there are quicker ways to get to heaven,” Black Jack said. “Or somewhere else.”

    The other figure climbed down to the bottom of the tree. That man was none other than Isaac Wolfpack. He spotted a metal rod that one of the grunts had dropped and picked it up.

    “If you guys want to fight, why don’t you fight us instead?” he asked as he motioned them to fight.

    “We gotta warn the boss about this,” said one of the grunts. The other grunts nodded in agreement and ran off. Black Jack jumped off the grunt that he landed on. He quickly grabbed him by the back of his jacket and smiled at his face nastily while the grunt startled.

    “Why did you pick on those people?” Black Jack asked.
    “Well, er…” the grunt started nervously. “They were in our territory and we had to get them to move away from here.”
    “Oh really? Tell your boss that he should let these people stay wherever they want. Also, tell him that he can catch me whenever he wants because I’m sick and tired of looking for him!”

    Black Jack forcefully shoved the grunt away from him and picked up another metal rod. The grunt saw this as an opportunity to make a run for it. “Now get back home, you punk! Your mom’s waiting for you!” Black Jack snarled angrily as he chucked the metal rod at him, missing him on purpose.

    “You shouldn’t have let him go, Black Jack,” Isaac said. “He could’ve told us where his base is.”
    “I bet my boot that he wouldn’t say anything,” Black Jack replied. Upon saying that, Meowth, Max and May ran into the scene.

    “Long time, no see,” Black Jack said.
    Meowth stopped as he tried to get some air back. “How can I keep up wiv yous guys?”

    Before anyone could answer, the team realised that the poor people and pokemon were staring at them. Some of them were scared of them; some of them were suspicious of them.

    “I guess these guys could do with a little help,” Black Jack said.
    “Good idea,” Isaac replied. “At least we’ll have some company for tonight’s rest.”
    “Wot?” Meowth cried. “We can’t share our…”

    Black Jack grabbed him and covered his mouth to shut him up. “Shut your ‘Meowth!’” he snarled.

    Elsewhere, a man in a suit was sitting at his desk, talking to another man but in a lab coat.

    “… So that is what the boss wants you to do, Dr. Lawson,” said the man in the suit. “The grunts have informed me of their location. They are just outside our base.”
    “Message received and understood,” Lawson replied.
    “I hope you’re aware about the boss’s feelings towards failure.”
    “I am aware of that, dear sir, but I hear that he does worse when he’s in a good mood.”

    Back at the location of the homeless, Isaac was nursing the sick and injured people while Meowth and Max were comforting the pokemon. Black Jack wasn’t doing much as he sat alone. May carried two opened cans of baked beans and offered one of them to him.

    “Thanks, kid,” Black Jack said as he accepted her offer.

    May sat down next to him and they both looked at the stars and a small moment silence came between them.

    “So…” Black Jack started breaking the silence. “I’ve been wondering, Ketchum told me that you prefer taking part in pokemon contests rather than leagues. What made you come here to this place, knowing that it’s a rough one and that it doesn’t hold any?”

    “Well, you know a little bit about me, Black Jack,” May started. “I had some adventures with Ash. Ever since he left to take a break from his journey, I felt kind of bored without him. When we’ve bumped into each other and you mentioned that you and Ash are going on a new adventure, I figured that it would be fun to team up with you guys.”

    “I know that tone,” Black Jack said. “You used to like him, didn’t you?”
    May became slightly shocked and blushed slightly at what he said. “How did you know?” she said.
    “Let’s just say that nothing can be hidden away from me,” Black Jack replied with a small smile.

    May let out a small sigh. “Yeah,” May said as she looked down on the grassy floor. “But ever since I noticed how close Ash and Misty were… I decided to let him go cos I want him to be happy… Misty’s also a good friend of mine, so I want her to be happy as well. I came here to help them out so they can be there for each other…”

    She looked at the stars again. “If only I’ve met him first,” she said in a down tone.

    “Listen,” Black Jack said. “Ketchum’s a tough kid. I noticed that he took a couple of hits, but that never stopped him doing anything, so there’s no need to worry about him.”

