The Review Game

[Feralninja]

Please tell me I'm doing this one right this time Mr. Tread owner. I've been analyzing the others already

Below is my review (in all honesty, doctoral stuff makes me sick but seems this one gave me some curiosity to like doctoral stories)

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...2#post14995172

Not quite, I'm afraid. To qualify, a review needs to have two complete sentences per point. I know, it seems like I'm splitting hairs here, but them's the rules.

[Tonberry_King]

Not quite, I'm afraid. To qualify, a review needs to have two complete sentences per point. I know, it seems like I'm splitting hairs here, but them's the rules.

I also got completely skipped. T_T

[Feralninja]

Um. Oooookay. Tonberry_King is up next with Pokemon Epilogues: The Birth.


I think.

[Skiyomi]

Here's my review for episode one of Pokemon Epilogues: The Birth.

For the next reader, how about a choice between Renovation (Oneshot, G, ~3,000 words) or, if you're willing to read outside of Pokemon, Legal Matter (12 Chapters, R, ~3,500 words per chapter).

If you choose Legal Matter, you're under no obligation to read all the chapters. Thanks in advance.

[Jake76]

Okay! Renovation has been reviewed! Here it is!

For whomever signs up next, I request that you review my fic, Titans of Kanto. It's currently 5 chapters long, although if no one signs up anytime soon, it will likely be 6 chapters long.

For the potential reviewer, you don't have to read every chapter to do a review. Any amount of feedback is fine. Thanks in advance!

[Sid87]

I reviewed Titans of Kanto. Keep at it, Jake!


I would LOVE a review on the later chapters of Brothers' Bond, but when I ask for that, this topic tends to grind to a halt for a few days. But if you want to do that, I won't stop you. In the meantime, I'll also throw out The Chosen. It's fairly short: Just about 11 pages in my word processor, and I split it into irrationally short chapters when I started posting it here WAY back in April. Fair warning: It's an original fiction story. Not pokemon or any other kind of fan-fic. Hope that doesn't deter anyone.

Thanks in advance, as always!

[LadyLady]

I reviewed the third chapter of brothers bond I hope I did it correctly


Could someone please review Jays journey Through The Henzo Region

Many thanks! It's my first fan-fic so be nice! and I hope you like it, be warned though, the first two chapters are a bit... Iffy, aha!

[Kutie Pie]

My review of The Chosen. Very enjoyable read.

I'm torn between deciding if someone should review the ever-long Forsaken, or the non-depressive one-shot The Sitters... ehh... I'd like another opinion on The Sitters.

EDIT: Crap... I didn't see the new post there.

[LadyLady]

I reviewed 'The Sitters' although I didn't have time to do all of it, however I think I got across the most important aspects

Could someone please review Jays Journey Through The Henzo Region

Many thanks

[Chibi Pika]

I have reviewed LadyLady's fic!

Now then, I'm gonna do something a little different. Could the next poster review the latest chapter of LC? Just Chapter 7. The action is fairly self-contained, so it should not be confusing. Link's in my sig.
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The main character, Jade, is staying aboard the S.S. Anne with her Charmander, Pidgey...and a hybrid Pikachu that's sort of unofficially tagging along because of reasons. She discovered that Rockets have infiltrated the crew, and are planning to destroy the ship, killing everyone on it. She plans to try to put a stop to this using any means necessary, but success is not likely.
 

~Chibi~

[RealRaymon]

I reviewed your last Chapter, at least I tried
http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...3#post15052963
so, review this one, it is mine, actually, hope you'll like it
Max's New Adventures

[Doryuzu]

I reviewed your last Chapter, at least I tried
http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...3#post15052963
so, review this one, it is mine, actually, hope you'll like it
Max's New Adventures

I reviewed Chapter 1 of Max's New Adventures.

Can someone please review Chaper 1 of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

[The Great Butler]

Reviewed Chapter 1 of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

I'd like to request a review for Chapter 3 and/or 4 of The Angel of Reckoning. Here's some context to make it more accessible; thanks Chibi Pika for giving me the idea.

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The story takes place in a near-future alternate universe of the Pokemon world, in which Unova Pokemon are being migrated to Johto and Kanto as part of a government-backed experiment.

Olivia is a fourteen-year-old girl who is starting a journey in Johto after several years of special tutoring, hence why she is starting late. She hopes to use her quest as a way to find her father, who she is unaware passed away in a disaster five years prior. Her chaperone, Matt, was the one who tutored her on her late father's request; he has a goal of his own, which is to find Reshiram and use its flames of truth to learn more about his own relationship to what happened five years ago. They have also picked up two allies: Bunny, Matt's friend and colleague as an archeologist, and Nekou, a loud, sarcastic alcoholic with violent tendencies and a murky background.

