The Review Game

[Dormant]

Is it possible to review a banned person's fic?

[Feralninja]

LadyLady's fic is not locked, so yeah, she's still up next. It's probably only a temporary ban anyway.

[Keldminrachi91]

Alright, I reviewed the first chapter of Zizi's Moogobling Events in Flumplop

Could someone please review any chapter (other than the prologue) of How to Save Serebii?

[Doryuzu]

I reviewed Chapter 1 of How to Save Serebii


Can someone take a look at The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons, I'm don't need a specific review for a certain chapter. Any review for any chapter is perfectly fine by me.

[An Enemy Spy]

Review in.
I'd like somebody to do New World, preferably one of the later chapters than the earlier one. Probably nothing earlier than Chapter 18.

[Dormant]

Review Done!

Please review, Author's Run Chapter 6, 19 or 20. You can find these chapters in the 'Contents'. Thank you!

[The Great Butler]

Chapter 20 of Author's Run is finished.

I'd like Chapter 9 of The Angel of Reckoning this time around.

As always, the background, now with details from Chapter 8 added for convenience...

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The story takes place in a near-future alternate universe of the Pokemon world, in which Unova Pokemon are being migrated to Johto and Kanto as part of a government-backed experiment.

Olivia is a fourteen-year-old girl who is starting a journey in Johto after several years of special tutoring, hence why she is starting late. She hopes to use her quest as a way to find her father, who she is unaware passed away in a disaster five years prior. Her chaperone, Matt, was the one who tutored her on her late father's request; he has a goal of his own, which is to find Reshiram and use its flames of truth to learn more about his own relationship to what happened five years ago. They have also picked up two allies: Bunny, Matt's friend and colleague as an archeologist, and Nekou, a loud, sarcastic alcoholic with violent tendencies and a murky background.

However, strange things have begun happening to them. When Olivia went to Professor Elm's laboratory intending to get a Totodile as her official starter, he was missing and Professor Juniper happened to be there in his place, leading to Olivia being placed with an Oshawott she isn't totally thrilled with.

Meanwhile, Polaris, a mysterious Illuminati-like group, is planning something of biblical proportions on the continent. Team Rocket, their strength hobbled severely following their conflicts with Team Plasma - a wing of Polaris - in Unova, are jockeying into position to stop whatever Polaris is planning. To that end, the Team Rocket trio and Pierce have been sent under the command of Ariana and Dr. Zager to capture a piece of Meteonite, an element that fell on a meteorite, which will give them a leg up on Polaris's plans.

Olivia challenged Violet Gym Leader Falkner to a three-on-three battle, but lost to him in a tough match. Though disappointed, she managed to shake it off - only for Avril, a girl she had recently met and struck up a rivalry with, to accidentally reveal the truth about her father's fate, thus forcing Matt to explain everything to her.
 

[An Enemy Spy]

Review posted. Will somebody do New World? Preferably one of the later chapters.

[Skiyomi]

I've reviewed chapter 23 of New World.

For the next reviewer:

Judgment Day - (Pokémon, Oneshot, PG-13, ~7,300 words)

...Or, if you're cool with reading something outside of Pokémon: Everyone Needs a Hobby - (Slayers, Oneshot, G, ~1,200 words).

Thanks in advance!

[The Teller]

Here's the review for Judgment Day.

Could someone please review Chapter 10 of Happenings Between Goals for me? Pretty please? In particular, I want to know how well I did in the realm of horror.

(For whoever reviews it, keep in mind that Beldum, Geodude, and Skitty are the characters' starters.)

[An Enemy Spy]

Review up.

Can somebody do New World?

[Feralninja]

Review up.

Can somebody do New World?

Sorry, but I can't accept this review. The review requirements state that you have to have four individual points that address four distinct parts of the piece. You've only got one, maybe borderline two. You have 24 hours to extend the review to fit the requirements and stay up next.

[An Enemy Spy]

Expanded.
Here's New World.

[An Enemy Spy]

Just an update on my request. I'd like you to do chapter 24.

[Feralninja]

Just an update on my request. I'd like you to do chapter 24.

I would like to remind you (and other participants) that asking for a review for a later chapter in a fic, while not forbidden, is a little bit discouraged. When I've been vetting reviews, a lot of people say that the biggest problems they have with fics is that they are coming in late to the game and don't have any context for what's going on. It's unfair to expect them to read the preceding 23 chapters so they understand what's going on in Chapter 24.

I won't say you can't do this, but do keep that in mind for the future.