    May let out a small sigh in response and Black Jack placed his hand on her shoulder. “Don’t worry,” he said putting on a small smile. “You’ll find someone someday.”

    Suddenly, helicopters were hovering over the entire camp. Isaac angrily stood up. “Hey! Some of us are trying to get to sleep, you insensitive jerks!” he shouted.

    Small cans were chucked out of the helicopters. “Oh no!” Black Jack said. “This doesn’t look good.”

    He quickly grabbed May and tried to make a run for it as some foggy gases came out of the cans. They became surrounded by the gas and fainted as they breathed in. The others also fell asleep.

    As soon as the gas faded away, the helicopters landed and several Team Dark grunts came out of them. One of them took out a walkie-talkie and spoke into it.

    “Task accomplished, sir,” he said.
    “Good,” replied a familiar voice. “I’ll send out a truck for our guinea pigs. People and pokemon alike.”
    “Yes sir.”
    “A little word of warning… make sure Black Jack doesn’t escape. I have a little job for him later.”
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    exellent!great chapter!can't wait for the next chapter!

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    just wow... how do you do it? i cant stop reading it it is the best ever you could possibly be the best writer out of all the books i have read (this is not a book but...) this would be the best thing i have read... it just hooks me... how do you do it?     Spoiler:
    ne way i love it. never stop writing...     Spoiler:
    ne way it is the best and did i say u rule?

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    Blaziken1234: Thank you, thank you very much. I just let the imagination come to me. About Black Jack... you haven't seen his other side yet. I'll contact you on some level and yes, you did say I rule.

    ssw: The next chapter is here!

    Chapter 2

    Black Jack was asleep in a small room, which looked like a prison. He slowly opened up his eyes as he woke up. “Where the heck am I?” he thought to himself as he picked himself up.

    He looked around the room and soon realised that he, his comrades and the innocent people have been captured and he got locked up in the Team Dark base. “How embarrassing!” he thought. “I gotta think of something to get everyone out of here.”

    Elsewhere, in another part of the Team Dark base, the innocent were being surrounded by the grunts, along with Isaac, Max and Meowth. “I don’t like the look of dis one bit,” Meowth said nervously.

    “You all have nothing to fear,” said a voice. Everyone looked in fear as they saw the man in the lab coat, Dr. Lawson.

    “Do not be frightened,” he said. “I have sent my troops to collect the whole lot of you to help you all have a future. All I need is your attention and your trust.”

    “Who are you? And where’s my sister!?” Max demanded.

    “Hey! Shut up!” shouted one of the grunts as he shoved him down.

    “There was no need to be rude, Clark,” Dr. Lawson replied. “I, myself, have been rude enough not to introduce myself. My name is Dr. Lawson, currently performing operations and experiments to increase one’s strength. I gathered you all here to do just that, for I promise everyone that they will have a great future and purpose in life. And don’t you worry, child, your sister’s safe.”

    “I don’t know about you guys,” Isaac said. “But there’s no way you’re going to be operating on me!”

    “We said shut up!” shouted another grunt as he smacked Isaac in the face.

    “Why you…” Isaac snarled angrily as he started pummelling the grunt about. The other grunts jumped on him and started stomping on him. Meowth and the others were held back and hurt by another bunch of grunts.

    Dr. Lawson turned round, uninterested of the situation as he turned round to look at another grunt. “Adrian,” he said. “Get Black Jack out of his cell and lead him to the operating room.”

    “But sir,” Adrian replied. “I don’t think Black Jack will not agree to your favour.”

    “We have to take risks sometimes. If he refuses, then you must force him into it.”
    “Yes, sir.”

    Back in Black Jack’s cell, he was thinking of a way to get out of that predicament. But when he heard the door opened, he smiled at the fact that Team Dark was either brave or stupid enough to let him escape. Even though he had the chance to escape he decided to let the grunts in first. Three grunts stepped into the cell, including Adrian.

    “What do you want?” he asked in a rude tone.

    Adrian stepped in. “Hello,” he said, trying to be brave. “My name is Adrian.”

    “I don’t care,” Black Jack replied bitterly.

