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    Is it possible to review a banned person's fic?


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    LadyLady's fic is not locked, so yeah, she's still up next. It's probably only a temporary ban anyway.
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    Alright, I reviewed the first chapter of Zizi's Moogobling Events in Flumplop

    Could someone please review any chapter (other than the prologue) of How to Save Serebii?


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    I reviewed Chapter 1 of How to Save Serebii


    Can someone take a look at The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons, I'm don't need a specific review for a certain chapter. Any review for any chapter is perfectly fine by me.

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    Review in.
    I'd like somebody to do New World, preferably one of the later chapters than the earlier one. Probably nothing earlier than Chapter 18.

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    Review Done!

    Please review, Author's Run Chapter 6, 19 or 20. You can find these chapters in the 'Contents'. Thank you!
    Last edited by Dormant; 8th May 2013 at 2:08 PM.


    One Author, One Creator and Two boys. Set in Johto. Where everything is not what it seems. For they must flee from the group called the Grammar Police. And saved the World from an unknown threat.

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    Chapter 20 of Author's Run is finished.

    I'd like Chapter 9 of The Angel of Reckoning this time around.

    As always, the background, now with details from Chapter 8 added for convenience...

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    Review posted. Will somebody do New World? Preferably one of the later chapters.

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    I've reviewed chapter 23 of New World.

    For the next reviewer:

    Judgment Day - (Pokémon, Oneshot, PG-13, ~7,300 words)

    ...Or, if you're cool with reading something outside of Pokémon: Everyone Needs a Hobby - (Slayers, Oneshot, G, ~1,200 words).

    Thanks in advance!

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    Here's the review for Judgment Day.

    Could someone please review Chapter 10 of Happenings Between Goals for me? Pretty please? In particular, I want to know how well I did in the realm of horror.

    (For whoever reviews it, keep in mind that Beldum, Geodude, and Skitty are the characters' starters.)

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    Review up.

    Can somebody do New World?

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    Quote Originally Posted by An Enemy Spy View Post
    Review up.

    Can somebody do New World?
    Sorry, but I can't accept this review. The review requirements state that you have to have four individual points that address four distinct parts of the piece. You've only got one, maybe borderline two. You have 24 hours to extend the review to fit the requirements and stay up next.
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    Just an update on my request. I'd like you to do chapter 24.

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    Quote Originally Posted by An Enemy Spy View Post
    Just an update on my request. I'd like you to do chapter 24.
    I would like to remind you (and other participants) that asking for a review for a later chapter in a fic, while not forbidden, is a little bit discouraged. When I've been vetting reviews, a lot of people say that the biggest problems they have with fics is that they are coming in late to the game and don't have any context for what's going on. It's unfair to expect them to read the preceding 23 chapters so they understand what's going on in Chapter 24.

    I won't say you can't do this, but do keep that in mind for the future.
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    I have reviewed New World, Chapter 23.

    May I ask for a review for either Chapter 1 or 2 for my fanfic Of Authors and Artists?

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    Reviewed Of Authors and Artists.

    May someone please review Handle with Care? It's not very long, only two chapters thus far (posted here, anyway). I should give a rating warning, though, as per the Shipping Fics rules, it's rated NC-17. While as of right now there's nothing that explicit, reader's discretion is still advised.
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    I am back again, and now made a new fic called The Pokemon Threat, it will have crossbreeds and mutated Pokemon in it, hopefully it will be my best, but am not sure, reviews would be VERY welcome.

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    Done.


    Can someone take a look at The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons Chapter 4?


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    Are we still doing this game?

    I'd like to request a review for Pokemon: The Forgotten Memories (any chapter), not sure who I am supposed to review since the above poster has posted chapters beyond it.
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    Doesn't matter, you still review the chapter they requested. And before you get your review, you have to actually review. So until that's done... Doryuzu is up next with The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons, Chapter 4.
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    Is it still okay to review that particular story? It has been at least two months since the last chapter was posted and I'm not sure whether or not the author is continuing or what. I'll gladly review, though, but I just wanted to be absolutely sure the author isn't "dead".

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    ^ Yea same here, I tried to do a nice proper review but then I just clicked on the next page and saw that someone already posted a very in depth review that pretty much highlighted all of the mistakes and errors it had.

    Epic, why don't you review mine, and then I'll review yours.
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    What part of the above post is not clear? Doryuzu reviewed It's All Going to End. Therefore, they are entitled to one review FROM THE REVIEW GAME. If that other review was not from the Review Game, then it is irrelevant to the discussion. Whether or not they have updated recently is irrelevant. Doryuzu is up next until someone reviews The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons, chapter 4, from the Review Game, to the requirements specified by the Review Game.

    Seriously people, read the bloody rules. They're in the first post for a reason.
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    ^ I Aplogize I shall get right on it.

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    Finished Reviewing
    Can someone take a look at The Forgotten Memories? Any chapter would be fine.
    Fan Fic: Nexus Renegade
    When a new dimension is created and gives birth to three terrors of the world. The Nexus will judge you
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    Special Thanks to Inudono19 for the Badass Morph of the Creation Trio

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