That review does not meet the review requirements. Seriously man, read the first post. Your spot will be held for twenty four hours until you can get the review up to par, but if you fail to do so, Doryuzu is up next. If you read the first post and still don't understand what a good review entails, look at some of the other reviews from this thread.
Reviewed Artificial Sweetener. I think I kinda stepped out of my comfort zone reading that, it was odd, yet pleasant.
I'd like a review on Handle with Care, please. It's six chapters (plus a prologue) long, and pretty big a story for that number of chapters, so I'm gonna be nice and say any of the first... three chapters (prologue is a chapter). Unless you wanna go the whole way, not gonna berate or stop you if you do, but I'm gonna get a look of disapproval if I don't draw a line someplace.
Could someone give my Prologue a look over? Found here
Take a moment to consider just how nothing nothing really is....If you understand this, then you just solved the universe.
The truth that each person...each soul...is a book. And when we lay our feelings out in the open...and we give them no name...and we give them no author....and we give them no description.....who will actually read them..........?"
All righty, you know the drill. First couple (or few) chapters of Handle with Care, please, unless you're brave enough to read the entire thing.
Good news Kutie Pie, you asked me to review more than 2 chapters, I got it for you. From Prologue up to chapter 6.
If it is okay with you, could you at least give my Re-modified Feli Cronicles a decent observation if my writing was better compared to last time. Firebrand told me that I epicly failed to Show, Don't Tell my original story. The other options are optional fo you to choose. I only posted the Prologue and Chapter 1 as of now. This is a non-pokemon fanfic. But this was heavily inspired by the PMD series
If it's not your tea, Innocencia at Maturite (Innocence and Maturity) is my pokemon Fanfic that I've been posting since last month. This one was an old collaboration Fanfic that I did with another author. But I figured that I could spruce up our work and make it better. The writing style here is something that I got from Jirachi the Wish Maker. It's a Pokemon in real life type of story you see. There are currently 6 short chapters (with about only 2000-2500 word count) on it. Only one more chapter to be posted remains to end this Pokefanfic.
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Summary: Jasmine visits Celadon City for a tea party with Erika. IkebanaShipping (Erika/Jasmine).
...or if you're the kind of stellar individual who's willing to read something outside of Pokemon for a fandom you might not be familiar with: A Little Opposition - (Slayers, 28 Chapters, PG-13, ~3,000 words per chapter)
Summary: Phil decides that some reverse psychology might be in order to get his daughter and Zelgadis together and enlists Lina and Gourry to help him. Zelgadis/Amelia, Lina/Gourry.
(Of course, if you choose A Little Opposition, you can read as few or as many chapters as you are willing)