    “I have a proposition for you. Dr. Lawson wants to perform an operation on you. We all know that you and you’re pokemon are very strong, but Dr. Lawson can make you stronger. In exchange, he wants your attention, trust, your worthiness and loyalty to Team Dark.”

    “Firstly, I’ll become stronger my own way,” Black Jack replied. “Secondly, I’m loyal to no one but myself and my pokemon!”

    Black Jack ran at the grunts and started pummelling them. After knocking out the two grunts, Adrian got scared and took out a gun. “Don’t move or I’ll shoot!” he cried.

    Black Jack quickly stepped towards him and knocked the gun out of his hand. He then punched him in the stomach causing him to vomit and fall to the floor wriggling in pain. Black Jack ran out of his cell to look for the other prisoners. Adrian took a walkie-talkie out of his pocket and reported the problem to Dr. Lawson.

    “You fool!” Dr. Lawson yelled back. “Send out two of our strongest pokemon trainers you can find in this building!”

    “But sir,” Adrian groaned. “I’m afraid that their pokemon aren’t fully developed yet…”

    “Just do it!”

    Black Jack ran across various rooms and corridors to look for the prisoners to help them escape. Finally, he got into a room where the prisoners were being held. A bunch of Team Dark grunts were surrounding them until Black Jack entered.

    “Hey! How did you get out!” shouted one of the grunts.

    “I told you he’s unpredictable!” whispered another loudly.

    “This is as far as you can go! It’s game over for you!” shouted the first grunt.

    “I’m no computer games expert,” Black Jack replied. “But a guy like me can smack all of you punks into pieces in one go.”

    The grunts came rushing in on Black Jack but he fended them off, knocking them down and out. “I can’t just have fun on my own,” he said as he took all six pokeballs off his belt and tossed them all out. “C’mon out, boys!”

    All of his pokemon came out of their pokeballs and they continued the fight against the grunts. “Black Jack and his pokemon can’t do this alone,” shouted one of the homeless. “Let’s help them out!”

    All of the homeless, including Isaac, Meowth and Max ganged up on the grunts, Black Jack looked round to see if everyone’s there, he noticed that one person was missing… May. Soon all of the grunts were knocked down and out. “Meowth, Max, Wolfpack,” Black Jack said as he called back his pokemon. “Get these people out of here. I’m going May-hunting.”

    “May-huntin’?” Meowth asked himself as Black Jack ran away.

    “Okay, people!” Isaac yelled. “You heard the big man! Let’s move out!”

    “Wait!” Max yelled. “Let me go look for her!”

    “Let him go,” Isaac said, holding Max back. “Black Jack knows what he’s doing.”

    Knowing this, Max gave up trying to get through his comrade, and had full faith in his friend.

    Black Jack was running through corridors trying to look for May. Even though he and his teammates rescued the prisoners, he can’t just let one person die in the hands of Team Dark.

    He immediately stopped and looked round, he randomly selected a door and barged into it. But, instead of finding May, he found Adrian and two tall, muscular men standing beside him.

    “You again…” Black Jack snarled bitterly.

    “Ah, Mr. Black Jack,” said Adrian confidently. “Since you’ve rejected our offer and rudely left without letting us giving you a demonstration, I think that now would be a good time to show you why you shouldn’t have refused us.”
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    Check these out:

    Thanks for the card, Skiks
    Pokemon Impact (PG13):
    Series: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 (Cancelled)

    Starring Black Jack, a veteran pokemon trainer who saves the lives of others while breaking necks of his enemies in cold blood. You want action? You got action!
    (Continue or Reboot? That is the question.)

    Goldenrod High (Chaptered Comedy Multishipping fic PG13) Updated: 02/12/09
    Who says school is just for learning? ^^

    Check out my other stories, and everyone else's in the Completed Fics forum!

    Been doing some singing and voice impressions too! Check me out at the Brian Random Channel Thread!

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    These chapters are rockin'! ^_^ Keep 'em coming, I love them!

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    I think these are getting much better. Expecially since Action is my number one kind of fic. I don't really care for loveydovy fics. I hate how it's talk like that for every chapter of a romance story. Though it's time now for Jack Black to kick some as-arse. Huhmmmm...
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    very good.but it's a bit on the short side.update soon!

