The Review Game

[Gothitelle K]

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?p=13463990

can someone review the story that's the first link below the banner. Thanks :]

[Feralninja]

The thread hadn't seen any traffic in a while, so I decided to get in on my own game.

Reviewed Latias and her new friends

Will the next Player please review ANY chapter of Hero's Path (linked in sig)? The more recen chapters (in the work camp) are the best thus far, but I won't force anyone to read the 15 or so hapters to get there.

[donotlookatdiagram]

Here you go.

Could the next poster please review "Into the Shadows"? Link in my sig.

[The Great Butler]

Reviewed Into the Shadows.

If someone could have a look at The Victory Star of Fate as it is so far, I'd love that.

[DragonKingUK]

Read and Reviewed can you please Review The Demonic Child, link is in sig

[Feralninja]

Not on the topic of reviews, but guys, seriously. Read the rules. These reviews are nowhere near what they have to be. The point is to give a depth review with at least four points. The reviews I'm seeing barely constitute one. There's nothing I can do about the preexisting ones (and it's partly my fault for not checking up on them).

From now on though, read the rules. I will be checking each review from here on out to see if it meets the criteria. If it doesn't you won't be the next in the rotation. The person who you reviewed will still be next.

So, as much as I feel like a hypocrite doing it, DragonkingUK is next with The Demonic Child.

[Charizardfan900]

I looked at DragonkingUK's sig, and it says the Demon Child has died, as a story.

So what do I do?

[Feralninja]

I think the best course of action would be to review "The Human Pokemon".

[DragonKingUK]

If thats so then hes already done The Human Pokemon http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpos...5&postcount=15

[Charizardfan900]

Its true, so does that count?

If so, could some one review A Chimchar's Tale. Links in my signature.

[Feralninja]

If thats so then hes already done The Human Pokemon http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpos...5&postcount=15

This isn't a very coherent review, though I suppose it does raise some valid points. If you can get it (or write another) with the requirements outlined in the first post, I'll count it. Until that happens:
DragonKingUK is up next with The Human Pokemon.

[Charizardfan900]

Well he has been banned now...

So what next?

[Feralninja]

To avoid any further confusion, I've gone and reviewed A Chimchar's Tale, and that review can be found here. This is also a good example for the length of what reviews should be, and the kinds of content that's to be expected.

Since I reviewed, I'm up next. I'd like a review on either chapter 5 or 6 of Hero's Path, Strange Lands or Dread Wizard

[Dawn_Hero]

Since I reviewed, I'm up next. I'd like a review on either chapter 5 or 6 of Hero's Path, Strange Lands or Dread Wizard

I left a review for Chapter Five of Hero's Path, located here. Hopefully it meets expectations. ^^;; It's rather late and I'm tired. Hahah.

Well, I guess it's my turn then. If someone could review Chapter One of my fic "Within My Own Nightmares" located here I'd extremely appreciate it. I've got the prologue in the original post, but you can find chapter one in my spoiler'd table of contents.

    Spoiler:- Just to sweeten the deal:

Show Spoiler

 
If anyone else sees this and wants to after it's already been reviewed, act before the ninth and I'll review a chapter of your story for each chapter of mine you review. Just send me a PM saying what you'd like reviewed. :3 I'd like some feedback on my story. Hahah.
 

[Kutie Pie]

Okie-dokie, Dawn_Hero, here ya go!

All right, next poster, you feel up to it? According to the OP's rules, chaptered stories must have early chapters be reviewed, and since chapter four is really long, I'm not going to torture you with that unless you want to. So, any of the first three chapters will do.

(And don't post this review on FanFiction.net, we'll need the link it. *looks at phoopes*)

[Interrupt]

Oh! Why that's easy. Best shipfic I've ever read. Well done. And that's saying a lot because I went through a Brony stage before I realized it was retarded.

Please review my D advantur ub NUBNES!!11

http://serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=555637

Derugo.

[DragonKingUK]

well that has been closed now so what do we do now?

[Feralninja]

Um, well, I can't find RetardRaichu's review of Forsaken. Unless this changes, Kutie Pie is still up next.

[DragonKingUK]

well heres my review of kutie pie's fan fic

http://serebiiforums.com/showpost.ph...&postcount=146

so can somebody reveiw chapter 7 of The Human Pokemon now please

[Feralninja]

well heres my review of kutie pie's fan fic

http://serebiiforums.com/showpost.ph...&postcount=146

so can somebody reveiw chapter 7 of The Human Pokemon now please

I'm sorry. That does not meet the review requirements detailed in the first post. Read those, and then if you choose to fix the review, let me know. until then, Forsaken is still up next.