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    Reviewed Chapter 30 for Max's new adventure

    Someone review Chapter 2 for bond please :3

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    Done chapter 2 for Bond!

    Review of my fic - link in Sig!
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    I reviewed Chapter 3 of The Legend's End!

    Can someone please review The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons, appreciate it.

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    Review of The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons up.

    Want a review of New World. I would prefer a review of the entire thing so far, not just the first few chapters.

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    Done! I reviewed 'New World' by An Enemy Spy. Here is the link@

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    As a note for the future: a writer need only read and review one chapter of a fic to request a review. While they may do more if they like, it isn't really polite to ask for reviews on multiple chapters. That's what the review exchange is for.
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    I have done Dormant's review of chapter 2 and such.
    remember don't hesitate to ask me to do more. I got pushed on the edge of time left so...

    http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...se-%28PG-14%29

    If someone could, I would like a much more indepth (it doesn't have to be THAT indepth but...) review of chapter 2 and possibly if they want to chapter 3. focused more on the story and characters, but I'll take any type of review honestly. I'm just already aware of the grammar issues that are there...(most of them.)
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    I've already reviewed Doryuzu's story, and since it's been this long without anyone else reviewing it, could somebody please do New World.

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    Quote Originally Posted by An Enemy Spy View Post
    I've already reviewed Doryuzu's story, and since it's been this long without anyone else reviewing it, could somebody please do New World.
    That's not how this works. Doryuzu is up until someone comes and reviews The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons by way of the Review Game. Doryuzu reviewed Reverse Reverse, and fair is fair. Until they get the review they deserve, Doryuzu is up next with The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.
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    Reviewed Chapter Three of The Girl Who Knows The Hearts Of The Dragons


    The next person has a choice between
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    B) Any chapter of Carry On, Blissey


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    Reviewed chapter 1 of The Other King by ChloboShoka.
    Could the next person please review any chapter/s they like in my story 'Swim Good'. Link in banner (in signature) - Thank you

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    Review posted for chapter 1. http://www.fanfiction.net/r/9049174/

    I'd like a review done for New World..
    I would like it to be a fairly detailed review of the whole shebang, with a comparison between the quality of the first half and the second half of the story so far.
    Last edited by An Enemy Spy; 13th March 2013 at 8:58 AM.

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    Hmmm... thought I got ninja'd before posting my own review for "Swim Good," but now I'm just confused because there is no review for "Swim Good" posted by the above poster. Sooo... I'm just gonna go ahead and assume until someone tells me otherwise that I got the review in for "Swim Good" and should disregard the last post since you don't get a turn if you don't review. Eh? Confirmation? *shrug*

    Anyway, for the next poster, I'll give you a choice between reviewing: There is a Madness to My Method (Pokemon - Oneshot, PG-13, ~1,700 words) and Diplomacy (Slayers - 26 Chapters, R, ~3,500 words per chapter). Of course, if you choose Diplomacy you don't have to read all the chapters. Thanks in advance.

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    Since the link goes to his fanfiction account, that's where I put the review. I guess I forgot to link it.

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    Ah, that makes muuuuch more sense now (I followed the banner link, so I hadn't even considered it being posted off-site). Well, my loss for being slower. Disregard my post. An Enemy Spy's New World is up next.

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    I reviewed New World (Focused on chapter 4) by Enemy Spy.

    Next reader has a choice between Carry On, Blissey or The Other King. Whichever story you choose, can review any chapter you wish.


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    I didn't want to do this immediately after having mine done, but since it's been a few days now, I guess it's ok. Here's my review of chapter one.

    I'd like a review of Chapter 21 of New World.
    Last edited by An Enemy Spy; 16th March 2013 at 6:47 AM.

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    Okay, dude, you're got to read the rules. You can request reviews for ONE chapter. If someone feels so inclined, they can review more, but you cannot request more than that.

    Not to mention, your review does not meet the review requirements. You have 24 hours to make sure that it does, or until someone else reviews any of ChloboShoka's fics.
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    Fixed it. I'm sorry for being the scummy piece of trash that I am. I'm a terrible reviewer and an even worse person. I hope that rectifies it.

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    Here's my review for Chapter 21 of New World.

    For the next poster, I'll give you a choice between reviewing: There is a Madness to My Method (Pokemon - Oneshot, PG-13, ~1,700 words) and Diplomacy (Slayers - 26 Chapters, R, ~3,500 words per chapter). Of course, if you choose Diplomacy you don't have to read all the chapters--any chapter(s) you choose to comment on would be great by me. Thanks in advance!

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    Here is my review of "There is a Madness to My Method."

    I'd like someone to review "Happenings Between Goals." You're free to choose any chapter (please refrain from choosing to review one of the filler chapters, however), but Chapter 5 is probably the latest chapter that is also the most representative of the story in its entirety.

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    My review of Ch. 5 of "Happenings Between Goals"

    I would like to get a review of one of the latest chapters of Maelstrom. I would love one for Ch. 12: A Fool's Venture
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    Reviewed Chapter 12 of A Fool's Venture

    I would like a review for Carry On, Blissey - any chapter you want.


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    I've reviewed Carry on, Blissey

    Could someone please review 'Zizi's Moogobling Events In Flumplop

    Its only two chapters in and theyre fairly short so nothing too drastic, thank you hunni's x
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