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    Finally participating in this game! Forsaken hath been reviewed!

    Anyone game for reviewing LC? Just 1 - 2 chapters of it? Click the banner in mah sig if interested!

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    Ever wondered what would happen if humans had the power to overthrow the Legendaries? To either use them for their own ends, or eliminate them altogether? One thing is for certain...the balance between human and Legendary is unstable.

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    8/30/12: CHAPTER 7: “Into the Fire” POSTED!!!
    Chapter 8 progress: 9/12 pages


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    Review for Legendary Chronicles

    I'd like a review on Carry On Blissey, especially the first and most recent chapter.
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    Read the entire thing, so the review is kinda on the whole story.

    Next victim, please. *insert troll face here*

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    Review for Forsaken up to chapter 9

    I would like to request a review for my ongoing journey story Coordinated


    I`ve really only gotten feedback from one person since it started (the only reason I`ve been able to keep going) so I`d really appreciate what ever you could give me.

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    Here's my review for Prologue-Chapter 2 of Coordinated. Hope it's helpful.

    Damn. I couldn't badger anyone into reading my Slayers fics before the rule changed.

    Anyway, I'll give you a choice. Either Possession (which is an R-rated chaptered fic that's still in progress with 3 chapters up so far--you can read 1, 2 or all) or Nonregulation Attire (which is a PG oneshot). I'd appreciate your feedback

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    Read Possession! Such a good read, I just got dragged in - you write horror very well m'dear :3

    If someone could read either the second or third or fourth chapter of 'Ember Days'? Link in my signature - odd request, I know, but I'm not that fond of the first chapter, and despise the prologue. xD Will be revising it at some point when I have the chance...! They only introduce the main character and insinuate a theme or two that are developed in the later chapters. Probably better if you start from the second, as the others won't make sense without it. x3
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    Tackled the second. Will be back for the third and fourth later. o>

    Meanwhile, to the next person, my fic, Anima Ex Machina, is in le sig. Note of caution: it's effing long. However! I recently (as in today) edited the first five chapters, so new readers, feel free to tackle any number you'd like at the beginning. To my old readers, the twenty-eighth (!!) chapter will be up either tonight or tomorrow.

    Edit: Or if you'd like something shorter, Mary Sue Must Die! is only a chapter long so far, but it'll receive a new one soon. Hopefully.
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    Reviewed Mary Sue Must Die! Pretty good read.

    I just finished making revisions to the first chapter of The Angel of Reckoning, so I'd like if someone could give it a look.

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    I just finished reviewing Angel of Reckoning!

    Anyone up for LC now? Read as far as you're willing to (it's not very far yet), though I request at least making it through Chapter 1 since the prologue is, well...a prologue. Click the banner in my sig to get to it.

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    Ever wondered what would happen if humans had the power to overthrow the Legendaries? To either use them for their own ends, or eliminate them altogether? One thing is for certain...the balance between human and Legendary is unstable.

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    8/30/12: CHAPTER 7: “Into the Fire” POSTED!!!
    Chapter 8 progress: 9/12 pages


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    EDIT: I also reviewed Operation GEAR: Angel of Reckoning, but while I was reading/reviewing it, Chibi Pika changed this topic, so to whomever is next here: just review Chibi Pika's story since she beat me to it.
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    Sid, thought the same thing had happened to me! Reviewing Chibi Pika's now, and will get the beginning of yours afterwards <3

    x3 Reviewed Chibi Pika's - I've been meaning to read LC since at least 2006, haha! Very enjoyable read, though - got up until chapter two and will be getting the rest when I have the time x3

    Reviewed the prologue and first chapter of 'Brothers' Bond'. :3

    Person below - review Ember Days from chapter 2 please? :3
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    Done.

    I'm looking for reviews of more recent chapters since I've had a few people just review chapters 1-3 lately, but any comments are appreciated if people don't want to catch up or have the time to do so.

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    | love and other nightmares |
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    I reviewed Survival Project.

    I'd prefer a review on Carry On, Blissey. If you've already read it or want to review something else than feedback on Restless will be great too.


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    x3 All reviewed~! I'm quite enjoying this thread, it's leading me to some real gems. :3

    Person below - review Ember Days from chapter 3 please? :3 (...It won't make as much sense without chapter 2, but I'd love some feedback on it :x)


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    Reviewed!

    Next person, please review my one-shot!

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    Reviewed

    Can someone review That Show With The Hippie And The Jerkwad Dragons? I kind of need some pointers for writing and some ideas for new material (not to mention the wonderful feedback). I know it's in script and it's not reccomended, but it's a fic nonetheless. Link is in my signature.

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    i did it

    can someone review my rewritten version space lives on your breath?
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    Done and Done.

    Could somebody please review The Legend's End for me please? (see sig)...?
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    Here ya go, Scaldaver :3.

    All righty, who's next? Don't be shy, it's an easier read this time, I swear. I gots a new one-shot up for y'all.

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    Done and Dusted. I'm not one to be shy.

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    Last edited by ChloboShoka; 10th June 2012 at 6:51 PM.


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    Beaten to a review on fuzzy, but I'll edit with a review of... one of C.Gholy's other works considering I'm already caught up on CoB x3

    Chapter 3 + of the Ember Days pls...?
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    I reviewed Ember Days!

    Requesting a review on LC from the next poster! (Banner in sig) I was thinking maybe one of the more recent chapters like Ch4, but it really wouldn't make much sense without reading the previous chapters, so I'll just say Chapter 1+

    ~Chibi~


    Ever wondered what would happen if humans had the power to overthrow the Legendaries? To either use them for their own ends, or eliminate them altogether? One thing is for certain...the balance between human and Legendary is unstable.

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    8/30/12: CHAPTER 7: “Into the Fire” POSTED!!!
    Chapter 8 progress: 9/12 pages


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    Reviewed Chibi Pika! :3

    If someone could review my poor little unloved oneshot Intercontinental Relations, I'd appreciate it - it's only a oneshot, and has yet to be reviewed.


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    Done!

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