The Review Game

[Doryuzu]

I reviewed Chapter 1 of Forsaken.


Someone please review Chapter 1(or chapter 2 if you've reviewed Chapter 1) of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

[Chapter of Charizard]

I reviewed Chapter 1 of Forsaken.


Someone please review Chapter 1(or chapter 2 if you've reviewed Chapter 1) of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

I reviewed Chapter 1. Somebody please review the latest chapter of: Across the World, And Back Again

-You can find the link in my signature! XD

[Feralninja]

Reviewed. Can someone review my story, PMD Ivory: The Sacred Relics? Its located in the signature.

I'm afraid that review most certainly does not meet the review requirements, specified in the first post. You may change it so that it does meet the requirements, and post again saying so, at least until someone else steps up to review it. Until then, Chapter of Charizard is up next with Across the World and Back Again.

*sigh* Seriously people, read the rules...

[Gothitelle K]

I reviewed Chapter 1. Somebody please review the latest chapter of: Across the World, And Back Again

-You can find the link in my signature! XD

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...6#post15603756 << Did it. Hope I did it right.

If I did, next person can review Holiday Cooking Frenzy >> http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...%29&highlight=

[Doryuzu]

Done


Someone please review The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons. Chapter one if you haven't, Chapter two if you've done Chapter one.

[The Great Butler]

Done with Chapter 2 of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.

I'd like a review for Chapter 7 of The Angel of Reckoning this time.

The context if you aren't familiar with it already:

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The story takes place in a near-future alternate universe of the Pokemon world, in which Unova Pokemon are being migrated to Johto and Kanto as part of a government-backed experiment.

Olivia is a fourteen-year-old girl who is starting a journey in Johto after several years of special tutoring, hence why she is starting late. She hopes to use her quest as a way to find her father, who she is unaware passed away in a disaster five years prior. Her chaperone, Matt, was the one who tutored her on her late father's request; he has a goal of his own, which is to find Reshiram and use its flames of truth to learn more about his own relationship to what happened five years ago. They have also picked up two allies: Bunny, Matt's friend and colleague as an archeologist, and Nekou, a loud, sarcastic alcoholic with violent tendencies and a murky background.

However, strange things have begun happening to them. When Olivia went to Professor Elm's laboratory intending to get a Totodile as her official starter, he was missing and Professor Juniper happened to be there in his place, leading to Olivia being placed with an Oshawott she isn't totally thrilled with.

Meanwhile, Polaris, a mysterious Illuminati-like group, is planning something of biblical proportions on the continent. Team Rocket, their strength hobbled severely following their conflicts with Team Plasma - a wing of Polaris - in Unova, are jockeying into position to stop whatever Polaris is planning. To that end, the Team Rocket trio and Pierce have been sent under the command of Ariana and Dr. Zager to capture a piece of Meteonite, an element that fell on a meteorite, which will give them a leg up on Polaris's plans.

Right before the group arrived in Violet City, they encountered Nikolai, a young man with the ability to speak to Pokemon. However, he is actually N, but does not remember his true identity. During an encounter with one of the Shadow Triad, he was attacked with a poison, forcing Matt and the others to rush him to Violet City's Pokemon Center for stabilization.
 

[Skiyomi]

Been awhile, but I'm back. Here's my review for chapter 7 of Angel of Reckoning.

As always, I'll give the next reviewer a choice between one of my Pokemon pieces and one of my Slayers ones.

Pokemon: Out of My League (Prologue + 2 Chapters, PG-13, ~3,700 words per chapter)

or...

Slayers: Silly Slayers Vignettes I (Vignette Collection, PG-13, ~2,800 words)

If you're up for trying out the Slayers fic, but don't know anything about Slayers, here's some pertinent background information that might help you out (skippable):

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The world of Slayers is one of swords and sorcery, gods and monsters. The gods (and their earthly servants, golden dragons) hope to save the world, while the monster try to destroy it.

Filia is a golden dragon and former priestess. Like most high-level dragons she has the power to assume human form. She now lives among humans.

Val is Filia’s adoptive son. Jillas and Gravos are beastmen and friends of the family who work in Filia’s shop.

Xellos is a high-level monster and he has many powers including the ability to teleport. He appears in human form.

Zelgadis is a chimera—a combination of human, golem, and brau demon. This gives him increased power, but also gives him rocky, golem-like skin. He tirelessly quests to find a way to reverse his chimeraism and get his body back to normal.

Lina is a teenaged sorceress and the main character of Slayers. Gourry is her protector. Amelia is the princess of Seyruun, white-magic capital of the world. Martina is a princess of the (currently destroyed) kingdom of Zoana, who initially traveled with Lina in order to seek revenge against her (for the whole destroyed kingdom thing).

The Claire Bible is a supposedly infinite source of wisdom.

In the past, Lina essentially bullied Xellos into selling her his demon blood talismans—objects that allow her to amplify her magical power.
 

Thanks in advance!

[Morpher01]

Okay, I've decided to try my hand at writing a decent review and thus reviewed Out of My League (proof being here).

Could someone review my fic, Proving Grounds? The link is in my sig, but those attempting a review should be warned: you may be in for a long read. XD

[IJuggler]

I've reviewed your story's first chapter here, and hopefully I met the requirements. If not, I'll definitely fix that up.

Was hoping to get a review for the first chapter of Refinery (~2k words), the second post in my sig. The prologue in the first post isn't a necessary read, at 500 words, but I'll summarize it here for anyone who just wants to get the gist of it;

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Jon, the main character, dreams of seeing his sister being kidnapped once again. When he wakes up he contemplates his goal, winning the Pokemon catching competition, which will apparently win her back. Also we see small insight into something of a rival character and an as-of-yet unrelated character.
 

[Negrek]

Review for Refinery, and from me, Salvage, any chapter. There are four to choose from at this point, all quite short.

[Deadly.Braviary]

Here's my review of Salvage. Someone please review Hoenn Reborn, either the prologue or first chapter. The link is in the URL in my signature.

[RealRaymon]

Here's my review of Salvage. Someone please review Hoenn Reborn, either the prologue or first chapter. The link is in the URL in my signature.

I reviewed it
my review

Please review this chapter of my fic:
http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...9#post15651609

[Dormant]

Done!! I've reviewed a chapter(s) of Max's New Adventures here is the link@

Please review my story, any chapters. BUT BE WARNED. My fanfiction has a lot of crazy stuff in there. Link in the signature. Or Here!@

So Dormant signing off..

[OceanicLanturn]

I have finished reviewing Chapter One of 'Seeking for Trouble'.

Please review Bond Chapter One, found in my siggy :3

[RealRaymon]

I reviewed the Bond's first chapter.

Please review Chapter 30 in "Max's New Adventures"

[OceanicLanturn]

Reviewed Chapter 30 for Max's new adventure

Someone review Chapter 2 for bond please :3

[Scaldaver]

Done chapter 2 for Bond!

Review of my fic - link in Sig!

[Doryuzu]

I reviewed Chapter 3 of The Legend's End!

Can someone please review The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons, appreciate it.

[An Enemy Spy]

Review of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons up.

Want a review of New World. I would prefer a review of the entire thing so far, not just the first few chapters.

[Dormant]

Done! I reviewed 'New World' by An Enemy Spy. Here is the link@

Please review my story 'Author's Run'. Can you review Chapter 2 and/or probably Chapter 3...

You can use this link@ or the link in my signature.

So Dormant signing off..