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    Dark Charizard: Yes, I noticed that you don't give long reviews. Thanx anyway.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Brian Powell
    Dark Charizard: Yes, I noticed that you don't give long reviews. Thanx anyway.

    Cs32: I like to watch some action stuff but I'm more of a comedy guy. That last bit of the last chapter should give you a little bit of hint.

    ssw: Most of my chapters are three pages long but the next chapter is going to be longer. I'll update soon.
    Ya, I really wasn't paying attention when I was replying, I was talking with someone on the internet. I like Action/Violence/Comedy. With Comedy tieing with Violence.
    Later
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    i am speachless u r the best u truely r. i can think of any thing else to say but ur the best

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    Cs32: Speaking of violence, this chapter will show a totally different side of Black Jack.

    Blaziken1234: Thanx, bud.

    Chapter 3:

    Black Jack was hoping to find May in the room he just barged into. Instead, he found Adrian, one of Dr. Lawson’s grunts, along with two tall and muscular men standing beside him. This should’ve meant trouble to Black Jack but being a proud and confident man, he saw this as a bunch of losers being there to waste his time.

    Adrian pointed at Black Jack. “Number One and Number Two!” he yelled. “Show him no mercy!”

    Number One took out his pokeball and tossed it out. “Go! Fearow!”

    Number Two tossed out his as well. “Go! Machamp!”

    A Fearow and a Machamp popped out of their pokeballs. Those two pokemon had their veins throbbing around parts of their bodies. Black Jack guessed that some types of chemicals might have increased their strengths.

    “Time to show you freaks how weak you’re truly are,” Black Jack said as he tossed out his pokeballs. “Blaziken and Feraligatr! Go!”

    Blaziken and Feraligatr popped out of their pokeballs and yelled out their battle cries.

    “Machamp!” Number Two yelled. “Tackle attack!”

    Machamp charged at Feraligatr at high speed and shoved him into the wall of the room, making a huge crack in it. “Feraligatr!” Black Jack yelled. “Get out of there!”

    “Too bad that Blaziken can’t fly,” Number One said, catching Black Jack’s attention. “Fearow! Drill Peck attack!”

    Fearow dived directly at Blaziken while spinning like a drill, also at high speed. But Blaziken quickly dodged out of the way to avoid being hit.

    “Too bad that Fearow can’t score a hit!” Black Jack replied. Seeing that Blaziken can take on Fearow without his help, he turned his attention on Feraligatr.

    Feraligatr shoved Machamp into another wall. He then gave him a punch to the face. Machamp’s eyes glowed red as more veins appeared on other parts of his body. Feraligatr stepped back in shock and confusion.

    “Just don’t let your guard down, Feraligatr!” Black Jack warned. But it was too late, as Machamp came charging at him like a train moving at high speed, pushing and crushing Feraligatr through many walls.

    “I don’t like the look of this one bit,” Black Jack said, looking at the action between those two. “C’mon, Blaziken! Let’s go!”

    Blaziken’s eyes looked back at Black Jack as he was battling against Fearow. Fearow dived down at him again but Blaziken quickly reacted to that attack by swinging one of his legs upward, kicking Fearow in the lower beak to stop his attack. Blaziken followed up with a roundhouse Blaze Kick attack to Fearow’s face, sending him flying to the wall, knocking him out.

    “Fearow!” Number One shouted.
    “You fool!” Adrian shouted. “How can you let a super pokemon lose to a pathetic one!?”
    “Nice kicks, Blaziken,” Black Jack said with a smile. “But right now, we gotta find Feraligatr!”

    Blaziken followed Black Jack closely as they ran through the holes that Machamp and Feraligatr caused. “Oi!” Number One shouted. “Get back here! We’re not finished yet, you coward!”
    “I got better and more important things to do than waste my time with idiots like you,” Black Jack replied as he and his pokemon ran through the damaged walls.

    Elsewhere in the base, Dr. Lawson was looking at a girl, who was tied to her seat. “You’re an interesting girl,” he said. “Interesting towards my studies. I became quite impressed with the way you’ve tried to fend off my men until they’ve finally strapped you on this comfy chair. Tell me, what’s your name?”

