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    I'll try my hand at this. Here's a review for Ember of Hope. I'd like somebody to R&R my main story, Enigma Rising. Any chapter would be nice, particularly the newer ones. Please, and thanks!
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    Review for Enigma Rising here.

    I'd like a review for my main 'fic, Salvage, chapter eight: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...4#post16595784

    However, that chapter does have a fair amount of violence and uncensored cursing, so if that's not really your bag, you can try chapter two instead: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...6#post15341286

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    Review for Salvage: Chapter Eight, here.

    I'd like a review for my story, Monsters Among Us, if you so please. Any chapter including the prologue would be awesome. Thank you in advance!
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    Hero of Truth, I'm pretty sure you didn't read the rules in the first post. To get a review in this thread, you've got to first review the fic of the poster ahead of you, and that review has to meet the review requirements outlined in the first post. Go back and read that, then try again.

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    Made a review for Monsters Among Us: here you go!

    As for the next reviewer, I'd like a review for my one-shot, "A Friday," if that's okay. Thank you very much!


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    In truth I had made a note to read it anyway before I even saw this, but here you go, DM! =) Good excuse to get more into reviewing again too, haha.

    Posted a new fic called Fairy Tale so that's probably what I'd like feedback on most. Got other stories I'm fine with reviews too, but they're considerably older.

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    I've been meaning to read one of your works for a while, and finally have! Here you go.

    Can someone please review my fic, Drowning? Thanks in advance


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    starliteevee's review.

    I'd like a review for my main 'fic, Salvage, chapter eight: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...4#post16595784

    However, that chapter does have a fair amount of violence and uncensored cursing, so if that's not really your bag, you can try chapter two instead: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...6#post15341286

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    Reviewed! (Can't link because URL limit??)

    I don't have anything I want reviewed -- does this mean the system breaks, or do they have to review the same story I did?

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    Um, I guess it means Negrek has two reviews for the price of one? Yeah, Negrek is still up next.

    In the future, please do not come to the review game if you don't have anything to review. Using who's up next to find new stories to R&R is great, but this thread exists to be a review exchange.
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    Well, I did get my review, and my story has been sitting around clogging up the thread for a while, so if it's all right I'd like to request that somebody review a story that doesn't belong to me. Specifically, any story on the first page of the forum that hasn't gotten any reviews yet. As of when I write this, that would include any of these:

    But Thou Must!
    Rally Interpretation 2
    Dragonspiral's Children
    Endurance: The Orange Islands
    The life of Flareon
    Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Shade of Light
    Legend of the Groumander
    Pokezilla King of the Pokemon

    But anything posted later that fulfills those criteria would work, too.

    Hope that's okay. It seems better that I use my priority to let somebody who needs the review more get one, and since those are generally pretty short 'fics, it should be a nice, easy assignment that can hopefully get the thread moving again.

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    Reviewed But Thou Must! I haven't been on these forums in a while, so I don't know how to link specific posts... :/ But it does happen to be the first review, so yeah.

    Anyways, the fic I would like to be reviewed is Dragonspiral's Children by Spiteful Murkrow.
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    Ok, I reviewed Legend of the Groumander. Could someone review my story, Pokemon Generations: Satsumi's Story?
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    Okay, couple orders of business I guess...

    Negrek, in the future please don't do that. I guess it's okay now because it's too late to change it and it was a nice gesture, but I guess, going forward... don't. GarchompOutrage, uh, same thing.

    Technically Hakajin came later, but since they've got their own fic up for consideration, we're going to go with them. Satsumi's Story is up next.
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    A request length was not specified, so I did chapter 1 of Satsumi's Story.

    I'd like to ask for a review of The Angel of Reckoning, at least the first two chapters but however many the reviewer decides.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Great Butler View Post
    at least the first two chapters but however many the reviewer decides.
    One chapter per review post, remember. A reader can review more but it is not required. But yes, Angel of Reckoning up next.
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    This thread is not dead nope nope nope nope. Anyway.... The Great Butler's review!

    Can someone please review chapter 5 of Drowning? Link is in my signature.


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    Drowning Chapter 5 Review, courtesy of yours truly.

    Anyway, I'd like a review of A New World Order: Birth of a Prophecy which you can find in my sig. As for which chapter...any chapter, really. I mean, you'd be the first so I can't really be picky, can I? Assuming I can, I'd personally appreciate a review as early as Chapter 2 since I broke up my introduction into two parts. Thanks in advance.
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    Critiqued your story!

    I'd like someone to look at my one shot story The Bonds Within. Should be easy to read in one sitting! Can be found in my signature, in my previous sentence, or on fanfiction.
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    Done,

    If someone could take a look at Chapter 1 of Sinnoh: A Tale of Time and Space, I'd be grateful, it's a short one, so it won't take long.

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    Here's your review, DMerle!

    For the next reviewer, I'd like a review for my most recently posted one-shot, "Escape Rope." If the trigger warning won't sit well with you, I'd also appreciate a review for my second most recently posted one-shot, "A Friday." Thank you in advance!


    EDIT: I know it's against the rules to double post just to bump a thread, so if any of you happen to read this and not want to review both one-shots mentioned above, you may also review the first file of my new fic, Humans of Hoenn. Thanks and sorry for making this thread inactive >_<
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