However, strange things have begun happening to them. When Olivia went to Professor Elm's laboratory intending to get a Totodile as her official starter, he was missing and Professor Juniper happened to be there in his place, leading to Olivia being placed with an Oshawott she isn't totally thrilled with.

Meanwhile, Polaris, a mysterious Illuminati-like group, is planning something of biblical proportions on the continent. Team Rocket, their strength hobbled severely following their conflicts with Team Plasma - a wing of Polaris - in Unova, are jockeying into position to stop whatever Polaris is planning. To that end, the Team Rocket trio and Pierce have been sent under the command of Ariana and Dr. Zager to capture a piece of Meteonite, an element that fell on a meteorite, which will give them a leg up on Polaris's plans.
 

[Skiyomi]

I've reviewed chapter 3 of The Angel of Reckoning.

For the next reader, how about a choice between Nonregulation Attire (Oneshot, PG, ~1,800 words) or, if you're willing to read outside of Pokemon, Silly Slayers Vignettes III (Vignette Collection, PG-13, ~2,500 words).

...And I might as well give you some pertinant background on Slayers if you aren't familiar with the series but still want to give the vignette set a try. Though you can ignore this if you want, since my Silly Slayers Vignettes are... well... silly by nature.

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The world of Slayers is one of swords and sorcery, gods and monsters. The gods (and their earthly servants, golden dragons) hope to save the world, while the monster try to destroy it.

Filia is a golden dragon and former priestess. Like most high-level dragons she has the power to assume human form. She now lives among humans.

Xellos is a high-level monster and he has many powers. He appears in human form and can modify that form however he wishes.

Val is Filia’s adoptive son. Jillas and Gravos are friends of the family and work in Filia’s shop.

Amelia is the princess of Seyruun, white-magic capital of the world.

Zelgadis is a chimera—a combination of human, golem, and brau demon. This gives him increased power, but also gives him golem-like skin. He tirelessly quests to find a way to reverse his chimeraism and get his body back to normal.

Lina is a teenaged sorceress and the main character of Slayers. Gourry is her protector. Lina, Gourry, Amelia, Zelgadis (and at certain times Xellos and Filia) have all been traveling companions during the course of the series.
 

[Kutie Pie]

Here's the review for Nonregulation Attire. That was surprisingly fun.

I'm torn between deciding if the next poster should read Fuzzy or The Sitters [S]because who's really going to read the vastness that is Forsaken?)...

Eh, guess you get to take your pick. I'm not picky.

[Scaldaver]

Review for The Sitters done and dusted! Hope you like it!

Check out the link in the sig!

[Doryuzu]

Review for The Sitters done and dusted! Hope you like it!

Check out the link in the sig!

I reviewed Prologue-Chapter 2 of The Legend's End.

Someone please review Chapter 1 of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

[LadyLady]

I'm just gunna' reserve a place here as last time it went all crazy haha, I'm gunna review the girl who knows the hearts of dragons

Ive reviewed chapter one of 'the girl who knows the heart of dragons'

Could somebody please review 'jays journey through the Henzo region' and preferebly not chapters one and two as they have been reviewed multiple times and are my worst haha. Link in my sig thank you!

[ChloboShoka]

Reviewed Jay's Journey Through The Henzo Region

Next one up is Carry On, Blissey.

[Skiyomi]

Here's my review on the first 5 chapters of Carry On, Blissey.

For the next reader, how about a choice between Spinning Wheels (Oneshot, G, ~1,000 words) or, if you're willing to read outside of Pokemon, First Kiss (Oneshot, PG, ~3,600 words).

If you wanna pick the Slayers one, but haven't seen Slayers, here's a bit of pertinent background that might come in handy for this particular story. But if you wanna skip this, then be my guest.

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The world of Slayers is one of swords and sorcery, gods and monsters. The gods (and their earthly servants, golden dragons) hope to save the world, while the monster try to destroy it.

Lina is a teenaged sorceress. Gourry is her protector. Zelgadis is a chimera—a combination of human, golem, and brau demon. This gives him increased power, but also gives him golem-like skin. He tirelessly quests to find a way to reverse his chimeraism and get his body back to normal. Amelia is the princess of Seyruun (and a shrine maiden), white-magic capital of the world. Filia is a golden dragon and former priestess. Like most high-level dragons she has the power to assume human form. Xellos is a high-level monster and he has many powers. He appears in human form. Syphiel is a shrine-maiden with a crush on Gourry.

Golden dragons are the longest lived of the mortal races, so, though Filia looks about 19 or 20, she’s likely been alive for several hundred years.

The Claire Bible is a supposedly infinite source of wisdom.