    “Why should I tell you, bone-face!?” the girl replied angrily, trying to be brave.

    “Now don’t be too nasty, child. I only want to give you something that no one would, a purpose in life.”

    “Why should I trust you? What do you want from me?”

    “Ah! Good questions. I don’t want anything from you. But I will promise you this, you will become stronger and after I have finished studying and testing you, everyone will look up to you as though you have the potential to do everything.”

    He let his hand out, wanting to shake the girl’s hand. “Deal?”

    Suddenly, Machamp and Feraligatr smashed through the wall of the room from the outside. “What is this?” Dr. Lawson shouted in shock and anger. “Get out of here! This is not a stadium!”

    Black Jack and Blaziken ran into the room where the damaged wall was and spotted the girl strapped to the chair. “May!” Black Jack yelled. “We’ll get you out of here! But first, we’re gonna knock the brains out of that Machamp!”

    Machamp held Feraligatr by the head and attempted to headbutt him in the face. Feraligatr retaliated by grabbing a metal pole off the floor and hitting Machamp on the head with it.

    Machamp became momentarily dazed. “Hit him again!” Black Jack yelled. Feraligatr did as he was instructed and used the steel pole to hit Machamp’s head again and again until Machamp fell to his knees.

    Number One and Number Two were creeping up behind Black Jack and Blaziken. But Black Jack and Blaziken quickly noticed and turned round to fight them.

    Black Jack gave Number Two a punch in the face. Number Two staggered back but recovered from the blow as he punched back at him. Black Jack recovered quickly and gave him an angry look. “Stop wasting my time!” Black Jack yelled.

    Number Two punched Black Jack in the face again, but Black Jack didn’t even flinch. Number Two became shocked and scared as the angry Black Jack grabbed him by the neck and started pushing and choking him at the same time.

    Blaziken was fighting against Number One. Number One let out a loud roar as he charged at the calmed Blaziken. He went to punch him in the face but Blaziken easily blocked the attack and kicked him in the mid-section, staggering him. As Number One recovered from being hit, Blaziken shook his head in disappointment.

    This angered Number One a little bit as he again charged towards him and lifted up his arm to punch him in the face. Blaziken stood his ground, waiting for his opponent to finish his attack, but Number One quickly changed his attack to a sliding kick. Blaziken predicted that coming as he leapt into the air, making Number One miss his attack. Blaziken’s foot quickly landed on top of Number One’s face, smashing his head to the floor, making him unconscious.

    Adrian ran into the room to find out what was going on. He looked at Blaziken and smiled confidently as he sneakily took a pebble out of his pocket. “He’ll do good for the operations,” he thought as he beckoned Blaziken to come and attack him.

    Blaziken knew that this would be a trick, but like Black Jack, he’d never back down from a challenge as he quickly ran towards him. Adrian flicked the pebble directly at Blaziken’s face, but he saw it coming and knocked it aside. But the pebble was only there to distract him while Adrian was about to attack him. Knowing that this would happen, Blaziken confidently grabbed his incoming fist and twisted his wrist, causing Adrian to yell out in pain, he then quickly pulled him by the arm and gave him a karate chop to the shoulder, knocking him out cold.

    Blaziken noticed that May was still tied to the chair, and quickly tried to untie her.

    Back at Black Jack and Number Two, Black Jack kept on slamming Number Two’s head against the walls. “Not so tough now are you?” Black Jack asked as Number Two was lying on the floor. He quickly spotted an operating table nearby with wheels attached to it and thought an evil thought.

    “How about we go for a little ride?” Black Jack asked evilly. He picked up the motionless man and placed him on the table. Black Jack ran as he pushed the table with Number Two on it.

    While he was pushing the table, he spotted Machamp and Feraligatr still fighting each other. “Take a dive, Machamp, you insult for a pokemon!” Black Jack snarled as he gave the table a great big shove. Feraligatr spotted the table coming towards him and Machamp and jumped out of the way. Machamp wasn’t so lucky as he got caught with the collision of the table. The force of the table sent Number Two and Machamp crashing through the window. They fell seventy-feet, crashing to the ground, much to the shock of the people who were escaping the base.

