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    I reviewed Titans of Kanto. Keep at it, Jake!


    I would LOVE a review on the later chapters of Brothers' Bond, but when I ask for that, this topic tends to grind to a halt for a few days. But if you want to do that, I won't stop you. In the meantime, I'll also throw out The Chosen. It's fairly short: Just about 11 pages in my word processor, and I split it into irrationally short chapters when I started posting it here WAY back in April. Fair warning: It's an original fiction story. Not pokemon or any other kind of fan-fic. Hope that doesn't deter anyone.

    Thanks in advance, as always!


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    I reviewed the third chapter of brothers bond I hope I did it correctly


    Could someone please review Jays journey Through The Henzo Region

    Many thanks! It's my first fan-fic so be nice! and I hope you like it, be warned though, the first two chapters are a bit... Iffy, aha!
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    My review of The Chosen. Very enjoyable read.

    I'm torn between deciding if someone should review the ever-long Forsaken, or the non-depressive one-shot The Sitters... ehh... I'd like another opinion on The Sitters.

    EDIT: Crap... I didn't see the new post there.
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    I reviewed 'The Sitters' although I didn't have time to do all of it, however I think I got across the most important aspects

    Could someone please review Jays Journey Through The Henzo Region

    Many thanks
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    I have reviewed LadyLady's fic!

    Now then, I'm gonna do something a little different. Could the next poster review the latest chapter of LC? Just Chapter 7. The action is fairly self-contained, so it should not be confusing. Link's in my sig.
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    I reviewed your last Chapter, at least I tried
    http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...3#post15052963
    so, review this one, it is mine, actually, hope you'll like it
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    Quote Originally Posted by RealRaymon View Post
    I reviewed your last Chapter, at least I tried
    http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...3#post15052963
    so, review this one, it is mine, actually, hope you'll like it
    Max's New Adventures

    I reviewed Chapter 1 of Max's New Adventures.

    Can someone please review Chaper 1 of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

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    Reviewed Chapter 1 of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

    I'd like to request a review for Chapter 3 and/or 4 of The Angel of Reckoning. Here's some context to make it more accessible; thanks Chibi Pika for giving me the idea.

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    I've reviewed chapter 3 of The Angel of Reckoning.

    For the next reader, how about a choice between Nonregulation Attire (Oneshot, PG, ~1,800 words) or, if you're willing to read outside of Pokemon, Silly Slayers Vignettes III (Vignette Collection, PG-13, ~2,500 words).

    ...And I might as well give you some pertinant background on Slayers if you aren't familiar with the series but still want to give the vignette set a try. Though you can ignore this if you want, since my Silly Slayers Vignettes are... well... silly by nature.

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    Here's the review for Nonregulation Attire. That was surprisingly fun.

    I'm torn between deciding if the next poster should read Fuzzy or The Sitters [S]because who's really going to read the vastness that is Forsaken?)...

    Eh, guess you get to take your pick. I'm not picky.
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    Review for The Sitters done and dusted! Hope you like it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Scaldaver View Post
    Review for The Sitters done and dusted! Hope you like it!

    Check out the link in the sig!
    I reviewed Prologue-Chapter 2 of The Legend's End.

    Someone please review Chapter 1 of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

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    I'm just gunna' reserve a place here as last time it went all crazy haha, I'm gunna review the girl who knows the hearts of dragons

    Ive reviewed chapter one of 'the girl who knows the heart of dragons'

    Could somebody please review 'jays journey through the Henzo region' and preferebly not chapters one and two as they have been reviewed multiple times and are my worst haha. Link in my sig thank you!
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    Reviewed Jay's Journey Through The Henzo Region

    Next one up is Carry On, Blissey.


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    Here's my review on the first 5 chapters of Carry On, Blissey.

    For the next reader, how about a choice between Spinning Wheels (Oneshot, G, ~1,000 words) or, if you're willing to read outside of Pokemon, First Kiss (Oneshot, PG, ~3,600 words).

    If you wanna pick the Slayers one, but haven't seen Slayers, here's a bit of pertinent background that might come in handy for this particular story. But if you wanna skip this, then be my guest.

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    Here is my review of Spinning Wheels, great read by the way. I would like someone to look at my chapter fic Embrace. So far, I got the prologue and first chapter done, so it's not that long.
    Embrace

    A breeder joyously hatches a riolu for a client. To the dismay of the hatchling, the client never returns to claim him. Faced with an abandoned pokémon, the breeder vows to find the riolu's trainer and family.
    (Better banner coming soon.)
    Current - Chapter 1: The Client.

    Coming up - Re-writing Chapter 2

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    All right. HERE is my review of the prologue and first chapter of Embrace. They were like night-and-day, and I hope the rest of the story tends more towards the way chapter one went! I will check back in when you update!

    I'm not going to ask anyone to review Brothers' Bond, don't worry. I have a one-shot up called "The Last Meowth" that I'd love some thoughts on. It can be found right here.

    Thanks!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sid87 View Post
    I'm not going to ask anyone to review Brothers' Bond, don't worry. I have a one-shot up called "The Last Meowth" that I'd love some thoughts on. It can be found right here.

    Thanks!
    Nonsense! I don't mind reviewing Brothers' Bond. ^^ Here it is right here.


    Someone please review Chapter 1 of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

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    Here you are, gotpika.

    Mine is in the sig. The more recent chapters if possible.
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    Review for chapter 14 of The Legend's End

    Mine is also in my sig. (Click the userbar)


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    Here's my review for "Carry On, Blissey!" http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...2#post15328592

    Would someone mind reviewing my latest chapter? Link is below

    http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...8#post15322468

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    Could someone give me a review for chapter 1 of My Feli Chronicles: Vitandes? It is found at my signature.

    Every chapter of my original story has been edited from everything I've learned at the author's cafe. I have 20 chapters currently edited and finished
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    Quote Originally Posted by jireh the provider View Post
    Could someone give me a review for chapter 1 of My Feli Chronicles: Vitandes? It is found at my signature.

    Every chapter of my original story has been edited from everything I've learned at the author's cafe. I have 20 chapters currently edited and finished
    You did this same exact thing back on page 6 where you just came in here, ignored the rules, and asked for a review without giving one of your own. It was, like, 3 months ago. Come on, man.

    Anyway, here is my review of Requiem: Right here..

    I'm going to leave Requiem up for review because of three reasons:

    1) It's really good, and new people should read it!

    2) Jireh tried to undercut Sidewinder's turn.

    3) I read Requiem every chapter anyway, so I don't feel my review counts.

    So go read Requiem: Here!


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    Whoa, Sid, hold up there for a sec. You gave a review, fair and square. Requiem got a review as requested, and the undercut was dealt with swiftly and without mucking up the workings. So, your turn. Just let people know what to review.

    As to jireh:
    Sid's right. You did this before. This game is all about equal exchange. You want a review? You got to give one first. I'm not going to go over the rules, they're clearly laid out in the first post. Go read them before you come back again.
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    I feel bad; I was going to review Requiem whether Sidewinder posted here or not because he and I are doing the Review Exchange, so I feel like he didn't gain anything from the Review Game. The only reason I replied to bring his turn back up was so jireh didn't cost him his turn.

    If I HAVE to choose a story of my own, I do still want some reviews on The Last Meowth (HERE).


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