    “What happened?” Max asked in a shocked tone. “This didn’t involve Black Jack did it?”
    “Gee,” Meowth replied. “I hope not, or else dee other guys would have a few words to say about dis.”

    Isaac checked on the fallen Machamp and its trainer by feeling their pulses. “Thank goodness,” he said in relief.

    Back inside the building, Blaziken and May stared in awe when they saw what happened. Black Jack walked into the room, gnarling his teeth in frustrated manner… then he smiled evilly. “Is there a doctor in the house?” he asked nastily as he looked round.

    To the pokemon, May, and Black Jack’s disappointment, he was nowhere to be seen. “Oh well,” Black Jack said sarcastically.

    Outside…

    “Alright, you guys!” Isaac yelled, catching the poor people’s attention. “As soon as Black Jack and May come out, we can all get out of here!”
    “You’re not going anywhere!” an angry voice said.

    Everyone turned to the voice’s attention… it was Dr. Lawson, holding a gun. “Perhaps you all didn’t hear me very well,” he said. “I tried to be nice to you people. But since that didn’t work, I’m now forcing to get back into the base and be operated so you will all work for Team Dark!”
    “So that’s it!” Isaac shouted. “I’ll take your bullet but the other guys will trash the other bases!”
    “Don’t be a fool,” Dr. Lawson replied. “Just do as I tell you!”
    “We pay no attention to punks like you!” said a nasty voice.

    A man knocked the gun out of Dr. Lawson’s hand. He then forcefully made him turn to look at him in the face. That face belonged to none other than Black Jack… who looked really angry, even with his sunglasses on.

    “Mr. Black Jack!” Dr. Lawson said nervously. “I know it was a bit unorthodox to bring you here to this base but I only wanted to run a few tests on you and I also promise you a real purpose in life…”
    “Test this!” Black Jack snarled as he punched him in the face, knocking him down.

    Dr. Lawson was whimpering in pain as he held his hurt face. Black Jack walked towards him and crouched down to him. “If you want to keep a promise, then promise me this,” he said in an evil tone. “Never ever harm these people again. You will make me this promise cos I am the last guy that you want to mess with… understand?”

    Dr. Lawson nodded, agreeing to keep that promise. Black Jack walked towards the gun that he knocked down and picked it up. “C’mon, boys and girls,” he said. “Let’s go.”

    “Black Jack,” Isaac said as he pointed at Machamp and Number Two. “What about those guys?”
    “Leave them,” Black Jack replied in moody tone.

    They walked deeply into the oasis. “And just to make sure that they don’t do any more operations…” Black Jack thought as he grasped the gun harshly.

    Suddenly, most of the Team Dark base exploded, much to Dr. Lawson’s distress.

    At the same time the building exploded, Black Jack broke the gun into pieces. “Good thing I dropped a bomb in there while I was looking for the kid,” he thought as he tossed the broken parts of the gun aside.

    It didn’t take the people long before they found their tents since it was close to the Team Dark base. Everyone thanked Isaac, Max and Meowth for bringing them back to safety while Black Jack sat alone.

    May walked over to him and sat next to him. “Black Jack… I’m sorry,” she said.
    “For what, kiddo?” Black Jack asked in a calmed tone.
    “For getting you in trouble.”
    Black Jack smiled. “Don’t worry, kid. I got into troubles bigger than this.”
    “And I also wanna thank you,” May said. “For saving my life.”
    “No problem, kid.”
    “Is there anything I can do for you?”
    “Nah.”

    Black Jack was waiting for a reply, but to his surprise, May had fallen asleep. He smiled as he carefully picked her up and took her to her tent. He placed her in her sleeping bag so she could sleep through the night. “Nighty night, kid,” he whispered as he left.

    The next morning, everyone in the group started to pack up their things, except Black Jack who claimed that he doesn’t need any paraphernalia. As they packed, May couldn’t help but think what Black Jack did the other night just to save her… does he love to hurt people just for fun or would he do anything to help others in need, even if it meant hurting others.

    After they finished packing, Isaac went to make an announcement to the homeless. “Okay, may I have everyone’s attention please?”

    Everyone looked at Isaac, wanting to know what he had to say. “Since everyone of you need to find new homes, I strongly recommend that everyone should follow us and we’ll take you the pokemon center. They’ll have food and drinks and they also have treatment for those in need of medical attention…”
    “It’s not that we don’t appreciate it,” replied one of the poor people. “But we prefer to live in this oasis. We want to be connected with nature and pokemon to become one with them.”
    “I guess we all have different ways with life,” May replied. “Besides, since that base is gone, these people are safe.”
    “I tink Jesse would disagree wiv dese people,” Meowth said.
    “Again, we want to thank you for saving our lives,” said another homeless person. “We don’t know how to repay you.”
    “Well, er…” Meowth mumbled.

    Suddenly, Black Jack’s fist came down on Meowth’s head, knocking him down and making his eyes swirly.

    “No need,” Isaac replied. “You’re all safe and happy, that’s the rewarding part.”

    Everyone said their goodbyes as Isaac, Max, May, Meowth and Black Jack left camp together. As they got out of the camp’s sight, Black Jack’s face turned from a small smile into an evil frown. “Team Dark leader,” he thought deeply. “You’ve seen what I have done to that base… now let’s see if you’re as hopeless as they are.”

    Meanwhile, a shadowy figure was viewing the screens, this time mainly on Black Jack. “You’re due for a loss, sooner or later,” he snarled.

    Next episode: Ash’s team arrives at the third Team Dark base… but it appears to be empty…
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    Cool ^_^ I liked the fight Feraligatr vs Machamp. It was action-filled! ^_^

    Once again, short review. -grumbles-

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    Awesome, I loved it! I thought picturing veins throbbing out of Machamp and Fearow was kind of funny. I like how evil Jack Black was, that was funny. The Feraligator and Machamp match was action packed, just the way I like it.
    ~~CS~~

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    super as always.much longer to.update soon!

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    ur storie is so entertaining the blak jak part was sweet i loved it u need to take a carrear in some form of writing i wouyld b ur #1 fan... lol but ne way i love the way u write action filled (i can b a fic rater cant i?)

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    DC: Thanx!

    Cs32: You found the throbbing vains on Fearow and Machamp and the evilness of Black Jack funny? I was hoping that you would think 'holy ****!' when you read those bits.

    ssw: Thanx, mate. The next chapter will be here tomorrow... ish (England time mind).

    Blaziken1234: ^_^ I never thought that I would find a fan, thank you very much.

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    Episode 5: Lost in base

    Chapter 1:

    “There it is.”

    Mecha, Ash, Misty, Brock and Stevens have made it to the third base. The second task at that moment was to find and arrest the criminals involved.

    “Okay, let’s get ‘em,” Ash suggested.
    “Wait a minute, Ash,” Misty warned. “What if there are guards out there? There are chances that they would bring out the others.”
    “Good thinking,” Stevens said. “And I thought I was the detective.”

    They sneaked near the base. It appeared to be unguarded.

    “Quiet,” Stevens said. “Too quiet.”
    “We might as well scout the area,” Brock said.
    “Good idea. But make sure no one sees you.”

    The group went into separate directions. Half an hour later, they made their way back to their spying place. All of them said that they’ve spotted no guards.

    “I’m getting the feeling that this base has been abandoned,” Stevens replied. “But we should sneak inside the base, just in case. Any ideas?”

    “Strange,” Mecha thought. “Team Dark always has their bases heavily guarded. I don’t like the look of this one bit. Still, if we do get a surprised ambush, I’d like to see how Ketchum gets out of that situation.”

    “There’s this trash chute that I spotted,” Brock suggested.
    “Ew!” Misty complained in disgust, not liking the idea of climbing up the chute. “Does anyone else know another route, a clean one?”

    Everyone shook their heads, much to Misty’s disappointment. She turned to Mecha. “Mecha,” she said, sounding hopeful. “You have been a Team Dark member before right? Don’t you know another way in?”
    “Well, I didn’t shake my head for nothing,” Mecha replied.

    “Well, I’m not going in there,” Misty said.
    “Well, we could have you on the lookout,” Stevens said as he placed his finger on his chin while thinking.
    “Just don’t let the bugs out here bite you,” Mecha warned. “Their bites sting a lot.”
    “B-b-bugs?” Misty said being startled.

    Before she could let a loud scream, Ash ran over to her and placed his hand on her mouth just time before she could possibly alert the grunts from the inside the base. He hugged her, comforting and assuring her that he was there for her.

    “Was it something I said?” Mecha said in a puzzled tone.
    “Misty hates bugs,” Brock said. “It’s like Black Jack not liking Team Rocket, only he's not afraid of them.”

    Knowing that she had no choice but to go with them, Misty let out a small sigh of irritation. “I’m not going to like this one bit,” she thought.

    They found the trash chute, which was at the back of the base where Brock found it. None of them were enjoying the experience as they crawled through, with Misty being the most irritated as she kept on cursing their entrance route.

    The chute led them into room where it appeared to be a kitchen. Everyone was taking deep breaths as soon they had finished crawling through the smelly chute. Mecha quickly spotted a security camera on the kitchen wall and disabled it.

    He then walked over to a ventilator and tugged it off the wall. “You guys get into this ventilator,” he said, giving them the directions to the security room. “I won’t be able to fit in there, so I’ll have to make it to the control room my own way.”
    “Won’t the guards spot you?” Stevens asked.
    “As long as I have this metal arm, they’ll see me as one the base’s pokemon. If they try to call for help, I’ll knock them out.”
    “Looks like you’ll get there first,” Brock said. “It’s not easy crawling through those things.”

    As soon as Stevens, Ash, Misty and Brock climbed into the ventilator, Mecha quickly attached the metal part on the wall. He then made his way out. He walked through corridors, hoping that no one would see him and he also avoided the sightings of the cameras along the way.

    “Huh,” he said. “No one’s here. Is this place really abandoned?”

    He finally made it to the control room. As he opened the door, he found that his comrades made it there first.

    “Mecha,” Ash said. “Did anyone spot you?”
    “Avoiding the cameras wasn’t easy,” Mecha replied. “But I managed to avoid them all.”

    They noticed that the entire monitor screens were switched off, meaning that all of the security cameras have been switched off.

    “Something’s really wrong here,” Mecha said.
    “What do you mean?” Ash asked.
    “Why would a base like this be abandoned?” Mecha said as he scatched his head.
    “Well, it could be that Black Jack and the others might have destroyed the other bases. And after hearing that, the members of this base probably made a hasty retreat,” Stevens answered theoretically.

    “Surprise, surprise, law people,” said a voice.

    Everyone quickly looked around, as they didn’t know where the voice came from.

    “You’re voice sounds lousy,” Mecha joked. “Hang up and call again.”
    “So, Mecha,” replied the voice. “What brings you here? Doing the laws’ dirty work?”
    “I work for nobody, I only work for myself,” Mecha replied calmly.
    “Of course. I’m just calling to warn you that the grunts of this base would be returning to give you all a great big surprise.”
    “I knew it,” Stevens moaned.
    “You knew and you didn’t tell us?” Ash said with a frown.
    “I apologies for ruining the surprise for you… just act surprise when they get back. Tara.”

    The speaker was then switched off.

    “There’s two things to do,” Stevens said. “I’m gonna set the timer here in the control room for thirty minutes. After I’ve set it, we gotta get out of here. Got that everyone?”
    “Got it,” everyone said in response.

    Mecha ripped open one of the controllers and Stevens placed the time bomb in it while setting the timer. “Now!” Stevens yelled. “Go! Go!”

    Everyone ran out of the room and made their way to the kitchen as quickly as possible. But to their shock, they saw the trash chute shutting itself up, making them unable to escape. “No!” Ash said. “Mecha, if you secretly know more secret exits of this place, now’s the good time to tell us.”
    “I don't,” Mecha replied. “The only we can do now is find it.”
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    very good!i really liked the chapter!i hope you update soon!

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